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Business Management - Example C - Markscheme

This document provides an example of assessed student work for an extended essay in Business Management. The essay examines the extent to which Oracle's success can be attributed to its corporate culture and organizational structure. Overall the student was awarded 30 out of a possible 34 marks. Specific criterion such as focus and method, knowledge and understanding, and critical thinking were marked and commentary was provided on the student's demonstration of skills in each area.

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Business Management - Example C - Markscheme

This document provides an example of assessed student work for an extended essay in Business Management. The essay examines the extent to which Oracle's success can be attributed to its corporate culture and organizational structure. Overall the student was awarded 30 out of a possible 34 marks. Specific criterion such as focus and method, knowledge and understanding, and critical thinking were marked and commentary was provided on the student's demonstration of skills in each area.

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Studies in language and


literature

Example A

Example B Business management: Example C


Language acquisition

Example A

Example B

Example C

Business management

Example A
Student work (PDF) RPPF (PDF)

Example B

Example C

Economics

Example A Extended essay: Example commentary

Example B
Subject Business management WSEE theme (if applicable):
Environmental systems and
societies
Category for language essays (if Subjects used for WSEE (if
Example A
applicable): applicable):
Example B

Geography Title of essay: Corporate Culture at Oracle


Example A
Research question: To what extent can Oracle's success be contributed to its corporate culture and
Example B
organizational structure?
Global politics

Example A Assessment details

Example B
Criterion Mark awarded Commentary
History

Example A 4 The topic and research question are well


A: Focus and method
Example B communicated; the methodology is good, but the
Information technology in a sources could be richer and more academic in nature.
[Maximum possible mark:
global society
6]
Example A

Example B

Philosophy 6 Very good subject knowledge as evidenced by the


B: Knowledge and
Example A terminology used throughout and the use of models
understanding
Example B showing that the student learned a lot about the topic
Example C (corporate culture and structure) and went beyond the
[Maximum possible mark:
Psychology syllabus (see page 8, Mintzberg's model which is at
6]
Example A university degree level).
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Example B Business management: Example C

Social and cultural anthropology 11 The research, analysis and discussion/evaluation are
C: Critical thinking
Example A “excellent" hence the mark awarded is in the middle of
the highest markband (no strong reason to go up or
Example B [Maximum possible mark:
down).
Example C 12]
World religions

Example A
4 Very good structure and layout.
Example B D: Presentation
Biology

Example A [Maximum possible mark:

Example B 4]

Example C

Chemistry
5 Two elements moved this from the 3–4 markband to
E: Engagement
Example A the 5–6 markband: self-awareness and re ection about
Example B awed time management, and the fact that the
[Maximum possible mark:
Computer science comments are speci cally about the project carried
6]
Example A out (as opposed to being more generic).
Example B

Design technology Total marks awarded


30/34
Example A

Example B

Physics

Example A

Example B

Example C

Sports, exercise and health


science

Example A

Example B

Example C

Mathematics

Example A

Example B

Dance

Example A

Example B

Example C

Film

Example A

Example B

Literature and performance

Example A

Example B

Music

Example A

Example B

Theatre

Example A

Example B
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Visual arts
Visual arts
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Example A

Example B

Example C

World studies

Example A—con ict, peace and


security

Example B—con ict, peace and


security

Example A—equality and


inequality

Example B—equality and


inequality

Example A—health and


development

Example B—health and


development

Example A—culture, language


and identity

Example B—culture, language


and identity

Example A—environmental
sustainability

Example B—environmental
sustainability

Example A—science,
technology and society

Example B—science,
technology and society

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