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This document provides background on characters Meera and Radha. It begins by showing Meera hanging herself in her bedroom. It then introduces Radha, who has eloped with Sanjai against her family's wishes. Radha expresses doubts about her decision, but Sanjai reassures her. They grow intimate but Radha feels someone watching her. The document then cuts to Meera having a frightening vision in her bathroom. Sanjai gets Radha a job through his friend to help support their new household. Unease and possibly unseen threats continue to distress the women.

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Siskee

This document provides background on characters Meera and Radha. It begins by showing Meera hanging herself in her bedroom. It then introduces Radha, who has eloped with Sanjai against her family's wishes. Radha expresses doubts about her decision, but Sanjai reassures her. They grow intimate but Radha feels someone watching her. The document then cuts to Meera having a frightening vision in her bathroom. Sanjai gets Radha a job through his friend to help support their new household. Unease and possibly unseen threats continue to distress the women.

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SISKEES

Written by

Bharat Pandey

Email id- [email protected]


MO- 9850769453
1 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA 1

We open the scene in a dark room.. Kisi ke rone ki awaz


aarahi hai.. Camere track hota hai hum dekhte hai ek kone
mein ek ladki baithi huyi hai jo zor zor se siskiyan leke ro
rahi hai.. Camra aur track hota hai ladki ke face par jaata
hai..ladki ki aankho se aansu nikal rahe hai.. She is looking
like very upset... camera ladki ke face par hai, rotey rotey
usse kucch yaad aata hai wo apne aansu pochhti hai aur khadi
ho jaati hai...ab woh kucch soch rahi hai aur idhar- udhar
tahal rahi hai... some timelaps shot with girl... ladki apne
aap ko saamne rakhe mirror mein dekh rahi hai... woh apna
dupatta nikalti hai aur bagal mein rakhe stool ko le jakar
fan ke neeche lagaati hai...stool par chadhti hai, dupaate ka
ek sira fan mein baandhti hai aur doosra sira apne gale mein
baandhti hai....camera Stool par hai, ladki stool ko apne
pairon se neeche giraati hai.. Stool neeche gir jaata
hai..camera gire huye stool par hai... emotionaly and theme
music ke saath desolve

We will use mostly symbolic shot in Prologue scene..

CUT TO:

2 INT/ DAY/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI, PREM 2

Door open hota hai.. 3 log dikhtey hai..

PREM
Aaj se yeh hai aap dono ka naya
aashiyana...waise humne saara
intezaam kar diya hai.. Bas ab aap
dono apni nayi grihasthi ko
sambhaaliye...
Radha door se enter karne waali hoti hai..

PREM (CONT’D)
Are bhabhi...rukiye..rukiye
aap..aise kaise andar
aajayegi...jab bahu ghar mein pahli
baar aati hai toh kuchh riwaaz hota
hai...

Prem andar jaata hai ek chawal se bhara kalash aur ek aalta


se bhari thaali lata hai...prem Radha ko andar aane ko kahta
hai..Radha chawal ke kalash ko pair se giraati hai aur aalte
ki thaali mein paanv rakh ke andar jaati hai..camera radha ke
paanv par hai.. Radha ke paanv ke nishaan par camera move
karta hai...paanv ke nishaan aise lag rahe hai jiase khoon ka
nishaan ho.camra Movement aise ho raha hai jaise koi uska
peechhha kar raha ho...Radha andar bedroom mein chali jaati
hai..Sanjai aur Prem hall mein hi khade hai..
2.

SANJAI
Prem..tumne mere liye jo kiya
hai..uske liye thank you

PREM
Isme thank you ki kya baat hai
Sanjai...waise bhi yeh tumhaare
liye nahi... main apne liye kar
raha hoon...matlab ek dost ka farz
hota hai doosare dost ki museebat
mein kaam aaye...aur haan maine
saara intezaam kar diya hai agar
kuchh cheez ki zaroorat ho to phone
kar dena main chalta hai

Prem exit..we cut the scene on sanjai face...

DISSOLVE TO:

3 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI 3

We see fully decorated room, some flowers, candles...etc..


Radha bed pe baithi hai, tabhi sanjai enter karta hai..
Sanjai bhi aake radha ke paas baith jaata hai.. Radha ko
pyaar bhari nazaron se dekhta hai

SANJAI
Aakhir hum log ek ho hi gaye.. woh
ek kahaawat hai na ki jab pyaar
saccha hota hai toh do pyaar karne
waalon ko milaane mein saari
kaaynaat jut jaati hai..ab humko
koi alag nahi kar sakta...ab mai
aur tum humesha ke liye ek ho gaye
But Radha is looking worried.

RADHA
Kya maine sahi kiya sanjai?

SANJAI
Kya nahi sahi kiya?

RADHA
Maine apne gharwaalon ki marzi ke
bagair tumse bhaag ke shaadi
ki...maine apni khushi ke liye apne
gharwaalon ka bhi thoda sa dhyaan
nahi rakha...pata nahi un par kya
beet rahi hogi..

Radha rone lagti hai...Sanjai usko console karne ki koshish


karta hai
3.

SANJAI
Tum befaltu ka stress le rahi
ho..aur iss situation mein hum kar
bhi kya sakte the.. tumhaare maa,
baba humaare rishtey ke ekdam
khilaaf the.. kyunki main unki
jaati ka nahi hoon...aaj ke time
mein bhi yeh jaati paati...agar hum
bhi yahi sab sochtey toh kabhi ek
nahi ho paatey...tum pyaar karti ho
na mujhse

She nods her head in yes

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Tumne kuchh bhi galat nahi
kiya..samjhi...aur haan woh
tumhaare maa, baaba hai thode din
naraz rahege phir khud hi maaf kar
dege aur iss rishtey ko apna lege..

