The Errors Analysis of Students' Grammatical Writing On Narrative Text
The Errors Analysis of Students' Grammatical Writing On Narrative Text
Narrative Text
Jamaliah1, Ramlan2, Fauziah3, Irma Suryani4
1,2,3,4
Universitas Jabal Ghafur, Indonesia
[email protected]
Keywords
Abstract
error analysis; grammatical
writing; narrative text.
The purpose of this research was to know both the type of error and
the most dominant error made by students in writing narrative text
at the second grade students of SMK N 1 Sigli. This study is
qualitative research as suggested by Noor (2011). The purpose of
this research is to analyze the errors which actually committed by
students on their writing. This research is a case study which
clarifies the natural circumstance. The writer collect the data by
using a set of written test. The procedures of Error Analysis (EA)
adopted from Corder (1974) as cited in Ellis (2008:48). The data
nanalized by using table of freqency the result showed that the error
made by the students can be categorized into four types of errors.
Those were errors of omission, errors of addition, errors of
misformation, and errors of misordering. Another result showed that
the most dominant error in writing narrative text made by the
students was error of misformation. In describing the type of error, it
can be inferred that there are 25 items of error, which occur in the
students’ sentences.
I. Introduction
Learning English usually involves the four language skills, which support each
other. It means language learning take inside the learner and, as the teachers know to
their frequent frustration, many aspects of it are beyond their pedagogical control,
Jamaliah et,al (2017:220) The writing skill is very important in the education field.
Language is formed by some words or vocabulary. Moreover, vocabulary is existent in
all of language aspects (speaking, writing, reading, and listening), (Farizawati, Ramlan
and L.Tasnim (2020:1) According to Harmer (2001:79) writing is a form of
communication to deliver through or to express feeling through written form. However,
writing is considered to be the most difficult skill to master. In mastering writing, there
are many aspects that must be considered. One of the important aspects is grammar. It is
inevitable that writing cannot be separated from grammar due to the fact that a good
written text must has a grammatical correct and a well organised. Grammar is the
pattern that makes how combined words can be understood. Nevertheless, every
language has its own grammar which makes the students have to master the grammar of
target language before write a text. Many students are still lack in mastering writing. As
there are the differences of two languages; Indonesian and English, it is unavoidable that
they produce errors in many aspects of writing, such as in grammatical and lexical
aspects. As a result, their written text is unreadable.
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The difficulties applying the rules of the language in writing caused the students
doing error. Acording Sujoko (1989:5), an error ia a noticeable deviation from the adult
grammar of a native speaker, reflecting the interlanguage competence of the learner. It
occurs when the features of the language is different from the learners’ native language.
The students’ error can be classified into linguistic errors. Dulay et all (1982:146) state that
there are four taxonomies that important to consider, namely the linguistic category
taxonomy, the surface strategy taxonomy, the comparative analysis taxonomy, and the
communicative taxonomy.
It is important to help the students to reduce their errors. It is needed to know the
sources of errors to overcome such problem. Brown (2000:224) mentions two main sources
of errors, namely Interlingua and intralingua. Corder (1971) as cited in Al-Hasan
(2013),Interlingua (negative transfer) errors refer to the learners’ mother tongue habits
interfere them from acquiring the patterns and rules of the second language. On the other
words, the errors reflect to the mother tongue structure. The learners tend to translate
directly from their first language into second language without considering the different
patterns of both languages. Interference or negative transfer may occur at different levels,
such as grammatical, lexical, phonology, and morphology whereas intralingua errors are
the errors which occur because the learners’ hypotheses about the second/foreign language
(Erdogan, 2005). The errors made by the learners do not reflect to the structure of their
native language but it is a result of inadequate to the target language.
Error plays an important role in learning a foreign language. From the error those
students made, one can determine their level of mastery of language system and discover
what they still have to learn. Foreign language teachers should realize errors made by the
students. In an error analysis, there should be at least two stages of activities that should be
carried out. The first is identifying and describing error. Based on surface strategy
taxonomy, there are four types oferror; addition, omission, misformation, and misodering.
