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NUML Research Magazine Volume II, 2009
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Editor
Ms Shehr Bano Zaidi
Editorial Advisory Board
1. Dr Rubina Kamran Dean,

Faculty of English Language,
Literature & Applied Linguistics,
National University of Modern
Languages,
Islamabad, Pakistan.
3. Dr Tom Byers Professor of English,

Director Commonwealth Humanities Studies Centre,
University of Louisville,
Louisville, Kentucky, USA.
4. Professor Dr Paul Verweel Dean,
Utrecht School of Governance,
University of Utrecht,
Utrecht, Netherlands.
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George Mason University,
Fairfax, Virginia,
USA.
6. Dr Jerome Vermulen Associate Professor of Linguistics,

University of Utrecht,
Utrecht, Netherlands.
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University of Freiburg,
Deutsches Seminar I,
D-79254 Freiburg, Germany.
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8. Dr Margaret Mullen University of Cork,

Republic of Ireland.
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Seoul, South Korea.
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Karachi, Pakistan.
11. Ms. Khalida Tanvir Syed St Paul’s College,

University of Manitoba,
Winnipeg, MB.
Canada.
8. Dr Saeeda Asadullah Vice Chancellor, Khan

Fatima Jinnah Women University, Rawalpindi, Pakistan.
9. Dr Samina Qadir Head,

The Department of English,
Fatima Jinnah Women University, Rawalpindi, Pakistan.
10. Dr Hina Ashraf Assistant Professor,

The Department of English,
Air University Islamabad.
11. Dr Fauzia Tanveer Assistant Professor,

Federal Govt. Margalla College
for Women,
Islamabad, Pakistan.
Contents
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The Cohesion Pattern “ 是对” in Chinese Response①
Dr.Yan-yan Sun
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A Study on Approximate Number Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多)

M. Ed. Liu Hanlu
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Problems of Learning through English by Urdu Medium Students
Lt. Col. Dr. Muhammad Shahbudin Shah (Co-author)
Dr. Nabi Bux Jumani (Co-author)
Shahinshah Babar Khan (Co-author)
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Phonetic Mood of English, Direct Method and GTM
Arshad Mahmood (Co-author)
Muhammad Uzair (Co-author)
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Appropriating Linguistic Strategies in Bapsi Sidhwa’s Ice-Candy-Man
Iesar Ahmad
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Reader Response Theory: Towards a Cognitive Framework for
Teaching of English Literature to Second Language Learners
Dr.Munazza Yaqoob
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Teaching Essay Content through Integrated and Product Approaches
Muhammad Fareed
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Causes for Closing B.ED (Technology) Degree Program at NISTE
Saima Nazir (Co-author)
Dr. S. M. Hassan (Co-author)
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Accelerated Reading: Skills and Strategies
Dr. Nighat Shakur
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The Heart Divided: A Reflection on Pakistan’s Emergence as a Nation
State
Dr. Nighat Ahmed
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Appendix-A
Copyright Agreement
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Appendix-B
Style Sheet
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The Cohesion Pattern “ 是对” in Chinese

Response①
Dr.Yan-Yan Sun,
Beijing University of Post and
Telecommunications,
China.
Abstract
This paper explores the types, meanings, characteristics and
the occurring frequency of the feedback cohesion pattern “嗯啊噢
是对”. According to a closed statistic study, we have got the
following findings: “嗯”occurs in the highest frequency in talk
shows but in cross talks, “啊”occurs in the highest frequency. We
make an explanation about the difference between “嗯”and “啊”by
comparing the phonetic features, linguistic form and referring to the
iconicity and the maxim of providing enough information and not
providing excessive information.
Key words/terms: response; reply; cohesion pattern
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1. Introduction
Charles Fries is the earliest expert who begins to investigate
the language convergence in discourse research. He called it “listener
response”, while some other researchers called this “the signal of
feedback”, or “feedback program”, or “interjection”, or “hearer’s
signal”, etc (Wu: 2000). Although the names are quite different, they
bear many similarities. That is, when a participant of conversation
has a chance to talk, he is to act as if he has issued a brief speech.
The main common characteristics of this kind of feedback is that
the conversation partner has no intention to interrupt the current
speaker's discourse, nor wants to take his/her turn, or contain new
substantial content. What he or she wants to do is to inform the
current speaker’s active participation in the session in order to make
the session continue. (Allwood et al.:1992).In this thesis, I call it
“language feedback”.
2. Research question
Q. What are the types, meanings, characteristics and the occurring
frequency of the feedback cohesion pattern “嗯啊噢是对”?
3. Literature review
In recent years in China, in addition to the English language
scholars, the Chinese language scholars have begun to study the
language feedback sessions in spoken Chinese. The common
consensus is that the Chinese language has modals, notional words,
repetition and other kinds of signals of feedback, with the following
typical items such as “嗯”、“啊”、“噢”、“是”、“对”and so on;
(Wu:2001). According to the aspects of function, the above items can
be divided into expressing reception, understanding, and attitudes
and so on. Many researchers agree that using the above language
feedback items is not for the purpose of getting the active position
during the discourse round. (Wu: 2001, Li&Fan: 2002, Liu: 2004). I
agree with the following viewpoints put forward by Allwood et.al.,
(1992), Duncan, S. & Niederehe, G. (1974), Duncan, S. & Fiske, D.
(1985) and Yueer Li (2002), that is, the language feedback items
include not only kinds of language signals such as“嗯”、“啊”、“噢”,
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but also the form of words (lexicals), such as "不错" and even the
phrases and the idioms such as "谁说不是呢" and so on. The
function of language feedback can even include the linguistic
phenomenon that is the sentences said by rather the listeners than the
speakers but also simple clarifications, repetition, and even those
non-triggers which get the active position during the discourse based
on the contents of the speakers.
3. Methodology
The examples are chosen from TV series《家有女》

、,30
segments of traditional talk shows 、 and randomly-recorded
everyday life speech.
In this article, the feedback convergence is assigned to the
scope of linguistic response (Sun: 2007). The patterns, characteristics
and occurring frequency in different genres of“嗯”、“啊”、“噢”、 “是”、
“对”as feedback convergence types are investigated.
3.1. The types of feedback & response convergence of “嗯” “啊”

“噢”“是”“对”
3.2 Separate using
For example:
（1）专家 A：清真菜里头很多都是牛羊肉，这个跟汉族的饮食
习惯没什么太大区别。
。
主持人：嗯（en）
专家 A：不过菜的选材上要求要比汉族人要求的多。
专家 B：没错。
（《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”） specialist A：Beef and

lamb is used in Qingzhen dishes frequently, that’s not much different
from Han dishes.
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moderator：嗯（en）
。 Specialist A：But, the condition of
chose materials is much difficult than Han specialist B：That right
（<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)
（2）朋友 A ：明天阴天，你出去别忘了带伞。
朋友 B：啊（a）。
朋友 A：免得挨淋。
Friend A：Tomorrow is a cloudy day, don’t forget bring your

umbrella when you out
Friend B：啊（a）
。
Friend A：Don‘t get wet
（3）-(5)嘉宾：北京的名小吃可以说 80%以上属于回民小吃。
主持：嗯（ en ）。（ 3 ）
嘉宾：后来就慢慢地流传到世上就不分汉回教了。
主持：嗯（ en ）。（ 4 ）
嘉宾：严格来说小吃呢就是回民的好一点。
主持：噢-（ǎo）（5）
嘉宾：以前都是挑着挑子卖的。
（《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清
真菜”） guest ：Over 80% of the famous snack is Huis
moderator ：嗯（ en ）。
（3） guest ：And after time goes by, it comes down to the social.
And can not be separated Han or Huis
moderator ：嗯（ en ）。
（ 4 ）
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guest ：strictly speaking, the snack of Huis is better.
moderator ：噢 - （ ǎo ）
（5 ）
guest ： Long time ago, it the person who sell with

trolley.(<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)
（6）-（7）嘉宾：不过我们今天讲的假烟还是一大部分老百姓
的消费能力作为指标，我想无非是咱们以前说的，价钱要便宜。
主持：嗳（ ái ）。
（6）
嘉宾：东西要实惠，口味还要地道。
主持：嗳（ ǎ i ）。
（7）
（
《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”）
guest ： But, the fake tobacco we talk about is standard by

consumptive level of most people, just like we talk before, it’s
cheaper.
moderator ：嗳（ ái ）。
（6 ）
Guest：the food must cheaper, and the taste must good.
moderator ：嗳（ ǎ i ）。（ 7 ）
(8) 嘉宾：按这个标准来套，就说那家馆子还适合家宴的要求。
主持：对（ du ì ）。（ 8 ）
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嘉宾：也就是说家宴的话可以考虑去那儿
（
《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”）
Guest ： According this standart, this restaurant is suit for

family party’s need
moderator ：对（ du ì ）。
（8）
guest：that’s mean it can be think about go there if have a family

party.。
(9)-（10）逗哏：人是越来越多。
捧哏：哎。
逗哏：来了不少啊。
捧哏：对。
逗哏：有住在前门这儿的您算是近的。
捧哏：嗯。
逗哏：有远的啊。
捧哏：远的到哪儿？
逗哏：大兴的、昌平的。
捧哏：呵（ h ē ）。
（9）
逗哏：海淀的、延庆的。
捧哏：嚯（ hu ō ）。
（10）
（相声《赌论》
）
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First： the people come here is geting more and more.
Second： ai .
First：so many people.
Second： yes .
First： you live Qian men is the closest one
Second：EN .
First：there are people live very far.
Second： how far?

First： Daxing, Changping
Second ：呵（ hē ）。
（9）
First： Handian, Yanqing
Second ：嚯（ huō ）。
（10）
(talk show << gambling >>
From the above recorded oral materials 1 , we can retrieve
feedback convergence by hand as the following :
Exclamations 嗯（en）欸(ai) 唉(ai) 哎(ai) 呣(m) 啊(a) 哦

（o）嗯（én 哦（ó）哦（ǒ）噢（ō）噢（ǒ）
嚄（ǒ）啊(á) 啊（ǎ）哎(ái) 呀(yá) 咦(yí) 呵
（hē）嚯（huō）
Verbs 成是可以
Adjectives 好行得中对
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Phrases 是吧看吧听吧对吧
是不是对不对
3.2 Repeated using
（11）嘉宾：那个普通散客我觉得还是可以接受的。它那个普通
散客上的包间是不单收费的。
主持人：而且它那个氛围特别的好，像那个皇家的气派。
嘉宾：对对对。
主持人：汉白玉的楼梯，走上去，呵！雄赳赳气昂昂的
嘉宾：对。
（《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”）
Guest ： And I think I can accept that simple guest, and the
room of it is not take extra charge
Moderator ： and the atmosphere of it is such great, just like

a royal style.
guest：对对对。
moderator：go up the white jade stair, he!。feel like a hero.
Guest：yes. (<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)

3.3 Combined using
（12）热线听众：我就是回民，什么麻豆腐、醋熘苜蓿、肉粥----
都是我爱吃的。
（
点评嘉宾：对，没错。这都是回族食品中比较传统的。《吃
喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”）
Hotline listeners：I am Huis, such like bean curd in lamb oil,

clover blossom in sweet sour sauce, and meat porridge are my
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favorite.
Comment guests：对，没错。That’s all traditional food of huis

dishes. (<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)
3.3.1 The meanings and characteristics of feedback convergence
patterns of “嗯”“啊”“噢”“是”“对”
3.3.1.1 I am listening to you, please go on
In this pattern, the listener bursts out the word in a casual
way with a short and light articulation. He/she usually utters the
initial or final part of the syllable, indicating that he/she is listening
and the speaker may go on. Just like “嗯” in the above example
sentences (1) 、 (3) 、 (4), “啊”in example (2), and “对” in example
(8). In these examples, “嗯”、“啊”、“对”are articulated with the final
part of the falling tone.
3.3.1.2 I agree with you, please go on
In this pattern, the listener has received the information and
that the information the current speaker provides is, to some extent,
new to the listener. In order to express this kind of emotion, the
listener takes extra weight the articulation of the final part of the
syllable. Just like 嗳（ái）in example (6) ，嗳（ǎi）in example (7).
3.3.1.3 What you say is surprised me, please go on
In this pattern also, the listener has received the information
and that the information the current speaker provides is, to some
extent, new to the listener. In order to express this kind of emotion,
the listener lengthens the articulation of the final part of the syllable.
In order to express this kind of emotion, the listener lengthens the
articulation of the final part of the syllable. Just like 呵（hē）in
example (9) ，嚯（ǎi）in example (10).
3.3.1.4 Oh, That’s what that means, please go on
In this pattern again, the listener has received the
information and that the information the current speaker provides is,
to some extent, new to the listener. In order to express this kind of
emotion, the listener takes extra weight and lengthens the articulation
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of the final part of the syllable. In order to express this kind of
emotion, the listener lengthens the articulation of the final part of the
syllable. Just like 噢-（ǎo）in example (5).
3.3.1.5 I definitly agree with you, please go on
Finally in this pattern too, the listener repeats the same
cohesive words to lengthen the articulation. This kind of response
has more syllables. In other words, when repeated the response
words bears more stress on the affirmative intonation than singly
used, just like “对对对”in example (11). Sometimes the listener
employs different phonetic cohesive words to increase the number of
syllable, frequently enforcing the negative intonation, just like “对，
没错”in example (12).
3.3.2 The interpretation about why the occurring frequency is
different from the feedback convergence concerning the sorts of
“嗯啊噢是对”
How about the occurring frequency of the typical feedback
convergence of “嗯啊噢是对” in oral language under different
cases? Sixty-five traditional cross-talk paragraphs and a ten-hour
program named《吃喝玩乐大搜索》are counted, the result of the
limited region are as follows:
A- cross-talk
嗯啊嗳噢是2 对
Total 398 507 440 444 260 274
percent 17.1 21.8% 19% 19.1% 11.2% 11.8%

%
B-A ten-hour program named《吃喝玩乐大搜索》

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嗯啊嗳噢是
Total 1021 47 86 209 27 575
percent 52% 2.4% 4.4% 10.6% 1.4% 29.%2
From the above statistics we find out two things:

Firstly, concerning the sort of cross-talk, the order of the
occurring frequency of the feedback convergence is from the higher
to the lower as: 啊→噢→嗳→嗯→对→是
Secondly, in an another case the ten-hour program named《吃喝

玩乐大搜索》generates the following pattern 嗯→对→噢→嗳→啊
→是
The occurring frequency of the modals like “嗯啊噢唉”

are not higher than the words of meanings like “对是”involving the
above two sorts of linguistic patterns. This result is somewhat
different from that of Wu Ping. (2001). The occurring frequency of
modal feedback convergence word “嗯”is the highest, while the“啊”
is the lowest concerning interviewing cases, this is somewhat
similiar with the results of Wu Ping(2001)and Li Yueer(2002). But it
is just the opposite concerning cross-talks. The results are quite
different from that of Wu Ping(2001)and Li Yueer(2002).
4. Findings
As for the reasons of the above, we think that perhaps it
should be partly connected with the tone characteristics of the
feedback convergence“嗯”、“啊”; what’s more is the connections
between the linguistic forms and meanings. Perhaps,it is also
affected by ‘the principle of least effort’(Zipf:1949) ‘the maxim of
the fullest’ and ‘the maxim of non-excessive’ in
communications(Levinson:1995).Among the feedback convergence
words, when the speaker empolys “啊”, he/she opens his/her mouth
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most broadly and exerts more power.But the word of “嗯” is the
opposite case. According to functionalism, a particular language
struture will always manifest a corresponding function. To some
degree, the language structure is the signal of the experential or
ideational structure, so the relation between the language forms and
the meanings is not arbitrary, but realtive and well-founded.
(Shen:1999). During crosstalk performances, the artists will try
their best to make the audience listen clearly and get excited. In order
to do this, the performers must clearly utter each sentence or each
word. They carry out ‘the maxim of the fullest’. So they must extert
a lot energy to utter even the simpliest “yes”. That is why they open
their mouth most broadly when uttering “啊”. In contrast, in an
interview, in order to make the talk as true to real life as possible and
create a homely atmosphere, the host/hostess and the guest(s) may
empoly the principle of ‘least effort’ —usually empolyed in real-life
conversation and ‘the non-excessive maxim’. Frequently, they will
use simplified syntactic structures, or exert theleast energy to
articulate, sometimes even use body language. So ,“嗯” will be
naturally used as the simplest phonetic form to show the listener’s
agreement.
5. Conclusion
Because of the prominent linguistic characteristics and its
special communicational functions of the feedback convergence,
they are popularly used and the language learners like to master them
whether they can exactly understand or not. After a systematic
research concerning the way of using the feedback convergerence in
the second language learning of Swedish, Allwood(1992) found
that the learners do this on the basis of the principle from the easy
ones to the difficult ones.That means these which are simple in forms
and bear less functions will be earlier gotten or mastered. Concretely
speaking, the non-word or non phrasal parts can be much easily
mastered than the words and phrases, elements to show acceptance is
also easier to be gotten than the attitude learning from the feedback
convergence.
From the statistics and the results of the previous research
concerning the learning of the feedback convergence(Hatch:1991),it
can be said that the acquisitional speed of tone is much higher than
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that of meanings and grammar, especially the simple feedback
convergence. ） ,we know that the learning of the feedback
convergence can be started from the modal ones like “嗯啊噢嗳”
to the notional ones like“是对好行”. As for the differences
among inner elements of every feedback convergence‚ concrete
applicational contexts and the sequence of learning, further research
will be done in the future.
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A Study on Approximate Number Lai (来), Ji (几)

and Duo (多)
Liu Hanlu,
Beijing Language and
Culture University,
China.
Abstract
This paper uses statistical methods to investigate the
following three ways of expressing approximate numbers: Lai (来), Ji (几)
and Duo (多). This paper tries to solve the following two problems.
Firstly, are all the native Chinese speakers hold the same understanding of
each way of expressing approximate numbers in Numeral+ 来 / 几 / 多
+Measure word form? If there is any difference, what are the correlative
factors, and is the difference significant? I also compare these three ways
in the sense that whether the native speakers hold significantly different
understanding of them.
Key words/terms: approximate numbers; teaching Chinese as a second
language.
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1. Introduction
1.1. The reason for selecting this topic
Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多) is frequently used by native

Chinese speakers to express approximate numbers. When people use
approximate numbers, they want to express an uncertain number in a
certain range. Usually we believe that, even people may have some
differences when choosing a specific number, the range of each
approximate number is agreed by everyone.
However, after a preliminary study, we find that in real life,
people have a different understanding. Take shi lai ge (十来个) for
example, some people believe the range of shi lai ge (十来个) is
below ten. Other people believe the range can be above ten. There
are even some people who think that the range can be only above ten.
These differences may cause a faulty communication.
When we teaching Chinese as a second language, it is
unnecessary for students to know the specific number of shi lai ge
(十来个), but it is necessary for them to know the certain range. At
least they should be sure whether the range is below or above ten, so
that they can really understand shi lai ge (十来个) and dare to use it
in communication. However, the descriptions on some text books are
confusing: “it expresses approximate number”, “can be above and
below ten”. This kind of explanations can easily cause an avoidance
strategy; students will tend to use ba jiu ge (八九个) or shi san si ge
(十三四个). Other text books give a clear explanation: “It expresses
an approximate number below ten.” But does it conform to the
reality which a Chinese native speaker uses shi lai ge (十来个)?
After students have learned shi lai ge (十来个), shi ji ge (十几个)
and sh duo ge (十多个), they will spontaneously ask about the
similarities and differences of these three approximate numbers, and
which approximate number expresses a larger numerical number?
Which expresses a wider range? If we don’t know how a Chinese
native speaker uses these three expressions of approximate numbers,
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we cannot answer this kind of questions.
Briefly speaking, we are still not fully acquainted with facts
of how people use and understand these three approximate numbers.
This situation may not only cause a faulty communication between
Chinese native speakers, and also increase our difficulties in
describing approximate numbers. Therefore it is necessary to make
an investigation into this question, and make a statistical description
and analysis of the result of the investigation.
2. Hypothesis
This paper suggests two hypotheses:
(a) Chinese native speakers of different areas and ages hold
significantly different understanding of Lai (来), but all the Chinese
native speakers’ understanding of Ji (几) and Duo (多) have no
significant difference. All of them use ten+几/多+Classifier form to
express a range which is above ten.
(b) When northern Chinese people use Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo
(多), they use these three approximate numbers in a significantly
different way, whereas southern Chinese people use them without
significant difference.
(A study on approximate number Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多))
The early study on approximate number Lai (来), Ji (几) and

Duo (多) mainly focus on how to express different meanings under
different forms, but rarely concern the range. For example, in the
1950s, Lv Shuxing (1957) studied the position of Lai ( 来 ) and
measure word, distinguished the two forms Numeral+来+Measure
word +Noun and Numeral+Measure word+来+Noun. In the other
paper, Mr. Lv studied the origin of people who use Lai (来) as an
approximate number, and also compared it with duo (多) and ban
(半). This kind of study is not directly related to ourresearch,
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therefore we do not make a further imention of it.Another study
mentions the range of Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多), but does not
treat it as object of study. For example, Hu Fu (1953) mentioned
Lai who expresses an uncertain range: the range can move to both
higher and lower directions, one thousand 来 RMB may be below and
above one thousand (and the number should be not too far from one
thousand). Duo (多) can also express an uncertain range, but the
range can move to only the higher direction, one thousand 多 RMB
is always above one thousand, it can be never below one thousand.
Zhang Gonggui(1953)suggests that ten 来 persons are equal to
about ten, ten Lai (来) persons is different from ten Ji (几) persons，
the former is a uncertain range , the latter is a certain range, and
Zhang Gonggui also considers Duo (多) as a certain range.
In the 1990s, there were more theses that described the range.
The description in Eight Hundred Words of Modern Chinese is more
specific and representative: Lai ( 来 ) expresess an approximate
number, usually below a certain number, sometimes can also be
larger or smaller. Ji (几) expresses an uncertain number between two
to nine. Duo (多) is used after numeral and measure word, it
expresses a fractional amount, and also mentioned ten duo (多) acre
is equal to ten (几) acre.
Wang Gaigai (2001) chose 100 native Beijing people and
people who came from other provinces but lived a very long time in
Beijing, made a random sampling conversing investigation about shi
lai sui (十来岁) and wu shi lai sui (五十来岁). 37% of this 100
people consider that, Lai (来) expresses a number below ten or fifty,
Wang Gaigai found that the more the dialect background is far from
the Beijing dialect the more they disagree that Lai (来) expresses a
number below ten or fifty. Among 100 people, 19% consider that shi
lai sui (十来岁) is a little bit larger than ten , and 24% consider that
wu shi lai sui (五十来岁) is a little bit larger than ten. Most people
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who hold this opinion come from the dialect area. 12% of 100
people consider that shi lai sui (十来岁) is between ten and eleven,
and 14% consider that wu shi lai sui (五十来岁) is between fifty and
fifty one. Most people who hold this opinion also come from the
dialect area. Concerning age factor, those people who think shi lai
sui (十来岁) wu shi lai sui (五十来岁) express a number below ten
or fifty are predominantly above sixty years old.
Zhang Weiguo, Liang Shehui (2003) think Duo ( 多 )
expresses a number larger than a certain number, Ji (几) expresses a
number larger than one and smaller than ten. Lai (来) can express ①
similar to around ②a approximate number consist of number+ Lai
(来) is less than the number, it can be maximally equal to the number.
According to these range of values, they came to a conclusion: er bai
duo jni (二百多斤) is more probably among 201 to 205 kilo. Er bai
lai jin (二百来斤) is more probably among ①197 to 203 kilo, or ②
196 to 200 kilo.The existing study has to a certain extent described
these three approximate numbers, including ranges of them and how
people understand and use them. However, the biggest defectiveness
is that these studies lack of convincing scientific evidence, and
cannot provide the students an objective and certain answer. Our
study pays attention to be objective when collecting, reducting and
analyzing data.
4. Research methodology
A questionnaire was designed to find out how people use
Numeral+ 来 +Measure word, Numeral+ 几 +Measure word and
Numeral+ 多 +Measure word these three approximate numbers.
Recovery rate of our questionnaire is 91%.
4.1 The design of our questionnaire
We designed 15 questions, Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多)

each for three. We chose five contexts, which are ⑴food: steamed
stuffed bun, steamed bread, steamed bread of corn. ⑵animals: bird,
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chicken, wild duck. ⑶money ⑷time ⑸area: province, city,
state. For the purpose of avoiding the phonetic influence from the
measure word after the approximate number, all the measure words
for each context are the same, they are: ⑴food: ge (个). ⑵animals:
zhi (只) . ⑶money: kuai(块). ⑷time: fenzhong (分钟) ⑸area: ge
(个).
4.2 Basic situation of the study
There are all together 211 subjects, which including 97
persons elder than 40 years old, 114 younger than 40 years old. It
includes 115 from North China and 96 from South China. Owing to
the limitation of condition, our study is a random sampling study.
When a person’s ancestral home and birthplace (or long-term
residence apartment) are different, we define North or South
according to the birthplace (or long-term residence).
4.2.1 Statistics
We use statistical software SPSS 10.0 to analyze the data.
4.2.1 Operational definition
(1) Operational definition of area: subjects were born in
northern Chinese or long-term residence in (in the area of Northern
dialect) North and Northeast Sub-dialect and northwest Sub-dialect
in China are defined as northern subjects. Subjects born in northern
China or have a long-term residence in Southwest, Jiang Huai, Xiang,
Wu, Gan Sub-dialects (in the area of Northern dialect) are defined as
southern subjects.
(2) Operational definition of age: subjects who were born
before 1st January 1965 are defined as old, subjects who were born
after 1st January 1965 are defined as young.
(3)The represented number of range: our study focuses on
the range of values of approximate numbers, therefore we allow
subjects to give a range of values. When using a statistical method to
analyse data, we need a number to represent the range. We use a
median to represent the range.
4.2.2 Statistic method
The objectives of the statistical method are:
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(1) To test if each approximate number form is internally
significantly different-single dependent variable, multivariate
analysis of variance.
(2) To test if the three approximate number forms are
significantly different-repeated measurements analysis of variance
and paired T test.
5. Description and analysis of the investigation results
5.1. Lai (来)

