Edition II a The Writing Handbook (searchable) See Index Page 69

Rules of Good Writing

The composition of good writing

Writing must be clear, concise and focused, in addition to being error free. In the case of persuasive or
expository writing, it should incorporate support and organization. Failure to do so will result in a weakly
defended thesis, a confusing structure or an unclear explanation; in other words, no one will want to read
the paper because it is not “good”.

Clarity is vital in writing. When the reader of a well written essay finishes that reading, he or she will
know the author, title, and basic plot of the book. He or she will understand the message the book’s author
meant to convey. He or she will know the topic of your paper and your thesis or controlling purpose of
writing that paper. Your reader will be satisfied that you have supported your thesis with appropriate
information from your research.

Guidelines for Writing

To write “good” persuasive or expository essays (the types most often assigned for large class papers
and/or for written sections of standardized tests), one should follow the five suggestions explained below.
These guidelines reflect both State goals and mastery expectations for standardized exams.

• Focus
o Include an effective introduction that incorporates fluid use of anecdotes, quotations, personal
appeals or other strategies. The introductory sentence(s) should provide generic, background
information relating to the topic. A specific preview of ideas will appear in the introductory
paragraph.
o Continue a logical progression of ideas and purposeful writing.
o End with an effective closing that offers readers a sense of closure. Relate the conclusion to the
introduction by reemphasizing a particular appeal or question.
• Support
o Make sure the framework of the paper is fully developed with sub points, illustrations, and
explanations.
o Use multiple supports; do not just rely on one way of saying something. Try mixing evidence
with explanations and examples.
o Make sure the support is balanced through the paper. Do not offer support for one and not
another.
o Use specific words, not general terms. Establish credibility by becoming an expert and writing
like one.
• Organization
o Have a “plan of attack” – know what direction the paper has and help the reader to understand
the structure early in the essay.
o Use points and ideas which logically relate.
o Incorporate transitions and construct paragraphs that demonstrate coherence and cohesion.
o Vary sentence structure and word choice to make the reading enjoyable and fluid.
• Conventions
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 o Avoid common errors of thought by using correct punctuation, spelling and syntax.
o Vary sentence construction. Don’t rely entirely on simple or complex sentences.
o Watch for verb tense agreement throughout the essay. Do not mix tenses in the same sentence
or paragraph. Use past tense to narrate past events, e.g. Harper Lee published her novel in
1960. Use present tense when writing about fictional literature, e.g. in The Crucible John
Proctor decides to die rather than tarnish his reputation.
o Avoid passive voice wherever possible. Active voice is more straightforward and direct.
• Maintain a neutral, third-person point of view. Avoid inserting personal opinion or voice unless
required to do so.
o Proofread! Evaluators (teachers, college admission personnel, or exam judges) know how long
a student has had to prepare a piece of writing. Blatant mistakes are never overlooked, but a
timed piece of writing is allowed more leniency because the writer does not have days or weeks
to edit and revise. Keep in mind there should be few minor (even fewer major) errors in
proportion to the amount written.
• Integration
o Make sure to answer the question/address the idea assigned as fully as possible.
o Present a clear and purposeful focus, in-depth support, and reasoning that develop coherently
throughout the paper.

Recognizing the difference between an “A” paper and a “D” paper

Although it may seem difficult to immediately see the difference between an “A” paper and a “D” paper,
there are key identifiers that anyone can use in determining the quality of a piece of writing. Keep in mind
that many times students are asked to peer-edit classmates’ work, so it is not acceptable to think only
teachers need to worry about what makes a “good” paper.

An “A” paper grabs a reader’s attention and develops an issue to the fullest extent possible. The paper
clearly identifies the position or subject of an essay and provides detailed information about the position or
subject. The paper provides the reader with an easy-to-follow structure that is tied together with smooth
transitional devices. The logic used to respond to the issue is continued throughout the paper and the
response contains numerous details to help the reader understand the issue or persuade the reader on the
issue. The paper includes vivid and effective examples related to the topic. An “A” paper also uses strong
word choice and has few conventional errors. The paper has correct sentence structure, punctuation, and
capitalization; it uses verb-tense agreement and subject-verb agreement throughout. Finally, in the
conclusion the “A” paper ties together the strong points without being redundant or repetitive.

A “D” paper only scratches the surface of an issue. The paper does not clearly identify the position or
subject of an essay, nor does it provide enough information about the position or subject. The paper lacks
focus and isn’t clearly developed; the ideas don’t logically flow from one to the next, or they may seem
repetitious. Moreover, the “D” paper doesn’t offer enough detail, and the details that are provided are just
listed without further elaboration. The paper is vague and may be too short to fully allow the reader to
make a reliable judgment on the issue presented. Finally, a “D” paper has a significant number of
conventional errors that may affect a reader’s understanding of what is written.

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 Basic English Style and Grammar
Refer to the following rules of style and grammar for any task requiring formal or standard written
English. These rules provide basic guidance only and do not address every situation a writer may
encounter. The classroom teacher or a member of the writing center staff should be the primary resource
for writing issues. In a conflict between these rules and a teacher’s approach to writing, follow the
teacher’s advice. Use the reference works listed in Appendix B at the end of this handbook to solve
difficult or atypical writing problems.

Part One: Style

The concept of “style” refers to conventions (generally accepted rules) of punctuation, capitalization,
spelling, and the visual appearance of words. These conventions work closely with the rules of grammar,
which are explained below and have more to do with the relationships between words and groups of
words.

A piece of writing that does not follow the rules of style can be difficult to understand. On the other hand,
a writer using standard style communicates ideas clearly and confidently, making the reader’s job of
interpretation easier. Standard style can help a writer organize thoughts and express concepts effectively,
which should be every writer’s goals.

Punctuation
At the end of a sentence:
• period (.): Use a period to end a declarative sentence, one that makes a simple statement of fact or
opinion without more than usual emphasis. Most sentences in English are declarative, which means the
period appears more often than any other punctuation mark.

Example: Vampires rarely chew their food before swallowing it.

Also use a period at the end of a request that does not ask for information, but instead calmly
orders someone to do something.

Example: Please make sure you fasten your seat belt before starting the back hoe.

• question mark (?): Question marks at the end of a sentence mean the sentence is meant to be
interrogative, or asking for information, whether seriously or not. A “rhetorical question” is a sentence
that asks a question but does not expect an answer.

Example (standard question): Are you sure it was still breathing?

Example (rhetorical question): Do you really think a dead frog could jump that high?

• exclamation point (!): Use an exclamation point for sentences that require greater emphasis. It
indicates stronger feelings than a declarative sentence, and makes the sentence seem louder or faster.

Example: For the last time, don’t drink milk from the carton!

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In the middle of a sentence:
• comma (,): No punctuation mark has as many uses, or is as confusing to use, as the comma. Think of it
this way: commas do nothing more than create a short, minor pause in the sentence’s flow. This pause
is shorter than any that comes at the end of a sentence, and shorter than the pauses that follow more
complicated punctuation marks like the semicolon (;), colon (:), or dash (). The hyphen (-), a mark
that occurs between syllables in a split word and in some compound words (e.g. green-blue, thirty-five,
post-1985), makes a shorter pause than a comma, but not by much.

1. Use a comma to separate items in a list or series. A comma after the second-to-last item in a list is
optional; either use it or not, but stay consistent throughout the paper.

Example (comma used): We went to the game with a bat, a glove, a baseball, a cooler, and a
change of socks.
Example (comma dropped): We went to the game with a bat, a glove, a baseball, a cooler and a
change of socks.

2. Use a comma to separate parts of a place or date.

Example: We watched the game on Monday, January 31, 1982, at a stadium in Schaumburg,
Illinois.

3. In most cases, use a comma to set off an introductory phrase from an independent clause (a set of
words that has both a subject and verb and could be its own complete sentence). The longer the
introductory phrase, the more likely it is to need a comma.

Example (short phrase, no comma): At first there were only six professional hockey teams in the
NHL.
Example (longer phrase, needs a comma): Looking over the dashboard in a panic of disbelief and
intense fear, Mona stopped the car.

4. Use a comma to separate longer independent clauses that are joined by a conjunction. See the rule
above or the section below for the definition of an independent clause. A conjunction is a word that
simply links one side of a sentence to another. Some common conjunctions are and, but, for, or, so,
then, and when.

Examples: The car left the highway in a hurry, and I heard on the radio that it landed in a forest
beneath the road.
The time had come for us to leave, but we were unable to move our legs.
We could have bought the dog with the stripe down its back from our neighbor, or we
could have kept grandmother’s dachshund for a while longer.

5. Use a comma to set off a nonrestrictive (not necessary to the sentence’s meaning) phrase (a set of
words that on its own could not be a complete sentence) or clause (a set of words that on its own
could be a complete sentence) from the rest of the sentence. A restrictive phrase or clause is one that
can not be removed without drastically changing the sentence’s meaning.

Example (nonrestrictive clause, with commas): My two-liter bottle of soda, which had been in the
freezer for too long, cracked in half. (The important thing is that the bottle cracked, not
that it was in the freezer.)

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 Example (restrictive phrase, without commas): The bird with one wing longer than the other flew
in circles over our boat. (This is a very specific bird, so without the phrase, the reader will
not understand what it looked like.)

6. Along the same lines, use a comma to set off a nonrestrictive appositive (a phrase that clarifies the
identity of someone or something else mentioned in the sentence) from the rest of the sentence.

Example (nonrestrictive, with commas): George W. Bush, the President of the United States, has
an MBA from Harvard. (Everyone knows he’s the current president.)
Example (restrictive, without commas): Led Zeppelin’s song “Stairway to Heaven” was never
released as a single. (Without the song’s title, the sentence is vague and does not make
much sense.)

7. Use a comma to set off a word or group of words being contrasted with another part of the
sentence.

Examples: The way to true happiness is through confidence, not fear.

The car looks better in red, not light blue.

Remember: A good writer uses a comma to create a short pause. This pause should help the reader
understand exactly what the writer is trying to say; if a pause would either allow the reader a
chance to absorb meaning or make clear the relative importance of words in a sentence, then use a
comma.

• semicolon (;): Use the semicolon to create a slightly longer pause between parts of a sentence. There
are only two general situations that require a semicolon.

1. Use a semicolon to separate long and wordy items in a list.

Example: Over the course of a decade, my family has lived in Springfield, Cairo, and Rockford in
Illinois; Madison, Milwaukee, and Delafield in Wisconsin; and Buffalo in New York.

2. Use a semicolon to separate independent clauses (see comma rule 3 above) when they are not
joined by a conjunction (see comma rule 4 above). Technically, these independent clauses could be
written as individual sentences; however, sometimes using a semicolon and joining them adds
variety to a paper and can help a writer develop a personal style.

Example: Few things frustrate me more than traffic jams; in fact, I cannot at the moment think of
anything more irritating.

• colon (:): Like the semicolon, colons fit best only in those sentences that would be clearer or more
interesting because of them. These sentences are few and far between in standard writing because they
often feature long independent clauses or lists.

1. Use a colon at the beginning of a long list, or of a list that has long items within it. This makes
sense, because a comma alone (or no punctuation at all) might make the sentence difficult to
understand.

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 Example: Most students take the following courses before graduating from high school: English I,
II, and III; World History and American History; three years of a foreign language; and
at least one art class.

2. Use a colon before restating an idea within a sentence when both parts of the sentence are
independent clauses. This is different from semicolon rule 2 because the second clause actually
rephrases the first.

Example: This movie should never have been released in the theater: it should have been sent
straight to video.

• quotation marks (" " or '): Quotation marks play a very specific role in formal English writing: they
introduce spoken language or, in rare cases, add emphasis by isolating a word or phrase within a
sentence.

1. Use double quotation marks (" ") to enclose a direct quotation, one that reports a person's exact
words.

Example: "Keep your feet on the ground," said a once-famous DJ, "but keep reaching for the stars."

2. Use single quotation marks (' ) to enclose a separate quote within a direct quotation.

Example: My father always said: "Don't leave the fallout shelter until you hear the words 'all clear'
over the short-wave radio."

3. Use double quotation marks to isolate important words, either for emphasis or irony.

Examples: Few defendants feel comfortable when this judge makes his "rabid-dog" face in court.
The weather forecaster's promised "sunny day" turned rainy by 10:00 am.

• dash (): The dash, unlike the other punctuation marks used inside a sentence, represents a quick,
hard, but temporary pause between ideas. The dash works in just two situations.

1. Use the dash to set off material that interrupts the rest of the sentence.

Example: The door would not openthere was something behind itso I just sat there looking
lost.

2. Use the dash when a sentence, especially a quote, is cut off suddenly. In other words, the dash
takes the place of words left out for dramatic effect. This works well with dialogue when a speaker
gets interrupted or stops speaking in mid-sentence.

Example: "Just run! Don't look behind you! The tornado is almost"

Using quotation marks with other punctuation marks:

Follow the rules below for a period, question mark, exclamation point, comma, semicolon, colon, or dash.
• periods and commas: Place the quotation marks outside a period or comma.

Example: "Anyone can clearly see," said my observant friend, staring down at the bare concrete, "that
this swimming pool is closed."

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• semicolons and colons: Place the quotation marks inside a semicolon or colon.

Example: The evidence clearly showed that my cousin had "flown the coop"; I had little hope of ever
getting my suitcase back again.

Example: George had a "face for radio": his voice was fine, but he looked funny.

• question marks and exclamation points: Place the quotation marks outside a question mark or
exclamation point when it is part of the quote, but inside when it is
part of the larger sentence.

Examples: "Leave that dog alone!" warned my mother.

"Which dog?" I asked, knowing full well that there was no dog in the yard at the moment.
Which poem does you like best, "Thanatopsis" or "The Boa Constrictor"?
I could not believe my ears when most people responded with "Thanatopsis"!

• With the dash, the position of the quotation marks depends on the context. If the material set off by
dashes interrupts the sentence, then put the quotation marks inside the dash. If the dash cuts off a
sentence or independent clause before it ends, the quotation marks should be outside the dash.

Examples: Only one phrase"Let's eat!"would get the dog off the couch.
Kim said, "That's not fair! I was the last one to" and then stormed out of the room.

Punctuation used within words:

The hyphen and the apostrophe are used within words rather than sentences. They have very specific uses.

• the hyphen (-):

1. Use the hyphen to break words between syllables at the end of a line. A syllable is a single unit of
sound in a word; see the section on grammar to learn how to break words into syllables.

Example: The best place to break a word in a long sentence is between syllables
lables.

2. Use the hyphen to make a compound adjective from two or more words, but only when the
compound adjective comes before the noun it describes.

Example: medium-sized town BUT a town of a medium size

• the apostrophe ('):

1. Use the apostrophe to replace letters in a contraction (a single word formed by combing two or
more other words).

Example: I haven't ever understood why rich people don't just give their money away to people who
aren't as fortunate as they have been.
("haven't" is the combination of "have" and "not"; "don't" is the combination of "do" and "not";
"aren't" is the combination of "are" and "not")

2. Use the apostrophe to show ownership or possession.

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 Example: Joe's turtle finished the race before Jim's by less than a minute.

This is true for all singular nouns, even those ending in an “s.” Therefore, “Ross’s break” is correct,
even though a spell-checker may not think so.

Plural possessives are formed by adding the apostrophe alone.

Examples: We came early to the ballpark so we could steal the players’ bats.

Capitalization
The following section briefly reviews the rules of capitalization. For a more complete discussion, refer
to one of the style manuals listed in the index at the back of this handbook. General rule: Capitalize
words that seem to designate something specific, such as an object, a place, a person, a new sentence,
or a title.

Capitalize proper nouns.

• Proper nouns are people, places, things, or ideas that have a specific name rather than a general
description. For instance: “United States of America” is a specific “country”; “country” is not
capitalized, since this is a general description.

Examples: Chicago (instead of “city”)

Great America (instead of “amusement park”)
Jane Doe (instead of “woman”)
Lake Zurich High School (instead of “school”)
Darwinism (instead of “theory”)

Also capitalize the personal pronoun “I,” although it is not technically a proper noun.

Capitalize the first word in a sentence or complete quotation within a sentence.

• This means the first word of EVERY sentence should be capitalized, whether it is complete or not.
Capitalize the first word of a quotation within a sentence ONLY if the quotation is complete.

Example: No! You can’t leave yet!

The man in the blue suit said, “My partner will send an elephant over to your friend’s
house.” He promised that it would arrive “no later than 2:00.”
(Notice the first sentence is incomplete but still starts with a capital; the second sentence contains a
complete quote, so the quote begins with a capital; and the third sentence contains a partial
quotation only, so the quote begins with a lower case letter.)

