Eap 112 - Module For 3rd QTR
Eap 112 - Module For 3rd QTR
Module 2
Plagiarism; Effective Note-taking ................................................................ 6
Activity .............................................................................................................. 8
Assessment ..................................................................................................... 11
Module 3
Planning Essays and Presentations .......................................................... 12
Activity ............................................................................................................. 16
Assessment ..................................................................................................... 18
Module 4
Writing the Reaction Paper/Review/Critique .......................................... 19
Activity ............................................................................................................. 21
Assessment ..................................................................................................... 23
Module 5
Writing the Concept Paper ......................................................................... 24
Activity ............................................................................................................. 25
Assessment ..................................................................................................... 27
Project for EAP 112 ..................................................................................... 28
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C. Explicitness – Academic writing demands the use of signposts that allow 1. Combining Ideas Effectively – Avoid redundancy and make sure that ideas
readers to trace the relationships in the parts of a study. are packed effectively.
1. If you intend to show a change in the line of argument, make it clear
Example: The earthquake was a disaster that caused loss of life,
by using “However.”
property damages, and permanent changes in the
2. Using the phrases “This is due to the ...” and “This resulted in ....” may
landscape.
be useful in making ideas explicit.
3. When two ideas seem the same, express each one clearly. 2. Nominalization – Transform verbs into nouns to help readers focus on the
4. If you intend to give extra information in your sentence, make it clear action and not on the doer of the action.
by writing “In addition...”
Example: The president announced a three-day holiday this
5. If you are giving examples, do so explicitly by writing “For example...”
September.
D. Caution – Academic writing requires care since knowledge is built from
Nominalization: The president’s announcement of a three-day holiday for
proven theories and concepts. Therefore, caution is needed to avoid
September was released.
sweeping generalizations.
3. Passivization – In passive construction, the results of actions are
Example: Government officials are corrupt.
highlighted. Since the writer of the paper is presumed to have done the
The statement is not completely true, and the rhetorical impact of collection and analysis of data, it is understood that all results of the
the statement may be misleading. The statement can be improved using actions are a product of the writer’s work.
devices such as modal verbs, adverbs, or verbs.
Example: The researcher conducted experiments to validate the
Improved versions: hypothesis.
1. Some government officials may be corrupt. (modal verb) Passivization: Experiments were conducted to validate the hypothesis.
2. Corruption is commonly linked to some key government officials.
(adverb)
3. A number of government official tend to be linked with cases of
corruption. (verb)
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ACTIVITY 1
Directions: Using the Venn Diagram below, compare and contrast academic and
professional writing and creative writing (5 pts. each).
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Formality - 10 pts.
Objectivity - 10 pts.
Explicitness - 10 pts.
Correctness - 10 pts.
Structure - 10 pts.
Total: - 50 pts.
Assessment
Directions: Write True if the statement is correct. If false, underline the word/s that
made the statement incorrect.
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Relativity and Einstein was not mentioned, the writer explicitly or implicitly
EAP 112 PLAGIARISM; EFFECTIVE NOTE-TAKING
claims that this theory is his or hers. This shows that plagiarism of idea has
MODULE At the end of this module, you are expected to: been committed. To address such issue, proper citations should be done.
• Identify note-taking techniques and strategies to This is to attribute ownership of ideas to authors. Citations are done in
2 avoid plagiarism;
• Use knowledge of text structure to glean the
information needed; and
• Employ a range of note-taking strategies in
different ways:
A. Author-oriented Citation – It includes the author’s surname and the
year of publication inside a parenthesis.
Example:
WEEK 2 addressing plagiarism.
Pulido (2012) believes that language in an online environment can
be understood if other modes of online communication are further
Key Questions: analyzed to provide a full account of interaction in virtual worlds.
1. How can one draw meaning from an academic text? B. Text-oriented Citation - A paragraph or sentence from a source is
2. How can plagiarism be addressed? followed with the author’s surname and its year of publication. The
citation must be enclosed in parentheses.
