Creative Nonfiction G12
Creative Nonfiction G12
Creative Nonfiction G12
Introduction
People communicate with one another in all kinds of ways. They tell stories.
They express their feelings and emotions. They update each other on what
is happening in their personal lives. They keep track of their observations
about what is happening in the world and their surroundings. They want to
inform others about certain ideas and facts. In this lesson, you will learn
what is meant by the term genre. In addition, the main types of literary
genres will be described, with examples given for each.
Unlocking of Difficulties
To attend the following intended learning outcomes for the first unit
of the course, you need to fully understand the following essential
knowledge that will be laid down in the succeeding pages. Please note that
you are not limited to exclusively refer to these resources. Thus, you are
expected to utilize other books, research articles and other resources that
are available in the library and in the internet.
Key Terms
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defines it as, “literature in the form of prose, especially novels, that
describes imaginary events and people.”
Lecture Notes
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Different words of fiction and drama may employ a number of elements,
but generally, there are four major elements that comprise a short story,
novel, or a play. These are:
Plot the sequence of events happening in a story
Setting the place and time where and when an event happens
Character the persons who inhabit a story
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the central idea, or thesis, or overall message that the story
Theme
conveys
NARRATIVE DEVICES:
Foreshadowing is used in fiction and drama as a guide or hint at
1 what is to happen need in the story.
Irony used both in fiction and drama when words that are
2 uttered, either by the author or the characters in the story, are
the opposite if what they actually mean.
Flashback is employed by an author or a playwright through the
3 use of a past event that will help the readers understand the
present.
A conflict is both present in fiction and drama. It provides and
4 showcase the opposing objectived of the protagonist nd the
antagonist, or inside the protagonist.
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The use of deus ex machina in both fiction and drama was once
a noble strategy. Today, it is a sign of weakness in the written
work. Once referring to the Greek practiceof physically lowering
5 a “god” to the stage at the end of the play to solve all the
problems, today it refers to the contrived element in the plot
used to solve a problem.
Types & Characteristics of Genres: Poetry
A main literary genre is poetry. All poems share specific characteristics.
For example, poetry is written in lines and stanzas instead of sentences and
paragraphs. Some poems follow strict rules as to the number and length of
lines and stanzas, whereas many poems are much more free-flowing.
Most poetry is abundant in figurative language. Using devices like a
simile, metaphor, hyperbole, onomatopoeia, alliteration, rhyme, and
much more, poetry can claim an emphasis on imagination, emotions,
and heartfelt ideas.
Poetry is usually shorter than the other genres, but some poems are
classified as epic poetry, which is long narrative poetry chronicling
heroic deeds and serious subject matter. For example, John Milton's
epic poem Paradise Lost focuses on Satan's fall from grace and his
following pursuit of revenge
The language of poetry is quite different from the language of prose
(fiction and drama). Poetry uses more intensified, focused, ad intricate
language that prose. Because we now live in modern society that prefers
prose, we might find reading poetry a sort of challenge. You must
remember though that in ancient times and periods, poetry was the
languageof the people.
Poetry is always characterized according to the following:
1. Poetry attempts to achieve beauty.
2. Poetry is imaginative, or makes use of the strength of imagination.
3. Poetry is musical, melodic, and rhythmical.
4. Poetry makes use of language that is metaphorical or symbolic, not
direct.
5. Poetry is more concentrated that prose.
6. Poetry makes use of brevity and conciseness.
There are many kinds of poetry – from the ancient epic to the specific
limerick – but generally, there are about three major categories of poetry:
narrative, lyric, and dramatic.
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LYRICAL VERSE The vast majority of poems written are "lyrical verse",
written in the first person as an emotional or subjective (emphasizing the
personal or individual) response to an experience. But, even narrative or
dramatic poetry can sometimes be categorized as also lyrical as in the case
of the ballad, a lyrical narrative.
American poet Elizabeth Alexander (1962–) wrote "Praise Song for the
Day" to read at the 2009 inauguration of America's first black president,
Barack Obama. The poem does not rhyme, but it creates a song-like
effect through rhythmic repetition of phrases. By echoing a traditional
African form, Alexander paid tribute to African culture in the United
States and called for people of all races to live together in peace.
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the figuring-it-out at kitchen tables."
NARRATIVE VERSE simply tells a story and is most often found in epic form.
It is often objective, distanced from the subject and usually written in the
third person as an observer. It describes an event in time and place as it
unfolds and is "rooted in local intention" or takes a particular point of view
of the event. It often will dramatize the crisis or climax and can be
narrative, dramatic and lyrical in presentation, such as the ballad. The story
telling can be fact or fiction and is presented in verse to separate from
other types of literature.
Another form of narrative poetry is a ballad, like the Ballad of the Harp
Weaver. In addition to telling a story and having characters, ballad poems
have a song-like quality to them and could easily be sung to a tune. A
rhyme scheme or a chorus are also common. For example, in the "Ballad
of the Harp Weaver," you can see the ABCB rhyme scheme where the
second and fourth lines rhyme throughout the stanzas.
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To grunt and sweat under a weary life,
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscovere'd country, from whose bourn
No traveller returns, puzzles the will,
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
Thus conscience does make cowards of us all,
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pitch and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry
And lose the name of action.
Focus Questions
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1. What are the elements of fiction and drama?
2. Explain the 5 narrative devices.
3. What are the three groups of poetry?
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
https://study.com/academy/lesson/literary-genres-definition-types-
characteristics-examples.html
https://www.cde.ca.gov/ci/cr/rl/litrlgenres.asp
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline will be posted in course group
chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE:
Hone your undertanding in genres of fiction and drama by checking the
mythical story found on the website below.
Tungkung Langit and Alunsina
http://phillitusls.blogspot.com/2013/04/tungkung-langit-and-alunsina-
as-adapted.html
Lecture Notes
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EXPLAINING KEY CONCEPTS:
Literature is divided into two general types: poetry and prose. The two
generally differ in form, the former being in stanza form and the latter
being in paragraph form. Another difference is that poetry basically has
rhyme, rhythm, and measure, the three of which poetry lacks. Moreover,
what makes poetry distinct from prose is that poems are generally written
figuratively while prose works are principally written literally.
TYPES OF GENRE
o POETRY
Poetry is the first major literary genre. All types of poetry share specific
characteristics. In fact, poetry is a form of text that follows a meter and
rhythm, with each line and syllable. It is further subdivided into different
genres, such an epic poem, narrative, romantic, dramatic, and lyric.
Dramatic poetry includes melodrama, tragedy, and comedy, while other
poems includes ode, sonnet, elegy, ballad, song, and epic.
Popular examples of epic poems include Paradise Lost, by John Milton,
The Iliad and The Odyssey, by Homer. Examples of romantic poems include
Red Red Rose, by Robert Burns. All these poetic forms share specific
features, such as they do not follow paragraphs or sentences; they use
stanzas and lines instead. Some forms follow very strict rules of length, and
number of stanzas and lines, such as villan elle, sonnet, and haiku.