Titles
Few rules confuse writers more frequently than those dictating the way titles should be styled. This is
even more difficult because not every style manual agrees. In a traditional English course (but not a
journalism course), ignore the way newspapers and magazines print the titles of books, movies,
periodicals, works of art, poems, songs, essays, and short stories. Follow the rules below instead. (For
journalism courses, see the AP Stylebook.)

In all circumstances, capitalize the first word in a title and every other word in a title except
conjunctions (e.g. and, but, or) and prepositions (e.g. into, on, of). If the word distinguishes something
specific or identifiable within the title, capitalize it. Titles should be taken from the title page rather

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than the cover, where possible. Use standard capitalization rules and the standard font, rather than any
unusual forms. Never italicize titles. Underline the titles of works which are published independently,
and use quotation marks for works published within larger works.

Works to be underlined include:

ballets and operas (e.g. Swan Lake, Carmen)
books (e.g. To Kill a Mockingbird)
compact discs, records and tapes sold commercially (e.g. Paul McCartney’s Off the Ground)
films, videos, and DVDs sold commercially and identified by name (e.g. The Wizard of Oz)
musical compositions identified by name (e.g. Berlioz’s Symphonie Fantastique)
pamphlets (e.g. Illinois Rules of the Road)
paintings, drawings, or sculptures (e.g. Chagall’s I and My Village)
periodicals (magazines, newspapers, journals) (e.g. Newsweek, Journal of American Philanthropy)
plays (e.g. Death of a Salesman)
poem published as a book (e.g. The Waste Land)
sculptures (e.g., Rodin’s The Thinker)
television program (e.g. Star Trek)
vehicles with specific names (aircraft, spacecraft, ships: e.g. Spirit of St. Louis, Apollo 13)

Works to be put in “quotation marks” include:

chapter titles in a book
encyclopedia articles
episodes of television shows
episodes of radio shows
essays in a book
lectures and speeches
magazine articles
newspaper articles
poems (single reference, e.g. “Kubla Khan”)
short stories
song titles
website articles

Numbers
The following rules govern the way numbers should appear in formal English writing. These are
somewhat flexible and open to personal preference, but the best writing stays consistent.

1. spell out numbers under 100 (twelve, NOT 12; fifty-three, NOT 53)
2. use numerals for numbers 100 or over
3. always spell out ordinal numbers (first; twenty-third; one-hundred-tenth)
4. never spell out numbers in dates, items from numbered lists, or military divisions

Numbers should be written out if you can do so in one or two words. Otherwise, use Arabic numerals.
Write: one, five, twenty-one, one hundred, eighteen hundred, but write 5½, 101, 5,280. If your writing
contains the recurrent use of numeric statistical or scientific data, use numerals for those numbers.
Special rules apply when writing numbers with symbols (e.g., dollars, pounds, percent, etc.).
Compound numbers. Hyphenate compound numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine, compounds with
a number as the first element, and the written form of fractions.

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Beginning a sentence. When numbers or a date are required to open a sentence, write them out. For
example: “Five girls and 16 boys tried out for the varsity soccer team.” If you can, rewrite the
sentence.
Numbers & units. Do not mix numbers that are spelled out with symbols. Write out the term for the
symbols as well. For example, write: 45%, or forty-five percent; $20 or twenty dollars. Do not
combine spelled forms of numbers with symbols. .
Mixed numbers. Be consistent; do not mix numerals with written numbers when they refer to similar
things. For example, “Only 10 of the 150 people on the tour (not ten of the 150 tourists) were willing
to visit the city after the riot.” But also write: “The President got 1.3 trillion of the 1.6 trillion dollar
tax cut he proposed.”
Ordinal Numbers follow the general rules for numbers. For example, “The window for applications
was the third to twenty-third of August.” But use numerals if more than two words are needed to write
the number. For example, write “Haile Sellassie I was the 225th Emperor of Ethiopia.” However,
MLA style uses numerals exclusively in references (e.g., 2nd ed., 3rd ed.).

Dates and Time

Be consistent in writing dates; use either day-month-year (22 July 1999) or month-day-year
(July 22, 1999), but use only one style in the paper. Times should be written as numerals separated by
a colon, except for times indicated with the terms quarter, half, and o’clock.

Spelling
English developed from many other languages, including Anglo-Saxon, Latin, Greek, and older
versions of French, German, and Danish. Along the way, our “mother tongue” has borrowed words
from Italian, Spanish, Swedish, Swahili, and countless other languages to enrich our vocabulary. All of
this means that spelling individual words correctly in English can be more frustrating than writing
entire paragraphs or even essays. The spell check tool built into word processing programs can guide
you on spelling as you work. In the meantime, use the following set of rules as a general guide. If in
doubt about the correct spelling of a word, use a dictionary. Guess at the spelling, and then check the
guide words in the upper outside corner of each page. Look over the page for the troublesome word.

Example: You are unsure of how to spell the word “laboratory.” You know that the first three letters
are “lab.” You have in front of you Webster’s Tenth Collegiate Dictionary, which lists the guide words
“labor • lact-” on page 650. You scan down the left side until you find “laboratory,” the third entry on
the page.

A last word of warning: Not every spell-checker can be considered reliable. The word “kickstand” is
spelled correctly here, although Microsoft Word® does not believe so. Trust a dictionary or common
sense first and last if the spell-checker seems off.

• Form compound words (the combination of two or more words) by keeping all the letters in each.
Examples: sagebrush, cheesecloth, newsstand, kickstand.
• Place “i” before “e” except after “c” or when sounded like “a” as in “neighbor” or “weigh.” Examples:
believe, retrieve, thief, brief, conceive, deceive.
• Exceptions to this rule: Put “i” before “e” even after “c” if it follows a “ch” or “sh” sound. Examples:
species, conscience, financier.
• More exceptions: Know the following common words. They do not conform to any rule.
either neither leisure weird
seize science glacier foreign
height caffeine protein Frankenstein

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• Add either an “s” or “es” to singular nouns to make them plural. If the singular ends in an “s” sound
(ss, x, ch, sh, z), then add “es.” If it ends in any other sound, add just “s.” Examples: rabbits, churches,
glasses, coats, values.
• Make the plural of a word that ends in “f” or “fe” by changing the “f” to a “v” and adding “es.”
Examples: knife=knives, wife=wives, loaf=loaves, wharf=wharves, calf=calves.
• Make the plural of words ending in “y” by switching the “y” for “ies.” Examples: pastry=pastries,
spy=spies, try=tries, cry=cries.
• Words that end in “e” lose it when adding a suffix (letters added to the end of a word to change its
meaning, e.g. –ing, -ed, -ance, -able, -ant) if the suffix begins with a vowel. Examples: care=caring,
fake=faked, insure=insurance, value=valuable, observe=observant.
• Words that end in a silent “e,” however, generally keep the “e” if the suffix begins with a consonant.
Examples: sure=surely, genuine=genuineness, manage=management.
• The following common words are exceptions to this rule:
wisdom argument truly wholly ninth
• For words ending in “y,” change the “y” to an “i” before adding a suffix that begins with a vowel.
Examples: apply=appliance, defy=defiant, rely=reliant, ply=pliable.
• One exception to this rule: If the suffix is “-ing,” do not change the “y.” Examples: cry=crying,
try=trying, fry=frying, party=partying.
• All but three words that end in the sound “seed” spell that sound “cede.” The words that spell it
“ceed”: proceed, succeed, exceed.
• Only one word in common usage ends in “sede”: supersede.
• Words that end with a “y” preceded by a vowel keep the “y” when forming the plural. Examples:
monkey=monkeys, journey=journeys, turkey=turkeys.

Part Two: Grammar

The rules of grammar control the way words sound, how they operate in a sentence, and how they
interact with each other. These rules regulate the construction of words in syllables, the phonetic
pronunciation of words, the parts of speech, the parts of a sentence, the parts that must be included in a
complete sentence, and the forms of clauses, phrases, and verb conjugations. Grammar organizes
words into appropriate syntax (the order of words in a sentence).
This section will also deal briefly with paragraph and essay structure.

Phonetics and Pronunciation

Every serious dictionary gives a phonetic pronunciation of each word it defines. Most use a common
key, usually explained in the dictionary’s preface or appendix, and often provided in short form at the
bottom of each odd-numbered page (on the right in an opened book). This section will explain some of
the most basic sounds in English.

• phonetics (sounds)
1. vowels: Vowels can be long (the sound the letter makes in the alphabet), short (a flat sound), or
neutral (somewhere in between). The neutral sound is called a “schwa.”
Examples:
long: state need might doe super
short: mat bet active mop pull
schwa: along blunder hidden collide must

In the dictionary, vowel sounds are often represented phonetically by symbols and other letters. This
will be explained below in the section on the pronunciation key.

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 2. consonants: Consonants often have more than one sound associated with them. For example, the
letter “c” can produce or contribute to six different sounds (think about the difference between “chin,”
“cook,” “celery,” “witch,” “czar,” and “special”). The dictionary provides a quick answer, but the best
way to learn how to guess at a word’s proper pronunciation is to read books, magazines, and other
well-written materials.

3. blends: A blend is a set of two consonants that make one sound. A blend often begins a word, but
may appear in the middle or at the end as well. The most common blends are ch (church), sh (crush), th
(this), wh (whale), and ck (hacker).

• pronunciation key: The first modern, standardized pronunciation key for English was prepared by the
International Phonetics Association in 1898. The International Phonetics Alphabet (IPA) has been the
basis for most dictionary pronunciation keys since then. Each dictionary uses a slightly different set of
symbols to represent the sounds the IPA distinguished, so check the front or back of each dictionary
for its own guide.

Syllables
In written English, the smallest structural (not necessarily sonic) unit within a single word is the letter,
followed closely by the syllable, and finally the full word. Syllables represent the sense of different
parts of a word; when in doubt about how to break a word across lines, look for groups of letters that
form complete words in themselves; prefixes; suffixes; or some other unit recognizable from everyday
reading. Syllables have something to do with sound as well. Usually, but with many, many exceptions,
there are as many syllables in a word as there are vowel sounds.

Nearly every dictionary provides syllabification guides in the entry for each word. The bullets (•) or
hyphens between groups of letters represent acceptable breaks if the word must occupy two lines. This
section will suggest the best ways to break words into their syllables, which will then improve spelling
and pronunciation. Remember that a word broken across lines in a written essay is separated between
syllables with a hyphen.

• Do not break monosyllabic words (words with a single syllable).

Examples: one joint quick fire

• Never break a word over lines of text at a single letter. Instead, put the word on the next line.
Examples: NOT e-nough, but enough
NOT a-mong, but among
NOT i-cicle but ici-cle or icicle
NOT o-vation but ova-tion or ovation

• Divide either before or after a consonant when it comes between two vowels, depending on which part
of the word seems connected to the consonant’s sound.
Examples: pe-can re-lax de-ny re-fuse
spi-der tu-lip re-lay pe-tal

• Break words between consonants if they are surrounded by vowels, UNLESS the consonants form a
blend (e.g. ck, ch, sh, th,), a combination of letters that make a single sound.
Examples: ad-van-tage struc-ture mil-lion for-mat

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• Break words with blends either before or after the blend, depending on which part of the word seems
completed by the blend.
Examples: crack-er rath-er bash-ing teach-er

• Divide a word after a prefix and before a suffix.

Examples (prefixes): pre-fix con-tract semi-legal
Examples (suffixes): convert-ible fasc-ism support-ive

• Break before “ed” or “ing” when it follows a “t” or “d” sound, UNLESS the “t” or “d” is preceded
immediately by short vowel.
Examples: mend-ed need-ed fold-ed grat-ed
mend-ing need-ing fold-ing grat-ing

• If the “t” or “d” sound comes after a single short vowel, then the “t” or “d” is doubled and the break
comes between the doubled consonants.
Examples: thud=thud-ded mat=mat-ted outfit=outfit-ted vet=vet-ted

Parts of Speech
Schools begin teaching parts of speech in the early elementary grades and continue teaching it through
high school. This section will quickly review the way words function in a sentence. Understanding a
word’s likely function makes writing and reading much more rewarding.

• nouns: A noun is a person, place, thing, abstract idea, or any other word in a sentence representing
something that can act or be acted upon. Nouns are either common or proper. They can be singular,
plural, or collective. Some nouns are gerunds, which are words formed by adding “-ing” to the root of
a verb.

Examples:
common nouns: school woman fish
proper nouns: Yale University Joan of Arc Jaws
singular nouns: school woman fish
plural nouns: schools women fish or fishes
collective nouns: conference sisterhood school
gerunds: running crying eating
gerund sentence: There are few things I do with greater skill than eating.

For the most part, nouns are either subjects or objects. A subject acts in a sentence, while and object is
acted upon. A noun can be the object of a preposition or a verb.

Examples:
subject: The city sleeps. (the noun city is the subject of the sentence, since it is acting)
subject: The city sleeps, and Herb finds himself alone. (both city and Herb are subjects)
object of a preposition: We had been at home for several hours. (the preposition at points
to home as the place we had been)
object of a preposition: Kim left her notebook on the bus. (the preposition on indicates
where Kim left her notebook, this time on the bus, a noun)
object of a verb: Earth needs water to support life. (Earth is the subject, needs is the verb
showing action, and water is the object acted upon by Earth)
object of a verb: Joseph throws fish for a living. (Joseph is the subject, throws is the verb
showing action, fish is the object acted upon by Joseph)

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• pronouns: Pronouns take the place of proper or common nouns and should be used to vary the word in
a sentence or paragraph, or when repetition would sound unnecessary. Pronouns may be singular or
plural, and change depending on the noun replaced. The following table represents the forms pronouns
take in standard English. “Subjective” means this is the form to use when replacing a subject,
“possessive” when replacing a noun demonstrating ownership, and “objective” when replacing an
object.

Personal Pronouns:
First Person Singular Plural
subjective: I we
possessive: my, mine our, ours
objective: me us

Second Person Singular Plural

subjective: you you
possessive: your, yours your, yours
objective: you you

Third Person Singular Plural

subjective: he, she, it they
possessive: his, hers, its their, theirs
objective: him, her, it them

Indefinite Pronouns:
Use these words to replace a noun without an obvious identity or number.
all each neither other
another either nobody some
anybody everyone none somebody
anyone everything no one someone
anything few nothing something
both most one

Interrogative pronouns:
Use these pronouns to ask questions.

what (use to get information about a specific thing or event)

which (use to get information when there are several possible answers, and the
sentence asks for a specific one)
who (use to get information about a person)

Demonstrative pronouns:
Use these pronouns to point something out or demonstrate that something in particular is true or the
answer to a question.

Singular: this, that

Plural: these, those

Reciprocal pronouns:
These two word pairs enable the writer to separate the actions of multiple subjects or actors.

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 each other (“We whispered to each other” means that two people talked amongst
themselves, not to anyone outside their group)
one another (“The siblings often fought with one another” means that these brothers
and sisters fought amongst themselves)

Reflexive pronouns:
Use these pronouns to refer back to the sentence’s subject or actor.

Singular Plural
First Person: myself ourselves
Second Person: yourself yourselves
Third Person: himself, herself, itself, oneself themselves

Relative pronouns:
See the section below on Parts of a Sentence, clauses.

• verbs: Verbs indicate action or a state of being within a sentence. They form the center of a predicate,
which works with the subject, comprised of at least a noun, to complete a sentence. Verbs exist in
several different forms, each of which plays a different role in a sentence. This section identifies the
different forms of a verb; for conjugation, go to a style manual or dictionary.

Stem: a verb’s identifying element (e.g. run, cry, trip, fall, create)

Infinitive: a verb’s most basic form, consisting of the stem plus the word “to.” (e.g. to run, to cry, to
trip, to fall, to create). Infinitives can be used as adjective, adverb, or noun phrases, or objects of a
preposition or verb. See the sections on phrases and objects.

Conjugated form: the form of a verb that reflects the subject’s number and the time at which the
action takes place. Many conjugations are irregular; to determine which form of a verb to use, see a
style manual that deals extensively with grammar. Most grammar-checkers catch conjugation mistakes
as well.

Participle: form of a verb in either the past or present tense. The past participle for regular verbs
consists of the stem plus “ed” (walk=walked, create=created, look=looked), while the present is
formed from the stem plus “ing” (walk=walking, create=creating, look=looking). Participles act either
as adjectives (e.g. a “painted” fence or “walking” stick) or with helping verbs in more complex
conjugations (e.g. “I had been walking for some time.” “You had better have mended that fence by the
time your mother gets home.”).

Gerund: form of a verb consisting of the stem plus “ing” that acts as a noun. See section on nouns
above.

Verbs can be transitive or intransitive. The difference refers to whether the verb needs an object to
make sense. This should be determined on a sentence-by-sentence basis, since the same verb may be
transitive in one context and intransitive in another. A transitive verb needs an object because it
“transmits” or shift its action to another word, but an intransitive verb can be understood on its own.

