I See You - Script - Official - White
I See You - Script - Official - White
I See You - Script - Official - White
by Devon Graye
ZODIAC FEATURES
Adam Randall, Director
May 2nd, 2018
DARKNESS
One of the boys peels away from the others on his bicycle,
his friends waving and hollering as he goes. This is JUSTIN
WHITTIER (10), at ease in his ever-predictable community.
The large living room, quiet and eerie. The TV is on, volume
muted, its light flickering across the room. Fire embers
slowly die in the fire place.
CONNER
Something’s burning.
She snaps out of it, notices the pancake burning in the pan
in front. She quickly turns down the heat.
JACKIE
Damnit.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 3.
CONNER
My birthday isn’t for another two
months.
JACKIE
I know that. I can make you
pancakes.
CONNER
I’m good.
JACKIE
Please, don’t do that.
CONNER
Who’s that?
JACKIE
Have you seen my mug? The one with
the sunflowers?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
You need money for lunch?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
I’m going to be late.
She lingers for a moment longer, then exits into the garage.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 4.
GREG
You should’ve gone for the
pancakes.
CONNER (O.S.)
And given her the satisfaction?
CONNER (CONT’D)
So when did you start sleeping on
the couch?
GREG
Oh, nah, I...I just keep passing
out in front of the TV.
CONNER
I mean, not that I blame you. It
was a pretty shitty thing, what she
did.
GREG
Hey, language.
GREG (CONT’D) *
So, you’re getting into fights now? *
CONNER *
They were being assholes. *
GREG *
That’s no excuse, Conner. You can’t *
just... life is full of assholes... *
GREG (CONT’D) *
Look, I know things between your *
mom and me have been -- *
CONNER *
That has nothing to do with this. *
A heaviness hangs. *
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 5.
GREG *
So whats the other kid look like? *
CONNER *
There were two kids. One of them *
cried. *
GREG
Yeah.
JACKIE (V.O.)
Hey, it’s me.
JACKIE (V.O.)
I didn’t want to wake you earlier.
But... there’s pancakes, if you
want, I made, so. And-
GREG
That’s why you’re calling?
JACKIE
I- Conner didn’t want-
GREG
I already ate. I’ll see you later.
He hangs up.
Open window behind him, Greg walks to the mug on the edge of
the roof. He picks it up. Cigarette butts float at the
bottom.
GREG
Jesus Christ, Conner.
LYDIA (O.S.)
(PRELAP)
I feel bad. Obviously.
LYDIA
And this journal? It isn’t helping.
LYDIA (CONT’D)
It didn’t stop me, anyway.
JACKIE
One step at a time.
LYDIA
Yeah, that’s what you said last
time. I broke someone’s arm, so...
JACKIE
Why do you think you relapsed?
LYDIA
I don’t know. Maybe I’m just
rotting, underneath.
A quiet beat.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 7.
LYDIA (CONT’D)
Our Pastor started a new sermon
this month on sin. He quoted a
verse. Proverbs 20:22 “Do not say,
‘I will repay evil,’ wait for the
Lord, evade the devil.”
JACKIE
What does that mean to you?
LYDIA
What does it mean? It means stop
doing stupid shit.
Jackie smiles.
LYDIA (CONT’D)
Doctor Harper... Do you believe in
evil?
JACKIE
No.
SPITZKY (O.S.)
You gotta be shitting me.
GREG
Can you at least act surprised?
SPITZKY
You got five minutes.
POLICE FORCE
SURPRISE!!!
SPITZKY
What’s that? The beach is calling
in Tahiti. Enjoy my cake while
you’re all chained to your desks.
OFFICER CALEB
Someone almost ruined the surprise.
GREG
Long morning.
OFFICER CALEB
Well, I think it’s about to get
longer. Davis wants to see you in
her office.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Justin Whitter. Ten-years-old. Went
missing on a bike-ride last night
near Troubadour Park. Park ranger
found the bike, no boy.
GREG
Just like Michael King.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
We’re not sure if the two are
connected. Michael King was
abducted cycling to a corner store
in the city. Justin Whitter is a
local boy. Good home, respected
family. He went missing on county
lines, but as of nine o’clock this
morning, the case was ruled ours.
GREG
Does Spitz know about this?
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
It’ll be up to him if he wants to
get involved.
GREG
He’ll want to get involved.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
I’ll let you manage the situation
as you see fit.
(then)
You’re lead on this.
GREG
Right.
Greg looks back to the smiling face of the cute little boy in
the case file. CLOSE ON the boy’s face as we transition to --
21 OMITTED 21 *
One of the TEACHERS exits the church and whispers into the
ear of another teacher, prompting sudden alarm. It’s eerie. *
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 10.
As she enters the kitchen her phone BUZZES, a call coming in.
Jackie angrily ignores it, once again. Her eyes stop at
something in the kitchen -- the silverware rack is empty, all
of it missing from the open drawer.
JACKIE
Conner? Gregg?
Nothing.
Jackie stealthily makes her way along the hallway towards the
master bedroom.
JACKIE
Greg?
She nearly screams, eyes wide with panic. She goes to step
backwards but the man suddenly turns towards her.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Oh my god! Oh god!!
STRANGER
Whoa. Whoa, lady! Easy. I’m just
the window-repairman. Easy, easy.
I’m not gonna hurt ya.
JACKIE
What are you doing here?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 11.
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN
Your husband called about a broken
window. Just finished putting in a
new one for ya.
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN
Okey-dokey. Give me a jingle if ya
have any problems with it.
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN (CONT’D)
Ya have a good day now.
JACKIE
Oh... Thank you.
He’s half way out the door when it suddenly dawns on her-
JACKIE (CONT’D)
How did you... who let you in?
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN
Huh? Oh, that kid of yours- very
polite.
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN (CONT’D)
You’ve trained her well.
JACKIE
I’m sorry? Who?
But he’s already out the door, talking on his cell. Jackie
stares ahead, uneasy. She glances up the stairs. The landing
looms. Foreboding.
OFFICER CALEB
...and anything you find could be
important. Justin Whitter was last
seen wearing a blue soccer jersey,
jeans and red tennis shoes. His
bicycle...
Her voice trails off as Greg and Spitzky walk towards the car
park. Spitzky eyes the TV REPORTERS and CAMERA MEN.
SPITZKY
Media’s gonna make a circus out of
this thing. The whole town’s
already talking about it.
(pointedly to Greg)
They’re going to want answers, you
know? And fast.
Greg nods, trying not to let the pressure get to him. In the
background, the officers and civilians depart into the wooded
terrain.
GREG
We need lab analysis from samples
of the mud in the parking lot. Had
to get the kid out of here somehow
right? Might have tracked something
in on his vehicle.
SPITZKY
Probably looking at a sedan or a
coupe of some kind. Would’ve taken
the bike otherwise.
