4 Style Guide Editorial
4 Style Guide Editorial
who we are, what we value, and how Our message is evident and compelling. Focusing on our
audience’s needs, we write to be understood.
we present ourselves as a company.
By putting them in your hands, we’re
Overview of Table of Contents
putting the Jacobs brand in your care.
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4.1 General
Appendix
4.A Our Word-Treatment Conventions
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4.1 General 4.2 Jacobs Style Issues 4.3 Common Style Issues
4.1.1 Editorial Style Hierarchy 4.2.1 Company Name 4.3.1 Abbreviations, Acronyms, & Initialisms
4.1.3 First Person 4.2.3 Job Titles 4.3.3 Dates & Time
4.1.4 Present Verb Tense 4.2.4 Proper Names 4.3.4 Numbers & Measurements
Be Clear 4.2.7 Web Sites & General Inquiry E-Mail Bulleted Lists
4.3.8 Summary
Appendix
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4.1 General
1) Client Requirements
3) Local Usage
5) Dictionary
6) Personal Preference
Start at the top and flow down the hierarchy to find guidance on the client can best understand. The same is true for cultural
editorial style and usage. The goal is to speak in the language the expressions and phrases that don’t translate across languages: Use
reader understands best. So if the client uses a particular term the interpretation the audience understands the best.
differently than we do, adopt the client’s usage – that’s the language
Active (Correct)
We write in first person, active voice, and
present tense. Our tone is direct, Our Project Manager allocates resources to meet
your project’s staffing requirements.
conversational, positive, and always
courteous. We use plain language and
Passive (Incorrect)
simple sentence structure. Paragraphs are
tight, transitions are smooth, and our Resourcing decisions are made based on the
project’s staffing requirements.
overall organization enhances readability.
Together, these stylistic preferences
comprise “the Jacobs voice.” “Action is eloquence.”
– William Shakespeare
Voice refers to the form in which you write verbs. Active voice yields In passive voice, the subject of the sentence receives the action or is
crisp, vigorous writing, so choose it over passive voice. In an active acted upon: The cheese was eaten by the mouse. Passive voice dilutes
sentence, the subject of the sentence does the action: The mouse ate vigor, adds words, and obscures responsibility. The doer, action, or
the cheese. Responsibility is clear. Verbs are strong and action is message may be unclear, and the reader may perceive us as
direct. Active voice conveys a confident, capable manner. uncertain or evasive.
pronouns: e.g., I, my, you, your, we, our, Your project requirements align with our transferable
ethylene process technologies [where “Your” is
or their. In first person, the author (as first Exxon and “our” is Jacobs].
person I or we) speaks directly to the
reader (as second person you).
Third Person (Incorrect)
“Think like a wise man, but communicate in Jacobs brings Exxon proven ethylene process
expertise.
the language of the people.”
– William Butler Yeats
We avoid third person because it is impersonal. Don’t use third- Use first-person pronouns like we, our, and us rather than the third
person pronouns such as he, she, her, him, it or their. Also steer clear person, Jacobs, when discussing our company, our work, and our
of proper nouns like Mr. Jones, the Project Manager or Oil Co. The people, including teaming partners. Write “our team” rather than
only exceptions are when these terms are necessary for clarity. “the Jacobs team,” “we provide” rather than “Jacobs provides.”
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Use second-person pronouns (you, your) when addressing your By using first person, we can leverage several advantages to achieve
audience. They know you are writing to or presenting to them. Our our objectives in writing.
clients, including government entities, use first and second person
• It’s Personal — First person establishes a relationship between
in their writing. We should do the same. By promoting natural, open
author and reader.
communication, we reinforce our relationship-based culture.
• It’s Credible — We use first person verbally to recount our own
stories and experiences. When we use first person in writing, you
expect us to do the same: It lends credibility to the author.
and understandable of the 12 possible Our Quality Manager maintains a corrective action
checklist to track project performance.
tenses in the English language, so we
write in “the now.”
Past Tense (Incorrect)
“Yesterday is a canceled check; tomorrow is The Quality Manager maintained a corrective action
a promissory note; today is the only cash checklist that tracked project performance.
you have — so spend it wisely”
– Kay Lyons
Present tense keeps writing fresh. Your subject matter almost never requires past or future tenses; use
the most basic forms as possible.
Past tenses can make writing seem dated or detached.
Along with a consistent voice, our writing has a consistent tone. Above all, we extend a personal touch, showing awareness of and
Each document or presentation is “an easy read,” conveying that we respect for our audience. We consider their perspective and present
know enough to make the subject matter look simple. information tailored to their needs.
