Writing Tips: Tips and Practice For The Writing Module of The
Writing Tips: Tips and Practice For The Writing Module of The
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Writing Tips
Tips and practice for the Writing module of the
Oxford Test of English and Oxford Test of English for Schools
Contents
Introduction 4
Test overview 5
The Writing module 6
Tips for preparing for the Writing module 8
Writing Part 1: Email 9
Exercise 1 Tip: Include all three prompts in your email 10
Exercise 2 11
Exercise 3 Tip: Answer each prompt fully 12
Exercise 4 13
Exercise 5 14
Exercise 6 Tip: Use your own words15
Exercise 7 16
Exercise 8 Tip: Use the right level of formality17
Exercise 9 18
Exercise 10 18
Exercise 11 19
Exercise 12 20
Exercise 13 20
Exercise 14 Tip: Expand your responses21
Exercise 15 22
Exercise 16 24
Writing Part 2: Choosing the question
Tip: Choose a Part 2 question you can answer 26
Exercise 1 26
Writing Part 2: Essay 27
Exercise 1 Tip: Make sure you answer the question 27
Exercise 2 Tip: List some ideas29
Exercise 3 29
Exercise 4 30
Exercise 5 Tip: Organize your essay31
Exercise 6 32
Exercise 7 33
Exercise 8 Tip: Use topic sentences34
Exercise 9 Tip: Write a clear conclusion35
Writing Part 2: Magazine article or Review36
Writing Part 2: Review37
Exercise 1 Tip: Use expressions for giving opinions and making
recommendations 37
Exercise 2 38
Exercise 3 38
Exercise 4 38
Exercise 5 Tip: Include a range of language in your answer39
Exercise 6 Tip: Organize your review40
Exercise 7 41
Exercise 8 42
Self-study
If you are using Oxford Test of English Writing Tips for self-study, then work your way
through each tip, completing the exercises and checking your answers in the answer key
as you go.
Classroom use
If you are a teacher using Oxford Test of English Writing Tips with a class, you can work
through each tip and exercise in order, and refer to the answer key for more information.
Take every opportunity for students to work together and practise answering questions.
Ideas to do this include students working:
• through the exercises collaboratively (e.g. in pairs)
• through the exercises alone, and then comparing answers in pairs or groups
• in pairs; one asking questions, the other answering the questions
• in teams to create questions for other teams.
Further practice
For further practice, the following materials are available for free to download from
oxfordtestofenglish.com, or click on the image to go to the practice tests.
For more information about the test, make sure you check out Oxford Test of English:
A Guide for Test Takers.
Prompt 1
Prompt 2
Prompt 3
Exercise 1
Read the following Part 1 task. Which three questions must you answer in your response?
FROM: Pablo
SUBJECT: Afternoon out
Hi
As you know, our course is finishing soon, and I thought we could organize an afternoon out for
the whole class. What do you think?
Great, because …
I thought we could either go to the cinema or to a cafe. Which would you prefer?
Say which and why
Can you suggest a good day and time to go out?
Suggest …
Hope to hear from you soon.
Pablo
Olivia’s response
To: Pablo
Subject: Re: Afternoon out
Hi Pablo,
Olivia
Thanks for your email.
An evening out with the whole class? Yes, I think that’s a really good
idea. We’ve all enjoyed the course and we should do something nice
together to say goodbye.
I like going to the cinema and my favourite films are thrillers. My
favourite food is Italian food, but I don’t know any good Italian
restaurants near here.
See you in the next class. Remember we have a test in the last class.
Olivia
Words: 80
Peter’s response
To: Pablo
Subject: Re: Afternoon out
Hi Pablo, Peter
Thanks for your email.
A class evening out is a great idea. The whole class gets on very well
and it would be nice to do something fun together before the course
finishes.
Personally, I love films, but this time I think we should go to a
restaurant. The thing is that if we go to a cinema, we can’t speak to
each other, and different people might want to see different films.
In a restaurant, on the other hand, we can all talk to each other.
I think Friday evening would be the best time because we don’t have
school the next day, and it’s the last day of the course.
