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How to Write Good Scientific
Papers: A Comprehensive Guide
Rui Pedro Paiva, PhD

Researcher @ Proyecto Prometeo, Ecuador
Professor @ University of Coimbra, Portugal
January 2013
Outline
• Introduction
• Starting Point: A Good Research Idea
• Types of Scientific Papers
• Structure of a Scientific Paper
• Writing Sequence
• Writing Style
• Reviewing your Document
2
Outline
• Submission
• Post-Review
• Paper Dissemination
• Conclusions and Future Work
• Acknowledgments
• About the Author
• Bibliography
3
Introduction
• Motivation and Scope

• Objectives and Approaches
• Main Contributions
• Overview: What makes a good scientific paper?
Introduction

– What is a scientific paper?
Sharks
(reviewers)
OCEAN OF Island of
Human
IGNORANCE Knowledge
Your
paper
From [Jacob, 2009]
5
Introduction

– What is a scientific paper?
• Intentionally too general definition
– A published manuscript with original contributions to
extending human knowledge in some field
• Detailed definition
– I hope you get it after reading these guidelines ☺
• Other definitions
– Check, for example, [Day, 1998] or
http://journalology.blogspot.com/2010/08/what-is-scientific-
paper-1-observations.html
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Introduction

– Why publish?
Papers “are important because

without them scientists cannot
get money from the government
or from universities” [Schulman,
1996]
7
Introduction

– Why publish?
• Scientific career: should be centered in the creation of
knowledge
– More than on the transmission of knowledge
• Publish so that others can benefit from your
contribution to understanding the world
– And because it is key for your scientific career
Quality should be preferred over quantity
Avoid “salami” publication [Lawrence, 2012a]

• Slicing one good, comprehensive paper into several
smaller papers 8
Introduction

– What to publish?
9
Introduction

• A new idea, e.g., a first solution to an impacting
problem
• A better solution to a known problem
– E.g., a better-performing algorithm (accuracy, speed, etc.)
• Knowledge gaps
• Multidisciplinary ideas
• General or specific problems
10
Introduction

• Results of experiments
• Integration of knowledge, trends in recent, cutting-
edge areas
• A proof of the impossibility of solving a problem
• …
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Introduction
• Objectives and Approaches
– The purpose of this document is to summarize a
number of general guidelines for producing good
research papers
• These guidelines do not substitute the priceless value of
experience
• As always, these are general rules of thumb
– Particular cases might require particular approaches
– I resort to both a literature review on the theme and
my personal experience
• Other people might disagree with some of my perspectives
– Illustrative examples are used extensively
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Introduction
• Main Contributions
– A clear, comprehensive and integrated overview
of the main issues pertaining to the production of
good scientific papers
• Information about the topic is scattered across several
sources
– Lessons learned from my personal experience
writing and reviewing scientific papers
• Enriched with several rejected papers ☺
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Introduction
– An original, impacting idea
• Demonstrating scientific, economic, and social impact of the studied
problem
– The way you communicate it
• Effectiveness of communication, clarity of presentation and thought-
provoking discussion are key
– A good critical coverage of related literature
– A sound methodology
– Good data analysis
• Statistically supported
– The way you disseminate it
• Making it available online (if possible)
• Doing presentations, communications at meetings and with visitors
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Introduction

– Key questions (adapted from [Cardoso, 2012]
• Is the research new?
• Is the research significant to the field of research?
• Does it clearly motivate and clearly formulate the research
question?
• Does it outline the current knowledge of the problem
domain, as well as the state of existing solutions?
• Does it present clearly any preliminary ideas, the proposed
approach and the results achieved so far?
• Does it sketch the research methodology that is applied?
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Introduction

– Key questions (adapted from [Cardoso, 2012]
• Does it point out the contributions of the applicant to the
problem solution?
• Does it state in what aspects the suggested solution is
different, new or better as compared to existing approaches
to the problem?
• Does it state how the attained results are evaluated or
compared to existing approaches to the problem?
• Does it state how and by whom the expected results can be
applied?
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Introduction
For beginners: find a role model

