AC Writing T1-Edited
AC Writing T1-Edited
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2. What does the verb summarize tell you about how to present theinformation?
3. What do the verbs select and report tell you about how to present the main features?
4. What does ‘make comparisons where relevant’ tell you to do? What type of language must you be able to use? Give
some examples.
5. If you write less than 150 words what will happen? How will you make sure you write enough?
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Understanding Appropriate Format
in Academic Task 1 Writing
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether
they were studying full-time or part-time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
1000
Men and Women in further education
800
(thousands)
600
400
200
0
1970/71 1980/81 1990/91 1970/71 1980/81 1990/91
Full-time education
Part-time education
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Tip! To get above band 4 or 5 in Task Achievement you must use appropriate format!
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Look at the 5 model Academic Task 1 answers, A-E. With a partner, decide
which are examples of appropriate or inappropriate format, and explain why.
Model Answer A
Dear Ahmed,
I would like to tell you about this graph. xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxx
Overall, I think you need to know that xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxx xxxxxx
xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Well, my dear friend, in general, you can see that xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. But I hope you are doing very well at your exams!
Take care of yourself and I can’t wait to see you again.
Yours truly,
Ali
Ladies and gentleman, boys and girls, I’m very happy to talk about this graph today. The graph shows
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxx xx xxxx
Now if you listen carefully I can tell you that in general, xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxx xxxxxx xxxx
xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx.
Let’s move on to the next fact now: xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxx Now is this the same in your
schools?
Finally, I’d like to talk about what the statistics show. In general, we can clearly see that during the period in
question xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx. Now if you have any questions I’m happy to answer them in
my next talk.
Thank you so much for your attention.
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Model Answer C
Model Answer D
According to this graph, the number of men and women in further education in Britain shows the following
pattern: Generally, the number of men has declined slightly from about xxx thousand in 1970/71 to about
850,000 in 1990/91 xxx xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxx xxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxxxx. On the other
hand, the number of women in both full-time and part-time education has increased during the period. Xxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxx xx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx.
Model Answer E
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Understanding task types
There are different task types used as a basis for
Academic Task 1 Writing. You should be prepared to
write about any of these different types on the IELTS
Academic Writing test. Sometimes more than one task
type is used, e.g. two pie charts or a table and a bar
graph.
Look at the different task types on the next page. With a partner, label each of these task types using phrases
from the box above.
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Academic Task 1 Framework
Introduction
Write a 1-2 sentence general introduction that answers
the questions:
What? Where? When?
The charts show the number of people who owned more than one mobile phone in the Kingdom of
Saudi Arabia in 2015. √
If you from the question prompt, the words will not Paraphrase the question prompt (use your own words).
If you copy front the question prompt, the words will not paraphrase the question prompt (use your own words) You will loose marks
150 words. be counted. You will lose marks if you write less than you. copy
if you write less than 150 Words. Be counted.
Overview
Write a 1-2 sentence overview that summarizes what
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the main features or trends are. Use words like
increasing/decreasing (for a range of dates) or
more/less (for one point in time).
Overall, between 2000 and 2015 there has been an increase in the number of people owning more than
one mobile phone in Saudi Arabia, and this trend is expected to continue for the next 50 years. √
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Select the key features and support them with
data/figures
The pump price for diesel fuel in the UK has fallen from $2.27 per litre in 2012 to $1.99 per litre in 2014.
The number of men in full-time education was higher than the number of women. √
The number of women in full-time education increased between 1970/71 and 1990/91 whereas the
number of men fluctuated during this time period. √
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The Introduction
Read the four introduction sentences below (A-D). In pairs, match the introduction sentences (A-D) below to the Task
Types (1-4) on pages 21-24.
A.
This graph shows the percentage of people of a certain age group visiting the cinema at least once a
year in Australia between 1990 and now with future predictions until 2018.
B.
The graph provides information about the number of men and women in further education in Britain in
three consecutive periods and compares this in relation to full-time and part-time enrolment.
C.
The three visuals present detailed data about 6 different ways that Sweden, Korea and the UK deal with
hazardous waste.
D.