See you soon.
Peter
Words: 118
Exercise 3
For each prompt (1–5), choose the best response (a or b). The first one (0) has been done
for you.
Prompt Response
0 Say which and a You mentioned accommodation. I think I’d prefer camping to
why staying in a hotel, personally.
b How about going camping? It’d be cheaper than the hotel, and
more fun, too.
1 Make a How about giving our teacher a photo of all the class together?
suggestions We could all sign the back with messages. That would be a
great way to remember each other.
b I think a photo of all the class together would make a great
gift and help him remember our time together. Or perhaps we
could take him for a meal instead? He seems to love eating out.
2 Yes, but … a I think that’s a great suggestion for a present. Unfortunately, I
don’t think we have time to arrange a meal before he leaves.
b The problem is there won’t be time to arrange a meal before
he leaves. Perhaps we could do something in class instead?
3 No, a Unfortunately, I won’t be able to attend the festival as I am on
because … holiday that week.
b Thank you for your kind offer, but unfortunately I am unable to
attend the festival.
4 Give details a I just wanted to let you know about my arrival – I’ll be landing
at about 3 p.m. so I look forward to seeing you then!
b My flight (number 0989) gets into Heathrow Terminal 2 at
5 p.m., so let’s meet in Arrivals at about 5.45 p.m., near the
main snack bar.
5 Ask some a I have some questions about the job. Firstly, is a uniform
questions provided or do I have to supply my own?
b Can you tell me what the hours are and whether a uniform is
supplied?
Dear Customer,
Thank you for having your party at the Greenway Sports Centre party room last week. I would like
to ask you some questions about it.
How did you find out about the party room at Greenway Sports Centre?
Say how …
What things did you like about having your party here?
Give details
I want to improve the service we provide for parties. Do you have any suggestions?
Give suggestions …
Kind regards,
Helen Maxwell
Basha’s response
Dear Ms Maxwell,
Basha
Thank you for your email. I’m happy to answer your questions. My
neighbour told me about the party room at the sports centre. She
said that she had used the room once before for a special celebration
and I thought it would be good. The room is a fantastic size for a big
party, so I was very happy with the service.
My only suggestion is that the party room needs a small kitchen
where people can heat up food and wash dishes. We had brought
some food, but had nowhere to heat it up, and after the party we had
nowhere to wash up. I hope this is useful.
Best wishes,
Basha Lakov
Words: 117
Dear Student,
I am writing about the party we are organizing for the end of the course.
Which day do you think would be best?
Say which day and why
We would like some students to cook some food from their country and bring it to the party.
Are you able to cook something?
No, because …
We want everyone to remember this party. How can we make the party special?
Suggest …
Thank you.
Mark Lester
School Principal
Dear Mr Lester,
Roberto
I am writing about the party you are organizing for the end of the
course. I think Saturday would be best. Let me explain why: we don’t
have classes on Saturdays, so everyone should be free to attend.
You said you would like some students to cook some food from their
country and bring it to the party. I am not able to cook anything
because I cannot find the ingredients I need. If you like, I can bring
my guitar and sing some traditional Czech folk songs from my home
country.
I think it’s a great idea for everyone to remember this party. I have
some ideas for how we can make the party special. First of all,
I suggest that we have a dance where we all teach each other
traditional dances from our countries – that would be completely
unforgettable! Secondly, we should all take a picture together, which
would be a great souvenir of our amazing time at this school.
I hope you like these ideas.
Thank you,
Roberto
Words: 175
Exercise 7
Rewrite Roberto’s email using your own words. Try not to use words or phrases from the task.
Exercise 8
Complete the tables with the correct functions from the wordpools. The first one has been
done for you.
showing excitement giving advice giving news requesting information
suggesting thanking
Function Phrases
Function Phrases
I was wondering if you could …
Could you … ?
Please accept my apologies.
Sorry!
I fancy …
My preference would be …
Thanks for the invite – it’ll be great to see you again.
I would very much like to accept your invitation.
Unfortunately, I am unable to attend.
Sorry – I can’t make it to your party.