Examples:
transitive verbs: The car blew a gasket.

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 This chicken squawks “hello.”
Aunt Chloe drove the truck to work today.

intransitive verbs: The wind blew.

The chicken squawks.
On the way home, I drove.

• adjectives: words that describe a noun. Adjectives come in several forms, most of which will not give
the basic writer difficulty. However, be careful when forming comparative and superlative adjectives.

Comparative adjectives: formed from the basic adjective with a suffix attached to indicate the
difference between no more than two nouns. Most adjectives use “–er” to demonstrate this difference.

Examples: tall, taller

big, bigger
small, smaller

Superlative adjectives: formed from the basic adjective with a suffix attached to indicate the
difference between more than two nouns. Most adjectives use “-est” to demonstrate this difference.
Examples: tall, taller, tallest
big, bigger, biggest
small, smaller, smallest

For irregular adjectives (e.g. good, better, best), look up the basic adjective in the dictionary and
check the entry for the comparative and superlative forms.

• adverbs: As the name suggests, adverbs describe verbs. They also describe adjectives and other
adverbs. The best writing uses very few adverbs; strong, interesting verbs don’t need description.
However, sometimes the best way to make a point is to use an exciting adverb. Most adverbs are
formed by combining the base of an adjective with “-ly” at the end, and adhere to spelling rules
concerning the ends of words (see Spelling section above). There are many irregular adverbs, though.
Use the dictionary or a grammar style manual to find the adverb form of most adjectives.

Examples: quick=quickly
happy=happily
full=fully
very
much

adverb describing a verb: I ran quickly.

adverb describing an adjective: We have been happily poor for five years now.
adverb describing another adverb: He cried very loudly when I closed his door.

Like adjectives, adverbs have comparative and superlative forms. However, these usually require
adding an entirely new word rather than simply an ending.

Comparative adverbs: add more or less to indicate the difference between no more than two verbs,
adjectives, or adverbs.

Examples: slowly=more slowly

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 completely=less completely

Superlative adverbs: add most or least to indicate the difference between no less than three verbs,
adjectives, or adverbs.

Examples: likely=most likely

generously=least generously

As with adjectives, adverbs often have irregular comparative and superlative forms (e.g. bad, worse,
worst). Look up the basic adverb in the dictionary and check the entry for the proper forms.

• articles: Articles are the small words in sentences that define or introduce nouns. They are actually
adjectives, but adjectives that serve a very specific purpose. There are just three articles in English:
a
an
the
Of these three, only “the” indicates a specific noun. The other two are general. Use “an” only in front
of a noun that begins with a vowel or vowel sound.

• prepositions: Prepositions show relationships between words. They usually come between verbs and
nouns, but not necessarily. They connect nouns with other nouns, verbs, and adverbs. Often they
indicate time, direction, or location.

Some common prepositions:

time: after, as, before, by, during, since, until
direction: down, toward, up
location: above, across, among, behind, beside, beyond, near, on, off, opposite, past, within

Prepositions often form the start of prepositions phrases, described in the next section.

• conjunctions: These words do just what their name suggests: they conjoin (meaning to put together)
parts of a sentence. The basic conjunctions are and, but, or, and nor. Among the rest, the most
common are:
also if now still until
anyway in order once than when
as if instead otherwise then where
because likewise since therefore whether…to
besides meanwhile so though while
for next so that unless yet

• interjections: Interjections exist simply to give a sentence more emphasis or to show strong emotion.
They do not in any way change the structure of a sentence. Examples of interjections include “oh,”
“whoops,” “yikes,” “uh-oh,” “yippee,” and “wow.”

Parts of a Sentence
Every complete sentence must have two parts: a subject and a predicate. The subject is the part of the
sentence related directly to the noun that does the acting. The predicate is the verb and all other words
used to describe or explain the action or state of being. In the following sentences, the predicate is
italicized.

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Examples: The dog ran quickly and quietly.
People want to be happy in their jobs.
At the start of the show, the host ran screaming from the stage.

Notice in this last sentence that the subject is surrounded by the predicate. This is because the
sentence begins with a prepositional phrase, which will be discussed at length below. The
phrase actually describes when the running took place, making it part of the predicate rather
than the subject.

• phrases: A phrase is a group of words that belong together but is missing a subject, predicate, or both.
Without those parts, it cannot be a sentence. There are seven main types of phrases, each of them
constructed differently.

noun phrase: A noun phrase can act as a subject or object within a sentence.

Examples: Running so hard made me feel thirsty.

We have lost the neighbor’s dog.
The green truck stopped just in front of Sue’s driveway.

appositive phrase: Appositives re-identify a noun already mentioned in the sentence. The appositive
usually follows the original noun immediately and is set off with commas. The appositive is a
specific type of noun phrase.

Examples: The third baseman, my brother, committed just three errors this game.
The presumed victim, a canary, was nowhere to be found.

verbal phrase: Verbal phrases begin with verbs.

Examples: Rich’s homework could have been on Mars for all he cared.
The nurse left her purse sitting on the operating table. (this is a present participle
phrase)
The patient complained bitterly. (in this case, the phrase is the predicate)

infinitive phrase: An infinitive phrase begins with or contains an infinitive.

Examples: To start her act, the clown decided to throw things at the crowd.
All cars wishing to enter the park were required to display a license plate.
To die, to sleep; to sleep, perchance to dream: ay, there’s the rub.

prepositional phrase: Prepositional phrases begin with prepositions.

Examples: Tim nearly got caught on the rainy river.

At the top of the hill, we found the rest of last night’s dinner.
Working from dawn to dusk cannot be good for the back.

restrictive phrase: If a restrictive phrase is removed from its sentence, the meaning of the sentence
changes completely. Restrictive phrases should be close to the noun described, called the
antecedent, and should never be set off by commas.

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 Examples: The judge excused the juror who had become sick in the courtroom.(removing this
phrase means the reader does not know the excused juror)
My grandfather fought in the war that included the only use of nuclear weapons in
history. (without this phrase, we do not know which war)
They walked quietly along the streets of the town where they grew up.(removing this
phrase makes the town’s identity and importance unclear)

nonrestrictive phrase: Nonrestrictive phrases can be removed without significantly changing the
sentence’s meaning. Most nonrestrictive phrases are set off by commas, but dashes and parentheses
can be used to indicate more or less emphasis.

Examples: The purpose of the meeting, to set an agenda, was well served.(leaving this phrase out
still tells us that the meeting was successful)
He had a drink—a glass of tepid water—and felt better immediately.(the point here is
that a drink made him feel better, not that he drank water)
The last horse to leave the barn (all the others had left hours before) forgot to close the
door. (the first clause, which is also the subject, made it clear that the other horses had
left already, so the parenthetical simply repeats information)

• clauses: Like a phrase, a clause is a group of words that forms part of a sentence. However, a clause
has a subject and a predicate, giving it every element necessary to form a complete sentence. An
independent clause is a complete sentence joined to another by conjunctions or punctuation. A
dependent clause has the makings of a complete sentence, but because of the wording used, does not
make sense alone. One important dependent clause explained below is the subordinating clause, which
can enliven any writing style when used appropriately. Finally, some clauses operate as parts of
speech, usually nouns, adjectives, or adverbs.

independent clause: Independent clauses can stand alone as complete sentences because they contain
a complete subject and predicate. However, when joined with another clause, they help vary sentence
length and spice up an otherwise predictable writing style.

Examples:
The best literature books have a variety of texts, including poems, plays, and short stories.

When it rains, Colin likes to wander outside without an umbrella.

Helen created her own web site to promote her club’s main activities, which include picketing fast
food restaurants and shopping for fresh vegetables.
(In the last example, the entire set of words from Helen to “activities” could also be considered an
independent clause. Standing alone, the words “to promote her club’s main activities” qualify as a
restrictive phrase, since they are necessary to understand the nature of the web site Helen has
created.)

dependent clause: A dependent clause requires the rest of the sentence to complete it, even though it
has all the parts that usually comprise a full sentence. This is because the clause begins with a pronoun
or conjunction that makes the clause a sentence fragment (a set of words missing either a subject or
predicate). These pronouns are called relative pronouns. Common relative pronouns include that,
which, whichever, what, whatever, who, and whoever. The conjunctions are called subordinating
(which means to reduce someone or something in importance relative to someone or something else)
conjunctions. Common subordinating conjunctions include after, although, as, because, before, even

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 though, if, in order that, once, since, than, that, though, unless, until, when, where, and while. Both
relative pronouns and subordinating conjunctions make a dependent clause rely on an independent
clause to give it meaning.

Examples:
The best literature books provide a variety of different genres, which should include poems, plays,
and short stories.
In this example, the dependent clause has a partial subject (“which,” a relative pronoun that takes
the place of the noun “variety”) and a verb (“should include”). However, the relative pronoun can
not stand on its own as a complete subject. The clause “which should include poems, plays, and
short stories” cannot exist independently as a complete sentence.

When it rains, Colin likes to wander outside without an umbrella.

Like the first example, this sentence consists of an independent clause (“Colin likes to wander
outside without an umbrella.”) and a dependent clause (“When it rains”). The dependent clause
possesses both a complete subject (“it”) and a complete predicate (“rains”). However, it begins
with the subordinating conjunction “when,” which makes the clause depend on the next clause for
its meaning.

Helen created her own web site to promote her club’s main activities, which include picketing fast
food restaurants and shopping for fresh vegetables.

This sentence begins with an independent clause and ends with a dependent clause. The dependent
clause begins with the relative pronoun “which.”

Types of Sentences:
The most effective writing styles vary sentence length and structure. A good writer will use some of each
of the following structures to establish a personal style.

simple sentence: Simple sentences consist of a single clause (a subject and a predicate).
Examples: It rains.
The train stops here just once a day.
This team finished last in the league last year.

compound sentence: Compound sentences are formed by joining at least two independent clauses with
coordinating conjunctions. The most common coordinating conjunctions are and and but.
Examples: It rains and the grass grows taller.
The train stops here just once a day, but I always manage to miss it.
This team finished last in the league last year and I don’t think it has much of a chance
improving its position this season.

complex sentence: A complex sentence contains at least one independent clause and at least one
dependent clause. This means it must use either a relative pronoun or subordinating conjunction.
Examples: When it rains, the grass grows taller.
The train stops here just once a day, although that doesn’t stop me from missing it.
Even though it has drafted well for years, this team finished last in the league last season
and I don’t think it has much of a chance improving its position this season.

compound complex sentence: Compound complex sentences are formed by joining a compound sentence
(at least two independent clauses) with a dependent clause.

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Examples: It rains and the grass grows taller, shading the sidewalk’s edges.
My brother has reminded me often that the train stops here just once a day, but I always
manage to miss it.
This team finished last in the league last year and I don’t think it has much of a chance
improving its position this season, although I keep hoping for the best.

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 Writing a Research Paper-MLA Style
This is a brief introduction to the complexities of the formal research paper. The bulk of this material
is from the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers, Sixth Edition; other materials are derived
from Documenting Sources 1999-2000: MLA and APA Guidelines.

The style and format for research papers written in humanities classes (English, History, and
Sociology) is generally that of the Modern Language Association, or MLA. There are several other
styles for writing formal papers, however in English courses the MLA style is the one most typically
used. This research paper manual is designed primarily for use in the Lake Zurich High School
English classroom; information on other styles is available from teachers, the school library, or from
internet sources.

This is not in any way a comprehensive guide. For a more complete manual on the writing of research
papers consistent with the style endorsed by the Modern Language Association one would need to
reference the MLA Handbook itself, or the various MLA publications, either printed or electronic.
However this guide should serve as a basic primer in the fundamentals of a research paper.

Part One: Beginning the Research Paper

The Research Paper-a Definition

A research paper is a report on a subject that incorporates material from outside the writer’s own
knowledge and experiences. However, a good research paper does not merely report the findings and
ideas of others. Rather, a well-written research paper takes source material and uses it to develop
original ideas and conclusions.

There are generally two types of research: primary and secondary:

A primary source is an original source. This source (a fiction or non-fiction book, diary, a personal
interview, an event, a survey, and so on) informs you directly, not through another person’s
explanation or interpretation. You are working with primary sources when you:
• analyze an original work of literature, such as the book on which you are reporting.
• observe an event to get firsthand information.
• survey or interview people to gather and tabulate their responses.
• do experiments to understand cause-and-effect relationships.

A secondary source is not an original source. A secondary source is one that contains information
that other people have gathered and interpreted. Secondary sources extend, analyze, interpret, or
evaluate the primary information. You are working with secondary sources when you:
• read and refer to the examination of studies that other researchers have made of a literary work.
• read and refer to a dictionary, encyclopedia, anthology of literary criticism.
• watch a documentary on TV or film.
• visit a website and refer to information on the site in your essay.

The Purpose behind Writing a Research Paper

Aside from the most obvious answer (that it is an assignment), some subjects require people to look
beyond their own knowledge for an accurate and complete discussion. Additionally, the use of outside
sources lends to any paper the weight of authority, an increase in accuracy, and the benefit of

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verifiability. The reader of a research paper also acquires the unique perspectives and conclusions of
the author of the paper.

The Expository Essay

The type of paper you will typically write for an assignment is known as an expository essay. You
write expository essays about important concepts covered in your reading and in class discussions.
You explore topics related to your course work. You compose procedure (how-to) papers. You take
essay tests. Anytime you are asked to inform, explain, examine, discuss, or illustrate in writing, you
are developing an expository essay.

The expository essay follows a specific structure:

• Introduction paragraph with background information on the topic, reference to the author and
the book which is the subject of the paper, and your thesis statement.
• Body paragraphs which support and confirm your thesis statement.
• Concluding paragraph which restates your thesis, summarizes your proof statement, and closes
with a concluding statement.

Personal ideas, opinions, and beliefs are not appropriate in the expository essay. Write the essay as if
the information you are presenting is factual.

A successful essay follows this format of an effective sermon or speech:

• Tell them what you’re going to tell them!
• Tell them!
• Tell them what you’ve told them!

Sources of Information for the Paper

The first (and often last) place to look for information is generally a library, especially for the types of
research papers assigned in high school. In college, students may find themselves with an assignment
that requires them to do actual fieldwork, such as interviewing people or visiting historical locations;
however this is not as likely to be the case with high school level work.

The library will have two basic types of information: printed and electronic. Printed information is
that which comes in a physical form and is stored at the library itself. Examples of printed
information include books, magazines, newspapers, pamphlets, etc.

Electronic information is found by using a computer. Examples of electronic information include:

World Wide Web sites, CD-ROM programs, databases, etc.

Both types of information have benefits and drawbacks, and often your instructor will determine
whether or not the use of any specific type of information will be allowed.

Validity of Research Resources

The worth of a particular piece of information is subject to many variables. Printed materials often
seem to be the most trustworthy since the time and expense required to produce a book would seem to
lend itself only to those who have a legitimate interest in the subject. However, books and other
similar printed sources, because of the time and expense required for publication, are not easily
changed when information changes or new information is available. Thus, a book that seems to be a
reliable and valid source of information might become obsolete if new and revised information
pertaining to the subject becomes available after publication.

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Periodicals, such as newspapers and magazines, also tend to be reliable sources of information. Since
publishers issue such sources on a regular basis they have the ability to make corrections,
amendments, and additions when necessary. Much of the problem with using these sources lies in the
fact that they are published on strict deadlines, and are often printed without complete, or completely
verified information.

Electronic materials range from highly reliable to completely worthless. The validity of electronic
information lies in its source. Examples of valid and reliable electronic information include:
• web sites and programs put up by reputable publishers.
• noted encyclopedias (Britannica, etc.).
• professional journals. Such information is generally “peer reviewed” before publication.
• web-based news sites (e.g. Chicago Tribune, New York Times, MSNBC, CNN, ABC News).
• websites published by colleges and universities and their faculty members.

Examples of questionable and possibly worthless electronic information include:

• internet based encyclopedias (e.g. Wikipedia) written and edited by volunteers and subject
to change by nearly everyone who accesses this source.
• that published by persons or groups which have an obvious agenda (e.g. political action
groups or commercial ventures marketing products or services).
• that found in chat rooms, message boards, or “blogs”.
• that found in personal websites.

Determining the validity of any source is a matter of combining common sense, prior knowledge of the
different types of information, and competent guidance in the use of research materials. See the
following website for guidance: <http://library.cornell.edu/olinuris/ref/webcrit.html>

Part Two: Conducting Research

Choosing the Subject of a Research Paper:

In high school, the instructor normally determines the subject or may distribute a selection of topics to
the class. However, if students have a choice of topics, one should be chosen with several
considerations in mind. These considerations may include:
• how much valid information is available.
• how readily the information is available.
• which topic would be best suited for a school paper.
• which topic would be most interesting to research and write about.

