Kino No Tabi - Vol.12
Kino No Tabi - Vol.12
Kino No Tabi - Vol.12
Our lives are peaceful. We live every day in the land of our
birth, surrounded by the very people who were there since
infancy. Why is a young traveller like Kino constantly on the
move, with no place to call home? How great must be the
sadness of her loss?
"My dream for the future? Well, I wonder... I'd like to survive
and continue my journey." Kino told us.
One of them was an elderly man, his face gnarled with age.
The other was a young man in his mid-teens.
—
One day-
"I see. Now tell me, do you think they are fit to be our prey?
Should we contact the others at the base of the valley and
have them attack?"
"Buggies are extremely hard to come by. I'm sure it'll fetch a
good price. And judging from all the luggage they're
carrying, I believe they are carrying valuables in stead of
money. The man at the wheel could possibly be a skilled foe,
but he is by himself, and could not possibly defeat our guns
with a sword alone. The girl and the dog are not even worth
discussing."
"As you said, the buggy will likely fetch a hefty sum. But the
man in the driver's seat is composed and ready. He is likely
a swordsman without compare. And look once more at the
girl. Do you recognize the object she is holding?"
"Do you see the cylinder sticking out beside the girl's seat?
That is a grenade launcher. It can attack us from a distance.
One wrong move and we could lose many men at once. And
remember that dogs have very sensitive noses. Our ambush
would be discovered instantly. That is why we must not
attack that buggy."
It was yet another day.
"I see. Now that you mention it, you're right. Those large
eyes of hers are quite beautiful. Now tell me, do you think
she is fit to be our prey? Should we contact the others at the
base of the valley and have them attack?"
"Of course, sir! We can't let her get away! She's carrying a
revolver, but what can one girl do on her own? She's the
perfect target. This will be an easy job! Let's get in touch
with the others right away, sir. And I'm sure that motorrad
will fetch a good price, too!"
"Zero points."
"..."
"..."
"There, there. Don't let that get you down. You are still
young, after all. You have plenty of time to learn."
"Yes, elder... Sir, I heard once that we began scoping out our
targets ahead of time like this only after you joined the
assault team."
"If it was only the two of them, I suspect you must have had
no problem at all, elder."
"..."
"Sir?"
"That's correct."
"Yep."
"Thank you."
"We will."
"Yes?"
"What is it?"
"Oh. Right..."
"How so?"
"Yes?"
"Really?"
"..."
"What else?"
"Huh..."
"Huh..."
"Not at all! It all comes with age, you see. And about that
hat of yours, with the ear flaps on the sides..."
"Huh..."
"Yes? Yes?"
"It was the trademark of a group called 'The Northern
Foxes', which came to our country twenty-one years ago.
Their outlandish sense of fashion was quite the hit here in
our homeland for some time."
"Huh."
"Hahaha! Just between us, I also copied them and wore one
of those hats during the winter myself."
"Huh..."
"What else?"
"That brown coat of yours..."
"Yes?"
"Oh!"
"Yes?"
"Yes? Yes?"
"Huh?"
"What?"
"..."
"..."
"Don't die."
"I understand. Then I guess this means I can ask you for
something, too."
"..."
"..."
"Hermes?"
"Zzzzz..."
Table of Contents
Inside Cover - Land of Charity ~How's Tricks?
Frontispiece - A Tale of Bandits ~Can You Imagine!~
Frontispiece - Land of Plagiarism ~I Have Ever Seen Before~
Frontispiece - A Request
Prologue - In Happiness - b ~Birth -b~
Chapter 1 - Land of Justice ~Idiots~
Chapter 2 - A Land Visited by a Devil ~Talk of the Devil~
Chapter 3 - Land of Investigation ~Common Sense~
Chapter 4 - Land with a Sundial ~Counter Strike~
Chapter 5 - Land of Endeavors ~Passage 2~
Chapter 6 - Continued - A Tale of Charity ~How's Tricks?~
Chapter 7 - A Tale of Letters ~The Weak Link~
Chapter 8 - A Tale of Gambles ~Which is Which.~
Chapter 9 - A Land where Virtue is Counted ~Serious Killer~
Chapter 10 - Before the Clouds ~Eye-opener~
Epilogue - In Happiness - a ~Birth -a~
Afterword
The fact that you cry
The fact that you lose your temper
The fact that you get angry
The fact that you hate
The fact that you scream
The fact that you suffer
The fact that you mourn
The fact that you despair
Or the fact that you come to a resolution
Cannot prove that you are right.
~Everybody Has the Right to Make Mistakes~
In Happiness・b —Birth・b
—
And so, Kino and Hermes arrived at the entrance to the
large hospital.
And as they made their way to the car, they spotted Kino
and Hermes.
"Are you headed for the Centre now?" Hermes asked. The
man and the woman shook their heads.
"Not yet. We're going to hurry home and show him to his
siblings first!" The wife said.
And,
The sky was perfectly clear. A clean blue sea stretched out
into the horizon under the blazing sun. A narrow beach of
white sand served as a line dividing the ocean from the
verdant green fields.
She wore a hat with flaps over her ears, and over her right
thigh was a holstered revolvertype hand persuader. Behind
her back was holstered another persuader, an automatic
type secured horizontally to her waist.
"..."
—
The next morning.
"Good for you, Kino. It's not so hot anymore." The motorrad
said.
"Yeah. In fact, I'm almost feeling cold." The rider named Kino
answered, "I wonder why it's so dark? It's still the middle of
the day. And these clouds don't look normal. What do you
think, Hermes?" She asked the motorrad.
Kino frowned.
—
The next day.
Under her coat she wore her black jacket. She secured the
flaps of her coat by wrapping them around her thighs. Over
her mouth and nose was a bandanna. Her ear flaps were
down, and secured together with a strap under her chin.
"I don't know about this, Kino. It's just getting darker and
darker." Hermes said.
"Some warm tea sounds really good right about now." Kino
turned off the ignition.
Hermes' headlight went off. Everything went silent and dark.
Then, Kino noticed something. "Hm?"
"Oh!"
On the road ahead, slightly above the horizon, they saw the
blink of a light.
—
As they approached the country, they could see a large
lighthouse looming from behind the walls. It was a tower of
white, reaching to the skies from behind the grey--now
black--walls. The light was rotating towards the ocean.
The country was by the sea, and its walls reached even into
the waters.
His skin was a tanned brown, but his attire looked nothing
short of out of place for the climate.
—
They rode through the central area.
The country was quite small. Just behind its walls were
orchards and fields, and large trees that could not be found
outside the country.
"Kino, what did the people from the last country say about
this place again?"