GREG
Unless he wanted us to find it.
SPITZKY
You know, Denise and I went through
that rough patch end of last year.
GREG
Spitz.
SPITZKY
I’m not saying I know anything,
just there was a counselor who --
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 13.
GREG
Jackie is a counselor.
(beat)
We’re fine.
SPITZKY
I know someone who’d like you not
to be.
Greg follows his gaze and sees Officer Caleb standing in the
tall grass. She smiles innocently, catching his eye. She
turns away and Spitzy elbows Greg playfully.
GREG
Stop.
SPITZKY
Step aside, people. Nobody touch
anything.
SPITZKY (CONT’D)
Jesus Christ.
OFFICER CALEB
Sir, should we take it in?
SPITZKY GREG
Yes, you... Yeah, pho...
GREG (CONT’D)
Yeah. Photograph it. Then bag it.
Thanks, Caleb.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 14.
Greg smiles at her and she smiles back. Spitzky moves away,
looking like he’s about to be sick. Greg follows.
GREG (CONT’D)
You okay?
SPITZKY
You remember Cole Gordon? It was
before your time but you must have-
GREG
Yeah, of course, who doesn’t
remember - the green knives?
SPITZKY
Seven boys. All found buried with
those knives.
GREG
But he’s-
SPITZKY
I know. I helped put him there. He
ain’t getting out.
GREG
So what does that mean?
JACKIE
Could you pass me the dressing?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Thank you.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
How was school?
CONNER
(sarcastic enthusiasm)
It was the best. I love school.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 15.
JACKIE
Conner.
(beat)
Conner?
CONNER
What?
JACKIE
Did you let a repairman in today
when I wasn’t here?
CONNER
Jesus, mom, is that who it was? Did
you screw a repairman?
JACKIE
I know your angry-
CONNER
How could you do that? How could
you do that to Dad?
CONNER (CONT’D)
Who was it?
JACKIE
Just someone. An old...friend.
CONNER
You don’t get to do that. You don’t
ever get to do that again!
CONNER (CONT’D)
You don’t get to act like nothing
happened. You think pancakes will
make it all okay?
JACKIE
Conner stop, please...
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 16.
CONNER
You ruined our family and you
should fucking pay for it!
JACKIE
STOP IT!!
CONNER
Jesus Christ, mom.
CONNER (CONT’D) *
I’m going out! *
29 OMITTED 29 *
REPORTER
(ON TV)
... Whitter is the second boy
reported missing in the last month.
Nine-year-old Michael King, went
missing two blocks from his...
REPORTER (CONT’D)
(ON TV)
...are urging parents to keep young
children close and supervised at
all times. At a press conference
today...
The door from the garage OPENS and Jackie jumps, spinning
around to face -- Greg. He stares at her, blankly.
GREG
What?
JACKIE
Hi. I didn’t hear you pull in.
(beat)
I tried calling you a bunch. How
was your day?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
You broke a window?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
I called and reported that
repairman they sent out. There was
something wrong with him. I think
he stole from us.
GREG
You what?
JACKIE
The silverware is completely gone.
Look in the drawer. And he made up
some story. About a girl helping
and --
GREG
Why would he take our shitty
silverware?
JACKIE
I don’t know, Greg, but it isn’t
there. His superiors are going to
look into it.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 18.
GREG
What is wrong with you?
GREG (CONT’D)
Take some more of your pills. Get
it together.
MRS. WHITTER
(ON TV)
...he’s very excited about starting
5th grade. He picked out red
sneakers just especially for...
32 OMITTED 32
33 OMITTED 33
Greg stands over the sink, removing his watch and ring. He
notices Jackie’s prescription medications and picks it up. It
reads: HARPER, JACQUELINE. AMBIEN 10MG TABLETS
GREG
Hey, how’d you get in here?
Greg enters just in time to see the hamster scurry into the
ajar walk-in closet. He swings the door back and enters.
GREG
Come on, I’m not gonna hurt you.
Suddenly, the closet door SLAMS shut behind him trapping him
in the darkness.
GREG (CONT’D)
Conner?
In the shadows, Greg feels along the door for the knob. It’s
locked.
GREG (CONT’D)
Come on, Conner.
GREG (CONT’D)
Okay, you’re hilarious! Conner, let
me out now!
GREG (CONT’D)
(timid)
Conner?
GREG (CONT’D)
Conner! Open up!!
JACKIE
Greg?
GREG
Jesus, Jackie. What were you doing?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 20.
JACKIE
Nothing. I heard you knocking and --
GREG
Where’s Conner?
JACKIE
He’s at the movies. Greg, what’s
going on?
JACKIE
Anything?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
You wanna call the station?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
I think you’re just really tried.
We both are.
(beat)
Why don’t you sleep upstairs
tonight?
GREG
Yeah. I’m gonna move some stuff
over to the guest room.
JACKIE
Greg, I know you can’t just forgive
me. I don’t expect you to. I really
don’t. But I want you to know, I’m
committed to fixing this.
GREG
Did you want to get married?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 21.
JACKIE
What? I -- what are you talking
about?
GREG
If it wasn’t for Conner would you
have married me?
JACKIE
Yes. I mean...yes.
GREG
You sure about that? A shitty cop
making shitty pay. An out of
towner? Your parents hated me...
JACKIE
My parents didn’t hate you.
GREG
Your dad hated me. He knew I wasn’t
going to provide for you like he
did. Like he did with this fucking
house.
JACKIE
I never needed you to provide for *
me. I never wanted that.
GREG
I wanted that.
GREG (CONT’D)
You think we’d still be together if
you hadn’t gotten pregnant?
JACKIE
I’m glad things worked out the way
they did.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
This is your issue. I’ve wanted to
make this marriage work.
GREG
You know your blouse is ripped?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 22.
JACKIE
I didn’t...
GREG
Get some sleep.
Back to the lake. The light’s color has changed to blue and
red -- police lights, bright, lighting up the distant lake.
Jackie makes her way along the dimly lit corridor. The voices
trail from Conner’s room. Another shout and a gun shot.
JACKIE
Conner?
She notices a few old toys sticking out from under the bed.
She kneels down to tidy them.
VOICE (O.S.)
What are you doing?
JACKIE
Conner. Where were you?
CONNER
I was thirsty.
JACKIE
Your computer was - isn’t it a
little late to be playing video
games?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
I’m taking you to school tomorrow.
CONNER
What? Why?
JACKIE
That’s the end of it.
CONNER
I’m not gonna get kidnapped, mom.
Jackie looks back to the toys, she picks one up, fondly.
JACKIE
God, I haven’t seen some of these
in forever. Moo Cow. Remember him?
CONNER
Not really.
CONNER (CONT’D)
Mom?
JACKIE
Sweet dreams.
She kisses the top of his head and leaves the room.