Exercise 10
For each of the phrases below, decide which kinds of emails they would appear in:
informal, neutral or formal. Tick () the correct box or boxes for each question. The first one
(0) has been done for you.
Dear Customer,
Thank you for having your party at the Greenway Sports Centre party room last week. I would like
to ask you some questions about it.
How did you find out about the party room at Greenway Sports Centre?
Say how …
What things did you like about having your party here?
Give details
I want to improve the service we provide for parties. Do you have any suggestions?
Make suggestions …
Kind regards,
Helen Maxwell
Anna’s response
Dear Ms Maxwell
Anna
Thank you for your email. No problem answering your questions!
My neighbour told me about the room at the sports centre. Yasmin
went to a cool party there a couple of months ago, I think.
The room’s really big, so you can get loads of people in. The staff
were all very helpful. We all had a good laugh.
I reckon the party room could do with a kitchen so people can get
food ready. Secondly, as you know, the sports centre closes at 9 p.m.,
which is early for a party to finish. It’s ridiculous actually – it should
be open till at least 11 p.m.
I hope this is useful.
Take care and see you soon.
Anna
Words: 119
Exercise 13
Rewrite Anna’s email using your own words. Try to use a more formal style.
Exercise 14
Read the Part 1 task and the response by a student, Erik. The response is quite short. How
could you make it longer using Reasons, Examples and Details?
From: Mr Parker
Subject: New school magazine
Dear student,
I am planning to start a new school magazine for students and staff. It would be very helpful if
you could answer these questions:
What do you think of this idea?
Good, because …
What do you think should be in a magazine like this?
Suggest …
Would you be interested in writing anything for the magazine?
Yes, but …
Best wishes,
Mr Parker
Erik’s email
To: Mr Parker
Subject: Re: New school magazine
Dear Mr Parker,
Erik
Thank you for your email. I think it’s a good idea because students will
read the magazine.
I think the magazine should have articles about people in the school.
I am interested in writing about sports for the magazine, but not football.
Kind regards,
Erik
Words: 48
From: Alex
Subject: Shopping Trip
Hi,
I can’t go on our shopping trip on Friday any more. Can we go on Thursday instead?
No, because …
At the shops, let’s buy a present for our English teacher because she’s leaving next week.
What do you think we should get her, some flowers or a book?
Say which and why
And let’s go for a meal after shopping. Where would you like to eat?
Suggest where …
Alex
To: Alex
Subject: Re: Shopping trip
Hi Alex, Alice
I’ve just seen your email. Unfortunately, I can’t make it on Thursday.
Can we go on Saturday instead? There’s a sale starting on Saturday
so we might see some good offers!
I’m glad you suggested buying a present for our English teacher
because she’s leaving next week – I was thinking the same thing.
She’s always reading something, so we should definitely get a book.
Also, the flowers won’t last and it would be good to get something
for her to remember us by. I think a book is a bit more personal.
Maybe something about the history of the local area.
I was grateful to receive your invitation for a meal. I would like to
recommend the Penguin Cafe which is located within easy walking
distance of the shopping centre. They offer a number of different
options to suit all occasions. What do you think?
Take care.
Alice
Words: 152
Afonso’s email
To: Alex
Subject: Re: Shopping trip
Dear Alex,
Afonso
Do you fancy meeting up next week? It’d be great to catch up.
We never seem to get much time together at school. You won’t
believe what I’ve been up to!
I think it’s a great idea to get a present for the teacher, by the way,
but I don’t think we should get flowers or a book. We should do
something to remember our time together. How about we get the
whole class to take a photo together with the teacher, and then have
it printed out and framed? I think she’d love that! Maybe we could
organize a little celebration, too?
Anyway, we should definitely go for a meal after. How about the
Corner Cafe?
Let me know what you think.
All the best,
Afonso
Words: 129
Dear applicant,
Thank you for your application for a summer job.
Can you come for an interview on Tuesday next week at 11.00 a.m.?
No – suggest
As you know, there are two jobs available at the hotel: waiter and kitchen assistant. Please tell us
which job you would prefer and why.
