Cambridge O Level: English Language 1123/11 May/June 2020

Cambridge O Level
ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1123/11

Paper 1 Writing May/June 2020
MARK SCHEME
Maximum Mark: 60
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Students did not sit exam papers in the June 2020 series due to the Covid-19 global pandemic.
This mark scheme is published to support teachers and students and should be read together with the
question paper. It shows the requirements of the exam. The answer column of the mark scheme shows the
proposed basis on which Examiners would award marks for this exam. Where appropriate, this column also
provides the most likely acceptable alternative responses expected from students. Examiners usually review
the mark scheme after they have seen student responses and update the mark scheme if appropriate. In the
June series, Examiners were unable to consider the acceptability of alternative responses, as there were no
student responses to consider.
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because students did not sit exam papers, there is no Principal Examiner Report for Teachers for the June
2020 series.
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1123/11 Cambridge O Level – Mark Scheme May/June 2020
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Generic Marking Principles
These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers.
They should be applied alongside the specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptors
for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these marking principles.
GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:
Marks must be awarded in line with:
• the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question
• the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question
• the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts.
Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions).
Marks must be awarded positively:
• marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit
is given for valid answers which go beyond the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme,
referring to your Team Leader as appropriate
• marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do
• marks are not deducted for errors
• marks are not deducted for omissions
• answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these
features are specifically assessed by the question as indicated by the mark scheme. The
meaning, however, should be unambiguous.
Rules must be applied consistently e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed
instructions or in the application of generic level descriptors.
Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question
(however; the use of the full mark range may be limited according to the quality of the candidate
responses seen).
Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should
not be awarded with grade thresholds or grade descriptors in mind.
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Question Answer Marks
The assessment objectives for Sections 1 and 2 are:
Assessment Objectives for Writing (AO1)
W1 Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined
W2 Sequence facts, ideas and opinions
W3 Use a range of appropriate vocabulary
W4 Use register appropriate to audience and context
W5 Make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar
Assessment Objectives for Reading (AO2)
R1 Demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings
R2 Demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes
Detailed Marking Instructions for Section 1: Directed Writing.
Candidates are expected to:

1 write a letter which communicates information clearly, accurately and economically
2 carry out the instructions as detailed on the question paper regarding the particular information
required. Candidates will be awarded up to 15 marks for following the task instructions and up
to 15 marks for the language used.
Total marks for Section 1: 30.
In order to fulfil these assessment objectives in Section 1, a ‘best fit’ principle is applied using the
Task Fulfilment and Language band descriptors.
Notation used in Section 1 to indicate where required information is addressed:
what kind of shop it is and what you do there
why the shop is so busy and successful
why working in the shop is a useful experience for you.

PUBLISHED
Section 1
1 Your uncle and aunt own a shop which is busy and successful. You
sometimes help in the shop during your holidays. Your English teacher
asks you to make a speech to your class about the shop and your
experience of working there.
Write your speech. You must include the following:

• what kind of shop it is and what you do there
• why the shop is so busy and successful
• why working in the shop is a useful experience for you.
Cover all three points above in detail. You should make your speech
interesting and informative.
Start your speech ‘Good morning, everyone.’

PUBLISHED
In Section 1 Task Fulfilment use the annotations below.
Section 1 – Task Fulfilment – Essential annotations
Annotation Meaning Placement
Bullet point 1 Left margin
Use with numbers above when point only Left margin

touched on
Textbox Summative comment At end of response

Reference to appropriate band descriptor
Detailed Marking Instructions for Section 2: Composition
Section 2 Question
Candidates are advised to write between 350 and 500 words.
Description
2 Describe a very lively, noisy place you know and a very quiet one.
(Remember that you are describing the atmosphere and any people as
well as the places.)
Argument
3 ‘First impressions are nearly always wrong.’ Do you think this is true?
Give reasons and examples to support your view.
4 There is too much pressure on people to follow fashion. Do you agree?