And just like the man who had greeted Kino and Hermes at
the gate, every last one of them were wearing T-shirts,
shorts, and sandals.
"It doesn't look like they like you very much, Kino."
"..."
—
Kino and Hermes made their way towards the central area.
"It doesn't look like they like you very much, Kino." Hermes
whispered.
"..."
Kino did not seek out the owner of the voice. She did not
ask Hermes. Thanking the anonymous informant, Kino
pushed Hermes up to the carriage and stood before the
bodyguard who was glancing over her way every once in a
while.
"Hello."
"It looks to be much colder than usual here. From the looks
of the citizens, I can imagine they must be freezing by now."
"That's right. It may seem that way to you, traveler, with all
the layers you're wearing. I'm sure our clothing may seem
rather sloppy to you, but in our country, this is formalwear."
"What is it?"
—
The carriage left the hospital and its lineup. The motorrad
departed immediately, headed in a straight line for the
northern gate.
With a bandanna over her face, the hat snug on her head,
and her coat secure around her.
"I feel cold just looking at those people. And besides, this
country--"
Kino and Hermes departed down the path laid between the
darkened seas and the plains.
—
Approximately two hundred and several days later.
To the left of the road was the sea, and to its right was what
used to be a verdant plain-now replaced with a dark and
desolate wasteland.
"This is terrible. Looks like all the vegetation's died out." The
man behind the wheel, sitting on the left side, muttered.
The man was wearing a parka with a hood pulled over his
head. There were goggles over his eyes, and a muffler was
wrapped around his face, hiding his expression.
Sitting between her knees was a large dog with long white
fur.
"..."
The man slowed down the buggy slightly and looked at the
girl in the passenger seat.
"..."
The girl quietly embraced the large fluffy dog's head and
rubbed her cheek against him.
"Mm."
"I see. Just tell me if you are." The man said, his eyes
narrowed.
—
The buggy continued along the thick grey path covered in
snow.
And-
"..."
"..."
The man also glanced at the objects. If one was on the road
in their way, he turned the steering wheel to avoid running
over it.
"I see little hope here, Master Shizu." The dog said, his head
still in the girl's embrace.
—
The wooden gate was left wide open.
The buggy slowly entered the country without receiving
permission.
The landscape inside the walls was little different from the
world outside.
Everything was grey. Every plant was wilted, and every tree
had been cut down. Lonely stumps lined either side of the
road.
"They must have used them for firewood..." The man said.
After a look around the country, they headed for the harbor.
Not a single ship was moored at the docks. All they found
was the remains of some lumber, cut into pieces and piled
up neatly.
The man took off his goggles, undid the muffler around his
face, and looked directly at the girl.
The girl said nothing. She stared into the man's eyes,
waiting for him to continue."
"..."
"..."
—
The man started the buggy again. They began to leave.
They left through the north gate, which they had passed on
their way through the empty country.
There they spotted life.
"..."
The man stopped the buggy in front of the living creatures.
"I see... So the corpses inside the country were all eaten by
the wolves." The man concluded.
"They must have followed the climate all the way here. This
is courage. In the end, these wolves won out with their
strength."
"..."
All right, let me tell you a story I've never told anyone
before.
—
That's right, child. This land is the only place in the world
where people live. People can't survive anywhere outside.
—
I was only twelve years old when the devil visited us.
"Thank you. I was just getting hungry, you see. I'm very
grateful."
With that, it took a seat beside the chief in the town square.
—
The rest of us watched them from afar. Of course, we
couldn't leave the chief behind. So we stayed just close
enough that we could hear them talking.
You see, the chief's wife, who brought them tea, was
wearing a small sack of butter around her waist. That's
right. The same old butter people use every day. A little sack
of fragrant butter, no different than the way we make them
now.
The chief asked his wife to scoop some of the butter into a
small bowl. And that's exactly what she did. Then she held it
out to the 'person'.
That's when it happened.
The chief, his wife, and everyone else in town watched the
whole thing! It took the fork it was eating vegetables with,
and used it to spread the butter over its bread!
—
Could you believe it?
—
Everyone was too surprised to say anything.
The chief was right there, watching from up close. His eyes
were so wide I thought they'd pop out of his head. His wife
looked like she was just about to faint there and then.
That's when the chief, his wife, and everyone else figured it
out.
It wasn't human!
It had to be a devil!
—
But once we realized the truth, we were relieved. After all,
there was nothing strange about a devil coming from
outside the country. That explained everything. It was
daytime, which also means there was nothing strange that
the devil looked just like a human.
"I'm glad to see you're enjoying your meal. Would you care
for seconds? We have plenty more bread and butter!"
The devil kept eating bread with butter until it finished the
chief's wife's entire supply.
We were all very excited, watching the devil eat lunch. The
chief got a little closer to it, and asked things like, "Where
do you hail from?"
Or,
Or,
"I would like to stay here for the next three days. Would that
be all right?"
—
Don't believe me, child?
I'm not surprised, but I promise you, it's all true. Every last
word. I heard the devil's voice with my own ears.
You don't have to believe me, child. But this is the truth.
"Who knows? Let's leave the poor man be. I'm sure he's
happy in his own little world."
Land of Investigation —
Common Sense—
It was a certain day at a certain time.
"Only the slowest and most painful death for these traitors.
They tried to sell their country and leave their people to be
enslaved. We'd kill them over and over again, if only we
could."
"Hey, hey! Don't tighten that one any more, okay? We don't
want to kill them that quickly."
The two travelers paid the screaming no mind are they went
about their business at a nearby shop.
"I hope you had a wonderful time. Please come visit us
again, travelers."
—
It was a certain day at a certain time.
When they entered the country proper and stepped into the
city square at the very centre of the nation, they saw that a
public execution was in progress.
"Why don't you ask your own conscience?", "It's for the
greater good", "It's the obvious thing to do", the soldiers
replied calmly.
"As you can see, we're holding a public execution. Until very
recently, those people sitting there on the verge of death
were politicians, critics, and civilian activists."
"I see."
"Aim!"
"You liars!"
"You're the only liars I see around here. Fire!" After a sharp
burst of gunfire, the square became very quiet.
The two travelers and the dog finished their business in the
country.
—
It was a certain day at a certain time.
A motorrad laden with traveling gear arrived at a certain
country.
When they entered the country proper and stepped into the
city square at the very centre of the nation, they saw that a
public address was in progress.
"And?"
The rider was a young human in her mid teens. She was
wearing a black jacket, a hat with flaps over the ears, and a
worn, silver-rimmed pair of goggles.
