Patterns of Paragraph Development
Patterns of Paragraph Development
1. Narration
Example:
One North Carolina man found quite a surprise last year while fishing in the Catawba
River: a piranha. Jerry Melton, of Gastonia, reeled in a one pound, four ounce fish with an
unusual bite. Melton could not identify it, but a nearby fisherman did. Melton at first could not
believe he had caught a piranha. He said, “That ain’t no piranha. They ain’t got piranha around
here.” Melton was right: the fish is native to South America, and North Carolina prohibits
owning the fish as a pet or introducing the species to local waterways. The sharp-toothed,
carnivorous fish likely found itself in the Catawba River when its illegal owner released the fish
after growing tired of it. Wildlife officials hope that the piranha was the only of its kind in the
river, but locals are thinking twice before they wade in the water.
2. Description
Example:
Piranha are omnivorous, freshwater fish, which are mostly known for their single row of
sharp, triangular teeth in both jaws. Piranhas’ teeth come together in a scissor-like bite and are
used for puncture and tearing. Baby piranha are small, about the size of a thumbnail, but full-
grown piranha grow up to about 6-10 inches, and some individual fish up to 2 feet long have
been found. The many species of piranha vary in color, though most are either silvery with an
orange underbelly and throat or almost entirely black
3. Process/Analysis
Example:
You can safely swim with piranhas, but it’s important to know how and when to do it.
First, chose an appropriate time, preferably at night and during the rainy season. Avoid piranha-
infested waters during the dry season, when food supplies are low and piranhas are more
desperate. Piranhas feed during the day, so night-time swimming is much safer. Second,
streamline your movement. Wild or erratic activity attracts the attention of piranhas. Swim
slowly and smoothly. Finally, never enter the water with an open wound or raw meat. Piranhas
attack larger animals only when they are wounded. The presence of blood in the water may
tempt the fish to attack. If you follow these simple precautions, you will have little to fear.
4. Classification/Division
Classification takes one large concept, and divides it into individual pieces. A nice result
from this type of writing is that it helps the reader to understand a complex topic by focusing on
its smaller parts. This is particularly useful when an author has a unique way of dividing the
concepts, to provide new insight into the ways it could be viewed.
Example:
Piranhas comprise more than 30-60 species of fish, depending on whom you ask. The
many species fall into four genera: Pygocentrus, Pygopristis, Serrasalmus, and Pristobrycon.
Piranha in the Pygocentrus genus are the most common variety, the kind you might find in a pet
store. Pygopristis piranha are herbivores, feasting on seeds and fruits, not flesh. In contrast, fish
in the Serrasalmus genus eat only meat, and their teeth are razor-sharp. Pristobrycon are the least
friendly of all piranhas; they often bite the fins of other fish, even fish of the same species. The
label piranha, then, refers to a wide variety of species.
5. Comparison/Contrast
Example:
My memories of my arrival in Hanover, New Hampshire, are mostly of the color green.
Green cloaked the hillsides, crawled the ivied walls, and was reflected in the river where the
Dartmouth crew students sculled. For a girl who had never been far from Crownpoint, New
Mexico, the green felt incredibly juicy, lush, beautiful, and threatening. Crownpoint had vast
acreage of sky and sand, but aside from the pastel scrub brush, mesquite, and chamiso,
practically the only growing things there were the tiny stunted pines called pinion trees. Yet it is
beautiful; you can see the edges and contours of red earth stretching all the way to the
boxshaped faraway cliffs and the horizon. No horizon was in sight in Hanover, only trees. I felt
claustrophobic.
6. Cause/Effect
Example:
Great novels can help us master the all-too-rare-skill of tolerating – of being able to hold
in mind – ambiguity and contradiction. Jay Gatsby has a shady past, but he’s also sympathetic.
Huck Finn is a liar, but we come to love him. A friend’s student once wrote that Alice Munro’s
characters weren’t people he’d choose to hang out with but that reading her work always made
him feel “a little less petty and judgmental.” Such benefits are denied to the young reader
exposed only to books with banal, simple-minded moral equations as well as to the students
encouraged to come up with reductive, wrong-headed readings of multilayered texts.