Say which job and why
If you have any questions about the job, please do ask.
Ask some questions
Best wishes,
Mrs Wilson
City Hotel Manager
Exercise 1
Set the timer on your phone for two minutes. Read the following two tasks and decide
which one you would answer in the test. Think about which text type you can write well,
and which topic you would be able to write something about.
Part 2 – Essay
You have 25 minutes to write an essay. Write 100–160 words.
You have been talking about the environment in your English class. Your teacher has asked
you to write an essay. The title of the essay is:
Should everyone do something to protect the environment?
Write your essay.
Part 2 – Review
You have 25 minutes to write a review. Write 100–160 words.
You have seen the following advert in an online magazine for English language students.
Write a review!
Write a review of a museum or an art gallery you have visited. What could you
see there? What was special about the place? Could it be improved in any way?
The best reviews will be published in the magazine next month.
Exercise 1
Read the Part 2 task and the responses from two students, Juliana and Wolfgang. How well
do you think each student has answered the question?
A lot of food these days is not very good for us. There is so much fast
food in shops and it is usually cheaper than healthy food. So, it’s not
surprising that many people eat food which has too much fat, sugar,
salt and chemicals.
Juliana
As a result, there are more and more people with health problems
caused by their bad eating habits. If they have health problems, they
need medical care, which costs a lot of money. They will probably
feel bad and also they might not be able to work or study. So, shop
owners should think about their responsibilities.
In my family, we eat well. We have fresh vegetables and fruit, and we
hardly ever eat fast food. When I was younger, I liked food with a lot
of salt or sugar, but now I don’t really like it. For example, I loved ice-
cream, but I don’t like it so much now.
Words: 156
Wolfgang’s essay
Words: 151
Exercise 2
Read the Part 2 task and the ideas in the table. Which ideas do you agree with?
Exercise 3
Add some more main ideas and details/examples to the tables in Exercise 2.
Paolo’s essay
Should governments ban shops from selling food that is bad for
your health?
Since junk food, such as sugary snacks and hamburgers, has become
easily available, many people have become less healthy. One
Paolo
solution to this problem would be to ban the sale of such food.
Governments already ban other unhealthy things, so why not
unhealthy food? After all, it is their job to protect individuals. By
taking away the option for unhealthy food, people would have to
choose healthy food and therefore improve their health. This is
important as the only food many poor people can afford is junk food,
but by removing this option, shops would need to supply healthy
food that people can afford, or their businesses would close.
Of course, some people say that this removes choice, and doesn’t
give people control over their own life. However, the fact is that
advertising for junk food is often targeted at children, rather than
adults, and children need to be protected.
In the final analysis, the only way for a large number of people’s
health to improve is for governments to take control, change the
laws to stop shops profiting from selling junk food, and to provide
healthy alternatives.
Words: 188
Marcus’s essay
Should governments ban shops from selling food that is bad for
your health?
Many people today have health problems due to poor diets. This
problem is made worse by the wide availability of unhealthy food
Marcus
containing high levels of sugar and fat. Some people say that a
solution to this is to ban shops from selling unhealthy food.
It is the role of governments to take care of individuals and protect
their health. This is why governments ban the use of unhealthy
chemicals and set speed limits on roads.
However, adults should be free to make important decisions in their
lives, and this should include being able to decide what food they
want to eat, too. After all, even foods with high levels of sugar and fat
are healthy to eat if you only eat them occasionally.
In conclusion, while there should be limits on things which can
be dangerous to our health, adults should be free to decide what
they want to do with their lives, and this must include the ability to
choose what you eat.
Words: 166
Should governments ban shops from selling food that is bad for
your health?
Today, junk food is available in more shops than ever before. This
has led to many children today becoming less healthy than children
Abril
in previous generations. Some people have called for a ban on shops
selling junk food to solve this problem.
One argument in favour of this is that governments control other
dangerous things such as dangerous chemicals, so why not
dangerous food? Another reason to support the idea is that it will
help to protect children, the most vulnerable members of society
who are not in a position to choose their diets wisely.
