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This document contains anonymous feedback on a student paper about the connection between demand and supply. The feedback identifies potential issues in the paper such as incorrect use of articles, passive voice, run-on sentences, missing commas, subject-verb agreement errors, hyphenation errors, and spelling mistakes. Revisions are suggested to address these proofreading concerns.

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This document contains anonymous feedback on a student paper about the connection between demand and supply. The feedback identifies potential issues in the paper such as incorrect use of articles, passive voice, run-on sentences, missing commas, subject-verb agreement errors, hyphenation errors, and spelling mistakes. Revisions are suggested to address these proofreading concerns.

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Submission date: 04-Nov-2020 10:25AM (UTC-0800)


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File name: Connection_between_demand_and_supply.docx (71.92K)
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Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in
the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence. Proofread it to see if it contains too many
independent clauses or contains independent clauses that have been combined without conjunctions
or punctuation. Look at the "Writer's Handbook" for advice about correcting run-on sentences.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma after this word.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma after this word.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in
the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in
the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

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S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.

Hyph. You may need to add a hyphen between these two words.

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Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with
the verb.
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