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Sample IELTS Argumentative Essay

Teachers are still essential in education for three main reasons: 1) They encourage and discipline students, helping to stimulate their desire to learn, especially for young learners. 2) They serve as role models and teach important social skills and values that cannot be learned from machines alone. 3) While computers offer convenience for learning anywhere at any time, teachers are still needed to encourage learning and teach interpersonal skills.

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Sample IELTS Argumentative Essay

Teachers are still essential in education for three main reasons: 1) They encourage and discipline students, helping to stimulate their desire to learn, especially for young learners. 2) They serve as role models and teach important social skills and values that cannot be learned from machines alone. 3) While computers offer convenience for learning anywhere at any time, teachers are still needed to encourage learning and teach interpersonal skills.

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Sample IELTS argumentative Essay

Text Organisation  Language Features 

general topic   Technology is being used increasingly in the classroom and some  
 statement of position
people believe that educators will become redundant. I somewhat  
(specific topic)
disagree that teachers will be replaced by machines.   
 
   
 
sub-argument 1
The main reason why I think that teachers are essential is because  

  they encourage and discipline students. Many people find it  

  difficult to be interested in learning new things. Therefore Sequencing word

 
support educators are needed to make classes more interesting and
   
stimulate students’ desires for learning. Also, in the case of young
   
people, teachers often need to force students to learn through the
   
use of punishments. 
   Sequencing word
Another reason why teachers are needed is because they can teach
sub-argument 2  
young people important skills and values. This is because
 
 
support
educators serve as role models to their students and teach them
 condition
  how to appropriately interact with their peers. Therefore, if people
 
  only learn using machines they will lose the opportunity to learn
 
  important social skills and values.  
 
 Concession However, studying over the internet certainly offers a lot of
 use of concession words
  convenience. First, we are able to study in the comfort of our own
 
support homes, without the need to commute to school. Second, we can
   
choose to study at any time we like even in the middle of the night.
   
In summary, I somewhat disagree that machines can replace
    
teachers. This is because teachers can encourage students to learn
summary of main points and teach them how to interact with other people. Although,  Signal of conclusion
  
computers do offer the ability for people to learn anywhere at any  
opinion
time.   
 
use of concession words
 
 
 
 
 

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