Rough Draft Revised 2nd
Rough Draft Revised 2nd
Jun Yoshikawa
Mrs. Pritchett
7th Grade English Writing
09 April, 2021
Did you know that in the past, doctors would get immense, bulky books to study
the human anatomy? Would you rather study with enormous, heavy books, or would
you study with a well-developed app with quiz questions to test your understanding?
When cellphones did not exist and even today, students, med school students, and
specialized doctors have to study the human anatomy by a big, complicated textbook.
Since there are minimal amounts of apps today that is useful, and that people use them
to study the human anatomy. Regardless the difficulties of creating a human anatomy
app, it is effectively advantageous because of the many grants the students, med school
an app. The first thing to be done is not to just randomly create an app knowing nothing
about programming, so, according to Marco Soares, “Before creating any app, there
development process is done to make the design come to life, and overall, the
development process is a major part of the process to building an app from scratch,”
(Soares). According to Ching, the necessary steps to follow are: “Generate an app idea,
do competitive market research, write out the features for your app, make design
mockups of your app, create your app’s graphic design, put together an app marketing
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plan, build the app with one of these options, submit your app to the App Store, market
your app for maximum exposure, improve your app with user feedback, and bonus: App
making resources.” (Ching) First, we need to learn coding for the development process.
Next, we need to have a designed prototype in order to have a vision of how your app
will function. Finally, you will kick off developing the app from scratch after learning
everything and following these broader steps. To be able to create and develop an app,
Another thing to have in mind during and after creating an app, is to know the
challenges and find solutions to it, for an example, feedbacks from your app. After the
app is developed and is launched at the app store, the most difficult challenge is the
feedback in which you will need to solve, as stated in the following texts, “One of the
largest challenges app developers face when releasing their apps is feedback, since
many features they may think are the best, other people may have different opinions on.
A solution to this challenge is a balanced approach with the goal of making the app
mostly liked than disliked by the users, by implementing features that a majority of the
users prefer over others.” (Soares). “Uncovering what your customer wants from your
app is challenging. The only way to fully understand what they want is to listen to their
feedback. So how do app developers know what features to include, retain or remove?
How do they know what needs to be fixed or improved? How do they understand the
motives of the app users?” (Liquid State). According to these texts, the most significant
challenge presented during the process is after the app is created. In which it can be
difficult to make everyone like everything in your app because there is no way to please
everyone with the same contents and tools inside the app. In addition, Soares states that
the solution to this challenge is to make a balanced approach and make something in
some way that more people will like the app than not like the app. For knowing the
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challenges and try to solve these challenges throughout and after the app development is
essential to keep in mind to create a very good app that a big portion of people will want
to use.
Even though there are challenges to face and a great series of steps to conclude
the app, it gives benefits for the users. These benefits can be proved by Britannica and
“Apps support user registration, which can allow data to be collected, leaderboards to be
shown, and badges to be earned in pursuit of knowledge in a way that textbooks can’t
can notice in these evidence, apps and devices gives more engagement to the students
and makes the studying more entertaining. This app will contain an interactive part, a
motivational section, and other positive incentive. The interactive part will contain
quizzes to quiz their understanding from what they learned, and this is followed by the
motivational section which will contain money from the game and levels to complete.
With these benefits, the users will be more engaged and with easy accessibility, since it
is an app, you can use wherever you would like, as opposed to textbooks in which you
can’t use everywhere you want. This app will also contain 3-D models of the complete
human anatomy, structure of all systems and how all systems from the human body
work. These benefits will help students to study the human anatomy in a more efficient
Apps have great advantages and benefits for the users’ study methods,
regardless, there are also some difficulties because of complex steps to follow and
challenges to solve. The conclusion that was formed, is to be able to create an app, you
need to accomplish and follow to be successful. After and during these steps, you need
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to keep in mind of major challenges and try to solve them, but even though there are
some challenges and steps to follow there is a list of reasons how an app can benefit
users. An example is the human anatomy app, in which, there are some steps to be
followed as Marco Soares stated and challenges to be solved like feedbacks from users.
On the other hand, this app can give benefits to the users such as, not studying with
massive textbooks, easy accessibility, and learning in more entertaining and detailed
way. Educational apps these days can help students and other people to study things that
textbooks can each them, but in a unique way that can include tools and shapes you are
About The Author Terry Heick Founder & Director of TeachThought. “Why Apps
Should Replace Textbooks In Your Classroom.” TeachThought, 30 July 2018,
www.teachthought.com/the-future-of-learning/are-apps-the-new-textbook/.
Joe, et al. “How To Make An App in 2020 From Start to Finish (10 Steps).”
CodeWithChris, 4 Feb. 2021, codewithchris.com/how-to-make-iphone-apps-with-
no-programming-experience/.
“Pros & Cons - ProCon.org.” Tablets vs. Textbooks, 9 June 2020, tablets-
textbooks.procon.org/.
“Why Feedback Is Critical for Your App.” Liquid State, 19 July 2019, liquid-
state.com/feedback-is-critical-for-your-app/.