Reading
Reading
In my opinion I think that the first definition argument essay was a success considering
what its topic was about. The topic was on why Adam Kennedy is not considered to be
a nontraditional student based on the school’s definition for what this type of student is.
“I am anything but a “traditional” student. In fact, I am one of the most nontraditional
students I know.” According to his counselor at his school had told him since he was not
old enough that he does not qualify. Evidence that Adam had presented was the
schools definition for what a nontraditional student is and the operational definition for
what a non traditional student is. “When I went to Non-Traditional Student Services, I
was told that my case did not fit the definition that the school had established.”
According to the school that Adam was attending to be considered a nontraditional
student they must be over the age of twenty five and Adam was only twenty two. This
definition argument was successful because Adam did a wonderful job on explaining
why he thinks he should be considered a nontraditional student despite the schools
definition for the word.
The second definition argument essay was also a success in my opinion. The second
definition argument essay was about the expectations on professional athletes and if
they should be considered role models. EJ Garr did a wonderful job on explaining how
athletes nowadays do not have the same mindset as ones in the past. “Unfortunately,
athletes today are now what they were decades ago when a paycheck was not the sole
reason they wanted an athletic career.” He explained that some athletes that are
successful are also doing their part in society to try and help out people. He had
mentioned that “Many athletes do not think about how to be a better role model to those
kids that look up to them, how to make their community better, or what they can “give
back” to the less fortunate.” When kids look up to athletes like that and say they would
like to be like them, what do they want to be? Rich? This definition essay was a success
because EJ was able to bring force the differences in today's athletes with the ones in
the past.