However, others have argued against such strict control of what we
eat for a number of reasons. Firstly, they claim that adults should be
free to decide what they eat, not governments. Secondly, it is argued
that junk food is only unhealthy when eaten in large quantities
and that eating the occasional chocolate bar or hamburger is not
dangerous for your health.
In summary, while it is important for governments to protect
individuals, they must not do this so that they take away people’s
right to choose.
Words: 182
Exercise 6
What arguments ‘for’ and ‘against’ banning junk food does each student give in Exercise 4?
Complete the table with their arguments. The first one has been done for you.
Abril
Introduction
a Our environment is facing a number of environmental issues which are a risk
to our future. Many people have argued that the solution is to ‘think globally
and act locally’. However, the idea that individuals are going to save the
planet is wrong.
b Pollution is increasing greenhouse gases which are warming the planet. If
action isn’t taken, this will lead to flooding and extreme weather. But who is
responsible for solving this problem, people or governments?
Paragraphs 1 and 2
c I believe that people have a duty to act in order to help save the
environment. People buying goods cause industries to produce pollution. If
people used fewer products, fewer greenhouse gases would be created.
d The fact is that there will be no improvement if saving the environment is left
to individuals. For example, to make any difference, everyone would need
to recycle 80% of their waste, but in reality, most people recycle much less
than that. At the same time, action needs to be taken at an international level
by governments. It is governments who are able to change laws and have
the resources to be able to control the behaviour of the industries which
produce the most pollution.
e Secondly, if people changed what they used, for example, change from
eating meat to eating vegetables, this would also reduce global warming, as
the farming methods for vegetables produce much less pollution than the
farming methods for meat.
f Another example is changing what we eat. It has been argued that
individuals changing to a vegan diet will save the planet. This may be true,
but only if there is an increase in the number of people who do so. This is not
going to happen if left up to individuals.
Conclusion
g In conclusion, it is the responsibility of each and every one of us to help
protect the environment. If we do not share the responsibility for looking
after our environment, then who will?
h In summary, while it is our duty to do whatever we can to help protect our
environment, without the governments of the world working together, we
will fail to provide a good environment to future generations.
i To sum up, individuals do not have the power to be able to stop climate
change and save the planet from environmental damage and we must put
our hope in the people we have voted for.
Exercise 8
Read the Part 2 task and the response by a student, Samir. Answer the questions (1–3).
1 What is the main idea in each paragraph?
2 Can you underline the topic sentence in each paragraph?
3 Highlight the organizing and linking words/phrases in the essay. For example In my
opinion.
Samir’s essay
Words: 161
Exercise 9
Read the conclusions (g–i) in Exercise 7 and the ‘Conclusion checklist’ below. Cross out any
bad advice in the checklist.
Conclusion checklist
Have I …
used phrases such as In conclusion, In summary and To sum up?
introduced new arguments ‘for’ or ‘against’ the question?
stated clearly if I agree or disagree with the question?
written more than one paragraph for my conclusion?
summarized the main arguments to support my conclusion?
repeated the introduction paragraph using different words?
Prompt 2
Exercise 1
Read the Part 2 task and the response by a student, Irem. Underline examples of language
for giving opinions and highlight examples of language for making recommendations in
Irem’s response. The first example has been underlined for you.
Review competition!
Write a review of a magazine you have read. What kind of magazine is it? What
do you think is good or bad about it? Would you recommend it to anyone? The
best review will win a prize.
Irem’s review
Science! magazine
If you thought science was just for nerds, think again! Science!
is a popular science magazine which takes the latest scientific
developments and makes them accessible to the ordinary reader. If Irem
you like popular science, you’ll love this magazine.
Packed with news, opinions and incredible facts, Science! has well-
written and informative articles on just about everything you could
imagine, technological developments, the human brain, physics,
space, and the environment, to name just a few.
One thing that I really like is its amazing photographs, which alone
are worth the price of the magazine. The last copy I received was a
special on space, and the photos were out of this world – literally!
The only negative point is that it doesn’t come out often enough. It is
published every two months, so some of the ‘news’ is a bit old by the
time you read it. It would be much better if they published monthly,
or even weekly!