Around her waist was a thick belt, and over her right thigh
was a hand persuader. Inside the leather holster was a high-
caliber revolver.
"I guess I'm trying to say I don't know if the country they
told us about could really exist." The motorrad called
Hermes replied.
"A land with a sundial, huh?" Kino mumbled. "It's still pretty
unbelievable. I can't imagine how an entire country would
be one gigantic clock."
"Maybe we've been had?" Hermes asked. Kino did not look
concerned.
"What then?"
—
They rode through several mountains. The sun was now set
lower than the brim of Kino's hat.
Kino and Hermes rode all the way to the top of a long incline
and stood upon a crest--the peak of the mountain.
"Wow."
"Wow."
On the other side of the ridge was a vast hollow filled with
lush green trees. Their destination was at the centre of it all.
And jutting out from that dome was a long, thin, triangular
structure that pointed northward.
From the size of the country, it was plain that the structure
was on a different scale from mere buildings--it was the size
of a small mountain.
"Why not? It's angled in line with the latitudes." "I really
want to see it up close. And I'd be even happier if I could get
an explanation." Kino said, putting on her goggles again and
starting the engine.
—
It was a long ride from the mountain to the country.
By the time the sky was dyed red by the dusk, Kino and
Hermes had finally arrived at the easter gate. They could no
longer see the great triangle, which was hidden behind the
high walls.
Kino stopped Hermes and greeted the guard who came out
of the checkpoint.
That was when a small rusted truck that had seen too much
use drove up and stopped in front of them.
"I will lead you to your quarters. Please load the motorrad
onto the back of the truck. We must hurry--the sun is
already setting. You must have a lot of questions, but please
wait until tomorrow morning." The woman said
mechanically.
Kino nodded, and pushed Hermes onto the truck via a
folding ramp. She secured him tightly with a length of rope
so he would not topple over.
Kino sat on the passenger seat on the left side of the truck
as they drove into the country on smooth paved roads. As
its exterior made clear, the truck itself was old and
uncomfortable. But there was a large monitor attached
beside the driver's seat.
The guide said nothing all throughout the drive. Kino also
kept quiet.
By the time the sun set and darkness began creeping into
the sky, Kino and Hermes arrived at a hotel on the corner of
a large street lined with buildings. the great triangle was
sticking out of the ground to their west.
—
The hotel room was large, but plain. It was furnished with
only the bare essentials. Kino unloaded the luggage from
Hermes.
"Did you notice, Kino? All the houses and buildings here are
basically mass-produced copies."
"Yeah. It felt like we were going through a full-sized model,
or a looping street. Except for that." Kino said, looking
towards the shut curtains.
Finishing her dinner, Kino lay down on the cheap bed framed
in iron piping and fell asleep.
"You know, Kino, they say going to sleep right after you eat
turns you into a bug." Hermes advised, but Kino did not
answer.
—
The next day, Kino woke up at sunrise.
Kino opened the curtains. At that very moment, the sun rose
over the hills and shone upon the great white structure. The
light reflecting off it instantly illuminated the room. "It's so
bright, Kino."
"It is. But it's not too bad. It spared me the trouble of trying
to wake you up."
"I'm afraid not. I can't tell you myself, so let me just say that
it's all for a greater cause. Our guide will give you a clear
explanation. I'm sure you'll be floored. Please look forward
to it." the bellboy said, leaving the room.
"Good morning, Miss Kino! Did you sleep well last night?
Look! Today is going to be a wonderful day! Right this way!"
It was the ver same guide from yesterday, but on her face
was a beautiful smile that made her look like a completely
different person. The tone of her was bright and cheery.
"..."
—
Kino loaded Hermes onto the back of the guide's truck and
climbed into the passenger seat.
The sky was a clear blue, but there was a strong wind
blowing in from the west. Great grey clouds loomed
overhead in that direction.
"It's very quiet." Hermes said from behind the window that
opened into the back of the truck.
"Yes, and I'll explain to you just why that is very shortly!"
The smiling guide said cheerfully.
"I'm sure it's quite obvious to you. Right over there!" The
guide answered. Kino looked ahead, towards the great white
triangle glowing in the morning sun.
"Are you going to tell us about it?" Hermes asked from the
back.
"Absolutely! The President has just granted us permission to
disclose the truth! Now we can declare its purpose proudly.
You're quite fortunate that you only arrived yesterday!"
"I see... so it really does look that way to you? We've heard
the same from other travelers who visited us in the past."
"?"
"?"
"Pardon?"
"I see... So what was the reason for all this secrecy?"
"That's right. The entire country has gathered here for this
historic moment." Security officials led the truck through the
crowd. They stopped before the large podium and stage set
up in the square.
From the south, Kino and Hermes could see that the
structure's width was surprisingly thin, much thinner than its
side made it seem to be. Even still, it looked to be about as
thick as most other buildings around it.
"Here, you can see better this way." The guide said, turning
on the monitor by the driver's seat. The screen crackled for
a moment before blinking on to display the man at the
podium. The Emcee spoke.
And finally-
[And now, for the moment you've all been waiting for! This
is the fruit of our efforts! The key to our bright, shining
future!]
"..."
"..."
The cylinder had segments that jutted out from its form,
looking rather like a bamboo stalk. At regular intervals there
were short sections where the cylinder was about twice its
regular thickness. There were about thirty of these
segments in total.
"Is this all right? Many people must have lost their homes."
"..."
The cylinder jutted into the sky at an angle, longer than the
radius of the country.
"...I'm not sure." Kino surrendered.
"Absolutely!"
"And? And?"
Kino and Hermes agreed with her idly, not asking what was
so great about anything.
"Oh... of course."
"And? And?"
"That's right! They had brought back the plans for this ultra-
large cannon! The plans said, 'This cannon can hit any point
on this planet'. Isn't it a magnificent weapon? At the
moment of its completion, the rest of the world will have no
choice but to bow down before us!"
On the wagon was the shell for the cannon. It was a black
cylinder with a pointed end, shaped no differently from its
brethren. But its size was enormous. It almost looked as
though the trucks were transporting a lighthouse.
The shell soon passed by Kino and Hermes, followed by its
shadow.
"Your [Cannon] only ignites once per round, right? And when
the liquid gunpowder ignites, the explosion it causes propels
the shot out through the barrel and towards the target at
really high speeds. That's how all persuaders and cannons
work, on a basic level."
"Multiple ignitions?"
"And?"
"Yeah. See those thick rings around the cylinder? Those are
probably the cartridge chambers. I bet it can shoot that
huge shell really, really, really far. That's all from me."
"I see..."
"With effort, you could probably join the ranks of the Second
Class citizens--who are obligated to do labour, of course."