Overview Example:
Plagiarism is defined as the copying verbatim and taking credit of other Unless educators realize the importance of reading and writing
writer’s language and idea. When a writer incorporates other people’s work in across subject areas, problems in comprehension of subject matter will
his/her paper without acknowledging them or asking for their consent, he/she be a prominent issue in the teaching learning process (Estacio, 2010).
commits plagiarism. This is a serious form of academic dishonesty and is frowned C. Another way of citation is by starting the sentence or paragraph using
upon in the academe. Thus, writers must be responsible in accounting the ideas the phrase “According to ...” followed by the surname of the author
and language of other writers. and the year of publication enclosed in parentheses.
Plagiarism can be addressed using citation and note-taking techniques and
II. Plagiarism of Language - This happens when an author uses the language
strategies. Citation is done to acknowledge the ownership of the work used while
of another writer and claims it as his or her own. Effective note-taking
note-taking strategies is for rephrasing the material for your work.
techniques are used to address plagiarism of language because it allows
Two Types of Plagiarism you to rephrase the original text into your own.
I. Plagiarism of Ideas – This occurs when the credit for a work is ascribed to
oneself untruthfully. For instance, if one writes a paper on the Theory of
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A. Using Direct Quotations – This is used for statements that are so 4. A rule of thumb in using direct quotations is that only twenty
closely associated that altering the words may lose its rhetorical percent of the total length of the work may employ direct
impact. For example, Ninoy Aquino’s statement “The Filipino is worth quotations. For instance, if the prompt of the essay requires you
dying for” is too short to be summarized, and it may lose its rhetorical to write in at least 1000 words, you may only have a total of 200
impact if the statement is paraphrased. Consider the following in words allotted for direct quotations.
employing direct quotations:
B. Summarizing – This is a short restatement of the main idea of the text.
1. Using direct quotations means to lift text and enclose them in The following tips must be considered in summarizing a text:
quotation marks. It also includes the author’s surname and the
1. Read the text thoroughly and highlight the important details in the
page number.
text.
Example: 2. After getting the main idea/s, summarize the text in your own
“Globalization is just a covert term for colonization.” (Reyes, 1994, words. Make sure to check if the relationships between ideas are
p.2) established.
3. After summarizing, compare your output with the original to see if
2. If the text is too long, you may omit certain parts and replace them
it does not stray from the original text.
with an ellipsis.
C. Paraphrasing - It is a restatement in your own words of the main idea
Example:
and the supporting details of a text. The following are ways in
“Smartphones resulted from global innovations in technology... paraphrasing:
and therefore, consumers need to be updated on the latest trends
if they want to maximize opportunities offered by these gadgets to 1. Literal paraphrasing – In this type, only the vocabulary terms from
make daily activities more convenient.” (De Claro, 2010, p.7) the original text are replaced.
2. Structural paraphrasing – This type changes the sentence
3. Interpolation may be done to insert notes within the directly structure as well as the word class of key words of the original text.
quoted passage to help readers understand the context of the 3. Alternative paraphrasing – In this type, the writer first poses
statement. It is marked by brackets. questions about the text. Then, he/she answers these questions
Example: using his/her own words.
“[Educators] believe that the education sector should address the
material conditions of schools to improve teaching and learning.”
(Danao, 2011, p.7)
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Reference
General Instructions:
Billanes, L. (2020). English for Academic and Professional Purposes Skills and
Submit these activity sheets on the scheduled date along with the other
Strategies for Academic Discourse 1st Edition. Quezon City: TechFactors, activity/ies) the instructor may have asked the students to do on a separate paper.
Inc. If you are sending something you have done online such as MS presentations,
pictures, pdfs, etc., then you may send those to your subject teacher’s email address
Valdez, P. (2016). English for the Globalized Classroom Series English for Academic by following this format: SECTION_LASTNAME_FIRSTNAME_ACTIVITYNAME.
and Professional Purposes. Pp. 18 - 25. Quezon City: Phoenix Publishing
House, Inc. Name: _____________________________ Date: _____________________
Section: ____________________________ Score: ____________________
ACTIVITY 1
Directions: Search for an online or newspaper article, and quote at least five
important statements from it. Apply the different citation techniques and
strategies for using quotations. Make sure to also attach a copy of the whole article
in your activity sheet (30 pts.).