A clearly worded message is easy to understand, and thus helps your reader make
informed decisions. You say more with less—so the shorter, the better.
• Replace long words with short ones “As to the adjective, when in doubt
strike it out.”
• Choose strong action verbs – Mark Twain
• Avoid nominalizations
We use language to convey meaning. To do this effectively, our English is the language of choice in written communication.
writing must be to the point. A clearly worded message is easy to However, be sensitive to the client’s language of preference.
understand and helps your reader make informed decisions. Keep it
Since our headquarters are in the United States, adopt North
simple. However, simple doesn’t mean simplistic. Make your words
American English spellings for any document global in scope.
easy to grasp without insulting your reader’s intelligence.
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If unsure of structure, i.e., subject-verb agreement, revise your Use repetition to emphasize your main message (but don’t overdo
sentence. Keep sentences and paragraphs concise. Present them in it). In the introduction, body, and conclusion of your text, tell your
logical order, using organizational flow to guide your reader. reader what you’re going to tell them; then tell them; finally, tell
them what you just told them. In the body and conclusion, address
your key points in the same order as presented in the introduction.
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Paragraphs Transitions
Lengths Planning
An average paragraph size is 5–10 sentences, but varying size keeps In general, effective transitions reflect the logical progression of
readers interested. For example, use a 1–3 sentence paragraph (like related material. Smooth flow derives from careful planning. Grow
this one) to break up the flow. A one-sentence paragraph (below) is your written argument from a compact, compelling outline, and the
especially effective when it highlights a key issue. reader easily follows your lead.
Include a Conclusion
Where possible, conclude each major section with a closing
paragraph that recaps key information.
Regardless of what language you write your document in, your intent Common Areas of Confusion
is for it to be read. Following these basic guidelines helps readers Pay special attention to common areas of confusion:
with limited proficiency in the document’s language to read what
• Currency
you write:
• Dates and time
• Write in simple structures.
• Decimals
• Avoid idiomatic or colloquial expressions.
• Telephone numbers
• Avoid shortcuts, symbols, and abbreviations that could easily be
spelled out. • Units of measure
• Disclose units of data and provide conversions as appropriate. For More Information
For more information, see Section 4.3.3, “Dates & Time” and
• Write with cultural sensitivity in mind.
Section 4.3.4, “Numbers & Measurements.”
Use these common proofing marks when editing text or copy to reduce errors
made in the revision process.
DELETING & INSERTING ALIGNMENT SPELLING & PUNCTUATION
Disregard proof correction Center text Insert brackets into the text
Transpose
• Wordmark: Jacobs
®
• No comma after “Inc.” when used in a sentence. Because “Jacobs” ends in an ‘s,’ the possessive form simply follows
the name with an apostrophe (Jacobs’). If unsure whether the name
is possessive or not, try mentally substituting the word “Jacobs” with
Trademark Symbol on First Reference a proper name and read the sentence.
• Follow the wordmark with the registered trademark symbol (®) • As possessive: Jacobs’ or Jacobs Engineering Group Inc.’s
®
on the first, non-possessive use: Jacobs .
• Try to keep the reference on one line
• You may omit the registered trademark on subsequent uses.
Director of Environmental Science Pierre Luc Headline: Manchester Chemical Engineer Harry
Parker leads charity effort
Rajan Patel is our relationship lead as a transit Jacobs College has invited architect Lee Wu to
engineer in the Mumbai office. speak at the seminar.
• Capitalize formal titles only immediately before a name. • Do not capitalize an occupational (generic or functional) title
when it immediately precedes an individual’s name.
• In headlines, capitalize job titles before and after a name.
• Do not capitalize common nouns that refer to a position in
• Do not capitalize the job title when it is not part of an
general (e.g., an engineer) or to a pool of personnel (e.g.,
individual’s name.
pipefitters or accountants).
• Capitalize a job title when it refers to a specific position, but the
See Section 4.3.2 “Capitalization” for more information.
person who fills (or will fill) the position is unnamed.
• Always capitalize an individual’s name. • Capitalize all the main words of a project’s or program’s full title,
including the word project or program itself.
• Always capitalize the proper name of an entity, department, or
other organization. • When the title is partial or abbreviated, “project” or “program” is
not capitalized.
See Section 4.2.3, “Job Titles” for capitalization rules about titles.
Comprehensive Long-term Environmental Action Navy
• Do not capitalize common nouns that refer to a position in
(CLEAN) Program
general (e.g., an engineer) or to a pool of personnel (e.g., pipefitters
or accountants). Pier 400 Dredging and Landfill Project for the Port
of Los Angeles
• Do capitalize the names of specific internal groups: e.g., the
Contracts Management Group, Human Resources or the Legal BASF’s expansion project
Department.