The guide said condescendingly. "We'll be having our test
shot this afternoon, so I'd recommend staying to watch."
"Huh?"
"..."
"Huh."
"Um..." Unusually for him, Hermes trailed off. "I can't do it.
I'm sorry, it's just too complicated. I give up."
"I understand. In any case, why not join us for the viewing of
the test shot? Aboveground is dangerous, so we will have to
watch on a monitor in an underground bunker, of course.
Celebrate with us! Afterwards, we will hold a party to
commemorate this event. The entire country will, for the
first time in half a century, partake in a luxurious meal!"
"..."
"Of course. What will you do now, then?" The guide asked.
—
It was nearly noon. The clouds approached the country's
airspace, blown over by the westerlies.
Kino and Hermes left the country through the west gate.
"Is this really all right? They know about the cannon. Isn't it
possible that they changed their plans so suddenly because
they wanted to warn a neighboring country? What if they're
spies?"
"All right!"
—
As Kino and Hermes rode through the forest at breakneck
speed, she shouted over the sound of the rumbling engine.
"Got it."
—
Kino and Hermes were on the mountain path, the hollow
behind them. She slowed down when she approached a
turn, and sped up as much as she could when the road was
straight. They climbed over several large peaks, leaving a
cloud of dust in their wake.
Soon, they arrived at a particularly high point in the
mountains, from which they could see the hollow.
"This should be far enough. Stop at the hilltop over there,
Kino."
Kino let go of the gas lever and stopped Hermes at the top
of the hill.
Kino took out a water bottle from the case beside Hermes'
back wheel, and took several gulps.
"Oh! I get it, Hermes. You think the force of the shot might
cause a shockwave that might destroy the country. Is that
why we had to leave so quickly?"
Kino looked towards the east. She could see the cannon in
the distance.
"Whoa!"
"It's here."
"It's better that way. Let's go, Kino. I think we should get
further away, just in case."
—
They made it over about eight more mountain peaks, as
Hermes continued to say, "Not yet, not yet".
"This should be good enough, Kino. Let's stop here and look
at that country again. Make sure you set my side stand on
properly, okay?"
Kino did as she was told and stopped Hermes at the top of a
hill, just as she had done so earlier. She lowered Hermes'
side stand and dug it slightly into the ground.
"Whew..."
"..."
Kino took her eye off the scope. She could finally just barely
see the little white pin in the distance.
"It's just about time, so I'll answer your question. Kino. Why
did we have to rush out of there?"
"Finally."
"All right..."
Kino looked back to the east. Hermes began his explanation.
"The people who made those blueprints long ago must have
been afraid that the 'cannon' might be used for the wrong
purposes. so they made a safety device."
"A safety device?" Kino asked, her eyes fixed on the tiny
cannon.
"That's right. If they fire the test shot like the blueprint tell
them to..."
"?"
Although Kino was confused, she kept her eye on the east.
The line of light pierced the clouds in the south and struck
the green lands with the little white cannon.
"That's...!"
"What?"
"Whoa!"
"Uh-oh."
"Argh!"
"Amazing!"
Kino and Hermes yelled, but their voices were drowned out
entirely by the roar.
"No way..."
"That's right."
"..."
"Then..."
"The projectile?"
"No."
"That country?"
"..."
"..."
Kino took off her hat with her right hand and put it over her
chest. After a brief moment of silence, she opened her eyes
and put her hat back on.
—
"So in the end, we never got to see a sundial or have a
delicious meal..."
Three cars were driving through the forest, the fallen leaves
swirling in the wind.
The car at the head of the team drove into a straight stretch
of road leading up to the hill. The driver noticed Kino waving
at them and blinked his lights on and off.
"Oh! A traveler!"
"Good evening!"
"Hello!"
"That earthquake just now was something else, eh? Are you
all right?"
"..."
"Yes, I did. But it's not there anymore." Kino said honestly.
"What? What do you mean?"
—
The road was smooth and polished. Running right beside it
was a stream of fresh, clean water. The road snaked along
the base of the valley, leading deeper inside.
On either side of the road and the stream were rugged rock
cliffs, grey and unwelcoming. Not a single tree grew on the
rocks--only small patches of grass poked through the cracks.
The sky was clear and beautiful, but something about its
splendor looked quite fleeting and ephemeral.
In the cart were many large vinyl bags, filled up and looking
somewhat like sandbags used to build dikes during floods.
Over the bags was a blue tarp, which was secured to the
cart by a strong piece of rope.
The man glanced at the cart behind them with the cracked
side-view mirror.
—
Car pulled car as they drove along a great distance.
"Oh!"
"We're finally here."
The object was made entirely of ice. Its edges were jagged,
forming walls higher than the walls around the country.
"So this is what they call a 'glacier', is it? I'd heard about
them in the past, but this is my first time seeing it in
person..." The man squinted against the harsh radiance of
the glacier as he drove along. "So they were telling the
truth. A real glacier... What do you say to having a quick
look at it once we've sold our stock of explosives, Master?"
"Of course. But only after we've finished with business." The
woman answered.
—
They entered the country, dragging behind them a veritable
mound of explosives.
The man and the woman parked their car and approached
the people who had purchased their stock of explosives.
They were now beginning to transport it.
"By all means, stay and have a look before you leave!" They
told her, and led them to the ramparts from which they
could see the glacier.
"Can you see the edge of that glacier?" Their guide asked.
The man and the woman nodded.
"Ah, so that's what it was for. It's little wonder you'd need a
mountain of explosives for a job like yours." The man
commented, astonished. "Of course! Is it possible that the
glacier needs to be kept in check in order to prevent your
country from being engulfed?" he asked triumphantly.
"Not at all."
"Oh?"
"That is one of our secondary benefits, yes, but not our main
purpose."
"Then...?"
"Then?"
"I see..."
"And?"
"Well, I suppose..."
"..."
"Not at all, sir. Our country has a saying, you see. We put
our faith entirely in this message."
—
The two travelers spent two nights in the country of endless
explosions.
On the third morning, the shabby yellow car drove out the
gates it had entered through. It was no longer dragging a
cart behind it.
"Who knows? Even if they are, I'm sure we'll be long gone
by then. It doesn't really matter either way."
"I suppose you're right. Now, what do you say to a few more
return trips? Where there's money to be had, I'd like to be
present, after all."
"You can say that again. I got new shirts and new
underwear, I bought a great new sleeping bag, and I bought
more ammunition for [Woodsman] and [Flute]. And you too,
Hermes..."
