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Introduction 2
Portrayal of the adversity faced by Evan Hansen in Dear Evan Hansen, and the
comparison of such to that of Diana Goodman in Next to Normal 6
Characterisation of Heidi in Dear Evan Hansen suggesting the challenges they face 9
Portrayal of the lack of compassion Doctor Fine has for Diana in Next to Normal 11
Portrayal of the lack of compassion Jared has for Evan in Dear Evan Hansen 12
Conclusion 13
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Introduction
Mental disorders, “problems people experience with their mood and their
mind” (Grohol), are often seen as issues that need to be addressed by society, and
musical theatre in the 21st century. In the musical Next to Normal, winner of the
2010 Pulitzer Prize for Drama, composer Tom Kitt, collaborates with writer and
lyricist Brian Yorkey to shine the spotlight on a bipolar-depressive wife and mother of
a daughter. Diana Goodman is surrounded by her family who cares about her and
her disorder, and they together express their hopelessness throughout the two acts
as her situation shows minimal improvement. In another musical theatrical work Dear
Evan Hansen, writer Steven Leveson, together with composers and lyricists Benj
Hasek and Justin Paul, focuses on Evan, a high-schooler with social anxiety disorder
struggling to be included among his peers in the beginning of the musical. The
protagonists in both musicals are immersed in the care of family, and both works
highlight the probable crises that individuals face as a result of their disorders -
memory loss resulting from treatments for Diana, and miscommunications which
leads to an unexpected online popularity and drama in Evan’s story. While few
scholars have reviewed these texts from a literary point-of-view, many reviewers
have commented on the performances of the musicals and discussed about the
Daily News comments that the creators of Next to Normal “turn this
Jesse Green at The New York Times states that Dear Evan Hansen “addresses with
great heart and humor both the social anxiety that we all experience at some point or
another and the new modes of communication that can amplify either a sense of
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belonging or nonbelonging” (Green). The features adopted by works of modern
theatrical literature such as these, depict the life of individuals under such
individuals. This essay prompts to look at how the writers of the two texts present the
communities, the ways in which they compromise on conflicts, both internal and
external, their self-perceptions, and how they try to cope with the world they are in. In
Kitt and Brian Yorkey, and Steven Levenson, Benj Pasek and Justin Haul
directions, to suggest the theme that mental disorders are more than simply personal
adversity, but one that impacts individuals around the diagnosed, negatively and
unpromising conditions caused by her illness. Her daily life is heavily interrupted by
her disorder which at times seems to be worsening, and her hallucination of the sight
of her eighteen-year-old son Gabe Goodman, who died as a baby. After rounds of
treatment with medication which has little positive effect, she decides to undergo
electroconvulsive therapy, which results temporary memory loss. Towards the end of
the text, her memory is gradually recovered, shedding hope to the plot when she
finally acknowledges the death of her son and decides to let go of the unpleasant
past, ultimately leaving her family for a new life. The other musical mentioned in this
essay, Dear Evan Hansen, tells the story of a teenager who is in his final year of high
school, struggling with social anxiety disorder. His therapist suggests him to write a
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letter to himself regularly as a form of treatment, one of which is accidentally found,
kept, and mocked on by Connor Murphy, the bully on the first day of school. The
shocking fact that Connor has taken his own life leads to the misunderstanding of
Mr. and Mrs. Murphy, who interpret the letter as one written by their son to “his best
hesitantly accepts the false friendship and perpetually initiates a big project in
memory of his “friend”, which entails further lies and made-up components to prove
their “friendship” sound genuine. Soon, Evan unexpectedly gains viral fame on the
Internet and is applauded for his good acts. However, when people begin demeaning
and even threatening behaviours against the Murphys after his speech is posted
online, he realises the need of clarification and deliberately apologises to the family
for his flaws. As praised by Green in his review, “for the most part Mr. Levenson’s
The disheartened situation that a bipolar patient is placed into when they feel
that others can barely understand them, is vividly expressed in the lyrics of many
songs sung by Diana in Next to Normal. In the song “You don’t know” of the first act,
Diana and her husband Dan are having a heightened conversation on the usefulness
of the drugs prescribed by Doctor Fine. Though Dan tries to speak sympathetically,
Diana questions his understanding of her disorder. She expresses her animosity
towards the way she is affected when she sings, “The sensation that you’re
screaming / But you never make a sound, / Or the feeling that you’re falling / But you