Approaches
Exceeds Standards Meets Standards
Criteria Standards
(10 pts.) (6pts.)
(2 pts.)
The learner cited at The learner cited at The learner cited less
least five important least three important than three
Comprehensiveness
information from the information from the information from the
text. text. text.
The learner observed
The citations are
The citations are the conventions in
incomplete and the
complete, and its using citations.
conventions in citing
Citation Style conventions were However, some parts
articles were not
observed by the of the citation are
observed by the
learner. either missing or
learner.
unclear.
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ACTIVITY 2 ____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Directions: Read the sentences and apply the different ways of paraphrasing (2 pts.
each). 5. Strategic management denotes the ability to identify objectives, perform
the set goals, and generate alternative scenarios for anticipated future
1. Personal profit can serve as an inspiration to businesses to better serve
events to eliminate business risks and setbacks. It focuses on how an
their customers.
organization will have a competitive advantage in such a way that it will
____________________________________________________________
manage ways to outperform its leading competitors.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
2. Overclocking is a process that is capable of improving a computer’s
performance through overloading electricity.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
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ACTIVITY 3 __________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Directions: Summarize the text below (30 pts.) __________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Corporations are owned by a group of people called stockholders or __________________________________________________________________
shareholders. To begin with, there are two kinds of stockholders namely: __________________________________________________________________
Initial Stockholders and Investors/Stockholders. Initial Stockholders are the __________________________________________________________________
group of people who started the corporation. They are the ones who __________________________________________________________________
invested a certain amount of money to start and build the operations of the __________________________________________________________________
corporation. Second are the Investors or simply stockholders, who invest __________________________________________________________________
money to receive profit from the corporation in the form of dividends. Also, __________________________________________________________________
the money invested is used to help and support the business entity and its __________________________________________________________________
operations. Likewise, Stockholders like these can be classified into two __________________________________________________________________
namely: Major Stockholders and Minor Stockholders. Major Stockholders __________________________________________________________________
are the people who own a large portion of the corporation around 15-50% __________________________________________________________________
and above. They are expected to be more active with the corporation since __________________________________________________________________
they carry a huge weight of the corporation. Next, are the Minor __________________________________________________________________
Stockholders, who own a small portion of the corporation which is around
10 % and below. The amount and percentage of ownership can be matched
with the number of stocks owned by the stockholder over a corporation.
Rubric for Grading:
When a stockholder buys a portion of the corporation, he/she will receive
what is known as a Stock Certificate. This certificate shows the number of Criteria Description/Indication Points
stocks taken, the cost of each stock and other information about the
Content The information is relevant to the original text. 15
stockholder (Gahol, 2011).
Organization of The ideas are well-organized, and they were
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Ideas discussed clearly and concisely.
__________________________________________________________________ Grammar and The insights were explained with correct grammar
5
__________________________________________________________________ Vocabulary and spelling of words.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
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Assessment
Directions: Identify what is being described in each statement.
1. This refers to the practice of copying someone else's work and passing
them off as one's own.
2. This is done to acknowledge the author of the idea that was mentioned in
one’s paper.
3. This happens when the writer presents the work of others as his/her own.
4. This happens when a work of another writer is copied word-for-word.
5. This type starts with the surname of the author, followed by the year of
publication in parentheses.
6. This is the synthesis of the main points of a text.
7. To use this, the text must be lifted and enclosed in quotation marks.
8. This the act of rewriting a text without changing the original meaning.
9. This type replaces only the vocabulary terms from the original text.
10. This type changes the sentence structure of the original text.
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3 text;
• Outline reading texts in various disciplines; and
• Write an abstract/summary of texts in various
disciplines.