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A RED, RED ROSE
BY ROBERT BURNS
PROSE
This type of written text is different from poetry in that it has complete
sentences organized into paragraphs. Unlike poetry, prose focuses on
characters and plot, rather than focusing on sounds. It includes short
stories and novels, while fiction and non-fiction are its sub genres. Prose is
further categorized into essays, speeches, sermons, and interpretations.
Poetry Form
Following is a poetry verse from a popular work of Robert Frost:
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(Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, by Robert Frost)
Prose Form
“The woods look lovely against the setting darkness and as I gaze into
the mysterious depths of the forest, I feel like lingering here longer.
However, I have pending appointments to keep, and much distance to
cover before I settle in for the night, or else I will be late for all of them.”
ELEMENTS OF POETRY:
o Measure involves the counting of the number of lines and stanzas
(vertical measure) and the number of syllables and feet (horizontal
measure).
o Vertical Measure Poems and stanzas are classified according to the
number of lines. When a stanza or a poem has two lines, it is called a
couplet; three lines, a triplet (the three lines rhyme; and so forth.
o Horizontal Measure lines are described according to the number of
syllables.
When lines are measured according to the number of feet or meters, they
are classified as follows:
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2. Anapest, a foot with two unstressed syllables followed by stressed
syllable;
3. Trochee, a foot with a stressed syllable followed by unstressed syllable;
4. Dactyl, a foot with a stressed syllable followed by two unstressed
syllables;
5. Spondee, a foot with two stressed syllables; and
6. Pyrrhic foot, a foot with two unstressed syllables.
ELEMENTS OF STORY
o Since most of the prose forms are narrative, the succeeding elements
pertain to narrative prose.
o Setting refers to the time and locale of the story.
o Characters are categorized into principal and supporting characters.
The principal characters are the protagonist and the primary antagonist,
whereas the supporting characters are the supporting antagonist,
confidants, foil, and background characters.
o Protagonist. The protagonist or the hero is the main character around
whom the story revolves. In the fairy tale titled “Cinderella,” the
protagonist is Cinderella.
o Antagonist the antagonist or the villain is the main or the supporting
character who opposes the protagonist.
o Confidant/e. The confidant or confidante (feminine) is the supporting
character upon whom the protagonist confides. He is the sidekick of the
hero; he is a constant companion of the hero and knows almost
everything about the hero.
o Foil. The foil is the supporting character who serves as a contrast to the
hero but does not necessarily oppose him.
o Background Character. The background characters are those characters
who provide reality to the story by their mere presence. For example, in
“Cinderella,” they are the people who attended the ball sponsored by
the prince.
o Unseen Character. The unseen character is an absent character who,
even in his absence, effects the development of the story.
o Theme. The theme is the idea or concept of the author expressed in a
concise statement. Referred to as the message of the story, it
concretizes the abstract idea the writer wants to impart.
o Plot. The plot is the chronological sequence of events in the story.
o Conflict is the motivating, driving force that involves both characters and
readers in the narrative. Synonymous with opposition, conflict is
classified into social, physical, metaphysical, and internal or personal
conflict.
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o Social Conflict exists when the protagonist and antagonist are opposed
to each other. Known as “man versus man” conflict.
o Physical Conflict occurs when the protagonist struggles against physical
forces such as natural calamities, illnesses, and the like. Known as “man
versus man nature: conflict.
o Metaphysical Conflict exists when the protagonist fights supernatural
beings such as gods and goddesses, vampires, werewolves, elves, fairies,
and the like. Known as “man versus supernatural beings” conflict.
o Personal or Internal or Psychological Conflict occurs when the character
experiences a dilemma. The conflict exists within the person as what
Rose encountered in “Titanic” when she was torn between two lovers,
Jack and her fiancé.
FICTION
Fiction has three categories that are, realistic, non-realistic, and semi-
fiction. Usually, fiction work is not real and therefore, authors can use
complex figurative language to touch readers’ imaginations. Unlike poetry,
it is more structured, follows proper grammatical pattern, and correct
mechanics. A fictional work may incorporate fantastical and imaginary ideas
from everyday life. It comprises some important elements such as plot,
exposition, foreshadowing, rising action, climax, falling action, and
resolution. Popular examples of literary fiction include, James Joyce’s novel
A Portrait of an Artist as a Young Man, Charles Dickens’ A Tale of Two
Cities, Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, and Harper Lee’s To Kill a
Mockingbird.
TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD
By: Harper Lee
Summary
The story is narrated by a young girl named Jean Louise Finch, who is
almost always called by her nickname, Scout. Scout starts to explain the
circumstances that led to the broken arm that her older brother, Jem,
sustained many years earlier; she begins by recounting her family history.
The first of her ancestors to come to America was a fur-trader and
apothecary named Simon Finch, who fled England to escape religious
persecution and established a successful farm on the banks of the
Alabama River. The farm, called Finch’s Landing, supported the family for
many years. The first Finches to make a living away from the farm were
Scout’s father, Atticus Finch, who became a lawyer in the nearby town of
Maycomb, and his brother, Jack Finch, who went to medical school in
Boston. Their sister, Alexandra Finch, stayed to run the Landing.
A successful lawyer, Atticus makes a solid living in Maycomb, a
tired, poor, old town in the grips of the Great Depression. He lives with
Jem and Scout on Maycomb’s main residential street. Their cook, an old
black woman named Calpurnia, helps to raise the children and keep the
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house. Atticus’s wife died when Scout was two, so she does not
remember her mother well. But Jem, four years older than Scout, has
memories of their mother that sometimes make him unhappy.
In the summer of 1933, when Jem is nearly ten and Scout almost
six, a peculiar boy named Charles Baker Harris moves in next door. The
boy, who calls himself Dill, stays for the summer with his aunt, Miss
Rachel Haverford, who owns the house next to the Finches’. Dill doesn’t
like to discuss his father’s absence from his life, but he is otherwise a
talkative and extremely intelligent boy who quickly becomes the Finch
children’s chief playmate. All summer, the three act out various stories
that they have read. When they grow bored of this activity, Dill suggests
that they attempt to lure Boo Radley, a mysterious neighbor, out of his
house.
Arthur “Boo” Radley lives in the run-down Radley Place, and no
one has seen him outside it in years. Scout recounts how, as a boy, Boo
got in trouble with the law and his father
imprisoned him in the house as punishment. He
was not heard from until fifteen years later, when
he stabbed his father with a pair of scissors.
Although people suggested that Boo was crazy, old
Mr. Radley refused to have his son committed to an
asylum. When the old man died, Boo’s brother,
Nathan, came to live in the house with Boo.
Nevertheless, Boo continued to stay inside.
Dill is fascinated by Boo and tries to convince the Finch children to help
him lure this phantom of Maycomb outside. Eventually, he dares Jem to
run over and touch the house. Jem does so, sprinting back hastily; there is
no sign of movement at the Radley Place, although Scout thinks that she
sees a shutter move slightly, as if someone were peeking out. (…continue
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NON-FICTION
Non-fiction is a vast category that also has sub-genres; it could be
creative like a personal essay, or factual, like a scientific paper. It may also
use figurative language, however, not unlike poetry, or fiction has.