Furthermore, to diagnose the causes of problems, there is a systematic way called
Error Analysis (EA). This activity has four working procedures to be used, namely
collecting data, identifying the data, describing error committed and explaining it.
Writing is an important part of skills in English. It is one of tools of communication
or an activity to express ideas, thought, and information into a written form. Lince and
Nunan (2003:88) define writing is a combination of process and product of discovering
ideas which is presented in a readable text on a paper.
Moreover, Harmer (2004:31) states, writing encourage students to focus on accurate
language use because they think as they write. In addition, according to Haynes and
Zacarian (2010:90) learning to write is a developmental process to communicate
meaningfully through written form. Hughes and Schwab (2010:214) also state that, Writing
is difficult because it demands control over ‘technical’ aspects, such as punctuation and
spelling, as well as ‘strategic’ ones like design, organization and register.
However, writing is an essential skill that must be mastered by a language learner
since it has some benefits. As noted by Reinking, Hart, and Osten (1996:3), Writing gives
writers to reflect on and research what they want to communicate, makes communication
more effective, and provides a permanent record of thought, actions, and decisions.
Furthermore, Hilliday in Nunan (1991:84) suggests that writing has evolved in
societies as a result of cultural change creating communicative needs which cannot be
readily met by spoken language. It means that writing is a process of communicating what
a writer thinks which is going to be told on paper to readers who are not physically present.
Writing makes us have to find the best possible way of stating what we mean. Acording to
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Carrolin T. Linse “that writing is the act or art of forming letters and characters on paper in
form of printing or cursive. It may called as an arranging text”.
Another definition of writing skill is also defined by Mayers and Hyland. Mayers
(2005:2) states that, Writing is a way to produce language. Which you do naturally when
you speak. Is speaking to other on paper or a computer screen. Writing is a partly a talent,
but it is a mostly a skill, and like any skill, it improve with practice. Writing is also an
action a process of discovering and organizing your ideas, putting them on a paper, and
reshaping and revising them.
Hyland (2004:5) states that writing is a way of getting things done. To get things
done such as, describing something, telling a story, requesting an overdraft, drafting an
essay, and so on.
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2.2 The Purpose of Writing
According to Penny Ur “the purpose of writing, in principle, is the expression of
ideas, the conveying of messages to the reader. So the ideas themselves should arguably be
seen as the most important aspect in the writing”.
It means that when the writers do their writing, of course they have some purposes.
They have to consider the purpose of their writing since this will influence, not only the
type of text they wish to produce, but including the language which they use, and the
information that they choose.
In addition, there are really only four common purposes in writing they are: to
inform, to explain, to persuade, and to amuse others.
a. Writing to Inform
In much of the writing that the writers will do, they will intend simply to inform their
readers about a subject. To inform is to transmit necessary information about the subject to
the readers, and usually this means just telling the readers what the facts are or what
happened. Although informative writing is the simplest kind of writing, it is also one of the
most important, because information lays a foundation for other writing purposes. As the
writers write to inform, they will want to keep two large concerns in mind; selecting the
right information and arranging it effectively.
b. Writing to Explain
Writing to explain means writing to take what is unclear and make it clear. In
explanatory writing, a writer who understands a complex topic must take sure that his
readers understand it as well. All of us use several common methods of explaining
something to another person in our everyday conversation, and these same techniques can
provide basic strategies for organizing an explanation in writing.
c. Writing to Persuade
The most important writing we ever do in our personal life, our work life, and may
be our school life will probably persuasion. Complaints to the rent board about our
landlord, letters of application for jobs, essay on examinations are all likely to involve
writing persuasively. Your task in persuasion is to convince your readers to accept the
main idea, even though it may be controversial.