Kino looked ahead again. "They're the ones who did this for
me. And what would I do with so much money? I don't think
I could ever spend it all. And if I bought things I could sell for
a good price in other countries, like jewelry, everyone would
have noticed something was wrong."
"True."
"Wow, that's amazing. Looks like she was always that evil,
huh?"
"That's right. And she said something else too: 'Kino, if you
ever end up visiting that country, and there are still people
tricking others in this way, make sure you reveal the truth.
But only after you've received everything you could'."
"Huh?"
"Kino... no way."
"But?"
—
We were on a very cold plain.
It was past noon, but it was impossible to tell where the sun
was located. The temperature was below freezing. Our
breaths froze in the air.
There was no wind. We could hear nothing save for the soft,
low rumbling of the buggy's engine.
"I don't see anything. Let's move on." Master Shizu said
from atop the driver's seat, and slowly sat back down.
"..."
"..."
—
It had all started the day before.
"Traveler, I'm sure your vehicle will help us locate our friend
much faster than our carriages. Please, we beg of you! It's
not much, but we will compensate you to the best of our
abilities!"
—
A slight distance ahead of the buggy was the object Master
Shizu had found with his binoculars.
If he had kept the fire going all this time, there was a
chance he had not yet frozen to death.
And-
"Uh..."
The postman was a man in his late twenties. His eyes were
shut, and his face was devoid of life. Hypothermia had left
his nose and cheeks discolored. His lips moved very faintly.
Master Shizu folded the man's arms over his chest, and
carefully opened the bag entrusted to him by the dying
man.
"..."
Master Shizu looked inside first, then passed it over so Ti
and I could see as well.
"..."
—
It was evening by the time the buggy arrived at the country,
carrying the postman's corpse and the bag of letters.
Most people did not care very much that the delivery was
late, not asking why their mail was delayed.
—
They were about halfway through the letters, sometime in
the afternoon.
"Sir, we will make sure this does not happen again..." They
said, bowing their head, but the man continued to raise his
voice.
"Please, sir..."
"..."
"..."
"Fine! I won't say anything more. I'll take that letter, if you
will!"
With that, the man turned around and stepped back into his
house. But just before he closed the door,
"Thank you!"
He said loudly.
—
The postmen solemnly continued with their work.
"..."
I could not tell what Ti was thinking, but she was watching
everything silently.
"..."
"That letter..." She said, "It's from the lawyer, isn't it?"
"..."
"Stop."
"What is it, young lady?" The woman asked. Her tone was
soft, but she was not smiling.
"Read it."
"Why do you say that? Listen, the man who sent me this
letter would always hit me and hurt me. I get very upset just
reading his letters. So why?"
"Read it."
"...Persistent brat..."
The woman looked up at the postmen.
"Who is this girl? These people look like the travelers that
came in earlier, but why are they with you?"
"I'm afraid I can't tell you much more than these men are
allowed. However..." Master Shizu said gently.
"Yes?"
"Yes."
"I know that you must work very hard to deliver these
letters, but that doesn't mean that I don't go through any
trouble myself." The woman said.
"Read it."
"Young lady, do you even know how to talk? Can't you say
anything else?"
"Read it."
"..."
"Read it."
"Fine. But this will be the last time. Next time I get a letter
from him, I will shred it on the spot, do you understand?"
"Okay."
The woman ripped open the envelope on the spot, and took
out the letter inside.
"..."
"Oh."
"Huh?"
"Hm?"
"..."
"Oh my..."
"Our job is not to find out about the contents of the letters,
only to deliver them. If you'll excuse us, traveler. You have
our deepest gratitude."
The postmen did not look back as they climbed onto the
carriage. The departed, leaving only the echo of hooves in
their wake.
"..."
The woman looked at the stoic Ti, her eyes red and swollen.
"..."
"..."
"And I'm sorry for calling you a brat. You're a very sweet girl.
I'm sure you'll grow up to be a beautiful young woman.
Thank you."
—
The fourteen year-old boy was torn about love.
She didn't seem to dislike him, but they hadn't yet spoken
one-on-one. He didn't even know very much about her.
The boy turned the matter over in his mind again and again.
"If the next thing that passes by is a bicycle, I'll ask her out.
And if it's a car, I'll wait until later!"
—
The forty-two year-old man was torn about his job.
He had been employed at the same firm for twenty years,
but he had been long dissatisfied with his company's
treatment of him.
Considering his age, this was his last chance. But a pay cut,
even a temporary one, would make things difficult for his
family as he and his wife raised their two children. He could
not afford to mess up in his new workplace. And the new
company's future was not guaranteed.
"Honey, this is your life. In the end, you're the only one who
can make that choice. I'll trust your judgement."
—
The nineteen year-old woman was torn about marriage.
Her older boyfriend, whom she had been dating for less
than a year now, had passionately proposed marriage to
her.
Tomorrow the holidays would end, and after work she would
go on a date with him. How should she respond? Yes, or no?
"All right! I'll just do this!" The woman looked out from her
apartment window.
"If the next thing that passes by is a bicycle, I'll marry him.
And if it's a car, I'll decline!"
—
The eighteen year-old student was torn about his future.
"If the next thing that passes by is a car, I'll choose acting.
And if it's a bicycle, I'll go to college!"
—
The eighty-nine year-old man was torn about what he should
do with his money after his death.
He would pass away of his illness soon, but he had not yet
decided on what to do with his vast estate.
His wife had passed before him, and their only son was a
grown man who did not live with him. By normal standards,
he would have had his son inherit everything, but he could
not figure out if this was the right thing to do.
"If the next thing that passes by is a bicycle, I'll pass it all on
to my son. And if it's a car, I won't leave him a penny!"
—
The thirty-nine year-old housewife was torn on what to make
for dinner.
Should she treat herself this time and make stew, her
favorite? Or should she make hamburgers, which her
husband and child loved?
—
The fifteen year-old boy was torn on which book to buy.
"If the next thing that passes by is a bicycle, I'll get _______.
And if it's a car, I'll get the other one!"
—
The twenty-seven year-old designer was torn about the
placement of a single line.
But he was torn on one last point--where to put the line that
would go on the side of the chassis.
"If the next thing that passes by is a car, I'll draw the line
higher. And if it's a bicycle, I'll put it lower!"
—
The couple in their thirties were torn on what they should
name their newborn.
Of course, they could just follow their pattern and give him
the beautiful winter name. This would make the siblings'
names a wonderful set.
But since they had a boy, they thought that perhaps they
should give him a strong, masculine name. And they were
worried that, if they gave him the winter name, he would
grow up to think that his parents wanted a daughter after
all.