• Follow the model of a good paper of the kind you are writing, in
your research field
Start writing the day you start your research

• Even simple, short, unstructured notes will help you
– Help you staying focused
– Accelerate the production of the final manuscript
• Write down ideas that come to your mind
Keep a good and updated bibliographic database

• Search and read a bit every day
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Introduction
Think about possible journals/conferences early
Become a reviewer
• It will help you to both read and write better
• How?
– Approach the program committee of conferences and editorial
staff of journals
– Publish! It’s likely they will invite you later to become a reviewer
Have a high number of citations as your goal

• Citations are a standard quantitative way to measure
paper quality (excluding self-citations)
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Introduction
From
http://archive.sciencewatch.com/dr/cou/2010/10decALL/
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Introduction
Further reading
• Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific

paper”, 5th Edition, Cambridge University Press
• Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002).
“Scientific Writing, Easy When You Know How”, BMJ
Books
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Starting Point:
A Good Research Idea
Starting Point: A Good Research Idea
• Good research idea: key for a good paper

– Although not sufficient
• Good writing is as important
• Typically, within a Scientific Project
– Often, you write papers as part of the research
within a scientific project
– Good ideas: what and how?
• See [Paiva, 2013]: “How to Write Good Scientific Project
Proposals: A Comprehensive Guide”
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Types of Scientific Papers
• Research Papers • Papers on Developed

• Review Papers Systems or Applications
• Tutorial Papers • Case Description Papers
• Others
• Research papers
– The “typical” paper
– Propose new concepts, problems, approaches to
known problems, algorithms, devices,
experiments, etc.
– Compare your results with the state of the art
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• Review Papers
– Organized and structured descriptions of a
cutting-edge research theme
• Information scattered across different sources, hard to
find elsewhere
– Summarize, analyze, evaluate or synthesize
already published information
– Sources of new ideas
– Typically long
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• Tutorial Papers
– Detailed description of a relevant and useful
topic, unfamiliar to a significant number of
researchers
26
• Papers on Developed Systems or Applications

– Describe
• Problem to solve
• Development difficulties
• Implementation choices
– Compare your system with others
• Performance, usability, features, etc.
27
• Case Description Papers

– Common in areas such as medicine
• Authors describe a number of clinical cases and the
followed approaches
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• And others…
– Hypotheses
• Preliminary “pilot studies” that may establish the basis for further in-depth
investigations
– Editorials
• Presentation of points-of-view or opinions relating to the editorial purpose of
a journal
– Typically by the editor
– Letters to the Editor
• Communications directed specifically to the editor, critically assessing some
aspect of the journal
– E.g., point-up a deficiency in a recently published paper
– Conference Reports
• Description and analysis of conferences, particularly abstracts of
presentations, prior to their publication in a proceedings volume or elsewhere
– …
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• Further reading
• Lawrence D. J. (2012b). “Types of Scientific Articles”,

Presentation, Course on Scientific Writing, URL:
http://w3.palmer.edu/lawrence/Scient_Writ/PPT/Sessi
on%202%20CRT.ppt
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Structure of a Scientific Paper
• Extended IMRAD
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• Goals
– Adequately organize your paper, promoting clarity
and objectivity
• How?
– Typical structure: IMRAD format
• Introduction
• Methodology
• Results
• And
• Discussion
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• How?
– Other info:
• Front matter
– Title, Authors and Affiliation
– Abstract
– Keywords
• Conclusions and Future Work
• End matter
– Acknowledgments
– References
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• Extended IMRAD
General
Specific
General
Inspired from [Zucolotto V., 2011] (Adapted from [Hill et al., 1982])
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Key findings should be placed in key sections

• Abstract, introduction and conclusions
• Diagonal readers must get the message by following
their typical reading style
These are guidelines

