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Run-ons
Most students think they know what a run-on is based on their 6th grade English class. So
when I ask students whether the following is a run-on sentence, almost all students say yes:
I took the SATs, and I scored a 36, and I applied to MIT, and I got in!
Now this sentence may be long, wordy, and awkward, but the sentence is actually NOT a
run-on sentence—it's grammatically correct. The reason it's correct is the use of the
word and, which connects all the parts together.
I took the SATs, I scored a 36, I applied to MIT, I got in!
Now this IS a run-on sentence because several complete sentences are being mashed
together with just commas.
The basic form of a run-on is this:

complete sentence , complete sentence

A run-on also occurs when there is nothing between the two complete sentences:

complete sentence complete sentence

There are four main ways to fix a run-on. Let's go over them one by one with a simple run-
on example:
He was hungry, he bought a Chipotle burrito.
Two complete sentences connected only by a comma—definitely a run-on that needs to be
fixed.

1. Use periods:

complete sentence. complete sentence.

He was hungry. He bought a burrito.

2. Use a conjunction

complete sentence, conjunction complete sentence.

He was hungry, so he bought a burrito.

Note that a comma, if necessary, comes before the conjunction (we'll learn more about
commas in a future chapter). Most students have learned the acronym FANBOYS to
memorize the list of conjunctions:

For And Nor But Or Yet So

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Memorize this list because it's super important.

Now here's a really important point: if two sentences are connected by a word that's not
from the FANBOYS list, IT'S STILL A RUN-ON. This is how the SAT tricks you:
He was hungry, therefore, he bought a Chipotle burrito.
This sentence is wrong because therefore is not a conjunction—it's not a member of
FANBOYS. Instead, it's a transition word pretending to be a conjunction. Other words the
SAT might use include however, moreover, in addition to, nevertheless, and furthermore.
These words cannot be used as conjunctions.

3. Use the semicolon ;

complete sentence; complete sentence.

He was hungry; he bought a burrito.

Semicolons are the simplest way to edit run-ons, but in everyday speaking and writing,
conjunctions are more common because they better express how two connected sentences
are related. The SAT will test you on both ways. Note that this is also correct:
He was hungry; therefore, he bought a Chipotle burrito.
But this one is INCORRECT:
He was hungry; and he bought a Chipotle burrito.
Do not use both a conjunction and a semicolon. Semicolons require complete sentences
on either side. By putting in a conjunction, the second part is no longer a complete
sentence.

4. Change the wording so that you no longer have two complete sentences

This last method encompasses a number of run-on fixes. The best way will usually depend
on the sentence we're working with. We'll go over the most common ways of revising the
wording.

A. Dependent clause

incomplete sentence, complete sentence.

Because he was hungry, he bought a burrito.

By inserting because in front, the first half is no longer a complete sentence, and we're no
longer mashing two complete sentences together. As a result, we don't need anything more
than the comma. Because he was hungry is a dependent clause—it doesn't make sense
by itself. An independent clause is just another term for a complete sentence or thought
like he bought a Chipotle burrito. It makes sense by itself. A dependent clause with an
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independent clause is not a run-on and therefore does not require a conjunction or a
semicolon.
When it comes to rewording the burrito example, using a dependent clause turns out to be
the best solution, but let's take a look at some examples where other solutions work better.

B. Relative clause (who, which, that)

Example 1

Wrong: The teacher yelled at Alicia, she had left her homework at home.

Correct: The teacher yelled at Alicia, who had left her homework at
home.

Example 2

Wrong: The hackers copied the company's central databases, these

contain sensitive data on customers.

Correct: The hackers copied the company's central databases, which

contain sensitive data on customers.

C. A noun phrase set off by commas

Example 3

Wrong: Yesterday, Russia deployed troops on the border, this is a clear

violation of the peace agreement.

Correct: Yesterday, Russia deployed troops on the border, a clear

violation of the peace agreement.

Example 4

Wrong: The Burj Khalifa is the tallest building in the world, it attracts
thousands of tourists each year.

Correct: The Burj Khalifa is the tallest building in the world, attracting
thousands of tourists each year.

D. Modifier

Example 5

Wrong: People named it after inventor Nikola Tesla, the tesla coil is
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used in radio transmitters and electrotherapy.

Correct: Named after inventor Nikola Tesla, the tesla coil is used in radio
transmitters and electrotherapy.

Example 6

Wrong: He is reflecting on the meaning of life, Henry tried to find

philosophical answers to life's problems.

Correct: Reflecting on the meaning of life, Henry tried to find

philosophical answers to life's problems.

E. Use and to join verbs

Example 7

Wrong: James turned up the music, he danced like there was no

tomorrow.

Correct: James turned up the music and danced like there was no
tomorrow.

