Scribd
Upload
109 views3 pages

The Line Graph Below Shows The Average Monthly Temperatures in Three Major Cities

The temperatures in three major cities - Paris, Dubai, and Sydney - are compared based on a line graph. Paris has the lowest temperatures, never exceeding 20 degrees Celsius. Dubai's temperatures are highest, reaching 36 degrees in August. Sydney has opposite seasonal temperature changes, with January the warmest month at 24 degrees and July the coolest at 14 degrees. Human activities like industrial pollution and illegal hunting are major causes of species extinction by destroying habitats and increasing demand for animal products. Factories pollute environments and forests where animals live. Oil and gas extraction also kills fish. Rhinos are poached for their valuable horns. Stricter laws, public education, limiting industries and construction, and punishing

Uploaded by

minakshimins
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
109 views3 pages

The Line Graph Below Shows The Average Monthly Temperatures in Three Major Cities

The temperatures in three major cities - Paris, Dubai, and Sydney - are compared based on a line graph. Paris has the lowest temperatures, never exceeding 20 degrees Celsius. Dubai's temperatures are highest, reaching 36 degrees in August. Sydney has opposite seasonal temperature changes, with January the warmest month at 24 degrees and July the coolest at 14 degrees. Human activities like industrial pollution and illegal hunting are major causes of species extinction by destroying habitats and increasing demand for animal products. Factories pollute environments and forests where animals live. Oil and gas extraction also kills fish. Rhinos are poached for their valuable horns. Stricter laws, public education, limiting industries and construction, and punishing

Uploaded by

minakshimins
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
You are on page 1/ 3

New ADVANCE WRITING DAY 8

TASK-1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant

TASK-2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic

The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons
and solutions?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
TASK 1

The line graph displays the changes in temperature in three cities (Paris, Dubai and Sydney) in different
months of a year. Temperature is measured in Celsius degree.
Overall, the weather pattern in Sydney is quite the opposite of Dubai and Paris. Furthermore, Paris is the
coldest city among the three.
The temperature in Paris never goes above 20 degrees. In contrast, Dubai seldom sees its temperature below
this level, except for January (19 degree C). However, despite the striking differences, the temperatures in
Paris and Dubai still have some similarities, as they rise continually from the beginning of the year to reach a
peak in August. The highest temperature in Paris and Dubai are 20 and 36 degrees, respectively. Afterwards,
both cities became colder and the temperature fell steadily. As can be seen, the differences in temperature
between August and December in both Paris and Dubai are the same, 15 degrees celsius. Regarding Sydney, it
witnesses 24 degree temperature in January. From there, the temperature drops continuously before going
down to the lowest point of 14 degrees in July. The five remaining months see the temperature increase
dramatically, to reach 23 degrees by the end of the year.
TASK 2
Human society develops with a heavy cost on the animal world. A vast number of different species are being
pushed to the verge of extinction. Rapid industrialization along with rampant illegal hunting are the driving
forces behind such a tragedy; and ordinary people should join with governments in an effort to protect wild,
endangered animals.

By releasing massive quantities of pollutants, many heavy industries such as steel and mining are inflicting
tremendous damage on animals’ natural habitats. Forests which are home to wild animals are being cut
down to make way for factories and fuel their operation. Furthermore, exploiting oil from oceans possibly
leads to the unfortunate disappearance of many kinds of aquatic creatures. Many incidents where large
schools of fish are killed have happened in consequence of being exposed to chemicals and chemical waste
from oil and gas mining rigs located out at sea.

In addition, a lot of animals are being poached due to an increased demand for products made from their
body parts. In the wild, rhinos are illegally slaughtered for their horns which are sold at high prices. Although
laws and regulations are implemented in an attempt to protect particular endangered species, it does not
seem to be effective enough.

There are, in fact, several ways to help protect wild animals. First of all, the expansion of heavy industries
should be stopped by law to keep the natural environment for these animals untouched. Individuals should
be well-informed that their unnecessary needs are a large cause of animal suffering, and hence, should refrain
from using products made from animal skin or horn. Last but not least, poachers should be strictly punished
and more conservation areas should be constructed in order to shelter endangered animals.

In conclusion, humans are threatening the survival of many animal species when they expand their factories
and hunt out of greed. It is imperative to put appropriate protection measures, as I have discussed, into place.

You might also like