Determining the Purpose or Thesis of Your Paper

The Thesis
Instead of merely reporting on a subject, a good research paper should have a thesis. A thesis is the
specific purpose of a paper. It is the controlling purpose in writing the paper. While the topic of a
paper might be the works of Edgar Allan Poe, the thesis might be that the works of Poe reflect the
author’s tortured and often unhappy life. Choosing a thesis is frequently left to the writer. When this
is the case, early research on the subject can often be the guide to an interesting and feasible thesis.
If chosen by the author of the paper, the thesis can either be an original thought or it can be a
continuation of the thesis of another writer on the same subject. In either case, a thesis should be
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the paper. If the thesis is borrowed from another writer, the original source must be properly
acknowledged.

The Thesis Statement

A thesis statement is a sentence (or a few sentences) that clearly identifies the author’s focus in writing
the paper. The thesis statement is usually found in the introductory paragraph and is normally placed
at the end of this paragraph.

In addition to introducing the reader to the thesis, the thesis statement should also indicate the order in
which the paper will discuss the topic. For example, if the thesis is still that the works of Edgar Allan
Poe reflect a tortured and unhappy life, and the paper will be examining the autobiographical parallels
between his life and “The Raven,” “The Fall of the House of Usher” and “The Tell-Tale Heart,” in that
order, the thesis might be:
The horror that was Poe’s life can be seen by examining the parallels between his actual
life and the fictional lives he wrote about in “The Raven,” “The Fall of the House of
Usher,” and “The Tell-Tale Heart.”

As you organize your research and prepare to write your paper, you may want to take the following
into consideration:
• Consider whether the topic satisfies the requirement assigned by the teacher?
• Are my topic and my thesis interesting to a person who has not read the book on which I am
reporting? Will my reader want to continue beyond the first paragraph?
• Is my topic or my thesis unique, or is it merely a restatement of another person’s thesis?
• Have I brainstormed the topic and the thesis with my teacher? Have I asked a parent or a friend
to give me their impression of my topic and thesis?

Taking Notes While Researching

There are many different, but still effective, methods for taking notes while doing research. Some
teachers will specify a particular method that they want students to follow. Others may not specify a
specific method but still require notes be taken and submitted, and even others may not make any
requirement involving note taking at all. Regardless, it is still a good idea to keep accurate and
thorough notes throughout the essay research and writing process. Doing so will help to ensure
accuracy and completeness of information, and could help to eliminate accidental omissions or errors
in properly citing sources.

However notes are taken, they should be organized, legible, complete, and contain all necessary
bibliographical information that might be needed to find a source, should it be needed again.

Making and Keeping Copies of Source Material

If possible, copies should be made of all sources used. However, if a source is not reproducible for any
reason, it is always a good idea to keep a good record of where it is located, so that it may be accessed
again easily if needed.
Some teachers will require that copies of all sources be turned in with the paper. Such a requirement
indicates to the teacher that you are following good research procedures, and that you are doing
original work and not copying someone else’s work. While generally not a problem for shorter works
such as encyclopedia entries, essays in a collection, or websites, it is usually not feasible to copy an
entire book. In the case of longer sources that would be time or cost prohibitive to reproduce, a good
solution is to copy the publication information at the beginning of a book, and all pages used or
referenced in the paper.

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Highlighting Copies of Sources
The information in copies which pertains to your paper should be highlighted if possible. Other
information may be highlighted if you feel it supports your thesis, even if you do not plan to quote or
paraphrase that information.

Part Three: Getting Ready to Write Your Paper

Organizing Your Research and Your Thoughts

Once you have collected your research material, and before you begin writing your paper, it is a good
idea to organize your material into an orderly fashion. Two suggested ways of organizing material are
the diagram or the outline. The English Writing Center has a software program called
Inspiration© on each computer which facilitates diagramming and outlining of essays. An
interactive tutorial on Inspiration© can be found at
http://www.inspiration.com/test/dswmedia/mainmenu.html

Diagram
1. Begin your diagram with a circle or a horizontal line or whatever shape you prefer in the
middle of the page.
2. Inside the shape or on the line, write your topic.
3. From your center shape or line, draw three or four lines out into the page. Be sure to spread
them out.
4. At the end of each of these lines, draw another circle or horizontal line or whatever you drew
in the center of the page.
5. In each shape or on each line, write the main ideas that you have about your topic, or the main
points that you want to make.
• If you are trying to persuade, you want to write your best arguments.
• If you are trying to explain a process, you want to write the steps that should be followed. You
will probably need to group these into categories. If you have trouble grouping the steps into
categories, try using Beginning, Middle, and End.
• If you are trying to inform, you want to write the major categories into which your information
can be divided.
6. From each of your main ideas, draw three or four lines out into the page.
7. At the end of each of these lines, draw another circle or horizontal line or whatever you drew
in the center of the page.
8. In each shape or on each line, write the facts or information that support that main idea.

When you have finished, you have the basic structure for your essay and are ready to continue.

Hint: See Appendix D and E at the back of this handbook which shows a sample diagram and
sample outline created in Inspiration© software which is available on all the computers in the
Writing Center.

Outline
1. Begin your outline by writing your topic at the top of the page.
2. Next, write the Roman numerals I, II, and III, spread apart down the left side of the page.
3. Next to each Roman numeral, write the main ideas that you have about your topic, or the
main points that you want to make.
• If you are trying to persuade, you want to write your best arguments.
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 • If you are trying to explain a process, you want to write the steps that should be followed. You
will probably need to group these into categories. If you have trouble grouping the steps into
categories, try using Beginning, Middle, and End.
• If you are trying to inform, you want to write the major categories into which your information
can be divided.
4. Under each Roman numeral, write A, B, and C down the left side of the page.
5. Next to each letter, write the facts or information that support that main idea.

When you have finished, you have the basic structure for your essay and are ready to continue.

Hint: See Appendix E at the back of this handbook which shows a sample outline created in
Inspiration© software which is on all the computers in the Writing Center.

Inspiration© allows you to toggle between a diagram and an outline with a simple command.
You may then print your diagram or outline and use them as a guide as you begin your writing.

Part Four: Writing the Research Paper

Below is a format you should follow in writing your paper:

Organizing your paper

I. Introductory Paragraph: “TELL THEM WHAT YOU WANT TO TELL THEM!”

A. Introductory sentence(s) should be general or generic statements concerning the topic
about which you are writing. This sentence provides background information and
sets the stage for the rest of the paper..
B. Introduce the book: The author’s full name must be written, and the title of the book
(underlined) should be included in this sentence. A brief description of the story or
the author’s purpose in writing the book may be used here. Save the more detailed
descriptions of plot or characterization for body paragraphs.
C. The introductory paragraph should conclude with the thesis statement. This is a
statement of your controlling purpose in writing the paper. From your reading of the
book you have formed ideas, beliefs, and conclusions about the topic and your thesis
is a statement of those conclusions.
Caution: Your thesis statement and all writing in the paper should be in THIRD
person. English teachers do not want to see essays written in FIRST or SECOND
person. Take yourself out of your writing and keep it impersonal and objective.
Rather than stating your opinions or beliefs, state your information as FACTS.

II. Body Paragraphs: “TELL THEM!”

A. An essay will usually consist of at least three body paragraphs. Body paragraphs
serve the purpose of confirming or proving your thesis statement. From your reading
of the primary reference (the book on which you are reporting) and secondary
references (books or articles or sources other than the primary book) you will have
gleaned information which can support your thesis.
B. Each body paragraph should begin with a topic sentence which identifies the subject
of the paragraph. The topic sentence must contain a transitional a word or phrase.
TRANSITIONS connect the paragraph with the preceding paragraph(s) and show there is
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C. Supporting evidence in the body paragraph can include
1. a statement of fact from information you learned reading the book;
2. a direct quote (preceded by a “lead-in” or “signal phrase”; or
3. a paraphrase from the author’s writing.
Direct quotes from the author’s writing must be set off with quotation marks
and followed by an in-text citation. If you paraphrase an author’s words, quote
marks are not required, however you must use an in-text citation to give that
author credit for the words.
Exception: Quotes longer than four lines must be set up as BLOCK quotes.
Block quotes are indented one tab stop, are double-spaced like the remainder of
the paper, and are not set off with quotation marks. Dialogue (a person
speaking) used inside the block quote must be set off with single quotation
marks.

III. Concluding Paragraph: “TELL THEM WHAT YOU TOLD THEM!”

A. The opening sentence(s) of your concluding paragraph should be a brief restatement
or paraphrase of your thesis statement. This is a reminder to your reader of what you set
out to prove with your thesis.
B. Then summarize your supporting points, with reference to the author and book title..
C. Write a strong concluding statement. This sentence can be a reiteration of your
general statement from paragraph one, or it may be a statement of the message you
have gotten from the book.

The Correct Format for a Research Paper

Research papers should be printed on plain, white 8 ½-by-11-inch paper. If using a computer word
processing program, such as Microsoft Word ©, you will need to reset the margins to one-half inch
top, and one inch bottom and each side. (Note: Default margins in Word© may be greater than one
inch. Verify the margin settings before submitting your finished paper. Click on: File - Page Setup –
Margins tab) Note: If you use a word processor other than Microsoft Word© (such as Works©
or WordPerfect© or Mac OS X software) at a computer away from school, you must save your
document in Word© format on a floppy disc, CD, or flash drive at that computer. School
computers have only Word© installed and can not open files in other word processing programs.
Use only 12 point size type, NO BOLD FACE.

Research papers should be double-spaced throughout, including title, heading, quotes, and
works cited page. For samples of correctly formatted pages, see Appendix F at the end of this
booklet.

Title Page or Cover Page – Required Header

A research paper written in M.L.A. style has no separate title or cover page. Instead, unless otherwise
instructed, a heading should be placed at the top of the first page. Place your last name and the number
1 at the right margin, then at the left margin place, on a separate line for each piece of information:
student’s full name, instructor’s name, class name or number, date. See Appendix F for a sample first
page.

Title of Paper
The title of an English essay may have some reference or connection to the thesis statement. The title
should be centered below the heading. It should not be underlined, italicized, bold-faced, or put in
quotes, and must be set in a type size the same as the body of the paper. Research paper titles should

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follow the standard rules for the capitalization of titles. As a general rule, articles (a, an, the),
prepositions (in, of, to, etc.), coordinating conjunctions (but, for, nor, etc.), and the to infinitives (as in
How to Play Chess) are not capitalized.
DO NOT USE THE TITLE OF THE BOOK ON WHICH YOU ARE REPORTING AS YOUR
ESSAY TITLE. However, if you want to incorporate the book title in the title of your paper, you may
do so. The book title must be underlined in that instance.

Page Numbers – Required Header On Each Page

All pages, including the first, should be numbered. The number should be located ½ inch from the top
of the page and flush with the right margin. Include your last name and the number, but do not include
p., page, #, or any other mark or symbol. Place your name and the page number on all pages, including
the Works Cited page, in case a paper is disordered or a page is misplaced.

Works Cited Page

The works cited page should be placed at the end of the paper and numbered in sequence with the
preceding pages. The Works Cited Page must be its own separate page (that is, do not simply include
bibliographic citations immediately following the text of the paper). The page should be titled Works
Cited and this title should be centered at the top of the page. Do not underline, italicize, bold-face, or
put in quotes the page heading. Double-space the entire works cited page. Use the hanging indent
format. See Appendix A at the end of this booklet for a sample Works Cited page.

Pictures, Graphics, and Other Illustrations

Most papers written for an English class will not use any graphics. However, if they are to be used,
they must be relevant to the paper and have a valid reason for their use. The use of graphics in an
MLA-style paper requires a specific format.

All graphics should be placed as close as possible to the relevant portion of the text. Graphics should
be labeled, number, and captioned. Tables would be labeled Table, given a number (beginning with
1), and captioned above the table. The source should be listed immediately below the table. Pictures
should be labeled Fig. (for Figure), numbered, and captioned below the picture, followed immediately
by the source. Reproduction of musical scoring would be labeled Ex., numbered, and captioned below
the graphic.

For more specific information on the use of graphics in the research paper consult either the MLA
Handbook Sixth Edition, or your teacher. The MLA Handbook can be found as a reference book in the
Library or the Writing Center.

Corrections to the Paper

Before printing your paper, use spell check. If possible, make all corrections prior to printing the paper
for submission. However, if a brief correction is required, write it briefly and legibly in ink directly
above the lines involved and use a caret (^) to indicate where it goes. Do not use the margins or write
below the affected line. If substantial corrections are necessary, reprint the corrected pages.

Hint: Before submitting your paper, ask the Writing Center staff to review it with you. The
review process will include an analysis of writing style and format, proper use of citations, and
successful completion of your teacher’s assignment protocol.

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Specific Language and Writing Style in Research Papers
Research papers should be written in formal, standard English. Avoid the use of slang, colloquialisms,
or contractions. The paper should be written in the third person, and should not make use of the first or
second person. Your writing should not include any expressions of opinion.

Names of People
When referring to a person, use their entire name (or as much as is commonly used) the first time they
are discussed. After that, use either their first or last name, omitting all titles or honorifics (such as
Mr., Mrs. Dr., Sir, Lord, etc.) For example, the first reference to “Judge Harold Taylor” would be
followed by secondary references to merely “Taylor.” If there has been a substantial lapse between
references to an individual, it is acceptable to reuse their entire name to remind the reader of who they
are. Never refer to real people by first name. Fictional characters may be referred to by first name; use
the text of the story in which they are found as a guide.

Italics
Italics are generally not used in research papers; instead underline to create emphasis.

The Kinds of Paragraphs Necessary in a Research Paper

As with almost every kind of essay, research papers need introduction, body, and conclusion
paragraphs. How many of each kind is determined by the particular assignment. All body paragraphs
should have a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a conclusion sentence. Paragraphs should be
arranged in a logical sequence, and should reflect the order of the thesis statement. Whatever else the
conclusion contains, it is generally a good idea to restate the thesis.

Part Five: Incorporating Research into the Paper

Section A
The Works Cited Page
The following examples incorporate the format of the MLA Handbook Sixth Edition. A works
cited page serves as a reference to the reader of the sources used in writing the paper. The works cited
page contains all sources used in the paper. It does not contain sources not used in the paper,
whether or not the author of the paper read them in the research phase. The citations on the page
must be in proper citation format and should be carefully proofread for errors. The citations should be
arranged alphabetically by author name. However, if no author is shown, list citations alphabetically
by title of the article or essay. Do not include the articles A, An, and The in the alphabetizing. Do not
number or bullet-point citations on the works cited page for any reason. Double-space the entire works
cited page. Use the hanging indent format. For a sample works cited page see Appendix A or
Appendix F..

Format of Citations
Examples of citation formats are shown in the MLA Handbook Sixth Edition, reference copies of
which are available in the Writing Center, the LZHS Library, and in the English Department. Also, see
the writing guides on the Writing Center webpage http://www.lz95.org/lzhs/wcenter/ Internet
reference sources listed in Appendix C at the back of this booklet also contain links to citation
formatting pages. Additionally, the free web-based site Landmark’s Citation Machine provides an
interactive tool for citation formatting: <http://citationmachine.net/>.

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The Bibliography Page
A bibliography is a list of all works read or consulted during the research of the paper, whether or not
these sources were used in the actual writing. Bibliography pages are generally not required. If in
doubt about whether or not to include a bibliography, consult the teacher.

Citing Different Types of Sources on the Works Cited Page

The purpose of a citation is to enable the reader of a paper to find the sources used in the writing of a
research paper. There is a tremendous availability of sources, and a huge variety of different types of
sources. The following examples are not meant to be a comprehensive guide, but rather an
introduction to the MLA style of citations. For information on citing forms not listed here, or for
further explanation, see a teacher or the MLA Handbook Sixth Edition.

Be sure to use the following examples carefully as a guide in terms of necessary information, order,
punctuation, and spacing. Remember: for each citation indent all lines after the first. Also, remember
that these will all be double-spaced on the Works Cited page. Alphabetize Works Cited entries by
author name; if no author’s name is listed, alphabetize by name of the article or essay.

Citing Works in the Text of the Paper: See Part Five, Section B
The list of works cited at the end of the paper acknowledges the sources of information in a paper, but
the list does not provide sufficiently detailed and precise documentation. The reader needs to know
not only what works have been used, but also what pages or selections from each work have been used,
and where exactly the information can be found. This is done by a combination of signal phrases and
parenthetical citations in the text of the paper. Following each entry below, a corresponding
parenthetical (in-text) citation is shown, according to MLA Format.

CITING PRINTED SOURCES

Books
●A book by a single author
Stevens, Lawrence. The History of Space Flight. New York: Killgrew, 1984.