Sometimes, non-fiction may tell a story, like an autobiography, or
sometimes it may convey information to readers.
Other examples of non-fiction include biographies, diaries, memoirs,
journals, fantasies, mysteries, and romances. A popular example of non-
fiction genre is Michael Pollan’s highly celebrated book, The Omnivore’s
Dilemma: A Natural History of Four Meals, which is an account of the eating
habits of Americans.
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INTRODUCTION
One does not necessarily expect books about food also to be about
bigger ideas like oppression, spirituality, and freedom. Yet Michael Pollan
has always defied expectations. To be sure, his two most recent books,
The Omnivore’s Dilemma and In Defense of Food, celebrate the pleasure
of eating. However, Pollan also serves up something far more potent: a
pointed and thorough critique of how the food industry, the government,
advertisers, and, yes, even Pollan’s fellow journalists have turned the
process of putting food on our tables into an increasingly dysfunctional
enterprise. With insight, gentle firmness, and even some well-placed
humor, Pollan observes how modern farming is at war with the needs
and dictates of nature, how the nutritional policies of the government
have rebelled against sound scientific practice, how even the consumer
has been divided against himself and that eating has ceased to be for
many of us a source of enjoyment and has become instead an occasion
for uncertainty, anxiety, and guilt. Within Pollan’s jeremiads there is also
a persistent core of hope. While never flinching in his critique of the way
things are, Pollan constantly encourages us to think of how things might
be.
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establishment that has focused on individual nutrients rather than the
unique benefits of whole foods, Pollan offers three gentle
commandments: Eat Food. Not Too Much. Mostly Plants. Tautly written
and eloquently argued, In Defense of Food shows us how simple—and
how strangely complicated those three little rules can be.
Born in 1955, Michael Pollan grew up in Long Island, New York. He was
educated at Bennington College, Oxford University, and Columbia
University, from which he received a master’s degree in English. A former
executive editor of Harper’s Magazine,
he is currently the John S. and James L.
Knight Professor of Journalism at the
University of California at Berkeley. His
essays have been widely anthologized,
and he is a regular contributor to The
New York Times Magazine. He is the author of five books, including A
Place of My Own, Second Nature, and The Botany of Desire: A Plant’s-Eye
View of the World. The Omnivore’s Dilemma: A Natural History of Four
Meals was named one of the ten best books of 2006 by The New York
Times and The Washington Post. Michael Pollan lives in the Bay Area with
his wife, the painter Judith Belzer, and their son, Isaac.
Focus Questions
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://study.com/academy/lesson/prose-poems-definition-famous-
examples.html
o https://www.cliffsnotes.com/cliffsnotes/subjects/literature/what-
does-prose-and-poetry-mean-whats-the-difference
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o https://literarydevices.net/
o https://www.litcharts.com/literary-devices-and-terms
o https://literaryterms.net/literary-device/
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline and activity rubrics will be posted
in course group chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE:
1. Write a four-line-stanza poem using this title, “I am.” In this short poem,
write about your thoughts about yourself-your character, fears, and
virtues. You can also write about your dreams and aspirations.
2. Peer-edit each other’s draft based on the following: (Note that you will
be grouped beforehand. And exchanging of output will be done through
online the same with submission.)
3. Revise the draft of the poem based on the observations and comments
made by your peer and then submit the revised version to your teacher.
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5. write a vivid description of a place that you are familiar with or
you have been to for an essay using words that appeals to the
senses;
6. recreate the exact mood or atmosphere that befits not only the
setting but also your impressions of the place and its impact in
your life;
7. distinguish between literal and figurative language and use
figures of speech correctly; and
8. identify the different types of ironies in the selection read.
Introduction
Writing nonfiction isn’t easy. For some it is intuitive. For others it
requires hard work, perseverance, and close attention to form and
technique. If you are going to learn to write nonfiction stories, you will
need to know a few basic principles. These principles include elements,
techniques, and devices. These principles can be exercised in many
different ways. How you choose to exercise them is what will make your
story distinctively different from anyone else’s.
Unlocking of Difficulties
To attend the following intended learning outcomes for the third unit
of the course, you need to fully understand the following essential
knowledge that will be laid down in the succeeding pages.
Key Terms
Lecture Notes
PLOT
Plot or plot structure is inherent in fiction. Plot is a sequence of
events that has beginning, middle, and an end. It is a pattern of actions,
events, and situations showing the development of the narrative. Just like
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fiction, creative nonfiction also has a plot. One major difference is that the
plot of creative nonfiction is based on actual people, experiences, and
events, as they actually happened while in fiction, the characters are a
product of the fictionist’s creative imagination or can be based on real
experiences and events or on real people who inhabit a fictional world
created by the fiction writer.
It is divided into the following parts:
Exposition. The first part of the plot, the exposition introduces the setting
and the characters of the story. It is also called the introduction or status
quo.
Rising Incidents/s. The rising incidents are those incidents that lead to the
complication.
Complication is the longest part of the narrative, in which the conflict
develops.
Crisis it is the problem of the story.
Climax. The highest point of the story, during which the readers know how
the conflict will be resolved.
Denouement or Resolution. The denouement or resolution is the part of
the plot in which the conflict will be resolved.
Falling Incident/s. The falling incidents are those incidents that lead to the
conclusion. Shorter than the rising action, the falling action may still have
some suspenseful moment but it gives the reader a sense of completion.
Conclusion. The conclusion is the last part of the story’s plot. It gives the
story some finality.
Creative nonfiction writers must have the skill of fictionists since they
will be telling a true story in the way fictionists do i.e., employing all the
strategies and techniques necessary for writing fiction. This is what makes
nonfiction “creative.”
FREYTAG’S PYRAMID
Freytag’s Pyramid is a method of structuring a story by mapping the
progression of conflict from inception to resolution. Founded in the
theatrical drama of Ancient Greece, basic plot structure for any narrative
was laid out by Aristotle in Poetics. According to Aristotle, each story has a
beginning, a middle, and an end. In the nineteenth century, a German
novelist Gustav Freytag flushed out these concepts and added two other
key plot points into the model – the rising and falling action, and created a
pictorial tool to help visualize the concept.
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Focus Questions
DIRECTION: To hone your understanding, answer the following question.
Details on the deadline will be announced in Zoom.
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://literarydevices.net/plot/
o https://literaryterms.net/plot/
ACTIVITY 1:
1. Write a seven-sentence beginning for the following topics using any of
these ways: vivid description, a little scene, an anecdote, etc. Then, give
a possible title for your creative nonfiction piece.
2. Write down your thoughts about your day in school, how it began and
ended, the important events of the day such as your encounters with
your teachers and classmates, and what you did after school. Post it on
the wall of your Facebook page. Limit your post to 100 to 200 words.
ACTIVITY 2:
Looking back and Moving Forward: Trace some of the most memorable
events in your life and try charting your future by providing the personal
information below.
Three Most
Memorable People
Date Impact/Contribution in My Life
Events Involved
In My Life
Lecture Notes
POINT OF VIEW
Point of view is the perspective from which a story is narrated. Every story
has a perspective, though there can be more than one type of point of view
in a work of literature.