• The structure may differ from paper to paper and
across communities.
• Journals/conferences might impose a template, but it
generally follows the extended IMRAD structure
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Structure – Title
• Goals
– Create an appealing main door to the paper
• Decision to read your paper or not depends a lot on the
title
• How?
– Should brief and rigorously summarize the
essence of the paper
• Attractive, objective, precise, fully descriptive, concise
and clear title
– Should be specific (not too general)
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Structure – Title
Make a list of the keywords that reflect the described

work
Use the minimum number of words that adequately

summarize the content of the paper
• Avoid titles with more than 10 words
Sometimes the title may contain the conclusion of the

paper
Rewrite the title in the final version of the paper

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Structure – Title
Sometimes, it is better if the title contains 2 parts (as in

this case)
Don’t use acronyms and abbreviations in the title
Avoid waste words (studies on, investigations on, a, an,

the, etc)
Review the title again and again
38
Structure – Authors
• Goals
– Identify the authors of the paper
• Executors of the described work
• Writers
• Project colleagues
• …
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• How?
– Follow guidelines that define authorship
– Ethics is important
• All authors must be able to present/discuss/defend
the paper
– Honorary authorship happens frequently… Valid or not?
» Often used to facilitate acceptance or citation
» Sometimes projects have honorary team members (for
the same reasons) those members tend to become
honorary co-authors
R P Paiva1, P Carvalho1, R Couceiro1, J Henriques1, M Antunes2,

I Quintal3, J Muehlsteff4
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• How?
– Author ordering
• First author
– Main executor of the described work
– Main writer (even if not the main responsible for the
described work)
• Other authors
– In the order of contribution to the described work
• Last author
– Typically, a senior researcher, e.g., a supervisor (even though
he proposes the idea of the work, project, etc.)
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Structure – Affiliations
• Goals
– Identify the institutions to which the authors
belong
• How?
– Name, physical address, e-mail
• One for each individual institution
R P Paiva1, P Carvalho1, R Couceiro1, J Henriques1, M Antunes2, I
Quintal3, J Muehlsteff4
1Center for Informatics and Systems of the University of Coimbra, Pólo II, 3030-290
Coimbra, Portugal
2Cardiothoracic Surgery Center, Hospitals of the University of Coimbra, Praceta
Mota Pinto, 3049 Coimbra, Portugal