In my opinion, Science! would be a great thing for anyone who is
interested in science to read. If you only read one science magazine,
make it this one!
Words: 187
Exercise 3
Complete the recommendation sentences (1–4) with words from the table. The first one (0)
has been done for you.
a b c
play descriptions adventure movies
listen opportunity racing
read special effects crime novels
do gameplay rock ‘n’ roll
see track fun
If you only read one book this summer, make it this one.
0 a
b The author’s descriptions of the criminal underworld alone are worth the price.
c If you like crime novels, you’ll love this.
1 a
If you only to one album this year, make it this one.
b The first alone is worth the price.
c If you like music (and who doesn't!), you’ll love this.
2 a
If you only one movie this year, make it this one.
b The alone are worth the entry price.
c If you like , you’ll love this.
3 a If you only one online course this year, make it this one.
b The to talk to other learners on the course alone was worth
the price.
c If you like having while you’re learning, you’ll love this.
4 a
If you only one online game this year, make it this one.
b The quality of the alone is worth the price.
c If you like games, you’ll love this.
Exercise 4
Use the expressions from Exercise 2 to write three sentences about a cafe.
1
2
3
Exercise 5
Read the Part 2 task and the response by a student, Johann. In his response, Johann uses
the word good ten times. Rewrite Johann’s email, replacing the word good with more
interesting adjectives.
Review competition!
Write a review of a news website which you use to get information about what is
happening in the world. What do you like about the website? Why do you think
it is better than other websites? The best review will win a prize.
Johann’s review
Have you ever felt that news could be more inspirational? If you
have, you’re not alone. That’s why I read Good News! website – it’s a
good way to remind us that there are many good things happening
in the world, something other news websites forget to do.
Johann
But I don’t just like it because the news stories are positive. They
have good journalists who write good articles and for a non-native
speaker of English, I have found it is a good way to improve my
English. The pictures are equally good and have won many awards.
Articles tend to link to other good sources of information, which I
find really good when I have to do projects at college.
My only complaint is that you have to pay to access some of the
articles. However, there is enough free content on the site to keep
most people happy.
All in all, if you’re looking for a good way to find out what’s
happening in the world, this is the website for you.
Words: 177
Exercise 6
Read Johann’s review in Exercise 5. Is his review organized in the way that the Tip suggests?
Review competition!
Write a review of a TV programme about someone with an interesting job.
What job do they have? What can you learn from the programme? Would you
recommend the programme?
a My only complaint would be that each series is too short – just six programmes. When
I get to the end of a series, I’m always in the mood for more!
b While Rhod’s sense of humour might not be for everyone, I would recommend Rhod
Gilbert’s Work Experience to anyone who wants to find out about different people’s jobs,
and have fun doing it.
c If you enjoy finding out about different people’s jobs, you’ll love the TV programme
Rhod Gilbert’s Work Experience. Each week, the Welsh comedian Rhod Gilbert tries out
a different job and shows what it’s really like to do that job. He’s tried everything from
hairdresser, to airline pilot, to classical musician, and each episode is very funny.
d What’s interesting about the programme is the people he meets. Whether it’s a zoo
keeper, a chef, or a vet, they are often as funny as Rhod himself, and are happy to show
the funny side of their jobs, even though the jobs themselves can be quite serious.
Words: 167
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2
3
4
Write a review!
Write a review of a museum or an art gallery you have visited. What could you
see there? What was special about the place? Could it be improved in any way?
The best reviews will be published in the magazine next month.
Review checklist
Have I …
used expressions for giving opinions and making recommendations?
included a range of language in my answer?
organized my review?
Exercise 1
Read the Part 2 task and the response by a student, Hiroki. Does Hiroki answer all of the
questions in the task?
Hiroki’s article
Words: 164
Exercise 2
Match the strategies (1–4) to the opening paragraphs (a–d).
Strategies
1 Give a surprising fact
2 Tell someone they are wrong
3 Ask about the reader’s experience
4 Set out an imaginary situation
Opening paragraphs
a If you thought you were helping the environment by going vegetarian, think again.