"If the next thing that passes by is a bicycle, We'll give him
a strong, masculine name. And if it's a car, we'll stick to the
pattern!"
—
The forty-five year-old chef was torn about the new menu.
The chef looked out from her apartment window. "If the next
thing that passes by is a car, it'll be beef. And if it's a
bicycle, chicken it is!"
—
The thirty-six year-old man was torn on his next course of
action.
When she realized that she had been fooled, she became
outraged and cried that she would reveal everything to his
wife and his company. The man desperately did what he
could to silence his indignant girlfriend. And before he knew
it, she had become a corpse.
But if he did so, he would lose his job, his wife, their child,
and everything he valued about life. The man put down the
receiver and wondered if he could hide the corpse so it
would not be discovered.
He could drain all the blood in the bathtub and cut her into
tiny pieces. He could flush the smaller bits down the toilet,
and he could carefully mix in the bigger parts with his
garbage and dispose of it discreetly.
He had told her very clearly that she should not tell anyone
about their relationship. He could yet have a chance to bury
everything in secrecy.
"If the next thing that passes by is a car, no, a bicycle, I'll
turn myself in. And if it's a car, I won't!"
—
Many sets of eyes looked down upon the street from their
windows.
"Yeah. But I think I'll remember the great turtle dish they
served here more than the apartments."
"Hello."
"Thanks!"
"Haha! Not at all. Just a retired old man. Now, I know you're
the only one here and all the other tables are empty, but
would you mind terribly if I sat with you? Lend an ear to an
old man's ramblings?"
"I wonder. How about I explain our special legal system? Has
anyone told you about our 'Virtue Point' laws?"
"That's the first I've heard of it. Could you tell us more?"
"I see."
"That's right. You can receive Virtue Points for all kinds of
good deeds. For example, it's awarded to nationally
recognized singers who show people the beauty of music
through their songs. Or doctors and pharmacists who find
remedies for incurable illnesses and save many people. Or
scientists who create inventions that make people happy. Of
course, even a small gesture like giving up your seat for an
elderly person on the bus qualifies you for Virtue Points.
Anyone who witnesses such an action can apply to award
the person Virtue Points. And whoever does the reporting is
also given a small amount of points for the good deed of
bearing witness to such an action. With this system, our
country assigns points to those who do good for others. That
number is calculated and recorded in the person's
citizenship data."
"In other words, you can easily tell who is doing good deeds
for other people."
"Yes. For example, if you drink too much and make a huge
racket at night and inconvenience other people, you would
lose points. Everyone in our prisons have their Virtue Points
in the negative range. Their point count is written on the
identification cards they wear on their chest."
"Oh, I thought the same thing, too. Don't tell me that, uh...
Actually, you can go first, Kino."
—
"Ah, my tea is here. Give me a moment. Ah... Delicious."
"Your country has the most wonderful tea. One sip and I was
hooked. I bought a great deal of tea leaves so I could enjoy
this taste along my travels."
"It's a just system. I'm sure you've heard the saying 'If a
virtuous man suddenly commits a crime, the world will see
him as a criminal. But if a criminal suddenly does something
good, the world will see him as a virtuous man'."
"True."
"That's true."
"I see."
"But for the people here, losing Virtue Points is very painful.
Very few people think, 'I have enough points to get away
with a crime'."
"I guess."
"Pardon?"
"Huh?"
"How much?"
"Enough to get away with one murder."
"..."
"Wow."
"Yes."
"..."
"Why?"
"Then?"
"..."
"..."
"Hm. So..."
"..."
"..."
"Why?"
"..."
"Huh?"
"Traveler... Have you ever taken a life? I'm sure life on the
road could not have been so easy."
"Well, yes..."
"No."
"Well, no."
"If it's all right, I'd like to ask. Now that I am finally capable
of getting away with murder, who is it that I should kill?
There is no one I hate or hold a grudge upon. All I have are
loved ones--family, friends, companions--all such good
people. I could never take any of their lives. But would that
mean I could kill an evil person who repeatedly commits
crimes? Such people are very rare, and even if I were to find
one, if I was mistaken in my knowledge, I might end up
doing something that could never be taken back. But if I
waited for the person to be judged in a court, there would
be no point in me killing them because they would be
judged by the law..."
"That's true."
"Now that you mention it, yeah. I don't think Kino could help
you, mister."
"Yes."
"And that's why your right hand has been on the revolver at
your side all this time, correct?"
"Yes."
"I know."
"Hah..."
—
The sound of the motorrad's engine faded into the distance.
"Whew..."
The man sat alone in the open-air cafe and looked up at the
clear blue sky with a sigh.
The man paid for his tea and lightly waved at the waiter,
who was looking at him with admiration. He began walking
away.
The man smiled and nodded, slowly getting to his knees and
reaching down.
A tiny baby, whose head was not yet full of hair, slept
soundly in the carriage. "Of course... This baby still knows
nothing of the world." He whispered, quietly enough that
only the child could hear. "Absolutely nothing..."
—
A gnarled hand quietly touched the infant's forehead.
The baby's mother looked on, moved to tears by the act.
The man quietly spoke to the baby.
There were about ten men, led by a man in his sixties. The
rest were women and children.
It seemed that they had chosen to camp for the night at this
spot. They took out tents, cushions, and folding kitchen sets
from the canvas-covered trucks.
The eldest of the men, however, did not join the other
travelers in their work. Instead, he sat perched upon a large
rock as he talked with the children. The other men were
keeping watch over the area, all armed with persuaders.
Beside it was a little girl about five years old, who chanted
"Slave, slave, slower than a snail~" in a singsong voice.
"I'm sorry. I've brought the utensils." The slave said, putting
down the wooden crate. The women in charge of the
cooking glared at it.
"You slow, useless slave! Stay here and build a fire, do you
understand? If we see you slacking off, we're going straight
to the Head."
"Yes." The slave said quietly. The woman left the slave
behind and scattered, baskets in hand.
—
Two men who were watching the area nearby, rifles slung
over their shoulders, glanced at the slave as it worked hard
to start a fire with coal. One of the men was young, still in
his early twenties. The other was a middle-aged man in his
forties.
"Why'd you think the Head decided to bring such a useless
child from the last country? We've had it for ten days, but
it's still terrible at work. And it's not like we even need a
slave in the first place..." The young man asked.
"A rule?"
"What?"
—
"That's right. The head of their religion just handed it over to
us, saying, 'This child is an excellent helper. Please take it as
your servant'. Ain't it grand to hear?"
"Hey, what does our little nuisance think, now that it's been
sold to us for pocket change?" He asked.
"Ignoring us, you brat? You've got guts, I'll give you that."
"Ack!"