Chevron’s FCCU project
Most importantly, use words that your audience knows. Wherever One of the most frequent problems in business writing is the
possible, use company-, industry-, or culturally standard terms inconsistent use of certain words and abbreviations. Areas of
consistently throughout your documentation. inconsistency include the use of periods, hyphens, and other
punctuation marks. Many inconsistencies concern compound
words — is it one word, two words or hyphenated?
Alternative English Spellings
To combat these inconsistencies, we maintain a list of word-
Consistent with writing to be relevant to your intended audience, treatment conventions as in “Appendix 4.A.” Consult the list to
consider using alternative spellings as expected by your audience. achieve greater consistency with other Jacobs writers who are
Since our headquarters are in the United States, adopt North doing the same.
American English spellings for any global document or for a
document with a mixed English audience.
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Some conventions offer guidance on words that have more than one Commonly Used Words
correct usage — e.g., cleanup and clean up. Other conventions deal
• design-build
with preferred spelling when more than one is correct — e.g., among
vs. amongst. • e-mail
• light-rail (adjective)
Prefix Rules
• light rail (noun)
• When joining a prefix with a word, use a hyphen if the prefix ends
• master plan (noun)
in a vowel and the word that follows begins in the same vowel:
re-election • online
• For situations where the word following the prefix does not begin • soundproof
with a vowel, use a hyphen if the definition of the new word • sulfur (North American English)
means “to do again.”
re-design (to design again) • sulphur (U.K. English)
• stormwater
If an external client requests specific word usage, make changes to fit • Web site or Web page
the client’s needs. • World Wide Web or the Web
Use the general contact information when more specific information is not
available or desired.
HEADQUARTERS ADDRESSES
Phone + 1.626.578.3500
Fax + 1.626.568.7144
Promoting one Web site — its address is called a Uniform Resource While we have numerous Web sites (many as project-specific Web sites
Locator (URL) or a domain name — is less confusing for the viewer necessary for clients or joint ventures), we continue to consolidate Web
and removes internal boundaries. sites and promote the exclusive use of the official Web site URL. On
occasion, additional Web sites are necessary and a good business
decision. If you believe you need a Web site for such a purpose, please
General Inquiry E-Mail notify [email protected] to begin the process of evaluating your
request. Corporate Communications, IT, and the Legal Department
Corporate Communications staff monitors the general e-mail inbox
work together to review each request. New Web sites require approval
and forwards messages to appropriate parties as needed.
from senior management and possibly the CEO.
How to Use the Web Site URL & General Inquiry E-Mail Additional Web Sites
• Always include the “www” prefix as part of the URL: If you participate in the active upkeep of a Web site other than the
“www.jacobs.com” official Web site, please report the fact to [email protected].
• Always set all URLs and e-mail addresses in lowercase letters.
With more than 160 offices around the A List of Countries Wherein We Have a Presence
australia mexico
world, we truly are a global company. austria netherlands
belgium northern ireland
canada Poland
china Puerto rico
czech republic Scotland
england Singapore
finland Spain
france Sweden
Germany united arab emirates
Greece united States of america
india Wales
ireland
italy
Use this minimum service list to describe A Standard Service List You Can Use
Use this minimum market list to describe A Standard Market List You Can Use
Abbreviated “T/P/S”
use the descriptor (abbreviated or
unabbreviated) to help convey the Unabbreviated “technical professional services company”
Why a Descriptor?
printing presses using movable type, but Jacobs is one of the world's largest and
most diverse providers of technical,
ours summarizes who we are today. It is professional, and construction services.
intended for use in news releases and
related media relations vehicles.
Include the boilerplate on all press releases intended for external All press releases must be authorized by the Vice President of
audiences. Marketing and Corporate Communications, and may require
additional approvals as needed.
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We are traded publicly on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE) under the
common stock symbol “JEC.”
®
solutions and products to help us deliver
value to our clients while setting us apart
from competitors in the marketplace.
TM
These ideas are our intellectual property.
Registered Trademark Pending Trademark Symbol
They are legally protected and collectively Symbol
give us an advantage.
Patents Copyright
Patents are protected ideas, innovations and designs that must be Copyright does not require filing to be protected. The act of creating
filed with the appropriate patent office to gain protection. While not the expression is enough — such as writing an article or capturing a
discussed in any more detail in the Style Guide, we do own photograph. The expression is immediately copyrighted.
numerous patents. Contact the Legal Department for information.
For more information, see “Copyright” later in this section and in the
Trademarks Style Guide, “Images & Photography” module.