Point of View vs. Narrator
Point of view is very closely linked with the concept of a narrator. The
narrator of a story can be participant in the story, meaning this character is
a part of the plot, or a non-participant. The point of view in a story refers to
the position of the narrator in relation to the story. For example, if the
narrator is a participant in the story, it is more likely that the point of view
would be first person, as the narrator is witnessing and interacting with the
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events and other characters firsthand. If the narrator is a non-participant, it
is more likely that the point of view would be in third person, as the
narrator is removed from the events.
These are general guidelines, of course, and there are many exceptions of
these rules. Let us look more in depth at the multiple options for narrative
point of view.
Types of Point of View
First-Person Singular uses the “I” pronoun to refer to the narrator. This
narrator is usually the protagonist of the story, and this point of view allows
the reader access to the character’s inner thoughts and reactions to the
events occurring.
First-Person Plural This point of view is extremely uncommon in novels, as
it uses “we” as the primary pronoun. This implies a group of people
narrating the story at once. To use this point of view successfully, there
must be a sense of group identity, either facing a similar challenge together
or placing themselves in apposition to another “outside" group.
Second Person - Another uncommon point of view is second person, using
the “you” pronoun to narrate the story. This point of view either implies
that the narrator is actually an “I” trying to separate himself or herself from
the events that he or she is narrating, or allows the reader to identity with
the central character.
Third Person - This point of view definition uses “he” and “she” as the
pronouns to refer to different characters, and provides the greatest
amount of flexibility for the author.
Third-Person Limited - The reader is privy only to one main character’s
thoughts. In this way, it is similar to the first-person singular point of view,
since the focus stays tightly on one character.
Third-Person Omniscient - This allows the author to delve into the thoughts
of any character, making the narrator seem godlike. This was a popular
point of view in the 19th century novels. For example, the opening of Jane
Austen’s Pride and Prejudice presents an all-knowing narrator.
Alternating Person - Some novels combine two or more of the above types
of point of view. For example, some novels alternate between a first-person
singular point of view in some chapters and the third-person point of view
in other chapters. The Harry Potter series alternates between third-person
limited- allowing access to Harry’s thoughts-and third-person omniscient
when information must be shared that Harry is not a witness to.
Here are some examples:
First-Person singular:
“I had the craziest night last night! I’ll tell you all about it.”
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First-Person plural:
New York was great. We went to the statue of Liberty, we walked around
Central Park, and we ate fantastic food. It’s our favorite city.”
Third-Person:
“My Grandfather was a pilot in the war, and one time he survived a terrible
crashed.”
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1. What kind of creative nonfiction piece is Virginia Woolf’s “The Death of
the Moth?”
Justify your answer.
2. What point or points of view did the writer use? Cite an example.
3. Did the writer succeed in using the point or points of view in
emphasizing her point? Explain your answer.
Activity 2
A. What Photographs Actually Say
Take a photo of anything that catches your fancy (e.g., a selfie, your
family having dinner, a long queue in a movie theatre, children playing, a
beautiful scenery etc.) Post it on your Facebook page and write your
thoughts about the photograph that you took.
Then write an essay with 8 to 10 sentences about your subject. You may
use any point of view.
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Lecture Notes
SETTING AND ATMOSPHERE
SETTING
I. What is setting?
The setting of a piece of literature is the time and place in which the
story takes place. The definition of setting can also include social status,
weather, historical period, and details about immediate surroundings.
Setting can be real or fictional, or a combination of both real and fictional
elements. Some settings are very specific (Wulfhall in Witshire England in
1500), while others are descriptive ( a bout out on the ocean) Most pieces
of literature include more-or many more-than one setting, either as the
narrative progresses through time or to include points of view from more
than one character.
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history or anywhere. The focus is on the lesson or message being delivered.
Many fairy tales and children’s stories have backdrop settings. “Winnie the
Pooh” would be an example. Since the lessons that the characters learn is
the point rather than the time period, it’s hard to tack a “past, present, or
future” on the time aspect of the setting. It could also be any town or
country, which means children anywhere can relate to it.
b. Integral setting
With an integral setting (integral means to be a part of or important to), the
time and place are important to the story. For example, a story dealing with
a historical setting will have a direct impact on the plot. A story that
happens in the 1800s will not have technology, so the characters will have
to write a letter, ride a horse or take a carriage to visit each other; they
cannot travel long distances in one day as we do now with cars, buses, and
planes. This will have a direct impact on the events of the story, especially if
there is distance involved.
IV. The Importance of Setting
Setting gives context to the characters’ actions in a story line. It can also
create the mood (how the reader or viewer feels). It’s easier to understand
why the characters in the story are doing what they’re doing when we
know where they are. The time of day, time of year, and ages of the
characters will also affect how they act and what they say.
All forms of literature will have some form of setting; even backdrop
settings have an age range of the characters, which is part of time, and a
location, either indoors or out, for example. Without a setting, readers and
viewers cannot follow a story plot.
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These two examples describe the same scene, but they create a very
different atmosphere. Notice how they both end with similes describing the
same sound in opposite ways:
Example 1
Marilyn’s small apartment was bathed with light from the new floor-to-
ceiling windows. Outside, the sounds of a balmy summer day floated up to
her ears like the gurgle of a cool, clear brook.
Example 2
Marilyn’s cramped apartment was roasting in the scorching sunlight that
burned through her floor-to-ceiling windows. And if there was anything
more oppressive than the heat, it had to be the constant din that bubbled
up from the city street below like steam from a putrid stew.
III. The Importance of Atmosphere
Atmosphere basically determines the emotional experience that the reader
will have. Are they going to feel hopeful? Depressed? Anxious? Curious?
Adventurous? You set the mood through atmosphere, and it colors how the
audience experiences the whole piece.
Certain genres are especially dependent on atmosphere. Horror, for
example, is an extremely atmosphere-dependent genre: what would
a horror story be without its atmosphere of creepiness and terror? To write
a good horror story, you’ve got to be good at writing with atmosphere.
Hone your undertanding in setting and atmosphere by checking the some
effective examples found on the website below.
“Two Views of the Mississippi,”
By: Mark Twain
(Source: https://hubpages.com/literature/A-Summar-of-Mark-Twains-Two-
Views-of-the-Mississippi)
Focus Questions
DIRECTION: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be announced in Zoom.
Related Readings
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For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://literaryterms.net/setting/
o https://literaryterms.net/atmosphere/
Learning / Assessment Activities
Second Paragraph: What were the good things you remember about the
vacation? Did you dislike anything about the trip and the vacation? What
were they?
Last Paragraph: What is your dream summer vacation? Where do you want
to go? Who do you want to take with you in this dream vacation?
What activities do you want to engage in which you haven’t done yet in
your previous vacation? Do you think this is possible? What do your parents
think about it?
