Successful Thesis Proposals in Architecture and Urban Planning
Successful Thesis Proposals in Architecture and Urban Planning
Successful Thesis Proposals in Architecture and Urban Planning
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Abstract
Purpose – The purpose of this research is to improve the understanding of what constitutes a successful thesis
proposal (TP) and as such enhance the quality of the TP writing in architecture, planning and related
disciplines.
Design/methodology/approach – Based on extended personal experience and a review of relevant
literature, the authors proposed a conception of a successful TP comprising 13 standard components. The
conception provides specific definition/s, attributes and success rules for each component. The conception was
applied for 15 years on several batches of Saudi graduate students. The implications of the conception were
assessed by a students’ opinion survey. An expert inquiry of experienced academics from architectural schools
in nine countries was applied to validate and improve the conception.
Findings – Assessment of the proposed conception demonstrated several positive implications on students’
knowledge, performance and outputs which illustrates its applicability in real life. Experts’ validation of the
conception and constructive remarks have enabled further improvements on the definitions, attributes and
success rules of the TP components.
Research limitations/implications – The proposed TP conception with its 13 components is limited to
standard problem-solving research and will differ in the case of other types such as hypothesis-based research.
Practical implications – The proposed conception is a useful directive and evaluative tool for writing and
assessing thesis proposals for graduate students, academic advisors and examiners.
Social implications – The research contributes to improving the quality of thesis production process among
the academic community in the built environment fields.
Originality/value – The paper is meant to alleviate the confusion and hardship caused by the absence of a
consensus on what constitutes a successful TP in the fields of architecture, urban planning and related
disciplines.
Keywords Urban planning, Architecture, Built environment, Postgraduate research, Writing successful
thesis proposals
Paper type Research paper
1. Introduction
After the postgraduate student completes her/his coursework in a master programme or
passes the comprehensive exam and becomes a doctoral candidate in a doctoral programme,
Figure 1.
The stages of
developing the
successful thesis
proposal conception
assessed by students’ survey. From November 2019 through March 2020, the conception was
validated by an experts’ inquiry of worldwide academics; then it was improved and finalized.
(1) To propose the Successful TP Conception, the authors relied on two sources: knowledge
extracted from their extended experience and a review of relevant studies and
instruction manuals and guidelines for preparing TP in several worldwide universities.
The Conception has been applied on several batches of master and doctoral students
from IAU, KSA for almost 15 years between 2005 and 2020 during their enrolment in
three courses in the College of Architecture and Planning, IAU, KSA. These courses are
“ARPL 603 Research Methods” and “BISC 600 Research Methods” for the master’s level
and “URPL 803 Seminar (3): Doctoral Research Methods” for the doctoral level.
(2) To assess the implications of the Successful TP Conception on students’ performance and
outputs, the authors designed an online questionnaire (Students_Survey, 2020) and
distributed it to a sample of 60 graduate students who studied and applied the conception:
From a total of 60 students, 39 students (65%) completed the survey; of whom 12
students (31%) were doctoral and 27 students (69%) were masters students.
The survey used a five-point Likert scale to assess the impact of applying the
rules of Successful TP Conception taught to students on their performances and
outputs; that is, how the conception helped the students:
- Improve their understanding of the components of a successful TP.
- Enhance their performance in developing their TP’s.
- Conduct a more effective self-assessment of their developed TP’s.
ARCH - Enhance their performance along other stages of producing their theses and
dissertations.
- Maintain any other benefits adding to students’ research capabilities.
(3) To validate and improve the conception, the authors used an expert inquiry to get the
insights of a selected sample of academics experienced in supervising master and
doctoral theses in worldwide architecture and planning schools. The authors
designed an online survey (Experts_Survey, 2019) and sent it to 80 experts; of whom
35 experts (43.75%) responded. The survey included two parts:
The first part recorded the general characteristics of respondents.
The second inquired about experts’ viewpoints on the definitions, attributes and
the rules of success of the components of the proposed TP conception.
The process of writing the proposal has become easier and more convenient
(100% agree and strongly agree).
The effort, cost and time spent in submitting the proposal have been substantially
saved (87% agree and strongly and 12% neutral).
The relationship with academic advisor has improved (87% agree and strongly
agree and 12% neutral).
(3) The students have become able to make a more effective self-assessment of the
research proposal before submitting it to their academic advisor:
The students’ confidence in advancing their own learning abilities has improved
(93% agree and strongly agree and 7% neutral).
The students’ abilities to address the strengths and weaknesses of their personal Successful
skills have improved (93% agree and strongly agree and 7% neutral). thesis
The students’ abilities to manage their learning process more independently have proposals in
improved (90% agree and strongly agree, 7% neutral and 3% disagree). architecture
(4) The students’ performance along other stages of producing their theses has
improved:
The students have created a clearer and better mutual understanding with their
academic advisors (90% agree and strongly agree and 10% neutral).