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Brown stated that, (2000:362) grammar is the system of rules governing the
convectional arrangement relationship of word in a sentence. Meanwhile Nunan (2000:13)
stated grammar is an essential resource in using language communicatively. while
acording to Pattel and Jain (2008:17), grammar is an attempt to develop concept, principles
and rules relating to ussage and to the structure of language.
Grammar is categorized as a language component. As a language component,
grammar is related to word-arrangement in a sentence structure, Djiwandono (1996) in
Arifuddin(2007). As branch of linguistics, grammar is the rules in a language for changing
the form of the words and combining them into the sentences. Meanwhile, in the other
statement, grammatical structure is the pattern of arrangement of part of words into
sentences, Lado(1964) in Islam (2004).
Grammar tells us how to construct a sentence (word order, verb and noun system,
modifiers, phrases, clauses and so forth) and discourse rules tell us how to string those
sentences together. Besides, grammar is central of the teaching and learning of languages.
It is also one of the most difficult aspects of language to teach well.
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is partly because teachers lack in grammar competences As a result students have different
understanding or wrong perception then they keep in their brain.
It is believed that Error Analysis (EA) is very essential in SLA since error is an
unavoidable in learning process. Error Analysis spread in 60’s and 70’s of the previous
century. Error analysis is a type of linguistic analysis that focuses on the errors that
committed by the learners. According to Richards and Schmidt (2010:185), Error
Analysis is the study on second or foreign language learning to observe errors made by
learners.
Corder (1974) in Ellis (2008), has pointed out that there are several steps in Error
Analysis, namely collection of data, identification of errors, description of errors,
explanation of errors, and evaluation of errors. Moreover, Crystal (2008:173) defines
error analysis as a technique for identifying, classifying, and systematically interpreting
the unacceptable forms produced by a learner.
Another concept of Error Analysis is given by Brown (1980:160) cited in Hasyim
(2002:43). He defines Error Analysis as the process to observe, analyze, and classify the
deviation of the rules of the second languages and then to reveal the systems operated by
learner.
In addition, Sercombe (2000) in Sawalmeh (2013) explains that EA serves three
aims. Firstly, to find out the level of language proficiency reached by students. Secondly,
to get information about the difficulties faced by a language learner. Thirdly, to know
how people learn a language. Therefore, by doing this activity (EA), it is supposed to
give information for the teachers about their students’ competence and to know what part
the students do error more.
a. Overgeneralization
Overgeneralizati is defined as the use of the previously available strategies in a
new situation. Learners make a new deviant structure on the basis on thier experience of
their structures in target language. They make error, as they want to reduce their
linguistic burdenin using the language. The kind of sentence patterns and rules but
sometimes she or he uses them in different situation, in which particular generalization
does not apply.
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b. Ignorance of the Full Restriction
Ignorance of rule restriction related to generalization. Learners make errors
because they fail to observe the restriction of existing structures. They apply of a rules in
a new situation where if should not be applied.
a. Omission
Omissin error are characterized by the absence of an item that must appear in a
well-formed phrases or sentence. Any morpheme or word in a sentence is a potential
candidate for omission. However, between content words and function words, the letters
are more frequently omitted by language learner.
b. Addition
Addition errors are opposite of omissions. They are characterized by the presence of
an item, which must not appear in a well- formed utterances.
c. Misinformation
Misinformation are characterized by the use of the wrong form of the morphemes or
structure. While in omission errors is not supplied at all, in misinformation errors the
students supplies something although it is incorrect.
d. Misodering
It is characterized by the incorrect placement of one or more elements in a phrase or
sentence. The error may be made by L1 and L2 learners when they have acquired certain
simple patterns. This taxonomy is used because it is expected to give much promise to the
reseacher for identifying cognitive process that underlies the learner’s construction of the
language.