Lecture Notes
LITERARY CONCERNS: SYMBOLS OR SYMBOLISM, FIGURES OF SPEECH,
IRONY, THEME, DIALOGUE, AND VOICE
A. STRUCTURE
Just like in fiction, organization is a very important component in
creative nonfiction. You don’t just write whatever comes to your mind; you
need to have a plan before you sit down to write. One of the worst thing
happen to a writer is to have his rambling thoughts on paper jumping from
one topic to another, and ending up being incoherent. Readers expect a
certain structure that shows the writer’s idea flowing smoothly. But
organizing your material is not east to do. That is why as a beginning writer
you must start by having an outline which will serve as a blueprint for your
essay.
In her book, Creative Nonfiction: A Manual for Filipino Writers, Cristina
Pantojo-Hidalgo provides us with the different types of s structure:
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Chronological Structure
As a term suggest, it refers to an arrangement of events in linear fashion, as
they occurred in time. This is deal for an account of a trip of a travelogue.
Explanation-of-a-process structure
This is the best structure for a how-to-article (e.g., How to Cope with
Heartbreak, How to Use Your Time Wisely) since it tells readers what to do
step-by-step.
Flashback structure
This type is often used in fiction but is also used in creative nonfiction. A
flashback begins at some point in time and then moves back into the past.
This works best when you write a memoir.
Parallel structure
This type has several stories, running side by side, with occasional cross-
cutting or convergence. It is a technique that may have been influenced by
the cinema.
Collage or Mosaic structure
This type was influenced by painting and film. When you write accounts of
disasters, this is most convenient. It involves a pasting together of small
fragments, which all together build up to the total picture of what
happened. This is an excellent device capturing the complexity of an event
and also creating a sense of immediacy of speed.
Diary or Log Book structure
This type is a variation of the chronological structure and gives a sense of
immediacy to the narrative. It also makes the narrative seem more
personal.
Question-and-answer structure
This type is a logical choice for interview stories which allows the reader to
hear the subject’s voice without the awkwardness of having to repeat “he
said” or “she said” before every direct quotation.
Frame, or the story-within-a-story structure
It is a good structure to use when you wish to tell two stories-say, in a
travel narrative, where the actual physical journey is paralleled by an inner
journey.
B. Symbols/Symbolism
Symbol- A word, place character, or object that means something beyond
what it is on a literal level. For instance, consider the stop sign. It is literally
a metal octagon painted red with white streaks. However, everyone in
American roads will be safer if we understands that this object also
represents the act of coming to a complete stop-an idea hard to encompass
briefly without some sort of symbol substitute. In literature, symbols can be
cultural, contextual, or personal.
Source: http://quizlet.com/9391327/literary-terms-definitions-
middlelemist-flash-cards
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Symbolic Character- are characters whose primary literary function is
symbolic, even though the character may retain normal or realistic
qualities. For instance, in Ellison’s Invisible Man, the character Ras is on a
literal level an angry young black man who leads rioters in an urban
rampage. However, the character Ras is a symbol or “race” (as his name
phonetically suggests), and he represents the frustration and violence
inherent in people who are denied equality.
Source:www.superglossary.com/Glossary/entertainment/Literature/symbol
ic_Character.html
C. Irony
Irony is a figure of speech in which words are used to mean the opposite of
their actual meanings. It is also the use of strange situations in which things
happen in a way that is opposite of what you expected. For example, a man
who is a soldier in real life and known for his physical strength, playing all
types of sports and other physical activities, ends up having a child who is
sickly and physically weak.
D. Figures of Speech
A figure of speech is a phrase or word which means more than its literal
meaning. It conveys meaning by identifying or comparing one thing to
another. It also has connotation or meaning familiar to the audience. This is
why it is helpful in creating vivid rhetorical effect.
Alliteration
It involves using words that begin with the same sound.
“Sally sells see shells by the seashore.”
“Peter Piper picked a pack of pickled pepper.”
Anaphora
It uses a specific clause at the beginning of each sentence or point to make
a statement.
“Good night and good luck”
“It was the best of times. It was the worst of
times.”
Assonance
It focuses on the vowel sounds in a phrase, a line of text or poetry
repeating them over and over to a great effect.
“Hear the mellow wedding bells” (Edgar Allan
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Poe)
“If I bleat when I speak it’s because I just got. . .
fleeced” (Al Swearengen)
Hyperbole
It uses exaggerated statements or claims not meant to be taken literally.
“I am so hungry I could eat a horse.”
“I’ve told you a million times.”
Irony
It expresses one’s meaning by using language that normally signifies the
opposite.
“I love cold pizza!” (a sarcastic response when
one is served cold food)
“Oh great! Now you have broken my new
camera.”
Metaphor
It compares two things that are not alike and finds something about them
to make them alike.
“My heart is a lonely hunter that hunts on the
lonely hill.”
“His voice is music to his ears.”
Simile
It compares two things that are not really the same, but are used to make a
point about each other, usually using the words ‘like’ or ‘as’.
Metonymy
It is figure of speech in which a thing or concept is called not by its own
name but rather by the name of something associated with that thing or
concept.
Onomatopoeia
It is the use of a word that actually sound like what it means.
Paradox
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It is a figure of speech that completely contradicts itself in the same
sentence. It is a seemingly absurd or self-contradictory statement or
proposition that when investigated or explained may prove to be well-
founded or true.
Personification
It is a way of giving an inanimate object the qualities of a living thing.
“The tree quaked with fear as the wind
approached.”
“The sun smiled down on her.”
Pun
This play on words uses different senses of the words, or different sounds
that make up the words, to create something fun and interesting.
Synecdoche
It is a figure of speech in which one thing is meant to represent the whole.
Understatement
It is a situation in which the thing discussed is made to seem much less
important that it really is.
Antithesis
It is a contradiction that pits to ideas against each other in a balanced way.
Euphemism
It contains words that are used to soften the message or make it sound
better than it is.
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“My mother passed away.”
“Janet Jackson had a wardrobe malfunction when
she performed at the Super Bowl.”
Oxymoron
It contains two contradicting words that are put together.
“open secret”
“deafening silence”
Focus Questions
DIRECTION: To hone your understanding, answer the following question.
Details on the deadline will be announced in Zoom.
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://corporatefinanceinstitute.com/resources/knowledge/other/fi
gurative-language/
o https://www.writingforward.com/writing_exercises/creative-writing-
exercises/symbols-and-symbolism-in-fiction
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2. write an interview story about person whose life the learner
finds interesting or intriguing, who can either be a local
celebrity or a common folk;
3. define the various types of autobiographical narratives like the
autobiography, memoir, diary and journal;
4. compose a journal entry containing at least five well-written
paragraphs;
5. compare and contrast the personal, literary or informal essay
from the documented, non-literary or formal essay;
6. compose a short personal or informal essay comprising five to
seven paragraphs that describes your hometown or your home;
7. determine the distinguishing characteristics of travel writing,
food writing, and nature writing;
8. write a short piece of food writing that will feature special dish;
and
9. compose a well-written blog comprising five paragraphs about
a topic of one’s own choice.
Introduction
Creative nonfiction is a form of prose "based mainly on fact rather
than on the imagination, although (it) may contain fictional elements."
Scott Edelstein in 100 Things Every Writer needs to know provides us with
another definition that runs this way: “a work of nonfiction that uses some
of the techniques of fiction, and/or that concerns itself primarily with
providing an emotional (rather than merely intellectual) experience."