never hit the ground—” (Yorkey 33). The use of antithesis in this quote delivers a
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sense of contradiction and unclarity, thus can be interpreted to be related to the
complexity and unpredictability of Diana’s condition which she has not managed to
escape from. In the quote, the character expresses her helplessness towards the
condition that does not seem to end, “screaming” yet can “never make a sound”,
“falling” yet can “never hit the ground”, which symbolise that she cannot cease the
disorder with self-expectation. Moreover, the use of a dash “—” instead of a full stop
or a comma adds to the idea of continuity and ambiguity of the disorder. When Diana
refers to herself as “Like a refugee, a fugitive / forever on the run…” (Yorkey 33), her
ultimate irritation is further portrayed. The simile which compares the speaker who is
a patient, with “a refugee” and “a fugitive” suggests the strong hostility the speaker
has towards her own illness, as it connotes that the patient is trying to escape from
her current circumstances and looking for a change in her life. The word “forever”
phrase “on the run” expresses that she is highly intimidated and tired of the disorder
and its effects; it also connotes the idea that the disorder is exploiting her energy and
In the second act, when Diana’s memory has eventually returned after being
Doctor Madden about her doubt on the effectiveness of such treatment. Her
rhetorical question, “What happens if the cut, the burn, the break / Was never in my
brain or in my blood / But in my soul?” (Yorkey 90), depicts her confusion and
highlighted when she suggests the foul to be not in the “brain” or the “blood”, but in
her “soul”, which implies that the harm done onto her is beyond physical, but very
much leaves a spiritual impact as well. The abstractness of the “soul” also indicates
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the notion that the damage can hardly be measured, and the condition can hardly be
cured. Furthermore, the regret she has for failing to be an inspirational and helpful
mother also adds to the illustration of hardships faced by the mentally challenged in
the text. In the song “Maybe (Next to Normal)”, Diana confesses wholeheartedly on
who just couldn’t cope” (Yorkey 90). The words “just couldn’t” imply that she has
tried her best but failed. The word “cope” suggests that perhaps the circumstances
that she is in change, making it difficult to get used to and function with ease under
the condition. The portrayal of Diana as a patient whose disorder seems to be taking
The constant solitude that Evan Hansen is enclosed in by his social anxiety
One Scene One of Dear Evan Hansen. In page 18, he sings the line “I try to speak
but nobody can hear” (Levenson et al. 18), expressing his disappointment and
melancholy he experiences within his own loneliness. The word “try” suggests the
depressing and hopeless tone. A very similar motif to “screaming” yet can “never
same song. In page 20, he sings his question, “When you’re falling in a forest / And
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nobody is around / Do you ever really crash / Or even make a sound?” (Levenson et
al. 20), which adds to the idea that he is unwillingly isolated in his own zone. The
questions he posts deliver a tone of doubt and self-disapproval, as he does not only
doubt whether or not anyone else is on his side, but also on whether or not he has
Heidi is juxtaposed ironically with Evan’s expectation of the ideal, which introduces
the conflict between the two. In his mind, his mother barely understands him, and
treats him with an alienated viewpoint. In Act Two Scene Seven, Heidi states that
she “thought” (Levenson et al. 134) she knew Evan. However, this is strongly
opposed by Evan when he says, “What do you know about me? You don’t know
anything about me. You never even see me” (Levenson et al. 134). The application
of rhetorical questioning, like the other examples mentioned previously in this essay,
is used to convey an idea of disbelief and doubt. Evan is so assertive on his own
thought that he doesn’t even allow room for the imagination of other replies, but in a
straightforward manner states that his mother has little knowledge of him. The
direction of speech to “you” delivers a demeaning tone. The way Evan truly hopes to
be treated is revealed when he says, referring to the Murphys that, “They like me […]
That they don’t think that I’m, that there’s something wrong with me, that I need to be
fixed, like you do” (Levenson et al. 134). Evan hopes that others, including his own
mother, to expect and think of him to be on par with his peers. The words “something
wrong” have a negative connotation, and can be seen as a result of Evan’s lack of
confidence, as well as his high awareness of his own disability, which can be
interpreted as side effects of therapy and medication that keep reminding one of their
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eye. A pessimistic tone of blame is delivered in this quote, which contributes to the
idea that the patient does not want to be labeled as someone different. This can be
viewed as a similar situation that Diana is in, and her desperation to get away from
her disorder.