Trademarks are names or symbols that identify products and
services and must be filed with an appropriate trademark office to
gain protection. Continue reading for more information about some
of our trademarks.
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®
BeyondZero
The U.S. Patent & Trademark Office registered the trademark for the
The Jacobs Wordmark ®
BeyondZero logo May 26, 2009, and the words “BeyondZero”
The Jacobs wordmark is considered intellectual property and should
shortly thereafter. Canadian and European Commonwealth
always be marked with the circle-R (®) on first reference in text and
registrations are pending. See Style Guide, “Logo” section for more
in all uses of the logo. All official logo files have the appropriate mark ®
information about BeyondZero .
built into the file — no alteration is required. Please do not crop off
the trademark when using the logo files. ®
SUPERCLAUS & EUROCLAUS
®
® ®
SUPERCLAUS and EUROCLAUS are both registered trademarks
Exception: Do not include the trademark symbol when fabricating
and part of our intellectual property. For general information about
signage using the logo. See Style Guide, “Usage & Examples” for more ® ®
SUPERCLAUS and EUROCLAUS , see www.jacobs.com.
information on signage.
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Trademark Laws & Using Other Entities’ Logos How to Use Service Mark & Trademark Symbols
Be careful in using a client or company’s logo in your proposals or When using intellectual property for which no guidelines exist (for
documents due to trademark law. example, a newly filed Jacobs invention or a teaming partner’s
innovation for which documentation does not exist), consider the
Companies are the trademark owners of their logo. They have the
following general specifications.
sole right to control copying, reproduction, downloading,
distribution, and display of their logo. Permission for use of their Always
logo must be granted by the company in writing. Keep the • Use the “SM” or “®” symbol on first reference of the intellectual
permission on file for documentation purposes. property. If the property is mentioned throughout your
document, you may omit the symbol on subsequent references.
Request Permission
Request permission to use a logo with a brief explanation of how • Set in Arial, Helvetica Neue or similar sans serif type.
and why you intend to use the other entity’s logo. Use the Jacobs
• Set the “SM” or “®” in black. If black is not available, use the
Image/Photography Release form to ask for logo permission:
darkest (or least-distracting) color available in the design.
JNet > About Jacobs > Our Identity > Images & Photography • Set the “SM” or “®” to the same size as surrounding letters, then
apply: all caps, superscript and superior formatting.
Look for a Media Library or Resource Page • If using professional page layout software (e.g. Adobe InDesign,
Some companies may have a media library or resource page on their QuarkXPress, etc.): For sizes 14 pt. and larger, set the “SM” or “®”
Web site permitting their logo to be downloaded and to be used by to 45 percent of the type size and adjust position so “SM” or “®”
agreeing to their terms and conditions. Look first: Verify whether the is resting on the x-height.
company has a permission page on its Web site before downloading
Never
and using its logo.
• Do not italicize the “SM” or “®” or place more emphasis on it
than on the trademarked word or phrase.
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Copyright is also intellectual property. In most countries, an idea is Be careful using another entity’s copyrighted materials in your
copyrighted the moment it is documented in a tangible form such as presentations, proposals, or documents — whether intended for
e-mail, video, programming code, image, etc. While copyright external or for internal circulation — without express permission
protects the expression of an idea, copyright does not cover the idea from the copyright holder due to copyright laws.
itself — to do so requires a patent on the idea instead.
Copyrighted materials are the property of the copyright holder, and
A Standard Copyright Statement You Can Use the holder has the sole right to control copying, reproduction,
Use this statement on all external communications and documents. downloading, distribution, and display of its materials. Examples of
Adjust the statement to include local customs as needed: common copyrighted materials include magazine and newspaper
articles, e-mails, Web sites, movies, music, and photographs.
© Copyright [year], Jacobs Engineering Group Inc. All rights reserved.
Request Permission
Permission to use the materials must be granted by the copyright
For more information about copyright, see the Style Guide, “Images holder in writing. Keep the permission on file for documentation
& Photography” module. purposes. Request permission to use the materials with a brief
explanation of how and why you intend to use the materials and an
©
estimate of your intended distribution (number of recipients).
www.copyright.gov
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Spell out acronyms and initialisms at their first appearance in the Junior or Senior After a Name
main body text, followed by the acronym or initialism in • Use Jr. or Sr.
parentheses. Then, consistently use the acronym or initialism from
• Do not precede with a comma
that point forward; don’t switch between the full phrase and the
shortened version. Academic Degrees
• Use bachelor’s degree, master’s degree, Bachelor of Arts,
If the phrase first appears outside the main body text (e.g., in a
Master of Arts.
heading, caption, or visual), you may include the parenthetical
shortened version there. However, define again on the first mention • Abbreviate to B.A., M.A., LL.D. and Ph.D. only with multiple
in the text. Finally, only capitalize the major words in the full phrase names and degrees.
if it is a proper noun.