5.1.1 The preliminary statistics of the investigation results
5.1.1.1 The investigated persons’ understanding of the Lai (来)’s

number range
Table1: Beijing (percentages inside parentheses stand for
how much certain-age people who chose a certain number range
account for all people. Decimal fractions have been rounded up or
down. So are the other tables.)
Table 1 studies how people who were born and have lived
for a long time in Beijing understand the number range of Number
word + Lai ( 来 ) + measure word (take shi lai ge( 十来个 ) for
range of
values Below 10 Around 10 Above 10
age
People more than 40 14（47%） 10（33%） 6（20%）

years old
People less than 40 6（29%） 14（67%）

1（5%）
years old
Total 15（29%） 16（31%） 20（39%）
example). Number range below 10 means the investigated persons

set the range from 7 to 10 (10 is included). Around 10 means persons
set the range from 8 to 12. Above 10 means some set the range from
10 to 19 (10 is also included).
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The reason why we pick Beijingers separately is that we
range of
values
age
Below 10 Around 10 Above 10
hope to know if there exist similarities between different-age

Beijingers. However, our findings are that among 40-year-old-down
persons (below- 40s for short) only 5% set the range below 10, while
among 40-year-old-up persons (above-40s for short) this scale
reaches nearly 47%. It seems different year-old Beijingers have
different understanding of Lai (来).
Besides, from the percentages we can find that most above-40s
set the range below 10 while only some choose around 10. To the
opposite, more than half of below-40s set the range above 10 while
only some choose around 10 and few choose below 10. Therefore,
we can suppose that persons set the range larger when their ages are
younger.
Table 2: Northern parts (including Beijing)
People more than 40 22（43%） 21（41%） 8（16%）

years old

5（8%）
years old
Total 27（23%） 46（40%） 42（37%）

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Table 2 studies how the persons who were born and have
lived for a long time in northern parts understand the number range
of Number word + Lai (来) + measure word (take shi lai ge (十来个)
for example). Among above-40s about 43% set the range below 10,
while 8% below-40s have the same idea, which seems similar with
Beijingers and supports our supposition above.
Table 3: Southern parts
Table 3 studies how the persons who were born and have lived for a
long time in southern parts understand the number range of Number
word + Lai( 来 )+ measure word (take shi lai ge( 十来个 ) for
example). Different from person from northern parts, most southern
persons do not set the range below 10, even among above-40s there
are only 9% set the range below 10. Generally above-40s’ range is
smaller than below-40s, which still supports our supposition above.
5.1.1.2 Conclusion
From the preliminary statistics, we concludes below:
different year-old Beijingers differ much in understanding of Lai(来),
so do southern and northern persons, and persons set the range larger
when their ages are younger.
5.1.2 Significance tests of differences
range of
age
People more than 4（9%） 21（46%） 21（46%）

40 years old
People less than 26（52%） 24（48%）

0（0%）
40 years old
Total 4（4%） 47（49%） 45（47%）
We want to test if there is significant difference in the

understandings of Lai (来) between persons of different ages and
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from different residence.
The results from SPSS Mean-square analysis are below: the
first table describes median, Std.Deviation and N. Above-40s
corresponds to age=2 while below-40s to age=3; northern persons
corresponds to area=0 while southern persons to area=1(the same
with the results below).
The second is the means-squares analysis table. We can see

that sig. of area is .001, while sig. of age is .000.
Tests of Between-Subjects Effects

Dependent Variable: LAI
Type III Sum
Source of Squares df Mean Square F Sig.
Corrected Mode 165.111a 3 55.037 19.156 .000
Intercept 26056.292 1 26056.292 9069.179 .000
AREA 32.509 1 32.509 11.315 .001
AGE 101.277 1 101.277 35.251 .000
AREA * AGE 28.613 1 28.613 9.959 .002
Error 594.723 207 2.873
Total 27427.410 211
Corrected Total 759.835 210
a. R Squared = .217 (Adjusted R Squared = .206)
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5.1.2.1 Conclusion
We can judge from the significance tests of differences that
persons from different residences have significant difference in
understanding of Lai (来); and this difference is even larger between
persons of different ages. Because there exist mutual effects between
residences and ages, we need to test further.
Below is the result of the independent samples test which
includes Levene’s Test and T-test. In T-test we can see the sig. is .000
and .879 separately.
Independent Samples aTest
Levene's Test for

uality of Varianc t-test for Equality of Means
95% Confidence
Interval of the
Mean Std. Error Difference
F Sig. t df ig. (2-tailed
Difference
DifferenceLower Upper
LAI Equal variances .035 .851 -4.479 94 .000 -1.534 .342 -2.214 -.854
Equal variances
-4.494 93.497 .000 -1.534 .341 -2.212 -.856
assumed
a.AGE = 2
Independent Samples aTest
Levene's Test for

uality of Varianc t-test for Equality of Means
95% Confidence
Interval of the
Mean Std. Error Difference
F Sig. t df ig. (2-tailed
Difference
DifferenceLower Upper
LAI Equal variances 3.345 .070 -.152 113 .879893E-02 .321 -.686 .588
Equal variances
-.156 13.000 .876893E-02 .313 -.669 .572
assumed
a.AGE = 3
The tests’ results indicate that Above-40s (age=2) from

different residences have significant difference in understanding of
Lai (来), and below-40s (age=3) do not.
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From the table above, we find that the median of the

northern Above-40s’s ranges is below 10 while it is opposite for
southern Above-40s, which indicates that the former think the
median should smaller than the number-word before Lai(来) while
the latter think in an opposite way.
5.2. Ji (几)
5.2.1 Preliminary findings
5.2.1.1 The investigated persons’ understanding of the ji(几)’s

number range
Table 4: Beijing
range
of valu
es Below 10 Around 10 Above 10
age
People more than 0（0%） 6（20%） 24（80%）

40 years old

0（0%）
40 years old
Total 0（0%） 9（18%） 42（82%）
lived for a long time in Beijing understand the number range of
Number word +Ji (几) + measure word (take shi ji ge (十几个) for
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example). It seems that above 80% Beijingers (no matter below-
40s or above-40s) think the number of Number word + Ji (几) +
measure word is larger than the number-word before Ji (几).
Table 5: northern parts (includes Beijing)
lived for a long time in northern parts understand the number range
of Number word + Ji (几) + measure word. We can see that most
northern persons think in the same way with Beijingers.
Table 6: southern parts
range of
age
People more than 0（0%） 13（25%） 38（75%）

40 years old

0（0%）
years old
Total 21（18%） 94（82%）

0（0%）
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Table 6 studies how the persons who were born and have lived
for a long time in southern parts understand the number range of
range of
age
People more than 0（0%） 6（13%） 40（87%）

40 years old

0（0%）
years old
Total 0（0%） 16（17%） 80（83%）
Number word + Ji (几) + measure word. We can see that most

southern persons also think in the same way with persons listed
above.
5.2.1.2 Conclusion
From the preliminary statistics, we conclude below: different aged
Beijingers from different residences basically have the same
understanding of Ji ( 几 ), and most persons think the number
indicated by Number word + Ji (几) + measure word is larger than
the number-word before Ji (几).
We want to test if there is significant difference in the understandings
of Ji (几) between persons of different ages and different residence.
Below are the results of SPSS mean-square tests. The first one is the
mean-square table. We can see that sig. of area is .073, while sig. of
age is .057.
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Dependent Variable: JI
Type III Sum
Corrected Model 9.738a 2 4.869 3.369 .036
Intercept 34890.237 1 34890.237 24140.75 .000
AREA 4.684 1 4.684 3.241 .073
AGE 5.299 1 5.299 3.666 .057
Error 300.619 208 1.445
Total 35761.660 211
5.2.2.1 Conclusion
We can judge from the significance tests of differences that persons
from different residences have no significant difference in
understanding of Ji (几); and so is that between persons of different
ages.
The median, Std.Deviation and N. are listed below.
5.3. Duo (多)

5.3.1 Preliminary findings
5.3.1.1 The investigated persons’ understanding of the Duo (多)’s

number range
Table 7: Beijing
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Table 7 studies how the persons who were born and have lived for
a long time in Beijing understand the number range of Number word
+ Duo (多) + measure word (take 十 Duo (多) 个 for example).
Almost all the investigated Beijingers think the number indicated by
Number word + Duo ( 多 ) + measure word is larger than the
number-word before Duo (多).
Table 8: northern parts (includes Beijing)
Table 8 studies how the persons who were born and have lived for a
long time in northern parts understand the number range of Number
word + Duo (多) + measure word. We can see that most northern
persons think in the same way with Beijingers. Table 9: southern
parts
range
of Below 10 Around 10 Above 10
values
age
People more 0（0%） 6（12%） 45（88%）

than 40 years
old

0（0%）
40 years old
Total 0（0%） 11（10%） 104（90%）

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lived for a long time in southern parts understand the number range
range of
age
People more than 0（0%） 4（9%） 42（91%）

40 years old

0（0%）
40 years old
Total 0（0%） 9（9%） 87（91%）
indicated by Number word + Ji (几) + measure word. We can see that

most southern persons also think in the same way with persons listed
above.
5.3.1.2 Conclusion
From the preliminary statistics, we concludethe following:
different year-old Beijingers from different residences basically have the
same understanding of Duo (多), and most persons think the number
indicated by Number word + Duo (多) + measure word is larger than the
number-word before Ji (几).
range of
age
People more than 0（0%） 2（7%） 28（93%）

40 years old

0（0%）
years old
Total 0（0%） 2（4%） 49（96%）

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We want to test if there is a significant difference in the
understandings of Duo (多) between persons of different ages and from
different residence.
Below are the results of SPSS mean-square tests. The first one is
the mean-square table. We can see that sig. of area is .720, while sig. of
age is .098.

Dependent Variable: DUO
Type III Sum
Corrected Model 4.817a 2 2.409 1.465 .233
Intercept 36088.940 1 36088.940 21952.67 .000
AREA .212 1 .212 .129 .720
AGE 4.552 1 4.552 2.769 .098
Error 341.940 208 1.644
Total 37101.102 211
5.3.2.1 Conclusion
We can judge from the significance tests of differences that
persons from different residences and different age groups have no
significant difference in understanding of Duo (多).
The median, Std.Deviation and N. are listed below.
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Comparing with the median of Ji (几), we got the conclusion

that the degree of consistency of the understanding and usage of Duo
(多) of native speakers are higher.
5.4. The comparison of the expression form of three approximate
numbers
We will test in this part that whether there are significant differences
of native speakers’ understanding of the expression form of three
approximate numbers .That is to say the range represented by Lai
(来)，ji（几），duo（多）in people’s conception are approaching or
distinct.
5.4.1 People more than 40 years old and less than 40 years old
Using repeated measurement variance to analyze, we found
out that no matter how old the native speakers are, they hold the idea
that there are significant differences towards three approximate
numbers. Therefore, we use paired T test to make a further analysis.
The table below reflects the result analyzed by SPSS with
statistics of people over 40 years old through paired T test.
According to the table, we could find out the sig value of people over
40 years old about Ji-Duo (几多) and Lai-Duo（来多）is .000 and the
sig value of Ji-Duo (几多) is .068.
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Paired SamplesaTest
Paired Differences
5% Confidenc
Interval of the
td. Erro Difference
Meand. Deviati Mean Lower Upper t df g. (2-taile
Pair LAI - J2.336 1.971 .201 2.736 1.937 1.617 95 .000
Pair LAI - D2.580 2.043 .208 2.994 2.166 2.376 95 .000
Pair JI - DU-.244 1.292 .132 -.506 6E-02 1.848 95 .068
a.AGE = 2

statistics of people less than 40 years old through paired T test.
According to the table, we could find out the sig value of people less
than 40 years old about Lai-Ji ( 来几 ) and Lai-Duo ( 来多 ) are
all .028.
Paired Samples aTest
Paired Differences
5% Confidenc
Interval of the
td. Erro Difference
Meand. DeviatioMean Lower Upper t df g. (2-taile
Pair LAI - J-1.205 1.670 .156 -1.514 -.897 -7.741 114 .000
Pair LAI - D-1.435 1.753 .163 -1.759 -1.111 -8.777 114 .000
Pair JI - DU-.230 1.108 .103 -.434 0E-02 -2.223 114 .028
a.AGE = 3
For people over 40 years old, there are significant difference

on understanding and using of Lai-Ji (来几) or Lai-Duo (来多）。
However, there is almost no difference on understanding and using
of Ji-Duo (几多) for people more than 40 years old.
For people less than 40, there are significant difference on
understanding and using of Lai-Ji( 来几 ) ， Lai-Duo( 来多） and
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Ji-Duo(几多)。
5.4.2 The southern and the northern
Analyzing with repeated measurement variance, we
conclude that no matter if the native speakers are southerners or
northerners, they have a significant distinction on three approximate
numbers. Let’s use paired T test to make a further analysis.
According to the table, we find out the sig. value of people less than
40 years old about Lai-Ji(来几) and Lai-Duo(来多）are .000 . As for
J-Duo, the sig. value is .001
a
Paired Samples Test
Paired Differences
95% Confidence
Interval of the
Std. Erro Difference
Mean d. Deviatio Mean Lower Upper t df g. (2-tailed
Pair LAI - JI -1.902 2.048 .191 -2.280 -1.523 -9.958 114 .000
Pair LAI - D -2.303 2.166 .202 -2.703 -1.903 11.401 114 .000
Pair JI - DU -.401 1.204 .112 -.623 -.179 -3.572 114 .001
a.direct = north

According to the table, we could find out the sig. value of people less
than 40 years old about Lai-Ji (来几) and Lai-Duo (来多）are .000.
As for Ji-Duo, the sig. value is .744.
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Paired SamplesaTest
Paired Differences
5% Confidenc
nterval of the
td. ErroDifference
Meand. DeviatiMean LowerUpper t df g. (2-taile
Pair LAI - 1.502
J 1.677 .171 1.842 1.162 8.777 95 .000
Pair LAI - 1.541
D 1.623 .166 1.869 1.212 9.300 95 .000
Pair JI - DU
5E-02 1.154 .118 -.272 .195 -.327 95 .744
a.direct = south
For northern people ， there are significant differences

regarding the understanding and using of Lai-Ji（来几）, Lai-Duo (来
多）and Ji-Duo (几多）；for people of the southern part, there are
significant differences about the understanding and using of Lai-Ji
(来几）, Lai-Duo (来多）).As for Ji-Duo (几多）, there is almost no
difference.
5.4.3 Conclusion
According to the comprehensive analysis of the results of 5.1
and 5.2
age
People more than 40
People less than 40 years old
years old
area
Significant difference Significant difference about

about Lai-Ji( 来 Lai-Ji( 来几） ,Lai-Duo( 来
Northern
几） ,Lai-Duo(来多）多）and Ji-Duo(几多）
and Ji-Duo(几多）
Southern Significant difference Significant difference about

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about Lai-Ji( 来 Lai-Ji( 来几） ,Lai-Duo( 来

几） ,Lai-Duo(来多）; 多）and Ji-Duo(几多）
Almost no difference
about Ji-Duo(几多）
In addition, according to the median in the table below, all of

the native speakers’ understanding has a common law: Lai ＜ Ji ＜
Duo
Lai（来） Ji（几） Duo（多）
Northern 10.928 12.830 13.231
Southern 11.619 13.121 13.158
More than4 10.456 12.793 13.036
Less than40 11.898 13.103 13.333
6. The conclusion about approximate Lai (来), Ji (几), Duo(多)

6.1. Conclusion
(1) Lai（来）
Native speakers of different areas have different ideas
towards Lai(来)，For the native speakers of more than 40 years old,
their understanding of Lai(来) is quite distinct: northern native
speakers of more 40 years old think that number+ Lai (来) + measure
word means the median should be less than the value which is in
front of Lai (来)， Northern native speakers of more 40 years old
think that number+ Lai (来) + measure word means the median
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should be more than the value which is in front of La I (来)。Most
of the northern and the southern who are less than 40 years old think
that number+ Lai (来) + measure word means the median should be
more than the value which is in front of Lai (来) 。
As the northern native speakers get younger and younger, the
range of number+ Lai (来) + measure word will move from the
number which is smaller than the value in front of Lai (来) to the the
number which is larger than the value in front of Lai(来). The
southern native speakers of dissimilar ages all think that the median
should be larger than the number in front of Lai (来).
(2) Ji (几) and Duo(多)

The Chinese native speakers of different ages or from
different areas hold almost no different ideas on the understanding
and using of Ji (几) and Duo (多). Most of them consider that
The value represented by the form of number + Ji (几)/Duo (多) +

measure word is larger than the number in front of Ji (几) and Duo
(多).
(3) Between Lai (来) Ji (几) and Duo (多)

The northern people think that three approximate expressive
forms have exact difference; the southern people who are younger
than 40 think than same as the northern people, but the southerners
who are elder than 40 think three approximate expressive forms have
no differences.
6.2. Grand conclusion
The result of the investigation reflects that on one hand , for
northern native speakers , as they become younger , the range of
number+ Lai(来) + measure word will move from the number which
is smaller than the value in front of Lai(来) to the number which is
larger than the value in front of Lai( 来 ). The southern native
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speakers of dissimilar ages all think that the median should be
larger than the number in front of Lai (来). On the other hand ,
although most of the native speakers of different ages or from
different ages believe the value represented by the form of number +
Ji(几)/Duo(多)+ measure word is larger than the number in front of
Ji/ Duo, there are approximately 10 percent of both southerners and
northerners who believe that the value represented by the form of
number + Ji(几)/Duo(多)+ measure word is smaller than the number
in front of Ji(几) and Duo(多).
Thus it can be seen the value in the range of Lai (来）moves

to the larger value which in in front of Lai (来）. However, the value
in the range of Ji (几)/ Duo (多） moves to the smaller value which
is in front of them. We can infer that the phenomenon is the result
which is simulated by three approximate number forms with both
similar forms and usage.
In everyday life, the three approximate numbers’ expressive
forms will be more convergent for the mutual influence of the
northern and southern dialects generated by the flowage of the
population and the influence on youngsters because of the
popularization of Putonghua.
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Problem of Learning through English by Urdu

Medium Students
1. Lt. Col. Dr. Muhammad Shahbudin Shah, (Co-author),

Commandant, HRDC, Multan.
2. Dr. Nabi Bux Jumani, (Co-author),
Assistant Professor,
Faculty of Education,
Allama Iqbal Open University, Islmabad.
3. Shahinshah Babar Khan, (Co-author),
Research Fellow, Allama Iqbal Open University,
Islamabad.
Abstract
This study determines and reports on how ELT is conducted
at the intermediate level in our homeland. It answers whether the
syllabus taught has components which effect communicative skills of
the learner. It investigates and answers if the teachers successfully
transfer the expected knowledge in a most befitting manner. The
survey method was adopted and the population of the study
comprised of the students of intermediate level studying in Federal
government colleges. A questionnaire was used for data collection.
Key terms/words: medium of instruction.
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1. Introduction
English is an international language .It is spoken across the
world both as a native and as a second or foreign language. It is the
central medium of communication in the United States, the United
Kingdom, Ireland, Canada, Australia, New Zealand, South Africa
and numerous other countries.It is the official language of many
nations in the commonwealth countries such as Bangladesh, India
and Pakistan and they use it as a medium of instruction both at the
school and college levels.
English is learnt because people have found out that
knowledge of English is a passport for a better career, better pay,
advanced knowledge, and for communication with the entire world.
It is also learned for the literature it possesses, and for the variety and
rich experience it provides. It has replaced French as the language of
diplomacy. In this computer age, it is bound to expand its domains of
use everywhere.Crystal (1995) says “most of the scientific
technological and academic information in the world is expressed
and communicated in English and over 80 % of all the information
stored in electronic retrieval system is in English.”
What are the constraints or problems faced by learners in an
ELT process by intermediate students?
English language teaching in Pakistan (ELT) at the
intermediate level does not produce desired results. Books prescribed
for the level do not include needs of the learners. Moreover, there has
been no change/modification /development brought in them during
the last two decades. Rehman (2002) says “the text books at the
higher secondary level had not been revised for nearly twenty years”.
Although the textbooks are literature oriented, yet it is presumed by
the authorities that the end product would automatically become well
conversant with the language once he/she completed the course. At
the intermediate level, the learner is handed over to the teachers who
are normally not trained with the teaching techniques. Prior to this
level, the same learner was taught by educationally trained teachers
i.e. M.A with B.Ed or M.Ed qualification under strict supervision
within the school atmosphere.
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In college, a learner is set free to study at his /her own will
without much interference of the teacher. He/she might seek only
guidelines from the teacher, which sometimes would prove
insufficient for him/her. As a result, he/she would fall an easy prey to
the habit of cramming by using study aids/notes easily available in
the market, which might not provide him/her with relevant
information for a particular question.
The basic aim of teaching a language is to inculcate the
ability to communicate successfully. For this purpose, integration of
four skills i.e. listening, reading, writing and speaking is
compulsorily required. Since literature teaching is focused at this
level, no interaction is involved practically in the classroom.Rather
lecture method is preferred. This results in a lack of communicative
ability of the learner. Hence, the study focuses on three different
factors involved in the process of teaching/learning the English
language i.e. the textbooks, the teacher and the learner as these
elements are to contribute much in the development of
communicative skills of the learners.
In Pakistan there are three different variables with regards
to ELT .There are English medium schools, which focus on the
English language. There are other institutions, which stress upon
Urdu, laying comparatively less stress on English. There is yet
another set of institutions which emphasize much the
regional/provincial languages i.e. Sindhi, Pushto, and Bahravei. In
such institutions, English is given minimum weightage for achieving
certificates at the SSC level. Consequently, all the three categories of
institutions serve as feeding institutions to the intermediate level. At
this level, learners from different backgrounds as mentioned above,
face different problems, as they have to switch over from various
mediums of instruction to the English medium.
At HSSC level, various factors are involved with special
reference to ELT .Firstly, what is to be learnt (syllabus)? Secondly,
who is to guide as a role model (teacher)? Thirdly where to learn
(institution)? Fourthly what is the target (learner)? And lastly how
the performance of the students is assessed (examinations)? In short,
there is a requirement to see all these dimensions i.e. text, teacher
and learner and their attitudes, teaching methodologies etc and
evaluation in order to know if they were aligned with a well defined
target or the learner is to fall into a quagmire after passing his /her
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intermediate level.
3.1 Language and its learning
Language is frequently used to refer to several forms of
human activity. It focuses on the oral and written medium that
enables the human beings to communicate with each other. Language
is characterized as a system of arbitrary vocal symbols by means of
which members of a society interact with one another. According to
Chomsky (1988) “the learning of a language is an exclusive faculty
of human beings and does not exist in any other species. Although,
animals like monkeys, dolphins and some others can communicate
through language; but they cannot use language as creatively as
human beings. They can communicate only in a fixed way through
the help of certain specific signals. The language faculty appears to
be a property common to the species and unique to it in its
essentials.”
In the words of Krashen and Terrell (1988) “language
acquisition can only take place when a message, which is being
transmitted, is understood i.e. when the focus is on what is being said
rather than on the form of the message.” It can be said that language
is best taught when it is used to transmit messages, not when it is
explicitly taught for conscious learning.
3.2 Learning English as a second language
A second language is acquired after the acquisition of the
first or native language is established .The term is frequently used to
refer to the acquisition of a second language after a person has
reached adulthood. However, he has to put in extra effort to achieve
the competence in learning a second language. It also refers to
learning a foreign language. Lado (1964) says “Learning a second
language is more than learning a description of it.It involves
imitating, practicing, memorizing, listening, interpreting, reading,
writing and speaking etc.”
4. Methodology (Data collection and analysis)
The research is empirical.The population of the study
comprised of the students of the intermediate level studying in
federal government colleges. A questionnaire for the students was
developed to collect first hand information regarding text books of
English at the intermediate level, English language teaching
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methodology used by the teachers, the teaching style of the
teachers and its impact on the development of communicative skills
of the learners. Responses of research population were recorded with
numerical values.
The data collected from the participants is presented below:
Table No.1 Causes of listening difficulty N=100
Cause Yes No Χ2 Χ2 Significanc

e at 0.05
Calculate Table
level
d value value
Strange 80 20 36.00 3.841 Significant

sound
(80) (20)
system
of the
speaker
Difficult 75 25 25.00 3.841 Significant

grammar
(75) (25)
structure
Strange 60 40 4.00 3.841 Significant

stress
(60) (40)
pattern
Fast 72 28 19.36 3.841 Significant

speaking
(72) (28)
speed
Broken 64 36 7.84 3.841 Significant

sentence
(64) (36)
s
Lack of 78 22 31.36 3.841 Significant

vocabula
(78) (22)
ry
Use of 81 19 38.44 3.841 Significant

slang
58
(81) (19)
Figures in parentheses denote percentage.