Next to Normal often express their despair of Diana’s disorder through questioning.
In the song “Who’s crazy?”, Dan expresses his disappointment in the situation as he
questions, “Who’s crazy? To live their whole life / Believing that somehow / things
aren’t as bizarre as they are?” (Yorkey 17). This shows that he is doubtful not only
on the situation that he is in, but also on his own thoughts. The word “whole” exhibits
the use of hyperbole, and to a high extent contributes to the idea of frustration. The
word “bizarre” presents an attitude of disgust towards “things”, and the diction, as
seen in the use of “things”, used as a representation of Diana’s situation and its
and irritation.
Two, when she is talking to her boyfriend Henry, “Hey, I am under stress. My mom is
in a hospital being electrocuted” (Yorkey 59). The tone of this quote is sarcastic, as
suggested by the use of the word “stress” in italics and the word “electrocuted”. It is
meant to be spoken in a way as if an obvious fact is being stated and that the
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speaker is giving an explanation about her unusual habit of going to clubs after
midnight together with her consumption of drugs. Her concern and worries are
shown in the song “Maybe (Next to Normal)”, when she confesses to Diana that, “For
all those years I prayed that / You’d go away for good— / Half the time afraid that /
You really would” (Yorkey 93), expressing her contradictory emotions evoked by
witnessing her mother’s condition. Her attitude towards her mother’s situation seems
to be more understanding towards the end of the text, depicted when she explicitly
tells Diana that “I don’t need a life that’s normal— / That’s way too far away. But
something next to normal / Would be okay” (Yorkey 94), It is worthy to note that in
perfect” (Yorkey 4). The contrast between the character Natalie delivered in the
beginning of the plot and that delivered towards the end of the plot shows that
Natalie’s acceptance of her mother’s abnormalities has grown and she is willing to
uggesting the
Characterisation of Heidi in Dear Evan Hansen s
prominently portrayed by Evan’s mother, Heidi, who cares about his social anxiety.
As a full-time working single mom, Heidi’s anxiousness is first shown in Act One
Scene One, in the song “Anybody has a Map”, in which she questions about her
approach to her son’s disorder. After “realizing that this interaction” (Levenson et al.
11) with her son which breaks apart the song “has been an utter failure” (Levenson
et al. 11), as suggested by the stage directions, the character sings “Another stellar
conversation for the scrapbook / Another stumble as I am reaching for / The right
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word to say / Well, I’m kinda comin’ up empty / Can’t find my way to you” (Levenson
et al. 11). This quote shows the desperation of Heidi to connect with her son, yet
highlights the difficulty of such in real life. The word “another” indicates that such
and the word “stellar” can imply more than one interpretation. On one hand, it can
connote to the idea of outer space which suggests the extraordinary distance
between the parent and the child. On the other hand, the word can be seen as used
to illustrate irony towards the speaker herself, as a way to mock herself on her
while “reaching” suggests the hardships she has to overcome when looking for “the
right word”, which again indicates that Heidi is being cautious and intentious in her
parental talk. The way she describes herself as “comin’ up empty” shows that she is
discouraged and not at all confident with her approaches, as she “can’t find” her
“way” to Evan. Later in the song, Heidi brings up a question, “Does anybody have a
map?” (Levenson et al. 11). This depicts Heidi’s desperation to navigate her way to
understanding more about her son, as suggested by the word “map”, a metaphor for
the spiritual guidance and accompaniment that she is seeking for in the parental
process. This idea is strengthened by the repetition of the motif in a later part of the
song, “So where’s the map?” (Levenson et al. 11), showing that Heidi is trying to
make sense of the situation that she is in, just as how Dan tries justifying his
presented in Act Two Scene Two. Having realised that Evan might have been
concealing something from her and showing little effort in maintaining a healthy
relationship with her, she questions “What is going on with you? / You need to talk to
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me. You need to communicate with me.” (Levenson et al. 107) in a way which shows
that she is “increasingly desperate” (Levenson et al. 107), as suggested by the stage
directions. The directness of the speech and the use of a rhetorical question suggest
Starting the sentence with the word “you” gives a strong sense of who the speech is
directed to and thus adds to the effectiveness of the commands. The words “need to”
shows determination and precision on what exactly Heidi wants to be done, and the
use of the word “me” shows that the speaker is desperate to almost a selfish extent
and does not take into the consideration of opinions other than those of her own. The
concern Heidi has for Evan, is further highlighted in the musical in Act Two Scene
Seven, when she learns that she has been kept from the fact that Evan has been
spending much time at another family in which he feels being a part of. With the use
of a rhetorical question, “Do you have any idea how mortifying it is?” (Levenson et al.
