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    T.Me/Oetsupportnurses: Facility, Who Requires Urgent

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    This document contains a letter referring Mr. Bruce for transfer to another facility for treatment of stage 3 esophageal cancer. The letter provides details of Mr. Bruce's medical history, including a 4-5 month history of difficulty swallowing and chest pain, 10kg weight loss over 6 months, treatment with oxycodone, and diagnostic tests confirming stage 3 cancer. The letter requests arrangement of probable surgery and radiotherapy and notes the patient's condition has been discussed. Suggested corrections and revisions are provided to improve the letter's professionalism, clarity and flow.

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    T.Me/Oetsupportnurses: Facility, Who Requires Urgent

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    This document contains a letter referring Mr. Bruce for transfer to another facility for treatment of stage 3 esophageal cancer. The letter provides details of Mr. Bruce's medical history, including a 4-5 month history of difficulty swallowing and chest pain, 10kg weight loss over 6 months, treatment with oxycodone, and diagnostic tests confirming stage 3 cancer. The letter requests arrangement of probable surgery and radiotherapy and notes the patient's condition has been discussed. Suggested corrections and revisions are provided to improve the letter's professionalism, clarity and flow.

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    OET SUPPORT LETTER CORRECTION 2

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    letter correction 23 9 21

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    This document contains a letter referring Mr. Bruce for transfer to another facility for treatment of stage 3 esophageal cancer. The letter provides details of Mr. Bruce's medical history, including a 4-5 month history of difficulty swallowing and chest pain, 10kg weight loss over 6 months, treatment with oxycodone, and diagnostic tests confirming stage 3 cancer. The letter requests arrangement of probable surgery and radiotherapy and notes the patient's condition has been discussed. Suggested corrections and revisions are provided to improve the letter's professionalism, clarity and flow.

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    T.Me/Oetsupportnurses: Facility, Who Requires Urgent

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    Ashutosh Jangir
    This document contains a letter referring Mr. Bruce for transfer to another facility for treatment of stage 3 esophageal cancer. The letter provides details of Mr. Bruce's medical history, including a 4-5 month history of difficulty swallowing and chest pain, 10kg weight loss over 6 months, treatment with oxycodone, and diagnostic tests confirming stage 3 cancer. The letter requests arrangement of probable surgery and radiotherapy and notes the patient's condition has been discussed. Suggested corrections and revisions are provided to improve the letter's professionalism, clarity and flow.

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    1 Yours Corrected/suggestions

    I am writing regarding Mr Bruce's transfer I am writing regarding Mr Bruce, who has been
    to your facility, who has been diagnosed diagnosed with stage 3 oesophageal cancer
    with stage 3 oesophageal cancer and and needs urgent evaluation and treatment.
    requires urgent need for evaluation and
    treatment. (next time send case note along with the letter
    so that best intro could be given)

    2 Mr Brew presented to our hospital on 6 Mr Brew presented to our hospital on 6 July


    July, 2017 with the complaints of difficulty 2017 with complaints of difficulty in
    in swallowing for the past four to five swallowing for the past four to five months
    months and intense gnawing pain and intense gnawing pain immediately below
    immediately below sternum. the sternum.

    0r
    On 6 July 2017, Mr Brew presented to our
    hospital complaining of difficulty swallowing
    for the last four to five months and intense
    gnawing pain below the sternum.
    3. He had reported to have a weight loss of He reported weight loss of 10 kg and weakness
    10 kgs for the past 6 months and weakness during daily activities for the past 6 months.
    during daily activities. 0R
    In the last six months, he lost 10 kg of body
    weight and reported weakness.
    4. Mr Brew was started on Oxycodone 1 mg/ Mr Brew was started on Oxycodone 1 mg/ml in
    ml in 0.9 % saline and 5% of 0.9 % saline and 5% dextrose intravenously as
    dextrose/water intravenously as required . required. Endoscopy, biopsy and barium
    Endoscopy, biopsy and barium swallow swallow tests were performed, which revealed
    tests were performed, revealed stage 3 stage 3 cancer at/in the gastroesophageal
    cancer at the gastroesophageal junction. junction.

    5. He had hurtburn since 2001 and he has He has been taking over-the-counter
    taken over the counter medications medications since 2001 for heartburn.

    Or
    Since 2001, he has had heartburn, so he takes
    over-the-counter medication.
    6. Kindly note, that the patient has been Please note, he has been informed regarding
    informed regarding his condition. Kindly his condition. Kindly arrange for the probable
    arrange for the probable surgery and the surgery and the radiotherapy treatments.
    radiotherapy treatments. (do not use the word PATIENT, Use name or
    he/she)
    7. Reports are enclosed. Do not hesitate to It seems you are giving order.
    contact me for any queries . Write in a polite way like
    Mr Brew’s reports are enclosed with this letter
    and if you have any queries, please do not
    hesitate to contact me.
    (And also in any other way)

    t.me/oetsupportNurses
    Wrong use of coma On our channel you can read instructions for
    sincerely, faithfully, and the use of coma with
    them.
    8

    PURPOSE, GENRE, AND STYLE, AS WELL AS


    ORGANIZATION, ARE WRITTEN EXCELLENTLY.
    GOOD LUCK

    t.me/oetsupportNurses

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