As a major literary genre (like poetry, fiction, and drama), creative
nonfiction also has many literary types and forms. Generally speaking,
creative nonfiction can be divided into three broad categories: biographical
narratives, autobiographical narratives, and various kinds of personal or
informal essays.
Under the autobiographical narratives category are the full-length
autobiography and the multi-volume autobiography, the memoir, the diary,
and the journal. Under the personal or informal essay category are the
literary reportage, the descriptive essay, and the reflective essay.
Special types of creative nonfiction, whose rise in popularity can be
attributed to the growth of the middle class, and the increase in the
accessibility and affordability of going on a journey, are ravel writing, food
writing, and nature writing. Emerging forms of creative nonfiction which
also deserve attention-although they may not be as literary as the other
types-are the testimonio, the blog, and the Facebook status report.
Unlocking of Difficulties
To attend the following intended learning outcomes for the first unit
of the course, you need to fully understand the following essential
knowledge that will be laid down in the succeeding pages. Please note that
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you are not limited to exclusively refer to these resources. Thus, you are
expected to utilize other books, research articles and other resources that
are available in the library and in the internet.
Key Terms
Lecture Notes
BIOGRAPHY
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called it "the history of particular men's lives." Biography today, "then, may
be defined as the accurate presentation of the life history from to death of
an individual, along with an effort to interpret the life so as to offer a
unified impression of the subject."
See the link to view example. (http://www.emilyjenkins.com/biographical-essay)
The popular biography, as the term implies, refers to the life story
of a famous and/ or successful person-a show business personality, a
professional athlete, a business tycoon, a political leader, a fashion
celebrity, a reigning monarch, or even a serial killer which is meant for
popular or mass consumption. Since the main purpose of the popular
biographer is to disclose or reveal to the most number of people the
personal tale of the public figure he or she intends to immortalize, he or
she tends to focus on the main action of the narrative as well as the nitty-
gritty details, and to forgo the creation of mood and atmosphere, and the
other elements that differentiate him or her from a literary or historical
biographer.
CHARACTER SKETCH
INTERVIEW STORY
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
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1. Which of the following types of the full-length biography tends to
sensationalize the details of the life of its subject?
2. Which of the following types of biographical narrative requires
thorough research?
3. Which of the following types of biographical narrative is the shortest?
4. Which of the following types of biographical narrative can be
described as a cameo or miniature life story?
5. Which of the following types of biographical narrative can be the
product of just one interview?
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://www.iwriteessays.com/essays/how-to-write-a-biographical-
narrative
o https://www.essayclip.com/guides/sample-biography-essay
o https://www.aresearchguide.com/write-a-character-sketch.html
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline and activity rubrics will be posted
in course group chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE:
What is most important is that you must find this person particularly
interesting, or at least intriguing enough, to write about him or her.
Your primary task is to make this person come alive in your interview
story.
Lecture Notes
AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL NARRATIVES: AUTOBIOGRAPHY, MEMOIR, DIARY,
JOURNAL
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There is a wide variety of autobiographical narratives, ranging "from the
intimate writings made during life that were not necessarily intended for
publication (including letters, letters, diaries, journals, memoirs, and
reminiscences) to the formal autobiography."
AUTOBIOGRAPHY
According to a dictionary of literary terms, an autobiography is "an
account of one's own life, generally continuous narrative of major
events." It can also be defined as "the biography of oneself narrated
by oneself." Within the context of this second definition, the
autobiography can be considered as nothing more than a subspecies
of the biography, which etymologically comes from the Greek words
bíos (life) + gráphein (to write).
Although it has no prescribed pattern or structure, "there are roughly
four different kinds of autobiography: thematic, religious,
intellectual, and fictionalized." Literary critics and editors of
anthologies specializing in the study of autobiographical narratives
have a medley of interesting insights regarding this type of creative
nonfiction prose.
Autobiographical narratives are fictions, in the sense that the
narrator imposes her or his order on the ebb and flow of experience
and gives us a false sense of certainty and finality about causation in
life. Yet they are not fictions but accounts of real lives, lived in a
specific time and place, windows on the past.
MEMOIR
Diary
JOURNAL
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
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2. Which of the following types of autobiographical narrative is
fragmentary compared a formal autobiography?
3. Which of the following types of autobiographical narrative
etymologically means “self+ life +to write?”
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://tetw.org/Memoir
o http://psychology.iresearchnet.com/social-psychology/social-
psychology-research-methods/autobiographical-narratives/
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline and activity rubrics will be posted
in course group chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE
For this writing exercise, you must need to have a writing notebook which
will serve as your journal. Write your very first entry which must contain
the following:
The first paragraph will explain the purpose why you are
keeping a journal (aside from the obvious fact that it is a class
requirement) and what you intend to achieve in your diary writing: the
second to fourth paragraphs will describe your routine activities in a
typical day and the last paragraph will express your hopes and dreams
for the future.
Lecture Notes
PERSONAL OR INFORMAL ESSAYS: LITERARY REPORTAGE, DESCRIPTIVE
ESSAY, AND REFLECTIVE ESSAY
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"to try," and its primary meaning is still used in certain instances in
English.
The term was first used by the Renaissance author Michel de
Montaigne to underscore or emphasize that his short compositions of
maxims, aphorisms, adages, apothegms, proverbs, anecdotes and
quotations collected in two volumes titled Essais "were attempts or
endeavors, a groping toward the expression of his personal thoughts
and experiences."
LITERARY REPORTAGE
DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://libguides.westsoundacademy.org/ee/informal-formal-essays
o https://owlcation.com/humanities/How-to-Write-a-Reflective-Essay-
with-Sample-Essays
o https://journalism.nyu.edu/graduate/programs/literary-reportage/
o https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/subject_specific_writing/creative_writing/c
reative_nonfiction/sub_genres_of_creative_nonfiction.html
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline and activity rubrics will be posted
in course group chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE
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Compose a personal or informal essay (five to seven paragraphs)
that describes your hometown or your home. If you are writing about
your hometown, you might start by describing its downtown area before
proceeding to describe its suburbs or outskirts. If you are writing about
your home, you may start by describing the façade or frontage of your
house before proceeding to describe its interior spaces. Combine
objective description and subjective description to make your essay more
vivid and remarkable.
Lecture Notes
SPECIAL TYPES OF CREATIVE NONFICTION: TRAVEL WRITING, FOOD
WRITING, AND NATURE WRITING
TRAVEL WRITING
Travel writing is a form of creative nonfiction that describes the
narrator's experiences in foreign places. This type of writing usually
includes a narration of the journey undertaken by the narrator from
his or her point of origin to the eventual destination, with all the
hazards and inconveniences encountered along the way. It also entails
detailed descriptions of the local customs and traditions, the
landscape or cityscape, the native cuisine, the historical and cultural
landmarks, and the sights and sounds the visited place has to offer.
But for travel writing to qualify as good literature and a cut above
commercial travel guides aimed at potential tourists, must also
contain a corresponding psychical or inner journey.