133), Heidi expresses her immediate fear of losing her relationship with Evan, as
well as her assumption of the lack of understanding and empathy she receives from
her son. Moreover, the word “mortifying” in italics emphasizes that the speaker sees
this idea as extremely terrifying and damaging. These details can be interpreted as
Next to Normal
her family, the writers of Next to Normal c ontrast the legitimate concern of the
diagnosed patient and her family, with an outsider’s point of view. Diana’s
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psychopharmacologist Doctor Fine is a perfect example of a character with an
attitude of indifference and a lack of compassion towards the patient. This may be a
feature applied by the text creators to evoke reflection among the audience on how
the mentally ill are sometimes being treated with little care in the society. As a
However, during his first appearance in the musical, he acts “rumpled and
world-weary” (Yorkey 16) according to the stage directions. The adjectives suggest
that he carries with him negative emotions and fatigue to work, having little
awareness for professionalism. The phrase “world-weary” depicts Doctor Fine’s lack
of interest and the little willingness and passion he has in offering assistance to a
patient in need. His attitude of apathy in his work is further highlighted in his first
lines of speech, in page 16, when he starts with giving instructions on prescribed
medications with a detached tone. The speech starts with “The pink ones are taken
with food but not with the white ones. The white ones are taken with the bright yellow
ones but not with the triangle yellow ones. The triangle yellow ones are taken with
food but not with the oblong green ones” (Yorkey 16). The intimidated effects created
by the structure of the sentences and the bombardment of information suggest the
little care Doctor Fine shows about Diana. The paucity of room for thought and
response from the recipient of the speech depicts that he is an impatient character
who is not an ideal listener. Following the instructions is a dramatic shift of topic, “If a
train is leaving New York at a hundred and twenty miles an hour and another train is
leaving St. Petersburg at the same time but going backwards, which train…” (Yorkey
16) This quote can be interpreted beyond its literal meaning. “A train” delivers a
connotation of something of a high speed, and the fact that “another train” joins in
suggests conflict and competition. Irony against the speaker is as well evident with
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the sudden change of subject matter, which indicates that his presentation has little
effectiveness to the listener, either driving Diana’s attention away or being perceived
Evan Hansen
friends of the protagonist, Jared being one of them. As clarified by Jared that he and
Evan are only “family friends” (Levenson et al. 16) because Jared want’s to get his
driver’s license, he does not show much empathy or concern for Evan throughout the
musical. In Act One Scene One, when Evan tells him that he fell from a tree during
the summer, what he instantly replies is a statement of pure mockery, “You fell out of
a tree? What are you, like, an acorn?” (Levenson et al. 16). The tone contributed by
the consecutive use of rhetorical questions, as well as the informality of the content
suggests the little respect he has for Evan. Throughout the musical, Jared keeps
emphasizing on the nature of their relationship. In Act Two Scene Two, when Jared
talks about meeting with his camp friends, he adds, “Or, as I like to call them: my real
friends” (Levenson et al. 104), delivering a sarcastic tone that belittles his “friendship”
with Evan. The idea is again suggested in Scene Seven of the same act, when Jared
points out to Evan that “you should remember who your friends are” (Levenson et al.
136). Such lack of empathy suggests how individuals with mental disorders can be
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Conclusion
conditions and their families through the theatrical stage, creators Brian Yorkey and
Tom Kitt of Next to Normal, and Steven Levenson, Benj Pasek and Justin Paul of
Dear Evan Hansen effectively draw the attention of the audience and readers to this
caring family in the first work, and the characterisation of a high school student with
social anxiety disorder and her concerned mother in the latter work, are in stark
contrast with the characterisation of the psychopharmacologist who cares little about
his patient Diana’s emotional state, and the “family friend” Jared who puts no effort
into understanding the psychological needs of Evan or lightening up his heart. Such
well as the stage directions, creates a strong effect in presenting the message that
individuals with mental disorders, along with their family and caretakers, can face a
lot of challenges presented by their mental conditions, and may sometimes be turned
away by other members of the society. The emergence of theatrical works on the
community has grown, but most importantly, plays a significant role in the advocacy
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