Give reasons and details to support your view.
Narrative
5 Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘When they opened the
jewellery box, they could not believe what was in it.’
6 Write a story in which a train ticket plays an important part.

PUBLISHED
Section 1 Task Fulfilment 15 marks
Band 5 13–15 • Very good understanding of purpose.

• Clear awareness of the specified situation and audience.
• Text type entirely appropriate.
• All required points developed in detail, fully amplified and well
organised.
• Given information well used to justify personal opinion and
interpretation.
• Tone and register entirely appropriate.
Band 4 10–12 • Good understanding of purpose.

• An awareness of the specified situation and audience.
• Text type appropriate.
• All required points addressed not always developed in detail.
• Given information organised to support personal opinion.
• Tone and register appropriate.
Band 3 7–9 • Some understanding of purpose.

• Some awareness of the specified situation and audience.
• Text type generally appropriate.
• At least two required points addressed (both partially/fully developed).
• Given information may not be logically organised to support opinion.
• Tone usually appropriate although there may be slips of register.
Band 2 4–6 • Only partial understanding of purpose.

• Some confusion as to the specified situation and audience.
• Text type may be inappropriate.
• At least one required point addressed (partially/fully developed).
• Given information may be used irrelevantly.
• Tone and register may be uneven.
Band 1 1–3 • Misunderstanding of purpose.

• Confusion as to the specified situation and audience.
• Little evidence of the specified text type.
• None of the required points addressed.
• Given information misunderstood or irrelevant.
• Tone may be inappropriate.
Band 0 0 • Insufficient to meet the criteria for Band 1.

PUBLISHED
Section 1 Language 15 marks
Band 8 14–15 Highly accurate writing, apart from very occasional slips.
• Sentence structures varied for particular effects.
• Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently

used.
• Vocabulary wide and precise.
• Punctuation accurate and helpful.
• Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips.
• Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
Band 7 12–13 Accurate writing; occasional errors are either slips or caused by
ambition.
• Sentence structures show some variation to create some natural

fluency.
• Occasional slips in verb forms or tense formation, but sequence

consistent and clear throughout.
• Vocabulary precise enough to convey intended shades of

meaning.
• Punctuation accurate and generally helpful.
• Spelling nearly always accurate.
• Paragraphs have unity, are usually linked, and show some

evidence of planning.

PUBLISHED
Band 6 10–11 Mostly accurate writing; errors from ambition do not mar clarity of
communication.
• Some variety of sentence structures, but a tendency to repeat

sentence types may produce a monotonous effect.
• Errors may occur in irregular verb forms, but control of tense

sequence sufficient to sustain clear progression of events or ideas.
• Simple vocabulary mainly correct; errors may occur with more

ambitious words.
• Punctuation generally accurate and sentence separation correctly

marked, but errors may occur, e.g. with direct speech.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; some errors in more

ambitious words.
• Paragraphs may show some unity, although links may be absent or

inappropriate.
Band 5 8–9 Writing is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with

patches of clear, accurate language.
• Some variety of sentence length and structure, not always for

particular purpose.
• Errors in verb forms and tense consistency may cause uncertainty

in sequence of events or disturb ease of communication.
• Vocabulary usually adequate to convey intended meaning; idiom

may be uncertain.
• Punctuation used but not always helpful; occasional sentence

separation errors.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; errors in more difficult

words.
• Paragraphs used but may lack unity or coherence.

