Memo Writing Audience and Purpose: Heading Segment
Memo Writing Audience and Purpose: Heading Segment
Choose the audience of the memo wisely. Ensure that all of the people that the memo is
addressed to need to read the memo. If it is an issue involving only one person, do not send
the memo to the entire office. Also, be certain that material is not too sensitive to put in a
memo; sometimes the best forms of communication are face-to-face interaction or a phone
call. Memos are most effectively used when sent to a small to moderate amount of people to
communicate company or job objectives.
Parts of a Memo
Standard memos are divided into segments to organize the information and to help achieve
the writer's purpose.
Heading Segment
The heading segment follows this general format:
Make sure you address the reader by his or her correct name and job title. You might call the
company president "Maxi" on the golf course or in an informal note, but "Rita Maxwell,
President" would be more appropriate for a formal memo. Be specific and concise in your
subject line. For example, "Clothes" as a subject line could mean anything from a dress code
update to a production issue. Instead use something like, "Fall Clothes Line Promotion."
Opening Segment
The purpose of a memo is usually found in the opening paragraph and includes: the purpose
of the memo, the context and problem, and the specific assignment or task. Before indulging
the reader with details and the context, give the reader a brief overview of what the memo
will be about. Choosing how specific your introduction will be depends on your memo plan
style. The more direct the memo plan, the more explicit the introduction should be. Including
the purpose of the memo will help clarify the reason the audience should read this document.
The introduction should be brief, and should be approximately the length of a short paragraph.
Context
The context is the event, circumstance, or background of the problem you are solving. You
may use a paragraph or a few sentences to establish the background and state the problem.
Oftentimes it is sufficient to use the opening of a sentence to completely explain the context,
such as,
Task Segment
One essential portion of a memo is the task statement where you should describe what you
are doing to help solve the problem. If the action was requested, your task may be indicated
by a sentence opening like,
"To determine the best method of promoting the new fall line, I will...."
Include only as much information as is needed by the decision-makers in the context, but be
convincing that a real problem exists. Do no ramble on with insignificant details. If you are
having trouble putting the task into words, consider whether you have clarified the situation.
You may need to do more planning before you're ready to write your memo. Make sure your
purpose-statement forecast divides your subject into the most important topics that the
decision-maker needs.
Summary Segment
If your memo is longer than a page, you may want to include a separate summary segment.
However, this section not necessary for short memos and should not take up a significant
amount of space. This segment provides a brief statement of the key recommendations you
have reached. These will help your reader understand the key points of the memo
immediately. This segment may also include references to methods and sources you have
used in your research.
Discussion Segments
The discussion segments are the longest portions of the memo, and are the parts in which you
include all the details that support your ideas. Begin with the information that is most
important. This may mean that you will start with key findings or recommendations. Start with
your most general information and move to your specific or supporting facts. (Be sure to use
the same format when including details: strongest to weakest.) The discussion segments
include the supporting ideas, facts, and research that back up your argument in the memo.
Include strong points and evidence to persuade the reader to follow your recommended
actions. If this section is inadequate, the memo will not be as effective as it could be.
Closing Segment
After the reader has absorbed all of your information, you want to close with a courteous
ending that states what action you want your reader to take. Make sure you consider how the
reader will benefit from the desired actions and how you can make those actions easier. For
example, you might say,
"I will be glad to discuss this recommendation with you during our Tuesday trip to the spa and
Necessary Attachments
Make sure you document your findings or provide detailed information whenever necessary.
You can do this by attaching lists, graphs, tables, etc. at the end of your memo. Be sure to
refer to your attachments in your memo and add a notation about what is attached below your
closing, like this:
Format
The format of a memo follows the general guidelines of business writing. A memo is usually a
page or two long, should be single spaced and left justified. Instead of using indentations to
show new paragraphs, skip a line between sentences. Business materials should be concise
and easy to read. Therefore it is beneficial to use headings and lists to help the reader pinpoint
certain information.
You can help your reader understand your memo better by using headings for the summary
and the discussion segments that follow it. Write headings that are short but that clarify the
content of the segment. For example, instead of using "Summary" for your heading, try "New
Advertising Recommendations," which is much more specific. The major headings you choose
are the ones that should be incorporated in your purpose-statement in the opening paragraph.
For easy reading, put important points or details into lists rather than paragraphs when
possible. This will draw the readers' attention to the section and help the audience remember
the information better. Using lists will help you be concise when writing a memo.
This is a suggested distribution of the material to make writing memos easier. Not all memos
will be the same and the structure can change as you see necessary. Different organizations
may have different formatting procedures, so be flexible in adapting your writing skills
Sample Memo
TO: Kelly Anderson, Marketing Executive
Through market research and analysis, it has been discovered that the proposed
advertising media for the new fall lines need to be reprioritized and changed.
Findings from focus groups and surveys have made it apparent that we need to
update our advertising efforts to align them with the styles and trends of young
adults today. No longer are young adults interested in sitcoms as they watch reality
televisions shows. Also, it is has become increasingly important to use the internet
as a tool to communicate with our target audience to show our dominance in the
clothing industry.
Internet Advertising
XYZ Company needs to focus advertising on internet sites that appeal to young
people. According to surveys, 72% of our target market uses the internet for five
hours or more per week. The following list shows in order of popularity the most
frequented sites:
● Google
● Facebook
● Myspace
● EBay
● iTunes
Shifting our efforts from our other media sources such as radio and magazine to
these popular internet sites will more effectively promote our product sales. Young
adults are spending more and more time on the internet downloading music,
communicating and researching for homework and less and less time reading paper
magazines and listening to the radio. As the trend for cultural icons to go digital, so
must our marketing plans.
Television Adverting
It used to be common to advertise for our products on shows like Friends and
Seinfeld for our target audience, but even the face of television is changing. Young
adults are tuning into reality television shows for their entertainment. Results from
the focus group show that our target audience is most interested in shows like
American Idol,The Apprentice, and America's Next Top Model. The only non-reality
television show to be ranked in the top ten most commonly watched shows by males
and females 18-25 is Desperate Housewives. At Blue Incorporated, we need to focus
our advertising budget on reality television shows and reduce the amount of
advertising spent on other programs.
By refocusing our advertising efforts of our new line of clothing we will be able to
maximize the exposure of our product to our target market and therefore increase
our sales. Tapping into the trends of young adults will help us gain market share and
sales through effective advertising.
Attachments: Focus Group Results, January- May 2019; Survey Findings, January -
April 2019