Example:
The ASEAN region is a dynamic system because it capitalizes on
cultural diversity, rich resources, and a variety of perspectives.
WEEK 2
The sample thesis statement contains the main idea that the ASEAN region
is a dynamic system. Three supporting points that will be developed in the
Key Question: succeeding sections were mentioned – cultural diversity, resources, and a variety
of perspectives. These points will be elaborated in each paragraph to support the
1. How can an essay and presentation be planned?
main idea.
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2. A good thesis statement is focused. This means that it provides supporting Example:
points that strengthen the main idea. Traditional Format Standard Format
Poor example: An effective local government unit should have Title of Work: Units of a Research Title of Work: Units of a Research
good communication facilities and efficient University University
resource management programs since these I. College of Medicine 1.0 College of Medicine
initiatives will be beneficial for its citizens. A. Community Medicine 1.1 Community Medicine
Improved version: Effective dissemination of information and B. Pathology 1.2 Pathology
efficient resource management are indicators of II. College of Engineering 2.0 College of Engineering
effective local governance. A. Industrial Engineering 2.1 Industrial Engineering
B. Chemical Engineering 2.2 Chemical Engineering
3. A good thesis statement has clear boundaries. It sets limits to what the C. Mechanical Engineering 2.3 Mechanical Engineering
essay intends to explore.
III. School of Fine Arts 3.0 School of Fine Arts
Poor example: Guitar playing skills can be improved if the player A. Painting 3.1 Painting
is dedicated and there are sessions devoted to B. Sculpture 3.2 Sculpture
technique and investments on good equipment
IV. College of Liberal Arts 4.0 College of Liberal Arts
must be considered since this will be influential in A. Political Science 4.1 Political Science
performing in front of an audience. B. History 4.2 History
Improved version: Excellent guitar playing requires countless hours C. Literature 4.3 Literature
of practice, strategic decisions in purchasing
equipment, and tireless dedication. B. Principles
1. Parallelism – Entries should observe the same language structure.
The Outline 2. Coordination – Entries should observe levels of importance.
The outline is used to show the logical arrangement of ideas to be included 3. Subordination – Entries should observe difference of importance.
in the essay. In preparing an outline, the format and principle must always be 4. Division – Entries should at least be two to be sure that supporting
considered. points of a major idea are adequate.
A. Format – The format can be classified into two: the traditional (It uses
Roman numerals, letters, and numbers) and standard (It uses numbers).
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Peer A. Books
Expanding
evaluation and
subtopics
revision Author’s surname, Initial (Year of Publication). Title of Work. Place of
Publication: Publisher
Collecting Examples:
Drafting sources and Martinez, A. (2008). Creating Memories. Quezon City: Maxwell Publishers
making notes
Pulido, D., & Mirador, J. (1998). Academic Writing for College Students.
Tokyo: Lindell Inc.
Brainstorming, forming
the thesis statement, Mata, E. (Ed.). (2015). Workplace Ethics: An Introduction. Kuala Lumpur: UPM
and outlining
Press.
Aside from following these steps, it is also important to note that an essay Cycling Primer for Beginners. (1989). Ohio: West and West Publishing
usually requires an introduction, a body, and a conclusion.
B. Periodicals (Journals, Newspaper, and Magazines)
A. Introduction – It consists of the background information of the topic, the
thesis statement, and the scope. Surname of author/s, Initial (Year of Publication). Title of the Article. Title of
B. Body – It contains the major ideas confined in the thesis. the Periodical, Volume (issue number), page numbers.
C. Conclusion – This is the section that summarizes the main points of the Examples:
essay. Valdez, G. (2010). Philippine Perspectives on Environmental Politics. Journal
of New World Politics. 8 (7), 25 - 32.
Moore, B. (2001, August). Fashion for the new decade. Fashion Manila, 35
(2), 77.
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Severino, P. (2013, Oct. 23). Creating Possibilities for Muslim Mindanao. The
Metro Monitor, p. A17. 3. Rehearse your presentation. Did you go beyond the
time limit? Were you able to express your points
C. Online Sources
clearly?