While many people are choosing to eat a vegetarian diet to help save the planet, a new
study suggests that eating a vegetarian diet can actually damage the environment
more than a meat-eating diet.
b Imagine if everyone in the world became vegan and the environment no longer faced
the dangers of climate change. Well, the only way that can happen is for you to take the
first step and change your diet.
c Contrary to popular belief, many teenagers are not particularly worried about the
environment. While there are teenagers who are very active in trying to protect the
environment, most teens just don’t have the time to get involved.
d Have you ever wanted to do something about the environment, but found that you
just didn’t have the time? Well, if you have time to read this article, then you have time
to write to your political representative and request change. Here’s how to do it.
Exercise 3
Highlight the phrases in Hiroki’s response in Exercise 1 which are used for each of the
strategies in Exercise 2.
Exercise 4
Read the Part 2 task and the responses from two students, Clara and José. Whose response
is better, Clara’s or José’s? Why?
Writing competition
Tell us about a good friend of yours. How did you meet? Why is your friend
special to you?
Write an article and tell us. We will publish the best articles in the next issue of
English for You!
My best friend is called Sara. I first met her when we were 11 years
old. We started secondary school at the same time, and we were in
the same class. We soon became friends.
Words: 141
José’s article
Words: 191
My summer holiday
Where did you go? What did you do there? Did you enjoy it?
Write an article and tell us.
We will publish the best articles in next month’s issue of our magazine.
Article checklist
Have I …
included all the prompts in my answer?
involved the reader?
given a surprising fact?
told someone they are wrong?
asked about the reader’s experience?
set out an imaginary situation?
written a title?
given details?
told stories?
used interesting language?
used different types of sentences?
asked questions?
used direct speech?
Exercise 1
Here are all the tips to help you write an email. Match each tip (1–5) with a reason (a–e).
Tip Reason
1 Include all three a because you are marked on your ability to make your
prompts in your language suitable for people you know well, and
email … people you don’t know well.
2 Answer each prompt b because if you use a lot of words from the question,
fully … you will not show the assessor your range of
language.
3 Use your own words … c because if you don’t answer all the parts of a prompt
(for example: ‘say which and why’), you will lose
marks.
4 Use the right level of d because giving reasons, examples, and details will
formality … show the assessor your range of language.
5 Expand your e because if you don’t answer all three prompts, you
responses … will not show the assessor your range of language.
Exercise 1
Here are all the tips to help you write an essay. Match each tip (1–5) with a reason (a–e).
Tip Reason
1 Make sure you answer a because having clear ideas for each paragraph will
the question … make it easier for the reader.
2 List some ideas … b because a general statement at the beginning of
a paragraph makes it clear what the paragraph is
about.
3 Organize your essay … c because the reader needs to know what you think
about the topic by the end of the essay.
4 Use topic sentences … d because if you don’t answer the question you will
lose marks.
5 Write a clear e because a list of ideas will help you to organize your
conclusion … essay.
Exercise 1
Here are all the tips to help you write a review. Match each tip (1–2) with a reason (a–b).
Tip Reason
1 Use expressions a because you will get better marks if you use a variety
for giving opinions of grammar, vocabulary, phrases, etc.
and making
recommendations …
2 Include a range of b because reviews should say what you think and
language in your persuade the reader
answer …
Exercise 1
Here are all the tips to help you write a magazine article. Match each tip (1–3) with a
reason (a–c).
Tip Reason
1 Include all the a because you need to make the reader feel that the
prompts … article is important to them.
2 Involve the reader … b because you want the reader to keep reading all the
way to the end of the article.
3 Make the article c because you will lose marks if you do not answer all
interesting … parts of the question.
Exercise 1
Complete the tips (1–11) with DO or DON’T.
1 read the question carefully, so you know what you have to write about.
2 take time to plan your answers.
3 prepare answers in advance because they won’t answer the question you
are asked in the test.
4 think about the target reader and whether your response should be formal
or informal.
5 copy words from the question if possible – try to use your own words.
6 give reasons, examples, and details in your answers.
