Breanna Hines - Argument Essay Rough - Final Draft
Breanna Hines - Argument Essay Rough - Final Draft
Breanna Hines - Argument Essay Rough - Final Draft
EN 101
Argument Essay
14 December 2020
eating disorder. Social media is a place where people seek validation, something a person with
an eating disorder thrives off of. Imagine a person so concerned with body image, someone who
craves validation, someone entirely consumed by self-ridicule; now imagine how quickly the
abrasive nature of social media could break that person. While some people believe social media
to be a body positive place, it is, in reality, extremely dangerous for people with an eating
disorder by spreading harmful information within online communities, bullying to the point of
Some people believe that social media is an accepting and positive space for people with
eating disorders. According to author Tao Wang et al. in “Social Interactions in Online Eating
where members share treatment advice and provide support for people moving towards
recovery” (par. 1). These communities are useful to people who seek help, but most eating
disorder patients often refuse to admit they are in need of help. However, Wang et al. also
believe that online communities and social media are the only ways that some people suffering
with an eating disorder feel comfortable reaching out (par. 1). For people with eating disorders,
fear is an extremely prevalent issue. They fear judgment of themselves and other people, and
they fear what the results of getting help entail for their vanity. In one case in particular, a
woman named Amber had been suffering with bulimia nervosa on and off for several years. She
was bullied in her youth for her physical appearance and was verbally and physically abused by
her mother. Amber had gone through relapses a few times, each lasting no more than a few
months, but her last relapse lasted for a few years. Over time, her condition worsened. It was
documentaries and online research that convinced her to seek help. Doctors told her that if she
continued to go down the same road, she would have no more than a year and a half to two years
to live, if she was lucky. She almost died because “Hatred of fat, inexplicably linked to fear of
fat, is . . . deeply embedded in the collective consciousness . . .” (Knapp 195). Fear prevented her
from seeking help until it was almost too late, but the internet saved her life.
Although there is plenty of undeniably positive information that can be found on the
internet, there are also chat rooms and groups on social media for people with eating disorders
that encourage extreme dieting methods and dangerous actions. According to Wang et al., there
are many pro-eating disorder communities online that “glorify ED (anorexia in particular) as a
legitimate lifestyle choice rather than an illness” (par. 2). These communities encourage eating
disorders instead of providing a much-needed system of support to help people beat their eating
disorders. Wang et al. believe that chat rooms and posts in pro-eating disorder communities are
far more prevalent on social media than helpful online communities (par. 2). Having easy access
to such negative content is extremely dangerous to people in such a fragile mental, emotional,
and physical state, such as those with an eating disorder. In these pro-eating disorder chat rooms
and groups, people with eating disorders can easily find thousands of posts called “thinspiration”
or “thinspo.” The “thinspo” posts usually consist of quotes like “If you begin to get cravings say
this to yourself: skip dinner to wake up thinner” written over a picture of an emaciated looking
girl. Things like these chat rooms and ‘thinspo’ posts can lead sufferers of eating disorders to
their deaths. Sadly, pro-eating disorder groups can leave wounds of equal depth to that of
cyberbullying.
Social media trolls can be ruthless in comment sections, making social media a
dangerous place for people with an eating disorder. In “5 Ways Social Media Can Trigger an
Eating Disorder,” Carrie Hunnicutt, an author and behavioral health specialist, states that “65%
of people with an eating disorder say that bullying contributed to [their eating disorder]” (par.
16). Cyberbullying is an inescapable form of bullying, often leaving the victim feeling trapped,
which, in turn, can create a sense of being overwhelmed for the victim. Hunnicutt accurately
explains the effects cyberbullying can have on eating disorder victims by mentioning how eating
disorders thrive off of things caused by cyberbullying like social anxiety, depression, and fear
(par. 16.). Eating disorders alone put major strain on sufferers, so when cyberbullying is piled on
top, things quickly become messy. There was a girl, for example, who struggled with anorexia
nervosa all through junior high and high into school. At one point in time, she had begun to
recover , but all of her progress was quickly diminished by a single comment under one of her
Instagram posts calling her “fat,” telling her she “looked so much better when she was thinner.”
She was crushed within seconds and has yet to recover from the comment even two years later.
She is one of the many victims of social media who have been triggered by its harsh environment
Alternately, just as people intentionally trigger people with eating disorders, they can also
unknowingly encourage an eating disorder through social media. In the case of the famous
YouTuber Eugenia Cooney, who suffers from extreme anorexia nervosa, social media has only
fueled her desire to be thin. As Sean Kernan states in a blog called “Is YouTube Incentivising
Eugenia Cooney To Starve Herself?,” “It is but another modern problem: a mental health
condition becoming a path to internet fame and fortune” (par. 4). People are as equally fascinated
as they are concerned by her condition. As a result, Cooney has over 2 million subscribers and
roughly 243 million views, estimated to earn her a little over 500,000 dollars (Kernan par. 4).
Sadly, Cooney’s success has relied solely on her skeleton-like figure, leaving the question of
what is Cooney without her disorder? When visiting her still active YouTube account, it is easy
to find all the comments about her appearance and none about the actual context of her video
(Kernan par. 7). Some comments express concern for her health, while other commenters and
fellow eating disorder sufferers admire her thinness. Although most people are concerned for her
health, they do not realize the negative attention they are giving Cooney, which is only hurting
In summary, social media is a great danger to people with eating disorders despite all the
positive communities. Eating disorders are a mental illness, and sometimes that is a hard pill to
swallow for sufferers. They want to believe that eating disorders are a sustainable lifestyle, so
they make pro-eating disorder communities. The degrading comments left on social media only
worsen eating disorders and give life to the inaccurate body distortion people struggling with
eating disorders see when they look in the mirror. Lastly, the fame that can be achieved through
“flaunting” a mental illness such as an eating disorder is sickening. Onlookers are so consumed
by the shock factor of someone who resembles a walking skeleton, that they forget the mess they
are creating for the person with the eating disorder. For people suffering with an eating disorder,
social media is, more often than not, a monster waiting to swallow them whole.
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