(Stevens 85)

●A book by two or three authors

Elberr, Michael, and Brian Wright. Many Recipes for Soup. Boston: Campbell and Smith,

1990.

(Elberr and Wright 414)

Welch, Gertrude, Marvin K. Mooney, and Joseph Myers. Briefly Interrupted: the Story Behind

Call Waiting. New York: Cambridge, 1997.

(Welch, Mooney, and Myers 340-346)

●For more than three authors list only the first and add et al
Remington, Johannes, et al. Psychological Approaches to Bicycling. Berkeley: U of California

Press, 1972.

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(Remington et al. 75)

•Book with no author List and alphabetize by the title of the book
Encyclopedia of Indiana. New York: Somerset, 1993.

For parenthetical citation, use a shortened version of the title instead of an author’s name.

(Encyclopedia 235)

●Editors
Kraft, Marcus, and Hector Boiardi, Eds. Cooking with Cheese: A Collection of Favorite

Recipes. San Francisco: Prudhomme, 1991.

(Kraft and Boiardi 126)

●Author with an Editor (reference to the author’s words)

Memphis, Diane. Wells in North Dakota. Ed. William DeCarlo. Los Angeles: Morrows, 1995.

(Memphis 204)

●Author with an Editor (reference to the editor’s words)

DeCarlo, William, ed. Wells in North Dakota. By Diane Memphis. Los Angeles: Morrows, 1995.

(DeCarlo 210)

●Two or More Works by the Same Author-arrange the two citations alphabetically by title. For the
first entry use the standard format; for the second substitute three dashes for the author’s name,
followed by a period. The hyphens must stand for exactly the same name (or names) in the
preceding entry.
Allton, Charles. Mercantile Trading Made Easy. New York: Doubleday, 1997.

(Allton, Mercantile 99)

---. Stocks and Robbers. New York: Doubleday, 1997.

(Allton, Stocks 87)

●An Edition Other than the First

Boyd, George Sullivan. Irish Poets and Artists: 1804-1900. 2nd Ed. New York: St. Marvin, 1996.

(Boyd 92)

●Multivolume work-if citing all volumes

Conner, Jason, ed. Writings by a Man. 2 vols. New York: Randolf, 1996.

(Conner 2:114)
●Multivolume work-if only citing one volume
Conner, Jason, ed. Writings by a Man. Vol. 1. New York: Randolf, 1996. 2 vols.

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(Conner 185)

Quotes from English textbook

●Poem in an English textbook
Angelou, Maya. “Woman Work.” Holt Elements of Literature Third Course. Ed. Kylene

Beers and Lee Odell. Austin: Holt, Rinehart and Winston. 2005. 409.

(Angelou 409)
Example of in-text citation when the author’s name is not in the text of the paper

(409) Example of in-text citation when the author’s name is in the text of the paper

●Play in an English textbook

Shakespeare, William. Romeo and Juliet. Holt Elements of Literature Third Course. Ed.

Kylene Beers and Lee Odell. Austin: Holt, Rinehart and Winston. 2005. 787-910.

(Shakespeare IV, ii, 35-38) Example of in-text citation when the author’s name is not in the text
(IV, ii, 35-38) Example of in-text citation when the author’s name is in the text of the paper:

Essays from anthologies (collections of literary pieces)

●One essay or chapter in an anthology
Lewis, R.W.B. “The ‘Trilogy.’” Graham Greene: A Collection of Critical Essays. Ed. Samuel

Hynes. Englewood, NJ: Prentice, 1973. 49-74.

(Lewis 52)

●Citing the Gale Literary Criticism Series (Print version)

Beach, Joseph Warren. “John Steinbeck: Art and Propaganda.” American Fiction: 1920-1940.

Macmillan, 1941. 327-47. Rpt. in Contemporary Literary Criticism. Ed. Roger Matuz.

Vol. 59. Detroit: Gale, 1990. 328-332.

(Beach 330)

Howe, Irving. William Faulkner: A Critical Study. 3rd ed. Chicago: University of Chicago Press,

1975. Rpt. in Contemporary Literary Criticism. Ed. Daniel G. Marowski and Roger

Matuz. Vol. 52. Detroit: Gale, 1989. 133-134.

(Howe 133)

Murray, Donald C. “James Baldwin’s ‘Sonny’s Blues’: Complicated and Simple.” Studies in

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 Short Fiction 14 (1977): 353-57. Rpt. in Short Story Criticism. Ed. David Segal. Vol. 10.

Detroit: Gale, 1992. 15-17.

(Murray 16)

●Two or more essays or chapters by different authors in a collection: cross reference

[When using more than one essay from a collection, give the whole book a citation under the
editor’s name. Give each essay a citation under its author’s name and arrange all of the entries
alphabetically in the full Works Cited List.]

Addison, Kay. “Greene’s Catholicism.” Hynes 112-145.

(Addison 113)

Hynes, Samuel, ed. Graham Greene: A Collection of Critical Essays. Englewood, NJ: Prentice,

1973.

(Hynes 55n)
[55n means that Hynes wrote a note or footnote, probably at the bottom of page 55. You are
referring to his words in the note.]

Lewis, R.W.B. “The ‘Trilogy.’” Hynes 49-74.

(Lewis 54)

Poem or short story from anthologies (collections of literary pieces

Burns, Robert. “Red, Red Rose.” 100 Best-Loved Poems. Ed. Philip Smith. New York: Dover,

1995. 26.

(Burns)

Kincaid, Jamaica. “Girl.” The Vintage Book of Contemporary American Short Stories. Ed.

Tobias Wolff. New York: Vintage, 1994. 306-307.

(Kincaid)

Whitman, Walt. “I Sing the Body Electric.” Collected Poems. New York: Dover, 1991. 12-

19.

(Whitman)

Carter, Angela. The Tiger’s Bride.” Burning Your Boats: The Collected Stories. New York:

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(Carter)

Other printed sources

●Corporate author
American Council on Linguistics. Annual Report, 1980. Boston: American Council on Ling.,

1980.

(American Council 66)

●Anonymous book
A Dictionary of Malapropisms. New York: Grove, 1972.

(Dictionary 78-79)

●Reprint in a collection
Ruiz, Jesse. “John Fowles and Chaucer.” Allegheny Studies 30(1980): 72-94. Rpt. in Modern

Fiction: Selected Views. Ed. Elizabeth Murry. Pittsburgh: Duquesne UP, 1983. 110-43.

(Ruiz 117)

●Foreword, introduction, preface (prologue) or afterword (epilogue)

Murphy, Gibson. Foreword. The Business of Business: Strategies for a Changing Economy in

the New Millennium. By Shane Worfram. San Francisco: Pacific Coast, 1992. ii-xi.

(Murphy viii)

Mason, David. Introduction. Moby-Dick. By Herman Melville. New York: Macmillan, 1934. v-

xvii.

(Mason vi)

●Book in a series
Kaspar, Janet. Building a Screened-in Porch. The Handywoman’s Guide to Remodeling Ser.

Boulder: Time Life, 1983.

(Kaspar 235)

●Sacred text: While the MLA Handbook Sixth Edition directly addresses the matter of quoting
from the Bible (the sacred book of Christianity and of Judaism), it does not provide information on
quoting from the Koran (or Quran), the sacred book of Islam. Once it is clear which edition or
version of the Bible (or other sacred text) you are using, which you can establish within the text of
your paper or in the Works Cited page, parenthetical documentation of quoted language from the

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scriptures needs to include the book, chapter, and verse. See MLA Handbook Sixth Edition, section
6.4.8 for citation guidelines and section 7.7.1 for abbreviations of books of the Old Testament and
New Testament.

The Holy Bible. Revised Standard Version. New York: New American Library, 1962.

(1 Cor. 14.15) [1st book of Paul’s epistle to the Corinthians, chapter 14, verse 15]

The New Jerusalem Bible. Henry Wansbrough, gen. ed. New York: Doubleday, 1985.

Ezek. 1.5-10 [The book of Ezekiel, chapter 1, verses 5-10]

Holy Qur’an. Trans. M.H. Shakir. Elmhurst, NY: Tahrike Tarsile Qur’an, n.d.
[Qur’an is one variation in the spelling of the Koran. Tahrike Tarsile Qur’an is a not-for-
profit organization which publishes the Koran and other Islamic literature. “n.d.” indicates
that no date of publication is known.]

(al-Baqarah 2:177.4) [The second “sura” or section of the Koran, “ayah” or verses 177]

●Pamphlet
United States Dept. of the Interior. Natl. Park Service. National Design Competition for an

Indian Memorial: Little Bighorn Battlefield National Monument. Washington: GPO,

1996.

(United 45)

Reference Book
●Dictionary
“Joust.” Def. 4c. The New US Dictionary. 3rd ed. 1998.

(“Joust”)

●Encyclopedia - citations for articles in well-known encyclopedias are abbreviated: just list the
author of the article if there is one, the title of the article in quotes, the title of the reference work,
the edition number, if there is one, and the year of publication. If a reference work is not well-
known, provide full publication information.
“Australia.” Encyclopedia Britannica. 1974.

(“Australia”)

Cooke, Clay. “Truman, Harry.” Collier’s Encyclopedia, 56th ed. 1979.

(Cooke)

●When using a reference book that is less well known and/or seldom appears in new editions, give a
more detailed description of the publication.
Zerko, Mavis. “Morning Songs.” Dictionary of Australian Songbirds. Ed. Harold Cypher. New

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(Zerko 38)

Periodicals
●Article in a monthly magazine
Carp, Bass. “The Tide of History.” History Monthly Jun. 1984: 31+.
[Use “+” to indicate non-consecutive pages; use a dash to indicate consecutive pages.]

(Carp 39)

●Article in a professional journal

[If the journal uses continuous pagination]:
Lefcowitz, Barbara A. “Blake and the Natural World.” PMLA 89 (1974): 121-31.

(Lefcowitz 125)

[If the journal pages each issue separately]:

Kelly, Janice P. “Submarine Claustrophobia.” Today’s Navy 14.4 (1979): 14-26.

(Kelly 21)

●Article in a weekly magazine

Lotze, Linda. “Effective High School Discipline.” Newsweek 13 Jan. 1972: 23-26.

(Lotze 34)

●Article in a daily newspaper

Norville, Donald. “Miners Rescued after Nine Day Effort.” Chicago Tribune 29 July 2002:

A1+.
[A1 is the section and page number in that section, the + indicates nonconsecutive pages.]

(Norville)

●Editorial in a newspaper
“School Crime and Punishment.” Editorial. Daily Herald 14 Mar. 1999: C8.

(Daily Herald)

●Letter to the editor

Silverman, Bradley. Letter. Lake Zurich Courier 5 Feb. 2002: B6.

(Silverman)

●Book or film review

Sullivan, Jared. “A Brief Moment of Glory.” Rev. of Tales from the First World War: A

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 Perspective in Cavalry, by John Howser and Jackson Merritt. Washington Post Book

World 22 Oct. 1995: 6.

(Sullivan)

●Published interview
Jacobi, Sir Derek. Interview. New York Times 18 Feb. 1998, late ed.: A17.

(Jacobi)

Other printed sources

●Published letter
Franklin, Arlette. “To Sebastian Franklin.” 6 Apr. 1944. Letter 27 in Wartime Correspondence.

Ed. Jacob Malone. 3 vols. New York: Macmillan, 1962. 3: 47-8.

(Franklin 3:47)

●Work of art
Wagner, Carolyn. A Study in Inks. Chicago Museum of Contemporary Art.

(Wagner)

●Musical composition
Flynn, Patrick. Movement in C Flat.
(Flynn)

Simon, Paul. “Graceland.” Graceland. Warner Bros., 1986.

(Simon)

Non-printed sources
●Recorded interview
Harris, Franco. “All Things Considered.” With Peter Zimm. Sports Today 13 Oct. 1988: 47-9.

(Harris 48)

●Personal interview
Warren, Bonnie. Personal Interview. 18 May 2002.

(Warren)

●Radio or television interview

Spears, Brittany. Interview. The Bob Collins Show. WGN, Chicago. 19 Sep. 1999.

(Spears)

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●Radio or television program: List relevant information in this order: title of program, the writer
(By), the director (Dir.), narrator (Narr.), producer (Prod.), or main actors (Perf.) and if relevant,
the series (neither underlined nor in quotes), the network, the local station and the city of local
broadcast, and date of broadcast.
“Ten Little Indians.” By Bob Bunny. Dir. George Brown. Prod. Alfred Dickinson. Perf. Peter

Falk and George Hamilton. Columbo. CBS. WTRF, Wheeling. 6 Oct. 1974.

(“Ten”)

(These citations will vary. If you’re referring to the work of one of the actors, performers, or writers,
put his or her name first and go from there.)

●Movie or Film
When citing a movie at the time when it is in release in theaters:
Indiana Smith and the Locked Closet. Dir. Kathryn Denton. Perf. Paul Davidson and Kathleen

Brooks. Miramax, 2000.

(Indiana Smith)

When citing a film that is on videocassette or DVD:

Stormy Thursday. Dir. Frank Lucci. Perf. Douglas Berry and Hal Gleason. 1987. Videocassette.

Embassy, 1993.
[1987 is the date the movie was released to theaters; 1993 is the date it was released on the video
you are using. Embassy is the company that released the video.]

(Stormy Thursday)

●Documentary on video
“Lindbergh: The Evidence Revealed.” American Justice. Host Bill Curtis. 1994. Videocassette.

Home

Video, 1998.
[1994 is the date the program was broadcast; 1998 is the date the video was released.]

(“Lindbergh”)

●Sound recording (CD, audiocassette, LP)

Snider, Todd. Songs for Me. Warner Bros., 1992.

[This is a basic citation for the full CD with the performer’s name first. If you want to
emphasize the work of a songwriter, start with his or her name and list the singer’s name after the
title as Perf. Todd Snider.]

(Snider)

●Music Video

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Perry, Joanna. “Dancing on Mars.” Songs for the Downtrodden. Columbia, 1999. Music video.

Dir. Carol Frobisher. VH1. 18 Nov. 2001.

(Perry)

●Advertisements
Obsession for Men. Advertisement. Details Apr. 1998: 27.

(Obsession)

Purina Cat Chow. Advertisement. CNN. 14 Sept. 1999.

(Purina)

●Missing Information

If information is missing from your source you should use appropriate abbreviations in place of
the missing items:

no date: n.d.
no pagination: n. pag.
no place of publication: n.p.
no publisher: n.p.

CITING ELECTRONIC SOURCES

Citing electronic sources can be complicated and confusing, particularly because the field
continues to change so rapidly. The sample entries below cover most of the basic sources you
might consult. If you need to write a citation for a gopher site, an ftp site, or a telnet site,
consult the M.L.A. Sixth Edition or your instructor for help.

●Article from an online encyclopedia

1. name of author [if available] (last name first)
2. title of article/entry, in quotation marks [if available]
3. title of encyclopedia, underlined
4. medium (such as CD-ROM or internet address)
5. publication information

Gregg, Larry. “Agincourt.” Microsoft Encarta. CD-ROM. Boston: Microsoft, 1999-2000.

(Gregg)

Britannica Online. Vers. 98.2 Apr. 1998 Encyclopedia Britannica 8 May 1998 <http://www.eb.com>.

(Britannica)

●Full-text article on a newspaper or journal database such as InfoTrac, SIRS, ProQuest, or

EBSCO Host

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1. name of author (last name first)
2. title of article, in quotation marks
3. title of magazine, underlined
4. publication information for the original article, including original publication date and
pagination
5. name of database (underlined)
6. name of the subscription service
7. library that subscribes to the service
8 . date of access (the date you found the info)

[Some instructors may want you to provide the article number, which can usually be found at the end
of the article—check with your instructor. Some instructors may want you to provide the URL of the
service's home page. If so, add it in angle brackets after the date of access.]

Jones, Mallory. “Rite of Passage.” Highlander News 12 April 1995: 16-. Student Resource

Center – College Edition – Expanded. InfoTrac. WVNCC Library, New Martinsville,

WV. 12 July 1998.

(Jones)

[If the database provides only the starting page of the article's original print publication, write the first
page followed by a hyphen, a space, and a period. Since InfoTrac usually provides information like
16(2), you write 16- .]

Keane, Rob. “On the Continent.” Leeds Journal October 2000: 17-19. SIRS Knowledge Source.

SIRS. WVNCC Library, New Martinsville, WV. 12 Dec. 2000.

(Keane)

[Remember that if you find a reference to or citation for an article on a database but eventually get
the full article itself through interlibrary loan, your citation will not be for an electronic source but
rather for a traditional source.]

McCarthy, Michael. “.” The Independent 23 Apr 2005. ProQuest. Wesner. 10 May 2005

<http://proquest.umi.com/pqdweb? did=826668001@sid=1&Fmt-3&clientid-

19119&RWT-309&VName-PQD>.