Author, Initial or Institution. (Date of Retrieval). Title of Work. Retrieved from
Web site
4. Select appropriate attire for your presentation. Do
Example: your clothes fit the formality of the event? Does it help
Greenworks. (May 4, 2014). Method of Extraction of Minerals. Retrieved you accentuate your features (height, skin color, or
from www.greenworks/methods.html. prominent physical feature)?
Planning Presentations
B. During the Presentation
Disseminating academic papers to the public can be beneficial to both the 1. Relax. Focus on the points you rehearsed. Refer to your notes/outline
writer and the readers. Presenting one’s written works to worthy venues like from time to time. Once you start talking, the tension will begin to
conferences, seminars, and workshops can contribute to the body of knowledge. lessen.
In addition, sharing meaningful inputs with other participants can improve the 2. Elaborate. Add interesting ideas in your presentation that you came
writer’s piece. Therefore, it is important that your written output must also be across while writing the paper.
designed for oral presentations. Below are some tips for presenting an essay. 3. Establish eye contact. It is good to look at the audience from time to
time, perhaps at their foreheads. This allows you to create the illusion
A. Before the Presentation
that you are looking into their eyes minimizing your anxiety.
1. Familiarize yourself with the mechanics of the 4. Start and finish strong. Good presentations start with the central
presentation. Is there a time limit? What equipment theme or idea. Make sure to conclude with a restatement of the
is available to you? Who will be attending the central idea. Remember that the beginning and the end are powerful
activity? sections of your presentation.
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Reference
[Asana Events Find Us in Person Planning Clipart] (n.d.). Retrieved from Asana ACTIVITY 1
Events Find Us in Person Planning Clipart
Directions: Complete the thesis statements below by adding valid supporting
[Presentation Clipart PowerPoint] (n.d.). Retrieved from points (2 pts. for each answer).
https://www.clipartkey.com/view/iJomJo_presentation-
1. The main reasons for poverty in the Philippines are _______________,
clipartpowerpoint-presentation-video-icon-animated-gif/
_______________, and _______________.
[Thank you words. Woman with red heart saying] (n.d.). Retrieved from
2. Getting pregnant before graduating from college results in
https://www.shutterstock.com/image-vector/thank-you-words-woman-
red-heart-1033803841 _______________ and _______________.
3. Having OFW parents has its advantages such as _______________ and
Valdez, P. (2016). English for the Globalized Classroom Series English for Academic
and Professional Purposes. Pp. 30 – 44. Quezon City: Phoenix Publishing _______________.
House, Inc. 4. Civilians should not be allowed to carry a gun because _______________ and
What Is Academic Writing? Types of Academic Writing (2019). Retrieved from _______________.
https://www.calltutors.com/blog/what-is-academic-writing/ 5. The Anti-Distracted Law must be strictly implemented because
[Young Man Choosing Shirt Clothes Rack Illustrations & Vectors] (n.d.) Retrieved _____________________________________________________________.
from https://www.dreamstime.com/illustration/young-man-choosing-
6. There must be a stricter law against cyberbullying because
shirt-clothes-rack.html
_____________________________________________________________.
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7. The main reason for the popularity of Facebook is Title of Work: (1 pt.)
_____________________________________________________________.
I. ____________________________ (1 pt.)
8. A stricter penalty in plagiarism will result in
A. (2 pts.)
_____________________________________________________________.
B. (2 pts.)
9. People should eliminate the regular consumption of fast food because a fast-
C. (2 pts.)
food diet leads to _______________________________________________.
II. ____________________________ (1 pt.)
10. The ban on junk foods in school cafeterias has resulted in
A. (2 pts.)
_____________________________________________________________.
B. (2 pts.)
C. (2 pts.)
Directions: Refer to the thesis statement about the impact of global warming. A. (2 pts.)
Based on it, construct an outline containing the points to be discussed in your B. (2 pts.)
essay. You may search from other resources for additional information (25 pts.). IV. _____________________________ (1 pt.)