We lurk along the passage, all lights off now, the Harper
family sound-asleep. We careen toward an open door at the end
of the hall. A hand-painted sign dangles in the center,
stating: GUEST SUITE.
GREG
Hello?
(squinting at his watch)
Yeah, okay. I’ll be right there.
GREG (CONT’D)
You gotta be kidding me.
GREG
What I miss?
GREG (CONT’D)
Cole Gordon?
SPITZKY
A closed case. I get pulled out of
bed for this...
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
You know why you’re here, Spitz.
It’s an exact match M.O. of a
serial child abductor you put away
fifteen years ago.
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 26.
Davis pulls out some of the crime scene photos: boys hog tied
in shallow graves.
SPITZKY
Jesus. Put that shit away.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Gordon’s defense attorney is trying
to use it to build a case for a
mistrial.
GREG
Sure didn’t waste any time.
SPITZKY
Well, I’m sorry to disappoint the
dickhead lawyer, but Gordon was a
convicted pedophile with a trunk
packed full of those knives. Not to
mention the clothing from half a
dozen of the victims we found at
his house.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
So it’s probably a copycat. But we
need to get in front of this. I’m
having Larson track down the two
boys who escaped. Braun and
Travers.
SPITZKY
Jesus Christ --
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Fifteen years is a long time. They
may remember details now that could
help impede Gordon’s defense.
SPITZKY
I wasn’t wrong. I interviewed both
those boys extensively when it
happened and there was no doubt -
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 27.
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Then why did you end up with us,
Ray?
GREG
Get us addresses.
A make shift gazebo with signage for a search party sign up.
A51 EXT. EDGE WATER DRIVE / HARPER RESIDENCE - EARLY MORNING A51
Jackie removes the vacuum from the kitchen pantry. Her cell
BUZZES on the counter where it lies charging. She looks at
it: TODD: I’m outside.
JACKIE
Jesus Christ, Todd!
Exasperated, Jackie heads for the front door. She slips her
cell in her pocket as she goes.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 28.
JACKIE
(angry whisper)
What are you doing here?!
TODD
I took the bus out this morning.
I’ve been staying with a college
buddy in Brecksville. God, I miss
you so much. Did you get any of my
messages?
JACKIE
Todd, you cannot be here! My son is
upstairs.
TODD
Well, let’s go somewhere then. Take
the day off work. You look crazy
sexy right now.
JACKIE
Oh my god, Todd, stop.
TODD
Did you get any of my texts? Did I
freak you out by what I said last
time? Because I didn’t --
JACKIE
Todd...
TODD
Jack, I’m just gonna say it.
(beat)
I’m in love with you.
JACKIE
I used you. We were using each
other.
TODD
I wasn’t.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 29.
JACKIE
Well, I was. I don’t want to be
with you.
TODD
I know you’re scared. I’m scared
too, but what we have --
JACKIE
Todd, stop-
TODD
We have to try-
JACKIE
Oh my god! OH MY GOD!
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Todd?
TODD
(out of it)
What the hell?
JACKIE
(harsh whisper)
Conner?
(then)
Todd, are you okay? Can I see it?
TODD
I’m okay. I just gotta sit down for
a minute.
JACKIE
No. This way.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 30.
She pulls him away from the kitchen door, to the other side
of the house.
54 OMITTED 54 *
Jackie helps the disoriented Todd down the steps leading from
the storm doors.
TODD
This reminds me of high school.
Sneaking into your parents
basement.
CONNER
Mom?
Immediate silence.
JACKIE
There’s a lot of blood. We need to
get you to the ER.
TODD
You make a sexy nurse.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 31.
CONNER
Hello?
It’s empty, save for the sheetless bed and cheap IKEA
nightstand.
JACKIE
Okay, as soon as Conner goes to
school, I’m taking you to the
hospital. Todd?
TODD
Yeah. Sounds good.
JACKIE
Where’s your phone? You’re calling
me.
TODD
(out of it)
What?
JACKIE
You’re calling me.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Hello? Hello? Todd, did you leave
your phone somewhere?
TODD
(eyes closed, oblivious)
My phone.
The phone BUZZES again. It’s “TODD”. Jackie answers and MUSIC
trails...
Jackie suddenly goes numb. She lowers the phone as her neck
cranes up. The soothing MUSIC continues at same volume. It’s
coming from upstairs.
CONNER
Mom?
JACKIE
Conner. Jesus Christ. Did you turn
this on?
CONNER
No.
JACKIE
Were you just up on the roof?
CONNER
What? No. What are you doing?
CONNER (CONT’D)
You said that you were taking me to
school.
JACKIE
I am.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 33.
CONNER
Is something wrong?
JACKIE
Get in the car. I’ll be right
there.
JACKIE
Keep that there. I have to take
Connor to school, but I’ll be back
in less than twenty, okay? Just
keep applying pressure and don’t
stand up... Or lie down.
65 OMITTED 65 *
JACKIE *
Conner, if you did something...if *
you were upset and you... *
CONNER *
Mom, what are you talking about? *
Jackie puts the car into gear and backs out to the driveway. *
JACKIE *
Just...you can tell me. I won’t be *
mad. *
CONNER *
I’m gonna be late. *
CONNER (CONT’D) *
Mom! *
MRS. WHITTER *
I’m sorry to bother you, Mrs. *
Harper. *
JACKIE *
Mrs. Whitter. No, it’s alright. I’m *
so sorry for...your son...all that *
you’re going through. *
MRS. WHITTER *
Has he heard anything? Your *
husband? *
JACKIE *
I...I’m not sure. I know they’re *
doing everything they can. *
MRS. WHITTER *
There’s more happening here. I can *
feel it. Can’t you feel it? *
Something darker. *
JACKIE *
They’re gonna find him. Greg will *
find him. *
B67 From the guest bedroom window we see Mrs Whitter putting up
B67a *
poster outside the house. *
BLACK OUT.
68 OMITTED 68
MR. BRAUN
But he went to prison. He’s locked
away.
SPITZKY
To the best of our knowledge, he
is, Mr. Braun. But --
MRS. BRAUN
Then why you here?
MR. BRAUN
Carol.
SPITZKY
Mr. Braun, we’d like to speak to
your son, if that’s possible.
MRS. BRAUN
Isn’t possible.
MR. BRAUN
Carol, please --
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 36.
MRS. BRAUN
Tommy’s away at school. In college.
SPITZKY
That’s great. I’m glad to hear it.
GREG
You got a little one, Mrs. Braun?
MRS. BRAUN
My sister’s kid. Stays here
sometimes.
SPITZKY
Is there a number where we can
reach Tommy? At this point in the
investigation he could --
MRS. BRAUN
He won’t want to talk with you.
Tommy’s moved on with his life. We
all have.
SPITZKY
Well, that’s very understandable.
Thank you both for your time.