(McCarthy)

●Electronic Database such as Magill Online

Canfield, Rosemary M. “To Kill a Mockingbird.” Identities and Issues in Literature 1997

MagillonLine. Wesner Library. 19 Oct 2004 <http://web3.epnet.com>.

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(Canfield)

●Citing the Gale Literary Criticism Series – Infotrac’s Contemporary Authors and Contemporary
Literary Criticism Select subscription databases
Watkins, Floyd C. “Death and the Mountains in The Optimist’s Daughter.” Essays in Literature

15 (1988): 77-85. Contemporary Literary Criticism Select. Gale Group. Suffolk U.

Sawyer Lib., Boston 3 Mar. 2002 <http://infotrac.galegroup.com>.

(Watkins)

●Website (basic)
1. name of author if available. If no author is listed, alphabetize by title of the page.
2. Title of work (could be the webpage within a larger website), in quotation marks
3. Title of full website (if applicable), underlined
4. date of electronic publication
4. date of access (the date you found and printed the information)
5. full URL, in angle brackets

Stein, Mark. “Poborsky Leaves Manchester United.” Official Manchester United Home Page. 26

June 1998. <http://www.sky.co.uk/sports/manu>.

(Stein)

●Website with original publication date included

Insert original publication date just before the date of access:

Collina, Pierre. "Cracking Down on Cheats." International Football. 22 Dec. 1998. 31 Aug.

2002 <http://www.ifonline.com/cheats>.

(Collina)

●Website: revised or updated

Insert revision/update date just before the date of access:

Cassidy, Leon. “Babylon 5 Latest.” SciFi Online. Oct. 1999. 6 Feb. 2000

<http://www.alienfun.com/~tryan/bab5.html>.

(Cassidy)

●Website with chapters, each chapter with its own URL (e.g. Crime Library)

1. name of author
2. title of chapter
3. title of story or case

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4. title of website
5. date of access
6. URL for the chapter you’re citing

Geringer, Joseph. “Mr. & Mrs. Broderick.” Betty Broderick: Divorce…Desperation…Death.

Crime Library. 6 Oct. 2003.

<http://www.crimelibrary.com/notorious_murders/family/Broderick/

2.html?sect+12>.

(Geringer, "Mr. & Mrs. Broderick")

[For the parenthetical citation, you need both the author and the chapter title if you cite more than one
chapter in your paper.]

●Personal home page

Davidson, Lorene. Home page. 28 Jan. 1996. 18 June 2000

<http://www.ut.edu/ldavidson/index html>.

(Davidson)

●Website with a sponsoring organization

Anderson, Jim. "Bow Ties and Argyle Socks." Vintage Fashion. 2001. Fashion Society of New

England. 28 Feb. 2002 <http://www.vf.com>.

(Anderson)

●Academic department home page

Liberal Arts and Transfer Studies. Dept. home page. Northern Community College. 4 Sept. 2002.

<http://www.ncc.edu/lats>.

(Liberal Arts)

●Academic course home page

Logan, Steve. English 101. Course home page. Aug. 2002-May 2003. Dept. of English, U of

Tarrytown. 4 Dec. 2002. <http://www.ut.edu/ slogan/eng101.html>.

(Logan)

●Website with a very long (almost impossible to transcribe) URL

You may have gone to a webpage and searched within it only to reach a page on your subject (inside
the main page) that you used for your paper. Unfortunately, the page you found has an impossibly long

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or unsightly URL. In this case, cite the main page's search page and trust your reader to plug in a
keyword and find your page. (This does not mean that you cite a search engine such as Google. Don't
ever do that.)

Brennan, Mac. "Led Zeppelin's Blues Roots." Classic Rock Origins. 2001. American Association

for Rock History. 31 May 2003. <http://www.classicrock.com/search>.

(Brennan)

●Website with frames

If you go to a site that has frames and follow a path to the page you want to cite, you'll find that the
page you want to cite does not have its own URL. So you must cite the original page and then indicate
the path you followed (the links you clicked) to reach your page:

Soxx, Red, Jr. "Napoleon Solo and UNCLE." Pop Culture TV. 2002. Pop Culture Society of

Ohio. 31 May 2003. <http://www.popculturetv.com>. Path: Spies; Sixties; UNCLE.

(Soxx)

●Online magazine or journal article

1. name of author
2. title of article, in quotation marks
3. title of journal/periodical, italicized or underlines
4. volume and date of publication
5. number or range of pages or paragraphs (if provided)
6. date of access
7. URL, in angle brackets

Tanner, Chris. “The Return of the Western.” Internet Chat Trends 13 (Oct. 1999): 37 pars. 8

Aug. 2000. <http://www.uken.edu/ddron/oct99.html>.

(Tanner)

●Online newspaper article

Achers, Damon. "Crime on the Rise." Newark Gazette. 5 May 2002. 20 June 2002.

<http://www.newarkgazette.com/2002/articles/ 2002May5.html>.

(Achers)

●Synchronous Communication Site (MOO, MUD, IRC)

1. name of speaker
2. description of event (personal interview, online lecture)
3. date of event
4. forum for event

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5. date of access
6. electronic address, in angle brackets

Harris, Lee. Online lecture. 14 Nov. 2000. DU. 16 Nov. 2000 <telnet://moo.du.org>.

(Harris)

●Email
1. name of author
2. subject line of posting, in quotation marks
3. description of message that includes recipient
4. date of communication

Whitta, Gary. "Re: Total Football." Email to the author. 2 Feb. 1996.

(Whitta)

●Newsgroup
1. name of author
2. subject line of post, in quotation marks
3. online posting
4. date of post
5. date of access
6. name of newsgroup, in angle brackets

Blaney, Gary. "Rachel's Hair." Online posting. 25 Sept. 1996. 27 Sept. 1996 news:alt.tv.friends.

(Blaney)

●Listserv
Listserv citations can be confusing. If you belong to a list, you may need to incorporate some elements
of an email citation. If you find the post online, perhaps from a website, you can follow the guidelines
below. In any case, ask for help if you need it.

1. name of author
2. subject line of post, in quotation marks
3. online posting
4. date of post
5. name of forum or list
6. date of access
7. online address of the list, in angle brackets

Pierrot, Luc. "Henry V in the Park." Online posting. 28 June 2001. THEATRE-L. 3 July 2001

<http://www.bowiestate.edu/inart/theatre.htm>.

(Pierrot)

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Determining What Needs to Be Cited in the Research Paper

Plagiarism: Plagiarism is a form of cheating which is the false assumption of authorship, the
wrongful act of taking the product of another person’s mind, and presenting it as one’s own.
Plagiarism is presenting another person’s ideas or expressions as original thoughts, or without
acknowledging the source. While much plagiarism is unintentional, it can still result in a failing grade
for the paper, and eds to be very careful, and give proper credit whenever another person’s thoughts,
ideas, information, or words are used. Even paraphrasing, putting something into one’s own words,
does not eliminate the need to give credit.

Information that is common knowledge, and words or phrases (such as sayings) that are in common
usage (e.g. “a stitch in time saves nine”) need not be cited.

Section B: Citing Works in the Text of the Paper

Integrating Sources of Research within paragraphs of the essay

The list of works cited at the end of the paper acknowledges the sources of information in a paper, but
the list does not provide sufficiently detailed and precise documentation. The reader needs to know not
only that works have been used, but also what pages or selections from each work have been used, and
where exactly the information can be found; this is done by using a combination of signal phrases and
parenthetic citations in the rest of the paper. These references should point clearly to the specific
source used, and identify the location of the information as specifically as possible.

Research which you integrate into the paragraphs of the essay supports and strengthens the thesis of
your paper. The essay writer will incorporate the research with direct quotations from the author or
with “paraphrased” sentences. “Paraphrasing” means a restatement of speech or writing that retains
the basic meaning while changing the words. A paraphrase often clarifies the original statement by
putting it into words that are more easily understood.

Using Direct Quotes in the Research Paper

Quotations are used to support or strengthen or prove a statement in a body paragraph. Only use
quotes which “fit” the topic you are writing about. If the quote is not appropriate to the explanation
and description of your thesis statement, do not use it. Think of yourself as a lawyer arguing a case in
court. You would provide only that evidence which would influence a jury or judge. In the same way,
in your writing your quote is considered “evidence”. Don’t present it if it has nothing to do with the
points you are trying to prove in your paper. Don’t use quotes simply because your teacher tells you to
do so.

Use a direct quote when the author of a source has stated something in such a way that to paraphrase
would be to lose or diminish or confuse the original meaning or intent. One might also use a direct
quote when something is stated in a particularly interesting or effective way.
When using a direct quote, be sure to reproduce exactly the original passage, including unusual
spelling, grammar, and punctuation. If changes or an explanation need to be made for the sake of
clarity, use brackets [ ] to indicate the change. Examples below are single spaced for brevity.

Example: When asked why he refused to report to the Army, Robert shouted “Because I’m a C.O.
[conscientious objector] you fool” (42).

Omissions of original text, or a break in the quote, would be indicated with an ellipsis (…).

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Punctuation Note: The parenthetical citation for the direct quote comes after the end quotation marks
but before the end punctuation, unless a specific punctuation mark (such as an exclamation mark or a
question mark) is part of the quote. In that case, end your sentence with a period after the parenthetical
citation.

Example: Dorothea Brooks responds to her sister, “What a wonderful little almanac you are, Celia!” (7).

For quotes of four lines or longer, use the block form. Offset the entire quote one inch (two tabs), but
continue to double space. The text remains flush with the right margin. Unless there is dialogue in the
block quote, do not use quote marks. If there is dialogue (someone speaking) in the quotation, set off
the dialogue with single quote marks. You should still use a parenthetical citation followed by a period.

You may paraphrase (put the author’s words into your own words), however you must still give the
author credit for the work in a parenthetical citation.

Integrating Sources within Paragraphs

If a prose quotation runs no more than four lines and requires no special emphasis, put it in quotation
marks and incorporate it in the text.
Once you’ve carefully selected the quotations that you want to use, your next job is to weave those
quotations into your text. The words that precede and follow a quotation are just as
important as the quotation itself. The examples of quotations below are taken from To Kill a
Mockingbird by Harper Lee. Entries are single spaced for the sake of brevity.

Punctuation Note:
A quotation that is integral to the sentence structure is generally preceded by no punctuation.
The courtroom drama unfolded as “Calpurnia was making her way up the middle aisle, walking straight
toward Atticus” (Lee 206).
If a verb of saying (says, exclaims, writes) introduces the quote, the quote is preceded by a comma.
Harper Lee wrote, “Miss Maudie hated her house: time spent indoors was time wasted” (42).
If the quotation is formally introduced, it is preceded by a colon.
The children’s discomfort at being there was relieved as Zeebo, the garbage collector, welcomed them:
“’Mister Jem,’ he said, ‘we’re mighty glad to have you all here’” (Lee 119).

PROVIDE A CONTEXT FOR EACH QUOTATION. Do not rely on quotations to tell your story
for you. It is your responsibility to provide your reader with a context for the quotation. The context
should set the basic scene for when, possibly where, and under what circumstances the quotation was
spoken or written. The context should answer the question: Why did this writer use this quotation at
this place in his/her essay?

Rather than merely writing

Scout says “I never understood her preoccupation with heredity” (Lee 130),

it is preferable and more interesting to write:

When Scout is curious about Aunt Alexandra’s unusual quirks she wonders ”I never understood her
preoccupation with heredity’” (Lee 130).

WHENEVER YOU TAKE WORDS DIRECTLY FROM ANOTHER SOURCE, YOU USE

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QUOTATIONS AND CITATIONS. A citation goes after the last quote mark. If a prose quotation
runs no more than four lines and requires no special emphasis you incorporate it into the text you are
writing. For more details about particular citation formats, see the English Department Writing
Handbook, either the print version or online at <http://www.lz95.org/lzhs/wcenter/handbook.pdf>

Example: Throughout the novel Atticus is portrayed as an example of kindness and compassion.
In her essay Laurie Champion recounts the talk Atticus has with Jem: “’…but remember that it’s a sin to
kill a mockingbird...Mockingbirds don’t do one thing but make music for us to enjoy’…Throughout the
novel, mockingbirds symbolize innocent people” (Champion). Both Jem and Scout learn to apply
compassion and kindness when making judgments.

ATTRIBUTE EACH QUOTATION TO ITS SOURCE. Even if you place an internal (parenthetical)
citation after a quotation (e.g. Lee 130) you must still attribute the quotation within the text. What is
attribution? Simply tell your reader who is speaking. A good rule of thumb is this: Try reading your text
aloud. Could your reader determine without looking at your paper where your quotations begin? If not,
your paper probably contains “hanging quotations” which leave your reader hanging because they lack
attribution.

Avoid the attribution rut! There are many ways to attribute quotes besides the common “he/she said”
construction. Here are a few alternative verbs:
acknowledges, adds, admits, agrees, announces, argues, asserts, believes, claims, comments,
compares, complains, confirms, contends, criticizes, declares, defines, denies, disputes,
emphasizes, estimates, exclaims, expresses, explains, endorses, grants, illustrates, implies, insists,
notes, observes, opines. opposes, perceives, points out, predicts, proclaims, proposes, questions,
reasons, recounts, refutes, rejects, remarks, replies, reports, responds, retorts, sees, states,
suggests, thinks, writes.
Rather than writing
Miss Maudie said “’…Atticus Finch was the deadest shot in Maycomb County…’” (Lee 98).
it is more interesting and descriptive to write:
When the children expressed surprise at how well Atticus handled a gun, Miss Maudie remarked on their
father’s skill: “’Forgot to tell you the other day that besides playing the Jew’s Harp, Atticus Finch was
the deadest shot in Maycomb County in his time’” (Lee 98).

For further examples in the use of quotes in an actual paper, see Appendix F.

YOU NEED NOT ALWAYS REPRODUCE COMPLETE SENTENCES. SOMETIMES YOU

MAY WANT TO QUOTE JUST A WORD OR PHRASE AS PART OF YOUR SENTENCE.

Atticus exemplifies fairness as he demonstrates that people should be found “innocent or guilty on the
facts and not on their skin color” (Osborn 100).

IF YOU PARAPHRASE (PUT THE WORDS INTO YOUR OWN WORDS), YOU DO NOT
USE QUOTES BUT YOU DO USE A CITATION. USE PARAPHRASED MATERIAL OR A
QUOTATION (1) TO REITERATE THE TOPIC, (2) TO SUPPORT YOUR TOPIC
SENTENCE, (3) TO PROVIDE AN EXAMPLE OF ONE OF YOUR SUPPORTS, OR (4) TO
SUMMARIZE YOUR PARAGRAPH.

He is a prototype lawyer because he exemplifies fairness in not only the courtroom, but in his everyday
life as well. Atticus believes that the jury should find a defendant innocent or guilty based upon the facts
presented in the case and not on the basis of the color of the defendant’s skin (Osborn 100).

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YOU CAN ALSO REWRITE THIS PARAPHRASE AS FOLLOWS. NOTE THAT
ONLY A PAGE NUMBER IN SHOWN IN THE PARENTHETICAL CITATION IF THE
AUTHOR’S NAME IS MENTIONED IN THE SIGNAL PHRASE OR IF THE QUOTE
IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWS ANOTHER CITATION FROM OSBORN.

Osborn believes that Atticus shows his sense of fairness by believing that the jury should find a
defendant innocent or guilty based upon the testimony rather than on the color of the defendant’s skin
(100).

YOU MAY PUT A QUOTATION AT THE BEGINNING, MIDDLE, OR END OF YOUR

SENTENCE OR, FOR THE SAKE OF VARIETY OR BETTER STYLE, DIVIDE IT BY
YOUR OWN WORDS.

Osborn writes of Atticus, the lawyer in To Kill A Mockingbird, “Atticus thinks no matter who is being
judged by the court, the court should find him innocent or guilty on the facts and not on their skin
color” (Osborn 100). This philosophy extends to his everyday life as well.

Or

“Atticus thinks no matter who is being judged by the court” Osborn writes of To Kill A Mockingbird, “the
court should find him innocent or guilty on the facts and not on their skin color” (Osborn 100).

DO NOT LEAVE A QUOTE FREE STANDING. IN OTHER WORDS, DO NOT HAVE A

QUOTE AS THE FREE STANDING SENTENCE WITHOUT THE LEAD IN. DO NOT END A
PARAGRAPH WITH A QUOTE.

When leading into a quote with a “saying” verb, use a comma after the verb.

Osborn states, “Atticus thinks no matter who is being judged by the court, the court should find him
innocent or guilty on the facts and not on their skin color” (100).

Do not use a comma after the word “that.”

Osborn states that “Atticus thinks no matter who is being judged by the court, the court should find him
innocent or guilty on the facts and not on their skin color” (100).

