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Sample Revisions of Exercise 2.7 Solution 1

The document summarizes the key findings of a survey on energy drink consumption among university students. The survey found that 51% of students consumed three or more energy drinks per month during the school term. While energy drinks can provide benefits like increased energy and endurance, excessive consumption may lead to health issues like headaches or caffeine addiction. The risks of energy drinks are shown to outweigh their benefits.

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Sample Revisions of Exercise 2.7 Solution 1

The document summarizes the key findings of a survey on energy drink consumption among university students. The survey found that 51% of students consumed three or more energy drinks per month during the school term. While energy drinks can provide benefits like increased energy and endurance, excessive consumption may lead to health issues like headaches or caffeine addiction. The risks of energy drinks are shown to outweigh their benefits.

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Sample Revisions of Exercise 2.

Solution 1

Energy drinks have recently increased in popularity among university students.  Although energy drinks
provide increased awareness and energy, the negative side effects far outweigh the benefits.  A survey
taken at an American university reported that 51% of participants consumed three or more energy drinks
each month during the school term [1].   This excess consumption of energy drinks may cause health
problems among students. The same study also showed that while energy drinks can increase athletic
endurance, side effects still make them unhealthy. The study found that such side effects included
headaches and “energy crashes”, and the potential for caffeine addition [1].     (101 words; 0 ‘to be’ verbs)

Solution 2

While energy drinks can increase awareness and energy, they can also pose health threats.  An American
university survey found that 51% of respondents consumed more than three energy drinks per month during
the term [1].  This kind of regular consumption can cause health issues.  While the study found that energy
drinks increased energy and athletic endurance, it also found that respondents suffered side effects such as
headaches and “energy crashes” [1].  In severe cases, some students became addicted to caffeine. 

(82 words; 0 "to be" verbs)

Solution 3

University students drink energy drinks, but often lack full knowledge of the risks. Energy drinks can
increase consumers’ awareness and energy; however, the risks outweigh the benefits. A survey from an
American university showed that 51% of students drank more than three energy drinks a month per
semester [1]. The students’ excessive consumption can cause health problems. Reported benefits include
increased energy and athletic endurance, but problems included headaches and energy crashes [1]. Users
can also develop caffeine addictions.

(79 words; 0 "to be" verbs)

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