All the statements significant at 0.05 levels are considered to
be true.
Table No.1 shows that the majority of students confirmed the
cause of listening impairment. 80 % of them thought that the strange
sound system of the speakers was one of the contributory factors of
the above said impairment whereas 20 % of the students
disapproved such proportion.75 % of the students viewed that
different grammar structures hindered the acquisition of listening
skill whereas 25 % opposed the idea.60 % against 40 % of them
viewed that strange stress pattern was also one of the causes.72 %
thought that the speed of speaking also contributes towards the
impairment of listening skills whereas 28 % did not agree to it.64 %
of the students considered broken sentences as one of the causes of
listening difficulty whereas 36 % did not consider it as a cause.78 %
of the students confirmed lack of vocabulary was also one of the
causes of the above said impairment whereas only 22 % showed their
disagreement against the proposition. Last but not the least 81 %
thought that the use of slang and colloquial forms by the speakers in
real life situations does contribute towards the listening difficulty
whereas only 19 % of the respondents disagree.
Table No.2: Causes of reading difficulty N=100
Cause Yes Χ2 Χ2 Significanc

No e at 0.05
Calculated Tabl
level
value e
value
Loud 81 19 3.84 Significant

reading 1
(81) (19) 38.44
Slow 75 25 25.00 3.84 Significant

moment 1
(75) (25)
of eyes on
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the text
Feeling 66 34 10.24 3.84 Significant

hesitation 1
(66) (34)
in the
class
Habit of 72 28 19.36 3.84 Significant

reading 1
(72) (28)
slowly

vocabular 1
(69) (31)
y
Lengthy 58 42 2.56 3.84 Non-Signif

sentences 1 icant
(58) (42)

knowledg 1
(70) (30)
e of
grammar
rules
Placing 75 25 25.00 3.84 Significant

finger 1
(75) (25)
/pencil on
the text

All statements significant at 0.05 levels are considered to be
true and statements that are non-significant at 0.05 levels are not
true.
Table 2 explains clearly that 81 % of the responding
students agreed that loud reading hindered their reading ability while
19 % opposed it.75 % students confirmed that slow movement of the
eyes on the text caused reading impairment while 25 % viewed
against it . 66 % thought that they felt hesitation while reading in the
calss.34 % forwarded their comments that it was not the case in their
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respect.72 % believed that slow reading habit was one of the
causes of reading difficulty whereas 28 % thought it otherwise.69 %
considered lack of relevant vocabulary as one of the contributory
factors in reading impairment whereas 31 % viewed it otherwise. 58
% assumed that lengthy sentences hindered the reading
comprehension whereas 42 % didn’t consider it so.70 % supposed
lack of the knowledge of grammatical rules contributed towards the
difficulty in reading comprehension whereas 30% viewed it
otherwise.75 % confirmed that they placed finger or pencil on the
text while reading which impeded their reading comprehension
whereas 25 % opposed it.
Table No.3: Causes of difficulty in spoken expression N=100
Yes No Χ2 Χ2 Significance
Cause at 0.05 level
Calculated Tabl
value e
valu
e

of 1
(68) (32)
hesitatio
n

that 1
(60) (40)
other
will
laugh at
them

knowle (28) 1
(72)
dge of
gramma
r rules

vocabul 1
(60) (40)
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ary

translati 1
(63) (37)
on
process
from
mother
tongue
to
English

confide 1
(72) (28)
nce
Interfer 77 23 29.16 3.84 Significant

ence of 1
(77) (23)
mother
tongue

All the statements are significant at 0.05 level considered to
be true.
The above table points out that 68 % of the responding
students acceded to the truth that they felt hesitation while
communicating in English.32 % didn’t have that problem. 60% of
the students suffered from the inhibition that the other students
would laugh at them if they converse in English.40 % of them did
not have this problem.72 % acknowledged that lack of grammar
rules caused them not to speak.28 % opposed it. 60% had the
problem of the lack of vocabulary whereas 40 % viewed against this
propostition.63 % accepted the fact that they could not speak
confidently due to slow translation of thought process from mother
tongue to English whereas 37 % did not consider it a problem. 72 %
of the student’s felt they would not speak in English due to lack of
confidence but rest of the 28 % didn’t consider it a cause.77 %
considered the interference of their mother tongue as a hurdle in
spoken expression whereas 23 % replied negatively.
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Table No.4: Causes of writing difficulty N=100
Cause Yes No Χ2 Χ2 Significance

at 0.05 level
Calculate Table
d value value

confide
(60) (40)
nce

knowle
(62) (38)
dge of
gramm
ar rules
Writing 58 42 2.56 3.841 Non-Signific

wrong ant
(58) (42)
sentenc
es
Punctu 55 45 1.00 3.841 Non-Signific

ation ant
(55) (4)
proble
m

translat
(69) (31)
ion
process
from
mother
tongue
Lack of 56 44 1.44 3.841 Non-Signific

vocabul ant
(56) (44)
ary
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Speaki 25 75 25.00 3.841 Significant

ng
(25) (75)
while
writhin
g

All the statements are significant at 0.05 level considered to
be true.
The above table shows that 60% of the responding students
agreed that a lack of confidence hindered their writing ability while
40% opposed it .62 % agreed that lack of the knowledge of grammar
rules caused impairment of writing ability while 38 % viewed
against it.58 % thought that they felt fear of writing wrong
sentences contributed to writing deficiency.42 % didn’t consider it
such cause.55 % considered lack of the knowledge of punctuation as
one of the causes of writing difficulty.45 % viewed otherwise.69 %
believed that slow translation process from the mother tongue was
one of the causes of writing difficulty whereas 31 % thought it
otherwise.56 % considered lack of relevant vocabulary as one of
the contributory factors in writing impairment whereas 44 % viewed
it otherwise.25 % assumed the habit of speaking while writing
caused the writing difficulty whereas 75 % didn’t consider it so.
Table No 5: Test of memory N=100
Examinations are test of memory
SA % A % UNC % DA % % Χ2 Χ2 Mean
age age SDA age at .05
age age
40 40 25 2 2 2 28 28 5 5 51 9.4 3.7
5 .9 88
Significant df= 4
Table 5 indicates that the calculated value of Χ2 is
51.9,which is greater than table value at level 0.05 ,it means that the
majority confirm that examination are test of memory.
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The above table unveils that 65 % of the respondents
confirmed that it was a test of memory only.2 % could not decide
whereas 33 % considered it otherwise. Mean score was 3.7
Table No.6: Neglecting speaking, listening and reading skills
N=100
Reading/speaking/Listening skills are ignored
SA % A % UNC % DA % SDA % Χ2 Χ2
age age age age age at .05
40 40 15 15 15 15 20 20 10 10 27.5 9.488
Significant df= 4
Table 6 indicates that the calculated value of Χ2 is 27.9,
which is greater than table value at level 0.05; it means that the
majority confirm that reading/speaking listening skills are ignored.
5. Findings
a. The students considered that the listening skill remained
under developed, as they were not exposed to the native
accent through any audio visual facility. English was not
used in their society or at home. So the students only listened
to their teachers.
b.The students expressed that reading skill did not develop to the
desired level. As their pronunciation was not good they felt shy while
reading in the class.
c.Most of the students confirmed their inability to write on new
topic.Creative writing remained undeveloped.
d.Students confirmed that the final examination tested only writing
skills of the learner. It was a test of the memory rather than the
language used. The students showed their dissatisfaction on it.
e.Majority of the student admitted that they felt hesitation while
reading in the class room.
6. Recommendations
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a. Efforts should be made to allocate equal importance to all
communicative skills in the syllabus selected for the intermediate
level.
b. Speaking speed of the natives hinders listening comprehension of
the learners as a translation process from mother tongue to English or
English to mother tongue is very slow. This difficulty can be
overcome by giving maximum exposure to the non native speakers
of the native speakers.
c. Students should be told clearly by the teachers not to read aloud or
put pen, pencil or finger on the text as these cause slow speed of
reading.
d. Students should be encouraged to talk and take part in various
role-playing activities in the classroom.
e. Students should be encouraged to discuss their viewpoint in
English class freely.
f. English teachers should always talk in English to their learner
inside or outside the classroom.
g. Students should be made aware that non-natives have problems of
incorrect pronunciation. Further to this, pronunciation error should
be corrected very politely.
h. Students should be made conscious of the detrimental habit of
speaking while writing. It should be curbed as early as possible. It
has its detrimental effects on writing and other communicative
abilities.
h. Fear of committing error should be annihilated by providing
maximum chances to the students of all the four skills in the
classroom.
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Copyright Statement
Copyright © 2009. Lt. Col. Dr. Muhammad Shahbudin, Dr. Nabi
Bux Jumani and Shahinshah Babar Khan. The authors assign to the
NUML Research Magazine and the National University of Modern
Language a non-exclusive license to use the document for
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Phonetic Mood of English,
Direct Method and GTM
Arshad Mahmood (Co-author),

Lecturer,
Deptt. of English, NUML, Islamabad.
Muhammad Uzair (Co-author),
Lecturer,
Deptt. of English, NUML, Islamabad.
Abstract
The present research is an attempt to prove that any language,

especially a foreign language like English, cannot be learned by
ignoring its phonological aspect.Each language is composed of
sounds. They are called phonemes. Only through these sounds can
one get to know the exact pronunciation of the words of that
language, especially when the language is phonetically deceptive
(like English). In English, there is an antipodal difference between
the orthographic and phonetic pronunciations of various words. The
researchers are also of the view that teaching phonology of a
language through the Grammar Translation Method (GTM) is almost
impossible. If a teacher wants to teach his students the pronunciation
of any language, he should focus on the phonological aspect of it
instead of paying too much attention to its orthography which may
give them the knowledge of the language but not the
communicative competence which is possible only if the very
language is taught in the target language.
Key words/terms: Grammar Translation Method; phonetics
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1. Introduction
Each language has its own phonological behaviour, rules and
patterns. Phonology plays a very important role in the learning of an
L2 as it provides a method of pronouncing the words of that language
accurately. Phonology makes use of particular symbols, whose
detailed charts and diagrams have been provided by IPA
(International Phonetic Association), which help the learner
pronounce words of a language correctly. Each symbol stands for
one and only one sound, called a phoneme.
Ignoring phonology of a language means ignoring its verbal
aspect; speech is more significant and communicative than writing. It
is primary as writing comes at a later stage naturally. Writing in fact
is an outcome of speech. If we observe the linguistic development of
a child, we will come to realize that he learns speech prior to writing.
Thus, in order to capture the essence of a language, its soul, it is
extremely important to learn its phonology. Any native speaker of a
language unconsciously acquires the phonological rules and
behaviour of his mother tongue but a foreign learner of that language
has to make a conscious effort to learn those rules systematically.
English as mentioned before is a very deceptive language
phonologically, therefore, a different and special mode of teaching is
required to teach it because the learning of English is not possible if
its phonological aspect is ignored. As far as the English language
teaching in Pakistan is concerned, it is done through the Grammar
Translation Method (GTM) in most educational institutions which
ignores phonological aspect that results in poor linguistic
performance of English on the part of most Pakistani learners even
after having done their Graduation.
Although pedagogic trends are changing now, especially in
the private sector, yet the Grammar Translation Method is in use in
various public sector institutions. The main problem is that in such
institutions English is not taught as a language but as a subject that
has to be completed and if possible revised within the academic year.
So, in order to meet the challenge, teachers adopt the Grammar
Translation Method.
2. Hypothesis
Direct Method should be used in teaching/learning English
pronunciation to Pakistani learners.
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Phonology is a branch of linguistics that deals with the
human speech sounds of a language. The main focus of phonology is
on the organization of sounds in the phonological system of a
language. Such an organization of sounds leads to the production of
meaningful words in that language. For example, /s/, /e/ and /t/
sounds are the part of English sound inventory and become
semantically valid if they are placed in a particular sequence, i.e.
‘set’. If we try to change this sequence into some other sequences,
we will not be able to get any meanings out of those in English,
though these sequences might be semantically valid in some other
language. This specific arrangement of sounds is referred to as
phonotactics.
So, the phonotactic rules allow particular phonemic
sequences in a language and disallow others, following the
phonological mood of the language.
The English that is being taught in Pakistan is mainly the RP
(Received Pronunciation) version. It has its own peculiarities. It is a
non-rhotic variety of English: the / r / sound are conditionally
pronounced in this dialect of English. The rules that monitor the
articulation of the / r / sound, in a word or phrase in RP, are given in
the following lines:
a- The / r / sound is always pronounced initially in RP.
b- Medially, it is dropped if followed by a consonant sound, e.g.
‘heart’ / ha: t /. It is however pronounced if followed by a
vowel sound, e.g. ‘credit’ / kredit /.
c- It is always dropped finally, e.g. ‘car’ / ka: / and ‘father’/ fa:
ðə /. But if the next word begins with a vowel sound, /r/
sound will be pronounced, e.g. ‘The car is parked’ / ðə ka: r
iz pa: kt /. This phenomenon is called linking.
Linking is a term used in phonology to refer to a sound which
is introduced between linguistic units, usually for the ease of
pronunciation.
Keeping in mind all such complexities and phonological
tricks of English, one might instantaneously claim that the Grammar
Translation Method is a failure as far as the teaching of the spoken
aspect of English is concerned and that there must be a method of
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teaching through which a language could be taught as a language
not as a subject, and that would give proper consideration to the
phonological behaviour of the target language.
The Grammar Translation Method is a partially flawed method
of teaching and has been abandoned by many educational institutions.
It is partially flawed because it mainly focuses on writing and
translation, and to some extent reading. So, it generally makes
learners lexically, syntactically and grammatically reasonably
strong.The researchers as teachers of English as a second lanuage
can claim safely that such learners improve their written expression
but hardly become good speakers of the target language. They feel
hesitant and lose confidence if asked to vocalize their feelings in the
target language. Furthermore, their pronunciation grows more
orthographic than phonetic. They follow spellings rather than sounds
and thus often commit phonological mistakes. In order to speak a
target language in a better way, one must learn how to pronounce its
words. In case of English one has to be even more careful because
English is not as phonetic a language as some other languages like
German, are because there is no one to one correspondence between
its sounds and letters. So, a better method is needed to cope with the
problem. It is but the Direct Method.
The direct method is a method of foreign or second language
teaching where only the target language is used, meaning is
associated between the word/term and the concept signified with the
help of actions objects, mimes, gestures, and situation.Moreover
grammar is taught inductively and reading and writing come after
speaking.
The direct method, developed in the late 19th century as a
reaction against the Grammar Translation Method teaches a foreign
tongue in a better and more natural way. It gives proper consideration
to the spoken aspect of the target language besides paying attention
to listening, reading and writing. Its main focus is on the
‘performance’ (the execution of the language) than on ‘competence’
(the knowledge of the language). Through the direct method, a
language is not taught merely as a subject, it is rather coped with as a
language. This method gives more importance to the functional
needs of the learners in the target language. It makes them verbalize
their feelings in the language being learnt. Where the main focus of
the Grammar Translation Method is on grammar, translation, reading
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and writing, the direct method attends to the oral needs of the
learners. The role of mother tongue or L1 is almost completely
reduced in the direct method. For example, an item of vocabulary or
an idiomatic expression, through this method, will not be taught by
providing the learners with an equivalent form from their L1. The
concept of learners will, rather, are cleared by using that word or
idiom in a particular context. That’s why the teaching of a foreign
language through the direct method is basically more contextual and
less textual.
Luckily, changing trends in ELT have been improving the
standard of the learning / teaching of English in the country for some
years. Now the verbal aspect of it is also receiving some attention.
Some institutions have started teaching phonology due to which the
learners are getting benefited a great deal. The learners in such
institutions are first of all taught the phonemes of the target language
that is followed by some rules of pronunciation. Finally, they are
given a great deal of both written and verbal practice. During our ten
–year- teaching period, we have observed that many English
language teachers in Pakistan now realize that they must improve
themselves phonologically in order to cope with the rapid changes
occurring in the teaching learning scenario in the country. For many
of them it is a ‘swim or sink’ situation now. And it is in fact so
because it has been observed by the researchers themselves that in
the National University of Modern Languages, there is a few
students in each session whose pronunciation is far better than many
traditional ELT teachers any where, especially in government schools
and colleges. In such a situation a teacher with flawed pronunciation
cannot survive. So, he has to ‘love or leave’ the profession.Naturally
this approach is beneficial for the students of English also.
4. Research methodology
This research is an analysis of the corpus selected randomly
from different sources: books, Oxford Advanced Learner’s and BBC
dictionaries, personal observation etc. It was followed by the
comparative study to justify the statement of the problem that GTM
was ineffective to teach English pronunciation and also the
researchers’ hypothesis: Direct Method should be used in
teaching/learning English pronunciation.
The research is qualitative in nature.
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5. Data analysis and findings
Urdu and English are two distinct languages phonologically, so
are their phonetic behaviours. Urdu pronunciation is more
orthographic than that of English and is naturally more reliable even
for its foreign learners. As Pakistani learners are used to the
orthographic nature of the Urdu language and they do not face many
problems while learning the other eastern languages such as Arabic,
Persian, and Pushto and Sindhi, they apply the same formula to
English words as well. As a result, they mispronounce most of the
words and in some cases they tend to pronounce even those sounds
which should be silent, which cause an intelligibility problem.
Unfortunately, this trend has been going on since long. Even teachers
do not realize the fact that each language has its own phonological
mood which has to be studied and taught systematically and that the
language cannot be taught at the expense of its phonology
Many of the English letters have more than one sound value.
Some have as many as seven or even eight. For example, the first
letter of the English alphabet, i.e. “a”, gives a phonologically distinct
sound in each word in the following:
father /a:/ ago / ə / tall / ɔ: / hat /

æ/
vary / eə / orange / i / nation /ei / any / e /.
Apart from the sound values of individual letters, there are
combinations of letters used to produce different sounds. They have
their own sound values, e.g. ‘ea’ combination gives phonologically
seven distinct sounds in the following words:-
heat / i: / head / e / heart / a: / earth / з: /
fear / iə / great / ei / tear / eə /
Similarly ‘oo’ will be pronounced quite differently in the
following words:
Flood / ʌ / foot / ʊ / fool / u: / poor / υə /.

Another complicated combination of letters in English is
‘ough’. Problems which this
Combination can cause for a foreign learner of English can
be observed in the following poem (being reproduced here) by
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Charles Hattell.
o-u-g-h
I’m told p-l-o-u-g-h
Shall be pronounced ‘plow’
“That’s easy, now I know,” say I,
“My English I’ll get through.”
My teacher says, “But in that case,o-u-g-h is ‘oo’.”
so then I laugh and say to him,
“This English makes me cough,”
He says, “not coo, for in that word,
o-u-g-h is ‘off’.”
“Oh, no!” I say, “such varied sounds
Of words make me hiccough.”
He says, “Again my friend, you’re wrong:
o-u-g-h is ‘up’
In hiccough.” Then I cry, “No more.
You make my throat feel rough.”
“No, no!” he cries, “you’re wrong there too:
o-u-g-h is ‘uff’.”
I say, “I try to speak your words;
I can’t pronounce them, though.”
“In time you’ll learn, but now you’re wrong:
o-u-g-h is ‘owe’.”
“I’ll try no more, I shall go mad,
I’ll drown me in this lough.”
“Before you drown yourself, “said he,
“o-u-g-h is ‘okh’.”
He taught no more! I held him fast
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And killed him with a rough.
(Taken from Charles Hattell Loomis, American humorist)
Note: Space of the poem has been reduced. The researchers
cannot eliminate the whole poem since it is very relevant to the topic.
Apart from vocalic sound values, there are also consonantal
sound values that pose the similar problems for the learners. For
example, letters ‘c’, ‘g’ and‘s’ have two, three and four sound values
respectively. Similarly the combinations ‘th’ and ‘ch’ have three
each.
Now, if we look at the sound- vs- letter-phenomenon from the
point of view of the spelling pattern of English, we will come across
more complications. Although it is the ‘sh’ combination that is
mostly used to represent / ∫ / sound in the English words, a foreign
leaner might get terrified to look at a number of spellings (given
below) exploited to produce the same sound:
sugar issue nation tension charade
shop racial mission conscience negotiation
schist spacious palatial spielconscientious sexual
conscious suspicion
Note: The researchers relied upon the Oxford Advanced Learner’s
Dictionary, being used by various educational institutions in
Pakistan.
It will not be wrong to claim that no language can be properly
learned / taught though any such method in which attention to its
phonological rules is not paid properly. And in case of the language
like English, which does not provide one with proper orthographic
guidance, the situation gets even more complicated. Language
learning is not confined to the learning of a few rules of grammar
and morphology since the basic purpose of using language is
communication, which is fundamentally oral not written. As far as
the GTM is concerned, it ignores the oral aspect of the target
language. On the other hand, the Direct Method focuses on the
functional demands of the target language which cannot be fulfilled
by ignoring its phonology. Especially in Pakistan GTM has not been
a successful method for teaching English as a language. Despite the
bleak linguistic landscape in the country, both the syllabi and the
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policy makers are not doing much practically to improve the
situation.
6. Conclusion
The phonological problems of a language cannot be solved
through the Grammar Translation Method. It is only through the
direct method that the phonological needs of a learner can be
fulfilled since this method lays stress on speaking and listening prior
to reading and writing. Learners learning a target language through
this method receive the major part of their linguistic input aurally.
They themselves drill and practice the target language a great deal.
There are plenty of activities that can be exploited through this
method. In a very short span of time, learners shake off their
hesitation and start participating in the classroom activities very
enthusiastically. They get to know the correct pronunciation of
various words every day through their teacher as well as through the
native model by listening to the cassette or watching a movie
(although these gadgets are basically used in the audio-lingual
method, yet they can be exploited in the direct method). Hence, with
the passage of time they grow phonologically mature where they can
distinguish between the correct and the incorrect versions of a word.
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Appropriating Linguistic Strategies in Bapsi

