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I. LEARNING OBJECTIVES:
At the end of this module, the students should be able to:
• Discuss the guidelines in formulating summary of findings,
conclusion and recommendation; • Assess samples of researches with
emphasis on chapter V.; and
• Create summary of findings, conclusions and recommendation. II.
LESSON/TOPICS:
• Summary of Findings, Conclusion and Recommendation III.
LEARNING MATERIALS/CONTENT:
a. Cabana, M. (2014). Summary of Findings, Conclusions and Recommendations. Prezi. Retrieved Date:
June 8, 2020. Retrieved from: https://prezi.com/tv3axpwcdccc/summary-of-findingsconclusions-and-
recommendations/
b. How to Write a Good Conclusion Paragraph. Time4writing. Retrieved Date: June 8, 2020. Retrieved
from: https://www.time4writing.com/writing-resources/writing-a-good-conclusion-paragraph/
c. Swaen, B. (2019). Recommendations for a client. Scribbr. Retrieved Date: June 8, 2020. Retrieved
from: https://www.scribbr.com/dissertation/recommendations-in-your-dissertation/
d. IV. LEARNING TASKS:
Activity 15-1. SUMMARY OF FINDINGS, CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS
There should be no deductions, nor inference, nor interpretation should be made otherwise it will only be
duplicated in the conclusion. Only the important findings, the highlights of the data, should be included in
the summary, especially those upon which the conclusions should be based. Must be stated as concisely as
possible.
1. Read the materials listed above, about summary of findings, conclusions and recommendations 2.
Based on what you learned from the above links and lectures, answer/discuss the following:
a. In research, what is the difference between implication and recommendation?
b. Introductory Paragraph
c. Summary of findings
d. Conclusions
e. Elements of the Conclusion
3. For your output follow the format below. Then upload your output in the portal provided with the
file name Activity 16-1_YourLastName_FirstName.
The format for the outputs is given below. Use short size bond paper, Calibri font 12, single spaced.
Note: Additional 3 points will be given to students who replied within the 3 days after posting the
questions. Hence, students can earn a total of 10 points.
1. Based on what you learned from the above links and lectures, discuss the following:
a. Determine how to write a conclusion
b. Identify and discuss the points to remember in writing a conclusion.
c. Summary: How to Make a Good Conclusion Paragraph
d. What is a conclusion paragraph?
e. What to include in writing a conclusion
f. Strategies for an effective conclusion
g. Concluding strategies that do not work
h. Ineffective conclusions
i. Conclusion outline
j. What should the recommendations look like?
k. How many recommendations should you write?
l. What can proofreading do for your paper?
m. Who will read your recommendations?
n. Checklist: Recommendations
2. For your output follow the format below. Then upload your output in the portal provided with the
file name Activity 16-2_YourLastName_FirstName.
a. The format for the outputs is given below. Use short size bond paper, Calibri font 12, single
spaced.
Play the “So What” Game. If you’re stuck and feel like your conclusion isn’t saying anything new
or interesting, ask a friend to read it with you. Whenever you make a statement from your
conclusion, ask the friend to say, “So what?” or “Why should anybody care?” Then ponder that
question and answer it.. You can also use this strategy on your own, asking yourself “So What?”
as you develop your ideas or your draft.
Return to the theme or themes in the introduction. This strategy brings the reader full circle. For
example, if you begin by describing a scenario, you can end with the same scenario as proof
that your essay is helpful in creating a new understanding. You may also refer to the
introductory paragraph by using key words or parallel concepts and images that you also used
in the introduction.
Synthesize, don’t summarize. Include a brief summary of the paper’s main points, but don’t
simply repeat things that were in your paper. Instead, show your reader how the points you
made and the support and examples you used fit together. Pull it all together.
Include a provocative insight or quotation from the research or reading you did for your paper.
Propose a course of action, a solution to an issue, or questions for further study. This can
redirect your reader’s thought process and help her to apply your info and ideas to her own life
or to see the broader implications.
Point to broader implications.
Beginning with an unnecessary, overused phrase such as “in conclusion,” “in summary,” or “in
closing.” Although these phrases can work in speeches, they come across as wooden and trite in
writing.
Stating the thesis for the very first time in the conclusion.