Let's recap what we've learned so far with some examples that are revised in several
different ways.
Example 8

Wrong: You should memorize the list of conjunctions, it will help

immensely on the SAT.

Correct: You should memorize the list of conjunctions, for it will help
immensely on the SAT.

Correct: You should memorize the list of conjunctions; it will help

immensely on the SAT.

Correct: You should memorize the list of conjunctions because it will

help immensely on the SAT.
As a side note, the conjunction for is rarely used in conversation.
Example 9
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Wrong: I love the game of basketball, however, I don't play it myself.

Correct: I love the game of basketball, but I don't play it myself.

Correct: I love the game of basketball; however, I don't play it myself.

Correct: I love the game of basketball, even though I don't play it myself.
After reading the third correct version, you might be wondering why even though is correct
and however is incorrect. What's the difference? Well, with however, you still have two
independent clauses on either side of the comma. With even though, you have an
independent clause with a dependent clause, which is not a run-on:

Wrong: I love the game of however, I don't play it myself.

basketball,

Independent clause Independent clause

Fine: I love the game of even though I don't play it myself.

basketball,

Independent clause Dependent clause

Example 10

Wrong: Nightmares keep me awake at night; yet I oddly feel energized

in the morning.

Correct: Nightmares keep me awake at night; however, I oddly feel

energized in the morning.

Correct: Nightmares keep me awake at night, yet I oddly feel energized

in the morning.

Correct: Although nightmares keep me awake at night, I oddly feel

energized in the morning.
Again, don't use semicolons and conjunctions (like yet in this example) together.
Semicolons require two complete sentences on either side.
Example 11

Wrong: One of my idols is Michael Jackson, he was one of the best

performers of his time.

Correct: One of my idols is Michael Jackson, who was one of the best
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performers of his time.

Correct: One of my idols is Michael Jackson, one of the best performers

of his time.
The first correct version uses a relative clause. The second uses a noun phrase.
Example 12

Wrong: When I try to go to sleep, nightmares keep me awake at night,

after brushing my teeth, I oddly feel energized in the morning.

Correct: When I try to go to sleep, nightmares keep me awake at night,

yet after brushing my teeth, I oddly feel energized in the
morning.

Correct: When I try to go to sleep, nightmares keep me awake at night;

after brushing my teeth, however, I oddly feel energized in the
morning.
Despite all the clauses in example 12, we have two complete thoughts being mashed
together:

1. When I try to go to sleep, nightmares keep me awake at night.

2. After brushing my teeth, I oddly feel energized in the morning.
The SAT will try to trick you in this way by putting in a lot of relative clauses and comma
phrases to keep you from realizing something's a run-on. When that happens, read
carefully and look for where a complete thought ends and where another one begins.
Reminder 1

If there's already a conjunction or if we're not connecting two complete sentences in the
first place, then there's NO error. For example:
Although the plan was perfect, the clumsy criminals, who by now would have been
millionaires, are locked in jail cells, slowly waiting out their sentences.
Looking at where the commas are, at no point are we trying to combine two complete
sentences on either side, so the sentence is perfectly fine.

Reminder 2

Never use more than one way of correcting a run-on within the same sentence. Don't use a
semicolon with a conjunction. Don't use a conjunction with a dependent clause, etc. The
following examples are all incorrect:

 Jerry ran away last summer; and I haven't seen him since.
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 Even though the coffee in Rome is amazing, but I still like Starbucks coffee more.
 Every year my brother visits New York City; which he considers the greatest city in
the world.
 Henry tripped over the rock, and falling head first into the water.
 Running through the finish line, and Donna leaped for joy.

Exercise RO#1
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Exercise RO#2
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Exercise RO#3
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Exercise RO#4

1. The idea of a "global village" is fast becoming a reality in the 21st century, it is
vital that we enlarge our worldview and understand the cultures of other nations.

A) NO CHANGE
B) century, with it being vital
C) century, making it vital
D) century, with the result being vital

2. However, developed biomedical methods such as cloning are controversial, in

fact, 93% of all Americans op- pose cloning.

A) NO CHANGE
B) controversial, and in fact,
C) controversial, which shows that
D) controversial, indeed,

3. Environmentalists have worked hard to rid the river of toxic chemicals, but the
population of fish still hasn't recovered to previous levels.

A) NO CHANGE
B) chemicals; but
C) chemicals,
D) chemicals, however,

4. One of the foods Korea is famous for is bibimbap, this is a mix of vegetables over rice
served in a hot stone bowl.

A) NO CHANGE
B) which is
C) it is
D) that being

5. It is praised as Tarantino's greatest accomplishment, the movie Pulp

Fiction interlaces several stories of seemingly unrelated incidents.

A) NO CHANGE
B) Praised as
C) People praise it as
D) It is