Sidhwa’s Ice-Candy-Man
Iesar Ahmad,
Department of English,
Gordon College,
Rawalpindi.
Abstract
In a contact zone situation, where two or more languages and
cultures intersect or interface there is bound to be linguistic and
cultural intervention. Such is the situation with Pakistani creative
English literature, where distinctive and variant geo-linguistic and
socio-cultural counter discursive norms are installed in the inherited
colonial language. This paper is based primarily on Bapsi Sidhwa’s
Ice-Candy-Man and attempts to investigate how the author herself
and like other postcolonial writers particularly from the subcontinent
have appropriated and reconstituted the Standard English Language
in their narratives through some appropriating linguistic strategies
like neologism (coinage of loan words and loan blends),
transliteration, untranslated words, code switching/ code mixing,
glossing and translation equivalents.
Key words: neologism; transliteration; glossing
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1. Introduction
To date, in addition to short stories and critical essays, Bapsi
Sidhwa has published four novels: The Crow Eaters (1978); The
Bride (1982); Ice-Candy-Man (1988); An American Brat
(1993).Although, nativization and reconstruction of the Standard
English Language on the linguistic pattern of mother tongue cuts
across Sidhwa’s novels, nonetheless, my analysis of her nativization
and innovative linguistic strategies will be confined to her novel,
Ice-Candy-Man (1988). Based primarily on the examples from this
novel, this paper attempts to explore how Sidhwa has appropriated
and reconstituted the English language through appropriating
linguistic strategies which includes neology, transliteration,
untranslated words, glossing, code switching and translation
equivalents.
To many literary critics of Pakistani English literature,
Sidhwa is the most eminent and celebrated Pakistani novelist. For
instance, her novel Ice-Candy-Man has been hailed as a pioneering
English novel and attracted wide readership across the continents.
Similarly, her earlier fictions have evoked postmodern trends/
characteristics in the new English literatures of the subcontinent.
Before, the publications of her works, Pakistani writing in English
was a category that was almost non-existed in the metropolitan
centers of putative aesthetics norms and coded referentilaity.
Likewise, her induction of innovative linguistic strategies (like
neology, transliteration, untranslated words, glossing, code-switching,
and code-mixing and translation equivalents) in her works has set
new linguistic usages and literary trends in the creative English
literature of Pakistan and India. Her induction of inventive linguistic
practices in her works have also contested and negotiated the
authenticity, originality, universality and purity of the Standard
English language and its discursive practices. Moreover, her fictions
have also foregrounded the postcolonial concerns like partition,
language, place, hybridity, ethnicity and separate identity in the
context of her complex colonized experiences.
This study will be very useful for highlighting and
pinpointing the identity crisis, linguistic dilemma and cultural
syncreticity in the context of postcolonial Pakistan. It will also very
effective for the bilingual/multilingual teachers of the subcontinent to
revisit and reinterpret the colonial discourse and its discursive
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practices embedded in the Standard English language and its
discursive practices.
2. Hypothesis
Standard English is a myth.
Like Anglophone Africa, there are two major literary camps
in Pakistan and India also, who are arguing for or against the
imposition of the Standard English language and its discursive
practices. For instance, in Anglophone Western Africa, Ngugi and
like are campaigning against the colonial language as it carries the
western cultural norms which covertly or overtly denigrate the
indigenous linguistic and cultural norms. Alternatively, the novelists
like Achebe, Soyinka and Gabriel Okara re-appropriated and
reconstituted the imposed colonial language to carry the weight of
linguistic hybridity and variant culture in the context of
post-independent and postcolonial Western Africa. Similarly,
Pakistani creative English writers like Anglophone African novelists
are also reconstructing and indigenizing the imposed language as the
alternative instrument to carry the burden of their colonized
experiences in the non-western settings of Pakistan. They are also
employing it in their narratives as a convenient and trustworthy
instrument for cross-culturality, ethnography, neutralization and
wider communication across the continent. The diaspora of Pakistani
creative English writers like Zulfiqar Ghose, Mohsin Hamid, Hanif
Kureishi, and Sara Suleri have also used the appropriated colonial
language in their writings to install richness repertoire of their
mother tongues as well as to demonstrate difference, separateness,
resistance and cultural distinctiveness from the privileged
metropolitan centre. Sidhwa is one of the most distinctive writers of
this latter camp who has not only subverted the Standard English
normative practices but also simultaneously appropriated and
reconstituted the inherited language on the linguistic pattern of her
mother tongues to foreground her peculiar linguistic, socio-cultural
and geo-political lived experiences in the local settings of the
subcontinent.
Although the inherited colonial language has become a de
facto language of our commerce, judiciary, parliamentary and
administrative set up, yet the theoretical debate to switch over to
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Urdu as a medium of instruction is still irresolvable and irreducible
in terms of the complex experiences of the postcolonial Pakistan.
The place and status of English in the context of geo-linguistic and
politico-cultural experiences of Pakistan has also been extensively
discussed (Tariq Rahman:1991;Anjum Riyazul Haqe:1993;Robert J.
Baumgardener: 1993;Muneeza Shamsie:1999).Hence, this study
implies that with the prevalence and diffusion of such nativizing
strategies as well as Pakistanization of English demonstrated in the
Pakistani postcolonial writers’ texts and the advocacy to switch over
to the Urdu language would be like turning reverse the hands of the
clock.
Henceforth, the researcher considers it appropriate at this
stage to describe the concept of appropriation as it is the primary
motif of this paper.
3.1 Concept of appropriation
Eric Gans traces the origin of appropriation and linguistic
sign in terms of Generative Anthropology that the ‘aborted gesture of
appropriation becomes the originary sign.’ According to him the
‘mimetic triangle’ contains all the elements necessary for the
emergence of sign, language as foundation of the human community
must have arisen in a ‘collective event’ when mimetic tension is
intensified by the multiplicity of the participant…thus the emission
of the first sign is the founding event of the human community. He
further postulates that ‘all culture is scenic’ in the sense of evoking
the tension between the ‘desiring periphery and desired centre of a
collective scene…’ (1999).In a similar vein Michel Foucault in the
essay Nietzsche, Genealogy, History, contends that the entire western
historical (theological or rationalistic) tradition emphasizes on
dissolving the singular event into an ideal continuity- as teleological
movement. Consequently ‘an event is not a treaty, a reign, or a battle
but the reversal of a relationship of forces, the usurpation of power,
the appropriation of vocabulary turned against those who had once
used it, a feeble domination that poison itself as it grows lax, the
entry of masked other,’( cited in Bouchard et al:1997).
Consequently, in the context of such appropriating
conceptual perspective, the postcolonial creative English writers of
the invaded colonies (like Pakistan, India, South East Asia, Western
Africa and West Indies) and partly in settler colonies (like Australia,
New Zealand and Canada) appropriated and reconstituted the
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inherited colonial language to carry the load of their cultural
syncreticism and linguistic hybridization. Henceforth, the study
explores subversion, appropriation and reconstitution of the colonial
language by the creative English writers in the context of their
non-western settings of South Asia and Western Africa.
3.2 Subversion of the English language
The colonial language and its discursive practices were
introduced to disseminate the western dominant ideologies parallel
with the consolidation of imperial rule in the subcontinent.The
constant persistence and imposition of the dominant English
language entailed the appropriation and reconstruction of it on the
linguistic and grammatical structures of the indigenous languages in
the local settings of the subcontinent. The inventive linguistic and
textual strategies inducted by the creative Indian and Pakistani
novelists denote subversion of the dominant English language and its
normative practices. Bapsi Sidhwa like many other creative English
writers abrogated the standard normative practices by installing the
inventive linguistic practices in her novel Ice-Candy-Man. During
the process of abrogation, simultaneously the colonial language and
its discursive practices are appropriated by the creative English
writers Pakistan and India to carry the weight of colonized
experiences and variant cultures.
3.3 Appropriation of the colonial language
P.L Ha (2005), a university lecturer and researcher in
Vietnam and Australia, contends that she agrees with Widdowson’s
views that a language in use cannot be regulated beyond a certain
degree.It is bound to be appropriated.She also adds that the notion of
appropriation not only denotes resistance and reconstitution but also
simultaneously facilitates the appropriated language (English) ‘to
serve global citizens and would not take their sense of belonging as
well,’ (2005). In a similar context, Ashcroft also cites from the The
Empire Writes Back that the strategies by which a language is
appropriated and transformed are extremely varied. Apart from direct
glossing in the texts either by explanation or parenthetic insertions,
such innovative devices include ‘syntactic fusion, in which English
prose is structured according to the syntactic principles of the first
language; neologism, new lexical forms in English which are
informed by the semantic and morphological exigencies of the
mother tongues; the direct inclusion of untranslated lexical items in
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the text; ethno-rhythmic prose which constructs an English
discourse according to the rhythm and texture of first language; and
the transcription of dialect and language variants of many different
kinds, whether they come from diglossic, poly-dialectical or
monolingual speaking communities,’(2001). Consequently, in view
of such appropriating linguistic and textual strategies, Bapsi Sidhwa
like many other postcolonial novelists of Pakistan and India
appropriated, remoulded and bent the inherited language to carry the
burden of linguistic hybridity and cultural syncreticity in the
non-native settings of India and Pakistan. Henceforth, the
appropriating strategies inducted by the creative English writers of
the South Asia and Anglophone Africa are reviewed and explored in
the context of postcolonial counter discursive practices and
appropriating strategies. I will also attempt to explore that her
innovative linguistic practices demonstrated in her text are as much
authentic and valid as are of the standard linguistic norms of the
metropolitan centre.
The creative English writers of the subcontinent like
Anglophone African novelists not only abrogated the colonial
language but also appropriated and reconstructed it on the linguistic
patterns of their mother tongues in the context of their multi-ethnic,
multi-racial and multi-linguistic settings. Ashcroft et al posits that
‘the abrogation is refusal of the categories of the imperial culture, its
aesthetic, its illusory standard of normative or correct usage and its
assumption of the traditional meaning inscribed in the words…where
as appropriation is the process by which the language is taken and
made to bear the burden of one’s cultural experience, or as Raja Rao
puts it to convey in language that is not one’s own the spirit that is
one’s own. Language is adopted as a tool and utilized in various
ways to express widely differing cultural experiences’ (1989). In a
similar vein Ashcroft et al further defines that ‘appropriation may
describe acts of usurpation in various cultural domains, but the most
potent are the domains of language and textuality. In these areas, the
dominant language and its discursive forms are appropriated to
express widely differing cultural experiences and to interpolate these
experiences into the dominant modes of representation to reach the
widest possible audience’ (2004).
In the context of such innovative and appropriating linguistic
practices, the creative English writers from the subcontinent and the
Anglophone Africa reconstituted the colonial language on the
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syntactical, morphological, phonological and lexical structures of
their indigenous languages to foreground
Bamiro (2006) contends in Anglophone African perspective
that Achebe’s ‘lexico-semantic relexification and appropriation in
Anthills take the modes of semantic shift, analogical creation, and
coinage and translation equivalence.’ According to Bamiro, through
the process of semantic shift, Achebe appropriates extant English
words and imbues them with new meaning in consonance with the
Nigerian cultural context as in the following example:
‘But since my wife here is troubled, let us agree with her and
do as she says.’
‘…my wife came to me…’
Here the text emphasizes the kinship terms such as mother,
father, brother, sister, wife, and cousin characterized by semantic
widening; that its use in Nigeria and most of Africa, such kinship
indicates a wider semantic area than in British and American English.
(2006).Bamiro further says regarding the appropriation and
reconstruction of the colonial language, ‘I feel that the English
language be able to carry the weight of my African experience. But it
will have to be new English, still in full communion with its
ancestral home but altered to suit new African experiences,’(2006).
Consequently, Achebe and many other Western African writers like
Soyinka and Gabriel Okra’s innovative linguistic strategies of code
switching, code mixing, linguistic hybridization and Africanization
of English in the geolinguistic settings of Anglophone Africa suggest
a close analogy to the appropriating linguistic and textual strategies
inducted by Sidhwa in her novel Ice-Candy-Man. It also implies that
the presumptive Received English codes and its discursive norms are
inadequate to address the separate identity, linguistic plurality and
cultural syncreticity of African postcolonial societies. Henceforth,
the researcher describes the postcolonial discourse theory as the
framework to analyze and interpret the selected and identified
categories of appropriating strategies from Sidhwa’s novel.
4. Methodology
(Postcolonial Discourse Theory as a Conceptual Framework)
The researcher has chosen the Postcolonial Discourse
Theory and appropriation as the theoretical framework to analyze
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and interpret the selected and identified appropriating linguistic
and textual strategies from her novel Ice-Candy-Man. The western
critical and theoretical approaches since 1920s onwards have been
inadequate to address the socio-linguistic and cultural peculiarities,
metonymic gaps, silence, and absence in the context of multifaceted
colonized experiences of Pakistan. Likewise, the researcher has
found that although, in the earlier phase of postcolonial theoretical
approaches denote the deconstruction and decolonization of the
western norms of epistemology, ontology and teleology yet these
might have as well subtly underpin the privileged Euro-centric codes
or culminate at simple binary opposition. The postcolonial theory in
its earlier stages stressed on the ‘anti-humanistic’ practices
(Foucaultdian or French Marxist) but in the recent times (since 1990
onward) it emphasizes the ‘revisionist practices’ that is the difference
but with sameness unlike complete sameness or complete difference.
The revisionist approach focuses on plurality, differentiality and
hybridity unlike totalizing discourse of sameness.
I will attempt to investigate in this paper the appropriating
linguistic practices inducted by Sidhwa’s in her novel (Ice-Candy
Man) and the emergence of nativitization or Pakistanization of
English in the context of her local settings of the Pakistan. This study
will be very useful for highlighting and pinpointing the identity crisis,
linguistic dilemma and cultural syncreticity in the context of
postcolonial Pakistan. It will also be very effective for the
bilingual/multilingual teachers of the subcontinent to revisit and
reinterpret the colonial discourse and its discursive practices
embedded in the Standard English language and its discursive
practices.
The researcher has identified and selected the text from the
novel Ice-Candy-Man to analyse the appropriating linguistic and
textual strategies inducted by Sidhwa in the socio-linguistic,
geo-politico, ethnographic and variant cultural perspective of
Pakistan and India. The researcher has also identified and selected
the innovative linguistic strategies like neologism (coinage of new
words, compounds and phrases), transliteration (to write words and
phrases by using letters of different alphabet or language),
un-translated words, code-mixing or code-switching, glossing (to
explain difficult word or phrase within parenthesis or without
parenthesis) and literal translation. Henceforth, such innovative
linguistic and textual strategies inducted by Sidhwa in her novel are
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described and analyzed.
5. Analysis and findings
‘The English…language, rich also in literature, is no longer
the monopoly of the British we, the ex-colonized, have subjugated
the language, beaten it on its heads and made its ours! Let the
English chafe and fret and fume. The fact remains that in adapting
English to our use, in hammering it sometimes on its heads, and in
sometimes twisting its tails, we have given it a new shape, substance,
and dimension.’ (Sidhwa :1993) In a similar context Baumgardner,
R.J adds that ‘the borrowing and subsequent grammaticalization of
borrowed items is the natural consequence of language contact
situation, and in this respect the english of Pakistan has been
enriched by the multicultural, multi-ethnic and multi-linguistic
context in which it is used.’ (1993)
Henceforth, in view of such concepts, Sidhwa’s
appropriating strategies like neologism, transliteration, untranslated
words, code-switching, translation equivalents and glossing inducted
in her novel Ice-Candy-Man are sequentially analyzed and
interpreted as below. In the following instances from her novel,
neologism or coinage not only incorporate English words to a
postcolonial Pakistani reality but also enables the writer to widen the
contextual usefulness of English:
(1) “She sends her…Mini-Aunty” (pp-8)

(2) “My electric-aunt is a resourceful widow addicted to quick
decisions… ” (pp-21)
(3) “Bharucha …it is no longer just struggle for Home Rule…who is
going to rule once we get Sawaraj.”… (pp-36)
(4) ‘Nehru… with lion share…it smelling like the Queen-of-the
Kotha’! (pp-131).
(5) Its strange The English Sarkar can’t seem to do any thing about
it’... (pp-55).
In these instances Sidhwa like other Pakistani and Indian
creative writers invented or coined new words or word groups to
install a concrete lived experience and variant culture in the context
of the bloody partition of the subcontinent. Likewise, English forms
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and discursive norms are adopted to accommodate new realities
and socio-political norms in the context of the geolinguistic
environment of the subcontinent. In these examples, Sidhwa’s
innovative neologisms not only incorporate English words to the sub
continental lived reality but also enable the novelist to widen the
contextual suitability of English. Similarly, in examples 1, 2 and 4,
the writer employs innovative collocations from the already available
English words and from source languages to install alterity,
difference and variant cultural experiences in the local settings of the
subcontinent.
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Sidhwa also uses the processes of transliteration/relexification
and appropriation in Ice-Candy-Man to inscribe Pakistani/Indian
meaning and politico-social values into extant English words.
English vocabulary and syntax are manipulated by Sidhwa to
produce and shift meaning beyond the solely denotative reference of
the words, thus conveying a wide range of political, cultural and
social lived experiences in the context of postcolonial Pakistan and
India. In the following examples, Sidhwa applied innovative
linguistic strategy of transliteration to carry a different kind of
experience and to convey a different kind of sensibility and
sentimentality in the context of the gruesome partition of the
subcontinent. Consequently, her counter discursive strategies also
subvert the dominant linguistic codes of the colonial language.
(6) Ice-Candy-Man…a birdman. ‘I break your neck, you naughty
birds! You do too much chi chi! What will the good memsahibs
think? (pp-25)
(7) Gandhijee visits Lahore…I almost thought he was a mystic
figure… (pp-85)
(8) ‘Oye! You! Recite the Kalama’, someone says the youth. ‘La
IIaha IllaIIah, Mohammad ur Rasulullah’. (pp-181)
In examples 6, 7 and 8, Sidhwa resorts to rendering the
words, sentiments, eccentricities and behaviour mode of her
characters in a form of English that contains a lot of mother tongue’s
intervention. Likewise, in order to demonstrate the original flavour,
rhythms, cadences and idiomatic validity of her sentences and words,
Sidhwa like other postcolonial writers of Pakistan and India
frequently resorts to transliteration rather than translation. Moreover,
in the above transliterated words and phrases inducted by the writer
in the novel install difference, alterity and a radical sense of
otherness from the metropolitan centre of putative coded
referentilaity. She bends the inherited dominant language to carry the
load of her political, social and cultural lived experiences as the
colonial language was inadequate in the local settings of the
subcontinent.
Sidhwa also inducts untranslated words of Urdu, Punjabi and
partly Gujrati in Ice-Candy-Man to express peculiar politico-social
experiences and differences in the context of complex experiences of
postcolonial Pakistan and India. Unlike some other postcolonial
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writers, Sidhwa’s untranslated words are devoid of authorial
interruption. She does not provide English equivalents for the Urdu,
Punjabi and Gujrati words; she does not mitigate the effects of the
semantic failure that some non-Urdu/Punjabi readers might
experience. Hence, Sidhwa like other postcolonial writers have used
the untranslated words strategy in order to install the lexico-semantic
richness repertoire of her indigenous languages. Consequently, she
seems to have employed the untranslated words strategy to expose
peculiar sub-continental variant cultures and thereby silence the
western culture where the English language originates, grows and
spread. A few instances of the use of untranslated words in the
Ice-Candy-Man are sufficed at this stage.
(9) A woman in a shabby burka holds the child (pp-12)
(10) ‘Bose says the Japanese will help us liberate India from the
Angrz’, Ice-Candy-Man says… (pp-28).
(11) Col Bharucha … ‘Hindus, Muslim and even the Sikh are going
to jockey for power…and if you jump…you’ll be mangled into
chutney!’ (pp-36).
The above italics untranslated words are Urdu/Punjabi
lexical items. The word burka was inserted by Sidhwa to show the
distinctive cultural dress of the Muslim women of the subcontinent.
In the local set up, it is the sign of piety and virtue but in the western
perspective it is considered as sign of primitiveness, terrorism,
tribalism, extremism and un-enlightenment. The word Angrz
denotes that the people of subcontinent have an ambivalent attitude
towards the colonial Raj. The term chutney also denotes that
Bharucha warns the Parsees to stay back from the power politics,
otherwise they would be crushed like chutney in the tricky and
vicious politics of the subcontinent. Since the usage of untranslated
words by Sidhwa in the novel is an instance of linguistic and cultural
contact as the colonial language cannot adequately express Indian
and Pakistani political and social complex colonized experiences,
therefore, she attempts to solve this linguistic weight by maintaining
a selective fidelity to her mother tongues (Urdu, Punjabi and
Gujrati).
Sidhwa in the code-mixing and code-switching linguistic
strategy directly transfers/borrows the lexical items of her mother
tongues (Urdu, Punjabi and Gujrati) into the inherited colonial
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language (Received English). Bamiro has noted that “since
code-mixing implies the transfer or untranslated words into a text as
a counter-discursive strategy of ‘Otherness’; it is a device that
directly confronts and challenges the territoriality of a dominant
discourse in the context of a multilingual and multicultural settings”.
Bamiro also refers to Kachru views that in discourse ‘code-switching
may be used as a device to mark, among other things, an identity or
may be used to reveal or conceal region, class and religion” (2006).
Hence, it suggests that the lexical borrowings from the source
languages foregrounds culturally embedded objects and system of
values that have no direct translation equivalence in English. A few
examples of the use of code switching from the Ice-Candy-Man are
adequate at this juncture.
(12) “… ‘We will show them who will leave Lahore! Raj karega
Khalsa, akhi rahi na koi!’ … the Sikhs… shriek with roar: ‘Pakistan
Murdabad! Death to Pakistan! ‘Sat Siri Akall! Boley se nihaall!’ ’?
(pp-134)
(13) “Then a …mob of Muslim goonds…was roaring: Allah-o-Akbar!
Yaaa Ali!’ and ‘Pakistan Zindabad!’ .”? (pp-135)
(14) “The Kotha is the cultural pulse of the city…poets…songs are
sung. It is also stepping stone to film stardom for the nauch-girls.!’?
(pp-267)
In examples 12 and 13, Sidhwa employed code
switching/code mixing as an appropriating strategy to expose the
bloody political and social conflicts among the major political rival
factions (like Sikhs, Hindus and Muslims) of the subcontinent. In
example 14, she reveals the cultural norms and the
subaltern/marginalized status of the woman of the subcontinent. In
the foregoing text, Sidhwa also transfers the lexico-semantic,
orthographic and grammatical codes of her mother tongues (Urdu
and Punjabi) into the Standard language to incorporate ethnic tension,
political internal strife and bloody conflicts in the local settings of
Pakistan and India. The writer switches from English to the
Punjabi/Urdu language to demonstrate the ethnic, linguistic, cultural
and the political tense situation during the partition of the
subcontinent. In this linguistic process, she blends the lexical and
syntactic structures of English and Punjabi/Urdu to show the cultural
distinctiveness and separateness from the assumptive centre of
privileged norms. In addition, she inducts the ethno-rhythmic, mood
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and imagery into the inherited dominant discourse in the
perspectives of the dreadful partition of the subcontinent. She also
foregrounds the scenes of massive killing and brutal savagery
through the tactical strategy of code switching as Standard English
was inadequate to incorporate such horrible incidents ever occurred
in the tumultuous history of the subcontinent. In a word, her
linguistic practice of code-switching/code-mixing in her novel
addresses the metonymic gaps and absence in the context of the
complex colonized experiences of Pakistan.
Sidhwa also inserts glossing strategy (to explain meaning of
difficult words/terms with or without parenthetic) as the authorial
interference in the texts to demonstrate the linguistic hybridity and
cultural syncreticity in the non-western settings of Lahore (Pakistan).
She installs the vernacular terms and idiomatic phrases (of Urdu and
Punjabi) into the inherited colonial language parallel with
explanatory words, phrases, sentences and translation to signify the
experiential reality and lived experiences in the context of
post-independent Pakistan and India. She also inducts it to
demonstrate the prolific repertoire of her indigenous languages and
variant distinctive cultures. She defines the vernacular phrases at
certain places in the texts (with or with out parenthetic) and
sometimes leaves it untranslated to foreground the gaps of metonymy,
absence and difference. A few example of glossing will be adequate
at this juncture as inserted in Ice-Candy-Man.
(15) “…the village women, the girls try not to smile or giggle. They
must have heard their mothers and aunts (as I have), say: ‘Hasi to
phasi! Laugh (and), get laid!’…” (pp-55)
(16) “Hamida…it is my kismet that no good…we are khut putli,
puppets in the hands of fate.” (pp-222)
(17) And Muccho’s … sitting on her small buttocks… ‘Haram-khor!
Slut! Work-shirkers! …shrieks Machos (pp- 45)
In the foregoing examples 15, 16 and 17, Sidhwa inducts the
colloquial terms or vernacular expressions parallel with glossing to
foreground the subalternity and marginality of the women of
Pakistan and India. She inserts the colloquial phrase “Hasi to
phasi,” with glossing; which has the wider connotation in the context
of socio-cultural milieu of the subcontinent. In the context of the
patriarchal norms of the subcontinent, young girls are advised by the
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elderly women not to laugh or giggle as it denotes lewdness and
brazenness. She implies that a laughing young girl conveys the
‘message event’ or ‘situated meaning’ of love and friendship. In the
cultural perspective of the subcontinent, such term might also
suggest seduction, lewdness and immorality but on the other hand in
the western cultural norms it is the sign of civility and cultured
behaviour. In these texts, Sidhwa also exposes the marginalized and
the wretched status of women during the partition of the
subcontinent and its deep psychological scar on the mind and soul of
women. The innocent shanty- Ayah was abducted by Ice-Candy-Man
(the most versatile character of the novel) and was forced to become
“nauch girl” [dancer] in “Hera Mandi” (red light area of Lahore
where girls learn the art of dance, singing etc). Hamida was telling
the sad story of her life and the others like her to Lenny. Sidhwa
describes here the marginalized status of women as they were “khut
putli” or the just puppets in the hands of fate.
She employs glossing strategy to shoulder the weight of her
historical, national, social and cultural norms of her indigenous
society. Her usage of vernacular speech with glossing in the above
cited excerpts substantiates the linguistic hybridity and cultural
syncreticity as an alternative possibility and trustworthiness rather
than to linguistic deviations or cultural eccentricity. Likewise, with
the employment of vernacular terminologies along with glossing,
Sidhwa inserts the rhetorical, metaphorical and imaginative
expressions of her indigenous languages into the imported language.
Consequently, her glossing practices abrogate/subvert the purity of
Standard English codes and its discursive practices and
simultaneously installed the indigenous linguistic and cultural norms.
In a word, Sidhwa’s inductions of such vernacular speech “Hasi to
phasi,” and “khut putli” in Ice-Candy-Man address the metonymic
gaps and variant culture in the context of her postcolonial concrete
lived experiences of Pakistan and India.
Sidhwa also inserts the translation equivalents/literal
translation as an appropriating strategy in Ice-Candy-Man to
transplant the specific linguistic and cultural norms of Pakistan and
India into the living English culture. She inducts this technique to
incorporate the themes like bloody communal fights, nationalism,
complex identities and variant cultures in the context of the local
settings of the subcontinent. She literally and directly translates Urdu
and Punjabi speeches, wise sayings, myths, imagery, poetry and
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fables into the colonial language as without serious semantic
modification in terms of her local settings. Her direct translation
practices transplanted into the Standard English also extend the
lexico-semantic sensibility, rhetorical and imaginative mannerism of
her indigenous languages. A few examples of translation equivalents
strategies will be adequate at this juncture as are inserted in
Ice-Candy-Man:
(18) “Ice-Candy Man is selling his popsicles…my mouth waters.
(pp-18)
(19) “Imam Din –drums his chests, flexes muscles and emits the
fierce barruk … ‘O vay’ he roars. I’ll chew you up and I won’t even
burp!” (pp-45)
(20) “Oye, you donkey,” I told him. “So what if you‘re a Sikh? I’ m
first friend to my friends…God and the Politicians…” (pp-122)
In the above cited examples 18, 19 and 20, Sidhwa directly
translates the Urdu and Punjabi vernacular terminologies into the
English language to install the ethnographic and cultural difference.
She inducts the rhetorical characteristics, imaginative expression and
spontaneous mannerism of her mother tongues in her narrative as the
standard language is inadequate to address the metonymic gaps and
absence in the local settings of the subcontinent. Accordingly, with
the employment of literal translation strategy in her narratives, she
deconstructs and de-hegemonizes the western linguistic and cultural
norms and simultaneously foregrounds the multi-ethnic, multi-racial
and multi-linguistic complex experiences in the non-western settings
of the subcontinent.
She also uses such linguistic technique to convey the local
sensibilities, sentimentalities (particularly bloody conflicts between
Sikhs and Muslims during the partition) and idiosyncrasies in the
context of the indigenous settings of the subcontinent. Her
installation of direct translation in Ice-Candy-Man also addresses the
metonymic gaps, discontinuity and ruptures as the Standard English
language and its normative practices were inadequate in the
non-western settings of Pakistan and India. Consequently, she
inducts the literal translation on the linguistic pattern of Urdu and
Punjabi like “my mouth waters”, “I’ll chew you up and I won’t even
burp!” and “Oye, you donkey…” to transplant the ‘situated meaning’
or ‘message event’ in the context of her complex colonized
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experiences of linguistic hybridity and cultural syncreticity.
5. Conclusion
The paper has identified and analyzed the appropriating linguistic
strategies employed by Bapsi Sidhwa who transplants the culture of
the subcontinent into the inherited colonial language. Linguistically,
Sidhwa may have deviated from the standard linguistic and literary
norms, but politically she has radically deconstructed and
decolonized the authenticity, purity and universality of the discursive
norms of the metropolitan centre. Likewise, she has domesticated
and nativitized the imported language to carry the linguistic weight
and variant cultural norms of the complex postcolonial experiences
of Pakistan as the Standard Received English was inadequate in the
context of the non-western settings of the subcontinent. The paper
has also demonstrated that the appropriating linguistic strategies
installed in the novel are also authentic and realistic as these carried
the ‘message event’ and ‘lived experiences’ rather than to some
privileged coded referentiality. The usage of appropriating linguistic
strategies in postcolonial literature of the subcontinent is not
distinctive to Sidhwa; rather we still encounter such examples of
appropriation and reconstitution of the inherited English language in
the writings of many other native and Indian and Pakistani creative
English writers like Rabindar Tagore, Raja Rao, Mulk Anand, R. K
Narayan, Anita Desi, Salmon Rushdie, Arundhati Roy, Ahmad Ali,
Mohsin Hamid, Zulfiqar Ghosh, Hanif Kureshi and the like.
This paper has also demonstrated that the appropriating
linguistic strategies inducted by Sidhwa in her novel Ice-Candy-Man
and other postcolonial Pakistani and Indian literature offer an
alternative and creative vehicular medium in terms of hybridizing
colonized experiences. It also suggests that the Pakistani postcolonial
writers should not strive for the abrogation or rejection of the
privilege of the inherited colonial language as suggested by Tariq
Rehman and the like. Rather they should reconstitute and
re-appropriate the language to new usages in the context of
multi-ethnic, multi-linguistic and multi-racial postcolonial Pakistan.
Likewise, the re-appropriated language has gained a de-facto status
in our administrative, legal, academic, print and electronic media set
up of Pakistan. Consequently, Sidhwa has indigenized and nativized
the inherited colonial language on the rich lexical syntactical and
morphological linguistic patterns of her mother tongues like Urdu
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and Punjabi to bridge the gaps of silence, absence, difference,
separateness, ruptures and discontinuities of post-independent
Pakistan. Hence, in this internationalization and globalization digital
era, Pakistani writers cannot afford to refuse their creative English
literary woks for trans-national and trans-cultural wider readership.
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A Statistical Analysis on Person Substitute in a
Text
Ms Ding Weili,
Communication University of China,
China.
Abstract
This paper is natural data-based. Under the guidance of
cohesion theory, we make a statistic analysis on the cohesion of
various person substitutes from 4 aspects—within clause, beyond
clause, within paragraph and beyond paragraph.Consequently, the
factors that affect the option of person substitutes are person
perspective, semantic features and the iconicity principle.
Key words/terms: text; cohesion; person substitute
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1. Introduction
Chen Ping holds the opinion that in Chinese there is continuity in
the objects that are referred to. So when a person and an object
have to be repeated in a Chinese text, a form without a phonetic
realization tends to be used. This kind of anaphora is called zero
anaphora. So; we call zero anaphora as zero person substitutes.
There are many studies about the person substitute in
Modern Chinese, but few about specific studies. Several articles as
follows are chosen as examples.1) In A Discourse Analysis on
Narrative “Ta(他)”, a statistic analysis is made on the various
constraints of “Ta(他)” usages in texts at the linear and strata levels.
(Xu Jiujiu :1990)2) In An Analysis on the Noun References in
Narrations, noun references are classified into five types:
same-formed, partially same-formed, synonyms, hyponym and
comparison.(Xu Jiujiu: 1999) 3.In A Study on the Anaphoric
Function of Pronoun “Ta(他)”(Wang Canlong: 2000), Mr. Wang
discovers the rules of anaphora of person pronouns in and beyond
clauses. He points out that the person pronoun is one of the most
frequently used anaphora.4) In Applicable Analysis on the
Deeper-level Anaphora of the Third Person Pronouns (Qin
Hongwu:2001),Qin argues that reference is constrained in discourse
understanding and use and that syntactic rules are not the only
criterion for reference.In the above studies, the scholars focus more
on the studies of pronouns. Many of studies are about the cohesions
of person substitutes in Chinese and Sino-foreign languages.
However, there is little research done on the cohesion of various
person substitutes in texts and in a statistic way.
3. Methdology (Data collection and analysis)
The data in our study are collected from Readers (Gansu
People Publication Press: 2001, 2002) and An Edition of National
Awarded Mini-stories in 2001(Jin Mountain Magazine: 2002). We
choose 50 narrations and make an intra-context statistic analysis of
the cohesion of person substitutes beyond clauses.
The terms in the thesis “person substitute” and “person
reference” are different from but relative to each other. Here, person
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substitutes refer to the language forms (including zero form［1］［2］,
as Ø) in a text.The word person here refers to any entity that can be
identified as human being through the language forms. We do not
employ person reference because scholars have not come into an
agreement about how to define reference and non-reference. For
instance, philosopher Mr. Donnellan holds opposite ideas to linguists
like Lyons (Wang Hongqi: 2001).Another reason why we do not use
reference is that non-reference can establish a cohesion with other
person substitute through a relative process. Non-reference can be
referred to as the person in a particular context. For example:
1）我有一个朋友，Ø 是个书虫。这个书呆子／书虫好几
天没有来我这儿借书了。［3］
I have a friend, Ø is a bookworm. For several days, this book
addict/bookworm hasn’t come over to me to borrow books.
In the above example, “Ge shu chong (个书虫)” is a

