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text and by understanding how these elements work together to form up a cohesive whole. Formalist
critics examine a text regardless of its time period, social/political/religious setting, and author’s
background.
Example 1:
Setting in “A Worn Path” by Eudora Welty is effective: the descriptions are beautiful.
Setting in “A Worn Path” by Eudora Welty is effective: the descriptions are beautiful.
1. Does this thesis limit and focus what the writer has to say about the story?
Definitely not! This thesis (and I use the term loosely) is very vague. The key terms are so general that
they fail to provide any focus for the paper. To provide specific examples to support this statement will
be very difficult.
Again, this statement has no real connection to what the author is saying (the meaning) in the story.
Example 2:
Eudora Welty uses the setting of “A Worn Path,” presented in the vivid descriptive phrases of the
protagonist’s strenuous journey through the wild country of Natchez Trace, to connect the reader with
Phoenix, both as a character and as a symbol.
1. Does this thesis limit and focus what the writer has to say about this story?
Yes! This paper will be give examples from the text which show how the description of the setting
(during this character’s journey) characterize the protagonist as a person and a symbol. In addition,
repetition of the underlined key words will help this writer build coherence in the paper.
No, at least not directly. While connecting the setting along the journey to the main character will
definitely get at the author’s theme, the theme is not made clear. In fact, though both the character and
the symbolism, almost assures this paper will discuss theme, the actual reference to the story’s theme is
missing. However, this thesis would address the assignment response for looking at form (structure) and
how the story is built.
Example 3:
Through Phoenix’s strenuous journey in the wild country of Natchez Trace, Eudora Welty uses her
protagonist to symbolically show the struggle of African-Americans toward equality and integration in
the South after the Civil War.