The rising temperature in the Earth’s atmosphere may result to physical, A. (2 pts.)
ecological, social, and economic changes. B. (2 pts.)
ACTIVITY 3
Directions: Based on the thesis statement and your outline from Activity 2,
construct an essay about the impacts of global warming. Your essay should have
an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Use another sheet of paper for this
activity (30 pts.).
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Assessment
A. Directions: Read the following statements and write THS if the sentence is a
thesis statement; write TOS if it is a topic sentence.
1. Automated elections should be improved to minimize fraud,
facilitate faster turnout, and maximize voter participation.
2. The lakes of Laguna are grand spectacles worth seeing.
3. Creating comics involves several steps.
4. Despite some risks, online businesses can be sustainable models
for doing business since they minimize operating costs and provide
greater options for consumers.
5. Writing requires careful planning.
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and the overall significance of the work. It also indicates the element the
EAP 112 WRITING THE REACTION PAPER/
writer plans to examine in a particular work.
MODULE REVIEW/CRITIQUE
At the end of this module, you are expected to: Example:
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• Determine critical approaches in writing a critique; News discourse is a rich area in language studies that has
• Express opinions based on facts; attracted attention among scholars both old and new. Departing from
• Use critical approaches in writing a critique; and merely examining printed texts, the present era of globalized
• Write an objective/balanced review or critique of a technologies poses serious challenges for the analysis of news discourse,
WEEK 3-4 work of art, an event, or a program. given that producers of news employ different modalities to deliver their
message. In addition, the growing mobilities of individuals (geographical,
virtual, and social) raise interesting questions on the suitable
Key Questions: frameworks available for researchers to fully understand different
aspects of news discourse. Given the present scenario, this book
1. What considerations should one take in preparing a critique?
elucidates the challenges of studying news discourse.
2. How is a critique different from other texts?
Presented in nine chapters, the book conveniently deals with
Overview
specific aspects of the topic, giving readers a manageable resource for
study. Chapter 1 overviews the book, starting with definitions of news
A critique is a form of academic writing that presents a critical analysis and discourse then outlining the different approaches (sociolinguistic, corpus
evaluation of a work or concept such as artworks, films, poetry, music, research, linguistic, critical discourse analytic, to name a few) and methods of
etc. It is an important rhetorical pattern in academic writing as it presents a collecting data. Included in this section is the importance of studying
balanced view of things. However, it is important to note that writing a critique discourse, which may spark interest among beginning scholars and
should not be based on personal opinions. Instead, it should be grounded on actual readers unfamiliar with the area (Valdez, 2014).
observations.
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Examples: Reference
The smartphone has an eight-megapixel camera supported by Murray & Rockowitz, A. (2020). Writing a Critique. Retrieved from
both Bluetooth technology and wireless applications. These features are
http://www.hunter.cuny.edu/rwc/handouts/the-writing-process-
standard among modern phones, so the higher price is not justified.
1/invention/Writing-a-Critique
The movie is worth seeing because it features not only talented Valdez, P. (2016). English for the Globalized Classroom Series English for Academic
actors but also tells an excellent story filled with unexpected twists. and Professional Purposes. Pp. 46 – 54. Quezon City: Phoenix Publishing
House, Inc.
Examples:
Taken as a whole, the book can be helpful resource for teachers
planning to integrate technology in their classrooms. In addition, the
sample lessons provided in the appendices consider different material
conditions of schools which may be a reality in some settings. Since
Estacio (2009) views that technology use in education may depend on
the conditions of educational institutions, the lessons in the book are a
welcome addition to the growing number of resources in different
contexts for teachers.
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returns the user to the homescreen. The current model of the iPhone, the the 5s has gone
General Instructions:
back to an even simpler desktop screen, and Apple has opened up to variety by offering a
Submit these activity sheets on the scheduled date along with the other number of colors that a consumer can choose from. (Apple.com, 2013).
activity/ies) the instructor may have asked the students to do on a separate paper.