FOOD WRITING
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Mark Kurlansky provides us the range and domain of this literary
subgenre when he proclaims that, "food is about agriculture, about
ecology, about man's relationship with nature, about the climate,
about nation-building, cultural struggles, friends and enemies,
alliances, wars, religion. It is about memory and tradition and, at
times, even about sex."
NATURE WRITING
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://davehood59.wordpress.com/2010/02/17/writing-creative-
nonfiction/
o https://www.thoughtco.com/travel-writing-1692564
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o https://www.theguardian.com/travel/2011/sep/23/travel-writing-tips-
expert-advice
WRITING EXERCISE:
Lecture Notes
EMERGING FORMS OF CREATIVE NONFICTION: TESTIMONIO, BLOG,
FACEBOOK STATUS REPORT
TESTIMONIO
The testimonio is an emerging form of creative nonfiction that first
appeared in Latin America with the publication of I, Rigoberta
Menchú: An Indian Woman in Guatemala, "a first-person account of
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the brutality of the Guatemalan government and ruling class towards
indigenous Guatemalans.
The testimonio can be defined as published oral or written "first-hand
accounts" of human rights violations and abuses of the powers-that-be
in oppressive societies, "which the witnesses wrote themselves, or
dictated to a transcriber." The term "testimonio" originally comes from
South America and Central America after international human rights
tribunals, truth commissions, and other fact-finding boards in
countries like Argentina, Chile, and Guatemala have uncovered the
rampant injustices committed against ethnic minorities (like the native
Indian population of the aforementioned nations) and other subaltern
groups (like the poorest of the poor, women, and gay people).
BLOG
The blog, short for web log, can be defined as "an online diary that
looks like a web page. Technically speaking, it is not really a new
literary genre but an electronic platform in the Internet that its end
user can constantly update by changing its contents in terms of
additional texts, photos, and links to other websites. John Barger is
generally credited for coining the term "web log” in 1997 emergence
of the blog as an Internet program deployed for nonfictional purposes
began in the mid-1990s when surfing on the World Wide Web and
building cyber communities began to gain extreme popularity.
Examples
This afternoon, I typed the last sentence of the last chapter of my new
book. Tomorrow it goes to my publisher. Of course that's not the end
of its journey. It will be sent to reviewers, and it accepted, it still has a
way to go before it actually reaches the finish line. I'm sure I will put in
what I will assure my publisher will be final, final revisions. But for now
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my work is done. A few close friends and I celebrated with dinner in a
quiet place. And now as the adrenalin rush fades, I am filled with a
deeply humble gratitude for this gift of words, and the will to keep on
working with them. No matter how many times I do it, it's the same
each time-first the urge (I must do it again), then the uncertainty (can I
do it again?), then the hard work (part agony and part joy), then the
elation (I actually did it again!), and finally the almost incredulous
gratefulness. Tomorrow l shall feel a bit melancholy, and very tired.
And I shall wonder when-and if-I will be able to do it one more time...
-from the FB account of Cristina Pantoja Hidalgo
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://shane176.wordpress.com/2017/11/02/review-paper/
o https://www.foodbloggersofcanada.com/narrative-know-how-using-
creative-non-fiction-in-your-blog-posts/
WRITING EXERCISE:
Your teacher will create a group blog for the use of the entire
class, and serve as its webmaster moderator. Upload a five-paragraph
blog entry on a topic that you have chosen which should be
preapproved by your teacher.
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UNIT 4 - READING AND WRITING CREATIVE NONFICTION
Introduction
The last two lessons you will have on this course are reading and
writing creative nonfiction stories which also include the mini critique. You
will be guided on the steps in becoming a creative non-fictionist which is
helpful before proceeding in writing your own one. Furthermore, some
advices are recommended to proceed as a first time writer for you to create
a great story. You will encounter some fabulous nonfiction story that will let
critique, you can also identify its structure so it will easy for you when doing
your own.
Lecture Notes
WRITING CREATIVE NONFICTION
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Also called literary nonfiction, creative nonfiction is narrative.
Thus, you must have a story to tell your readers. Look for
interesting materials you can use and share with your
readers.
24. Be a writer.
Because there is always a room for improvement, assess your
strengths and weaknesses as a writer. Better yourself by
modelling after those writers who have made a name in
crafting creative nonfiction. Be guided by tips offered in books
and online sources. And note that it is only by writing that you
develop your writing skills. So WRITE and WRITE until you
claim success, make a MARK in this field.
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It needs to be a page turner. For instance, suppose you open with
the discovery of a dead body in the month of December. Then you
take your story back to January of the same year and introduce a
group of friends or colleagues or family members. The reader will
naturally think: one of those people will lose his or her life. This
technique wouldn't be subtle, but you are at least creating
suspense.
3. BE A READER.
It's the only way to find out how good writers do it. Fiction writer E.
Annie Proulx has said that for decades she was a reader, and then
she became a published writer- but never stopped being a reader. It's
just the same with narrative nonfiction. Read the best narrative
nonfiction writers out there and ask yourself: how did they put their
books together how did they structure them? The question of
structure is of capital importance. If my book just follows me, the
writer, discovering a story by interviewing people and uncovering
facts, it won't be very compelling-it will simply be an account of me
becoming gradually less ignorant about something.
4. ACCESS IS ESSENTIAL.
Leaving historical literary journalism aside (where time spent in
libraries and archives will be the key), it's quite simple. You don't
have a story unless you have access. By access, I mean you need to
figure out who in your story you need to approach and interview. If
you want to write a book that concentrates on one character, you
need to convince him or her to talk with you.
7. BE CLEAR.
Right from the moment you begin your book proposal, try to make
sure that your sample chapter- most agents will expect to see one if
you're a first-time author-is written as clearly as possible. Limit the
number of characters so as not to confuse the reader. Cut the length
of your sentences. Take time with explanations of any complex ideas
or events.
You get into print by, as a first step, writing a book proposal, which
you'll send to one or various agents. If you don't have a literary
agent, you will need one to approach publishers on your behalf. It's
important to pick an agent who has an interest in, and experience in
selling, creative nonfiction. This information is usually available on
agents' websites.
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
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Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
https://writersvictoria.org.au/writing-life/on-writing/7-tips-writing-
creative-non-fiction
https://www.thecreativepenn.com/2017/08/17/writing-creative-non-
fiction/
https://www.uvm.edu/wid/writingcenter/tutortips/nonfiction.html
WRITING EXERCISE:
Lecture Notes
MINI CRITIQUE
MY MOTHER'S SHADOW
by Jesus Z. Menoy
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Jess, this is the last time we are going to see each other. I can't help
it, but we really have to close shop temporarily. Perhaps, if I am to reopen
my business, I would rehire you. You are an asset to this company, I know
that," said the big boss of the now-defunct Intergraph, Inc.
These are the words I last heard from her. They were uttered about a
year 50, December 28, 1991, more than two years after we first met each
other.
I remember the first time I saw her I knew we would have a good
working relationship. I felt I would stay long in the advertising agency that
she owned managed. I felt too I found home in her company. I was not
mistaken because she treated us all, her employees, not as mere salaried
workers, but as members of her newly-found family.