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should be defined provisionally as discours with a clear sequential other that connect
events in a meaningful way for a definite audience and thus offer insight about the world
and or people‟s experience of it. Meanwhile according to Saefudin (2010:18) narrative is a
story that is created in a constructive format ( as a work of speech, literature, picture, song,
motion pictures, television, video games, theater, musical theater, or dance) that describes
a sequence of fictional or non fictional events. And from cintyre (2006:18) said narrative
as basically a story, of happening or events, either real or imaginary which the narrator
considers interesting or important. Based on explanations, the researcher concludes that
narrative is a text focusing specific participant and to emuse entertain and to deal with
actual or vicarious experience in different ways, narrative deal with problematic events
which lead to crisis or turning of some kind, which in turn find a resolution and narrative is
telling of some true factious event or connected sequences of events. That‟s recounted by a
narrator a narrate ( although there are may be more than one of each ) narratives are
distinguished from description of qualities, states or situations and also freom dramatic
enactment of events. A narrative will consist set of a set of event recounted in aprocess of
narration, in which the events are selected and arranged in a particular order.
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4. Saying verbs are verbs which are commonly use to indicate subclause or indicate the
direct utterances said by the character in the story, like : said, replaid,answer, etc.
5. Adjective is a word that modifies something ( person, animal or thing )
6. Adverb / adverbial phrase is a word that modifies verb whereas adverbial phrase is a
range of words in which adverb as core to modify verb.
7. Conjunction is a word used to connect between main clause and subclause.
8. It is used when we want to make complex sentence.
The method in this study is qualitative research as suggested by Noor (2011). The
purpose of this research is to analyze the errors which actually committed by students on
their writing. This research is a case study which clarifies the natural circumstance. Yin
(2003) states that case study is a research that explains “what”, “how”, and “why”
something happen. In this study, the researcher intends to analyze the data about the types
of errors produced (what) by students and to investigate the causes (why) of errors.
IV. Discussion
In preceding explanation, the data are taken from students’ writing. The writer
classified the students’ grammatical errors in narrative writing. The writer only focused on
four areas, based on surface strategy taxonomy: omission, addition, misformation, and
misordering.
b. Errors of Addition
Dulay et al. (1982), as qouted by James (1998 p: 50) state that the students not only
error in omission, but also the students usually made error in addition. The addition is
adding something that not important for the sentence. There are five errors in this category,
so the writer shows all the error in the following table.
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Table 2. Edition Errors
No Error Recognition Recontruction
1 They made a girls from...... They made a girl from...
2 .... , your daughters" ...... , your daughter"
3 their dreamsed never came true their dreams never came true
4 make a new Snow Maidens again make a new Snow Maiden again
5 she refused it becauses one thing she refused it because one thing
c. Error of Misinformation
Misformation is also kind of grammatical error made by the students in writing
narrative text. It is related to Dulay et al, (1982) opinion cited in James (1998, p:50) state
misformation happens if incorrect place wrong order of items. In this type, the writer
found misformation error in students’ writing. There are some examples of misformation
errors based on students’ writing.
d. Error of Misordering
Misordering is also kind of grammatical error made by the second year students in
writing narrative text. It is related Dulay et al., (1982) cited in James (1998, p:50) state that
misordering happens if the word or phrase is incorrect place.
Based on the classification, it was counted the total number of errors was 25 errors.
And those consisted of omission errors were 7 items, addition errors were 5 items,
misformation errors were 10 items, and misordering errors were 6 items.
4.2 Findings
The data,the writer found all exiting type of error. They are: omission, addition,
misformation, and misordering.
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Table 5. The Type and Number of Errors in Each Category made by the Students
Type of Errors Number of Errors Percentage
Omission 7 28%
Addition 5 20%
Misformation 10 40%
Misordering 3 12%
Total 25 100%
V. Conclusion
In describing the type of error, it can be inferred that there are 25 items of error,
which occur in the students’ sentences. They are analyzed based of the surface strategy
taxonomy, it is found that (7) or 28% errors are omission errors, (5) or 20% errors are
addition errors, (10) or 40% errors are misformation errors, and (3) or 12% errors are
misordering errors.
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