The students have reduced their distraction from the original target set out in the
proposal (81% agree and strongly agree, 16% neutral and 3% disagree).
The students have been able to finish their research on time (78% agree and
strongly agree, 19% neutral and 3% disagree).
(5) The students have gained other benefits that improve their overall research skills,
including:
They gained better analytical skills (87% agree and strongly agree, 10% neutral
and 3% disagree).
They gained better problem-solving skills (87% agree and strongly agree, 10%
neutral and 3% disagree).
They gained better critical thinking skills (87% agree and strongly agree, 10%
neutral and 3% disagree).
5. Conclusion
Based on their experience in preparing and supervising masters and doctoral theses and after
a thorough review of the literature on preparing thesis proposals, the authors drafted a
conception of a successful thesis proposal comprising specific definitions, attributes and rules
for each of the 13 components of a standard TP. The conception had been applied over a
duration of 15 years (2005–2020) on several batches of master and doctoral students in IAU,
KSA. Through an online survey, the majority of students (78–100%) have indicated that
understanding and applying the conception helped them improve their performances and
outputs during the TP development process and beyond.
The conception was then validated by getting the insights of 39 experienced academics
from worldwide architectural schools. The experts accepted the proposed definitions with
(73–96%) agreement rate. The experts also accepted the proposed attributes with (59–96%)
agreement rate. As for the success rules, the experts’ agreed as well with an acceptance rate
Component of a % of experts agreement of
Successful
# thesis proposal Proposed definition % Experts additional remarks thesis
proposals in
1 Research title The first item that appears to the 73 It should be reflective of research
reader. It invites the reader to topic, questions, objectives, content architecture
proceed to other contents and approach and convey the aim, the
purpose, the scope and the outcome
2 The abstract The first item that appears in the 79 Although some experts commented
TP after the title and of the same that in several schools an abstract is
significance. It calls the reader in not a compulsory component of TP,
or alienates him out 79% of the experts agreed that the
abstract is needed
3 Keywords A set of words or terms used for 75 Keywords are better written by
archiving, tabulation and splitting the title into its separate
electronic search on databases single words or terms. They should
include essential terms describing the
research topic, the unique sub-
specializations and focus of the
research (what is researched), the
contextual scope of the research
(where and when) and the used
research methodology (how to
conduct the research)
4 Background A gradual preparation from the 74 The background should place the
larger scientific field to the study within the larger context of the
specific field, from wider research, create interest to the reader
geographic area to the immediate and catch his attention, help him
area, and from the strategic level understand why the study is
to the level closer to the examined significant, include limitation and
problem arguments of pervious research, and
include quotations and statistics
leading the reader to go to the next
component of the TP
5 Statement of the
problem
5–1 Statement of the A narrative describing a negative 92 A statement which stimulates interest
general research situation prevailing in the in the study; scientifically explained to
problem investigated urban environment/ convey a simple, clear and specific
ecosystem or architectural issue to which a reader can relate”;
setting “equivalent to the negative wording of
the research aim”; and “in the
humanities and social sciences many
dissertations endeavour to establish
the conditions of the problem, not to
solve it
5–2 Statement of the A narrative that describes the 84 One expert commented that “the
research sub- general problem in detail; sub- above definition is valid and useful in
problems problems are simply the various causal research types only; other
causes of the general problem research types might consider
different approaches”
Table 2.