With the 5s the camera has been upgraded to 8MP. It also features a front and
If you are sending something you have done online such as MS presentations,
back camera for iSight. It’s Wi-Fi has been improved and it is now thinner, and running a
pictures, pdfs, etc., then you may send those to your subject teacher’s email address
new operating system iOS 7. On the apple home page it’s description reads, “With an all-
by following this format: SECTION_LASTNAME_FIRSTNAME_ACTIVITYNAME.
new design, this is iPhone as you’ve never seen it — or held it. iPhone 5c is beautifully,
Name: _____________________________ Date: _____________________ unapologetically plastic, the better to bring its five decidedly uncommon colors to life”
Section: ____________________________ Score: ____________________ (Apple, 2013). One complaint that many have had with the iPhone, is how easy it is to break
or crack. With the new iPhone, it seems that problem has been addressed and improved.
Apple is aiming this product at consumers who already own an iPhone, by making
ACTIVITY 1 their phone a more personal expression of who people are. They also write in their
description that, “Sine time immemorial, color has been a tool of expression. An undeniable
Directions: Read the sample critique and list down the strengths and weaknesses extension of who you are” (Apple, 2013).
of the product. Write your answers in the table below (2 pts. each).
Apples competitor for phones, with the Android, does not currently have this
The iPhone is a product that has gained an iconic value in America. It is, after all, option. Also, the competitor’s products do not have as arrayed of apps as the iPhone, nor
the original smart phone, and it marked a drastic change in in perception of what a phone do they have as seamless an integration with the program iTunes, which works as a content
can do. The iPhone is also the father of the iPad, which is the pioneering product of tablets. manager for the iPhone.
In my opinion, it is also the best phone currently on the market. It is a remarkable product
with a range of applications. Given these advantages, and the renowned innovation of the iPhone, it is currently
the best product on the market today for a smart phone. It was the original smart phone
The iPhone operates on the same operating system as Macintosh computers, and it continues to be a smart buy. Apple will only continue to grow and develop it, changing
MacOS X, with modifications to be appropriate for the interface of the iPhone. Since third it to make it faster stronger, and adaptive when a new set of circumstances change. That is
party companies can design programs, or “apps” for the iPhone, there is really no limit to where Steve Job’s legacy is still alive and well at Apple.
what the phone can do, since apps can be customized to suit a particular situation. (Jobs,
2007). Everything from Internet apps likes Skype, guitar tuners, games, graphing Retrieved from https://www.wowessays.com/free-samples/iphone-review-essay-sample/
calculators, maps, GPS navigation systems, etc. are able to reside in the small, but powerful
device.
The iPhone first went on sale in the summer of 2007. It was introduced by a
keynote from then CEO of Apple Steve Jobs. One of the things that Steve Jobs brought to
apple was a dedication to design of their products. (Jobs, 2007). The iPhone is the
culmination of that commitment. It is simple and easy to use, with only one button that
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Strengths Weaknesses combination of images and texts allows greater understanding of values encoded in the
news. In addition, the book adequately discusses means for addressing methodological
problems in analyzing data in different forms of media. Moreover, since the book draws on
different perspectives, readers will find a range of options to work with when confronting
their own data. To illustrate, news may not only be seen on the national/international scene
but also in specific locales. Therefore, this can help in making sense of one’s data through
adequate examples.
Questions:
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ACTIVITY 3 Assessment
Directions: Recall a movie that you have watched before and write a critique paper Directions: Read the statements below. Write True if it is correct and False if not.
about it. Do this on a separate sheet of paper (30 pts.).
1. A critique is a genre of academic writing that presents a critical analysis of
Rubric for Grading: a work or concept.
2. In writing a critique, the arguments made by the writer does not
Criteria 10 7 5 3 necessarily need to be backed up with evidence.
There are 3. In presenting the weaknesses of a work or concept in a critique paper, the
Almost all Some
several
All information information to information to writer should be blunt as much as possible.
Content inaccuracies
support the support the main support the main
main thesis of thesis of the thesis of the
in the 4. A critique paper should have an introduction, body, and conclusion.
