Rhetorical Analysis of Visual Text
Rhetorical Analysis of Visual Text
Edward Simmons
Prof. Cook
ENG 1201
29 September 2021
Though I'm technically a child of the '80s, I didn't find myself introduced to the song One
More Try by George Michael himself. I never even saw his video until a decade later on pop-up
video where they detailed bits and pieces of little-known and interesting facts about the recording
of the song, video, and artist. I didn't fall in love with the music itself until I heard it sang by a
then-emerging girl group known as Divine. They are technically remembered as one-hit wonders
even though they released two singles from their debut album.
With George Michael's version, in this version, we are given a soaring ballad that moves
from haunting lower tones to deeply moving fully belted notes that leave the listener sobbing.
The video setting in a coldly hazily lit mansion, where Michaels's furniture was draped with drop
clothes coupled with Michaels's powerful tenor vocal range, takes the viewer/listener on an
emotional ride they won't soon forget. I feel like this song is one of the classic breakup songs, a
song so cathartic that it brings up all the feelings of betrayal, loss, and heartbreak and washes
Even the lyrics that Michael chose to use in the song held a weight that the adolescents
who listened so aptly weren't fully equipped to grasp in total, for instance.
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'Cause Teacher
Made me cry
Michael uses the analogy of a teacher as he describes his past relationships. He was
alluding that each love we experience in life teaches us unique life lessons that often leave us
scared and reluctant to venture into love again. Though he's grown from the experiences, he
doesn't want to learn to love, hold, or touch another person, only to have them leave him hurt and
broken again. This feeling is a feeling I can say with moderate certainty we all have felt at one
George Michael will ever have a place in the pop hall of fame for this masterwork in
balladry so that it was honored by the R&B group Divine. It was their second single, and the
ladies took to the song as if it had been for them. The combined vocals of Nikki Bratcher, Kia
Thornton, and Tonia Tash brought a depth to the music that one voice couldn't achieve alone.
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Divine's video was staged so much more differently than George Michael's, where his video
immediately exuded a sense of isolation and sadness. Divine's video was set in what looked to be
a Japanese tea house or something to that effect; they were even dressed in modernize Japanese-
inspired clothing. With that aside, the women still deliver fantastic performances with the
complexity of their three-part harmonies. They bring a warmth and sense of being enveloped in
You become lost in the musicality of the artists and bypass the odd imagery of the video
with its sentient incense smoke, Asian themes of rickshaws, and tea sets. The scene in the video
that gave light to any hint of sadness was the scene at the 2:07 time mark where they are
primarily dressed in black in a black room that was foggy with black stone spheres scattered
around them.
As they sang about sitting at the feet of their lover and not knowing the danger they were
in, they now felt the heat of their anger and betrayal. They learn that though in the beginning,
love can be a pretty and shiny thing, that doesn't last once the honeymoon phase is over you get
to see a person for who they are, and you no longer have the blinders of love available to gloss
Nothing is left out in this rendition of the song; it gained weight and depth from the new
arrangement and sound. It was brought forward into a new genre and decade and exposed the
music to a new audience. However, both versions might be seen as less than desirable amongst
today's youth. I think it would still be a timeless classic that reaches multiple audiences from
men to women of all ages, cultures, and ethnicities because we've been unlucky in love.
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Works Cited
"One More Try." YouTube, GAMAN WORLDWIDE MUSIC VIDEOS, 28 Dec. 2007,
https://youtu.be/cC8gRv-JsjM. Accessed 2 Oct. 2021.
“One More Try.” YouTube, GAMAN WORLDWIDE MUSIC VIDEOS, 28 Dec. 2007,
https://youtu.be/cC8gRv-JsjM. Accessed 2 Oct. 2021.