PUBLISHED
Band 4 6–7 Overall meaning never in doubt, but errors sufficiently frequent and
serious to hamper precision and distract reader from content.
• Some simple sentence structures accurate, but unlikely to sustain

accuracy for long.
• Errors in verb forms and tenses will sometimes confuse sequence of

events.
• Vocabulary limited, either too simple or imperfectly understood;

some idiomatic errors likely.
• Simple punctuation usually accurate, but there may be frequent

sentence separation errors.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; frequent errors in more

difficult words.
• Paragraphs used haphazardly.
Band 3 4–5 The writing has many serious errors of various kinds of ‘single-word’
type (i.e. they could be corrected without re-writing the sentence);
communication established, although weight of error may cause
some
'blurring'.
• Sentences probably simple and repetitive in structure.
• Frequent errors in verb forms and haphazard changes of tense

confuse meaning.
• Vocabulary conveys meaning but likely to be simple and

imprecise; significant idiomatic errors.
• Spelling may be inconsistent.
• Punctuation and paragraphing may be haphazard or non-existent.
Band 2 2–3 Sense usually decipherable but some errors will be 'multiple' (i.e.
requiring the reader to re-read and re-organise); meaning may be
partly hidden by density of linguistic error.
• Unlikely to be more than a few accurate sentences, however simple,

in the whole essay.

PUBLISHED
Band 1 1 Scripts almost entirely or entirely impossible to recognise as pieces

of
English writing; whole sections make no sense at all.
• Where occasional patches of relative clarity are evident, 1 mark

should be given.

PUBLISHED
Section 2 Language 30 marks
Band 8 27–30 Highly accurate writing, apart from very occasional slips.
• Sentence structures varied for particular effects.
• Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently

used.
• Vocabulary wide and precise.
• Punctuation accurate and helpful.
• Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips.
• Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
Appropriateness and Content
• Consistently relevant. Interest aroused and sustained.
• Tone and register entirely appropriate.
• Descriptions have well-developed images helping to create complex

atmospheres.
• Arguments are well developed, logical, even complex.
• Narratives are complex, sophisticated, possibly tense, and may

contain devices such as flashbacks.

PUBLISHED
Band 7 23–26 Accurate writing; occasional errors are either slips or caused by
ambition.
• Sentence structures show some variation to create some natural

fluency.
• Occasional slips in verb forms or tense formation, but sequence

consistent and clear throughout.
• Vocabulary precise enough to convey intended shades of

meaning.
• Punctuation accurate and generally helpful.
• Spelling nearly always accurate.
• Paragraphs have unity, are usually linked, and show some

evidence of planning.
• Relevant. Interest aroused and mostly sustained.
• Tone and register appropriate.
• Descriptions have interesting images and a range of detail, helping to

create effective atmospheres.
• Arguments have clearly defined, cohesive, logical stages in their

development
• Narratives have effective detail creating character or setting, and may

contain some sense of climax.

PUBLISHED
Band 6 19–22 Mostly accurate writing; errors from ambition do not mar clarity of
communication.
• Some variety of sentence structures, but a tendency to repeat

sentence types may produce a monotonous effect.
• Errors may occur in irregular verb forms, but control of tense

sequence sufficient to sustain clear progression of events or ideas.
• Simple vocabulary mainly correct; errors may occur with more

ambitious words.
• Punctuation generally accurate and sentence separation correctly

marked, but errors may occur, e.g. with direct speech.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; some errors in more

ambitious words.
• Paragraphs may show some unity, although links may be absent or

inappropriate.
• Relevant. Some interest aroused, although there may be some lack

of originality and/or planning.
• Tone usually appropriate, although there may be slips of register.
• Descriptions have satisfactory images, ideas and details which help

to create atmosphere.
• Arguments make a series of relevant points, with some being

developed; linking of ideas may be insecure.
Narratives are straightforward with proper sequencing of sentences.

PUBLISHED
Band 5 15–18 Writing is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with

patches of clear, accurate language.
• Some variety of sentence length and structure, not always for

particular purpose.
• Errors in verb forms and tense consistency may cause uncertainty

in sequence of events or disturb ease of communication.
• Vocabulary usually adequate to convey intended meaning; idiom

may be uncertain.
• Punctuation used but not always helpful; occasional sentence

separation errors.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; errors in more difficult

words.
• Paragraphs used but may lack unity or coherence.
• Attempt to address topic but there may be digressions or failures of

logic. May lack liveliness and interest.
• Tone may be uneven.
• Descriptions have some detail but may rely too much on narrative.
• Arguments have mainly relevant points but may be only partially

developed, with some repetition.
• Narratives are largely a series of events with only occasional details

of character and setting.