Accuracy information
the critique. critique is critique is 5. A critique should provide a background information of the work or concept
provided in
accurate. accurate. that the writer will examine.
the critique.
The learner uses The learner uses
The learner 6. The conclusion part of a critique should indicate the elements or features
depends on
The learner
effective effective
simple
of the work that the writer will evaluate.
complex/ simple complex/ simple
uses effective constructions 7. A critique presents a balanced view of things as it shows both the strengths
Style/Language constructions in constructions in
complex/simple throughout and weaknesses of a work.
the majority of certain sections
Use constructions the piece and
the piece with a of the piece with 8. Recommendations in a critique must be backed up from source that
throughout the there are
few minor lapses a few minor
piece. several lapses strengthens the writer’s claim.
in some lapses in some
in some
sentences. sentences.
sentences.
9. The main goal of a critique is to discredit a particular work by presenting
There are some its negative features.
There are
There are few lapses in 10. Critiquing is done to develop an understanding of the work’s purpose and
major lapses
lapses in grammar,
Good grammar, in grammar, creative style.
grammar, punctuation, and
Mechanics and punctuation, punctuation,
punctuation, and mechanics which
and mechanics and
Grammar mechanics but cause
are adequately mechanics
they do not cause misunderstanding
employed. which impede
misunderstanding in certain
understanding
of the text. sections of the
of the text.
text.
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Concept papers are usually 2-3 pages in 3. Extended Definition – It is a detailed way of defining a term. The text in
length. The body of the essay is the main section of the concept paper. It is in this this type is usually in paragraph or essay length. Aside from definition,
part where specific claims made in the thesis statement are elaborated. The description, comparison and contrast, cause and effect relationships are
conclusion, on the other hand, is where the thesis statement is reemphasized. It also used in providing a holistic definition of the given term.
also provides a summary of the information that were discussed in the body.
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Reference Directions: Write a paragraph with at least 3-5 sentences explaining concept
paper and how it differs from other forms of academic writing. Use the space
[Big data analysis, data storage, global analytics flat vector illustration design]
provided below (10 pts.).
(n.d.). Retrieved from https://www.vecteezy.com/vector-art/268947-big-
data-analysis-data-storage-global-analytics-flat-vector-illustration-design __________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Concept Papers: What They Are and How to Write Them? (n.d.). Retrieved from __________________________________________________________________
https://custompapers.com/essays-articles/concept-papers/ __________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
DiscoverPhDs (2020). What is a Concept Paper and How do You Write One?
__________________________________________________________________
Retrieved from https://www.discoverphds.com/blog/concept-paper
__________________________________________________________________
Lango, B. (2019). How to Write a Concept Paper with Practical Sample by Dr __________________________________________________________________
Lango. Retrieved from __________________________________________________________________
https://www.researchgate.net/publication/336150591_How_to_write_a __________________________________________________________________
_concept_paper_with_practical_sample_by_Dr_Lango
Valdez, P. (2016). English for the Globalized Classroom Series English for Academic
and Professional Purposes. Pp. 56 - 64. Quezon City: Phoenix Publishing
House, Inc.
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Rubric for Grading: more effective products and services. Also, it aims to practice a social objective
rather than a financial one (Abuso, 2011).
Criteria Description/Indication Points
Content The insights are relevant to the topic 5 Questions:
The output shows unity of ideas. The ideas are 1. What is the selection about?
Organization of
arranged logically, and the relationships are clear 3 ____________________________________________________________
Ideas
due to the skillful use of cohesive devices. ____________________________________________________________
Grammar and The insights were explained using correct grammar ____________________________________________________________
2
Vocabulary and spelling of words. ____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Informal Definition: ____________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
2. Blog
Assessment 5. Exercise
Directions: Write a formal and informal definition of the following terms (10 pts. Formal Definition: _____________________________________________
each). ____________________________________________________________
1. Smartphone Informal Definition: ____________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Formal Definition: _____________________________________________
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