ASS6
ASS6
August 2021
In this paper, I give my review of the article by (Legesse, 2012), titled “Establishing financial
markets in Ethiopia: the environmental foundation, challenges and opportunities”. The article
intends to examine the environmental foundation for establishing financial markets in Ethiopia,
identify the potential challenges and opportunities.
The abstract of the article is clearly and concisely written and includes purpose, methods, results,
and conclusions. Introduction/background section that includes the well-written description and
critique of pertinent literature, the rationale for the study, and research question(s).
Methods section demonstrates insufficient knowledge of the scientific method or summarizes the
pertinent details in an imprecise or inaccurate manner
In the results section, pertinent tables or graphs are included that are responsive to research
objectives and methods used. The discussion section includes a critical, insightful, well reasoned,
and thorough review of findings, interpretation of principal findings to prior research, discussion
of methodological weaknesses and limitations of the study, as well as strengths, and significance
of the study. The conclusions and discussion sections are appropriate and are supported by data
and include recommendations for future research.
The manuscript is well-organized, attractively presented with grammar and spelling that is
consistently correct. The references are sufficient in breadth and depth for the topic and
consistent and correct in format.
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