Cold Email: Referral V1
Cold Email: Referral V1
Hi [first name],
My name is [my name] and I head up business development efforts with [my
company]. We recently launched a new platform that [one sentence pitch].
I am taking an educated stab in the dark here, however based on your online
profile, you appear to be an appropriate person to connect with ... or might at
least point me in the right direction.
I’d like to speak with someone from [company] who is responsible for
[handling something that's relevant to my product].
If that’s you, are you open to a fifteen minute call on _________ [time and
date] to discuss ways the [company name] platform can specifically help your
business? If not you, can you please put me in touch with the right person?
Best,
Sig
I hope I'm not bothering you. Could you please refer me to the person in
charge of [something that's relevant to my product]?
Sig
My name is [my name] and I'm with [my company name]. We work with
organizations like [company name] to [insert one sentence pitch].
[One sentence unique benefit].
Could you direct me to the right person to talk to about this at [company
name] so we can explore if this would be something valuable to incorporate
into your events?
Cheers,
Sig
The next referral cold email is a template directly from the team at Predictable
Revenue.
I'm sorry to trouble you. Would you be so kind as to tell me who is responsible
for [insert your biggest pain point here that resonates with your ideal
customer; OR insert function like “sales” or “recruiting”] and how I might get in
touch with them?
Thank you,
Sig
Let's check out two cold email templates that are using approach #2 and
pitching the decision maker directly on the value proposition and next action
steps.
I hope this email finds you well! I wanted to reach out because [explain how
we got their contact information and how we relate to them: talked to a
colleague, saw your company online, etc.].
[Name of company] has a new platform that will help (your team at)
[organization name]. [One sentence pitch of benefits]. We do this by:
Benefit/feature 1
Benefit/feature 2
Benefit/feature 3 (optional)
Let's explore how [name of your software] can specifically help your business.
Are you available for a quick call [time and date]?
Cheers,
Sig
I hope this email finds you well! I wanted to reach out because [explain how
we got their contact information and how we relate to them: talked to a
colleague, saw your company online, etc.].
[Name of company] has a new platform that will help (your team at)
[organization name]. [One sentence pitch of benefits].
I know that [our product] will be able to help [name of your company] [insert
high level benefit here].
Cheers,
Sig
[Your Name] from Sumo here. Hope you don’t mind me reaching out :)
We help businesses like [Client 1] and [Client 2] to grow their email lists and traffic.
I’m curious who might be best to speak with about email marketing at your company?
Cheers,
[Your Name]