The man let go of the chain. The slave fell to its knees in
tears.
"No..."
"Pfft! Ahahahaha!"
The younger man burst into laughter again. "I don't believe
this..." Even the middle-aged man could not hide his
astonishment.
"Hey, you're seriously telling me you still believe that guy
who sold you to us?"
"I'm sure... I'm sure that our Leader meant for me to go see
the outside world." The slave replied. "Or maybe he thought
this would lead me to a better life. This is a test for my
future."
"..."
"..."
For a few moments, the men were struck dumb by its reply.
The older man soon snapped out of his shock and glared at
the slave.
The slave shook its head. The lock and chain rattled slightly.
"..."
The older man breathed a long sigh, and gave the younger
man an order.
"Aaah! Urgh!"
—
The women chased off the younger man and addressed the
slave, who trembled and wept with its back covered in
blood.
"...Yes, ma'am."
The slave began rinsing the herbs at a bucket that was set
beside it. The water had been drawn from the stream--being
freshly melted snow, it was very cold to the touch. None of
the women came to help.
"Quickly! At this rate, the sun's going to go down before you
finish!"
"Yes, ma'am..."
Suddenly,
"..."
The slave stopped washing the herbs. Its hands went still. A
flash of recognition was clear in its eyes.
"..."
—
The man who had earlier whipped the slave glanced over at
the scene.
"I'd never stand for living like that, if you ask me. I'd
probably just shoot myself before that happens. Whaddaya
know, just like the slave said. I'd choose to die instead." He
said to the older man.
The older man gazed out at the great mountain range below
them and the clouds that hung at eye-level.
"What?"
"I see." The younger man shifted the heavy rifle on his
shoulder. "Anyway, I'm glad I was born into this life. I'd
rather die than become a slave." He said, reiterating
himself. He then continued, "If that slave wants to die so
badly, I wish it'd just kill itself or something."
"Yes?"
—
Once the slave had finished rinsing the herbs, it was ordered
to start a coal fire.
"I bet it'll start crying like an animal with that disgusting
voice. Sounds like fun."
"..."
—
When it finished washing its hands, the slave took a seat a
slight distance from the travelers. A stone-faced woman
walked up to it.
The woman gave the slave a tiny plate of soup and a broken
spoon, then turned away in a huff.
The food had been distributed, but the meal had not yet
begun.
—
"..."
And,
"Ah..."
"Ah... Ah..."
Warm steam was rising from it. Inside the broth was the
herb it had rinsed, cooked to perfection and mixed in with
the carrots and potatoes, highlighting the mixture with
streaks of green.
"Oh... Oh..."
The tears falling from the slave's face began to wash the
soot from its face. Through the tears it could see the Head
looking up again, his prayer finished.
—
Soon they would begin their meal.
And,
"..."
"Ah-"
—
"Thank you for the meal!"
The hungry travelers dug into their meal. The slave could
clearly hear them happily slurping and gulping down their
food.
"Excellent as usual!"
"Ah..."
Tears began running down its cheeks.
"..."
"Ah..."
"Ah!"
The shock and pain caused its to lose its grip. The plate fell,
hit a jutting stone, and spilled its contents over the ground.
"Bull's eye!" The Head's son cheered. Although everyone
was busy bringing their soup to their mouths, the boy alone
was standing. He flicked the finger that had sent the rock
flying at the slave.
"Why d'you think I did that? I saw it! I saw that filthy slave
try to drink the soup like a pig, without even using a spoon!
That's bad manners!" He looked around at the adults beside
him.
The Head and his wife replied promptly. The others voiced
their agreement.
—
"Hm..."
"Ah..."
Before its eyes was its plate of soup, completely spilled over
the ground, the sight of the Head's son looking down at it
condescendingly, and the travelers returning to their meal.
"All right! I'm going to eat now, too!" The boy said loudly,
noticing the slave's gaze. He lifted his plate and spoon.
The rock made its mark and hit the slave in the forehead
before it could say that the herb was poisonous. Its skin was
torn. Blood splattered over the earth.
"Urgh...!"
The man who threw the rock rushed over to the slave,
forced its head upwards, and used a bandanna to fashion a
gag.
By the time the man had returned to his meal, the slave
regained its senses.
"Mmmmmph! Mmmph!"
"Mmmph! Mmmmmph!"
"MMMMMMMPPHHHH! HHHHMMMPH!"
The Head's son was evidently not the only one interested in
the topic. The others all turned to the Head.
Even the slave, tired out from the screaming, could hear the
boy's words clearly.
"Oh? Kill it, you say?" The Head said, pleasantly surprised.
"All right."
"R-really?"
—
At that very moment, the slave broke its silence.
But-
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH!"
"AAAAAHHHHH-"
"Guh!"
"It's an animal!"
—
After dinner, the pot of soup had just about one plateful left.
The man who had tied up the slave took off the bandannas
from its ankles and mouth.
"Uhhh..."
"No. Don't let it eat anything but water from now on. I heard
that it'll stink if it's still got food in its belly." The boy
laughed.
—
It was a little later that the slave opened its eyes.
"..."
The first thing it saw was the bright evening sun and the
mass of clouds covering the sky.
"ARGH!"
"Gah..."
"Koff! Blargh!"
"AAAAAHHHHHH!"
"Oh..."
Before its eyes was the sight of hell itself.
One stuck his head in the creek, but never came up again.
"..."
"..."
Dried blood was caked over its head. With its face covered
in brownish red, and with no discernible expression on its
face, the slave approached the people with its chain trailing
behind it.
"..."
The slave came across the Head's wife and son, crumpled
together on the ground. Their faces were obscured by the
white foam.
The slave shifted, and the chain at its neck rattled in under
the twilight
"Urgh..."
"Oh!"
"Argh..."
"P-please, wake up..." The slave said, and shook the man's
shoulders. His eyes opened.
"..."
"..."
"Looks like that's it, then... Because... you never had a bite...
no..." The man mumbled. He then remembered.
"I'm the only one left now. So please, sir... Please at least
give me one thing..."
"Yeah...?"
"What?"
The slave knelt before him and clumsily took hold of the
rifle.
The man reached into his pocket and took out a small key.
"Come closer... Yeah. Don't move."
The man reached out to the slave with his right hand and
opened the lock at its neck.
The lock fell in front of the slave. Its necklace and chain slid
down its back. The sound of clattering broke the silence.
"Like this...?"
"Yeah... Now take the thinnest section with your right hand...
Yes... Your index finger... on the trigger... Don't lose your
grip, now... Keep your hand steady... Koff!"
"Calm down... I'm not dead yet... Now, lift it up. Easy does
it..."