MR. BRAUN
(blurting)
He’s out back.
70 OMITTED 70
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 37.
MR. BRAUN
Tommy, there are some nice people
here to see you.
TOMMY
I’m busy, on my models.
SPITZKY
Tommy, do you remember me? Officer
Spitzky?
SPITZKY (CONT’D)
It’s been a long time, Tommy. I
still have that Brontosaurus you
gave me. Taking good care of him.
(beat)
Tommy?
Suddenly, Tommy spins around and we see his face for the
first time -- a grotesque mess of fried, twisted flesh. His
two beady eyes are the only distinguishable human qualities
to be found.
MRS. BRAUN
Step aside. Step aside.
(cradling Tommy)
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 38.
Greg goes to get in the car. Spitzky talks over the car to *
him. *
SPITZKY *
Did that to himself. The kid. After *
it happened. Doused himself in *
kerosene. Lit a match. *
GREG *
Jesus. *
SPITZKY *
Sometimes... Hard to make sense of *
this world. *
GREG *
Let’s have another look at *
Troubador Park. See if we missed *
something now the circus has left. *
SPITZKY *
It’s your show. *
DRIVE-BY SHOTS:
The church lawn is also empty, the marquee now reading: “OUR
PRAYER’S ARE WITH YOU, JUSTIN.” *
Spitzky and Greg pass, heading deeper into the woods where
the bike was found.
GREG
You think he knew him?
SPITZKY
What?
GREG
Justin Whittier, chances are he
knew the kidnapper.
SPITZKY
Maybe.
GREG
Kid’s on his bike, perp must have
gotten his attention somehow right?
GREG (CONT’D)
Gets Whittier’s attention. Gets him
to stop for a moment. Lures him in
with something. Want some candy
type deal.
GREG (CONT’D)
Brings him in close and sweeps him
into his vehicle.
SPITZKY
Or he incapacitated him.
GREG
Holy shit.
JACKIE
Todd, I’m sorry that took so --
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh. Oh.
Jesus.
76 OMITTED 76 *
SPITZKY (V.O.) *
Can you start by telling me a *
little bit of what happened? *
Back to scene:
SPITZKY (V.O.)
(on tape recorder)
What were you doing there?
OFFICER CALEB
Detective Spitzky went home for the
day?
GREG
Hmmm?
OFFICER CALEB
The pocket knives in the victim’s
hands. Did psych ever have a theory
on that?
GREG
Um, yeah. They think, they thought,
that he’d get them to fight each
other.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 42.
Greg hands the sheet to officer Caleb. She pores over the
paper haphazardly.
OFFICER CALEB
My God. Pathological. You think
that’s right?
GREG
(shrugging)
Maybe. Maybe.
OFFICER CALEB
I wanted to give you this. It’s
super silly, but I thought you
could... I dunno. Here.
GREG
You’re religious, Caleb?
OFFICER CALEB
I dunno. Yeah, kind of. I guess I
like thinking there’s something
bigger out there. Something in
control. What about you?
Greg sets the coin down beside the gruesome crime photos. He
eyes the two beside each other.
GREG
(heavy, almost to himself)
Control.
(then)
I’d like to think that too.
GREG (CONT’D)
(sincerely)
Thank you.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 43.
78 OMITTED 78 *
JACKIE
(petrified)
Help me.
GREG
How...I mean, Jesus Christ, Jackie.
How did this happen?
JACKIE
He wasn’t like this when I left.
His head wasn’t... he was fine. He
wasn’t like this.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
He’s dead, isn’t he?
JACKIE (CONT’D)
What do we do?! Oh my god. Oh god.
Is there someone you can call?
GREG
Walk me through what happened.
Everything.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 44.
JACKIE
We were talking.
GREG
Just talking?
JACKIE
Yes. We were talking by the side of
the house. I explained we... that
it was over and then out of
nowhere, the mug just... fell...
GREG
Why didn’t you call an ambulance?
JACKIE
Because he seemed fine!
(beat)
Greg, it was Conner.
GREG
What?
JACKIE
He was upstairs and, I don’t know,
He’s just been so angry--
GREG
So he tried to kill someone?
JACKIE
No. He... Maybe it was an accident.
This hangs.
GREG
Shit, Jackie. Jesus Christ!
JACKIE
I don’t understand what’s
happening. I feel like I’m losing
it.
GREG
You don’t get to lose it right now.
GREG (CONT’D)
Do you know what will happen to our
son if he’s convicted?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 45.
JACKIE
Oh my god. Oh my god. Greg.
GREG
I’ve got some tarp down here. We
need to get rid of the body.
JACKIE
What? No. We can’t-
GREG
Jackie. Connor, fuck, Connor will
be-
JACKIE
We can’t. Just throw him in a hole
somewhere-
GREG
Look, I understand you have
feelings for the man-
JACKIE
Stop!
GREG
Go change out of those clothes. *
Tell Conner we’ll be back soon. *
The minivan pulls into the secluded entrance and carries down
a narrow, dirt road.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 46.
GREG
Let’s go.
GREG (CONT’D)
On three.
GREG (CONT’D)
One, two, THREE.
CONNER *
Hell yeah! You’re fuckin dead, *
noob! *
CONNER (CONT’D) *
Mom? *
Conner looks out from his bedroom. The corridor is dimly lit.
Threatening. The CLUNKING noise seems to be coming from --
CONNER
What the hell?
Greg shovels dirt back into the hole, lost in the repetition
of the task. Jackie sits nearby, quiet, stunned.
JACKIE
I’m sorry.
He pays no attention.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m sorry...
He quickly types. *
The caption reads: PHROGS. THE ROOMMATES YOU DON’T KNOW YOU *
LIVE WITH. *
The house sits quiet for several beats. The dirt caked
minivan returns, pulling into the garage.
Greg and Jackie sit like ghosts in the front of the vehicle.
They are disheveled, dirt-smeared and damp.
JACKIE
Greg?
He turns to her.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 49.
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Do you believe in evil?
GREG
Jesus, Jackie.
He takes a beat.
GREG (CONT’D)
Yes.
GREG
We need to clean up downstairs. Get
some towels to soak up the blood.
We’ll have to burn everything.
GREG (CONT’D)
Jackie?!
Greg rushes into the room. Jackie is bending down over the
bathtub. Greg’s eyes go wide. Conner has been positioned in
the bathtub, tightly tied by a pair of shoelaces. His mouth
is bound with duct tape.
GREG
Jesus Christ, Conner.
JACKIE
Help me! Help me.
Greg’s eyes fall on the soap dish across from him in the
bathtub. Sticking out of the bar of soap is a blade attached
to a small, green Swiss Army knife. Greg goes white.
GREG
He’s been drugged.
GREG (CONT’D)
I need to get you both out of here.
Now.
JACKIE
We need to call the police!
GREG
What did we just talk about?
