English For Academic and Professional Purposes: Name: Date
English For Academic and Professional Purposes: Name: Date
Purposes
Name: Date:
Task Objectives
At the end of this activity, the learners should be able to
● identify the main ideas in a variety of texts,
● comprehend the text by analyzing and identifying the structure, and
● critique the texts based on your comprehension.
Question 1
Read the short essay and identify its main idea. Identify the supporting sentences for
your answer.
Our society has developed valuable technology such as the microscope, telephones, calendars,
notebooks, and so on. One of these modern inventions that has arguably become the most
used object in our generation is the smartphone.
Ever since smartphones were invented, the majority of our population has carried them around
in their pockets and bags along with their cash and credit cards. Phones are small yet valuable,
as they have multiple purposes, such as setting reminders, looking up word definitions, taking
pictures, and accessing the internet. Most importantly, it is used for communication.
In the 90s, communicating with your loved ones working abroad would mean waiting for their
handwritten letters or paying outrageous fees for a phone call. Nowadays, you can message
them on numerous online messaging applications. You can also video call them using your
smartphone. It is also easier to stay in touch with your friends. Gone are the days when it was
hard to locate a childhood friend or an old lover. Smartphones can perform almost all the
functions of a laptop. Having a smartphone is really a must in today’s world.
1 2 3 4 Weights Points
Content The main point of The main point of The main point of The main point of
the essay is not the essay is the essay is the essay is
identified and its somewhat identified identified but its identified well and
analysis is lacking. but its analysis analysis was a bit its analysis was
There is no focus lacked clarity. There inadequate. There is well-developed.
on the content of is a lack of focus in evident focus of the There is a clear
the paragraph. The the content of the content in the focus of the 50%
critique also does paragraph. The paragraph. The content in the
not have a definite critique also does critique also has a paragraph. The
stand or not have a definite stand with an critique also has a
discussion. stand with minimal adequate concrete stand and
discussion. discussion. a thorough
discussion.
Organization The critique text is The critique text is The critique text is The critique text is
not organized with poorly organized. organized, with an well organized,
no evident flow of evident flow of with an evident 35%
ideas. ideas. flow of ideas.
Grammar and The paragraph is The paragraph The paragraph has a The paragraph is
Mechanics poorly written with contains more than few grammatical free from
many grammatical a few grammatical errors. grammatical 15%
errors. errors. errors.
Total 100%