Avenue, Boulevard, & Street
Spell Out Inconsequential Abbreviations • Abbreviate when paired with a numbered address:
If using an abbreviation that is inconsequential (e.g., the 111 Main St.
abbreviation does not save much space compared to its full phrase 979 Kings Rd.
or the abbreviation is only used a few times), or if using an Al Slam Street (not abbreviated since no numbered address)
abbreviation is confusing (e.g., similar abbreviations back-to-back),
Expressways, Highways, & Motorways
consider spelling out the full phrase instead. Doing so enhances
• When paired with a number, use the following abbreviations:
your document’s readability and helps readers who are not
M8, A290, G3, U.S. 1, State Route 34
proficient in the document’s language.
Route 1 or Route 1A
China National Highway 109, Interstate 95.
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Provinces, States, & Territories in Text JNet > About Jacobs > Our Identity > Editorial (Style Guide)
word as well as the initial letters of main • Capitalize individual names of regions, units and
groups: Northern Region
words (nouns, pronouns, verbs, modifiers)
• Capitalize proper and common nouns when they
that follow. This is called “initial caps.” become part of the name for a person, place or
thing: the English Channel
Some formats call for "all caps," meaning
• Capitalize specific geographic regions: Central Italy
every letter of a word or phrase
• Capitalize “room” when used with a specific name
is capitalized. or number: Green Room, Room 101
Titles
In addition to the first and main words, always capitalize the last word Examples:
of a title, regardless of word type or length. However, do not capitalize • One Company Around the Globe
articles (like a or the), conjunctions (like and, but or or), and short
• Jacobs Values: Building on the Core
prepositions (like to and on) — unless they are the first or last word.
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• Building 18
Book and periodical titles are italicized, while chapters and articles • Operable Unit 2
are set within quotation marks (no italics).
• Level C
• Schedule 40
Titles: Awards & Certificates
When the numbers are absent, the common nouns are not
Capitalize and italicize (no quotation marks) titles of awards, capitalized, e.g., project phases, site buildings, and operable units.
certificates, and other honorary designations, including the word
award or certificate. In the following examples, note that the issuing
agency is not italicized, nor is further categorization of the award: First Words After Colons
Examples: Capitalize the first word after a colon only if it is a proper noun or the
• The New Delhi, India office’s Jacobs Office Safety Award for start of a complete sentence.
commitment to a culture of caring
Examples:
• The Houston Business Roundtable’s Customer Satisfaction Award • Future plans: A new 34-megawatt gas turbine is planned to come
in the Large Industrial Maintenance Contractor category on line in 2010.
Dates Expressed as Numbers: Year-Month-Day Time Expressed as Numbers: 12-Hour versus 24-Hour
Numeric date formats are expressed left-to-right starting with the Our preference is to express time in a 12-hour format starting with the
largest unit — year, month, and day — separated by hyphens. This largest unit — hour, minute, and second — separated by colons. If
format solves ambiguities in formats used among the United States, your audience is spread across disparate, multiple time zones,
Canada, United Kingdom, and others, and is used in many Asian expressing time in a 24-hour format might be clearer.
languages. Add leading zeros to months earlier than October.
• Be consistent in your document with the format you choose.
2008-08-18
2010-10-31 • Include enough information for the reader to understand the time
(e.g., including ‘a.m.’ or ‘p.m.,’ time zones, etc.).
• Include leading zeros for hours earlier than 10:00 when using the
24-hour format.
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Time Zones & Coordinated Universal Time (UTC) No Endings on Days of Month in Text
If writing for an audience across multiple time zones or in a different • Do not use “nd,” “rd,” or “th” as ending: August 2
time zone, be sure to include time zone information following time.
Always Never
Noon & Midnight
• January Jan. • March
• Use noon for 12 p.m. (or 12:00)
• February Feb. • April
• Use midnight for 12 a.m. (or 00:00)
• August Aug. • May
• December Dec.
Time as an Adjective
• Dimensions: 4 m tall
Amounts Less than One
• Currency: $3
• Spell out all amounts less than one:
• Expressways, Highways, and Motorways: M8, U.S. Route 6 three-fourths
two-thirds
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• Use figures with million or billion: Express all amounts in these three currencies: U.S. dollars, British
3 million people pounds sterling, and euros. Either lead with the currency most relevant
256 billion to your audience or the amount’s original currency followed by the
other two in parentheses and separated by a comma or semicolon.