non-reference［4］, without which “Zhe ge shu dai zi 这个书呆子／
书虫” can’t be linked with “Peng you (朋友)” and Ø. Besides, “Shu
chong (书虫)” can be singly referred to as “Peng you (朋友)”. For
the reasons mentioned above, we employ person substitute to make
the subject matter of this thesis is clearer.
In a text, person substitutes are in a unity of opposition: 1)
Different variants of person substitutes—any language form can be
regarded as a variant— stand in one congregation because they can
be referred to as the same person; 2) Each person substitute can form
a larger language unit with other forms; 3) A complex person
substitute can be segmented into smaller forms.
In terms of the features of a substitute, person substitutes can
be categorized into nouns, reflective pronouns, demonstrative
pronouns, other pronouns and zero form. Nouns include proper
nouns, common nouns, person noun phrases with modifiers, phrases
used to substitute person and proper nouns transformed from
pronouns (Hu Zhuanglin: 1994). Reflective pronouns only include
“Zi ji (自己)”and“Zi ger (自个儿)”；demonstrative pronouns include
all the words with “Zhe or Na（这、那）”to denote person；other
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pronouns refer to all the pronouns except reflective pronouns and
demonstrative pronouns. As for the person pronouns “Ta、Ta、Wo
（他、她、我）”used in the whole text as the actors of the events, we
classify them into nouns to do the statistics. A zero form refers to
those forms without language structure but with semantic meaning.
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3.1 Cohesive devices
3.1.1 Reference and repetition
The cohesive devices of person substitutes are mainly the
reference at grammatical level and the repetition at the lexical level
(Halliday & Hasan: 1976). According to Xu Jiujiu (1999) we
categorize repetition into repetition of the same form, partial
repetition of the same form, synonym, hyponym and rhetorical
relations. Repetition of the same form means that the person
substitute has the same form as the antecedent. Partial repetition of
the same form means that there is a reduction in the substitute on the
Chinese characters from the antecedent.In synonym, the reference
and the antecedent have the same semantic meaning but different
language structures. But this does not exclude the person substitutes
that partially have same inner structure. Hyponym means that
reference and antecedent are semantically inclusive each other. The
rhetorical relation means that the anaphora realizes the cohesion with
the antecedent by means of rhetorical relations.
In a real cohesive text, each person substitute realizes the
vertical cohesion in a particular way. The cohesion of person
substitutes is realized through integrating various devices. For
example:
①荷城那条衣裳街上，出过几位杰出人物，摆过服装摊的
刘思劲就是其中一位。②如今他去琼岛闯荡，Ø 已有三年（Ø）
没回家了。③刘母思儿心切，Ø 频频央人代笔修书（Ø）要儿子
．
回家看看。
In the clothes-store streets in Hecheng, there emerged
several outstanding people, one of whom was Liu Sijin who had sold
clothes in the street.
④这天，刘思劲终于拨冗（Ø）回到老家。⑤刘母看到年
过三十，略显富态的儿子，Ø 喜极泪涌，Ø 抱着儿子的肩头，Ø
说：
（“孩子，你把家忘了吗？Ø 把妈也忘了吗？）”
This day, Liu Sijin finally put aside his business and Ø came
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back to his hometown. Mother Liu saw her over-thirty and a little
fat son and Ø was happy to cry and Ø hugged her son’s shoulder, Ø
said: “ My son, did you forget your family? Ø Forget your mother?”
⑥刘思劲的眼圈也潮湿了, Ø 连忙说：
（“妈,看您说的,我怎
么能忘了家,怎么能忘了妈呢?”）
Liu Sijin’ eyes were wet and Ø immediately said: “Mother,
Don’t you say that. How can I forget my family and Ø forget my
mother?
⑦Ø 随即把送给母亲的礼物呈上……
And then Ø presented the gift to his mother…
(A Green Parrot 《绿鹦
鹉》)
In the above example, the cohesive devices of the person

substitutes are as follows:
a. Reference: for example, “Ji wei jie chu ren wu” (几位杰出
人物)→ “qi(其)”， “Bai guo fu zhuang tan de Liu Sijin (摆
过服装摊的刘思劲)”→ “Ta 他”, “Hai zi 孩子”→ “Ni(你)”，
“Ma(妈)”→ “Nin(您)”, “Liu Sijin(刘思劲)”→ “Wo(我)”,
“Ta(他)”→Ø；
b. Repetition of the same form: for example, “Liu Sijin(刘思

劲 )”→ “Liu Sijin( 刘思劲 )” ， “Mother Liu( 刘母 )”→
“Mother Liu(刘母)”；
c. Repetition of partially same form: for example, “Bai guo fu
zhuang tan de Liu Sijin (摆过服装摊的刘思劲)”→ “Liu
Sijin(刘思劲)”， “Nian guo san shi , Lue xin fu tai de er
zi(年过三十，略显富态的儿子)”→ “ Er zi (儿子)”；
d. Synonym: for example, “Ma 妈”→ “Mu qin (母亲)”； “Er

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(儿)”→Er zi(儿子).
e. Besides, theme-rheme pattern also helps to realize the
cohesion in a text（Hu Zhuanglin 1994 ）:for example,
Sentences ②and ③ in the first paragraph have the same
theme-rheme pattern: ②T1－R1 ，T1（Ø）－R2；③T2
－R3 ，T2（Ø）－R4。
2.1.2 A Statistic Analysis
We make an account of all kinds of person substitutes that
are allocated closest each other. The results are as follows:
Refle- Demon- Other

prono-
ctive strative
Category Noun pronoun pronoun uns Zero Total
Number 1808 46 122 838 1179 3993
Percentage 45.28% 1.15% 3.06% 20.99% 29.52% 100.00%
The cohesion of nouns actually take forms of lexical

repetition, accounting for 45.28％ of the total cohesion occurred in
the texts. Reflective pronoun, demonstrative pronoun, other
pronouns and zeros are the cohesion at the grammatical level,
accounting for 54.72％. So, we come to a conclusion that the
cohesion of person substitutes at the grammatical level occur more
frequently than at the lexical level, which in turn exemplifies the
principle of economy in language. There is difference in the cohesion
power of each category of person substitutes; the possible sequence
is shown as below:
（“＞”means “more than or larger than”，the same as below）
nouns＞zero＞other pronouns＞demonstrative pronouns＞

reflective pronouns
From the above analysis, lexical cohesion takes a lead in text
cohesion. The following table is about the result about the cohesion
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chains formed by nouns with different inner structures:
Repetitio Partial
n of the repetition
same of the same Hypon Rhetorica
type form form ym Synonym ls Total
number 1343 205 62 196 2 1808
percentag 100.00
e 74.28% 11.34% 3.43% 10.84% 0.11% %
From the above table, the possible cohesion formed by

nouns with different inner structures can be ranked as follows:
Repetition of the same form＞Partial repetition of the same

form＞Hyponymy＞Synonymy＞rhetorical relations
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3.2 Cohesion beyond paragraphs and sentences
3.2.1 The features of cohesion of various person substitutes
beyond paragraphs
By the study about the antecedents and anaphora that are
closest to and dependent on each other on the cohesion chains, we
find that the span to which different types of person substitutes form
cohesion varies and that reflective pronouns cannot construct
cohesion beyond paragraphs. The following table shows the results
clearly:
In the same Beyond one Beyond two

Form para. para. or more para. Total
862 585 361 1808
Noun （48%）（32%）（20%）（100%）
46 0 0 46
Reflective
Pronoun （100%）（0%）（0%）（100%）
Demonstrat 57 50 15 122
ive
Pronoun （47%）（41%）（12%）（100%）
690 100 48 838

Other
pronoun （82%）（11.90%）（6.10%）（100%）
1136 34 9 1179
Zero （96.40%）（2.80%）（0.80%）（100%）
2745 769 433 3993
Total （68.70%）（19.30%）（12%）（100%）

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From the distribution in texts, the cohesion within one
paragraph accounts for the highest percentage（68.7％）, then the
cohesion beyond one paragraph is leveled as the second highest
（19.30％）, the cohesion beyond more than one paragraphs is the
least（12％）. This result illustrates that all types of person substitutes
(exclusive of reflective pronouns) are largely alike in the cohesion
beyond paragraphs. They observe the following rule:
In the same para.＞Beyond one para.＞Beyond more than

one paras
The cohesion of reflexive pronouns is realized within a
paragraph. There is no much difference in ratios of the cohesion of
nouns and demonstrative pronouns within and beyond paragraphs,
but there is great differentiation between the ratios of the cohesion of
other pronouns and zero forms—much higher within the paragraph
than beyond paragraphs.
The cohesion span of various person substitutes in different
language circumstances are listed below:
a. within the same paragraph: reflective pronouns＞zero＞other

pronouns ＞ nouns ＞
demonstrative pronouns
b. beyond one paragraph：demonstrative pronouns＞nouns＞

other pronouns＞zero＞reflective
pronouns
c. beyond more than one paragraphs：nouns＞demonstrative

pronouns ＞ other
pronouns ＞ zero ＞
reflective pronouns
2.2.2 The features of the cohesion of various person
substitutes beyond
clause
In the same way, the way cohesion of various person substitutes
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beyond clause is clearly shown in the following table:
Within the Beyond

same Beyond more than
Type clause one clause one clauses Total
287 666 856 1808
Noun （16%）（37%）（47%）（100%）
35 6 5 46
Reflexive Pronouns （76%）（13%）（11%）（100%）
23 48 51 122
Demonstrative
Pronouns （18.60%）（39%）（42%）（100%）
334 371 133 838
Other Pronouns （39.80%）（44.20%）（16.00%）（100%）
994 135 50 1179
Zero （84.30%）（11.40%）（4.30%）（100%）
1673 1226 1094 3993
Total （41.80%）（30.70%）（27.50%）（100%）
In terms of distribution in text, the cohesion realized within

clause ranks highest（41.80％）; second highest is beyond one clause
（30.70％）, the lowest is beyond two clauses（27.50％）. Concerning
each type of person substitute, there is great difference:
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Nouns and demonstrative pronouns: beyond one clause
＞beyond two clauses＞within one clause
Reflexive pronouns and zero：within one clause＞beyond

two clauses＞beyond more than one clauses
Other pronouns：beyond one clause＞within one clause＞

beyond more than one clauses
3.2.3 Summary
In summary, it can be said that the distributions of various
person substitutes are mostly identical:
Within paragraph/clause＞beyond one paragraph／clause＞

beyond more than one paragraphs／clauses
Generally, all types of person substitutes observe the
following distribution rule: if the cohesion occurs within clause, it
occurs within paragraph; cohesion beyond clause may occur within
or beyond paragraph; cohesion beyond paragraph occurs within
clause.
Reflexive person substitutes form cohesions with their
antecedents only within clause and paragraph; zeros form cohesions
with their antecedents mostly within clause and a few beyond clause
but within paragraph; very few cohesions between zeros and
antecedents occur beyond paragraph but are constrained. The
cohesions between nouns and their antecedents ratio very low within
clause—mostly，beyond clause but within paragraph, —thus, nouns
have the largest capacity to form cohesion; The cohesions between
demonstrative pronouns and their antecedents ratio low within
clause—mostly beyond clause within paragraph—consequently， the
demonstratives have the second largest capacity to form cohesion;
other pronouns forms more cohesions with their antecedents beyond
clause within paragraph.
3.3 The constraints of the option of person substitutes
Since multiple person substitutes form cohesions within
paragraph, it seems that they have constructed a large net of cohesion
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within paragraph. The cohesions formed beyond paragraph
interweave with the person substitutes of different paragraphs.
Consequently, a complicated web is formed in the text, in which each
person substitute serves as a knot. All the knots interact and interlink
each other. By these knots, each character in the narration actively
participates the event. But nevertheless, the option of person
substitutes is affected by different factors. We’ll explain the factors
below.
3.3.1 Person perspective
The option of person substitutes is greatly affected by person
perspective, which is closely related to narration perspective. In a
narration, third-person or first-person, there are always two narration
perspectives, one is from the angle of narrator, the other from the
characters, usually, the hero (es).（Wang Hongqi 200 P90）Through
processing the data, we find that person substitutes change for the
following two reasons: 1) The perspective of the author/narrator has
changed;2)the perspective of the main or minor characters has
changed. For example:
3）Qin sheng er zi (亲生儿子) WO de zhang fu (我的丈夫) Ta

de er zi ( 他的儿子 ) Ta de di di ( 他的弟弟 )
(Ultimate Love《终极之爱》)
4）Ta de sun zi 她的孙子 Sun zi 孙子 Wo de er zi 我的儿子

Mu qin de sun zi 母亲的孙子 (Could I Hug You Kid《你的孩
子让我抱抱》)
In the above examples, 3）and 4）show the variants of the