Sanjai, radha ke aansu pochhta hai..

RADHA
Such mein

Sanjai folded her hand

SANJAI
Haan such mein...lekin uske liye
tumhe bhi ek kaam karna
padega..jaldi se unko ek pyaara sa
pota dena padega..

Radha smile karti hai...sanjai Radha ki taraf badhta hai usko


kiss karta hai..intiment scene...

Sanjai aur Radha dono ek doosare ki baahon mein hai tabhi


hawa dheere se radha ke baalon ko chhote huye nikal jaati
hai....jaise koi chhokar gaya ho..Radha, sanjai ko chhod deti
hai aur peechhe dekhti hai..lekin kuchh dikhaayi nahi deta
hai..

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Kya hua?

RADHA
Mujhe laga koi hai..koi mujhe
chhotey huye gaya

SANJAI
Yahan humaare tumhaare alawa koi
nahi hai...
4.

RADHA
Nahi sanjai..main such kah rahi
hoon...mere peeche zaroor koi tha..

SANJAI
Koi nahi hai Radha..bas tumhara
baham hai...mai hoon na tumhaare
paas toh phir kyun darr rahi
ho..mere hote huye koi nahi aa
sakta....chalo chhodo yeh sab aajao
humaari baahon mein...

Sanjai, radha ko apni baahon mein kheech leta hai.. Dono ek


doosare ki baahon me hai...

Kisi ka POV dikhate hai..blur POV..jaise koi unko dekh raha


hai....

CUT TO:

4 INT/ DAY/ BEDROOM/ MEERA 4

Meera bathroom se naha ke nikalti hai... aake mirror ke


saamne ready ho rahi hai.. Mirror mein usko peechhe kucch
dekhti hai...dar ke peeche ki taraf dekhti hai lekin peeche
kuchh nahi dikhta hai...phir saamne dekhti hai ki mirror par
blood se likha hai “Bhaag jaao”... Radha darr ke peeche ke
taraf pair badhaane lagti hai..thoda sa peeche aati hai tabhi
peeche se koi pakad leta hai...zor se chillati hai...music
build up...

SANJAI
Radha...radha..kya hua...main hoon
sanjai..
Radha apni aankh kholti hai saamne sanjai hai..

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Kya hua...tum darri huyi kyun ho?

RADHA
Woh..wohh

SANJAI
Haan kya hua..bolo na

RADHA
Woh mirror pe...khoon...khoone se
likha..

Sanjai mirror ki taraf dekhta hai...mirror pe kuchh nahi


likha...
5.

SANJAI
Radha...wahan toh kuchh nahi hai

Radha peeche mud ke dekhti hai mirror ekdam saaf hai kuchh
nahi likha hai..Radha sanjai ko hug karti hai...Radha ke face
pe scene cut karte hai..

CUT TO:

5 EXT/ DAY/ CONSTRUCTION SITE/ SANJAI, PREM, RAN VIJAI SINGH 5

Construction site pe bahut saare log kaam kar rahe hai..


Sanjai aur prem enter karte hai...Ranvijai singh apni car ke
paas khada hai kisi worker se baat kar raha hai..

RANVIJAI SINGH
Are prem...aao..aao..kaise aana hua

Ranvijai worker ko jaane ke liye kahta hai..waorker nikal


jaata hai..

PREM
Sir..woh maine bataya tha na
aapko...sanjai ke baare mein..yeh
hai mera dost Sanjai

Sanjai Ranvijai ko namaste karta hai

RANVIJAI SINGH
Bahut taareef suni hai tumhaari..

SANJAI
Sir aap ek baar sewa ka awsar
dijiye..shikayat ka mauka nahi
milega..
RANVIJAI SINGH
Theek hai...

PREM
Sir woh kuchh advance de dete
toh..woh kya hai na ki nayi nayi
ghar grihasti hai toh...

Hum long shot mein dekhte hai ki Ranvijai paiso ka ek bundle


nikaal ke sanjai ko deta hai...unke beech kucchh baat cheet
ho rahi hai jo sunaayi nahi de rahi hai..sanjai aur prem
wahan se nikalte hai...Ranvijai ke face pe hum cut karte
hai..

CUT TO:
6.

6 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI 6

Radha bedroom mein apna kuchh saman rakh rahi hai..kisi ka


POV jaise koi dekh raha ho.. Pov uski taraf aaraha hai jaise
uske paas pahuchne wala hota hai tabhi door bell bajti hai...
Radha wahan se nikalti hai.. Aake door open karti hai..
Saamne sanjai hai, uske haantho mein kuchh hai...woh andar
aata hai..Radha ke haanth mein ek gift box deta hai

SANJAI
Yeh tumhare liye..

RADHA
Kya ismein?

SANJAI
Khud kholkar dekh lo..

Radha gift box kholkar dekhti hai, usmein ek night suit


hai...

RADHA

Iss sab ki kya zaroorat thi..

SANJAI
Main apni biwi ko aur bhi sexy
dekhna chaahta hoon samjhi..aur
haan ek good news aur bhi
hai..mujhe nayi naukari mili hai
aur mere boss ne advance bhi
diya..toh ussi paise se tumhaare
liye yeh pyaar sa gift...

RADHA
Yeh toh acchi baat hai...lekin itna
mahga gift laane ki kya zaroorat
thi...

SANJAI
Lekin wekin kuchh nahi...jaldi se
jaao aur taiyaar hoke aao...

Radha smile karti hai..

RADHA
Theek hai baba jaati hoon..pahle
naha leti hoon phir uske baad..

SANJAI
Kya baat hai..meri biwi toh aur bhi
romantic ho rahi hai
7.