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1. The “That’s My Story and I’m Sticking to It” Conclusion. This conclusion just restates the thesis
and is usually painfully short. It does not push the ideas forward. People write this kind of
conclusion when they can’t think of anything else to say
2. The “Sherlock Holmes” Conclusion. Sometimes writers will state the thesis for the very first time
in the conclusion. You might be tempted to use this strategy if you don’t want to give everything
away too early in your paper. You may think it would be more dramatic to keep the reader in the
dark until the end and then “wow” him with your main idea, as in a Sherlock Holmes mystery. The
reader, however, does not expect a mystery, but an analytical discussion of your topic in an
academic style, with the main argument (thesis) stated up front.
3. The “America the Beautiful”/”I Am Woman”/”We Shall Overcome” Conclusion. This kind of
conclusion usually draws on emotion to make its appeal, but while this emotion and even
sentimentality may be very heartfelt, it is usually out of character with the rest of an analytical
paper. A more sophisticated commentary, rather than emotional praise, would be a more fitting
tribute to the topic.
4. The “Grab Bag” Conclusion. This kind of conclusion includes extra information that the
writer found or thought of but couldn’t integrate into the main paper. You may find it hard to
leave out details that you discovered after hours of research and thought, but adding random
facts and bits of evidence at the end of an otherwise-well-organized essay can just create
confusion.
i. Conclusion outline
Conclusion Outline
1.Restate the thesis IN DIFFERENT WORDS.
2.Make reference to your hook.
3.Summarize main points in ONE SENTENCE.
4.Choose a strategy.
General to specific
Specific to general
Give a warning and state the consequences of failing to act
Give advice or offer a possible solution.
Tell the reader what he should now think, do, or feel.
Tell what you really think of the topic.
Tell what lessons or truths should now be understood.
Topic sentence
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students understanding
understanding of the
of
lesson with some
the lesson with some
modifications or
modifications or
additions
additions
Clearly state the There are at least 3
There are at least 2
Justification justification of the plan, unclear justifications
unclear justifications
technique or strategies
Used formal language
and good grammar, Few errors on technical Multiple errors in
Writing Skills
spelling, and writing technical writing
punctuation.
Note: Additional 1 point will be given to students who replied within the 3 days after posting the
questions. Hence, students can earn a total of 15 points.
The reading was all about the guidelines in formulating summary of findings, conclusion and
recommendation. I learned that the conclusion is intended to help the reader understand why your
research should matter to them after they have finished reading the paper. A conclusion is not merely a
summary of your points or a re-statement of your research problem but a synthesis of key points.
The relevance of the reading to me as a student of PSU Graduate Studies and as a member of the
society is that this would be a big help especially in formulating conclusions in our own research. When
writing the conclusion to your paper researchers need state conclusions in clear, simple language not
simply reiterating results or the discussion but also indicating opportunities for future research. The
function of your research paper's conclusion is to restate the main argument. It reminds the reader of
the strengths of your main arguments and reiterates the most important evidence supporting those
argument.
What I find compelling in the reading is that conclusion is not simply a repetitive summary of the
findings. A conclusion is an important part of the paper because it provides closure for the reader while
reminding the reader of the contents and importance of the paper. It accomplishes this by stepping back
from the specifics in order to view the bigger picture of the document. The new things I have you learned
is that a conclusion is an important part of the paper because it provides closure for the reader it can
also suggest possible future research on the topic. Concluding statements in your paper can also help to
refocus the reader's attention to the most important points and supporting evidence of your research. A
conclusion is, in some ways, like your introduction. You restate your thesis and summarize your main
points of evidence for the reader. You can usually do this in one paragraph. You should give a summary
of what was learned from your research, this summary should be relatively brief. My learning affected
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preconception and misconceptions I brought with you into class in a way that conclusion is not merely a
summary of the main topics covered or a re-statement. You should give a summary of what was learned
from your research but when writing a conclusion, a 'specific to general' structure is usually
recommended. Yes, this is opposite to the introduction! Begin by re-stating or re-emphasizing. A
conclusion is the last paragraph in your research paper, or the last part in any other type of presentation.
A conclusion is like the final chord in a song. It makes the listener feel that the piece is complete and well
done. The same is true for your audience. You want them to feel that you supported what you stated in
your thesis. You then become a reliable author for them and they are impressed by that and will be more
likely to read your work in the future. They may also have learned something and maybe have had their
opinion changed by what you have written or created! A conclusion is, in some ways, like your
introduction. You restate your thesis and summarize your main points of evidence for the reader.