7 try to use a wide range of language (grammar, vocabulary, phrases, etc.).
8 give a title for your essay, article, or review
9 choose the question you can best answer in Part 2.
10
worry if you don’t understand a word in a question – just do your best to
answer it.
11
check your answer after you have finished writing.
Function Phrases
requesting I was wondering if you could …
Could you … ?
apologizing Please accept my apologies.
Sorry!
preferring I fancy …
My preference would be …
accepting an invitation Thanks for the invite – it’ll be great to see you again.
I would very much like to accept your invitation.
refusing an invitation Unfortunately, I am unable to attend.
Sorry – I can’t make it to your party.
Exercise 11
1 Ms Maxwell and the person she is writing to don’t know each other.
2 The subject of the email is not personal, so the language should be neutral or
formal.
Exercise 12
Dear Ms Maxwell,
Thank you for your email. No problem answering your questions!
My neighbour told me about the room at the sports centre. Yasmin went to a cool party
there a couple of months ago, I think.
The room’s really big so you can get loads of people in. The staff were all very helpful.
We all had a good laugh.
I reckon the party room could do with a kitchen so people can get food ready.
Secondly, as you know, the sports centre closes at 9 p.m., which is early for a party to
finish. It’s ridiculous actually – it should be open till at least 11.
I hope this is useful.
Take care and see you soon.
Anna
Wolfgang’s essay
The first two paragraphs of Wolfgang’s essay are about eating healthy food, but they
don’t really answer the question Should governments ban shops from selling food that
is bad for your health?. Paragraph 1 is about what people in his country know about
healthy and unhealthy food. Paragraph 2 discusses the way people feel about eating
different kinds of food. The grammar is very simple, for example it frequently uses the
present simple. To score higher, Wolfgang needs to use a wider range of grammar.
Paragraph 3 is more relevant to the question because he describes the cost of healthy
food and says shops should make it cheaper in order to encourage people to buy it.
The language he uses in Paragraph 3 to give his opinion is quite complex, for example
To encourage people to eat in a healthier way, I think shops should make healthy food
cheaper.
Exercise 2
You will have your own ideas about what you agree with and don’t agree with.
Exercise 3
Here are some ideas. You may have different ideas.
Exercise 4
Paolo uses the following arguments from Exercise 3: Governments should protect
individuals., Producers of unhealthy food target poor people., Many people depend on
cheap food.
Marcus uses the following arguments from Exercise 3: Governments should protect
individuals., Adults should be able to make up their own minds.
Abril uses the following arguments from Exercise 3: Governments should protect
individuals., Adults should be able to make up their own minds.
Exercise 5
Exercise 7
Exercise 8
1 What is the main idea in each paragraph?
Paragraph 1: Reasons why people think carefully about clothes.
Paragraph 2: How clothes are important at work.
Paragraph 3: Some people worry too much about clothes and this causes problems.
2 Can you underline the topic sentence in each paragraph?
The topic sentences are underlined in the response below.
3 What organizing and linking words/phrases are used?
The organizing and linking words are highlighted in the response below.
In my opinion, there are good reasons why people think carefully about the clothes
they wear. Generally, it’s because they want other people to think that they look good.
If you look dirty or untidy, or if your clothes are really unusual or old-fashioned, other
people might think you look strange and might not want to talk to you.
One area of life in which clothes can be important is work. For example, people usually
dress smartly for job interviews. Also, staff who deal with customers usually need to
wear clothes of a certain style and standard.
On the other hand, some people worry too much about clothes. Some of my friends,
for example, spend lots of time shopping for clothes, talking about them and deciding
what to wear. The problem is this takes time away from other, more interesting and
useful activities. In addition to this, some people spend too much money on clothes
and end up with financial problems.
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34 (Teenager near lockers/Shutterstock/Monkey Business Images), 37 (Smiling
teenage girl in park/Radu Bercan/Alamy Stock Photo), 40 (Close up portrait
of a young student teenager boy near a tree/Shutterstock/MJTH), 43 Japanese
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notebook/Shutterstock/StockLite), 46 (Teenage boy standing in front of studio
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