Radha kuchh bolti nahi smile karti hai aur bathroom mein
chali jaati hai..

CUT TO:

7 INT/ NIGHT/ BATROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA 7

Radha bathroom ke andar jaati hai, ek ek kar kapde nikalti


hai... shower on karti hai...shower ke paani se apni poori
body ko bhigo rahi hai...tabhi shower band ho jaata
hai...Radaha shower ko phir se on karne ki koshish karti hai
lekin shower on nahi hota hai...suddenly shower on hota hai
lekin usmein se paani ki jagah blood jaisa nikalne lagta
hai..Radha darr jaati hai...peechhe wall pe sat jaati hai..
Woh cheekhne waali hoti hai tabhi aisa lagta hai ki jaisa koi
uska gala pakad liya ho....uske Paas aake bolti hai ki “Bhaag
jaao yahan se”... Radha khud ko chhudaane ki koshish kar rahi
hai lekin chhuda nahi pa rahi hai...phir se ek awaz halki si
sunaayi deti hai “ maine kaha bhaag jaao yahan se”...
suddenly usko wall ki taraf puss karta hai...Radha ka sir
wall pe lagta hai uski aankhon ke saamne andhera chhane lagta
hai..uski aankh dheere dheer band hone lagti hai... blur
focus mein hum dekhte hai ki koi batroom mein kisi ki
parchhai hai... Radha ki aankh band ho jaati hai

DISSOLVE
TO:BLACKOUT

8 INT/ DAY/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI, NANDA 8

Pov shot of Radha.. Radha apni aankh dheere dheere khol rahi
hai blur pov se dikhaate hai sanjai uske saamne hai..kuchh
bol raha hai lekin usko sunaayi nahi de raha hai...radha
aankhe band karti hai toh voice over aata hai “ Bhaag ja
yahan se” suddenly ghabra ke uth ke baith jaati hai...Radha
ke maathe par ek chot lagi hai aur patti bandhi huyi hai

SANJAI
Radha..Radha..kya hua

Radha kuchh bol nahi pa rahi hai woh dari huyi hai..

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Radha..kuchh bolo to sahi

Radha, sanjai ke gale lag jaati hai..

RADHA
Maine kaha tha na..yaha zaroor koi
hai...aur bathroom mein mujhe
maarne ki koshish ki ..
8.

Sanjai, Radha ko apne se alag karta hai.. uske haanth ko apne


haanth mein fold karta hai...

SANJAI
Radha kuchh nahi hai yahan pe sirf
tumhara baham hai...tum bathroom
mein fisal ke gir gayi thi
bas...aur do din se tum behosh padi
ho..

RADHA
Do din se..

SANJAI
Ab baaten kam karo aur aaram
karo..aur haan tum ghar mein akele
rahti ho na toh tumhaare dimaag
mein aur bhi aisi baaten aati
hai...isliye tumhaari dekhbhaal
karne aur tumhe company dene ke
liye kisi ko laaya hoon..
Nana...nanda

Nanda..nanda jor se awaz deta hai...ek ladki aati huyi


dikhayi deti hai jo thda banjaran type mein hai..

Note- Nanda ki entry dramatic shoot karege

Radha, Nanda ko dekhti hai... Nanda, radha ki taraf aa rahi


hai... Radha trance mein chali jaati hai...usko nanda ajeeb
tareeke se dikhti hai.. Hum Radha ke POV se dikhayege ki
Nanda jaise koi aatma ho aur Radha ki taraf aage badh rahi
hai..

NANDA
Bhaag jaao yahan se...maine kaha
bhaag jaao yahan se..

Radha chillati hai aur behosh ho jaati hai...hum dikhate hai


ki nanda, radha ke paas aati hai..woh normal dikh rahi hai
aur normal behave kar rahi hai..

SANJAI
Radha..Radha

Radha, sanjai ke kandhe par behosh hoke gir padi hai..

NANDA
Saheb aap pareshan mat hoiye..thodi
si kamzori hai sab sahi ho jayega..
9.

SANJAI
Theek hai nanda...khyaal rakho
radha ka...mujhe kaam pe jaana
padega...mai nikalta hoo..

Nanda haan mein sir hilaati hai...sanjai waha se nikal jaata


hai....nanda, radha ko gaur se dekh rahi hai..ek suspence
waali smile deti hai...Radha ko dikhaate hai jo soyi huyi
hai...scene Radha ke face par cut karte hai

CUT TO:

9 INT/ NIGHT/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, NANDA 9

Nanda hall mein aati hai uske haanth mein dhooni hai jisase
woh dhuwa de rahi hai aur kuchh mantra budbuda rahi
hai...poore hall mein dhuwa dhuwa hai...nanda dhooni lekar
peechhe ki taraf mudti hai...uske peechhe Radha khadi hai
radha ko dekhkar woh darti nahi hai..normaly react karti
hai..

NANDA
Uth gayi aap..

RADHA
Tum yeh sab kar kya rahi ho

NANDA
Iss dhuwen se iss ghar ko jalne se
bachaane ki koshish

RADHA
Kya matlab hai tumhara..

NANDA
Aap humesha kahti ho na ki iss ghar
mein koi hai..

Nanda uske kaan ke paas aakar kahti hai..

NANDA (CONT’D)
Sahi kahti ho...koi hai...koi hai
jo iss ghar ke kone kone pe nazar
rakhta hai..koi hai jo tumhe iss
ghar se bhagana chahta hai..koi hai
jo khoon ka pyaasa hai...tumhaare
khoon ka pyaasa...

RADHA
Lekin kyun?
10.

NANDA
Kyun..yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi
pata..lekin main uska hona mahsoos
kar sakti hoon..mai uski gandh
mahsoos kar sakti hoon..woh yahi
hai..woh yahi hai..