• Consider using decimals, but no more than two decimal places:
£5.1 million Symbols or Currency Codes
7.51 million people Use the appropriate currency symbol or the International
Organization for Standardization (ISO) currency code:
• Exceptions: financial reports (e.g., annual/quarterly reports)
• U.S. dollar: $ or USD
• When rounding very large numbers, combine the number with an • A dimension less than 10 as an adjective:
appropriate quantifying word, as below: 9-by-12 rug
€4.3 billion
• A compound adjective less than 10:
5 million workhours
three-story atrium
Examples:
Two or More Quantities The phone number for our headquarters is + 1.626.578.3500.
The phone number for our Calgary office is + 1.403.258.6411.
When two or more quantified items appear in a sentence and at least The phone number for our Hong Kong office is + 852.2880.9788.
one of them is 10 or above, use a numeral for each item: The phone number for our Warsaw office is + 48.22.564.06.00.
The area of study contains 2 underground storage tanks,
4 discolored areas, and 13 reported spill sites.
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Metric & U.S. Customary Units of Measurement Symbols for Select Metric Units
• gram g
Use the measurement system most appropriate for the audience. If
writing for a global audience or a mixed audience, use both • kilogram kg
International System of Units (SI) — also called metric — and U.S. • metric ton t
customary units. Follow the measurement with the converted • millimeter mm
equivalent in parentheses. For a global document, lead with U.S.
• centimeter cm
customary units.
• meter m
Punctuating Units of Measurement
• kilometer km
Use a non-breaking space between measurements and their units
unless the measurement is used as an adjective (in which case, use a • milliliter mL
• Never follow a metric unit symbol with a period unless at the end
of a sentence. Abbreviations for Select U.S. Customary Units
• pound lbs.
• Metric unit symbols are unaltered in the plural.
• ton tn.
• Never hyphenate a metric unit symbol, even when used as an
• inch in.
adjective.
• foot ft.
• Always spell out U.S. customary units when used as an adjective.
• yard yd.
Examples: • mile mi.
Use the 150 L drum.
• gallon gal.
The beam weighs 375 kg.
20-mile road
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• Use Arabic numerals for numbers preceding units of measure — Distance as an Adjective
whether of time, distance, or volume — and to denote • Spell out distances less than 10: eight-kilometer pipeline
percentage. This applies to numbers less than 10, as well, unless
Area as an Adjective
used as an adjective:
• Hyphenate when used as an adjective modifying a noun:
2 minutes, 3 kilograms
24-acre
• However, the numerals used with units of measure do not affect 2,400-square-foot building
treatment of other numerical expressions within the sentence:
• Do not hyphenate when the measurement comes after the noun:
Site 12 is a 6-by-50-foot oval area adjacent to three underground The building was 1.100 square meters.
storage tanks that were installed 2 years ago.
• Always spell out U.S. customary units when used as an adjective:
In the example above, note that “12” is part of a proper noun. Like 50-foot pole
units of measure (e.g., “2 years”), this does not affect the treatment of 10-ton truck
other numerals in the sentence, so the “three” is spelled out.
Use parallel construction in displayed lists. This means all items are Within a list, numbers or bullets introduce the individual items.
alike, whether each is a word, a phrase, or a complete sentence. If
they are complete sentences, they should have similar purpose —
e.g., instructional or descriptive. Displayed lists are strongest when Capitalize the First Word
they begin with the same type of word — whether it is an action verb
Capitalize the first word of every item, even if it’s not a complete
or an article or any other part of speech.
sentence or a proper noun.
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Use numbers in a displayed list when ranking or sequencing items, 1. Jacobs Engineering Group Inc.
as in weight of importance or order of occurrence (4.B.1). Also use
2. Halliburton
them when describing a stepped process, where “1.” means “do this
first” and “2.” means “do this second.” 3. Pulte
Numbers are also appropriate as reference points when one, some, 4. Turner Corp.
or all of the items are referred to elsewhere in the text.
5. Centex
6. Emcor
7. Fluor
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Sentence Structure in Lists When the introduction to the list is a complete sentence punctuated
by a period or a colon, and the bulleted items are incomplete
Your audience expects to encounter full, complete thoughts. When
phrases or simply a string of words, none of the bullets end with a
reading, the inner voice should be speaking the same words as
period—including the last one (4.B.2). If the reader sees a “laundry
though you were reading aloud.
list,” the inner voice expects to read one; so the closing punctuation
As you develop lists, be sure you don’t omit words, leaving the is unnecessary.
reader to fill in the blanks. That makes for a choppy read.
