Examiners' Report: Principal Examiner Feedback Summer 2017
Examiners' Report: Principal Examiner Feedback Summer 2017
Examiners' Report: Principal Examiner Feedback Summer 2017
Summer 2017
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General Comments
Once again, an excellent standard was reached by the highest-scoring
candidates. Many candidates were well-versed in the ideas and issues which
the Sources focused on, and were able to write at length about the United
Nations, technology and economic development. Both essays proved
accessible to candidates with very few answers misinterpreting the
question. The most popular essay by some margin was 4(b) which dealt
with migration.
The single greatest hurdle faced by many less able candidates was - once
again - the striking inability to follow instructions. In question 1 especially,
candidates were asked frequently to explain one idea or one fact. The word
‘one’ was, on each occasion, printed in a bold font to highlight its
importance. Examiners reported that the majority of candidates did not
follow this instruction, resulting in only one or two marks being scored out
of a possible three or four for many question items.
Question 1 (a)
Many candidates struggled to score full marks, the reason being that they
provided an answer which bore little relationship to any of the important
principles and concepts that underpin this qualification. Candidates who
explained that, for instance, their study of 'beach litter' was important
because it linked with global sustainability goals were far more likely to
score full marks than those who asserted that beach litter is an important
issue because it makes the beach look dirty.
Question 1 (b)
A significant number of candidates confused the focus of the question with
the outcome of their action. They appeared unfamiliar with the way in
which section A is structured. Early parts of question 1 will always deal with
the preparation and research phase, not the outcomes or evaluation of the
action. The focus of this question was the impact of the chosen global issue
on local citizens (thereby perhaps providing an impetus for the candidate to
have chosen his or her particular global course of action). Some very good
answers explained that hygiene and sanitation issues were particularly
important because of the way they affected women in the student's home
country. This therefore made hygiene and sanitation an appropriate focus
for the community action. In contrast, candidates who explained the impact
of their completed action on local citizens were unable to gain any marks.
Question 1 (c)
Many candidates provided a brief account of two ways rather than an
explanation of one way. A large number of candidates were unable to
provide any explanation beyond an account of how they 'used the internet
to find out more'. For the reward of full marks, such answers needed to
include some detail of the web sites that were visited or the particular types
of data that were collected. Some candidates explained a more interesting
or unusual way in which they collected information, for instance by
interviewing family members or persons of influence within local
communities. The best answers once again were able to provide some
detail of the particular foci for the questions that were asked as part of this
primary data collection exercise.
Question 1 (d)
This question was well handled by many candidates who typically scored
between three and five marks. The question provided plenty of
opportunities for candidates to write about important global citizenship
themes such as rights, responsibilities, sustainability and community
cohesion. Many candidates explained how their greater understanding of
other cultures or environments had been fostered by the local community
action, which was pleasing to read about.
Question 1 (e)
The majority of candidates asserted that if the community action had been
carried out on a bigger scale it would have been more effective. In most
cases an answer such as this only scored one of two possible marks. Some
detail was needed for exactly how this bigger scale might have been
achieved, and why it might be wished for (other than because ‘bigger is
better’ presumably). For example, some candidates who had
communicated their ideas to a secondary school community proceeded to
explain that the action might have been more effective if they had
communicated the ideas to primary schools too, because this would have
introduced important ideas to children at a much earlier age (and could
therefore be a more effective way of affecting social change).
Question 1 (f)
The majority of answers to this question were descriptive rather than
explanatory. Most candidates listed the actions they had undertaken and
the contexts in which communication was carried out. In most cases, this
was sufficient to score around half marks. Relatively fewer candidates were
able to explain more rigorously how they communicated their ideas. The
very best answers included a rationale for why particular modes of
communication were used (and what the strengths of these particular
approaches had been), thereby providing explanation rather than merely
description. This meant that these answers were far more likely to be seen
as reflecting the band 3 criterion of a 'clear explanation'.
Question 2 (c)
Most candidates were able to score half marks by asserting that some of the
regions were too poor for most people to be able to afford to use
computers, or these were countries where internet use might be restricted
by government. Fewer candidates were able to develop their answers in
ways that scored all 4 marks. This could have been done by using evidence
and examples, or by developing the idea of relative poverty (for instance by
explaining that there may be other priorities for domestic spending in some
of the world's poorer regions).
Question 2 (d)
Although some good answers were seen (typically making reference to a
gross domestic product growth or industrialisation over time), it was clear
that many candidates lacked sufficient knowledge and understanding of this
key concept underpinning their course. Very weak answers such as 'it is
when people start to have more money' were too common.
Question 2 (e)
A minority of excellent answers were provided, some of which provided
detailed evidence in support, for example by making reference to new start-
up online service providers in emerging economies such as Kenya, Nigeria
and India. The strongest answers tended to deal with two different
economic sectors also; for example, by looking at one way in which
technology supports the sale of tourist services to overseas customers, and
then looking also at ways in which new technology might allow businesses
to procure parts and machinery they need online from other countries at
competitive prices. There were many possible approaches to answering this
question and it provided a good opportunity for stronger candidates to apply
their knowledge and understanding of technology and development.
