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LETTER OF COMPLAINT

(Successful Writing, Virginia Evans, Express Publishing, 2000)


USEFUL LANGUAGE
1. To begin letters:
- I am writing to complain about………….
- I am writing to draw your attention to the problem of ……………….
- I am writing to express my disappointment / dissatisfaction with ………………..
- I am writing to express my annoyance / extreme dissatisfaction with / protest about…………
- I regret to inform you how shocked I was………….
2. To end letters:
- I hope / trust this matter will be dealt with as soon as possible
- I hope / trust this matter will be resolved as soon as possible
- I hope / trust this matter will receive your immediate attention
- I hope / trust this matter will not be treated lightly
- I feel that you should………
- I am entitled to compensation / a refund / a replacement
- I must insist on……….
- Unless this matter is resolved, I will have no choice but to take legal action
- Unless satisfactory compensation is offered, I will be forced to take further action

TASK 1
Read the model letter below. Find informal phrases and replace them with the phrases from the list below
a) compensate me for d) I insist that you h) Contrary to what I had been told
b) otherwise I will be forced to e) Despite my objections
c) I am writing to express my f) Having no other alternative
dissatisfaction with
g) I therefore request that you

Dear Sir or Madam,


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I’m writing this because I’m really upset about the service I received when I rented one of your cars on 20th July.
Firstly, I had specifically requested a four-door model. However, I was given a smaller two-door version which, apart
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from being too small for my needs, was clearly in need of extensive repair. I moaned about it but your employees
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informed me that it was the only car available and assured me that it was in perfect order. I couldn’t do anything else, so
I accepted the vehicle.
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Although they said there weren’t, there were, in fact, several things wrong with the car. Despite the fact that I had driven
it for only one hour, I was forced to stop when the engine showed signs of overheating. Having added two liters of water
to the radiator, I was able to continue, although during the course of my journey a knocking sound from the engine
became increasingly persistent and the windscreen wipers stopped working.
My subsequent journey was most uncomfortable. Not only did I have the worry of driving the car which was not
roadworthy, but I also had to stop on three occations to refill the radiator. Finally, I had no choice but to leave the car at
your Oxford branch and continue my journey using public transport.
I feel that your employees acted irresponsibly in issuing a car which was not safe to drive, and I believe I am entitled to
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compensation for the interuption to my holiday. So I want you to send me the sum of $300 to cover the cost of my train
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ticket and to make me feel better after the distress I was forced to suffer as a result of your negligence.
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You’d better give this matter your urgent attention, or else I really will have to take legal action.
Yours faithfully,
S. MALLISON
Email English, Paul Emmerson, Macmillan

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