JACKIE
Our son was just attacked in our
own home!
GREG
I’ll handle this, okay. Take Conner
to the hospital, get him checked
out and I’ll meet you there.
JACKIE
Greg, you can’t....
GREG
Jackie, I’ve got this.
JACKIE
Conner, honey, it’s okay. We’re
here.
GREG
Conner, who did this to you? Con,
can you tell me who did this to
you?
CONNER
(dazed, shaking)
The...frog. It was the frog.
High tension and fast paced. Greg situates Conner in the back
of the minivan. Jackie scrambles into the driver’s seat.
GREG
Drive straight to the hospital and
don’t stop for anything. I’ll call
you when I’m on my way.
Greg wildly slides the van door closed and pushes the button
to open the garage. Jackie looks to her husband, deeply
concerned.
JACKIE
Greg, come with us. Please.
GREG
I’m gonna find him, Jackie. I’m
gonna find the son of a bitch that
did this. Drive. Go!
JACKIE
Be careful. Promise me, you’ll be
careful.
GREG
I’ll be fine.
Spitzky sits at the table, rubbing his eyes, pouring over the
old case files. His CELL VIBRATES on the table and he looks
at it -- brow furrowing.
SPITZKY
Hello?
JACKIE
Ray? It’s Jackie. Harper.
SPITZKY
Jackie, hey. Everything okay?
JACKIE
Ray, someone was in our house and
they...they attacked Conner. I-
SPITZKY
What? Slow down.
JACKIE
Greg’s alone there now and... I
think you should go to him.
SPITZKY
Yeah, of course. I’m on my way.
JACKIE
Ray, he didn’t want anyone... You
know what he’s like.
SPITZKY
I’ll tread lightly.
101 INT. HARPER RESIDENCE, UPSTAIRS HALL/ GUEST ROOM - NIGHT 101 *
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Spitz?
He turns to her.
SPITZKY
No shit. Where?
LIEUTENANT DAVIS
Woods out by old Ranch Road, off
the 80. Harper isn’t answering his
cell.
SPITZKY
I can go pick him up. We’ll meet
you there.
Greg peers into the emptiness beneath the bed. He goes to the
window, looks out to the barren ledge. On the other side of
the room, is a little nook leading to a small window. He
stops dead -- taped to the walls on either side, are all the
missing photographs. A collage of cut up pictures, defaced
with markers depicting lewd acts. It’s deeply disturbing.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 54.
Greg steps into the room. The lights are all on. The fan is
whirling. He raises his gun.
GREG
Hello?!
He takes another step into the room and suddenly the power
goes out. Greg is plunged into darkness. Only moonlight
spills in through the windows.
GREG (CONT’D)
Who are you?! I will kill you, I
swear to god.
GREG (CONT’D)
Come out and show yourself! Coward!
CUT TO BLACK.
MINDY (V.O.)
Are you recording?
MINDY
Sorry, Best Buy, not everybody gets
a hard-on over tech shit.
MINDY
Shhh. Shh!
MINDY (CONT’D)
(low whisper)
It’s the son.
CUT TO:
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 56.
MINDY
I don’t see the red light.
He cracks up.
MINDY
Dude, Alec, stop messing around.
(getting serious)
Okay.
(turning it on)
My name is Mindy Bennett and I’ve
been waiting in these bushes since
5:30am. Waiting for the inhabitants
of this house to leave for work.
MINDY
Today, this house becomes our home.
(then)
Now, the plan is to wait for the
garage door to open, wait for the
driver to pull out and then run and
stop it before it closes all the
way. We saw the husband leave
almost an hour ago and we just saw
the son take off for school. So now
we’re just waiting on the wife.
Mindy runs out at the last possible second and dives under
the closing door. This causes the motion sensors to reopen
it.
Our camera operator scurries out from the bushes and joins
Mindy in --
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 57.
MINDY
Holy shit. That was so close. Did
you get that on camera? I thought
it wasn’t gonna happen.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Hell, yeah. That’s how you do it
like a pro. Let’s check out our new
digs.
Our camera explores the space. Mindy walks just in front. She
carries a medium sized rucksack, a duffle and a grocery bag
of snacks.
MINDY
Sweet entertainment system. Wonder
if they have any good movies.
The camera operator moves away from Mindy and into the
kitchen. Opens the fridge. Opens a few drawers. Looks in a
cookie jar -- it’s full of health bars.
MINDY (O.S.)
Shut up, they have Battlestar!
Alec, what are you doing in there?
Don’t break anything!
He returns the mug to the shelf and the camera turns back to
Mindy. She sits beside an open DVD drawer holding up a box
set of her favorite show.
MINDY (CONT’D)
I know what I’ll be doing...
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 58.
The camera pans the Harper family photos that line the
stairs. Mindy and the Operator ascend.
MINDY
Jesus, they take a lot of pictures.
(then)
Awe, look. So cute.
MINDY (O.S.)
Alec, come check this out! I found
our room!
117 INT. HARPER RESIDENCE, GUEST ROOM / CRAWL SPACE - MORNING 117
MINDY
Guest room, baby. This is the life. *
MINDY (CONT’D)
Eeew. These sheets are covered in
like a layer of dust.
She starts hitting the sheets. Mini dust clouds rise and she
coughs.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Nasty.
MINDY
Uh huh. Let me take you to our *
sleeping quarters. *
MINDY (CONT’D)
And at night we’re gonna sleep in
here.
She slides open a door to a long crawl space along the side
of the room.
MINDY
Okay, so I should probably tell you
a little bit about what we’re doing
here since you’re probably sitting
at home all confused right now. Um,
okay, this is a documentary, I
guess. Yeah, it’s to give all you a
look at how a professional Phrog
goes about Phrogging.
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 60.
MINDY (CONT'D)
They call us Phrogs, with a “P.H.”,
because we hop from pad to pad and
live undetected among the people
who actually live in the house.
Kind of like a roommate situation-
thingy, but, of course, they don’t
know we’re here. Usually we stay in
a place for no longer than four or
five days. Makes it harder to get
discovered. And it’s a good thing
these people have a guest room.
That’s what you want to look for, a
room you can make headquarters that
is rarely used by the family.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Hmmm. So, what else? Oh, okay. As
you can see, I am eating some of
their food. This is allowed since,
well, a girl’s gotta eat. We just
make sure not to take too much of
one thing. For the most part, we
try to disrupt their lives as
little as possible.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Jesus, Alec. Asshole.
The mask comes off, revealing ALEC TRAVERS (21). He’s a ball
of energy. Thin-framed, likeable, with a mop of messy hair
and a mischievous grin. He laughs.
MINDY (CONT’D)
And this disturbing creature is my
camera man, Alec.
ALEC
Is that all I am to you?
MINDY
(re: mask)
I can’t believe you brought that
grotesque thing with you.