When each listed item is a complete sentence (remember that if one
For example, if you introduce a bulleted list with an incomplete is, they all are), each ends with a period (4.B.3, 4.B.4). This is true,
sentence, make the entire list a complete thought by leading directly too, if the items each contain more than one complete sentence
into the first item without punctuation (i.e., no colon); including any (4.B.6, 4.B.8). In either case, the introductory sentence ends with a
conjunctions necessary to make the entire list a complete sentence; colon or a period, depending on the presence or absence of direct
and placing a period after the final bulleted item. You may end each transition words like “follow” or “appear below.”
item with the appropriate punctuation (e.g., a comma or a
semicolon) or leave blank (4.B.5, 4.B.7). Just remember to apply that
style—for that type of list—consistently throughout your document.
We do not intend this guide to be a comprehensive overview of Use a comma after each item within a series of three or more words,
established rules or a bulletin on changing rules. Our intent is to phrases, or clauses, in series linked with “and” or “or.” This avoids
serve as a start-off point for consistent — and correct — usage. ambiguity caused by unintentionally merging the last two items.
Consequently, we devote this section strictly to those punctuation Maintenance personnel replaced the rocker arm bracket, the hinge
situations we know to be trouble spots. pin, and the wheel assembly.
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Hyphens Parentheses
• Use hyphens to link two or more adjectives in a phrase when the Fragments
adjectives appear before the word they are modifying. Place a period outside a closing parenthesis if the material inside is
not a sentence (such as this fragment).
six-year study
Complete Sentences
• Do not use hyphens if proper nouns and / or adjectives are
Place the period inside the closing parenthesis to end the sentence it
included in the phrase.
punctuates if the material is a complete sentence (or several).
• Do not use a hyphen when “very” is part of the concept.
(An independent parenthetical sentence such as this one takes a
• Do not use a hyphen to link adverbs ending in -ly. period before the closing parenthesis.)
Dependent Clauses
When a phrase is placed in parentheses (this one is an example) that
Quotation Marks
would normally qualify as a complete sentence but is dependent
Use with direct quotes, titles of books, movies, plays, operas, poems, upon the surrounding material, do not capitalize the first word or
songs, speeches, lectures, works of art, television programs, and end with a period.
software titles.
Expressive Clauses
If a parenthetical phrase at the end of a sentence ends with an
Apostrophes exclamation point or question mark, still place a period after the
closing parenthesis.
• With single letters, use an apostrophe before the “s.”
K’s Each client wants customized service (who wouldn’t?).
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Periods with Abbreviations The latter is true, even when the material within the marks is only a
word or two—even a letter or number or symbol, as below:
Use periods in abbreviations, as indicated below:
Be careful when forming the possessive of a company name that
• Academic: B.A., B.S., M.A., M.S., Ph.D., J.D.
ends with an “s.”
• Registrations and certifications: P.E., R.P.G., C.I.H., C.P.G.
• Geographic: U.S., U.S.A., and U.K., but CA, WA, etc. (no periods in
Em Dash, En Dash, & Hyphen
U.S. state postal abbreviations)
Em Dash
• Time of day (ante meridiem and post meridiem): a.m., p.m. (note
A dash the width of a lowercase “m,” the em dash (—) is the longest
space between clock time and abbreviation: 3:15 p.m.)
dash. Em dashes emphasize the material set off (as opposed to
parentheses, which de-emphasize their contents).
Quotation Marks with Other Punctuation • Use two em dashes — one on each side — to mark an abrupt break
in sentence flow.
The following examples illustrate appropriate placement of
quotation marks with other punctuation. • Use one em dash to set off a clause, for emphasis, at the end of a
sentence.
• A colon follows the closing “quotation mark”: The preceding
sentence demonstrates this rule. • Put a space on both sides of an em dash in all uses except the start
of a paragraph.
• A semicolon also follows the closing “quotation mark”; this
example demonstrates the rule. En Dash
A dash the width of a lowercase “n,” the en dash (–) is a medium
• “A comma always falls inside the closing quotation mark,” the style
dash.
guide notes.
• Use an en dash to denote a range, in place of the word “to”:
• The guide also notes, “So does a period.”
3–5 years
1908–1998
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Hyphen
The hyphen (-) is the smallest dash.
• Use for compound words and unit modifiers in which all words
are hyphenated:
24-hour
Generally, spell out symbols in text for readability unless doing so threatens legibility
or if conserving space is a priority.
$ € £
Dollar Sign Euro Sign Pound Sign
Spell out percent, pound, inches, and feet in text. The symbols and • Use the symbol ° to denote degrees in both text and visuals:
abbreviations %, #, ", ' are acceptable only in visuals. Water freezes at 32°F.
