Development Languag e Teacher Comments: Unit 3

Unit1
Is this your introduction? The introduction tells the reader what you are going to write
about. A good introduction also attracts the reader's interest and provides background
information.
Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
Hello dear mother-in-law,
I received the package in a short time and the delivery was excellent, the service you
hired is efficient. Thanks for the clothes for the baby, I am excited to review everything
in detail, I will be sending you photos.
I hope to see you soon.
UNIT 3
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Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
About the trends explained in the video: mobile banking, security systems and social
networks. I particularly prefer mobile banking, because it is fast and safe, although not
many people trust it. I can assure you that operations do not take more than 5 minutes
to perform.
2. Main Idea
Also my bank has a facial identifier that corroborates your identity and permits before
completing the operation. Security systems in these times are very useful but
technology has its cons such as theft of bank accounts and scams. Just as social
networks have their pros and cons because they are used as a means of scam, but they
also help with any questions or doubts in a faster way than calling the bank's phone. I
believe that you must be very careful when making payments or financial transactions.
UNIT 4
Automated Feedback
Is this your introduction? The introduction tells the reader what you are going to write
about. A good introduction also attracts the reader's interest and provides background
information.
Teacher
Development Language
Comments
1. Introduction
hackathon is a 24 hour competition where students create an application. In this
case the winners were programmers from Stanleyville College they created an app for
people with color blindness, usually these people do not distinguish the real colors that
is why they do not know how to combine their clothes. This application allows people to
take a selfie and the information about what colors they are wearing is
processed. Although they had some problems and flaws in the code they managed to fix
it, in the future they hope that it will be used for commercial purposes, but for the
moment they just want to go home and rest a bit.
UNIT 4
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Teacher
Development Language
Comments
1. Introduction
One of the advantages is that it can remind you of things that you forget because you
have many things in your head, such as watering your plant or checking how many
items you have left and if you need more. Another advantage of loT to work, would be
that it would save us time to work or to university since it would wake you up earlier in
case there is more traffic than usual. You can also configure your house and adjust the
heating in case you return home and winter, you would find a warm and comfortable
home. However it must have many disadvantages I think, it is still something utopian.
UNIT 5

Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
Hello dear,
Mike's girlfriend, Mary left you a message.Mike had a car accident, this
happened when they were crossing the bridge on Route 6, a truck went towards
them quickly but they are fine. Thank God!
2. Main Idea
They are in the emergency room at Parker General Hospital. I hope he is recovering, I
go as fast as possible to the hospital, it will take a while.
See you at the hospital, kisses.
UNIT 8

Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
Dear Barry, Thank you very much for yesterday, sometimes I am forgetful, I thought I
had refueled. I know you have to write a text for history. I remember that yesterday
you told me, I have no problem helping you. A favor for another favor, so you tell me
the subject and I help you with your homework. Kisses
UNIT 9

Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
Hi Andrea, it's me Merlhy.
2. Main Idea
I am writing to congratulate you on your audition. I know it cost you a lot. But you did
it because you have an excellent voice. I'm sure you will be a great singer. My mom
also thinks the same, because I hear you sing on my birthday. Don't be afraid and she
lets others hear how wonderful you sing.
I send you kisses and hugs
UNIT 10
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Languag Teacher
Development
e Comments
1. Introduction
Hello, I am a great admirer of your radio program, I would like you to send me a
greeting on your next show. I think I could also participate in the questionnaire, since I
was little I have studied the history of music so I would be a great opponent. It could
include questions like: When was the first score written? or Who built the first piano?
Greetings

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Unit1

Hello dear mother-in-law,

in detail, I will be sending you photos.

I hope to see you soon.

completing the operation. Security systems in these times are very useful but

believe that you must be very careful when making payments or financial transactions.

hackathon is a 24 hour competition where students create an application. In this

case the winners were programmers from Stanleyville College they created an app for

take a selfie and the information about what colors they are wearing is

moment they just want to go home and rest a bit.

lick on the highlighted words to see detailed feedback.

home. However it must have many disadvantages I think, it is still something utopian.

Click on the highlighted words to see detailed feedback.

happened when they were crossing the bridge on Route 6, a truck went towards

them quickly but they are fine. Thank God!

go as fast as possible to the hospital, it will take a while.

See you at the hospital, kisses.

Click on the highlighted words to see detailed feedback.

the subject and I help you with your homework. Kisses

Click on the highlighted words to see detailed feedback.

Hi Andrea, it's me Merlhy.

lets others hear how wonderful you sing.

I send you kisses and hugs

lick on the highlighted words to see detailed feedback.

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