Nanda bolte bolte dhooni lekar doosari taraf chali jaati hai.
Radha usko jaate huye dekhti hai.. Uske chehre par dar dikh
raha hai...

CUT TO:

10 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI 10

Radha aur sanjai so rahe hai.. Wall clock mein raat ke 2 baj
rahe hai... sanjai ka phone bajta hai..sanjai phone dekhta
hai...mobile ke screen par Prem likha hua aaraha hai...
sanjai phone ko haanth mein liye hai phir Radha ko dekhta hai
jo so rahi hai... sanjai call recieve karta hai..

SANJAI
Hello....

Doosari taraf se prem kuchh bol raha hai jo sunaayi nahi de


raha hai...

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Theek hai..main abhi aata hoon..

Sanjai jaane lagta hai...tabhi peechhe se radha ki awaza aati


hai

RADHA (O.S.)
Itni raat ko kaha ja rahe ho..
Sanjai rukta hai..radha ki taraf ek look deta hai..

SANJAI
Woh prem ki thodi tabeeyat kharaab
hai bas wahin ja raha hoon...tum so
jaao..mai aata hoon thodi der
mein..

Sanjai waha se nikal jaara hai..radha sanjai ko jaate huye


dekhti hai...phir doosari taraf karwat leke sone ki koshish
karti hai...aankh jaise hi band karti hai uske kaano mein
kuchh sunaayi deta hai.. doosare waale kamre mein kuchh
murmuring ho rahi hai... radha uthti hai idhar udhar dekhti
hai..

RADHA
Nanda...nanda
11.

Nanda-nanda awaz lagaati hai lekin nanda ka koi responce nahi


aata hai..

Radha bed se neeche utarti hai..jidhar se awaz aarahi hai


udhar ki taraf jaati hai...doosare kamre ki taraf badhti hai
murmuring thoda aur tez ho jaati hai... radha uss kamre ka
darwaza jaise hi open karti hai... murmuring ka sound band ho
jaat hai.. Dekhti hai Nanda room ke ek kone mein baithi
hai..uska muhh wall ki taraf hai...radha andar room mein
enter karti hai..

CUT TO:

11 INT/ NIGHT/ NANDA BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, NANDA 11

Radha jaise hi andar enter karti hai, door apne aap band ho
jaata hai...Radha, nanda ko dekhti hai..radha dekhti hai ki
uska kamra azeeb sa bana hua hai...kuchh tantra mantra ke
samaan pade huye hai..

RADHA
Nanda...main kab se tumko bula rahi
ho...aur yeh awaz kaisi aarahi thi
tumhare kamre se...

Nanda kuchh nahi bol rahi hai..abhi hum nanda ka face nahi
dikha rahe hai...radha dheere dhree nanda ke aur kareeb jaati
hai...

RADHA (CONT’D)
Nanda..mai tumse baat kar rahi
hoon..aur itni raat ko tum yeh sab
kya kar rahi ho...Nanda..nanda

Radha, nanda ke kandhe par haanth rakhti..gusse se


RADHA (CONT’D)
Nanda..tumse baat kar rahi
hoon..tumko sunaayi nahi deta..

Nanda peeche ki taraf mudti hai...uska chehra thoda ajeeb sa


dikh raha hai uski awaz bhi badli huyi aarahi hai...

NANDA
Tumko meri awaz sunaayi deti
hai...kitni baar tumko kaha bhaag
jaao yahan se...suna tumne...suna
tumne..

Nanda gusse mein bolti hai...yeh dekh ke Radha dar ke peeche


hat jaati hai..
12.

NANDA (CONT’D)
Nahi suna na...ab tum bhi marogi..

Radha dar ke aur peeche hat jaati hai...Radha bahut darri


huyi hai, uske muhh se awaz nahi nikal rahi hai...

RADHA
Nan..nanda...kya..kya bol rahi ho
tum..

NANDA
Main nanda nahi hoon... nahi hoon
mai nanda...tumhe marne ka bahut
shauk hai na...aaj tumhari yeh
shauk poori kar deti hoon..

Nanda, radha ki taraf badhne lagti hai..radha bhagne ki


koshish karti hai.. Darwaaja kholne ki koshish kar rahi
hai...lekin darwaja nahi khul raha hai...nanda dheere dheere
Radha ki taraf badh rahi hai... nanda, radha ke paas aati hai
aur Radha ke gale ko pakadkar doosari taraf fenk deti hai..
Radha farsh par gir jaati hai...dono ke beech thoda sa
struggle hota hai... Radha ki haalt ekdam kharaab ho chuki
hai...radha farsh pe padi hai uthna chaah rahi hai lekin nahi
uth pa rahi hai...nanda ek chaaku uthaati hai aur radha ki
taraf aati hai..

RADHA
Mujhe chhod do..maine kya bigaada
hai tumhara..

Nanda uske paas baith jaati hai...chaaku uthaati hai aur


Radha ko maarti hai..screen blackout hota hai..chaaku ke
lagne ki awaz aati hai..Radha ke cheekhne ki awaz aati hai...
audience ke point of view se lagna chahiye ki nanda ne Radha
ko maar diya..
Ab nanda ek kone mein baithi ro rahi hai... Radha ki taraf
camera move hota hai, hum dekhte hai chaaku radha ke bagal
mein farsh par chubha hua hau... dheere dheer radha apni
aankh kholti hai, dekhti hai ki woh theek hai.. Apne aap ko
kisi tarah se farsh se uthaati hai aur deewar ke sahare tek
lekar baith jaati hai.. Woh doosari tarf dekhti hai ki nanda
ro rahi hai..