ALEC
It’s fitting. It’s a frog. We are
phrogs.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 61.
MINDY
If you can believe it, Alec is also
my friend.
ALEC
Ahh...
MINDY
And I’m popping his Phrogging
cherry.
ALEC
You’re not popping anything of
mine.
MINDY
He’s never done this before, so I’m
showing him the ropes. While he
documents it all with his nifty
camera. I also let him pick out
this house.
ALEC
I sure know how to pick em’, huh?
MINDY
So far so good. These people have
exceptional taste in cereal.
ALEC
Woohoo! Point for me!
MINDY
(back to camera)
This is the best part of the day.
When we have the house to ourselves
and we can be loud and move about
freely. When they come home, we
have to stick to our hiding spots
and stay quiet.
ALEC
And that part’s gonna suck.
Mindy flips the camera on from her hiding spot in the closet.
She speaks a little above a whisper.
MINDY
It’s ten minutes after 2am and all *
is quiet in the house.
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 62.
MINDY (CONT'D)
Alec and I fell asleep and the
family must have come home while we
were passed out.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Alec.
(nothing)
Alec, are you awake?
The camera moves through the guest room. Mindy spots the
room’s open window. She quietly approaches, filming the
outdoors --
Alec sits smoking on the roof ledge that overlooks the side
yard. The sunflower mug sits beside him.
MINDY (O.S.)
Alec, dude, what the hell are you
doing?
ALEC
I was bored.
MINDY (O.S.)
You can’t just go outside whenever
you want.
ALEC
He just got home.
MINDY (O.S.)
Who?
ALEC
Greg. The husband.
MINDY (O.S.)
Did he see you?
ALEC
Yeah Mindy, he saw me. He waved.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 63.
MINDY (O.S.)
Alec, stop screwing around! Come
back inside. *
Relenting, Alec climbs to his feet and heads back inside the
house. He leaves the sunflower mug behind.
NIGHT VISION
ALEC
It’s show time...
He turns the camera back onto the room and ZOOMS in on Mindy
sleeping in the closet.
Alec films his slow, steady walk down the corridor. We’ve
seen this before, only now through a new lens.
Mindy crouches behind the side of the bed that faces away
from the door. Alec stands at the room’s open window, unlit *
cigarette dangling in his mouth, flicking his lighter on and *
off.
MINDY
Dude, are you insane? You want to *
set off a smoke alarm?
MINDY (CONT’D)
And sit down. We need to stay away
from the windows.
ALEC
(a little too loud)
Jesus, who knew this Phrogging
thing would give you such a stick
up your ass.
MINDY
Shhhh. Hushed voices.
MINDY (CONT’D)
I don’t think you understand how
dangerous this is, Alec.
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 65.
MINDY (CONT’D)
We could go to jail. We’re breaking
so many laws just by being here.
ALEC
I do understand. But isn’t that
part of the fun, almost getting
caught?
MINDY
No, the fun is to not come close to
getting caught.
Alec and Mindy are still hiding behind the bed. They continue
to speak quietly.
ALEC
You never told me this would be so
thrilling. I’ve officially
memorized the wallpaper.
Alec takes out a Yoda Pez dispenser and pops one in his
mouth.
ALEC (CONT’D)
Wanna play the word game?
MINDY
What is it with you and that word
game?
He shrugs.
ALEC
What else we gonna do?
MINDY
Don’t get all like... You’re the
one who’s been on at me to come
along. I was perfectly happy doing
this alone.
ALEC
I know. I’m glad to. Just thought
it would be a bit more... less
shit.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 66.
She laughs.
MINDY
Must be better than subways and
park benches.
ALEC
Just about.
ALEC (CONT’D)
When I was a kid, like 7, 8 years
old, my parents took me on a trip
to Buffalo. My mom taught me that
game on the way there. We must’ve
played it for like three hours
straight. My dad, he hated games,
but he got super into it. Like
nerding out on the word game. He
got so distracted that we ended up
in the middle of cow country. No
GPS, just the three of us trying to
figure our way out of there on the
map. For the next three days, all I
could smell was cow shit.
MINDY
That’s disgusting. That’s a
disgusting story.
ALEC
I know. It was a good trip though.
I remember being, like, happy the
whole time.
MINDY
Of course you were happy. You were
a kid, what wasn’t there to be
happy about?
MINDY (CONT’D)
Okay, I’m thinking of a seven
letter word that starts with “B”.
ALEC
B... b... bastard?
MINDY
Holy shit.
Mindy grabs Alec, and the two dive behind a large just as
Greg enters the room. He makes a beeline for the open window
and pulls himself through. Alec crawls out and takes a peek,
before Mindy yanks him back down.
Moments later, Greg climbs back through. The two watch his
feet pass and him descend the steps.
ALEC
Someone’s having a bad day.
MINDY
He found the mug. Jesus Alec...
ALEC
Relax. They have a teenage son.
MINDY
Yeah, who will probably get his ass
kicked now because of you. In case
you haven’t noticed, daddy has some
anger management issues to work
out.
MINDY
Mission accomplished. There’s so
many places to hide shit down
there. If we need a quick escape... *
ALEC
Check it out.
MINDY
How did you do that?
ALEC
I downloaded an app. They keep
their wifi password next to the
chore chart.
(to TV)
I own you, bitch.
MINDY
You are such a freak.
ALEC
Wouldn’t it be kind of funny to
mess with them? Take some random
shit and make them think they’re
going crazy?
MINDY
No, it wouldn’t. Stop touching
stuff.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Shit. Don’t move.
WINDOW-REPAIR MAN
Umm... I see ya in there. Care to
let me in? Someone called about a
broken window.
She turns, he’s looking right at her through the front door
window.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 69.
MINDY
Shit, Alec. What do I do?
ALEC
Let him in, he doesn’t know you
don’t live here.
WINDOW-REPAIR MAN
Miss? Should I come back later?
MINDY
(to repair man)
Just a second.
WINDOW-REPAIR MAN
Hi. Got a call about a broken
window?
MINDY
Yes, that was my dad. Right this
way.
She ushers the older man into the house, stealing a shrugging
glance at Alec. Alec watches them head upstairs and then
turns back to the open silverware drawer.
A CAMERA:
Just then the GARAGE DOOR roars below. Alec grabs the camera.
Alec spins the camera around to find Mindy motioning for Alec *
to follow.
Alec crouches behind the bed filming Mindy with his digital
camera. She stands in the closet doorway, listening.
JACKIE (O.S.)
(screaming)
Oh my god! Oh god, who are you??!
WINDOW-REPAIRMAN (O.S.)
Whoa. Whoa, lady! Easy. I’m just
the window-repairman. Easy, easy.
I’m not gonna hurt ya.
MINDY
(whispering)
Okay, that’s it. No more going
downstairs while they’re gone. *
Alec and Mindy sit in the closet, both on their smart phones.
