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    The document discusses how acknowledging one's weaknesses can make them stronger. It describes how the author felt alone after learning of their coach's death and used academics as a distraction from the pain, but knew deep down the pain was still there. The author realizes they are still human and while the pain remains, it is leaving them little by little.

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    The document discusses how acknowledging one's weaknesses can make them stronger. It describes how the author felt alone after learning of their coach's death and used academics as a distraction from the pain, but knew deep down the pain was still there. The author realizes they are still human and while the pain remains, it is leaving them little by little.

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    The document discusses how acknowledging one's weaknesses can make them stronger. It describes how the author felt alone after learning of their coach's death and used academics as a distraction from the pain, but knew deep down the pain was still there. The author realizes they are still human and while the pain remains, it is leaving them little by little.

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    The document discusses how acknowledging one's weaknesses can make them stronger. It describes how the author felt alone after learning of their coach's death and used academics as a distraction from the pain, but knew deep down the pain was still there. The author realizes they are still human and while the pain remains, it is leaving them little by little.

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     Context: Our online university environment; several months after the declaration

    of a global pandemic caused by a relatively unknown virus


     Audience: Your classmates who come from different backgrounds (class
    anthology) and the general Ateneo community (if published by the Guidon)
     Purpose: To express what you have learned about yourself from your lockdown
    experience

    Thesis statement: Sometimes acknowledging that you’re weak is what will make you
    stronger.
    I.  (Description) I read that my coach died of a heart attack.
        A. During the latest hours of the night, only the moon and my lamp provided lighting
    to my disorganized room
        B.  Alone in my room, I had only my thoughts to accompany me.
    II. (Analysis) I distracted myself with my academics, hoping to prove that I have moved
    on, stronger than ever.
        A. At times, the pain would go away.
        B.  Deep in my heart, I knew it was still there, festering.
    III.  (Outcome) I am still Human.
       A.  My heart aches plenty more than when I first heard of his death, but now I feel at
    the very least, the pain leaving me piece by little piece.
      B. He will forever be a part of who I am, and I hope that wherever he may be, he may
    find peace.

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