3Hospital Center of Coimbra, Quinta dos Vales, 3041-801 Coimbra, Portugal
4Philips Research Laboratories Europe, HTC, 5656AE Eindhoven, Netherlands 42
Structure – Abstract
• Goals
– Like the title, should be brief and rigorously
summarize the essence of the paper, now with a
few more words (typically, between 200 and 400
words)
• Like the title, may be the only thing other people will
read: Is it worth reading the paper?
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• How?
– Describe concise, clear and objectively:
• What the authors have done
– Blunt, right-to-the-point approach
» 1 or 2 sentences
• If necessary and you have space, say why (1 or 2 sentences)
• How they have done it (briefly)
– 3 or 4 sentences
• The main results (showing quantitative numbers, if it is the case)
• The importance and impact of the results
• First sentence: state the essence of the paper
– Blunt, right-to-the-point approach
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This experiment will determine what will make enzymes
effective and what will make them ineffective. We tested
different samples of enzymes in a spectrophotometer and
recorded their absorption rates. Six samples were placed in
the spectrophotometer but two contained no enzyme; these
acted as blanks for the other samples. The four remaining
samples contained Catecholase ranging from 0.5 ml to 1.75 m.
The second half of the experiment contained four test tubes
with a constant amount of Catecholase, but the pH levels
ranged from four to eight. It was found that if the enzyme was
present in large amounts, then the absorption rate was high,
and if the pH level ranged from 6 to eight then the absorption
rate was high. Therefore it can be said that enzymes work well
in neutral pH levels and in large amounts.
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sentence will make
is addressing whatthem ineffective. We tested
was done, but it’s not specific.
• Too long and detailed to be in an abstract.
samples contained
• Just extraneous Catecholase
information not crucial to ranging from 0.5 ml to 1.75 m.
The second halftheof
understanding the experiment
experiment as a whole contained four test tubes
Avoid saying that the results
•
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Right information, but too general,
eight. It was found that if the enzyme was
you obtained are correct or
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Instead high,
just say that
the data supported or did not
support your hypothesis.
This experiment will determine what will make enzymes
effective and what will make them ineffective. We tested
samples contained Catecholase ranging from 0.5 ml to 1.75 m.
The second half of the experiment contained four test tubes
ranged from four to eight. It was found that if the enzyme was
present in large amounts, then the absorption rate was high,
This experiment was performed to determine the factors that positively
influence enzyme reaction rates in cellular activities since some
enzymes seem to be more effective than others. Catecholase enzyme
activity was measured through its absorption rate in a
spectrophotometer, using light with a wavelength of 540 nm. We
compared the absorbance rates in samples with varying enzyme
concentrations and a constant pH of 7, and with samples with constant
enzyme concentration and varying pH levels. The samples with the
highest enzyme concentration had the greatest absorption rate of 95
percent compared to the sample with the lowest concentration and
an absorption rate of 24 percent. This suggests that a higher
concentration of enzymes leads to a greater product production rate.
The samples with a pH between six and eight had the greatest
absorption rate of 70 percent compared to an absorption rate of 15
percent with a pH of 4; this suggests that Catecholase is most effective
in a neutral pH ranging from six to eight.
• Sentence is clear and concise
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• Tells the performed
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why the experiment the factors that positively
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• The controls and the variables are stated
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• Conclusions drawn from the results and
percent compared to the sample with the lowest concentration
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clear conclusions
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compared the absorbance rates in samples with varying enzyme
concentrations and a constant pH of 7, and with samples with constant
enzyme concentration and varying pH levels. The samples with the
percent compared to the sample with the lowest concentration and
an absorption rate of 24 percent. This suggests that a higher
absorption rate of 70 percent compared to an absorption rate of 15
percent with a pH of 4; this suggests that Catecholase is most effective
Abstract
We investigate the feasibility of using heart sound (HS) to accurately measure the opening and
closing moments of the aortic heart valve. These moments are crucial to define the main systolic
timings of the heart cycle, i.e., PEP and LVET. Systolic time intervals are highly correlated to
fundamental cardiac functions. Several studies have shown that these measurements have
significant diagnostic and prognostic value in heart failure condition and are adequate for long-term
patient follow-up and disease management.
We introduce an algorithm for automatic extraction of PEP and LVET using HS and ECG. PEP is
estimated with a Bayesian approach using to the signal’s instantaneous amplitude and patient-
specific time intervals between atrio-ventricular valve closure and aortic valve opening. As for LVET,
since the aortic valve closure corresponds to the start of the S2 heart sound component, we base
LVET estimation on the detection of the S2 onset.
A comparative assessment of the main systolic time intervals is performed using synchronous signal
acquisitions of the current gold standard in cardiac time intervals measurement, i.e.,
echocardiography, and heart sound. The algorithms were evaluated on a healthy population, as well
as on a group of subjects with different cardiovascular diseases (CVD). In the healthy group, from a
set of 942 heartbeats, the proposed algorithm achieved 7.66 ± 5.92 msec absolute PEP estimation
error. For LVET, the absolute estimation error was 11.39 ± 8.98 msec. For the CVD population, 404
beats were used, leading to 11.86 ± 8.30 msec and 17.51 ± 17.21 msec absolute PEP and LVET
errors, respectively. The results achieved in this study suggest that HS can be used to accurately
estimate LVET and PEP.
Adapted from Paiva et al., 2012, “Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from heart sounds 51
and ECG” (some improvements to the original paper were added).
The abstract is often the most important part of the

paper
• Most readers only read that
– Readers use the abstract to decide weather or not to read and
cite the paper
• May be reproduced in publications that list abstracts
The abstract is not an introduction to the paper

• It is a brief summary of each of the main IMRAD sections of
the paper (see Structure)
– Brief description of the whole paper, so that diagonal readers
understand it without reading the other parts of the manuscript
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Focus on what is new and on key information