They intently read/play games as Alec absentmindedly hums
aggressively at his video-game.
ALEC
Ha-ha! Level 59. Boo-ya, asshole.
MINDY
Oh, shit. This is so messed-up.
Another kid got swiped. Right here
in this town.
ALEC
(eyes still glued to his
game)
What?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 71.
MINDY
Justin Whitter. Do we know him? Ten-
years old.
ALEC
I kinda stopped hanging out with
ten year olds, you know, when I was
ten.
MINDY
He’s got brown hair, blue eyes.
Last seen wearing a blue soccer
jersey. Went missing in Troubadour
Park.
ALEC
Sucks for him.
ALEC (CONT’D) *
Think fast. Gotta stay hydrated. *
Greg lingers mid-way up the stairs and eyes the new missing *
photograph. Alec peers out of Conner’s room, watching him. *
JUMP CUTS:
GREG (O.S.)
Hey, how’d you get in here?
Alec moves in fast, firmly slamming the closet door and using
the lacrosse stick to jam it. The handle shakes from within.
Greg bangs on the door. Alec waits, patient.
Alec moves in, stepping right up to the door, face less than
an inch away.
The trees sway, their branches MOANING with the SHRILL WIND.
The lights are now off. Conner is passed out in his bed.
Alec quietly emerges from under the bed and slips out into
the hall. He pulls the frog mask down over his face.
Greg snores alone beneath the stale covers. The WIND HOWLS,
vibrating against the room’s window. Alec enters the room. He
gently pulls back Greg’s covers, gets up on the bed and
stands over him, straddling his body.
Alec goes to climb out the window. The chair he uses for
footing topples over, slamming to the floor. Below, a loud
crash and glass shattering. Alec freezes... when it’s clear
that nothing is coming he continues onto the roof.
MINDY
Alec?
MINDY
Alec, get inside! Right now. What
if someone sees you?
MINDY (CONT’D)
What happened to the bed?
ALEC
Husband pissed himself.
(then)
Or at least so he thinks...
MINDY
What?! What are you talking about?
That’s it. We’re done. The minute
they leave the house today, we’re
gone.
ALEC
Fine, you can go.
MINDY
No. No. We are both leaving! Stand
up.
MINDY (CONT’D)
Alec, you promised me. You said
you’d be cool.
ALEC
I’m not finished playing yet.
MINDY
Playing with what? No! That’s not
how this works.
(MORE)
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 75.
MINDY (CONT'D)
We don’t mess with these people. We
don’t terrorize them. We co-exist.
That’s all.
ALEC
Then what’s the point? What’s the
point if you’re not gonna make them
second-guess their sanity a little.
MINDY
I mean it, Alec.
Alec considers.
ALEC
Okey dokey.
And he lets go of the mug, right over the edge of the roof.
JACKIE (O.S.)
Oh my god! OH MY GOD!
TODD (O.S.)
(out of it)
What the hell?
MINDY
What the fuck did you just do? What
is wrong with you?!
ALEC
He’s fine. Just a lil’ bump.
MINDY
We have to get out of here.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 76.
ALEC
And how do you suggest we do that?
MINDY
You’re off your meds again. I
checked the bags, you didn’t even
bring them. Why are you doing this
Alec?
CONNER
Mom?
MINDY
That’s it. Get your things. We’re
leaving right now.
ALEC
Most of our “things” are in the
basement where you hid them.
Remember?
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 77.
MINDY
Shit! Shit, what do we do? They
can’t find our stuff.
ALEC
Basically, you’re a genius.
MINDY
We gotta find a way to get them out
of the house. Scare them or
something.
ALEC
Wait. He dropped his phone. When he
fell. I saw it down there. I have
an idea.
The eerie folk song croons on the record player. Mindy peaks
out from a crack in the pantry door as Jackie makes her way
up from the basement. Mindy clutches tightly to Todd’s cell.
The room falls silent as the record switches off.
CONNER (O.S.)
Mom?
JACKIE (O.S.)
Jesus Christ, Conner. Did you turn
this on?
ALEC
Looks like baby Harper took care of
the problem for us.
MINDY
Wait here.
She tip toes down the basement steps. KEYS suddenly jingle at
the front door. Alec freezes. A KEY TURNS in the lock. Alec
turns on his heels and runs back up stairs.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 78.
CRACK! A baseball bat smacks down upon his head with full-
force. Todd falls out of FRAME, revealing -- GREG. Tightly
grasping the bloodied baseball bat. He turns Todd’s body over
and examines his face.
Spitzky waits in the car out front. Greg, back to his amiable
self, strides out of the house and into the passenger seat.
GREG
Knew it was in there somewhere.
SPITZKY
Good man.
MINDY
Holy shit.
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Alec sits on the bed, the family photos strewn out around
him. With a Sharpie, he defaces Conner’s Little League photo.
He draws X’s over the eyes. He replaces the baseball bat with
a pocket knife. He smiles, cruelly.
Enough time has passed. Mindy braves the first step leading
back into the house. The door at the top of the stairs
suddenly swings open and the frightened girl flees back into
hiding.
JACKIE
Todd, I’m sorry that took so --
JACKIE (CONT’D)
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh. Oh.
Jesus.
Greg takes a beer out the fridge. He closes the door. On the *
other side of the freezer door stands Jackie. Fresh blood on
her face and hands.
JACKIE
Help me.
GREG
Look, I understand you have
feelings for the man...
JACKIE
Stop!
GREG
Go change out of those clothes. *
Tell Conner we’ll be back soon. *
Pale moonlight floods his stoic face. His eyes are glassy,
determined. He dons the frog mask.
ALEC
Get out.
ALEC (CONT’D)
I’m not gonna hurt him.
She can’t move or speak. She just stands there, jaw to the
floor. Alec leaps off his traumatized victim and rushes to
Mindy.
ALEC (CONT’D)
Stop looking at me like that!
She can’t stop. It only gets worse. The betrayal. The horror.
Alec grabs her arm, firmly.
ALEC (CONT’D)
Everything’s going to be okay.
MINDY
You’re insane.
She desperately yanks from his grip and hurries out the door.
Mindy marches to the stairs. Alec rips off the mask, close on
her heels.
He tries to grab her. She turns and pushes him away. He grabs
her again. She tries to push him but he refuses to let go.
MINDY
Alec, stop! Stop it!
ALEC
I’m not gonna let you ruin this for
me.
MINDY
Get off of me!
She lands with a thud, cracking her head on the window sill
on the landing.
ALEC
Mindy? Mindy!
ALEC (CONT’D)
Wake up! Come on! Get up. No. No.
His eyes well. More WHIMPERS from above call his attention.
Alec looks to Mindy, making a difficult choice.