From the table we can gain an insight into money spent in the UK on online shopping over a period of
one year categorized by gender. The visuals also show how much of the total expenditure for men and
women is related to online shopping.
Write the correct letter (A- D) next to the number of the Task type below:
1. Online shopping
2. Men and women in further education
3. Dangerous waste products
4. Cinema attendance by age group
Now underline and label the parts of the introduction that answer the questions: What? Where? When?
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Task Type 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Online Shopping
Expenditure (£m) Share of market (%)
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Task Type 2
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether
they were studying full-time or part-time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
1000
Men and Women in further education
800
(thousands)
600
400
200
0
1970/71 1980/81 1990/91 1970/71 1980/81 1990/91
Full-time education
Part-time education
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Task Type 3
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
8% 2%
22% 25% 8%
9% 55%
82%
69% 20%
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Task Type 4
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Paraphrasing the introduction
Begin your Task 1 writing with a 1 to 2 sentence
introduction that describes generally what the graph is
about. Use your own words. Don’t copy from the question
prompt.
Look at the Cinema Attendance graph from the last exercise and the question prompt below.
Question Prompt:
The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1998 and the present with
projections to 2018.
In pairs, use the language from the table below to help you write a 1 to 2 sentence paraphrase of the question prompt.
This will be your introduction sentence.
The table highlights the percent of in one country from 1998 to now
Paraphrase:
You can add some of your own expressions to complete the chart above.
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The Overview and KeyFeatures
After you have written the introduction sentence, you
should write an overview. An overview is 1 to 2 sentences
that describe the most important trend(s) or feature(s) in
the graph. It is very important to include an overview in
your Academic Task 1 Writing. You will lose marks if you
do not.
Tip!
To get above band 5 in Task Achievement you must
write an overview!
Write the overview after the introduction or in the final
paragraph.
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What is most important in a graph?
• If the graph has a range of dates [e.g. 1999-2012] .
compare the beginning and end dates.
• If the graph shows data from only one year, use words
like more than, less than, greater than, fewer than NOT
increasing/decreasing.
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In pairs, look at the Cinema Attendance line graph again
on page 24 and decide what the most important features
are in this graph. List the key features below:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Generally speaking, the number of people going to the cinema in Australia increased between 1998 and the
present. This trend is expected to continue in the future except for the 25-34 year old age group; they will probably
continue to go to the cinema less frequently.
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Supporting the key features with data
You must select the most important features from the
graph and support them with the data. You will lose marks
if you do not.
Tip!
To get above band 5 in Task Achievement you must .
write about all the key features and support them with
data!
Read the 5 statements below about using data in Academic Task 1 writing. Circle T for True or F for False. Discuss
your answers with a partner.
Tip!
There are usually about 4 to 5 key features for every graph. For each key feature, remember to use figures
for the beginning and ending dates.
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Practice: Describing keyfeatures
Look again at the cinema attendance graph on page 24.
Write a few sentences to describe each of the key
features.
Which age group started to attend the cinema less often recently?
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Practice: Identify introduction, overview,
key features anddata
Now read the model answer below and identify the introduction, overview, key features and
data.
Underline the introduction and write the word introduction above it.
Circle the overview and write the word overview above it.
Put square boxes around the sentences that contain the key features and the data. Write the
words key features and data above.
The graph compares the level of cinema-going (more than once a year) of four age groups in Australia from 1998
to the present and makes predictions until 2018.
The popularity of the cinema has grown since 1998 for all age groups, with the increase ranging from just over 5%
for 14-24 year olds (90% to a projected 96%) to around 25% for the 35-49 year olds (60% to over 85%). Going to
the cinema has proved most popular with 14-24 year olds and least popular with the 50+ age group, although the
40% in 1998 is expected to have risen to almost 60% by 2018.
The only age group which is expected to record a decline in cinema attendance is the 25-34 year olds, with
numbers predicted to fall by just over 5% from their peak of 80% in the middle of the period. Overall, despite
fluctuations, there has been a steady upward trend in cinema-going in Australia, although the recent decline in the
25-34 year old age group is expected to continue.