same person substitutes. It is self-evident that each person substitute
is not chosen from the perspective of the same character. In example
3), four person substitutes referred to “my husband” are chosen from
the perspectives of “I” and “my father-in-law”. In（4）, four person
substitutes referred to “my son” are chosen from the perspectives of
“I” and “my mother”.
On the other hand, through options of different person
substitutes, we can construct the relations of characters and get some
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information about the mental state of them. For instance, example
3) shows the relations of “my father-in-law”, “I” and “my husband”.
“My father-in-law” considers “his own son” as “his brother”, which
shows that “the 88-year-old father-in-law” has developed the
Alzheimer. That is the example of the option of person substitutes
from an illusionary perspective.
3.2 Semantic features
The option of person substitutes is a dynamic process. The
author makes a choice about person substitutes according to the
changes of narrative perspective, character(s)’ angle and
communicative purposes, for example:
5) 热恋了很久，他们准备结婚了。《我要找
．．．．
到你》
They got prepared to marry after being in love each other for a
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
．．
long time.
．．．．．．．．
(I’ll
Find You)
6) 虽然清贫，但日子倒也过的闲适，像所有的小知识分子一
．．．．
样，他们彼此宽容、互敬互爱。
．．．．．
《执手》
In spite of being poor, they tolerate each other like all other
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
well-educated people. The life was comfortable.
．．．．．
．．
(Holding Your Hands)
7) ……而那双执过天线的手, 丈夫也再没有松开过。
《执手》
The husband did for ever hold the hands that had held the
antenna … (Holding Your Hands)
8) 我就一下子沉默了，一个熟悉的影子执拗地出现在我眼
前。
(《你的孩子让我抱
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抱》)（27－
44）
I immediately became silent; a familiar figure appeared in my
mind. (Could I Hug You Kid)
In example 5, “Ta Men (他们)” occurs in the text for the first
time. Though the reader does not know who they are, from the
context of “fell into love with each other” and “got married”, the
reader can easily predict that “Ta Men(他们)” they refer to two
people of a man and a woman.; in example 6, the reader can know
that “Ta Men(他们)”refers to a couple and they are well-educated by
the context of “Ri zi( 日子 )”, “Hu jing hu ai(互敬互爱 ) and
“Xiang---yi yang(像……一样)”. Halliday and Hasan (1976) call the
above semantic association as collocation of lexical cohesion. In
examples 7 and 8, the reader can know that the underlined parts refer
to “Qi zi (妻子)” and “Na ge nv ren (那个女人)”. Therefore, the
option of person substitutes must carry the semantic features that
correspond to the language elements that are allocated with them.
Only if the features of the person substitutes and the language
elements around can correspond to each other, the communication
can be realized.
Some semantic features are shown through some special
markers, for example:
9）“她”和“他”在网上聊得很投缘，遂将天长日久的情话
输送给对方。《现代与家庭》
“She” and “he” were chatting on-line and got along well,
thus conveying love to each other.
(Modern Life and Family)
10 ）大泉知道 “ 曼德拉 ” 啥意思，也不说话，光笑。
《一桶水》
Daquan could understand what “Mandala” meant, but said
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nothing just smiled. (A Bucket of Water)
In the above example, the quotation marks embody some of
the characters’ personalities. In 9, “Ta (她)”is a male and “Ta (他)” is
a female, because, when chatting online, they use pseudo names that
do not show their true gender; in example 10, the nickname of
“Mandala” vividly describes an oil worker who has been working in
the desert for many years and has his skin suntanned.
3.4 Principle of iconicity
Iconicity is also called likeness. The rationality of language
is iconicity by nature. That is, the allocation of language structure is
constrained by people’s cognition about the world and schema.
Iconicity is universal. It is also exceptional to broad analogy. The
principle of iconicity actually shows that people speak what they
cognate and think of and that they describe the world in the way it is
like. It also shows that when they encounter a complexity, they speak
more to be clear and easy to understand, while when they encounter
a simple or well-known event, they speak less or even nothing. (Wu
Weizhang: 1999)
The option of person substitutes follows the principle of
iconicity. Take as an example “Yinghe Xiang de shu ji Zheng Zhang
(颍河乡的书记郑张)” and “Sheng zheng fu cai wu chu chu zhang
Lv Qiang (省政府财务处处长吕强)”, they both occur for the first
time in the text, the modifiers in the person substitutes provide the
background information for the development of the story, so it is
necessary to make a description about their identification. In the
later part of the story, “Zheng Zhang (郑张) 、Lv Qiang (吕强)” are
the partial repetition of the former, since the reader has been clear
about who they are. The option of zeros and pronouns also realize
the principle of iconicity and economy.
The person substitutes in the cohesion chains also observe
iconicity. The first person substitute usually occurs in a indefinite
form, but the sequent cohesion substitutes in a definite form. That
corresponds to the iconicity of character recognition. (Wang Hongqi:
2001).
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Reader Response Theory: Towards a Cognitive
Framework for Teaching of English Literature to
Second Language Learners
Dr.Munazza Yaqoob,
Department of English (FLL), Female Campus,
International Islamic University,
Islamabad.
Abstract
The present paper attempts to explore how reader response
theory can provide a theoretical framework for the application of
cognitive teaching strategies to teach literature to the second language
learners of English literature. The cognitive framework presented is
based on the literature review of reader response theory and cognitive
learning models. It builds up an association between the key concept
derived from reader response theory such as informed reader, reader
and his/her background, community of readers, and reader and the
world of the text and the basic requirements of cognitive learning
theory which include existence of prior knowledge or knowledge
base, problem solving, critical thinking, and cooperative learning.
Key words/terms: reader response theory; cognitive learning
psychology; cognitive teaching framework
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1. Introduction
The present paper attempts to build a connection between
cognitive learning psychology and the teaching of literature. It
highlights how cognitive learning psychology provides help to devise
strategies for the application of reader response theory to the teaching
of literature to second language learners. It also suggests that a
systematic application of cognitive teaching strategies and techniques
in accordance with the basic principles of reader response theory
nourishes reading competence of students and improves their attitude
towards reading. In addition to this, it makes the reading of literary
texts a creative experience because it attempts to utilize literary texts
as a tool to enhance the functioning of students’ cognitive processes.
The methodology suggested also fosters flexibility and a spirit of
collaboration in students and develops their thinking skills. It also
encourages interdisciplinary approaches in a literature classroom and
relates literary texts with students’ personal life and culture. It thus
promotes active and meaningful learning.
The changed scenario of the twenty first century world has
also brought a change in the reading habit of students. They, as Susan
Basnett (2005) observes, are not interested in reading classical literary
texts and lack classical training. In addition to this, students of
literature with English as their second language lack require
proficiency of a second language. Thus they find reading literary texts
a cumbersome experience. As a result they lose motivation and
interest in literary reading. Reader response theory as it works on the
principles of cooperative and community learning ensures maximum
participation of students in reading process. It thus shifts burden from
an individual student to a group or community of readers. As a result it
relieves anxiety and involves students in the world of literary texts.
Reading becomes a creative reading experience. They fill in the gaps
of the text, predict and explore meaning, and synthesize generated
ideas. It develops their interest in texts which results in motivation for
reading literary texts.
Does reader response theory provide a sound theoretical
framework for the application of cognitive strategies in order to teach
English literature to the second language learners?
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3. Methodology
The theoretical framework for the paper has been based on concepts of
reader response theory analysed in the light of pertinent cognitive
strategies.
The high-tech world of the twenty first century requires
educationists to design educational policies which do not merely
ensure transmission of knowledge, but rather prepare learners to face
the challenges of the rapidly changing dynamic world. Education
today needs to develop necessary skills and abilities of learners which
are required to process information and to use it in various contexts
independently. It is now strongly realized that a framework for
teaching is required that promotes spirit of exploration and
investigation, a flexible and collaborative attitude, and an ability to
create harmony between knowledge and creativity (Lyn: 1994). The
same goals are to be set for studying literature in twenty first century.
Lindblom (2000) supporting this asserts that “technological,
sociological, and political changes in our world demand that we use
literature as a way to encourage our students to engage in public
discourse of a global nature.” In order to achieve the said goals,
instructional methods and strategies which are based on cognitive
learning psychology are recommended as they focus on developing
learners’ problem solving abilities and other higher order thinking
skills and help make learning meaningful and life-relevant (Feden &
Vogel: 2003; Craft: 2001).
Cognitive learning psychology is concerned with thought
processes or cognitive processes such as perception, attention,
memory, concept building, retrieval and transference (Solso: 2004;
Reed: 2000; Ormrod: 2000). Cognitive theorists taking into
consideration theories of human learning by early theorists, in
particular Piaget and Vygotsky, focus on the cognitive processes
which are involved in learning. Cognitive psychology regards
learning as the processing of information and building connections
between ideas. It therefore suggests strategies which facilitate learners
to actively process information and construct knowledge. Information
processing theories of human cognition explain how people mentally
process information and thus facilitate teachers to help their students
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to effectively learn whatever they want to teach them (Ormrod).
Social cognitive theorists like Piaget (1928, 1952), Vygotsky (1978),
Bandura (1977, 1986, 1989), and Bruner (1961, 1966) lay emphasis
on the role of interaction and environment in the process of learning.
Reader response theory bears close affinities with social
cognitive learning theory. Reader response approach provides an
effective critical framework to teachers to make their classrooms more
dynamic and promote active learning. The basic assumption of
reader response theory is that “meanings are in heads, not in books”
(Holland: 1995), Thus it lays emphasis on reader’s role in the
production of meaning of a text. The proponents of reader response
theory considers role of the reader to be as important as that of an
author in the creation of a text. In its attempts to trace out the effect of
the world of a text on a reader, Reader response theory takes into
consideration the moral, philosophical, psychological, and rhetorical
aspects in the process of textual analysis (Guerin et al.: 2005; Roemer:
1987). It is generally agreed that it is not a unified or monolithic
theory, but rather a collection of approaches emphasizing reader’s
active and primary role in the production of meaning in a literary text
(Bourdieu: 1977; Iser: 1972, 1978). The various positions which
Reader Response criticism takes include structuralism,
phenomenology, psychoanalysis, and hermeneutics.
Reader response theory insists on the active interaction
between reader and the texts. For Shafer (1997) reading texts with the
reader response theory is “a transactional experience of a text and
reader. Similarly for Rosenblatte (1978), reading is a “transaction, a
two way process involving a reader and a text” .David Bleich (1978)
introduced the idea of subjective response to text in his Subjective
Criticism. For him “reality is invented and not observed or discerned
by human beings”. Like Bleich, Wolfgang Iser also took the
phenomenological position and developed his theory on the notion of
“difficulty if not the impossibility of separating anything known from
the mind that knows it.”(Guerin et al). He proposed a “communication
model” of reading (Ray: 1989). For him it is the reader who by
building up connections in the text recognizes its exhaustibility (Iser:
1972; Iser: 1978). Similarly Norman Holland (1968) found the
possibility of application of ego psychology to the study of literature.
Reading and meaning making, for Holland, is a subjective experience
of readers who interact with the text. He establishes a relationship
between a literary text and identity- structure of the reader and argues
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that every reader attempts to explore his identity theme in a text
((Newton: 1988). Stanley Fish’s in Surprised by Sin: The Reader in
Paradise Lost (1967) and Is there a Text in Class: The Authority of
Interpretative Communities (1980) regards the process of reading as
dynamic and asserts that readers negotiate with the text and then
actually create their own meaning as they read it. His informed reader
works in collaboration with the community of readers to negotiate the
meaning of the text. Hans Robert Jauss’s Reception Theory explores
the hermeneutical and new historical aspects of reader response
theory. He considers the documentation of reader’s response to texts
in any given period of time as an extremely important factor in order
to develop meaning (Newton; Guerin et al.).
The present paper attempts to explore how an interaction
between reader response theory and cognitive learning theory can be
developed to design cognitive strategies for teaching literature. On the
basis of the qualitative analysis of theoretical models of reader
response theory and cognitive meaningful learning presented in this
section, the paper presents the assimilation of key concepts of reader
response theory and cognitive meaningful learning which can help
develop a theoretical framework to design cognitive teaching
strategies for teaching literature to second language learners of
English literature.
5. Findings
Reader response theory as discussed in the preceding pages
encourages negotiation and interaction between a reader and the text,
which leads to discovering complete, correct, comprehensive, and
consistent meanings. It cherishes the richness and ever green beauty of
literature. It affirms that “literary texts are open to a wide range of
interpretations” (Allan: 2004). By assigning primary importance to
readers, it welcomes variety of responses, even if they are
idiosyncratic in the process of exploring more adequate meanings.
This multiplicity of interpretations for reader response theorists is a
means to revitalize the text and confirm its depth and complexity. The
theory working on the principles of social cognitive learning theory
acknowledges the unique experiences the reader brings in to interpret
a literary text. They actively create meaning of a text. Readers
reading with reader response approach build up connections between
their life and the world of the text as they invest their varied cultural
backgrounds, beliefs, and experiences into their perception of a text
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(Roemer; Golden & Guthrie: 1986; Baird: 1993). The reception
approach in reader response theory encourages the analysis of books
and journal reviews, magazines and even personal letters in order to
determine the status and significance of a text. This analysis is a
process of investigation which brings a literary text out of the walls of
literary criticism into the ever-changing and expanding arena of
practical world. This method also supports innovative and creative
interpretations.
Reader response theory expects readers to be informed.
They need to possess a subject relevant knowledge base. In order to
comprehend a literary text students are required to have familiarity
with contextually appropriate linguistic items, i.e., vocabulary and
syntactic patterns and other interpretative conventions and strategies.
An informed reader is the one who can see and understand the wide
ranges in perspectives and choices and thus, is able to develop
comprehensive and acceptable meanings of a text. Being equipped
with the necessary linguistic and literary interpretative skills, the
students work on texts and generate the meaning independently. They
thus take the responsibility of their learning and attempt to achieve
autonomy. This also promotes reflective and critical thinking and a
spirit of investigation in students.
For social cognitive theorist people learn best when engaged
in discussion. This, as they explain triggers cognitive processes and
builds rich networks of information in long term memory. Learning as
Feden and Vogel (2003) perceive is building up connections in long
term memory. For creativity theorists such as Saaty (2001)
information in long term memory is also an important condition for
creative thinking .Reader response theory encourages negotiation and
interaction in the community of readers in order to determine the best
possible meaning of a text. The process of sharing starts with the
personal interpretations and ends on a generally agreed upon meaning
which seems closest to the design of a text. Thus Reader Response
theory supports collaborative learning. It also makes reading as an
organized meaning making process like problem solving process. It
requires the readers to first focus attention on certain aspects of a text
with a critical eye and disregard irrelevant parts. The readers share
their meaning with one another and attempt to build up connections
among all the parts of the text and synthesize them into an organized
meaningful whole (Lyn).
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The application of reader response theory in a classroom supports
the role of a teacher as a facilitator, who creates a cooperative
environment and motivates students to think and contribute in the
meaning making process. Teachers become, as Cortland et al. (1980)
observe, “partners engaged in genuine enquiry with their students,
discovering commonplace locations that connect readers to each
other, readers to texts, and texts to students’ own lived
experiences…[and] enable the students to develop their understanding
of the processes involved in comprehension and interpretation”.
Reader response theory supports the notion that minds are
designed to expand and texts have “formative effect” on students
(Alcorn & Bracher: 1985). It demands students to generate personal
interpretations, explore alternatives and reject assumptions and
established opinions. Thus, it trains students to discard standardized
formats, and have self confidence and trust in their own judgment. It is
capable of bringing conceptual change in readers as Alcorn and
Bracher explain:
The reading and interpretation of literature appear
capable of promoting significant alterations in the
reader’s self. Such alteration of the inner world and
enhancement of the ego’s organizing capacity,
however, are largely cognitive rather than structural
changes. They can affect one’s perceptual, logical
functioning in important way…..
As the above discussion shows that reading literature with
reader response theory engages students in “dialogic inquiry” in
classrooms (Rex: 2001). It provides an effective critical framework to
teachers to make their classrooms more dynamic and promotes active
learning. By engaging students in active and independent reading it
enhances cognitive functioning of students and they construct their
experience and articulate conceptual insights in the form of linguistic
structures.
The detailed discussion in the preceding pages also helps to
extract four key aspects of reader response theory, which include
informed reader, community of reader, role of readers’ beliefs and
knowledge base in making meaning, and exploring the world of the
text. These four concepts are concerned with the basic requirements of
cognitive learning which aims to promote active and meaningful
learning. They are related to the processes of developing knowledge
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base or schemata in long term memory, building connections
between and among ideas, and between classroom learning and
students’ personal life and experiences, problem solving, cooperative
and social learning. A framework for the application of cognitive
teaching strategies and techniques based on these key concepts of
reader response approach to reading is explained below:
a. Informed reader: A teacher is required to help students develop
their subject relevant knowledge base in order to make them informed
readers qualified to interpret a text. A prior knowledge helps learner to
determine what is more important to learn and then they can design a
framework for organizing information. (Ormrod). Learning is
meaningful when newly received information is connected with the
already stored information in long term memory. It is as Ormrod says
“comprehension and understanding”. Knowledge base also
facilitates learners to elaborate on information in order to fill gaps and
draw inferences. The suggested strategies, in this regard are using
in-depth study techniques, rehearsal, techniques for organizing
material, and working on projects and presentations. These strategies
also make learning meaningful.
b. Text and its world: It refers to exploring all the dimensions of the
world which a text brings to readers. The teacher is required to
encourage students to focus on all the aspects of the text and attempt
to discover a meaningful unity and a whole. The process of
exploration is like solving a problem. Major stages in problem solving
process according to Hayes as cited by Solso (2004) include
identifying the problem, representing the problem, planning the
solution, executing the plan, and evaluating the solution. Students are
required to focus on all the details of the text and critically analyze
them, connect all the details for a meaningful interpretation, and then
evaluate the interpretation .The suggested strategies in this regard are
using techniques of note taking, summarizing comprehension,
elaboration, and visualization.
c. Reader and his/her background: Reader response theory requires
readers to build their response to a text based on their cultural/ethnic
background and knowledge base, and use this understanding to
negotiate the meaning of the text. For cognitive theorists when
information is made life –relevant and connected to learners’
knowledge base, it becomes meaningful for them and results into
effective learning (Ormrod; Reed). The suggested teaching strategies
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are using techniques of inference, making connections or
transference, and elaboration, and writing response essays.
d. Readers’ community: It refers to encouraging readers to share
their responses to the text in order to reach toward a more consistent,
satisfying and comprehensive interpretation/s of the text. Social
cognitive learning theory emphasizes motivating learners to observe
and share with others around them. It discourages competitive
learning, which is not focused on learning or cognitive processing of
information rather on performance goals. It promotes collaboration,
group thinking, and community feeling among learners which are
very effective for development of problem solving abilities
(Ormrod).The suggested teaching strategies in this regard are brain
storming, pair/group work, discussions, and working on projects.
6. Conclusion
The discussion given above makes it clear that reader
response theory can serve as a sound foundation for the application of
cognitive teaching strategies for teaching English literature to the
students who are non-native speakers of the English language. A
systematic application of the framework modeled on Reader Response
theory of reading and interpreting texts can help teachers to make their
classrooms more dynamic and empowering as it can assist to nourish
collaboration among students as well as build their autonomy, and
develop their problem solving abilities. The students can be equipped
with the necessary skills and knowledge to explore the world of a text
and bring out a variety of meanings and make their reading a really
satisfying experience. By making reading a pleasurable and
interactive experience, reader response theory helps enhances
students’ cognitive abilities. Improved cognitive processing skills
makes reading a smoother and less cumbersome process for the
learners which results in motivation for reading literary texts in
English which is their non-native language.
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Teaching Essay Content through Integrated
and Product Approaches
Muhammad Fareed,
Lecturer,
NED, University of Engineering &
Technology, Karachi.
Abstract
One of the important problems in the teaching of English is
the method or approach used for teaching essays. Unfortunately, in
most of the cases – particularly in majority of public schools no
method / approach of essay writing is adopted; instead students are
not only provided ready made essays but also encouraged to
reproduce the same in examination.The purpose of the study is to
discover which of writing approaches (product approach and
integrated approach) helps students more improve content of essay at
tertiary level in Karachi, Pakistan. This experimental research
includes two equal ability and equivalent size intact groups of
undergraduate students of a public sector university in Karachi,
Pakistan. One of the groups was taught through integrated approach,
the other group was trained on product approach pattern.
Key words/terms: essay content; product approach; integrated
approach.
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1. Introduction
In Pakistani public schools (Urdu medium) essay writing
often starts from class six; students are taught basic compositions,
such as short narrative and descriptive etc. It is most unfortunate that
instead of teaching writing and having writing skills practiced,
teachers either provide students notes or dictate already written
material, which they memorize and reproduce in their final
examinations – preferably word by word. The situation gets worse in
the board examinations Secondary School Certificate (SSC) and
Higher School Certificate HSC as the same practice is being carried
out there as well. Those students who are able to get the notes
prepared by experienced and qualified teachers get more marks in
board examinations than those who can not afford. Most importantly,
many SSC, and HSC boards including Karachi Board of Secondary
Education and the Board of Intermediate Education, Karachi play a
key role in promoting this “memorized form of writing” by repeating
the same topics for essay writing in examinations. The very practice
of replication encourages students to memorize, which is much
easier and less time consuming than developing writing skills.
Teachers also have a hand in promoting plagiarism; instead of
promoting writing skills in students they give them the tips to fit a
memorized essay into various slightly different situations. Finally,
when students reach the tertiary level, a significant number of them
are unable to produce an essay with appropriate content, grammar,
structure, cohesion, coherence and mechanics.
Essay writing can be taught through many approaches and methods,
some of them are: reading method, free expression method, process
approach, product approach, and genre based approach and finally
integrated approach. This research is limited to teaching essay
content through product and integrated approaches only.
Is the integrated approach more effective than the product
approach in teaching essay content at the tertiary level?
3. Review of related literature
The product approach or the traditional approach is the
oldest approach to teaching essay writing in the English language. It
is teacher cantered – teacher decides the essay topic, length and time;
focuses more on structure than on content, first draft of essay is
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considered the final draft and it focuses more on structure than on
content. Students are provided with model essays of established
writers and are supposed to model their essays according to the
samples provided. However, they can also be given student essays to
identify problematic parts of the essays. “Traditional writing
instruction usually works on the assumption that students need to
learn the parts so they can eventually construct a meaningful whole.
Traditionally, emphasis is first on vocabulary, spelling, usage,
mechanics, and the conventions of manuscript presentation and later
on organization, style, and appeals to an audience. Usually the
subject is supplied by the instructor since the students do not know
anything “substantial”. It is logical, but it doesn’t work for most
students; the particulars are not abstractly significant to students who
cannot understand their purpose or importance until they use them to
make their own meaning.” (Murray: 1985.)
“Cognitive theorist including Piaget (1959), Vygotsky (1986),
and Burner (1966) have provided crucial insights by describing the
impact of thought and language on writing. The emphasis in the
writing process has shifted from analyzing students’ finished
products to investigating what students think and do as they write.”
(Tompkins: 1990)
Integrated approach to essay writing is based on process
approach and product approach of essay writing. It is neither fully
teacher cantered nor learner – neither bounds the student nor gives
him too much freedom. In integrated approach to essay writing
students follow various steps before they achieve the final product.
The steps that students follow are: brain storming, organizing,
writing the first draft, revising / sharing, writing final draft and
editing.
Four contrastive theories which are often used in ESL writing
include: cognitive development theory, contrastive rhetoric theory,
social constructionist t and Communication Theory. Cognitive
development theory, which emerged in Europe in the eighteenth
century, shifted the concept of writing as product to writing as
process. “Cognitive theorist including Piaget (1959), Vygotsky
(1986), and Burner (1966) have provided crucial insights by
describing the impact of thought and language on writing. “The
emphasis in the writing process has shifted from analyzing students’
finished products to investigating what students think and do as they
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write.” (Tompkins: 1990) This theory emphasizes that it is not
only the product, which should be focused, but how that product was
achieved is equally important: nature of knowledge, structures and
process.
Some researchers such as Hayes and Flowers (1981) regard
writing as recursive process as shown below:
The Cognitive Process Model of the Composing Process.
(Flower&Hayes: 1981).
According to Flawer and Hayes’s model there is a single writing

process for all writers: skilled and new writers. Bereiter and Scardamalia
(1987) criticized this model dividing the process into two parts:
knowledge telling model for less proficient writers and transformation
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model for expert writers. Cognitive development theory has
reasonably contributed to writing both in native and ESL.
There are also student approaches to essay writing such as deep
approach and surface approach to essay writing. In deep approach,
students are internally motivated, and drawn in the process of writing.
They want to write regardless of marks and grades. Two deep
approaches which (Ellen & Nancy: 2001) have been discussed are:
elaborative voice approach and procedural approach. On the other
hand in surface approach students write due to some external
pressure personally they dislike and avoid writing, this also includes
externally motivated reproduction of information and memorization.
(Ellen & Nancy: 2001) have discussed three surfaces approaches as:
low self – efficacy approach, procedural approach, spontaneous –
impulsive approach. Writing can also be taught through tutoring and
journal writing as well. “Tutoring can lead to an increased sense of
accomplishment and self-esteem, better mastery of academic skills,
increased ability to apply and integrate knowledge taught in different
courses and a broader, more realistic outlook on the process of
teaching and learning.” (Shin: 2006). Journal writing is a technique
that has been promoted by educators in many fields, including
nursing, counseling and management, as a means of facilitating
reflective practice and stimulating critical thinking.” (Shin: 2006).
Genre approach to essay writing is a combination to process
approach and product approach to essay writing.
4. Methodology
The researcher conducted pre-test in both groups before they
were given treatment according to the approaches they were taught
through. Students in both groups were taught three types of essays:
descriptive, narrative and argumentative. Each type of essay was
given six sessions of fifty minutes each: these sessions were arranged
twice a week in both groups. In order to assure that both groups had
equal background of English language various steps were taken: first
of all, both groups were selected from the same department, so that
they do not have any significant difference in their achievements in
SSC and HSC examination. Secondly, only those students were
included in the sample that had passed their SSC and HSC from
Karachi Board of Secondary Education and Board of Intermediate
Education Karachi. Thirdly, the researcher also got a questionnaire
filled to make sure that students do not have significant difference in
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their English marks in SSC, HSC. The researcher also made sure
that the subjects had not completed any English language course
(apart from their formal education system). Students’ pre tests which
were assessed before treatment which also showed that there was no
significant difference between the two groups. Finally, those topics,
which were given in post-test, were different from the topics
practiced during treatment.
The group that was taught through product / traditional
approach was first provided theoretical information of the type of
essay they would start with, and then they were provided modal
essays from “College Writing Skills with Readings” (Langan:2001).
Content, grammar, cohesion and coherence in the essays were
discussed with the group and students also had practice on, topic
sentences, structure, grammar, cohesion and coherence with the help
of exercises that accompanied the essays. On the seventh day the
group was given a topic of the same type of essay, they were taught
in the class to write on – except the post test when students were
given one topic from each essay type (three choices). During writing
students were not allowed to discuss or take help from the teacher or
classmates; first draft was the final draft which became a part of their
portfolios.
The other group which was trained through integrated approach
was provided the theoretical information of the type of essay they
would start as in product approach. They were provided the same
model essays, which were given to the other group. But, instead of
having students read those essays and do exercises in class, they
were required to under go some procedure: in the first step they
would go for brain storming or clustering in groups of four students.
Secondly, they would go for the first draft, the third stage was of
revising, (group revision). Finally, in the light of suggestions given
by the group members they would go for the second and final draft.
Brainstorming / clustering, first draft, revising and final draft were
part of their portfolio assessment
In this experimental study quantitative method was used for
statistical inferences, interpretations and measurement of
associations of the variables.
A Pre-test and a post-test were used to measure students’
progress in essay content.
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A panel of examiners, which consisted of three members
including the researcher, assessed the pre-tests and post-tests content.
5. Data analysis and findings
A.Null hypothesis 1
There is no significant difference between the test scores of
content of essay in the pretest of product approach and in the pre
test of integrated approach.
Table 1: Paired Samples Test (pre test product approach and
integrated approach)
Paired Differences t df
95%
Std. Confidence
Std. Error Interval of
Mea Devi Mea the
n ation n Difference
Low Uppe
er r
Pre test
content
( Product
Approach) .1224 .0988 -.081 .3264 1.23 2
Pre test 0 9429 6 63 3 8 4
content
(Integrated
Approach )
Ho: µ1 = µ2
H1: µ1 ≠ µ2
α = 0.05
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Decision Rule: Reject Ho if t ≤ -2.064 or t ≥ + 2.064
Result:
Referring to table of t-distribution, we find that calculated t =
1.238, with df = 24 and α = 0.05, lies between ± 2.064, hence
null hypothesis is accepted and it is concluded that there is no
significant difference between the test scores of content of essay in
the pretest of product approach and in the pre test of integrated
approach. Rejection of the hypothesis proves; the selected groups
were equal.
B.Null Hypothesis 2
essay content in the pretest and post test of product approach
Table 2: Paired Samples Test (pretest and post tests content
approach)
Paired Differences t
Std. 95%
Std. Error Confidence
Devi Mea Interval of the
Mean ation n Difference
Lowe
r Upper
Pre test
content
( Product
Approach
) -.5772 .4167 .0833 -.4051
-.74923 -6.925 24
0 5 5 7
Post test
Content
( Product
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approach
)
Ho: µ1 = µ2
H1: µ1 ≠ µ2
α = 0.05
Result: Referring to table of t-distribution, we find that calculated t =
-6.925, with df = 24 and α = 0.05, is less than - 2.064, hence null
hypothesis is rejected and it is concluded that there is significant
difference between the test scores of content of essay in the pretest
and post test of product approach
C. Null Hypothesis 3
content of essay in the pretest and post test of integrated approach.
Table 3: Paired Samples Test (pretest and posttest integrated
approach)
Paired Differences t Df
Std.
Err
Std. or 95% Confidence
Devia Me Interval of the
Mean tion an Difference
Lower Upper
Pre test
content -8.
-.900 .5207 .10 -.685 2
-1.11574 65
( Integrat 80 2 414 86 4
0
ed
Approach
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)
Post test
content
( Integrat
ed
Approach
)
Ho: µ1 = µ2
H1: µ1 ≠ µ2
α = 0.05
Result:
Referring to table of t-distribution, we find that calculated t = -8.650,
with df = 24 and α = 0.05, is less than - 2.064, hence null
hypothesis is rejected and it is concluded that there is significant
difference between the test scores of content of essay in the pretest
and post test of integrated approach.
D. Null Hypothesis 4
There is no significant difference between the test scores of content
of essay in the post- test of product approach and post test of
integrated approach.
Table 4: Paired Samples Test (posttests product approach and
integrated approach)
Paired Differences t df
Std. Std. 95% Confidence

Mea Devi Error Interval of the
n ation Mean Difference
Lower Upper
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Post
test
content
( Produ
ct
approac
h)
-.20 .654 .1308 .0689 -1.5
-.47131 24
120 38 8 1 37
Post
test
content
(Integra
ted
Approa
ch)
Ho: µ1 = µ2
H1: µ1 ≠ µ2
α = 0.05
Referring to table of t-distribution, we find that calculated t =
-1.537, with df = 24 and α = 0.05, lies between ± 2.064, hence null
hypothesis is accepted and it is concluded that there is no significant
difference between the test scores of content of essay in the post- test
of product approach and post test of integrated approach.
6. Findings
The conclusion that can be drawn from the findings of this
experiment is that both “Product approach” and “integrated
approach” help students improve essay content equally, and tertiary
level English language teachers in Pakistan can adopt either of the
approaches for teaching essay content.
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Causes for Closing B.ED (Technology) Degree
Program at NISTE
Saima Nazir (Ph.D Scholar) (co-author 1),

Islamabad.
Dr. S. M. Hassan, (co-author 2),
Professor,
Department of Education, NUML Islamabad.
(Former Member (P&D), Higher Education Commission)
Pakistan.
Abstract
This research paper analyses the causes of closing B.Ed
(Tech) degree programme offered by the National Institute of
Science & Technical Education (NISTE), Ministry of Education, and
Government of Pakistan, introduced under TEP II (Technical
Education Project II) with the assistance of the Asian Development
Bank (ADB). Two sets of questionnaires were developed and
circulated: one for 23 trainee teachers and another for
officers/instructors of NISTE. Questionnaire no.1 was circulated
among 23 trainee teachers of technical institutions from 03 provinces
(Sindh, NWFP, Punjab) and the Federal Area of Pakistan; all teachers
responded to the questionnaire.
Nine officers/instructors of NISTE responded to questionnaire no: 2.
the study reveals that i). There is a difficulty in getting a stipend
ii).There is a non- availability of incentives and degree accreditation
after the completion of the academic programme. These were the
main causes for closing down the program. The respondents
proposed that some incentives should be given, the degree should be
recognized and the program should be continued.
Key terms: technical education
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1. Introduction
The First Pakistan Education Conference held in November,
1947, three months after the creation of Pakistan, indicated in
general the importance of education for the new nation. The
conference recommended in particular the establishment of three
bodies, the Technical Education Board as one of them.
Technical education was emphasized in the report of the
Commission on Education, 1959. Expansion and improvement of
medium level of technical education in Pakistan was the target of the
report. The policy makers implemented recommendations by
establishing 5 new universities in science and technology- 2 in
former East Pakistan, 2 in West Pakistan and one science university
at Islamabad. This tempo was followed up under the subsequent
Education Policy, 1972-80, by separating the Science and
Technology Division from the Ministry of Education and making it a
full-fledged Ministry of Science and Technology in order to focus
attention on the development of science and technology in Pakistan.
As a result 9 professional/ technical universities were established
under this policy by up-grading or creating new facilities such as
Engineering Universities of NED, Karachi, Mehran, Jamshoro,
Nawabshah, sub-campuses at Taxila, Engg. College Multan,
Agriculture University, Tandojam, Agriculture College, Multan, UET,
Khuzdar. This momentum was lost in the subsequent education
policies of 1979, 1992, 1998 and ESR 2001 when policy emphasis
was detracted to nationalization, decentralization, literacy, adult
education, elementary education, religious education and now to
higher education, until the international development agency such as
the Asian Development Bank came forward to rescue Pakistan by
offering Pakistan financial assistance for expansion and
improvement of technical education in Pakistan.
ADB assisted Technical Education Project (TEP II) was
developed to supplement the efforts of the public sector institutions
for qualitative improvement and quantitative expansion through
various inputs and encourage private entrepreneurs for establishing
quality technical institutions.
The project was originally scheduled to start in the first
quarter of 1996 with an amount of $ 60.0 million and to be
completed in 06 years, but in fact it was delayed for 2 years to begin
with, the period was extended up to 02 years. The project has been
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closed on 30 June, 2004
The project envisaged upgrading the existing polytechnics
by rehabilitating and modernizing the polytechnic system in Pakistan.
It also envisaged the introduction of new technologies to meet the
anticipated needs of industrialization of Pakistan. In this program, it
encompassed participation of private sector in the medium level of
technical education. The project also proposed to support the supply
of local and foreign consultants, local and foreign staff training,
equipment, furniture, books and infrastructure development for the
proposed new technologies.
The project also provided development and introduction of
B.ED (Technology) 03 years degree program as pre-service and
in-service training for polytechnic teachers. This degree program was
started by NISTE, Ministry of Education, Government of Pakistan,
Islamabad, in 2000. This degree program was affiliated with Riphah
International University, Islamabad, Pakistan. All provinces (04) and
Federal Area sent their nominations from their respective
Polytechnic institutions to the NISTE for the training program.
The program has been closed by NISTE, Federal Ministry of
Education, Pakistan due to the following reasons. Low enrolment
was a very important contributing factor in closing the program
NISTE.(2006).
2. Research questions
Q.1. what are the causes for the closing down of BEd (Technology)
Degree Programme?
Q.2.Can the program be revived?
Tahir, M. Qureshi et al (2006) wrote in an article that in
Pakistan more than 82 universities and 26 degree awarding
institutions with many affiliated colleges are functioning to build the
nation through teaching and coaching the students. Abdal-Haqq
(1995) found that in developing countries, the factors responsible for
the poor state of education are: “Outdated initial training programs,
short disconnected in- service training, inadequate textbooks,
blackboard -based pedagogy: overly used norm- referenced
summative evaluation: and a host of other challenges have permitted
a few pilot programs.”
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Blum (1990) contended: “The research literature strongly
indicates that on going relevant staff development activities are
necessary if a teaching force is to be effective.
3.1 Technical education
Ali, M. (1998) wrote in his book that science and technology
have contributed enormously to achieve a nation’s goal for
development. Science and technology are closely linked since
technology refers to the utilization of scientific progress. Scientific
development itself is governed by the number and quality of
appropriately trained technical manpower available for national
development activities.
The development of human resources as a basic tool for the
attainment of scientific and technical competence for the nations has
become the key factor of economic growth. The harnessing of
resources of the earth, i.e cutting short the distance through better
means of communication and transport and freedom from the
scourge of disease and lately the access to space science are now the
immediate aspirations and objectives of the developing societies. To
attain these goals the developing countries need to build up a sound
system of education, specially scientific and technical education. But
what is technical education?
Technical education is a comprehensive term referring to
those aspects of educational processes involving, in addition to
general education, the study of technologies and related sciences and
acquisition of practical skills, attitudes, understanding and
knowledge relating to occupations in various sectors of economic
and social life. According to the recommendations of General
Conference of UNESCO, technical and vocational education is
further understood to be:
a. An integral part of general education
b. A means of preparing for occupational field.
c. An aspect of continuing education
Ali, M. (1998) viewed that so far there has not been any
institutional arrangement for pre-service training of persons who
would like to choose technical teaching as a profession. The chronic
shortage of teachers in technical institutions led the government to
consider pre-service technical teacher education program as a
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potential mode for the preparation of teachers of polytechnic and
technical institutes. The 7th Five Year Plan recommended introducing
pre-service B.Ed (Tech) courses in the National Technical Teacher
Training Centre (NTTTC), Islamabad. For Pakistan this was an
innovative step though similar arrangements were already in
existence in some of the regional countries such as Iran, Thailand,
Malaysia, South Korea and Indonesia. On the pattern of 12+3 model
of B.Ed program, a three years teacher education program for
International Science students leading to B.Ed (Tech) degree was
included in the Second ADB Technical Education Project. A
significant initiative to be undertaken by National Institute of
Science and Technical Education (NISTE) related to the designing
and introduction of a pre-service degree level course of B.ED
technology for the up gradation of diploma holder teachers of
polytechnic institutes.
3.2 B.Ed (Technology) (03 years degree program)
This program was started by NISTE, Federal Ministry of
Education; Islamabad, Pakistan in 2000, under ADB assisted TEP.
It was affiliated with Riphah International University, Pakistan. The
Education Departments of all Provinces (04) and Federal area
technical institutions sent nominations for this program. So far a total
of 67 students were enrolled in the program. 41 students were fresh
graduates and 26 were technical teachers. 26 (01 left) out of 67
technical teachers came from technical institutions.The province of
Balochistan did not send any nomination. Only technical teachers
who got in service training through this degree programme were
included in the study.
4. Methodology
The objectives of this research were met through
administering 02 sets of questionnaires as tools for collecting
information generated for the specific purpose of the research.
It must be mentioned over here that in Pakistan, no such
study had yet been conducted. The questionnaire, A, was designed to
collect the data from trainee teachers. In the process of data
collection, 25 trainee teachers who had taken B.Ed (tech) degree
were contacted. Out of 25 teachers 01 trainee teacher is in jail
/imprisonment and 01 left the polytechnic institute so could not be
contacted. The questionnaire, B, was designed to collect information
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from 09 officers/ instructors of NISTE who were involved in the
program.
Data collected from 23 trainee teachers and 09 officers of
NISTE were analyzed and the interpretation of data was also done
where necessary. The data collected from the respondents was
summed up and then the percentage and mean of the items were
calculated. The data obtained in this way was tabulated, analyzed and
interpreted.
The in-puts of 25 teachers of Polytechnic Institutions from 03
provinces (11-NWFP, 02- Punjab, 11- Sindh, 01-Federal area) and 09
concerned officers/ instructors of NISTE were utilized for finding the
causes of closing down the program.
The method of data collection for this research paper is
primary source through 02 sets of questionnaire. Questionnaire A for
Trainee Teachers and Questionnaire B for Officers/Instructors of
NISTE. The sample of trainee teachers comprises of 25 expected
respondents but only 23 replied (01 is in jail, 01 has left the institute)
while all officers/ instructors of NISTE replied. The questionnaires
were sent on postal addresses of their institutions/colleges. The
questionnaires were then returned in 30 days time period. While
questionnaires for officers/instructors of NISTE were distributed by
hand which were returned in 20 days time period.
5. Findings
Reasons for closing of the program are i) the non-issuuace of
degree accreditation. ii) the problems in getting fee/ stipend
(mean=95.6), iii) no incentive after getting the degree. iv) lack of
understanding about the viability of the program. v) the nominees did
not find the program promising (mean=87). Many people involved in
the programme (mean=54) complained of the shortage of teaching
faculty. Teachers were not very enthusiastic. That is why it was
difficult for the executors to continue the program further (92.6%). All
people (trainee teachers, instructors/officers) were in favor of
continuing the program. All agreed that B.Ed (Tech) degree is a useful
one. However, these difficulties needed to be removed by providing
incentives, teaching faculty and making the process of giving stipend
easy.
Quality of the Program
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90%
80%
70%
60%
50%
40% Series1
30%
20%
10%
0%
KBP TTM LP TLE LWE BAL
Items
TABLES/GRAPHS
Responses of Trainee Teachers.
Table 1: Quality of the program
Items Knowledg Trainin Lab. Training in Labs. Books