V. ASSESSMENT TASKS
SUMMARY OF FINDINGS
Based on the pretest and posttest mean scores of both control and experimental groups, the
1. There is no significant difference between the pretest mean scores of the subjects exposed to
the lecture method and the pretest mean scores of those who used the instructional modules.
2. There is a significant difference between the post-test mean scores of subjects who were
exposed to the traditional lecture method and the posttest mean scores of the subjects who were
3. There is a significant difference between the mean gain scores of the two groups of
respondents – experimental and control groups. The experimental group who were taught using
the modules performed significantly better than the control group who were taught using the
traditional lecture method. From the findings above, it is concluded that the use of Modules in
teaching grade 9 Science, is an effective teaching approach. Effective in the sense that it helped
the subjects of the study learn concepts in mathematics without cramming in keeping up with the
pacing of the teacher. The use of self-learning modules in teaching these particular concepts in
Science 9 was very useful for the respondents in developing their individual learning study
habits. Though the results of this study showed that learning took place in both groups using the
two methods of teaching, the subjects who were taught using the modular approached performed
significantly better than the subjects exposed to traditional lecture method and it is concluded that
modular approach is an applicable and effective teaching approach that could be used in teaching
science
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subjects.
CONCLUSION
Based on the statistical results of the study, the following conclusions were drawn:
1. The level of effectiveness in using both the Enhanced Learning Materials and DepEd Learning
2. The level of effectiveness in using the Enhanced Learning Materials in Grade 9 Science in the
posttest signifies a proficient level of performance while the level of effectiveness in using the
DepEd Learning Materials in Grade 9 Science in the posttest signifies an approaching proficiency
level of performance.
3. There was no significant difference between the pretest performance of OHSP students using
the Learning Materials of DepEd and with the Enhanced Learning Materials in Grade 8 Science.
4. A significant difference exists between the posttest performance of OHSP students using the
Learning Materials of DepEd and the Enhanced Learning Materials in Grade 9 Science.
5. The pretest and posttest performance of students using the Learning Materials of DepEd in
6. A significant difference was found between the pretest and posttest performance of students
RECOMMENDATIONS
In the light of the foregoing findings and conclusions, the following are recommended:
1. Individual schools offering Open High School Program may evaluate the different learning
modules used by the teachers in the OHSP in order to maximize their learning performance of
students. Learning modules for the Open High School students may be enhanced and improved to
provide them leeway with easy-to-learn modules and to cater students who are not consistently
2. Pretest may be given to students before the start of the class to assess the degree to which the
student has in the present and other posttest to assess and evaluate how far the student has gone
with the subject. Performance of students may be based through the comparison of the results of
3. Since majority of the students enrolled were considered to be in the low income bracket, in
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terms of their family monthly income, the Department of Education may provide free materials
for the students for them to continue studying in the program. More budget should be given to
this program to cater more students belonged to low income families and those unable to support
their education.
4. In order to regularly assess and evaluate the effectiveness of the different learning materials
used by students, school heads may require those teachers handling OHSP to submit results of
school learning material evaluation as well as the grades of student per grading period.
5. Seminars and trainings regarding how to handle students in the OHSP and to affect learning
should be conducted to teachers involved in this program. It is inferred that teachers handling
OHSP classes taught the students seemingly similar with the regular classes. Hence, less
6. Similar studies should be conducted to all schools offering Open High School Programs to
References:
Bedaure, A.A. (2012). Modular Instruction in Biology: It’s Effect on Students’ Performance.
JPAIR Multidisciplinary Research. Vol. 9, pp. 284-304
Cabardo, J.R.O. (2007). Instructional Competencies of Teachers: Its Relation to Students’
Academic Performance in Science in Mariano Peralta National High School, Malita,
Davao del Sur. Unpublished Thesis. Southern Philippines Agribusiness and Marine and
Aquatic School of Technology-College of Agribusiness, Fisheries and Marine Sciences,
Malita, Davao del Sur.
Lucas, M.R.D. and B.B. Corpuz. (2007). Facilitating Learning: A Metacognitive Process.
Quezon City, Metro Manila: Lorimar Publishing, Inc.
Note: Additional 3 points will be given to students who replied within the 3 days after posting the
questions. Hence, students can earn a total of 15 points.
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