NANDA (ROTEY HUYE)


Maine kitni baar samjhaya ki bhaag
jaao yaha se...lekin tum nahi
maani...tumhe bhi marna padega meri
tarah...

RADHA
Nanda kya ho gaya tumhe...kya bol
rahi ho...
13.

NANDA
Main nanda nahi hoon..

RADHA
Toh kaun ho tum

NANDA
Tumhare pati ki pahli biwi...meera

RADHA
Kya bakwas kar rahi ho...

NANDA
Haan meera na sahi... meera ki Atma
bol saakti ho.. Ek atma jo nahi
chaahti ki koi aur uski tarah
bane... woh nahi chaahti ki zinda
rahte huye bhi koi aur uski tarah
apni zindagi ke liye tarse... bahut
pyaar karta hai na tumhara
pati...kabhi mujhe bhi aisa hi
pyaar karta tha...

Radha, nanda ki baat ko dhyaan se sun rahi hai..

NANDA (CONT’D)
2 saal pahle shaadi karke leke aaya
tha mujhe issi ghar mein...

Flash back:

12 INT/ DAY/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, SANJAI 12

Meera aur sanjai ghar mein enter karte hai..sanjai ke haanth


mein ek luggage bag hai... 2 saal pahle ka ghar thoda sa
structure change rahega... meera ghar dekh ke bahut khush
hai..

NANDA (V.O.)
Mai yaha aake bahut khush
thi..mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki jo
maine sapna dekha tha woh poora ho
gaya hai...iss ghar ko pyaar aur
khushiyon se sjaya..

Some montage shot:

A) meera ek wind chime laga rahi hai

B) meera kuchh kaam kar rahi hai, tabhi sanjai aata hai aur
peechhe se meera ko baahon mein bhar leta hai
14.

C) sanjai aata hai meera ko ek gift box deta hai,.. Meera


gift box kholti hai usmein se ek saaree nikalti hai...meera
saaree dekh ke khush ho jaati hai

NANDA (V.O.)
Lekin mujhe kahan pata tha ki in
khushiyon pe jald hi grahan lagne
waala hai...

13 INT/ DAY/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, SANJAI 13

Sanjai kahi ja raha hai.. Ready ho raha hai... meera kuchh


nashta leke aati hai...

MEERA
Pahle naashta kar lo aap..

SANJAI
Nashta karne ka time nahi
hai..mujhe late h raha hai..aur
haan aaj raat mein mere kuchh dost
khaane pe aarahe hai...

Sanjai, meera ke paas jaata hai uske gaalo par apne dono
haanth rakha hai

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Aur main chaahta hoon ki meri biwi
itni sundar dikhe ki mere dost meri
kismat par jal bhun ke raakh ho
jaaye... main chaahta hoon ki woh
saare jo tumko gift me di thi aaj
wahi pahno...

Meera smile karti hai, sanjai waha se nikal jaata hai..

14 INT/ NIGHT/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ SANJAI, PREM, RAGHU 14

Scene midway se start hota hai... sanjai, Prem, Raghu teeno


baith ke daaru pee rahe hai..

PREM
Bhai kya kismat paayi hai..itni
sundar biwi kismat waalon ki hoti
hai...

RAGHU
Lekin bhabhi ji toh humaari mahfil
mein saamil hi nahi ho rahi...woh
toh bas ek baar apna chehra
dikhakar chali gayi..
15.

SANJAI
Raghu bhai...woh gaanv ki hai to
thoda shara rahi hai...mai abhi
leke aata hoon..

Sanjai daaru ka glaas rakhta hai aur andar jaata hai..

15 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, SANJAI 15

Sanjai andar jaata hai.. Meera bed par baithi hai..

SANJAI
Tum yahan baithi ho..chalo
baahar..aise hoti hai mehmaan
nawazi..kya soch rahe hoge mere
dost..

MEERA
Aap toh bol rahe the khane pe aane
waale hai lekin...yahan toh daaru
piya ja raha hai..aur aap bhi

SANJAI
Mere dost hai...kaise mana kar
sakta tha unhe..aur yeh gaanv nahi
shaher hai..yahan daaru shauk ke
liye piya jaata hai samjhi...hum
roz thode na peete hai.. .chalo..
bahar chalo...woh log kya sochege
mere baare mein ki meri biwi
puraane zamaane ki...puraane soch
waali hai..

Sanjai, meera ka haanth pakad kar baahar leke jaata hai

16 INT/ NIGHT/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, SANJAI, PREM, RAGHU 16

Sanjai, meera ko haal mein leke aata hai.. Hall mein baithe
Prem aur Raghu dono meera ko dekhte hai...Raghu daaru ka
glass liye uthkar khada ho jaata hai...meera ke paas jaata
hai...

RAGHU
Bhabhi ji..humlog toh aapse milne
aaye hai aur aap hai ki baahr hi
nahi nikal rahi...aap bhi humaari
company ko enjoy kariye..lejiye ek
peg aap bhi maariye..

Raghu daaru ka glaas aage badhata hai..


16.

RAGHU (CONT’D)
Bhabhi ji sharmaiye mat..lijiye

SANJAI
Itni zid kar rahe hai Raghu bhai
toh lelo thoda sa..

MEERA
Paagal ho gaye tum...mai daaru
piyugi..tum abhi nashe mein
ho..chhodo mujhe jaane do..

RAGHU
Nahi bhabhi ji..ek peg toh peena hi
padega...