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Ampersands Spacing
Do follow the conventions we recommend, but don’t stop there. As If you’re stumped on a particular point of style that isn’t covered
you encounter other areas of inconsistencies in your writing and here, e-mail us at [email protected]. We’ll respond to your
document production, select the most appropriate — and correct — individual request, if you have an immediate need; or we’ll log it for
convention for the situation. Share that convention with others in future consideration in the Style Guide (as demand warrants).
your circle of influence.
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4.B.1 4.B.2
The lead-in to this list is a complete sentence, punctuated with a The lead-in to this list is a complete sentence, punctuated with a
colon because of the direct transition “following.” The items are colon. (As the sentence lacks a direct transition like “follows,” it
numbered because this is a ranking — the numbers mean could also end with a period.) Periods are unnecessary after the
something. Periods are unnecessary after the individual items individual items because they are not sentences.
because they are not sentences nor is a period necessary after the
The company’s backlog reflects steady growth over the
last item, because the lead-in was already a complete sentence.
past few years:
(A complete sentence can end in a colon as well as a period, if the
sentence sets up what immediately follows.) • $1.0 billion in 1997
Fortune magazine’s March 1, 1999, issue places us at the • $3.0 billion in 1998
top of the list of “Most Admired Companies” in the
• $4.3 billion in 1999
Engineering, Construction category. The ranking follows:
2. Halliburton
3. Pulte
4. Turner Corp.
5. Centex
6. Emcor
7. Fluor
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4.B.3 4.B.4
The lead-in to this list is a complete sentence, punctuated with a The lead-in to this list is a complete sentence. It ends with a period
colon. The individual items each end with a period because they are because it lacks a direct transition like “follows.” (It could also end
all complete sentences. (Remember that if one item is a complete with a colon.) The individual items each end with a period because
sentence, all must be.) they are all complete sentences (the subject is implied).
Our mentor-protégé agreement helps meet this challenge, Several of the habits from Covey’s principle-centered
and all parties benefit: paradigm match our culture and our vision of what we
hope to accomplish.
• AFCEE and other federal clients have access to an
enhanced talent pool. • Be proactive.
• CAPE draws on our strength, experience, and industrial • Begin with the end in mind.
diversity.
• Put first things first.
• Alabama A&M enjoys expanded curricula and funding.
• Seek first to understand, then to be understood.
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4.B.5 4.B.6
The lead-in to this list is not a complete sentence so it requires no The lead-in to this list is a complete sentence, lacking a direct
punctuation. Rather, the entire list is one complete sentence; the transition like “follows.” The individual items are short paragraphs,
individual items are punctuated consistent with how a long sentence each with a short title punctuated with a period. In addition to the
would be punctuated (e.g., semicolons separating the long titles (set in italics for contrast), every complete sentence ends with a
individual phrases, one of which already contains commas). Also period.
note the conjunction “and” in the second-to-last item.
Different strategies, applied individually or in
The training center’s mission is to combination, can lead to increased market share.
• Foster excellence throughout the company; • Quality Improvement. Most companies concentrate on
improving the quality of their work processes to exceed
• Perpetuate our unique culture, core values, and operating
client expectations and increase market share.
philosophy;
• Concentration on Core Business. Many companies focus
• Institutionalize success by passing on best practices and
on their core business. This allows them to perfect their
lessons learned;
services while expending money and energy where it
• Prepare key project staff to meet upcoming client counts: on their core competencies.
requirements; and
• Acquisition. Some companies simply “buy” market share
• Stimulate open communication and proactive problem by acquiring their competition. Acquisition also expands
solving. global reach and increases the breadth of available
products or services.
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4.B.7 4.B.8
The lead-in to this list is not a complete sentence so requires no The lead-in to this sentence is a complete sentence punctuated with
punctuation. The individual items complete the sentence. The first a colon. (It could also end in a period, lacking a direct transition like
item ends with a comma; the second item ends with a comma and “follows.”) The individual items are short paragraphs. Note the
the conjunction “and”; and the last item ends with a period. parallelism in all items: Each consists of two sentences and contains
the “Then” and “Now” construction.
Consistent project execution enables us to
The changes we’ve undergone are illustrated by the stark
• Trim schedules by working on a single project from
contrasts between then and now:
multiple locations,
• Then, we were called Jacobs Engineering Co., working out
• Produce high-quality work in a safe work environment,
of one office in Los Angeles. Now, Jacobs Engineering
and
Group Inc. is one of the largest engineering and
• Reduce your operating costs. construction (E&C) firms worldwide.
+ 1.626.578.3500 | www.jacobs.com