Eliminate words in a quotation using an ellipsis (three spaced dots).

Original:
Lee states, “According to Miss Stephanie Crawford, however, Atticus was leaving the post office when
Mr. Ewell approached him, cursed him, spat on him, and threatened to kill him. Miss Stephanie (who, by
the time she had told it twice was there and had seen it all – passing by from the Jitney Jungle, she was)
– Miss Stephanie said that Atticus didn’t bat an eye, just took out his handkerchief and wiped his face
and stood there and let Mr. Ewell call him names wild horses could not bring her to repeat” (217).

With ellipsis:
Lee states, “According to Miss Stephanie Crawford, however, Atticus was leaving the post office when
Mr. Ewell approached him, cursed him, spat on him, and threatened to kill him . . . Atticus didn’t bat an
eye, just took out his handkerchief and wiped his face and stood there . . .” (217).

Add words and an explanation using brackets [ ].

“All the way to the house, Helen said, she heard a soft voice [Ewell’s] behind her, crooning foul words”
(Lee 249).

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A QUOTE WITHIN A QUOTE IS USED WHEN YOU ARE QUOTING AN AUTHOR AND
ONE OF THE CHARACTERS IS SPEAKING.
As Scout explains to Atticus, “ ‘ Well, it’d be sort of like shootin’ a mockingbird, wouldn’t it ? ’ ”

(Lee 276).

IF YOUR QUOTE IS LONGER THAN FOUR LINES, USE A BLOCK QUOTE. SET OFF
THE QUOTE FROM YOUR TEXT BY BEGINNING A NEW LINE, INDENTING ONE INCH
(TWO TAB STOPS) DOUBLE SPACE THE QUOTED MATERIAL AND JUSTIFY THE
QUOTED MATERIAL TO THE LEFT. DO NOT ADJUST THE RIGHT MARGIN. DO NOT
ENCLOSE THE BLOCK QUOTE IN QUOTATION MARKS. HOWEVER, IF YOUR BLOCK
QUOTE INCLUDES A CHARACTER SPEAKING, SET OFF THE CHARACTER’S SPEECH
WITH SINGLE QUOTE MARKS. A COLON GENERALLY INTRODUCES A QUOTATION
DISPLAYED IN THIS WAY, THOUGH SOMETIMES THE CONTEXT MAY REQUIRE A
DIFFERENT MARK OF PUNCTUATION OR NONE AT ALL. IF YOU QUOTE ONLY A
SINGLE PARAGRAPH OR PART OF ONE, DO NOT INDENT THE FIRST LINE MORE
THAN THE REST. A PARENTHETICAL REFERENCE TO A PROSE QUOTATION SET
OFF FROM THE TEXT FOLLOWS THE LAST LINE OF THE QUOTATION.

As Scout walks Boo back to his house, she explains how he has taken care of her and Jem:

Neighbors bring food with death and flowers with sickness and little things in between. Boo was

our neighbor. He gave us two soap dolls, a broken watch and chain, a pair of good luck pennies,

and our lives. But neighbors give in return. We never put back into the tree what we took out of it;

we had given him nothing, and it made me sad (Lee 278).

IF YOU NEED TO QUOTE TWO OR MORE PARAGRAPHS, INDENT THE FIRST LINE OF
EACH PARAGRAPH AN ADDITIONAL QUARTER INCH (CLICK THE SPACE BAR
THREE TIMES). IF THE FIRST SENTENCE QUOTED DOES NOT BEGIN A PARAGRAPH
IN THE SOURCE, HOWEVER, DO NOT INDENT IT THE ADDITIONAL AMOUNT.
INDENT ONLY THE FIRST LINES OF THE SUCCESSIVE PARAGRAPHS.

In To Kill a Mockingbird Harper Lee writes about Aunt Alexandra’s unusual quirks:

I never understood her preoccupation with heredity. Somewhere, I had received the impression

that Fine Folks were people who did the best they could with the sense they had, but Aunt

Alexandra was of the opinion, obliquely expressed, that the longer a family had been squatting on

one patch of land the finer it was…

Aunt Alexandra’s theory had something behind it, though. Maycomb was an ancient town. It was

twenty miles east of Finch’s Landing, awkwardly inland for such an old town. But Maycomb would have

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 been closer to the river had it not been for the nimble-wittedness of one Sinkfield, who in the dawn of

history operated an inn where two pig trails met, the only tavern in the territory (Lee 130).

EXPLAIN THE SIGNIFICANCE OF THE QUOTATION.

Once you’re inserted your quotation, along with its context and attribution, don’t stop! Your reader
still needs your assessment of why the quotation holds significance for our paper. Using the quote
above about Atticus Finch exemplifying fairness in the courtroom, you might continue with the
explanation:

In this respect, Atticus is providing his children with good example and is teaching them to look beyond the

surface in judging all persons.

The Format for Signal Phrases and Parenthetical Citations

Signal phrases are words or phrases, in the text of the paper, that indicate to the reader that someone
else’s work is being used. The signal phrase provides a smooth lead-in or introduction to the quotation
of an author’s work. The use of signal phrases containing the name of the author of the citation, makes
the parenthetical citation shorter. Parenthetical citations should not repeat information given in a
signal phrase. Parenthetic citations should be as brief and as few as clarity and accuracy permit. Give
only the information needed to identify a source, and do not add a parenthetical reference
unnecessarily.

While there is no specific way to use a signal phrase, the purpose of such a phrase is to indicate the
relevant information in the text either immediately before or after the information. Be sure to clearly
indicate the specific source so that it might be identified in the works cited page. Any necessary
information not included in the signal phrase should be included parenthetically after the information.

Ex: According to Smith, the average Bolivian farmer earns the equivalent of $50 US per year

(54).

-refers to-
Smith, John F. A Guide to Bolivian Agriculture: 1948-2000. Detroit: Gale, 2001.

A parenthetical citation needs enough information to specifically identify the source from the Works
Cited page and the location, in that source, of the specific information to which the paper is referring.
Generally, the citation would include the first item on the Works Cited citation and a page number if
the source were a book. If the first item on the Works Cited entry is inadequate to identify the source,
one may use as much information from the entry to identify it.

For examples, see Appendix F

Quoting Poetry
When quoting poetry, special rules apply. If quoting only a few lines of the poem, reproduce them
within the text, using quotation marks. If several lines are to be used, indicate the different lines with a
slash (/) and a space on each side.

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When reproducing more than three lines, or when wishing to emphasize specific lines, begin the quote
on the next line, and set the left edge off by two tabs (one inch). NO quotation marks are necessary,
and the parenthetical citation follows the end punctuation.

When quoting poetry, be sure to reproduce original spelling, punctuation, and format as closely as
possible.

Finding Information on Other Aspects of Writing a Good Research Paper

Writing a good research paper can be a difficult process, but the end results are well worth the time and
efforts. Referring to valid sources of information on the writing of research papers can save time and
energy in the long run, eliminating unnecessary corrections or re-writing of the paper.

Answers to most questions can be found in the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers Sixth
Edition, reference copies of which are available in the Writing Center, the school library, or the
English Department. Additionally, Appendix C lists several published and internet sites which can
provide useful information on writing a research paper.

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 Note: when no author name is shown, alphabetize by title of article or essay

APPENDIX A Doe 5

Works Cited
Article
in a
period-
ical Bender, Pat, et al. “Understanding To Kill A Mockingbird”. School Library Journal Mar 2004,

Vol 50, Issue 3: 226+..

Book Bloom, Harold, ed. Modern Critical Interpretations of Harper Lee’s To Kill A Mockingbird.

Philadelphia: Chelsea House Publishers, 1999.

Champion, Laurie. Literary Contexts in Novels: Harper Lee’s “To Kill A Mockingbird”. Great Neck,

NY: Great Neck Publishing, 2006.

Essay in a
collection Dave, R.A., and Bloom, Harold. “’To Kill a Mockingbird’: Harper Lee’s Tragic Vision”.

Bloom’s Modern Critical Interpretations: To Kill A Mockingbird. Philadelphia: Chelsea House

Publishers, 1999. 49-59.

Hartley, Mary. Literature Made Easy: Harper Lee’s To Kill A Mockingbird. New York: Barron’s

Education and series Inc., 1999.

Website
article –
author Horton, Paul, Courtney Lubs, and Rick Vanderwall. “To Kill A Mockingbird: Parallels to Jim Crow
shown

America.” The History of Jim Crow. 13 Nov. 2007.

<http://www.jimcrowhistory.org/resources/lessonplans.amlit_lp_lee2.htm>.
Website
Article -
no “Identity, Oppression, and Protest: To Kill a Mockingbird and the Blues”. The Blues.Blues
author
shown
Classroom.Lesson Plans. Identity, Oppression, and Protest / PBS. 2003. 8 Nov. 2007

<http://www.pbs.org/theblues/classroom/intidentity.html.>.

Lee, Harper. To Kill A Mockingbird. New York: Warner Books, 1960.

O’Neil, Terry, ed. Reading On To Kill A Mockingbird. San Diego, California: Greenhaven Press, Inc.,

2000.
Essay from
online
database
Reisman, Rosemary M. Canfield. “Identities and Issues in Literature”, EBSCO Host, Wesner Library,

Lake Zurich, IL. 26 Oct. 2004 <http://web9.epnet.com>.

Article
in
period-
ical – no
“To Kill a Mockingbird”. Publishers Weekly 4 Sep 2006: 35: 59.
author
shown

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APPENDIX B: TRANSITIONS AND CONNECTIVE PHRASES

Conjunctions To introduce a topic To Summarize To Show Purpose

and as for in all in order that
but concerning in a word in order to
or with regard to in brief so that
for with respect to briefly
nor in other words
neither in short
so in summary
yet that is
To Show Cause and To Compare To Contrast To Explain, Give
Effect by comparison conversely Reasons
accordingly here again however actually
as a consequence in the same way instead admittedly
as a result in a similar manner in spite of that because
consequently likewise anyhow certainly
for this reason similarly on the contrary for example
hence so too on the other hand in fact
it follows that as otherwise indeed
so/so that also rather than really
then equally still of course
therefore yet since
thus that is
To Add Information To Show Various To Show Conviction To Show Concession
and Reasons Conditions after all at least admittedly
add to this again in this event at the same time after all
also besides in these circumstances apparently even so all the same
equally further under such evidently certainly at any rate
furthermore circumstances conceivably granted however
in addition moreover this (that) being so conclusively in any case
once more then too provided that doubtless no doubt in spite of
too yet again in spite of perhaps possibly it is true that
none/nevertheless presumably nevertheless
yet another at the same time probably surely obviously
if even if undoubtedly of course
unless otherwise still
although to be sure
even though though
despite
To Show To List or Show
Chronological Order first, second, etc. Logical Order
after that formerly for example either…or
afterwards earlier for instance neither…nor
later previously in particular whether…or
shortly before that to illustrate though…yet
subsequently then the one…the other wherever…there
concurrently already this…that since…then
in the meantime at last these…those the more…the more
in the meanwhile at length here…there not only…but also
now by that time
simultaneously finally
when/while/was

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APPENDIX C: USEFUL REFERENCE SOURCES

Books
Gibaldi, Joseph. MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers Sixth Edition. New York: The

Modern Language Association of America, 2004.

Reference copies available in the Writing Center, LZHS Wesner Library, and English Department.

Kemper, Dave, Patrick Sebranek, and Verne Meyer. Writer’s Inc: A Student Handbook for

Writing and Learning. Wilmington, MA: Great Source Education Group, 2001.

Reference copies available in the Writing Center. Writer’s Inc. is NOT updated to MLA 6th.

Strunk, William and E.B. White. The Elements of Style. Boston: Allyn and Bacon, 2000.

This is a classic and still very reliable and readable work that has been published in several editions
since 1935.

Shertzer, Margaret. The Elements of Grammar. New York: Macmillan Publishing Co., 1979.

Good source for even the most difficult grammar and style questions.

Internet Resources
*Bedford-St. Martin’s Press. “Using MLA Style to Cite and Document Sources.” 9 June 2005.

<http:/www.bedfordstmartins.com/online/cite5.html>.

*Capital Community College. “A Guide for Writing Research Papers Based on Modern

Language Association (MLA) Documentation. 9 June 2005.

<http://www.ccc.commnet.edu/mla/>.

*The University of Illinois. “The Writer’s Workshop.” 9 June 2005.

<http://www.english.uiuc.edu/cws/wworkshop/index.htm>.

*The University of Kansas. “Writing Guides.” 9 June 2005.

<http://www.writing.ku.edu/students/guides.shtml>.

Lake Zurich High School Writing Center website 24 September 2007.

<http://www.lz95.org/lzhs/wcenter/>

The Purdue University Online Writing Lab. “Using Modern Language Association (MLA)

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 Format.” 9 June 2005. <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_mla.html>.

*Scribe, Dr. Abel, PhD. “Dr. Abel Scribe’s Guides to Research Style and Documentation.”

9 June 2005. <http://www.docstyles.com/>.

*Website contains link to American Psychological Association (APA) Citation Style

Local Libraries
LZHS Wesner Library Media Center. <http://www.lz95.org/lzhs/library/main.html>.

The high school library’s webpage has many excellent resources and links to valuable sites to assist
you.

Barrington Area Library. <www.barringtonarealibrary.org/>.

The Barrington public library provides excellent resources. Use the catalog and search engines to
locate other useful references and resources.

Ela Area Public Library. <http://www.eapl.org/>.

The Lake Zurich public library provides excellent resources. Use the catalog and search engines to
locate other useful references and resources.

Chicago Public Library. http://www.chipublib.org/

This website provides links to dozens of useful internet resources (cultural, business, job related, etc.)
as well as links to many sites with Chicago history.

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APPENDIX D: SAMPLE DIAGRAM FROM INSPIRATION© PROGRAM

"Somebody told
me that he killed a
man once"..."I
don't think it is
much of that, its
more that he was a
German spy during
the war"

Lives in a
mansion in
West Egg

He wears all
designer
No one in his Wealthy
town knows Mysterious Jay clothing
about his Gatsby
backround
He makes up
stories that he
traveled to
Europe

Fake "It was a factual

imitation of some
He hosts He earns his Hotel de Ville in
parties that he money from Normandy, with a
does not enjoy bootlegging tower on one side,
spanking new under
a thin beard of raw
ivy, and a marble
swimming pool, and
"At first I thought it more than forty
was a party, a wild acres of lawn and
rout that had garden. It was
resolved itself into Gatsby's mansion."
"hide and go seek" or
"sardines- in- the
box" with all the
house thrown open
to the game"
"Gatsby was
standing there all by
himself on his
marble stairs"

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APPENDIX E: SAMPLE OUTLINE FROM INSPIRATION© PROGRAM

Jay Gatsby

I. Mysterious

A. “Somebody told me that he killed a man once”…I don’t think it is much of that, it’s
more that he was a German spy during the war.”
Enter an example that shows the characteristic here…

B. No one in his town knows about his background

C. He makes up stories that he traveled to Europe

Enter an example that shows the characteristic here…

II. Fake

A. He hosts parties that he does not enjoy

B. “At first I thought it was a party, a wild rout that had resolved itself into ‘hide and go
seek’ or ‘sardines in the box’ with all the house thrown open to the game. Gatsby
was standing there all by himself on his marble stairs”.
Enter an example that shows the characteristic here….

C. He earns his money from bootlegging

Enter an example that shows the characteristic here…

III. Wealthy

A. “It was a factual imitation of some Hotel de Ville in Normandy, with a tower on one
side, spanking new under a thin beard of raw ivy, and a marble swimming pool, and
more than forty acres of lawn and garden. It was Gatsby’s mansion.”

B. He wears all designer clothing

Enter an example that shows the characteristic here…

C. Lives in a mansion in West Egg

Enter an example that shows the characteristic here…

Note: See corresponding Inspiration© Diagram in Appendix D

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 Appendix F Sample essay in M.L.A. 6th Edition Style Only part of the essay is shown below;. dashed line indicates break from
original text. Cover page is not used. Margins are set ½” on top and 1” on all sides and bottom. All text is 12 pitch, double-spaced. Essay
title should NOT be the title of the book about which you are writing; however the book title (underlined) may be included in the essay title. Doe 1

John Doe
The introductory paragraph begins with an opening sentence which provides generic background
information on your topic. In high school essay writing dictionary definitions and direct quotes
Mr. Solis from the book on which you are writing are not appropriate for an opening sentence. The book
author’s full name and the title of the book are introduced in the introductory paragraph.
The final sentence or sentences of the introductory paragraph are usually the writer’s THESIS
English STATEMENT. .