JUMP CUTS:
Alec pats the boy’s head and sticks the green army knife into
the bar of soap, the finishing touch.
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ALEC
Come on, come on.
ALEC (CONT’D)
Shit!
Greg gets himself a beer from the fridge Alec pulls the mask
over his face and waits in the darkness, patiently.
GREG
Jackie?!
JACKIE
Be careful. Promise me, you’ll be
careful.
GREG
I’ll be fine.
He tosses the bag into the back of the vehicle and it lands
beside Mindy. She stirs.
MINDY
Please work. Please work.
OPERATOR (O.S.)
911, what’s your emergency?
MINDY
I need help. I think I’m with the
kidnapper. Of that boy. I just woke
up in his car.
OPERATOR (O.S.)
Okay, ma’am, what’s your location?
MINDY
I don’t know. We’re in the woods
somewhere.
OPERATOR (O.S.)
(cutting in and out)
I’m sor -- didn’t -- that -- if
MINDY
No. No! Can you hear me? Hello?
MINDY (CONT’D)
HELLO?! Are you there?!
OPERATOR (O.S.)
Yes, ma’am, where are you?
MINDY
I don’t know...
OPERATOR
We’ll --- GPS --- ma’am--- are you--
MINDY
Hello?! No! Shit!!
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MINDY (CONT’D)
Come on, come on.
She eyes two small pairs of tennis shoes near the kitchen
sink cabinet.
MINDY
Oh my god.
Mindy bends down to grab one of the tiny shoes when dirty
hands, ziptied at the wrists, BURST out from beneath the
kitchen sink. Mindy, knocked back, muffles her scream.
VOICE
(muffled)
Help us.
The voice is coming from the small cabinet beneath the sink.
Its handles are ziptied shut.
Mindy peers into the thin crack between the two cabinet
doors. Two sets of eyes look back at her, one belonging to
Justin Whitter and the other we recognize as MICHAEL KING.
MICHAEL KING *
Help us. Please.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 87.
MINDY
Okay... I’m gonna help you. I’m...
I promise. It’s okay.
MINDY (CONT’D)
I’ll get you out of here...
MINDY (CONT’D)
It’s gonna be okay...
MICHAEL KING *
He’s back.
SMASH TO BLACK.
GREG
Son of a bitch.
Greg carries Mindy’s limp body into the house, gun out in one
hand. He passes the axe hanging on the wall as he goes.
After a beat, Greg hoists Mindy up out of the chair and moves
her to another place in the room. Her head falls, limply.
Greg takes his gun and holds it at a distance from her body.
Greg looks around the room. Plotting.
Greg studies the scene he’s laid out. Satisfied, he cocks the
other gun and cautiously makes his way up the stairs.
Greg swings open the crawl space door. Sees the sleeping *
bag... *
Greg steps into the room. The lights are all on. The fan is
whirling. He raises his gun.
GREG
Hello?!
He takes another step into the room and suddenly the power
goes out. Greg is plunged into darkness. Only moonlight
spills in through the windows.
GREG (CONT’D)
Who are you?! I will kill you, I
swear to god.
GREG (CONT’D)
Come out and show yourself! Coward!
Greg eyes the fireplace poker only a few feet away. Alec
swings for a fourth time and the axe makes contact with the
wall, inches from Greg’s terrified face. It’s lodged deep in
the plaster. Alec yanks at it, but the blade is stuck.
Alec leaps on his back and the two spin into a few framed
family photos, both the frames and the men CRASHING to the
ground and colliding with the fireplace tools. Poker, shovel
and brush scatter.
It’s now hand to hand combat. The men scuffle on the floor,
fists flying, legs kicking, heads butting. Greg is strong,
but Alec is quick and scrappy.
GREG (CONT’D)
Easy. Easy.
ALEC
I know what you are.
GREG
And what are you? Some kind of
vigilante?
ALEC
I know you took those boys.
GREG
No. You took those boys. You and
your little friend kidnapped those
boys and then you came here to
terrorize the lead detective on the
case. You tied up my son. He was
next. I caught you sick bastards
just in time.
The source of the SIREN arrives outside. Blue and Red lights
flash through the window.
GREG (CONT’D)
You shoot me, and you better be
ready to eat that bullet because --
killing a cop -- you’ll get the
chair. Just like Gordon should
have.
Greg looks out the window. POV -- Spitzky parks and leaps
from his vehicle.
GREG (CONT’D)
You don’t understand. I couldn’t
help myself. Please.
(then)
When I was a little boy, I --
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ALEC
I don’t give a fuck.
Just then, Spitzky barges through the door. Alec turns with
his gun and Spitzky impulsively shoots. Alec falls to the
ground.
SPITZKY
Holy shit!
ALEC
(wheezing through pain)
Officer Spitzky...
More red and blue lights. RADIOS going off all around. The
entire POLICE FORCE is practically at the scene.
Officer Grace Caleb cuts the ziptie from the kitchen sink
cabinet and helps the two boys crawl out.
It’s the St. Anthony coin she gave Greg, now muddied from
falling on the floor of the trailer. Grace stares at it,
aghast.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 93.
JACKIE *
Stay right here baby. *
JACKIE (CONT’D) *
Where’s Greg? Where is he Ray? *
SPITZKY *
Jackie... *
He holds her *
Conner, now pushing his way to get to his mum, sees this *
figure being wheeled out. They stare at one another for a *
long beat. *
As Alec is wheeled into the ambulance, we HOLD on his *
tranquil, satisfied face for a long beat.
The two small boys walk along the train tracks. The livelier -
YOUNG ALEC (10), jumps across large concrete blocks, making
this his own decaying assault course. YOUNG TOMMY (9) walks
alongside.
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YOUNG TOMMY
Wanna go back to my house and play
with my dinosaurs?
YOUNG ALEC
Nah. They suck.
YOUNG TOMMY
So what you wanna do?
Alex shrugs. Pulls out his Yoda Pez Dispenser. Pops a Pez.
YOUNG ALEC
Wanna play the word game?
YOUNG TOMMY
Okay. I’m thinking of a five letter
word that starts with “S”.
YOUNG ALEC
Shit.
YOUNG TOMMY
No, stupid, that’s four letters.
YOUNG ALEC
Shits.
Tommy giggles.
VOICE (O.S.)
Shouldn’t you kids be in school?
They look over to see a MAN standing by the road, his car
parked behind him. Little Tommy looks alarmed.
YOUNG ALEC
It’s teacher’s day.
VOICE (O.S.)
That right?
GREG
You boys ever use one of these
before?
Alec approaches.
YOUNG ALEC
Cool.
OFFICIAL WHITE SHOOTING DRAFT 5/2/18 95.
GREG
It is cool.
YOUNG TOMMY
Alec...
YOUNG ALEC
Can I have the knife?
Greg smiles.
GREG
In a minute. You gotta be patient,
Alec.