Unfortunately, too many candidates appeared ill-prepared to apply their
knowledge and understanding in a meaningful way and failed to do more
than assert that the internet 'can help businesses grow' (without actually
saying how, or identifying any particular types of business).
Question 2 (f)
Most candidates answered his question competently. The most popular
scenarios were younger people being excluded due to their lack of maturity,
and women being excluded in patriarchal societies.
Question 2 (g)
The majority of candidates were able to obtain a middle band mark for this
question. Clearly, it is an area of the specification which is well taught in
the majority of cases (and which candidates feel comfortable writing about).
The most popular themes included the idea that everyone needs to
participate in order to feel that they can 'have a say' in how they are
governed; moreover, for an elected government to be truly representative
of the people it is important that the majority of people participate in
voting. The best answers developed these themes further by making
reference to citizenship concepts such as rights, responsibilities and
democracy. A few proceeded to explain why a lack of participation in
elections can undermine democracy by allowing people with undemocratic
views to take control of the political system. Contemporary examples were
sometimes offered in support of this sophisticated argument.
Question 3 (b)
This question was poorly answered with very few candidates apparently
understanding the question. The main message of source C was that U.N.
peacekeeping is a vast logistical undertaking that simply cannot be
supported without the participation of a large number of global partners.
For full marks, candidates needed to acknowledge this and use evidence
from Source C to support their explanation.
Question 3 (c)
This question was also poorly answered with large numbers of candidates
unable to name another valid international grouping. Many simply
substituted ‘European’ and ‘African’ with the name of another continent and
guessed hopefully – but wrongly – that the 'Asian Union' or 'American
Union' might be another valid international grouping. A minority correctly
identified one of the other international groupings of countries included in
the specification, such as NAFTA. Several correctly identified NATO (which
appeared in the source).
Question 3 (d)
Only a minority of candidates gained both marks. Few were able to use
their own knowledge to explain another valid peacekeeping operation, or to
explain another important U.N. action such as the establishment of the
sustainable development goals. It was surprising to see candidates perform
quite so poorly given the central importance of the United Nations to the
study of global citizenship.
Question 3 (e)(i)
Most candidates were able to correctly identify one article of the UDHR, and
a minority were able to add sufficient description to score two marks.
Question 3 (e)(ii)
Most candidates competently described one way in which the entitlements
set out in Article 2 were being met in their own country. A wide range of
human rights and anti-discriminatory legislation was credited for various
different local contexts.
Question 3 (f)
Most candidates provided two sufficiently distinct ways to gain full credit.
The most common approach was to offer a statement about international
aid and another statement about trading or foreign investment.
Question 3 (g)
For those candidates in possession of very little knowledge of their own, it
was possible to gain two or three marks by selectively making use of
information from sources C and D, which the majority managed to do.
Candidates reaching the upper bands were also required to discuss ideas
which drew on their own global citizenship learning. Popular themes
included the way in which the United Nations carries out its functions
through subsidiary agencies such as the WHO, and other organisations
under the U.N. umbrella such as the World Bank. Credit was also given for
the discussion of important U.N. initiatives such as the Millennium
Development Goals, or climate change agreements. The best answers
managed to synthesise a number of different themes, often covering social,
economic and environmental domains.
Question 4 (a)
Most candidates were able to craft an effective discussion of the statement,
even if they were able to do little more than consider the work of one
charity or campaigning organisation prior to asserting that the U.N. is
ultimately most important on account of the scale it operates on. The best
answers thought critically about what was meant by the word 'fairer' and
provided multiple examples of NGOs working towards more equitable
outcomes for different groups of people in located contexts. Another
hallmark of high scoring answers tended to be discussion of other players
and stakeholders with an important role to play, such as nation states.
Question 4 (b)
This was by far the most popular of the two essays. Most candidates were
well equipped to discuss a case study of international migration, including
its costs and benefits. Weaker answers tended to discuss only the impact
for the sending and receiving states and glossed over the idea of a global
community entirely; they were apparently content that discussion of one
sending and one receiving country was sufficient to constitute consideration
of a ‘global community’ (albeit one consisting of two countries only).
Stronger answers were more expansive, and were able to discuss the
broader global effects of cultural diffusion, internationalism and global-
mindedness that may result from the truly global 'churn' of people,
languages, norms and beliefs.
Summary
Candidates who obtained one of the lower pass grades on this paper often
showed little evidence of proper teaching and learning about global
citizenship. It was disappointing to see the work of weaker candidates who
were unable to provide detailed evidence and understanding of places,
concepts and issues in support of their arguments and explanations. In
contrast, candidates achieving the higher grades more typically displayed
good understanding of the assessment objectives for the examination and
produced well evidenced and discursive essays. They supported their
responses to the short answer questions with detailed examples and made
consistent use of citizenship ideas and concepts.