PUBLISHED
Band 4 11–14 Overall meaning never in doubt, but errors sufficiently frequent and
serious to hamper precision and distract reader from content.
• Some simple sentence structures accurate, but unlikely to sustain

accuracy for long.
• Errors in verb forms and tenses will sometimes confuse sequence

of events.
• Vocabulary limited, either too simple or imperfectly understood;

some idiomatic errors likely.
• Simple punctuation usually accurate, but there may be frequent

sentence separation errors.
• Spelling of simple vocabulary accurate; frequent errors in more

difficult words.
• Paragraphs used haphazardly.
• Some relevance. Some interest.
• Tone may be inconsistent.
• Descriptions are relevant but lack scope or variety.
• Arguments make a few points but development is simple and not

always logical; some obvious repetition of ideas.
• Narratives are simple, everyday or immature.
Band 3 7–10 The writing has many serious errors of various kinds of ‘single-
word’ type (i.e. they could be corrected without re-writing the
sentence); communication established, although weight of error
may cause some
'blurring'.
• Sentences probably simple and repetitive in structure.
• Frequent errors in verb forms and haphazard changes of tense

confuse meaning.
• Vocabulary conveys meaning but likely to be simple and

imprecise; significant idiomatic errors.
• Spelling may be inconsistent.
Punctuation and paragraphing may be haphazard or non-existent.

PUBLISHED
Band 2 2–3 Sense usually decipherable but some errors will be 'multiple' (i.e.
requiring the reader to re-read and re-organise); meaning may be
partly hidden by density of linguistic error.
• Unlikely to be more than a few accurate sentences, however

simple, in the whole essay.
Band 1 1 Scripts almost entirely or entirely impossible to recognise as pieces

of English writing; whole sections make no sense at all.
• Where occasional patches of relative clarity are evident, 1 mark

should be given.

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Generic Marking Principles

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:

Marks must be awarded in line with:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3:

Marks must be awarded positively:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6:

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Question Answer Marks

The assessment objectives for Sections 1 and 2 are:

Assessment Objectives for Writing (AO1)

W1 Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined

W2 Sequence facts, ideas and opinions

W3 Use a range of appropriate vocabulary

W4 Use register appropriate to audience and context

W5 Make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar

Assessment Objectives for Reading (AO2)

R1 Demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings

R2 Demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes

Detailed Marking Instructions for Section 1: Directed Writing.

Candidates are expected to:

Total marks for Section 1: 30.

Notation used in Section 1 to indicate where required information is addressed:

what kind of shop it is and what you do there

why the shop is so busy and successful

why working in the shop is a useful experience for you.

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Question Answer Marks

Write your speech. You must include the following:

Start your speech ‘Good morning, everyone.’

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Question Answer Marks

In Section 1 Task Fulfilment use the annotations below.

Section 1 – Task Fulfilment – Essential annotations

Annotation Meaning Placement

Bullet point 1 Left margin

Bullet point 2 Left margin

Bullet point 3 Left margin

Use with numbers above when point only Left margin

Textbox Summative comment At end of response

Question Answer Marks

Detailed Marking Instructions for Section 2: Composition

Candidates are advised to write between 350 and 500 words.

4 There is too much pressure on people to follow fashion. Do you agree?

6 Write a story in which a train ticket plays an important part.

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Question Answer Marks

Section 1 Task Fulfilment 15 marks

Band 5 13–15 • Very good understanding of purpose.

Band 4 10–12 • Good understanding of purpose.

Band 3 7–9 • Some understanding of purpose.

Band 2 4–6 • Only partial understanding of purpose.

Band 1 1–3 • Misunderstanding of purpose.