Raghu zabardasti pilaane ki koshish kar raha hai... meera


daaru ka glaas fenk deti hai..glass neeche gir jaati hai..
Meera, sanjai ko puss karti hai aur bhaag ke bedroom mein
chali jaati hai... Raghu, prem aur sanjai teeno ka look
exchange hota hai... sanjai Raghu ko ishara karta hai...
raghu bedroom ki taraf jaata hai..sanjai aake sofe pe baith
jaata hai.. Raghu bedroom mein jaata hai..bedroom ka darwaja
zor se band hota hai.. Camera sanjai aur Prem par hai... dono
smile kar rahe hai.. Andar se meera ke cheekhne ki aawazen
aati hai..cheekh rahi hai, chilla rahi hai...sanjai aur prem
dono daaru pee rahe hai...thodi der baad darwaza khulta hai
raghu baahr zip band karte huye nikalta hai....prem, Raghu ko
dekhta hai...dono smile karte hai...prem uthata hai aur andar
jaata hai..darwaza zor se band hota hai...camera sanjai par
hai, Raghu paison ki ek gaddi nikaal ke sanjai ke saamne
rakhta hai..dono ek doosare ko dekhte hai smile karte
hai...andar se meera ke cheekhne ki awazen aarahi hai..
Sanjai glaas mein peg bana raha hai aur pee raha hai...

Camera sanjai par hai jo meera ki cheekhon ko ansuna kar raha


hai...thodi der baad door open hota hai...prem apna shirt
pahante huye baahr aaraha hai...camera track hota hai...door
ki taraf badhta hai, dorr open hai..hum dekhte hai ki door ke
peechhe ek ladki leti huyi hai jiski body par ek bhi kapda
nahi hai... camera aur track hota hai dheere dheere uske face
par jaate hai.. Hum dekhte hai ki uski aankho se aansu nikal
rahe hai...woh ro rahi hai... woh saamne dekhti hai toh koi
aur chalkar aaraha hai, sirf uske pair dikh rahe hai.. Kisi
ke pair aake uske face ke saamne ruk jaate hai.. Woh apne
eyeball ko upar ki taraf karke dekhti hai, saamne sanjai
hai.. Jo smile kar raha hai..

SANJAI
Apne pati ki bhookh nahi
mitayegi...
17.

Sanjai is looking like cruel villein ... meera helpless si


dikh rahi hai..uski aankho se aasu nikal rahe hai..sanjai
apne pairon se door ko close karta hai.. screen blackout hoti
hai..

FADE TO BLACK.

FADE OUT.

FLASH OUT:

17 INT/ NIGHT/ NANDA BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, NANDA 17

Nanda abhi bhi room ke ek kone mein baithi hai..Radha bhi


uske peechhe hai dono ki aankho mein aansu hai...

NANDA
Aur yeh meera jo kisi ke ghar ki
laxmi banne aayi thi...woh ek
bazaru aurat ban ke rah gayi thi..

18 FLASH BACK: 18

19 INT/ DAY/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, SANJAI, 2, 3 OTHER MAN19

NANDA (V.O.)
Bas chand noto pe bikau ho gaya tha
yeh jism.. Jo chaahe woh paise fenk
ke apni pyaas bujha sakta tha..

Some montage shot

A) meera bedroom mein hai 2, 3 alag alag log jaate hai aur
zabardast meera ke saath rape kar rahe hai

B) sanjai haal mein baitha hai ek aadmi baahr niklta hai aur
paiso ka ek bundle usko deta hai..sanjai paison ko dekhta hai
aur ek smile deta hai

FLASH OUT.

20 INT/ NIGHT/ NANDA BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, NANDA 20

Scene continiue

NANDA
Mujhe ghin aane lagi thi apne aap
se..
(MORE)
18.
NANDA (CONT'D)
Apne iss jism se..phir maine bhi
faisla kiya ki iss jism ko humesha
ke liye in sab se mukti dilane
ki..aur phir ek din..

CUT TO:

21 FLASH BACK: 21

22 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA 22

We open the scene in a dark room.. Kisi ke rone ki awaz


aarahi hai.. Camere track hota hai hum dekhte hai ek kone
mein ek ladki baithi huyi hai jo zor zor se siskiyan leke ro
rahi hai.. Camra aur track hota hai ladki ke face par jaata
hai..ladki ki aankho se aansu nikal rahe hai.. She is looking
like very upset... camera ladki ke face par hai, rotey rotey
usse kucch yaad aata hai wo apne aansu pochhti hai aur khadi
ho jaati hai...ab woh kucch soch rahi hai aur idhar- udhar
tahal rahi hai... some timelaps shot with girl... ladki apne
aap ko saamne rakhe mirror mein dekh rahi hai... woh apna
dupatta nikalti hai aur bagal mein rakhe stool ko le jakar
fan ke neeche lagaati hai...stool par chadhti hai, dupaate ka
ek sira fan mein baandhti hai aur doosra sira apne gale mein
baandhti hai....camera Stool par hai, ladki stool ko apne
pairon se neeche giraati hai.. Stool neeche gir jaata
hai..camera gire huye stool par hai... emotionaly and theme
music ke saath desolve

Note: prologue scene mein meera ka face nahi reveal


karege..yaha pe meera ka face reveal hoga.

CUT TO:
FLASH OUT:

23 INT/ NIGHT/ NANDA BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, NANDA 23

Scene continiue.. radha ro rahi hai..she is looking like


helpless.. Woh nanda ki taraf dekhti hai..hum dekhte hai
nanda zameen par behosh padi hai... Radha, nanda ke paas
jaati hai..usko uthaane ki koshish karti hai..

RADHA
Nanda..nanda..

Radha, nanda ka sir apni gond mein rakhti hai aur zor zor se
rone lagti hai... backgrong music se build up dete hai..
Emotional background music..

DISSOLVE TO:
19.

24 INT/ DAY/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI, NANDA 24

Door bell bajti hai.. Radha aake door open karti hai.. Sanjai
andar aata hai..