e Based g in Practica handling/us Well availabl
Program Teachin l e of lab. equippe e in
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method
s
Response 87% 82.6% 100% 91.3% 82.6% 82.6%

s in %
Table 2: Teaching faculty
Items Faculty Shortage Qualified Faculty
Responses in % 74% 34.8%

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Figure 1: Quality of the program
Teaching Faculty
80%
70%
60%
50%
40% Series1
%
30%
20%
10%
0%
FS QF
Figure 2: Teaching faculty
KBP = Knowledge Items based program
FS = Faculty Shortage
TTM = Training in teaching methods QF =
Qualified faculty
LP = Lab. Practical
TLE = Training in handling of lab. equipment
LWE = Labs. Well equipped
BAL = Books available in library
Figure 1 shows the quality of the program. Respondents were
found satisfied with the teaching methods, lab equipment and practical
work. However, respondents (74%) stated to have faced the problem
of faculty shortage during studies as shown in Figure 2.
Table 3: Problems regarding fee and degree
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Items Problems in Stipend Degree Any

getting amount Equivalence incentive
money enough after getting
degree
Responses in 82.6% 100% 100% 100%

%
Table 4: About program
Items Useful Not to close Program to be

Program program continued
Responses in 100% 100% 100%

%
Problems regarding Fee/Degree
120.00%
100.00%
80.00%
60.00% Series1
%
40.00%
Figure 3:
Problems
20.00%
regarding fee
and degree
0.00%
PGM SAE DE IAGD
Items
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About Program
120%
100%
80%
60%
%
Series1
40%
20%
0%
UP NCP PC
Items
Figure 4: About program
PGM = Problems in getting money UP = Useful Program
SAE = Stipend amount enough NCP = Not to close
program
DE = Degree Equivalence PC = Program to be
continued
IAGD = Incentive after getting degree
Figure 3 shows a high percentage regarding the issues of degree
accreditation, incentive and stipend amount while 100 percent
respondents have pleaded for the continuation of the program and
usefulness of the program as shown in Figure 4.
Table 5: Instructors’ findings about the program from the nominees
Items Nominees not Program Not helpful Not

enthusiastic not viable in career promising
building program
Responses in 95% 70% 91% 92%

Instructor's Findings about the program by the Nominees
100%
90% 150
80%
70%
60%
50% Series1
%
40%
30%
20%
10%
0%
NNE PNV NHCB NPP
Items
Table 6: Opinion of executors
Items Program not Difficult to Financial Academic

found implement problem problem
attractive
Responses in 88.5% 92.6% 100% 100%

%
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Figure 5: Instructors’ findings about the program from the
nominees
Opinion of executors
102.00%
100.00%
98.00%
96.00%
94.00%
92.00%
%
Series1
90.00%
88.00%
86.00%
84.00%
82.00%
PNFA DTI FP AP
items
Figfigure 6: Opinion of executors

NNE = Nominees not enthusiastic PNFA = Program
not found attractive
PNV = Program not viable DTI = Difficult to
implement
NHCB = Not helpful in career building FP = Financial
problem
NPP = Not promising program AP = Academic
problem
The instructors have opined that the nominees were not enthusiastic
because the program was not very promising (92%) and helpful in
career building (91%) as shown in Figure 5. A very high percentage of
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respondents have given their views in favor of the program as
shown in Figure 6.
Mean of each Table has been calculated:
Table 7: Mean (Responses of the respondents)
Quality of the Teaching Problems About Program

Program Faculty regarding Fee
and Degree
87.68 54.4 95.65 100
Table 8: Mean (Responses of the officers/instructors)
Nominees Understanding Opinion of Executors

(Opinion of Instructors
87 95.2
Responses of the Respondents
120
100
80
M ean
Series1
60 Series2
40
20
0
Quality of the Teaching Faculty Problems regarding About Program
Program Fee and Degree
Items
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Figure 7: Responses of the respondents
Responses of the officers/Instructors
96
94
92
90
M ean
Series1
Series2
88
86
Figure
84
8:
82
Nominees Understanding (Opinion of Opinion of Executors
Instructors
Responses of the
Items
officers concerned
6. Conclusion
The program was closed due to a number of reasons such as
problems in getting fee money/stipend (82.6%), degree accreditation
(100%), no incentive (100%), faculty shortage (74%), and nominees
found the program not helpful in career building (91%). With the
comparison of results of trainee teachers and instructors/officers, it is
found that all agree to continue the program by amending the service
rules and providing necessary incentive to teachers in order to attract
them for the program.
There are no other regular teacher training programs for
technical teachers in Pakistan. It is suggested that specialized bodies
may be created to launch technical teachers training programs.
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Accelerated Reading: Skills and Strategies
Dr. Nighat Shakur

Lecturer,
Deptt of English,
Women Campus, Sector H-10,
Islamabad.
Abstract
Reading has emerged as a central problem in all academic
problems in Pakistan.Most students even at the Masters level suffer
due to poor reading traits.A majority of students develop severe
personality problems, when they fail to grasp the main concepts of a
text. Thus, reading disability entraps a student in a vicious circle: he
does not understand the text, reads slowly and does not enjoy reading,
consequently does not read much and finally gives up reading.
According to the United States Commission of Education, “Every
problem of our school, of poverty of troubled parents about our
school, and learning disorder seems to show some association with
reading difficulty” (Chapman & Czcerniewska: 1978). The report of
the U.S. Commission holds true in the case of Pakistan also.The
present paper, therefore, attempts to identify the reading problems of
students and to delineate important reading techniques and strategies
in order to enhance students’ reading comprehension,enable them to
tackle every reading text effectively at the advanced level, and finally,
to become accelerated readers.
Key words/terms: reading comprehension; skills; strategies
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1. Introduction
Reading proficiency is the royal road to knowledge. It is
essential to success in all academic subjects. By reading books,
readers grow both emotionally and intellectually.
Grellet (1987) defines 'reading' as understanding a written text
by extracting required information from it. Thus, reading is more
then seeing words clearly, more than pronouncing printed words
correctly and more than recognizing the meaning of isolated
words.An efficient reader interprets the text according to his
knowledge of language, appropriate knowledge of the world as
assumed by the writer, and the former’s ability to interpret. It is for
this reason that reading is referred to as a 'psycholinguistic guessing
game'(Williams: 1989, 2007. Dornyei: 2005).
Reading occupies a special place in the complex of the four
basic language skills, other components of which are: listening,
speaking and writing. There are two main reasons for reading being a
special skill among the other language skills.The first is that reading
alone provides the main input for successful production,
communication and language performance. It is through reading that
people are able to understand others’ ideas. If all people were
identical there would be no point in most communication.
Communication in reading is different from everyday conversation
with someone. In conversation, one can stop and ask for an
explanation whenever needed. But when one has a difficulty in
reading, one need to interrogate the text because the writer is not
available for consultation. Yet, effective communication with the
author can be achieved indirectly through the text, and a writer's
intention can be understood only through proper manipulation of the
text.
The second is that reading involves complex cognitive skills,
which lead to communication, different from other linguistic skills.
The reader does not only decode a message, he makes predictions
and inferences based on what he reads; he may impose his own
organization on information he extracts or may respond to the text,
subjectively, according to the reader response theory. At a more
sophisticated level, he reacts to what he reads, assessing the accuracy
of its facts, the value of its opinion, or the quality of its style
(Matthews, Spratt & Dangerfield: 1986; Alderson: 2000).
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2. Hypothesis
Students of the English language can become accelerated readers if
major reading skills and strategies are instilled and infused in them in
a systematic and methodical way.
3. Research questions
The main research questions are broken down as follows:
a. What are the learners’ problems in different areas of reading?
b. What are the factors that produce an effective learning
experience for the learner group under observation?
c. What are the different skills and strategies that would enable
the learners to become accelerated readers?
4. Methodology
Using an action research approach, the researcher has attempted
to identify the reading problems of learners learning the English
language, at the advanced level within the pedagogic framework of
the International Islamic University, Islamabad, in the Department of
English.
4.1 Population
The population consisted of twenty five mixed ability group of
learners at the advanced level, who were taught Reading Skills by
the researcher for a period of four months (1 semester).
4.2 Instrument
The instrument used was a questionnaire, which was
self-developed following a pattern used to classify and evaluate
reading problems according to International Reading Standards.
Two questionnaires with exactly the same themes were distributed to
the learners, one in the beginning of the semester, before teaching
any of the reading skills, to assess and evaluate the learners’ reading
proficiency and their reading problems. The second questionnaire
was distributed towards the end of the semester, after reading skills
were taught, to gauge the learners’ progress and to assess the effects
of teaching reading skills on the over all development in all the
major aspects of reading delineated in literature review.
The questionnaires consisted of nine questions, designed to provide a
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general and global view of learner’s problems as well as
competence in reading. The questionnaire was designed around the
following major aspects of reading:
a. Previewing
b. Anticipation
c. Prediction
d. Skimming
e. Scanning
f. Word Analysis Strategies
g. Comprehension Building Strategies
h. Critical Reading
i. Extensive Reading
The qualitative method of data collection was adopted because it
offered the greatest opportunity to capture learner’s opinion in the
time available. The researcher had the limited time of 7-8 hours a
week with the learner group, so the method of data collection had to
effective in producing evidence of problem in reading by the learners
and strategies and skills to overcome those problems. The quality of
data gathered was on the whole good and informative and greatly
helped to suggest strategies and guidelines to overcome those
reading problems.
5.1 Techniques and skills in reading
A conscious use of techniques is helpful when a part of a text is
found to be difficult. There are more than twenty-one techniques to
comprehend a text accurately, e.g., understanding the conceptual
meaning, the communicative value of sentences and utterance,
relations within sentences, relations between parts of a text
through grammatical cohesive devices, recognizing indicators in
discourse and discovering organization of a text, etc. Thus a reader
can arrive at reasonable understanding, if one is able to trace the
overall pattern of a text and to underline the types of reading, in
order to determine the skills required for reading effectively.
The following diagram schematically sums up reasons and
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styles for reading:
Fig: 1 Style and reasons for reading (Adapted from Williams,
1989, 2007)
Whatever the style and reason of reading may be, there are
certain techniques that are helpful when a reader is faced with a part
of a text that one finds difficult in every day life. Some of techniques
for successful reading are:
5.1.1 Previewing
Previewing is a very specific reading technique which involves
using the table of contents, the appendix, the preface, chapter and
paragraph heading, in order to find out where the required
information is likely to be.
5.1.2 Anticipation
Anticipation in reading means guessing about the text on a
global level. Anticipation helps the reader to think about the theme of
the passage and to dig out the implicit meaning of the writer. It aims
to encourage the students to think for themselves, because the more
one looks forward to reading and anticipates in mind what the text
could hold in store for the reader, the easier it will be to grasp the
main points of the passage. This will also create the desire to learn,
which leads to more effective reading (Grellet: 1987; Grabe &
Stoller: 2002).
5.1.3 Prediction
This is not only a technique, but also a skill which is basic to all
reading techniques. For the sake of prediction, the reader is not
supposed to read all the sentences, but has to rely on 'grammatical,
logical and cultural clues' (Grellet: 1987) to get an idea of what is
likely to follow. The organizational pattern in the text, such as 'cause
and effect', ‘comparison and contrast', ‘addition and sequences', etc.,
will help in predicting a text.
5.1.4 Skimming
Skimming is necessary for quick and efficient reading, as it
allows the eyes to glance through the page quickly to get a gist. The
following steps according to Spache and Berg (1967) help in
skimming:
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• Read the title and the first paragraph quickly.
• Read sub-heading and the first sentence of the remaining
paragraphs, and float over the body of the material, looking for
the main ideas of paragraphs, clue words, such as names, dates,
etc, direction words and numbered sequences and ideas set off by
attention getting markings, such as italics, arrows and so on.
Skimming is both horizontal and vertical.
5.1.5 Scanning
Scanning means looking very quickly over a piece of reading
matter to find the answer to specific question, e.g. a name or a date.
According to Spache and Berg (1967) the following steps help while
scanning a topic:
• Scan, but do not read in the usual way, the paragraphs that
follow, to find the answers to questions.
• If the material is lengthy or difficult, a preliminary skimming
will be profitable in order to find the part of selection for
particular information.
• Above all, you must keep in mind exactly what it is you are
searching for.
5.1.6 Word analysis strategies
Vocabulary is an important and troublesome issue in content
area. In order to handle difficult vocabulary students must be
coached 'word attack skill' (Nuttall: 1988, 1996). They must be
trained to infer meaning from the context, rather than looking at a
dictionary unless it is essential.
In order to infer meaning from context, several clues provide a great
deal of help. (Grellet: 1987).They are as follows:
Equivalence, contrast, hyponym, cause, consequence, purpose,
explanation/ illustration, generalization/ specification.
Parallel sentence structure, familiar connectives, etc in the text can
also help to infer meaning from the context. (Wallace&Temple: 1990;
Baumann, James, Kameenui& Edward: 2004).
Identifying and understanding idioms, metaphor, metonymy,
sub-technical vocabulary and irony, etc within the text (Nuttall: 1988,
1996) are powerful aids to comprehend the text.
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According to Lewine, Oded and Statman (1988) and Prichard
(2008) meaning of the unfamiliar lexical items can also be deduced
through understanding word formation, besides context. Many words
are formed by adding suffixes and prefixes to the base word. For
example:
Prefixes Examples
anti} against antiwar
pre} before} prewar
Suffixes Examples
Able= can breakable
Less= without careless
Suffixes can mark the word as a noun, verb, an adjective or an
adverb. If one knows the function of the word, one can get close to
its meaning.
Table: 2. Suffixes marking grammaical words
VERB ADJECTIVE ADVERB

NOUNMARKER
MARKER MARKER MARKER
er - worker ate - isolate Al - Ly - slowly

national
ist - fy - simplify
scientist ish - foolish
ize - critisize
tion - dictation ive -
attractive
(Adapted from Lewine, Oded and Stateman,1988 and Prichard,2008)

5.1.7 Comprehension building strategies
Comprehension building strategies help student to understand
the function of a text adequately and enable them to understand the
conceptual meaning, the communicative value of sentences and
utterances, relations within a sentence, relations between parts of a
text through lexical cohesion, between parts of text through
grammatical cohesion devices, recognize indicators in discourse and
discover organization of a text etc. In order to make the reader aware
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of such relationships within a text structure, they should be
trained to understand the textual cohesion and coherence, which are
the keys to master the above mentioned skills (Tovani, 2000 and
Beers, 2003).
5.1.7.1 Textual cohesion
The text is composed of a number of sentences organized to
convey a coherent message. The way the meaning in a text is
organized to convey a message is called discourse. Every word in a
sentence ties the meaning of this sentence with the meaning of the
other parts of the text. These ties are of cohesion, which contributes
to the signification of the sentence and at the same time relates it to
the other sentences in the text.
Thus, a thorough comprehension of a text can be achieved if
cohesive devices and coherent techniques implied by the writer in
the text are fully understood. These entire techniques offer a
struggling student a reasonable chance of making a sense of difficult
text.
Textual cohesion includes connective/ discourse markers,
reference/substitution, ellipses and vocabulary.
Discourse markers signal the relationship between different parts of
the discourse, and also indicate the functional value of the sentence
in which they occur. These words also tell the reader the kind of
relationship the writer intends between two parts of the text. If the
reader understands one, the discourse marker serves as a possible key
to the other part. Discourse markers fall in to three main classes
according to Nuttall (1988, 1996) which can be well summarized in
the below given diagram:
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Fig: 3 Categories of connectives/ discourse markers
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An elliptical expression is one where something necessary to the

sense is left unsaid, e.g., they came although they were asked not to
(come).
Vocabulary helps to give cohesion to a text in two ways (Williams:
1989; Schmitt: 2008). Firstly when a writer makes a reference, and
instead of using a pronoun uses a noun phrase. Secondly, when there
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is 'piling up' of words in a text to give it a unity tone.
But in many sentences there are no discourse markers to aid
interpretation. In such instances the reader has to recognize the
functional value of the sentences in the text. The functional value
help the students to understand the underlying pattern of meaning
that are given expression through the medium of a text. It also
enables the reader to understand the possibilities of misinterpretation
and to handle them.
5.1.7.2 Textual coherence
Besides cohesion, it is coherence that constitutes discourse.
Strictly speaking, it is the discourse that has coherence, while the text
has cohesion. Coherence can be described as a quality of the
underlying thoughts and the way they are organized in to a message.
The way the message is expressed will reflect the coherence which is
achieved by means of the linguistic devices of cohesion.
Every text has a rhetorical structure which shows how the writer
has organized and shaped his material and given it coherence to suit
his purpose and makes it a text that is read. Coherence in a text is
achieved through organizing a sequence of sentences which is
generally organized into paragraphs: The well-organized paragraph
includes the topic, the topic sentence and developmental sentences.
The principles of organizing a paragraph may be the sequence of
events described, the logical progression from specific to general or
general to specific, problem-solution, evidence-hypothesis,
classification-examples ad so on. Paragraph writing is the key to
essay writing. A thesis is also, an extensive essay based on research.
Coherence in a text above the paragraph level is hierarchical.
The largest unit is the whole text composed of different chapters/
sections. Chapters consist of paragraphs. Paragraphs consist of
sentences and sentences are made up of clauses. Phrases are joined to
make a clause and words are joined to make a phrase.
However the hierarchy may be differently structured in different
types of text. A reader must carefully examine this organization in a
structure of a text, because it will result in a clearer understanding of
the overall message.
5.1.8 Critical reading
Reading effectively involves a purposeful examination of
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reading text and the best technique for critical reading is
Questioning the Author approach (QTA) (Block, Collins, Israel &
Susan: 2005; Tovani: 2004; Tompkins: 2006).It is an approach
designed to establish students interaction with the text to build
greater understanding. When students read in QTA lesson, they are
taught to question the ideas presented in the text while they are
reading, a strategy that differs from many traditional approaches that
ask students to answer questions when they have finished reading the
text.
The following steps based on QTA will help the reader in critical
evaluation (Beck, Isabel, Mckeown, Margaret, Hamilton, Rebecca,
Kucan & Lind: 1997).
• Examine the source, reliability, regency, accuracy and
competence of the writer.
• The reader must examine the author’s implications present in
the text. He must understand the inferences intended by the
writer and infer words and styles. The reader must try to
identify the author’s obvious and hidden purposes and
assumptions and try to distinguish between facts and
opinion.
• Finally, the reader must react to the author’s use of devices
to infer his thinking.
5.1.9 Extensive reading
Students can deal with the full length texts only if they are
exposed to extensive texts frequently. Therefore learner should be
provided with extra reading material by allocating a library period,
and by devoting some class time to extensive reading. Extensive
reading should be ‘appealing, easy, short and varied.’ (Williams:
2007; Renandya: 2007; Chamot; 2005; Bell: 2001).
For extensive reading the SQ3R technique is useful for students
to follow. It is a strategy for private study and consists of five steps:
Survey, Question, Read, Review and Recite.
This technique is useful if the teacher has not provided any guidance
and thus makes the learner independent readers. At the same time it
not only produces active involvement with bright students but weak
students can also improve their reading by using this technique.
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The above-mentioned techniques and skills should not be
taken as final and decisive factors in accelerating reading speed and
comprehension. There are a number of other skills that need to be
complemented with reading: the study skills of note- taking and
summarizing, etc. and should be mastered by students in order to
become confident and successful readers. However the proper
selection of reading skills depends on many things: the nature of
material, familiarity with it, and interest in it, background and
purpose for reading. Above all, in real life reading purpose
constantly varies and therefore all the techniques and skills vary
according to the style of the text studied and the purpose in reading
it.
The above mentioned techniques and styles of reading can be
practiced through the help of exercises and activities given in section
8.
6. Results
Statistical analysis of the questionnaires is presented both
graphically and in the tabulated form below, in which scores for
learner’s problems related to each aspect of reading is calculated and
means percentage is obtained. In the second graph and the table the
mean average of learners’ reading improvement is presented which
reveals the progress and improvement on the part of learners.
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Average Mean 73.66666667
Graphical representation of learners’ reading problem
Questionnaire analysis after teaching reading

techniques
Mean % of
Questions Problems
Does the skill of previewing help you in reading

the text 25
Do you try to anticipate the meaning of the text

before getting into the detailed study of the text 28
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How do you predict the message of the text 20
How do you read to get the gist of the text 25
How do you locate the specific information from

the text 10
How do you understand the meanings of the

difficult words in reading text 30
How do you comprehend the meaning of the text 30
How do you find the hidden meanings of the text 60
How do you feel while reading a news paper or a

story book or any other material in the reading
class 50
Mean Averages 30.88888889