"L-like this...?"
The slave lifted the rifle with its thin arms. The barrel
pointed into the air.
At that very moment, the man used the last of his strength
to sit up suddenly.
"Ack!"
The moment the man pulled the rifle towards him, the
trigger was pulled by the slave's finger.
Bang.
"Eek!" It screamed.
"Koff!"
The man did not cough up foam, but blood.
He slowly fell over to his right. His head hit a stone with a
thud.
"...Wh-why...?"
The slave knelt before the man, its eyes wide and full of
tears.
"Just like you said... you'll understand one day..." The man
answered.
—
The sun was setting past the horizon.
"..."
The slave was now truly alone. It stood stock still beside the
bleeding corpse, its face covered in tears and dried blood.
"..."
"Oh..."
The slave made up its mind. It climbed onto the back of the
truck, and entered through the opening in the canvas. Light
spilled in from the vinyl window on the west, faintly
illuminating the interior.
The back of the truck was filled with narrow shelves made of
metal piping. All kinds of sundry goods were arranged on
them, bought by the traveling merchants. They were all
secured with ropes so they would not fall off during the
drive.
"Eek!" The slave recoiled and hit its back on a shelf behind
it. The shelf shook loudly.
"..."
—
The motorrad was small. Its wheels were about the size of
platters, and the chassis was about as big as a bench made
for children. There were no handles to be found, and it had
almost no protruding parts. In fact, the chassis almost
looked like a box.
The little motorrad had been stuffed under the shelf and
secured with rope.
"Ha! Good question! You look a bit slow, but you're actually
pretty bright, right? That's good! Otherwise it wouldn't be
any fun!"
"..."
"..."
"Hey! don't make that face. You're free now. You can do
whatever you want now, Missy."
—
The sun had set. The world quickly lost its colour.
"Don't be stupid. That last one killed himself. And the rest of
'em should have known better than to use poison for
cooking."
"They just had no luck to begin with. They would have died
here tonight, whether you were around nor not. And you
were lucky. Isn't it amazing? You're free now!"
"..."
"Didn't you hear me? I said, you're free!"
"..."
"Hello?"
"How do I die?"
"That's right. Just keep going, and your life will end before
you know it. That's when death happens."
"Besides, it's better for me that you live, too. Otherwise I'd
be stuck here forever! It's really uncomfortable being folded
up like this. I mean, we're by the road, so I'm sure
someone's gonna come by us eventually, but maybe not. So
I need to ask you a favor."
"I don't have one." The girl replied firmly, her expression
veiled by the shadows.
"What?"
"In that case... I guess I'll have to make you one. Uh... But I
can't really think of anything on the spot. How about I give
you a name once I think up something nice?"
"Okay."
"Great! It's only right you name someone who's just been
born!"
—
The next afternoon.
Travel gear was packed on either side of its rear wheel and
atop it.
The rider, wearing a brown coat, noticed the trucks and the
corpses ahead of them and stopped the motorrad.
The rider took out a sniping scope from a box, hid behind a
boulder a slight distance from the motorrad, and quietly
looked at the scene.
"We're here."
"Here it is."
"How much have you been told so far?" The man asked.
"Ah..."
"'Spares'?"
"Then..."
—
"There is an unspoken rule in this country that states that
each couple is allowed to have no more than two children.
Any more than that, and it would make things difficult for us
in the long term. We would not be able to handle the
population growth. But it is not outright forbidden to raise
three or more children. And some people, in fact, do so."
The man explained. "However, even if they do not plan to
raise three or more children, most couples have three, four
children. I'm sure you understand why."
"I see..."
"His legs were transplanted to his older brother, who lost his
own in an accident. I coordinated the transplant myself. The
older brother has made a full recovery and is able to walk
again. Now, if I could turn your attention to number 323..."
"What happens in cases like this? Do you just toss them out
somewhere?" Hermes asked.
—
The tour came to an end.
And so-
Afterword —Preface—
Hello, everyone. This is Sigsawa, the writer of this book.
—
Kino's Journey has finally reached its twelfth volume.
That was why the last story in that volume was titled [A
Finished Tale]. It was quite a conclusive name.
"I can write more?! Then volume 9 it is! Three times three!
This is beautiful!" (Volume 9 was published in October
2005.)
Time passed, and I've reached the fourth stop with volume
12.
AS IF.
In any case, I have no idea how much further I can take this
story, but now that I've come this far, I'd like to keep trying
as much as possible. I still haven't gotten to the Stock
Market Arc, either. Gakuen Kino ended up coming out first...
(See volume 4's afterword for details.)
—
Now, I'd like to talk about the work that goes into making
Kino's Journey.
—
In volume 11, I discussed things about the title, typos,
jargon, character/weapon names, belongings, and fan work.
This time, I'll be talking about something different so it
doesn't overlap.
—
Step 1: Handing in a plot outline
It's possible to simply say, "A story with this kind of feel", or
go into lengthy detail about characterization and plot points.
—
Step 2: Writing
I begin writing.
—
Step 3: Editorial pass and meeting with the editor
Even when I've finished writing, at this stage it's all still in
the rough draft stage. These drafts are called 'first drafts',
and I hand them in to the editorial department for their
approval.
I've heard that authors who live far away tend to have their
meetings over the phone, but I personally prefer to have my
meetings in person, so I go to the editorial department
myself.
After all, normally by this time I would have long missed the
deadline we set for me at the beginning.
—
Step 4: Completion
Along with the words "reprint" (the books are selling so well
we're printing more copies) and "royalties", this is one of the
most beautiful words that could ever exist in an author's life.
That much is certain.
Author's revisions:
Copy editing:
At this point, I've reread the story (and wrote it, to boot),
and the editorial department has read it again and again,
but there are always mistakes that slip by somehow. In fact,
there are many of them. Bucketfuls, in fact.
—
Step 6: Second revision, author's revisions, revision
check
(And the fact that I can write about this incident in this
afterword means--yes. I pushed back my deadline to the
limit and am treading on very thin ice. I'm sorry...)
As with the first proof, the copy editor checks this proof
again. It's only natural that there are fewer corrections to be
made in this process, but sometimes we get even more
notices at this phase than before.
—
And that is the process by which my stories take form.
Now that I look at it written down like this, it doesn't feel
that complicated at all.
Well, I guess I shouldn't lie. Even by the time I had over ten
books under my belt, I still didn't have a good
understanding of what second revisions or author's revisions
were supposed to be. I just wrote when the editorial
department told me to, and I went in to the editorial
department whenever they gave me a call. I guess things all
work out in the end. Heh.