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Title: Sleep Quality Among Student Nurses in Relation With Their Academic

The document outlines a study on the relationship between sleep quality and academic performance among student nurses. It provides suggestions to improve various aspects of the proposal, such as changing the title, including more details in the introduction and literature review, revising the study schema, specifying the timeframe, and using the appropriate formula to calculate sample size. The advisers' comments and recommendations were incorporated into the revised proposal to strengthen the research design and methodology.

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Title: Sleep Quality Among Student Nurses in Relation With Their Academic

The document outlines a study on the relationship between sleep quality and academic performance among student nurses. It provides suggestions to improve various aspects of the proposal, such as changing the title, including more details in the introduction and literature review, revising the study schema, specifying the timeframe, and using the appropriate formula to calculate sample size. The advisers' comments and recommendations were incorporated into the revised proposal to strengthen the research design and methodology.

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TITLE: SLEEP QUALITY AMONG STUDENT NURSES IN RELATION WITH THEIR ACADEMIC

PERFORMANCE

Researchers: Agolong, Cabasag, Laluna, Picpic

Adviser: Grace R. Abad

Matrix of Comments/Suggestions/Recommendations

Comments/Suggestions/Recommendations Action taken


CHAPTER 1

1. Change the title to “Sleep Quality among Now changed


student nurses in relation with their
academic performance”

2. On page 1, under the side heading Now changed found in the first paragraph, last
introduction state the problem, and why sentence :
students lack of sleep and negatively affect “Well- controlled sleep-deprivation studies have
their studies. shown that lack of sleeps not only increases
Why students on Jose Rizal Memorial State fatigue and sleepiness but also worsens
University? cognitive performance”
Now changed found in page 2 last paragraph of
the introduction.
3. On page 5, schema of the study, in its 2 nd Now changed and found in the current page
sentence, exclude the word “assessment”
on the inner circle sleep quality
assessment. Revise the schema to show
relationship between variables , include
arrow that points from the circle to the
“academic performance “ and change
extension program to academic
performance.
4. On page 8, under the side heading scope Now changed and found in the current page:
and delimitation include the time frame of “This study will be conducted in one school year
the research study. and the pre-designed questionnaire will be given
two weeks before final exam on examination
period”
CHAPTER 2
5. On page 10, under side heading quality of Now changed and found under side heading
sleep, add and cite literatures supporting quality of sleep starting from page 10 to up page
sleep indicator: sleep latency, sleep 13 under review of related literature and
duration, sleep efficiency, and sleep studies.
disturbance, use of sleep medication,
daytime dysfunction and subjective sleep
quality.
CHAPTER 3
6. On page 22, under side heading research Now changed found in the current page
respondents, change Slovins formula to
Cochrans formula. Cochran formula was
used in getting the sample size since
Slovins is an old formula.

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