SANJAI
tum darwaja kyun kho rahi ho..nanda
kaha hai...aur tumhari tabeeyat
kaisi hai ab

RADHA
Mai theek hoon...nanda ki tabeeyat
thoda kharaab hai woh so rahi hai
toh..aur aap raat bhar aaye nahi..

SANJAI
Haan woh prem ki tabeeyat thoda
jyada kharaab ho gayi thi toh wahi
rukna pada..

Sanajai dekhta hai tab tak peeche nanda aagayi hai..

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Nanda...tumhari tabeeyat bhi
kharaab hai toh ek kaam karo tum do
chaar din ke liye apne ghar hoke
aao...kaafi din ho gaya toh tumhara
man bhi bahal jayega..

Nanda aur Radha mein look exchange hota hai...

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Jaao nanda..tum apna samaan baandh
lo..mai kaam pe ja raha hon toh
tumko raaste mein chhod duga
Nanda andar bedroom ki taraf jaati hai..

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Radha mujhe kaam pe turant nikalna
hai.. Aur haan aaj raat ko mere
kuchh dost aane waale hai...toh tum
acche se taiyaar rahna...theek hai

Radha haan mein sir hilaati hai.. Kisi ka blur pov jaise koi
unko dekh raha ho...sanjai andar chala jaata hai..hum radha
ke face par scene cut karte hai...

25 INT/ NIGHT/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI, PREM, RANVIJAI


25
SINGH

Prem aur sanjai baithe huye hai..


20.

SANJAI
Ranvijai ji kahan rah gaye..

PREM
Aate hi hoge..jab advance diya hai
toh

Door bell bajti hai..sanjai door open karta hai..saamne


ranvijai hai jo andar aata hai..aake sofe par baith jaata
hai..

RANVIJAI SINGH
Kahaan hai humaari shikaar..ab
sabra nahi hota..

PREM
Ab shikaari aagaya hai toh shikaar
bhi aajayega..

SANJAI
Sir..woh baaki ke paise...pahle
poora daam phir kaam..

Ranvijay, sanjai ko dekhta hai ghoor ke phir smile karte huye


kahta hai..

RANVIJAI SINGH
Pakke dhandhe waale ho..

Ranvijai noto ka 3 bundle nikaal ke sanjai ke saamne rakhta


hai..

RANVIJAI SINGH (CONT’D)


Agar shikaar ne shikaari ko khsush
kar diya toh..kuchh baksheesh bhi
deke jaauga
Ranveer and sanjai both exchange their look..

SANAJAI
Radha...Radha

Radha ko awaz deta hai...Radha baahr aati hai lekin woh kuchh
badli badli si dikh rahi hai..

Ranveer, radha ko upar se neeche dekh raha hai...

SANJAI
Radha yeh hai humaare khaas
dost..Ranvijai ji

RADHA
Khas dost ya shikaari..
21.

Radha smile karti hai...

RADHA (CONT’D)
Mujhe sab pata hai...shikaari aur
jungle ke raja ke beech deal ho
chuki hai...toh shikaar bhala kyun
chhupta chhupta phire...toh ab
shikaar aur shikaari aamne saamne
ho hi jaate hai jisse shikari ko
bhi maza aaye aur shikaar ko
bhi...kyun sanjai

Sanjai kuchh bol nahi paata..

RANVIJAI SINGH
Kya dilchasp hai tumhaari
biwi..lagta hai ki baksheesh bhi
iss shikaar par kam pad jaayegi..

RADHA
Lekin meri ek guzarish hai.. Ki
shaikaari pahle khud shikaar na
karke apne shikaari kutte ko
bheje..bahut suna hai iss shikaari
kutte ke baare mein..

Radha, prem ki taraf dekhti hai..

RADHA (CONT’D)
Kyun prem saheb..aajaiye phir

Radha bedroom mein chali jaati hai...

Prem, ranvijay ki taraf dekhta hai.ranvijai prem ko jaane ke


liye ishara karta hai.. Prem uthta hai aur bedroom ki taraf
chala jaata hai...bedroom mein jaat hai aur door band karta
hai...kaafi der ho jaat hai jab prem baahr nahi aata hai..

RANVIJAI SINGH
Aisi kaun si jadi booti le liya hai
mere shikaari kutte ne...jo baahr
hi nahi aaraha hai...mai andar
jaake hi dekhta hoon..ab sabra ka
baandh toot raha hai...

Ranvijai, sanjai ko ek look deta hai..sanjai daaru pee raha


hai..

SANJAI
Jaisi aapki marzi...ranvijai sir
aaj poori raat ke liye yeh shikaar
aapka hi hai
22.

Ranvijai bedroom ki taraf jaane lagta hai...bedroom ka


darwaja kholta hai..andar jaat hai..

26 INT/ NIGHT/ BEDROOM/ SANJAI HOUSE/ MEERA, PREM RANVIJAI 26

Ranvijai andar jaat hai.. Woh kuchh dekhta hai shocked rah
jaat hai... camera pan karte hai dekhte hai fan se prem ki
lash latki huyi hai... Radha bed par bithi huyi hai...aur
muskura rahi hai... ranvijai darr ke darwaaje ki taraf
bhaagne lagta hai..lekin darwaja apne aap band ho jaata
hai..ranvijai bhaagne ki koshish kar raha hai lekin radha
usse apne paas aane ka ishar kar rahi hai...woh na chaahte
hute bhi uski taraf khiha chala aaraha hai jaise koi hidden
force usko dhakel rahi hai...

RADHA
Aajao...aajao..shikaar nahi karna
hai...tera shikaari kutta toh mera
hi shikaar ho gaya...ab tubhi hoga
mera shikaar..hahaha..shikaari khud
yaha shikaar ho gaya..

