Poetry Analysis
Poetry Analysis
By Kareen A. Inog
The “Bayan Ko” (My Country) was a Tagalog poem written by Jose Corazon de Jesus
who also known as Huseng Batute. Bayan Ko was composed in 1928 when Filipinos were
revolting for freedom from America under the leadership of President Manuel Quezon.
The feeling of being strong, hopeful and proud of one’s country were the feelings
created by the poet towards his readers and listeners (as it became a patriotic song). Through
Huseng Batute’s poem, the difficult experiences and feelings of sufferings and grievances of
Filipinos were expressed.
When it comes to figurative language, it applied metaphor where the word “stranger”
refers to “foreigners”. Also, it used nature imagery, repetition (e.g. the words “Philippines
beloved Land of Mine” and “beauty” were repeated) and alliteration
(e.g. “gold and gorgeous” and “suffer and still”).
The rhyme scheme pattern of the poem was aabbccddeeffgghh. In other words, the
said pattern is commonly known as couplet rhyme scheme or rhyming couplets. The rhythm
of the said poem is trochaic pentameter. Moreover, the poem was taken over because of its
beauty and splendor and how it will soon gain back its freedom, for people and the country.
Bayan Ko My Country
by Jose Corazon de Jesus
Amado V. Hernandez left one of his popular legacies entitled, “Isang Dipang Langit”.
Actually, it was written during of his imprisonment days in Muntinlupa. In the poem of
Amado, the first that I noticed was the choice of words. Honestly, some of the words are very
deep and it is really hard for me to understand. However, I somehow got the gist of the entire
poem. The poem was written to describe the situation inside the prison. The lines signify the
grief or the urge to have a freedom. The pain they have and the struggles living inside.
Only an arm stretch of sky that somehow adds to his sorrow. Also, it depicted the
guards inside and the prisoners’ hardship because of them and talked about their
experiences outside and the feeling to be free from the four walls of their jails just for a while.
Time comes that they will have the revenge that they want. And the last stanza talked about
the freedom that he will have someday. How he will not experience the sorrow that he had
inside the prison. Basically, in this work of Amando Hernandez entitled Isang Dipang langit,
again prisoned life was being emphasize.
This poem of Hernandez used the Filipino language (Tagalog) which became his
niche. “Isang Dipang Langit” is a beautiful eleven-stanza poem composed of 4 lines
(quatrains) that tells us about the pains, sufferings, and hope of a prisoner. The poem follows
12 meters or “beats” all throughout the lines from start to end. Moreover, it has rhymes at
every end of the lines which do not necessarily made use of words having same letters on the
last syllable but rather, employed words likely similar in sound.
The introduction of haiku writing in the Philippines can be traced back to the
influence of the Japanese colonizers (1941 – 1945), and by understanding it, we can have a
better understanding of how Japanese literature was introduced and what we have gained.
The arrival of the Japanese brought about one good aspect to the Philippines, and that was
the prohibition of Philippine literature in English, which had a favorable effect on a
diminishing Tagalog Literature.
The first noted Filipino poet to write haiku was Gonzalo K. Flores, also known as
Severino Gerundio, an avant-garde poet during the Japanese period. Here are some of his
haiku, along with translations, published in Liwayway, June 5, 1943.
Tutubi
hila mo’y tabak… -5
ang bulaklak, nanginig! -7
sa paglapit mo. -5
Anyaya
ulilang damo -5
sa tahimik na ilog -7
halika, sinta. -5
Most Filipino haiku poets write haiku in Tagalog in a haiku form of 7-5-7 syllables,
some prefer a Malayang Taludturan or Free Verse style, and still others prefer the English
pattern of 5-7-5 syllables. Traditionally, haiku is all about nature or natural world.
Nowadays, haiku poetry writing forms a daily proposition in Philippine life, art and
literature. Haiku has been re-born and cradling into fruition in the heart of Filipinos.