5–3 Consequences of A narrative that describes the 83 None
Proposed definitions of
the problem effects of sub-problems on the each component of the
investigated environment TP and experts’
agreements and
(continued ) remarks
ARCH Component of a % of experts agreement of
# thesis proposal Proposed definition % Experts additional remarks
Useful
True
Adequate
Scientific
Standard
Clear
Exact
To the point
Real
Realistic
Comprehended
Careful
Concise
Specific
Focused
Simple
Brief
Measurable
Articulate
Interesting
Attractive
Stimulating
Appealing
Striking
Flexible
Musical
Interrelated
Relevant
Gradual
critical
Integrated
Structured
Outlining
Documenting
Contextual
Evidenced
Doable
Achievable
Rooted
Deep
Unduplicated
Sequential
Timely
Non-overlapping
Sequential
Discursive
Responsive
Categorized
Indexed
Employed
Up to Date
Appropriate
Effective
Reliable
Logical
Balanced
1 Research Title 70 83 87 √ √ 93 71 √ √ √
2 The Abstract 71 79 79 √ √ √ 71
3 Keywords 75 61 71 68 √
4 Background 70 70 √ 59 74 √ √ √ √
5 Statement of the Problem
5-1 General Research Problem 96 92 √ 77 81 √ √
5-2 Research Sub-problems 92 92 96 96 92
Consequences of the
5-3 92 83 92 88 88
Problem
6 Research Questions √ √ √ 79 √ 92 √ 92 79
7 Aims/Goals/Objectives 96 96 96 96 88
General Aim of the
7-1 96 96 96 96 88
Research
7-2 Procedural Objectives 91 96 √ 96 96 88 78 87 √ √
7-3 Development Objectives 96 96 96 96 88 79
8 Research Scope 91 91 74
9 significance &Contributions √ 91 91 √ 70
Preliminary Review of
10 95 86 73 73 86
literature
11 Research Methodology 77 82 95 96 96
Research Structure and
12 √ √ √ 95 95 95
Timeline
13 List of References √ 95 86 95
Source(s): Prepared by the authors based on the above analysis and the results of expert inquiry
architecture
Successful
proposals in
thesis
of each component of
Experts’ remarks on
1 60% Research title Should reflect The general aim and scope of the
research
The negative wording of the research
problem
2 75% The abstract Should be A concise brief of all necessary
components of the research proposal
3 74% Keywords Should include Terms representing research title, topic,
unique sub-specializations,
methodology and scope
4 74% Research background Should cover A gradual contextual literary analysis
relevant to the study preparing the
reader to enter the study
5 The statement of the
problem
5–1 73% Statement of the Should reflect The main cause of a quantitative and/or
general research qualitative deficiency in the
problem environment under investigation
The negative wording of the research
aim
5–2 80% Research sub- Should describe The subsidiary causes of the main
problems problem
5–3 79% Consequences of the Should describe Subsidiary symptoms of the general
Problem illness of the examined environment
6 79% Research questions Should rephrase The research sub-problems in a question
format
The research objectives in a question
format
7 63% Research aims, goals Should be SMART (specific, measurable,
and objectives achievable, realistic and timely)
7–1 63% General aim of the Should reflect A target responding to the general
research research problem/question
A potential alternative scenario that
may enable the development of
solutions
The research title with the same or
different wording
7–2 57% Procedural objectives Should The sub-goals that compose the main
of the research articulate/ research aim
represent The stages of the research
The sections or chapters of the thesis
7–3 70% Development Should reflect Targeted solutions to the sub-problems
objectives of the of the study
research Targeted possible cures/fixes for the
subsidiary causes of the problem
8 83% Research scope Should cover Thematic, geographic and temporal
limits of the study
9 87% Research significance Should highlight The expected positive theoretical or
and contributions practical impacts of the research or both
10 95% Preliminary review of Should cover A well-documented, structured,
Table 4. literature analysed and synthesized critical review
An extracted list of of relevant research
success rules for thesis
proposals (continued )
Successful
% of Success rule thesis
Rule experts Component of a thesis Relationship Its concise definition (and/or) its
# agreed proposal nature (→) relationship to another component/s proposals in
architecture
11 82% Research Should explain The methods, techniques and tools used
methodology to accomplish the research objectives in
each stage of the study
12 82% Research structure Should The stages/phases of the research and
and timeline articulate/ their expected completion dates
represent The main chapters of the research
distributed along the completion
timeline
13 77% List of references Should present The references relevant to the research
problem
14 General The thesis proposal Should resemble The general introduction of the final
rule (using future tenses) thesis (using past tenses)
Source(s): Prepared by the authors based on the above analysis and the results of expert inquiry Table 4.
ranging from (57–95%). The experts suggested constructive remarks which were considered
in writing the final version of the conception.
The extracted success rules combine the definitions and attributes of each component of
the TP and present them in a concise statement which defines the component and, where
applicable, exemplifies its relationship to another corresponding or counterpart component of
the TP. For example, rule #1 shows that “research title” should reflect “the general aim and
scope of the research” and should also reflect “the negative wording of the research problem”.
Extracted also is rule #14 which indicates that “the whole thesis proposal” written in future
tenses, should resemble “the introduction of the final thesis” written in past tenses.
The research has reached a conviction that the proposed conception with its success rules
can provide a useful model to follow when preparing thesis proposals. It provides both
researchers and academic advisors with a directive and evaluative tool to apply along the
process of developing proposals of master or doctoral theses:
(1) A directive tool that assists the researcher in writing a sound TP. Combining the last
three tables (2, 3 and 4) into a comprehensive checklist would aid the students in
preparing their TP’s; enhancing the quality of their performance and outputs.
(2) An evaluative tool that helps in assessing the validity and integrity of the submitted
TP’s that can be used by the researcher for self-assessment, or by the academic
advisor, or by an examiner/evaluator before sending the proposal to higher
authorities for approval.
The findings of this paper could be useful not only in evaluating thesis proposals, but also,
with proper modifications, in assessing various scientific research documents, including
scientific thesis, research papers and others; which is another research topic that will be
addressed in the future.
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