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With your teacher, discuss
the sample response below
and the Examiner’s
comments.
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Applying the Framework:
Further Education bargraph
Listen and draw
You are going to practice quickly deciding on the most important features
or trends from a graph. Work in pairs. Sit back to back.
Student A: you will have 3 minutes to look at the bar graph about the
number of men and women in further education in the UK. You will
decide what the most important features in the graph are and describe
those features to Student B.
Student B: you will listen and draw what you hear. When you finish,
compare your drawing to the graph.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the number of men and women in further
education in Britain in three periods and whether they were
studying full-time or part-time.
1000
Men and Women in further education
800
(thousands)
600
400
200
0
1970/71 1980/81 1990/91 1970/71 1980/81 1990/91
Full-time education
Sourced from idpielts.me
Part-time education
Now, in pairs, write an Academic Task 1 response. Use the Writing Task 1 Answer Sheet.
Remember to write an introduction, overview, and key features supported by data. When you have
finished, check your essay against the Academic Writing Task 1 Checklist
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Academic Writing Sample Task 1A
Sample Script B
Read the sample Task 1 essay below. With your teacher,
discuss the Examiner’s comments at the bottom of the page.
Examiner comment
Band 6
The candidate has made a good attempt to describe the graphs looking at global trends and more detailed figures.
There is, however, some information missing and the information is inaccurate in a minor areas. The answers flows
quite smoothly although connectives are overused or inappropriate, and some of the points do not link up well. The
grammatical accuracy is quite good and the language used to describe the trends is well-handled. However, there are
problems with expression and the appropriate choice of words and what there is good structural control, the complexity
and variation in the sentences are limited.
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Academic Task 1 Framework:
Introduction
Write a 1 to 2 sentence introduction that explains
generally what the diagram, maps or pictures show.
Example:
The diagram shows how bricks are made for the construction industry.
The maps show the changes to a hotel in Riyadh.
Overview:
Write a 1-2 sentence overview that summarizes what
the main stages/steps, changes, or processes are.
State how many stages/steps, changes, processes
there are.
Example:
The process for manufacturing bricks for the building industry consists of seven consecutive steps. √
There have been four important changes to the hotel’s rooms, facilities and service level.√
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Select the key features and explain them clearly: .
Group or categorize the information into logical stages
or steps.
Example:
The first stage is...Then… After that… Finally…
Do not explain your opinions or use your knowledge about the topic. This is a descriptive task – simply
describe the visual.
X Example:
I think the reason why the process…
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Applying the Framework:
Brick manufacturing process
Look at the diagram below that shows the brick manufacturing process.
The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where
relevant.
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With a partner, discuss and write about the brick
manufacturing process on the Writing Answer sheets
overleaf.
Introduction .
Write a 1 to 2 sentence introduction that paraphrases
the prompt.
Overview
Discuss and write the overview with your partner. Your
overview should summarize what the main
stages/steps are and how many stages/steps there are.
Key Features
Discuss with your partner and then describe the main stages or steps in the process. Use words of sequence
to show the order of the steps in the process.
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Now read the model answer. Label each of the following:
The diagram shows how bricks are made. The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry
can be outlined in seven consecutive steps.
First the raw material, clay, which lies just below the surface of the soil in certain clay-rich areas, has to be dug
up by a digger. Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into
much smaller ones, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of
clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into
brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter. These fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24
and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then
transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate
temperature of 200C-980C, then at a high temperature of 870C-1300C. This process is followed by cooling down
the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.
Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final
destination, be it a building site or storage.
Now find and highlight the cohesive devices that show sequence. The first one has been done for you.
Then discuss with your teacher the Examiner comments about this essay on the next page.
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Task 1 Brick Manufacturing - Response C Band 9
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Academic Writing Task 1 Assessmen
Write your answer on the Writing Answer sheets.
The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the
plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
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Academic Writing Task 1 Checklist
Use the checklist below and write a final copy of each of
your Task 1 responses.
Did you…
…write an overview?
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Tips for Academic Writing Task 1
● Write a report
● If the graph uses data, support the key features with data
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