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Graphical representation of learner’s reading improvement
7. Discussion
The given detailed statistical analysis of learner’s questionnaire
not only helped identify learner’s reading problems in all major
aspects of reading but also confirmed the hypothesis that learner’s
reading problems can be enormously reduced and they can become
accelerated readers if skills and strategies are properly instructed
through appropriate teaching methodology. The over all result of the
Questionnaire survey was that reading problems before teaching
reading techniques were 73%, which were considerably reduced to
31% only after teaching reading techniques to the students.
The detailed analysis has shown that 48% learners had problems in
reading technique of previewing, which towards the end of the
course was reduced to 25% only. Similarly 80% learners had a
problem with the reading technique of anticipation, but the problem
was greatly reduced to 28% only in the end of the course. 40%
learners had a problem to predict the theme of the text, but
continuous practice in the class resolved the problem and was
minimized to 20% only. 75% learners were unaware of the technique
of skimming, while the graded activities enhanced the awareness
level, and the problem decreased to 25% only by the end of the
course. 55% learners had difficulty in scanning, which also
decreased considerably and only 10% learners had a problem
towards the end. Learners had great difficulty and enormous
problems in dealing with difficult words and understanding of the
text. The results revealed that 90% learners had problems with
handling of the vocabulary and similarly 90% learners had problems
with the comprehension. With appropriate teaching of skills and
strategies the learners showed considerable improvement minimizing
the problem to 30% only. The biggest problem area in reading
pervasive in the class was critical reading. The results clearly
indicate that 95% learners were unable to unveil the hidden and
implicit meanings of the text. However constant exposure and
coaching yielded positive results and the problem though not
considerably improved but was reduced to 60%. The practice of
using extensive material in the reading class is very limited and as a
result 90% learners could not deal with the texts of extended lengths.
Through the introduction of extensive material inside the classroom
along with the intensive reading texts and with the techniques taught
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to learners, they were able to read the extensive material skillfully.
Towards the end the problem was reduced to 50%.
8. Recommendations
The detailed analysis of questionnaire results lead us to
conclude that reading skills if properly taught instructed and
practiced through graded exercises and activity types has yielded
positive results as is evident in the students progress and
development shown through the tables and the graphs.
The following exercises and activity types were devised and applied
for teaching all the reading skills that were being questioned by the
learners both at the beginning of the semester and also towards the
end.
Grellet (1987) Alderson (2000) and Beers (2003) are cited as
informing sources for all the below suggested activities:
8.1 Previewing
• Giving a page from a book to read and think of at least three
possibilities, which the passage is about.
• Supplying the daily newspaper, with the index of pages to find
an answer to your given questions.
• Giving a few minutes to skim through a book i.e. to read few
lines written on the back cover of the book, the table of contents
and the beginning of the preface and then asking the students
some questions about the book.
8.2 Anticipation
Asking questions before the text is read to make the students aware
of what they know, what they don’t know. For example before
studying a text about the robots such questions as given below can be
asked for anticipation:
a. What is a robot?
b. Is there any difference between a robot and automation?
c. What are robots used for?
• Giving true false statements.
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• Asking the students to look at the title and the
accompanying pictures to guess about the text.
8.3 Prediction
• Giving unfinished passages to propose an ending.
• Supplying the text with missing punctuation to predict where
the sentences are likely to stop and look for certain words
functioning as signals of a new sentences or paragraph.
• Giving a ‘gapped text’ interrupted after the conjunction and
link-words to imagine what the text might be.
8.4 Skimming
• Asking the students to skim through a short story and
underline the sentences or words that best sum up the main
idea of each paragraph.
• Supplying the articles to read as quickly as possible to
decide the best suited title for each of them.
• Giving the title, the first and last paragraph of an article to
find out what the article is about.
8.5 Scanning
• Providing a dictionary page and asking the students to
answer the teacher’s questions.
• Giving a newspaper article to find what information different
persons (e.g. someone who is looking for a gap, a
shopkeeper etc.) might draw from it.
• Circling the relevant information about the topic from a
jumbled up text.
8.6 Vocabulary
8.6.1 Contextual clues
Matching two lists of words (words and their synonyms or
antonyms)
• Finding equivalents of the given words from the paragraph
given.
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• Finding adjectives from the suggested paragraph which
means the opposites of the given word etc.
• Providing the text to find all the words related to the basic
idea of the passage and fill in the tables.
• Providing a paragraph with missing words that all derive
from the same root.
• Omitting one word out of eight from the text, and asking the
students to insert the most appropriate words in the blanks.
• Giving a text with one word omitted, and proposing a choice
between three or four possibilities for each of the missing
words (Prichard, 2008).
8.6.2 Deducing meaning through understanding word
formation
• Providing words from the text to underline the suffixes.
• Asking the students to think and write some other words
with the same suffixes.
• Providing the text to find some words with prefixes and to
add those prefixes and to add those prefixes to the adjectives
/ nouns to make them negative.
• Providing a table to complete with appropriate words from
the text.
8.7 Comprehension
Williams (1989), Nuttall (1988, 1996) and Greenall and Swan (1986)
are used as informing source for the activities mentioned below:
8.7.1 Connectives
• Supplying a text with connectives omitted and replaced by
gaps, to be filled in with two or three given connectives
(multiple choice).
• Supplying a text as above and giving a list of connectives in
random order / supplying a text as a above with a list.
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• Giving a few groups of sentences with a linking word in
each group and asking to join each of the sentences into one
sentence.
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8.7.2 Reference / Substitution
• Giving a list of referents with empty spaces to be filled in
with the items they refer to in the text.
• Circling the referents and asking the learners to underline the
items in the text they refer to.
• Supplying the text with reference items omitted and replaced
by gaps and supplying a list of omitted items in a random
order.
8.7.3 Ellipsis
• Framing questions that focus on elided elements.
• Signalling the ellipsis in the given sentences by means of
carets.
8.7.4 Vocabulary
• Giving a table with appropriate headings according to the
vocabulary required to be completed.
• Supplying a text and a diagram illustrating a lexical
relationship found in it, partially filled in.
• Circling, boxing or underlining terms with the same referents,
and joining them with coloured lines and giving them the
same number.
• Devising questions for picking up the different items with
same referents.
8.7.5 Organizing a Paragraph
• Supplying a paragraph with key sentences omitted and
replaced by a gap to be filled with a correct key sentences
chosen from the list of the possible key sentences given.
• Supplying a paragraph with one sentence/ sentences omitted
(but not indicated by a gap).
• Supplying a paragraph in which all the sentences are
scrambled.
• Giving sentences to be resembled with a question
framework.
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8.7.6 Organization above paragraph level
• Supplying a text with one paragraph omitted and given
separately to be inserted at an appropriate place.
• Supplying a text with opening and concluding paragraph
omitted and giving several opening and concluding
paragraphs separately.
• Supplying a text with a topic sentence of each paragraph
omitted and replaced by a gap to be filled with appropriate
sentences given separately.
• Supplying a text with main headings and sub-headings to be
numbered in a conventional way.
9. Conclusion
The aim of the study was to explore the reading problems of the
students at the advanced level and to suggest certain skills and
strategies to overcome those problems and finally to become
accelerated readers.
The data analysis has revealed the fact that the majority of
learners had serious reading problems in all major aspects of reading
due to which they loose interest in reading. Most readers do not
consciously think about the structure of the text in normal
circumstances. The result is that the text may seem as a jigsaw
puzzle in which parts can be identified but the way they fit together
remains obscure, so they fail to read effectively. In order to read
effectively and efficiently it is desirable that the reader must study
the structure, development and organization of the text, carefully and
thoroughly, which will remove all the impediments obstructing the
path of fluent reading
It is only then that readers are able to grasp the real meaning that
a text holds and drive real pleasure and learning that is the goal of all
reading. Reading causes one to reflect on one’s perceptions, make
distinctions of new areas of reality and become sensitive to them. As
Norman Cousins (as cited in H.G. Rickover, 1974) has rightly
remarked:“The proof of living is in memory, and all of us, through
reading, can live five or six lifetimes in one. Through reading the
sluices of the mind open up, making accessible the range of
experiences otherwise beyond our personal reach.”
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It is thus crucial that we inspire the young to read; for if they do
not read, they will never change this world or beat its manipulation.
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The Heart Divided: A Reflection on Pakistan’s
Emergence as a Nation State
Dr. Nighat Ahmed,
Faculty of English Language,
Literature & Applied Linguistics,
NUML, Islamabad.
This paper attempts to define the terms; nation, nationalism and

nation-state. Views of different theorists are brought forth and the
final model of the nation-state that ushered in after the First World
War is discussed with reference to the Sub-continent.
The paper will focus on The Heart Divided written by Mumtaz

Shahnawaz. The novel is analyzed in term of its reflection on
Pakistan’s emergence as a nation-state in 1947 at the end of British
colonial rule in the Sub-continent.
Key words/terms: nation-state; nationalism; resistance.

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1. Introduction
The post World War Two era witnessed the division of the Indian
sub-continent into two independent nation states Pakistan and Bharat.
The Heart Divided by Mumtaz Shahnawaz is a realistic
representation of this mammoth historical event. The reasons and the
process of division are described by the writer through various
characters. The injustices met out to the colonized by the British and
the struggle of the people ultimately led to throwing off the yoke of
subjugation and enslavement. Being a politically aware person,
Shahnawaz firmly believed in the Two Nation Theory and she
effectively propagates this through her work The Heart Divided.
2. Hypothesis
The struggle to gain the status of independent nation state was the
story of each colonized country. This is documented in history and
recreated in literature. Mumtaz Shahnawaz is a prominent voice from
Pakistan. Shahnawaz highlights and attempts to present the case
study of the Indian sub-continent in terms of its gaining freedom
from colonial rule on the basis of two-nation theory in her fictional
construct The Heart Divided.
The term ‘nation’ was first used in 1882 by the French Orientalist
Ernest Renan. In Renan’s (1882) contention nation is like soul, it has
a spiritual principle. Two things which in truth are but one constitutes
this soul or spiritual principle. One lies in the past, the other in the
present. He traces the emergence of the nation state to the breakup of
the classic and mediaeval empires, locating its cultural provenance in
specifically European political and social environment. In his
opinion nations are profoundly unstable formations always likely to
collapse back into sub divisions of clan, tribe, language or religious
group.
Edgar and Sedgwick (2004) present a more comprehensive

definition, accordingly nation state is a political community
differentiated from other such communities in virtue of its autonomy
with regard its legal codes and governmental structures, head of state
boundaries, systems of military defence etc. A nation state likewise
has a number of symbolic features which serve to present its identity
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in unified terms, a flag, national anthem, a popular self image etc.
Consequently nation states have political autonomy, different norms
and codes with regard to their systems of social relations and a
relatively independent economic identity.
Edgar et al (2004) postulate that Nationalism on the other hand

presents itself not simply as a political phenomenon but also as a
matter of cultural identity. As such any conception of the nation to
which it refers must take account of ethnic, historic and linguistic
criteria as well as political notions such as legitimacy, bureaucracy
and presence of definable borders. Nationalists make a number of
specific claims for the nation, which vary in relative significance
according to the particular historical situation.
In Ashcroft et al’s (1998) contention, constructions of the nation

are potent sites of control and domination within modern society.
This is emphasized by the fact that the myth of a national tradition is
employed not only to legitimize a general idea of a social group but
also to construct a modern idea of a nation-state in which all the
instrumentalities of state power e.g. Judiciaries military and political
assemblies are subsumed and legitimized as the ‘natural’ expression
of a unified national history and culture.
According to Benedict Anderson (1991) a contemporary

theorist, nation is an imagined community, born with the demise of
feudalism and the rise of capitalism. Feudal hierarchies he suggests
allowed bonds to exist across national or linguistic boundaries. The
bourgeoisie however forged shared interests across class lines within
a more bounded geography and thus created a community among
people who had never met and did not necessarily have interest or
outlooks in common.
Anderson (1991) asserts with the emergence of different models

of nationalism, the model which gained popularity in Europe had its
basis in language, as language is the fundamental element in
developing national consciousness. Initially owing to the pivotal role
played by the literate middle classes and the intelligentsia,
nationalism appeared as all inclusive based on language
identification. This model employed a democratic rhetoric speaking
out against serfdom or legal slavery, later it was appropriated by the
ruling European dynasties in response to popular national
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movements.
The final form of the ‘nation-state’ ushered in after the First

World War, which was later cemented at the end of Second World
War. Anderson (1991) contends this model served as a basis for anti
imperialist struggles against the colonizer. In the colonies, the native
intelligentsia and political leadership had a fundamental role in
forging nationalist consciousness, as they were bilingual and had
access to modern western culture in terms of awareness regarding
models of nationalism, nation-ness and nation-state, that was
produced elsewhere in the nineteenth century. In this sense, scholars
contend, the rise of anti-colonial nationalism in colonial land was
made possible by European intellectual history as it was believed the
revolt in colonized lands was, due to gift of language and ideas
presented by the colonizers themselves. Though in case of Indian
sub-continent, the concept of nationhood existed here much earlier,
the Indus Valley civilization, and the Mughal Empire are pertinent
examples. However, due to marginalization of the natives in British
India, a spark was needed to rekindle the flame of nationalism. In
this context the intelligentsia not only showed the path to the
political leadership but reawakened the masses as well. Allama Iqbal,
the poet of the East, through his creative genius conveyed the spirit
of nationalism not just in the Sub-continent but through out the
Muslim world. Mumtaz Shahnawaz a noted politician and a writer
also effectively portrayed this through a fictional construct in The
Heart Divided (1957). The idea of Muslims as a separate nation is
clearly projected by her.
Similarly in Africa, Fanon’s position on national culture is

immense as contained in his work The Wretched of the Earth (1968).
In this book he reveals his oft quoted stance that cultural implications
of colonialism lead to its anti thesis the anti colonial struggle.
Fanon’s evolutionary scheme advances three distinct phases-the
assimilationsist phase, the cultural nationalist phase and the
nationalist phase. In Fanon’s view, the nationalist phase is also the
fighting phase in which the native man of culture ‘after having tried
to lose himself in the people and with the people, will on the contrary
shake the people’.
With reference to the Sub-continent, Partha Chatterjee (1993)

contends the relationship between anti colonial and metropolitan
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nationalisms was structured by an intricate relationship of both
borrowing and difference. He locates the processes of ideological
and political exchange in the creation of nationalism in particular in
the sub-continent. He asserts the significance of an ideological sieve
through which Indian nationalists filtered European ideas about
nation-state.
Hence nationalism that emerged in the Indian sub-continent

due to efforts of political leaders Muhammad Ali Jinnah, Mohatma
Gandhi and Jawaharlal Nehru was not modeled upon simple
imitation of western models but it was an embodiment of the
ideology, culture, and religious norms of the major communities in
the sub-continent. Consequently Muhammad Ali Jinnah presented
the Two-Nation theory for creation of an independent Muslim state
within the sub-continent. However as the Indian leadership was well
conversant with the western ideas and being bilingual they were able
to put forward their premise convincingly to the British, leading to
the independence of sub-continent in August 1947. Similarly all over
Asia and Africa anti-colonial nationalism worked in and through a
formula of divided world. This was the case in most of the countries
of Asia and Africa colonized by the Imperial powers.
4. Methodology
The methodology for this research paper is based on the textual
analysis of the novel The Heart Divided within the parameters of the
hypothesis stated earlier.
5. Data collection and analysis
(The Heart Divided (1957) : a textual analysis)

Shahnawaz’s The Heart Divided ostensibly describes the pre
independence era and brings to life an authentic account of events
which shaped the Pakistan movement. To Talbot (1996), ‘It provides
valuable historical insights into the social and political out look of
the upper class urban Punjabi Muslim society from which the author
came’.
The novel has two distinct perspectives. First and foremost it

is a counter narrative and provides a realistic view of the colonial
encounter in the sub-continent from the perspective of the colonized.
Shahnawaz brings forth the resistance of the colonized, in particular
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the struggle of Muslims for gaining independence and the role of
Muslim League in promoting the spirit of nationalism amongst the
Muslims.
Secondly the novel is in many ways auto-biographical. The

writer draws upon heavily on her own personal political background
in the text, as she had first hand experience of politics and was
involved in the freedom movement, the writer’s career served as a
model for Zohra, the female protagonist in the novel.
Shahnawaz examines the pre partition era, the focus is on the

period between 1930 to 1942. The writer weaves the many
dimensions of these turbulent years, when political forces of Muslim
League and the Congress forged the future of the sub-continent
towards independence. The writer examines a society caught
between the two phases, the traditional culture in contrast to the new
trends set in by the British. The polarity is evident in the aggregation
of opposites. The old order represented by Sheikh Nizamuddin and
the new order in Zohra’s character.
The text as a representative literature of the era demonstrates

different incidents and events in pre-partition India. The novel is set
in the city of Lahore. The plot centres around the family of Sheikh
Jamaluddin, an eminent lawyer and the head of an established
Muslim family. Zohra is his younger daughter and is the central
character in the story. She has socialist views, and is depicted as
unconventional in her ideas, in contrast to the traditional values.
The novel examines the issue of nationalism. The writer

refers to disillusionment of the Muslims with Congress party’s policy
of dominating the minorities and usurping their rights, a discussion
ensues between two characters Mohini and Zohra, Mohini questions:
‘But why the Muslim League remains out. We are

fighting for freedom, the freedom of all of us’.
Zohra’s uncle Saeed Ahmed replies:
‘That is just it! Freedom for the country must mean

freedom for all, but the Muslims feel that unless
their rights are safe guarded; it will not mean
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freedom for them that is why they are not in it’.
Sughra asserts convincingly, Muslims would join them only,

if they were given assurance that:
‘Freedom must mean freedom for all, what good is

freedom if it means only a change of master – the
Hindus instead of the British?’
(Shahnawaz: 1957).
The writer has given voice to the Muslims of the sub-continent. The
events presented here have their basis in historical facts. The reality
is that Muslims had become disenchanted with Congress and its
biased policies, which marginalized them and failed to consider them
as equal partners. Consequently this became a reason for formation
of Muslim League as a representative party of the Muslims in the
sub-continent. In another incident, Shahnawaz reinforces the idea of
Muslim nationalism, Sheikh Jamaluddin while conversing with his
daughter Zohra reminds her about the history of Muslims in the
sub-continent:
‘You know, how we ruled here for nearly 800 years,

and you know how the country prospered and art
and culture flourished in that period…you also know
the way by which British came here first as
traders…When India became weak, how they
exploited our weakness to become our rulers…the
Indian people realized this too late, that when they
did they rose up in revolt, and it was Muslims who
led that rebellion in 1857…’
Jamaluddin asserts that under this pretext the British had crushed the
Muslims and had oppressed and weakened them in every possible
way. To Zohra, this is amazing as the history books which she had
read had presented a totally different perspective. Here the writer
refers to the biased policies of the British, and examines the colonial
practice of using texts and textuality as a tool for imperial control
and subversion. This illustrates the colonial perception of the relation
between knowledge and control.
Shahnawaz demonstrates the nationalist feelings of the

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natives by narrating another incident. Mohini and other Congress
activists were arrested by the authorities and put in Jail for their
widespread protests against colonial government. Mohini sends a
copy of her trial statement to be printed in the newspaper. The
statement is a document of resistance to colonial rule and clearly
reflects the feelings of the people of Hindustan:
We, citizens of Hindustan and members of the

Indian National Congress, have only this to say, we
don’t recognize this alien government that has
enslaved and imprisoned our people, and any laws
made by it are not binding upon us. We do not
recognize this court, nor has it any authority to judge
us. Freedom is our birth-right and for freedom, we
shall continue to fight come what may. As members
of the congress, non-violence is our creed and our
struggle shall be non-violent nor can the harsh
oppression or the violent might of the Government
stop the march of freedom. Onward into battle sons
and daughters of Hindustan! Long live our
Mother-Land. The day of freedom is dawning.
By presenting this incident, the writer reveals her own nationalist

feelings and resistance to colonial rule.
The text as historical document represents a true picture of

the events that took place in the sub-continent. In the novel
Shahnawaz examines the atrocities committed by the Congress on
the Muslims, in connivance with British, marginalization of Muslims
had begun in Hindu majority provinces. The suffering of the
marginalized is revealed by Sadia who suffered this repression in
Bihar:
‘You don’t ask me sister, you lucky ones cannot

imagine our plight! We are now slaves twice over,
slaves of the British and slaves of the Hindus…In a
thousand ways. In all those little ways that make
one’s daily life difficult. In my husband’s village the
Maulvi is not even allowed to say the ‘Azan’ in
peace. At the hour for prayer, bands of Hindus come
parading in front of the mosque, beating drums and
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shouting anti-Muslim slogans and once…a dead pig was
thrown into the mosque.’
Similarly Shahnawaz refers to another controversial issue which

pertains to the Vidya Mandir Scheme. Under this programme, the
Hindus had plans to further marginalize the Muslims, which would
make the future generation of Muslims to lose their language, culture
and even their faith. The Vidya Mandir Scheme was basically part of
the Wardha Scheme of education. Under this scheme, images and
idols of Hindu gods and Goddess were placed in the schools, and
children were forced in the idolatrous worship of Hindu Goddess of
learning and had to bow and kneel before the photograph of Gandhi.
Muslim children were forced to discard token of their own religion,
and instead of traditional greeting Assalam-o-alaikum, were made to
sing, ‘Bande Matram’.
The writer asserts her strong resistance to the above policies

as is evident in the text, in her perception these were constructs
aimed at indoctrination of Muslims. In fact this amount to
‘interpellation of the subject’, as in Althusser’s (1971) view
hegemony is achieved through ideological state apparatuses such as
schools, church and political system. Given the fact that earlier
British missionaries had established Convent schools through out the
length and breadth of India in pursuance of their goal for conversion
of natives to Christianity and now there was the Vidya Mandir
Scheme by Hindus. As a consequence of these hegemonic practices,
Muslims decided for a solution, which lay in having an independent
homeland. The writer refers to the modalities of the historic ‘Two
Nation Theory’ by presenting a discussion between two characters
Kamal Haider and Sughra. Here Shahnawaz reinforces the issue of
‘nationalism’ and endorses the fact that ‘nation’ is one of the
‘strongest foci’ for resistance to imperial control. As stated earlier the
concept of ‘nation’ in the postcolonial discourse pertains to the idea
of a shared community which enables colonized societies to invent a
self image, on the basis of which they act to liberate themselves from
imperial oppression.
In the novel, Kamal Haider presents the idea of creation of

an independent state for the Muslims of India, while conversing with
Sughra:
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‘I mean that India is large and diverse. It’s not a country
it’s a sub-continent...the Indian races are many and
each has its own religion and culture and language
and customs… The two main people in India
however are Hindus and the Muslims, and they are
very different from each other, each has its own
religion, language, culture, customs and
nomenclature. They are two separate nations…In
addition to this while there are areas in India where
the Hindus are in a majority, there are others that are
predominantly Muslim…So I believe in a separate
Muslim state… India must be divided. …This idea
was first suggested by Iqbal in 1930…’
Sughra question;
“Then you really think it’s practicable?”
Kamal Haider replies;
“Of-course…The new state would comprise Punjab,

the Frontier Province, Kashmir, Sind and
Baluchistan…And there would be another state in
Bengal in alliance with it.’
Shahnawaz further substantiates that Muslim are a separate nation

through Kamal Haider, who enthusiastically utters:
“Just think Sughra”, he said, “our own state to live

in as free men to work and play and worship in our
own way without let or hindrance. To develop once
more our national genius to see again the
blossoming of our language and our culture on our
true Islamic principles whereby all men will be
equal”
Surghra catches Kamal Haider’s fire and asserts:
To build a society where women will get their

birthright…and hunger and want and ignorance will
be no more.
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In another incident Shahnawaz reinforces the notion of Muslims as a

separate nation. In a conversation between Ahmed and Zohra,
Ahmed asserts:
‘The trouble is that in India nationalism has begun to

mean thinking and living in the Congress way and in
that way only…The Congress awakened the people
a great majority of whom were Hindus, and it was
but natural that their art, their language and their
philosophy develop and come into greater
prominence.
Zohra remarks:
‘I don’t quite see’
Ahmed continues;
‘Let me put it in a different way. India is vast and

has many people? Many cultures, religions and
languages…if we tried to impose a single culture or
way of life on all, it would be disastrous… people
would resent it and rebel against it as India is a
multi-national state.’
Zohra replied;
‘I see, I see now’
Ahmed elaborates;
The Muslims began to feel that their language and

culture and religion would be swamped and so when
the Muslim League brought them political
consciousness they began to do all that they could to
develop their own art and literature… and hence the
rise of the League and the demand for Pakistan is a
consequence… the reasons as you have seen are
cultural, economic as well as religious. And you hear
the cry for Pakistan which is an expression of the
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Freedom urge of the Muslim people.’
Using the text as a historical document, Shahnawaz records the

details of the marathon Lahore Resolution of 1940, which was to
change the destiny of Muslims. The presence of Quaid-e-Azam
Muhammad Ali Jinnah in the session, and the reaction of the crowd
is ostensibly described.
6. Conclusion
To conclude Shahnawaz has realistically presented the Muslim
predicament in the colonial era in The Heart Divided. The novel
presents the firm determination and resolute struggle of the Muslim
political movement in the sub-continent which ultimately led to the
creation of Pakistan. The text focuses in particular on the role of
Muslim League in the political reawakening of the Muslims and their
demand for a separate homeland on the basis of the Two-Nation
theory. Hence the novel’s significance as a historical and political
document is commendable.
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the origin and spread of nationalism. London & New York:
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2. Ashcroft, B., Griffiths, G. &Tiffin, H. (1998). Postcolonial
studies, key concepts. London: Routledge.
3. Chatterjee, P. (1993). Nations and its fragments: colonial

and postcolonial histories. Princeton: Princeton University
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London: Routledge. (First Indian Reprint.)
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University Press.
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Volume II, 2009

National University of Modern Languages

NUML Research Magazine Volume II, 2009

Brig ® Dr Aziz Ahmad Khan

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A Study on Approximate Number Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多)

The NUML Research Magazine, a scholarly research

While every effort has been made to authenticate material

The Cohesion Pattern “ 是 对” in Chinese

The examples are chosen from TV series《家有 女》

3.1. The types of feedback & response convergence of “嗯” “啊”

（《吃喝玩乐大搜索》之“清真菜”） specialist A：Beef and

（<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)

Friend A：Tomorrow is a cloudy day, don’t forget bring your

Friend A：Don‘t get wet

（3）-(5)嘉宾 ：北京的名小吃可以说 80%以上属于回民小吃。

guest ： Long time ago, it the person who sell with

guest ： But, the fake tobacco we talk about is standard by

Guest：the food must cheaper, and the taste must good.

Guest ： According this standart, this restaurant is suit for

guest：that’s mean it can be think about go there if have a family

Second： how far?

Exclamations 嗯（en）欸(ai) 唉(ai) 哎(ai) 呣(m) 啊(a) 哦

3.2 Repeated using

Moderator ： and the atmosphere of it is such great, just like

moderator：go up the white jade stair, he!。feel like a hero.

Guest：yes. (<<The discovery of eat drink and play>>)

Hotline listeners：I am Huis, such like bean curd in lamb oil,

Comment guests：对，没错。That’s all traditional food of huis

Total 398 507 440 444 260 274

percent 17.1 21.8% 19% 19.1% 11.2% 11.8%

B-A ten-hour program named《吃喝玩乐大搜索》

Total 1021 47 86 209 27 575

percent 52% 2.4% 4.4% 10.6% 1.4% 29.%2

From the above statistics we find out two things:

Secondly, in an another case the ten-hour program named《吃喝

The occurring frequency of the modals like “嗯 啊 噢 唉”

A Study on Approximate Number Lai (来), Ji (几)

Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多) is frequently used by native

(A study on approximate number Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多))

The early study on approximate number Lai (来), Ji (几) and

We designed 15 questions, Lai (来), Ji (几) and Duo (多)

The Cohesion Pattern “ 是对” in Chinese

The examples are chosen from TV series《家有女》

（3）-(5)嘉宾：北京的名小吃可以说 80%以上属于回民小吃。

The occurring frequency of the modals like “嗯啊噢唉”

about Lai-Ji( 来 Lai-Ji( 来几） ,Lai-Duo( 来