When I had my preliminary interview with her, I thought I would
have another mom in her, a second mother, which she proved to be sooner
than later. She talks a lot, but with sense. She chooses the words that she
uses. She exhibits tact in speech, but she can be brutally frank at times.
Straightforward that she is, she sees to it that the words coming from her
mouth are just enough to make her point, no more, no less. Perhaps it is
her training in the University of the Philippines (UP) that made her so. She
graduated from UP in 1976 with the degree of Bachelor of Science in Mass
Communications. Her major, broadcasting, may be a factor in her
acquisition of the skills as a good conversationalist.
She talked and talked on that one day in November 1989, I can't
recall the exact date. The interview turned out to be a monologue. It lasted
for about an hour or so, it seemed there was no stopping her. She
mentioned everything about herself and her company, my duties as a
copywriter included. Her candor, coupled by her persuasive power, made
me decide, "This is it!" I readily accepted her offer, despite better offers I
had from other companies. I did it, thinking that my employment with her
firm would provide me a good break in the field of advertising and a first
crack at professional writing.
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Not only is she exceedingly considerate, she is also generous to
excess. She can give everything she has if the situation calls for it. She
treated us to lunch and merienda every now and then. She made it a point
that we received something from her during birthdays and special
occasions as Christmas. She failed not in giving alms to beggars who
regularly passed by our office. She even gave her used clothes (still new
ones) to our secretary who was of her size. I sometimes received some gift
items from her even if it was not my birthday. Had she much money, she
would have distributed it to the destitute and the needy.
But much money she did not have, so she just put up a small
advertising agency employing more than ten employees, including herself.
Serving as the major capitalist of the family-owned corporation, she
practically provided the biggest share, if not majority, of the capital
investment in the business that did not at all succeed or in any way had the
potential to succeed. Coming from a family who managed to live
luxuriously, she lacked managerial acumen. One of the causes of the failure
of the advertising firm is her mismanagement. She mishandled the
company's finances, maybe because she lacked accounting background and
financial knowhow, or simply because there were not enough funds to
manage. We were wanting in facilities that we had to buy out some of the
services rendered by other ad agencies such as typesetting, photography,
and printing. She administered the personnel ineffectively; she let them do
things inconsistent with the company's objectives.
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progress (retrogression, to be exact) of the company and she would cry in
front of us every time she announced someone should be laid off. With
tears falling down her eyes, she still displayed strength, an inner strength
that gave her a steady mind and a sense of direction amidst trials and
tribulations. That direction is straight toward the achievement of a
successful company.
One by one, the employees left. They left not because she was not
good to us. On the contrary, she was understanding to us and patient with
our misgivings. She is too good to be true. I was not spared. I also left, but I
did not will it. I left because the company was already bankrupt. I left
because I had to; I had no other alternative but to go.
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I’ve ever known, beautiful persons who have formed part of my life and will
be part of me ‘till eternity.
Price of ticket: first class, love and crosses; second class, desire and combat;
third class, fear and penance.
Note: Al sacraments are free to all. All passengers are bound by the
Ten Commandments.
Important Reminders:
A score or more years ago, I chanced upon the above short message
of former Archbishop of Manila, Jaime Cardinal Sin. This piece, together
with "Desiderata" and "Footprints in the Sand," has guided me in my life's
journey through the years.
Life is a journey and we are all travelers. Much like the travelers
bound to a certain destination, we are headed toward a certain end, that is,
death. But death is not the ultimate end for it is just the beginning of
another life, and that is the afterlife. The afterlife is the ultimate end.
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(humility; love, temperance, fortitude, piety, etc.), of avoiding the
commission of cardinal sins (pride, hatred, envy/covetousness,
avarice/anger, lust, gluttony, and sloth and of performing corporal and
spiritual works of mercy.
"Lord, you said that once I decided to follow you, you'd walk with me
all the way. But I have noticed that during the most troublesome times in
my life, there is only one set of footprints. I don't understand why when I
needed you most, you would leave me."
The Lord replied, "My son, my precious child, I love you and I would
never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only
one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you."
Surely, our faith in God will be tested. There are many temptations
around and, weak that we are, we fall into sin. Sad to say, there are many
false prophets that when we are downcast, we lose faith in Him and turn to
them for consolation.
However, faith alone won't save us. We must also manifest love since
He commanded us, "Love God above all things and your neighbors as
yourselves Faith, therefore, must be coupled with love. And we profess this
love by doing good deeds to our neighbors. "For whatever we do to the
least of our brethren, we do it to the King of all men."
The whole nation has been totally struck with the news regarding
sexual acts, pedophilia committed by several priests in the United States.
This report created a large scandal which resulted to various accusations
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not only to the world of priesthood but the whole Catholic Church as well.
This issue, at the same time, opened the delicate and tranquil world of
priesthood in our country.
The only solution I could think of is to call for our respected priests
and tell them never to fail us because especially now that our country is
experiencing tremendous problems on poverty, peace and order and other
crimes, we need them to guide us and pray for us. How could they do that
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if the priests themselves are the roots of such sins? We all need to do this
by all means, even just for the sake of the Father's name.
Nadia joined the Bb. Pilipinas last year without expecting that she
would represent the country in the Miss International tilt.
“I was overwhelmed when I was chosen as a candidate for Bb.
Pilipinas because the selection process was rigid. First, we had to undergo
the pre-screening and when we passed it, we had to go through the final
screening, which took at least eight hours of deliberation to determine the
30 aspirants who would make up the batch of candidates. There were
more- than a hundred aspirants," she recalled. "The pageant was not that
easy. It was really tough! Our batch had a lot of pretty candidates who, I
think, were all deserving to win."
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When asked about her memorable experiences in joining the
pageant, she replied, "Being our country's representative in the Miss
International pageant put up a lot of pressure on me, especially since we
had won in 2005. However, carrying our country's name was amazing!
Being called Miss Philippines aside from your name was wonderful!”
She advised those who aspire to join beauty contests, "If you really
want to join and you think you have what it takes, then go for it"
Nadia may not have won the international title, but CCP is justly
proud of her.
Focus Questions
FOR YOU TO DO: To hone your understanding, answer the following
question. Details on the deadline will be posted.
a. What are the similarities between the subject and the author’s mother?
b. Why did the company close shop?
c. How did the author face the situation?
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A JOURNEY WITH THE LORD (By: Jesus Z. Menoy)
Related Readings
For supplemental reading on the proverbs, click the link below for access:
o https://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2009/09/28/guidelines-for-
nonfiction-critiques/
o http://www.hunter.cuny.edu/rwc/handouts/the-writing-process-
1/invention/Writing-a-Critique
o https://www.artfuleditor.com/sample-critique
FOR YOU TO DO. Details on the deadline and activity rubrics will be posted
in course group chat on Messenger. Do as indicated.
WRITING EXERCISE:
Write your own creative nonfiction story as your final output in this
course. You can choose a topic mentioned below. For your composition it
must contain of five paragraphs or more. Further instruction will announce
in course chat box.
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Commencement Exercises (By: Zyra Samonte)
1. Write a critique of another speech (e.g., that of a president).
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