Ranvijai apne aapko chhudaane ki koshish kar raha hai lekin


nahi chhuda pa raha hai...hidden force ranvijai ko deear mein
sata deti hai..woh kuchh bolna chah raha hai lekin uski awaz
hi nahi nikal rahi hai..radah bed se uthati hai aur ranvijai
ke paas jaati hai...

Intercut mein hum dekhte hai ki sanjai daaru pee raha hai aur
baar baar saamne table par rakhe paiso ko apne haantho mein
leke uchaal raha hai aur khush ho raha hai..

Radha, ranvijai ke paas khadi hai..


RADHA (CONT’D)
Bahut shauk hai na tujhe paison ke
bal par jism ka sauda karne ka..aaj
main karugi teri maut ka sauda...

Radha ka face thoda bhayaanak ho jaata hai...ranvijay ko utha


ke fenkti hai doosari deewar ke paas jaake girta hai..
ranvijai uthkar bhaagne ki koshish karta hai..radha ke haanth
mein ek rassi hai..radha rassi leke ranvijai ke paas aati
hai..uske gale pe kas deti hai....thodi Time mein uska dum
ghut jaat hai aur mar jaata hai...Radha ke face pe hum scene
cut karte hai..

CUT TO:
23.

27 INT/ DAY/ HALL/ SANJAI HOUSE/ RADHA, SANJAI 27

Sanjai daaru ke nashe mein sofe pe beshudh pada hai..door


open hota hai...sirf pair ka close up hai...koi chalke baahr
aarahi hai...sanjai ke paas pahuch ke ruk jaati hai..sanjai
ke pov se dikhaate hai woh aankh kholta hai..blur mein usko
koi khada hua dikhayi deta hai..pahle usko radha dikhti hai
phir se aankh kholta hai toh usko meera dikhaayi deti hai woh
chaunk ke uth ke baith jaata hai..saamne dekhta hai radha
hai...sanjai ka nasha gayab ho jaat hai

SANJAI

Ra..radha..tum...abhi koi aur tha


yaha pe..tumne dekh kya?

Radha smile karti hai..

RADHA
Kisko meera ko..

Meera ka naam sunke sanjai shocked rah jaat hai...

SANJAI
Kaun meera...tum kais jaanti ho
meera ko..

RADHA
Radha aur meera dono do thode na
hai...dono ek hi hai...koi kisi ke
haantho bikti hai toh koi kisi ke
haantho...aur dono hi tumhare paisa
kamaane ka zariya...

Sanjai yeh sunke thoda dara hua hai...


SANJAI
Kya kah rahi ho mujhe kuchh samjh
me nahi aaraha hai...

RADHA
Accha main samjhaati hoon
tumko..meera ko dekhna hai..

Radha ab meera ka roop le leti hai.. Sanjai dekh ke darr


jaata hai...wohh bhaag ke bedroom ki taraf jaata hai dekhta
hai ki prem aur ranvijai ki laash padi huyi hai..door apne
aap band ho jaata hai...sanjai door open karne ki koshish
karta hai lekin open anhi hota hai

MEERA
Kahan tak bhaagoge mujhse
24.

Sanjai peechhe ki taraf dekhta hai meera khadi hai..meera


uske paas aati hai aur uske gale ko kas ke dabaati hai..
Sanjai tadap raha hai uska dam ghut raha hai...tabhi door
bell bajti hai..meera ka dhyaan bigdata hai, uska faayda utha
ke sanjai door open karta hai..bhaag ke haal mein pahuchta
hai main door open karta hai dekhta hai saamne Radha aur
nanda hai..sanjai dara hua hai...

SANJAI
Radha..radha bacha lo mujhe..woh
mujhe maar daalegi...

Sanjai dekhta hai ki meera aarahi hai..sanjai aur darr jaata


hai... sanaji, radha ke peechhe jaake khada ho jaata hai

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Radha...radha bachalo mujhe

Lekin radah kuchh nahi bol rahi hai... sanjai dekhta hai
meera uski taraf badhti aarahi hai... sanjai dekhta hai table
par fruits ka bowl rakha hai jismein knife hai..sanjai knife
leta hai aur radha ke gale par laga deta hai...

SANJAI (CONT’D)
Tumne toh khud apni jaan le li
thi..lekin agar ab tum meri taraf
bhi badhi toh iski jaan zaroor main
le looga...kya kah rahi thi ki
Radha aur Meera ek hi hai..toh aaj
Radha ko bhi meera ke paas pahucha
dooga...aur iski jimmedar hogi
tum..

Busild up scene ki ab kya hoga... meera, sanjai ko dekhti


hai, radha ko dekhti hai jiske gale par chaaku laga
hai..lekin radah kuchh bhi nahi bol rahi...bagal mein khadi
nanda jo aisa karne se mana kar rahi hai..

NANDA
Kya kar rahe ho saheb..lag jayega
bhabhi ji ko...

Sanjai kisi ki baat nahi sun raha..meera bhi ek jagah pe hi


khadi hai..meera ki aankho mein gussa hai...gussa badhta ja
raha hai...hum dekhte hai ki sanajai ke haanth ko koi force
khaach raha hai aur chaaku uske gale se hata deta
hai...sanjai ke gale mein ghus jaata hai...Radha sanjai se
hatkar door khadi hoti hai..sanjai neeche zameen pe gir jaata
hai.. Hum dekhte hai Meera ki aankho mein aansu hai aur woh
radha ko dekh rahi hai...kucch time baad meera gayab ho jaati
hai..Radha rone lagti hai..nanda, radha ko gale laga leti
hai... background music ke saath desolve hota hai...

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