11/5/04

Positive and Negative Influences on Scout and Jem

The best novels are the ones that are so realistic that one wonders whether the novel is really all

fiction or whether parts of the novel actually happened. One of the elements of realism in Harper Lee’s

novel, To Kill a Mockingbird, is the fact that the two young characters, like all children, are exposed to

both positive and negative influences. If the adults who influence children are powerful role models,

their qualities of character can determine the type of human being that they will become when they are

all grown up. In this realistic coming-of-age novel the personal character of both Scout and Jem

develops through their exposure to positive and negative influences.

Transition
word connects Concerning influences, the person who has the greatest impact on the character development of
paragraphs.

both Scout and Jem is certainly their father, Atticus Finch. Atticus possesses the positive traits of

compassion, courage, and fairness. Certainly the deep sympathy he exhibits toward people who…..

When the author’s name is not used in the lead-in to a quote, use both the author’s last name and the page number in the in text citation. If the author’s name
is in the “signal phrase” show only the page number in the in text citation.

In this respect, one of the unfortunate characters toward whom Atticus shows compassion is Boo

Radley. When Atticus catches Scout, Jem, and Dill trying to put a note through the Radley’s window

with a fishing pole, he yells at them “… to stop tormenting that man” (Lee 49), and he goes to tell

them that “the proper way to communicate is through the front door instead of a wide window” (Lee

49). Atticus scolds the children for disturbing Boo and failing to show respect for him through their

games and schemes because, as the critic Rosemary M. Canfield Reisman says, “Atticus is trying to

teach his children respect for others as the individuals they are”(2).

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 Last name and sequential page number are
used on all pages including Works Cited page.
Doe 2

Miss Maudie not only possesses empathy, but also has great courage. She shows this courage

to both Scout and Jem when her house burns down and surprises Scout with her answer about the loss:

Block quote is Atticus said her house was nearly all she had.
used when
four or more
lines are ‘Grieving child? Why I hated that old cow barn. Thought of settin’ fire to it a hundred
quoted. Block
quote is not
set off with times myself, except they’d lock me up’.
quote marks
unless a
character is Miss Maudie puzzled me. With most of her possessions gone and her beloved yard a
speaking.

shambles, she still took a lively and cordial interest in Jem’s and my affairs (Lee 73).

Miss Maudie is an excellent example of a person who takes something bad and turns it into something

good. Her house burns down, but instead of mourning over it, she says now she can have a bigger

yard. Her optimism in the face of a hardship is an indication of her courage. It is this quality that

allows her to have a positive influence on Jem when he has been devastated by the verdict in the trial.

Miss Maudie obviously has a strong influence on Jem because she restores his hope for justice.

Doe 13

Works Cited

Bloom, Harold, ed. Modern Critical Interpretations of Harper Lee’s to Kill a Mockingbird.

Philadelphia: Chelsea House Publishers, 1999.

Hartley, Mary. Literature Made Easy: Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird. New York: Barron’s

Education Inc. 1999.

Lee, Harper. To Kill a Mockingbird. New York: Warner Books, 1960.

O’Neil, Terry, ed. Reading On To Kill a Mockingbird. San Diego, California: Greenhaven Press,

Inc., 2000.

Reisman, Rosemary M. Canfield. “Identities and Issues in Literature.” EBSCOHost. Wesner

Library, Lake Zurich, IL. 26 Oct. 2004. <http://web9.epnet.com>.

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APPENDIX G: PROOFREADING SYMBOLS & ABBREVIATIONS

add an apostrophe cap faulty capitalization

close up-- d faulty diction

add a comma dgl dangling construction

delete frag fragment

insert lc use lowercase

¶ begin a new paragraph num error in use of number

no ¶ do not begin a new paragraph p faulty punctuation

add a period ref unclear pronoun reference

add double quotation marks rep unnecessary repetition

# add space r-o run-on sentence

transpose elements-- sp error in spelling

lack of parallelism ss faulty sentence structure

ab faulty abbreviation t wrong verb tense

adj improper use of adjective tr transpose elements

adv improper use of adverb vb wrong verb form

agr faulty agreement wdy wordy writing

amb ambiguous expression

awk awkward expression

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APPENDIX H: 15 QUESTIONS TOWARD A BETTER ESSAY

1. Does my paper follow the assignment?

Does it answer all the questions?
Does it follow the directions exactly?
Have I allowed enough time since this paper was assigned to do my research, outline my paper,
write and submit the first draft, have the paper edited, and write the final copy by deadline time?

2. Is there a general topic sentence at the beginning of my introduction?

Is there an author and book statement in my introduction?
Is there thesis statement in the introductory paragraph of my paper?
It is clear and informative?
Does it preview the main points of my paper?
Are the elements of the thesis statement in the same sequence as that of the body paragraphs?

3. Do I have a logical introduction and conclusion?

Does my paper begin appropriately and effectively?
Does my paper end appropriately and effectively?
Is there a logical relationship between my introduction and my conclusion?

4. Do I have good transitions?

Do thoughts flow from one paragraph to the next?
Do thoughts flow within the paragraph?
Am I avoiding “childish” transitions, such as first, next, last or first, second, third?

5. Is my paper logically organized?

Can I chart it out graphically and in outline form?
Does each paragraph logically lead to the next?

6. Am I avoiding personal pronouns?

Are there any examples of I, me, my mine?
Are there any examples of you, your, yours?
Are there any examples of we, us, our, ours?

7. Have I referred back to my essay?

Did I use essay, paper, or paragraph?
What can I say instead?

8. How have I referred to people in my essay?

Have I used their whole name the first time?
At the first mention of a character, have I identified that character?
Have I referred to them appropriately every time thereafter?
Is it clear to which character I am referring each time I mention that character?

9. Are all my sentences complete?

Do I have any fragments or run-ons?
Are any of my sentences too long to be understandable?
Are all my sentences logical?
Am I overusing words such as “say-says-said” or “thing”?
Am I seeking more colorful and descriptive synonyms to avoid too much repetition in words?
10. Am I using the correct M.L.A. format for the paper?
Is my first page formatted correctly?

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Am I using an acceptable font and size?
Do I need a works cited page?
Is each page identified with my last name and a page number?

11. Am I using quotes which fit; those which support the evidence I am writing?
Am I writing a “signal phrase” to lead into a citation?
Am I properly citing my sources?
Am I providing all necessary information for the citations?
Am I using quotes correctly?
Have I used block quotes for citations of more than four lines?
Am I parenthetically citing when necessary?

12. Have I proofread for obvious spelling errors?

Did I run my spell check?
Did I look over the paper for spelling errors and missed words?

13. Have I asked someone else to read my paper to see if it makes sense?
Have I asked one of my peers to edit my paper?
Have I asked the Writing Center staff to read and edit my paper?
Have I made the corrections my teacher or a peer editor has suggested?

14. Is this the best I can do on this paper?

What is this paper missing?
What can I do to make this paper better?
What grade would I give if I were grading this paper?

15. Is my name on the paper so that I can get credit?

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APPENDIX I: WRITING NO NO’S

Otherwise known as suggestions for better grades

First, NEVER use second person (you) in any essay.

1. NEVER start a sentence with WELL, AND or BUT. Use more mature transitions like however and
additionally. Actually, never use well at all unless you are talking about how healthy someone is.

2. NEVER write ETC or use ellipsis (...) in any writing, except in quotes. This tells the reader that you
have run out of ideas and want the reader to finish your thoughts for you. Very bad idea!

3. NEVER forget paragraph transitions. (See Appendix A) Don't overdo the same ones all the time.
Be sophisticated in tying one idea to the next so it doesn't look like a cut and paste job.

4. NEVER put your thesis statement in the wrong position in your intro paragraph. Place it as your
LAST sentence of your introduction. .

5. NEVER use boring or lifeless adjectives and verbs like "good" or "interesting", and "bad".
For example: The movie WAS INTERESTING. Interesting has no meaning really, and avoid the
to be verb as a main verb (is, was, will be). Be more descriptive in your writing. Example: The
movie focused on state of the art special effects, quick-cut editing, and futuristic gadgetry.

6. NEVER write numerals unless they are dates, addresses, or other acceptable numbers.
For example: The boy was eight (not 8). These count as mechanical errors!

7. NEVER misuse the word hopefully! This is one of an English teacher’s pet peeves. Hopefully
means full of hope, NOT I hope that. Hopefully is an adverb, so it must modify a verb.
CORRECT: The child opened the present hopefully; she wanted a toy horse.
INCORRECT: Hopefully it won't rain on the day of the beach party.

8. NEVER use "a lot" as a quantity. Use other words such as many, several, dozens, and so on. There
are many words that describe more than two.

9. NEVER use the plural possessive (THEIR) for a singular or unknown antecedent. This is called a
subject/pronoun agreement error.
INCORRECT: Someone left THEIR pencil on the desk.
INCORRECT: Whoever left THEIR umbrella at home is sorry now.
SOLUTION: PLURALIZE: People who left their umbrellas at home are sorry now.
OR.... PASSIVE : A pencil was left on the desk.
OR... Someone left his/her pencil on the desk. Or, someone left his pencil on the desk.
OR... Someone left a pencil on the desk.

INCORRECT: A student should have their priorities right when starting college. (his/her)
INCORRECT: One should know that they are in for a tough career when choosing the
military (he/she)
INCORRECT: Each person has to choose their own path. (his/her) Each is singular! So are
everyone, everybody, someone, and somebody. These are singular words that must take
singular pronouns and verbs.

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10. Never use expressions such as "I think," "I believe," “I feel," and "In my opinion." These actually
weaken your argument, and they are obvious anyway; you wouldn't be writing someone else's
opinions! Say your opinions without these qualifications as though they are facts, and then support
them with your evidence.

MECHANICS NO-NOS
1. Avoid run ons and comma splices. Points are deducted from your essays for this.
RUN ON: I love going to the movies on the weekends it is an excellent tension reducer.
COMMA SPLICE: I love going to the movies on the weekends, it is an excellent tension
reducer.
CORRECT: I love going to the movies on the weekends; it is an excellent tension reducer.
Or...I love going to the movies because it is an excellent tension reducer.

2. NEVER put a comma before words like because, although, or other subordinating conjunctions.
INCORRECT: I love Disneyland, because there is so much to do.
CORRECT: I love Disneyland because there is so much to do.
NOTE: If you BEGIN with the subordinating clause, you DO separate with a comma.
CORRECT: Because there is so much to do, I love Disneyland.

3. Remember all of your commas in a series. EXAMPLE: Chemistry, Math, and Physics are all closed
classes. Put the comma before and. If you don't, the last two items are assumed to be one item.

4. An appositive has commas on both sides, just like parentheses.

EXAMPLE: Jenna, my neighbor across the street, just had triplets.

If you have a challenge with spelling, PLEASE use a spellchecker on your computer or get a
spelling calculator device. Spelling is a key factor in holistic grading, so improvement in this area is
important.

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APPENDIX J: WRITING CENTER: Room A104 – Ext. 4198
• Purpose: The Lake Zurich High School Writing Center is a facility and service of the
English Department which provides students a computer lab in which to work on their
writing projects and other assignments from English, Social Studies, and other disciplines
at the high school.
• Hardware & Equipment:
31 Dell Pentium 4 computers equipped with floppy disc drives, CD-DVD players and
CD burners. Several computers have external speakers.
Hewlett-Packard high speed laser printers – 1 black, 1 color
The Writing Center also provides an additional classroom area for group
presentations. An overhead data projector is installed for teachers’ computer
presentations. Students may use the facilities for quiet study and work.
• Software:
Windows XP Professional©; Microsoft Office© (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Publisher); CD
burning program; and Inspiration©, a visual guide for diagramming and outlining writing
project.

• Writing Center Services:

Writing Center staff are on duty from 7:00 A.M. until 1:30 P.M. five days each week.
The staff member on duty provides support for computer hardware and software
questions. In addition the staff member will assist you with your writing project, which
includes reading and editing your paper and advising you on elements such as proper
completion of your assignment, your writing style, vocabulary, sentence and paragraph
structure, and various other criteria for a successful essay. Students are requested to
make appointments for assistance, however “walk-ins” are allowed as well.

Student assistants and peer tutors will also be available during some periods of the day.

• Writing Center Protocol:

o Food and drink are never allowed in the Writing Center
o The Writing Center is a facility for school work and study. Normal
classroom atmosphere and noise levels will be maintained at all time.
o All students must have their student I.D. to use the facilities.
o STUDENTS ARE ALLOWED TO LOG IN TO THE SCHOOL NETWORK ONLY
WITH THEIR OWN I.D. AND PASSWORD. LOGGING IN TO ANOTHER
STUDENT’S NETWORK FOLDER IS A SERIOUS VIOLATION OF SCHOOL
POLICY, AND IS SUBJECT TO DISCIPLINARY ACTION.
o CELLULAR PHONES ARE BANNED AT ALL TIMES IN THE WRITING CENTER
AND THROUGHOUT THE HIGH SCHOOL BUILDING.
o Passes are required for those coming from class or study hall. Passes are
not required for those on open periods or lunch.
o All users of the lab must sign in at the book on the Coordinator’s desk.
o Computers are available only for school-related work. No game playing,
recreational internet browsing, loud music, or recreational video viewing
are allowed.
o Students must not use the writing center as a pass-through between the
cafeteria and library.

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INDEX
Format of research paper (cont.)
15 Questions Toward a Better Essay App. H. Citations 31
Active vs. Passive 2 In-text (parenthetical) 45-51, App. F
An “A” paper vs. a “D” paper 2 Works Cited page 29-30, App. A, App. F
Bibliography 31 Cover page 28
Body paragraphs 27 Date & time format 10
Citations, format 31 Header on each page 28-29, App. F
Citation Machine© 31 Introductory paragraph 27, App. F
Citations, in-text (parenthetical) 31 Italics 30
Citing sources, MLA Sixth Edition Style 31, 51 Margins 28, App. F
Anthologies, collections of essays 33 Names of people, 30
Art work 37 Numbers 9
Books 31-33 Numerals
Electronic sources 39 Written out
Academic websites 43 Page numbering 29, App. F
Commercial 42 Paragraph requirements, 27, 30
Magazines, journals 43 Quotation marks 6, 9, App. F
Newspapers 44 Sample essay App. F
Online databases 41 Signal phrases 51, App. F
Websites 41-43 Spacing, line 28, App. F
Essays from anthologies 33-34 Thesis statement 25
Films, movies, TV shows, videos 38-39 Title of paper 28, App. F
Gale Literary Criticism Series 33 Book title in essay title 29
Contemporary Literary Criticism 33 Titles of publications 9
Integrating sources within paragraphs 46 Title page 28, App. F
Literary works from textbooks (plays, poems) 33 Transitions, 27, App. B, App. F
Musical compositions 37 Underlining 9
Periodicals 37 Works Cited page 29, 30, 31, App. A App. F
Journals, Magazines 37 Graphics, pictures 29
Newspapers 37, 40, 44 Inspiration© software 26-27, App. D, App. E
Plays in English textbooks 33 Integrating quotes and sources within paragraphs 46
Poem from an anthology 34 Introductory paragraph 27, App. F
Poetry 51 In-text citations 31, 45-49, App. F
Poetry in English textbooks 33 MLA Sixth Edition Style 22, 30, 51
Reference Books Microsoft Word© 28
Dictionaries 36 Organizing research 26
Encyclopedias 36, 39, 40 Outline of research paper 27, App. D
Quotes from English textbooks 33 Parenthetical citations 31, 45-49, App. F
Sacred texts (Bible, Koran) 35 Pictures, graphics 29
Short story from an anthology 34-35 Plagiarism 46
Studies in Short Fiction 34 Proofreading, corrections 10-11, 29, App. G
Signal phrases leading into citations 51, App. F Reference sources for writing 23-24
Concluding paragraph 28 Research paper, writing in MLA style 22
Corrections, proofreading 10, 29, App. G Copies of research material 25
Cover page 28 Definition 22
Diagram of research paper 26, App. C Notes, taking during research 25
Editing your paper 29 Primary research 22
15 Questions Toward A Better Essay App. H Secondary research 22
Writing No No’s App. I Sources of information 23-24
English grammar 11-21 Books, magazines, other publications 23-24
Parts of a sentence 17 Electronic 24
Parts of speech 13-17 Validity of research resources 23-24
Phonetics and pronunciation 11 Wikipedia 24
Syllables 12 Rules of good writing 1
Types of sentences 20 Thesis 24
English writing style 3 Thesis statement 25
Capitalization 8 Title page 28
Numbers 9 Topic, choosing 24
Punctuation 3-8 Verb tenses – past vs. present 2
Spelling 10 Wikipedia 24
Style 3 Works Cited page 29, 30, 31, App. A, App. F
Titles 8 Writing Center services, App. J
Essay, sample, App. F Writing NO NO’s App. I
Expository essay 23
Format of research paper 28
Block quotes 27, 50, App. F
Body paragraphs 27

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