• Very brief overview of the central ideas of your
methodology, key results (quantitative), findings and
conclusions
Avoid the classical “In this paper” starting
Avoid bibliographical references in the abstract
Avoid acronyms. If they must be used, their definition

should be repeated in the main text
53
Information in the abstract must be in the main

body
In general, write the abstract in one paragraph
Tense: past or present tense may be used
54
Structure – Keywords
• Goals
– Select a number of words or terms that
characterize the main domains to which the
paper pertains
• Often employed in electronic search systems (ESS)
• How?
– Should be as general and common as possible
• So that ESS can find the paper in broad searches
Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from
heart sounds and ECG
Keywords: systolic time intervals, cardiac function, heart sound segmentation 55

Structure – Keywords
Some of the keywords should be present in the title
Use the same keywords that you use to find a paper

similar to yours in a web browser
Check the ACM Computing Reviews annual

classification system to gain insight on the use of
keywords
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Structure – Introduction
“The real purpose of introductions, of course, is to

cite your own work, the work of your advisor, the
work of your spouse, the work of a friend from
college, or even the work of someone you've never
met, as long as your name happens to be on the
paper.” [Schulman, 1996]
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• Goals
– State the purpose of the paper
– Give the context of the paper
– Summarize your contributions to the field
• How?
What? Why?
How? Succeeded?
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General Purpose Your Field
Contextualization
Sumary of Previous
Research
Objectives and
Methods
Summary of
Results Adapted from [Zucolotto V., 2011]
Specific Your work

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• How?
– Present your ideas flowing from general to specific
• Except for the immediate purpose statement, at the very
first sentence
– Clearly state the importance of the paper to the
development of the field
• What are your contributions to the development of the
field?
• What’s new in your work?
• What current limitations does your work overtakes?
• [Indirectly state why you think your paper deserves to be
published]
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• Structure
– What? (brief)
• Problem statement and main purpose
– Describe the problem you address in the paper
– As in the abstract, use the first sentence for that purpose
– Only then give background information
The goal of this paper is to assess the feasibility to accurately extract the main systolic
time intervals from heart sound.
Adapted from Paiva et al., 2012, “Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from heart sounds
and ECG” (this sentence was not the first one ☺)
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• Structure
– Why?
• Motivation and scope
– Why do you address that problem? Why is it relevant to the
field? What applications does this research problem have?
What’s the scientific, social, economic, cultural, etc. impact of
addressing this problem?
Heart sound has emerged as a powerful (easy to use, low intrusive, repeatable and
accurate) and inexpensive bio-signal to develop and deploy monitoring systems, mainly
in the context of chronic disease management where low-cost and reliable solutions for
cardiovascular function assessment are required for long-term patient follow-up.
This application scenario has been growing in importance since the past decades due to
the rising incidence and prevalence of chronic cardiovascular diseases (WHO, 2005) as
well as the unprecedented aging of the world population (Rechel et al., 2009; United
Nations) with a decrease in the number of working age per retiree.
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From Paiva et al., 2012, “Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from heart sounds and ECG”
• Structure
– Why?
• Meaningful and critical literature review
– How is the problem currently being addressed?
» Most relevant works / exhaustive review
– What limitations do you see in current approaches?
– Sometimes in a sub-section (Literature Review or Related
Work)
Existing commercial and research biomedical systems using heart sounds are mainly
supported by the analysis of the intensity and spectral content of the main heart sound
components (e.g. (Debbal and Bereksi-Reguig, 2008; Eitz et al., 2003; Xiao et al., 2003;
Durand and Pibarot, 1995)), in tasks such as noise detection (Kumar et al., 2011) or
heart sound segmentation (Schmidt et al., 2010; Ahlstrom et al., 2008).
From Paiva et al., 2012, “Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from heart sounds and ECG” 63
• Structure
– What? (more detailed)
• Objectives
– Summarize the main and secondary objectives of the paper
In this paper, the goal is to assess the feasibility to accurately extract the main systolic
time intervals from heart sound.
and ECG”
64
• Structure
– How?
• Hypotheses formulation
– What are your hypotheses for a (better) solution to the
problem?
The underlying hypothesis is that the first and the second heart sounds encode
mechanical activity (valve movements, blood flow, etc.) and that these components
exhibit noticeable and specific signatures that enable their identification using this
signal. To this end, we also follow the idea of combining HS and ECG.
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• Structure
– How?
• Overall Methodology
– How do you tackle the described limitations in the state of the
art? Briefly describe the overall methodology you propose
We introduce an algorithm for automatic extraction of PEP and LVET using HS and ECG.
PEP is estimated with a Bayesian approach using to the signal’s instantaneous
amplitude and patient-specific time intervals between atrio-ventricular valve closure
and aortic valve opening. As for LVET, since the aortic valve closure corresponds to the
start of the S2 heart sound component, we base LVET estimation on the detection of
the S2 onset.
and ECG”
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• Structure
– Did your hypotheses succeed? Brief evaluation
• Summary of key findings
– Summarize the attained (quantitative) results
• Interpretation of main results
– Compare main results to the state of the art
– Critical Analysis
» Briefly state the strengths and limitations of your work
• Summary of key contributions
– Summarize your main contributions to extend the state of the art
– Why are these contributions useful and relevant to the scientific
community working in the field?
– How is the paper structured? Paper outline
• Briefly describe the main sections of the paper
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For the CVD population, 404 beats were used, leading to 11.86 ± 8.30 and 17.51 ±
17.21 ms absolute PEP and LVET errors, respectively. The results achieved in this study
suggest that HS can be used to accurately estimate LVET and PEP.
The main contributions of this article are:

• To the best of our knowledge, the first non-intrusive method for PEP and LVET
estimation based on heart sound
• Results above the state-of-the-art using other methodologies for both healthy and
CVD popullations
• A dataset for PEP and LVET estimation
The remaining of the paper is organized as follows: in section 2 the algorithms for heart
sound analysis are described. The data collection strategy is presented in section 3. In
section 4, the main results are presented and discussed. Finally, in section 5 the main
conclusions are presented.
and ECG” (in the original paper, the 1st sentence was in the abstract but not in the introduction ☺) 68
Avoid uncritical listing of related work
Remember you have other sections!

• Focus your paper summary on key information (overview of
the methodology, main results, key findings and conclusions)
Itemize
• List of contributions, objectives, key findings, etc.
– Improves readability: reader doesn’t get lost in the middle of
dense text
69
Structure – Methodology
• Goals
– Describe in detail the hypotheses and
methodologies employed to tackle the problem
• How?
– Describe the originally proposed methods (or
significant modifications of older methods)
• Detailed description
• Other known methods
– Reference or brief description might suffice
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• How?
– Provide full details: don’t leave “blanks” in the
description of your method
• It is useful if someone unfamiliar with your work reads
it
– Make your paper as self-contained as possible
(depending on the space you have)
• This is especially true for journal papers
– Structure this section: use sub-sections according
to the different components of your method
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• How?
– Do not be overly textual. Give support to your
description with
• Illustration diagrams to visually summarize the
methodologies
• Algorithms to systematize the steps of your method
• Equations to mathematically compress and quantify
your descriptions
• Tables to summarize employed parameters
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2. Methodology
Figure 1. Overview of the proposed PEP estimation approach.
Algorithm 1. Elimination of ghost octave notes.
1. Sort all notes in ascending onset time order.
2. For each note, i,
2.1. Look for a note, j, such that:
a)(|onset(i) – onset(j)| ≤ maxOnsetDist or |ending(i) –
ending(j)| ≤ maxOnsetDist) and
b) |MIDI(i) – MIDI(j)| = 12k or 12k ± 1 and
c) the two notes have parallel changes in frequency and
salience.
2.2 If note j was found,
2.2.1. Compute the average salience of the two notes in
their common time interval, avgSal.
2.2.2. If avgSal(j) / avgSal(i) ≤ 0.4/k then
delete note j and repeat step 2.1 until no more
notes are found.
2.2.3. If avgSal(i) / avgSal(j) ≤ 0.4/k then
delete note i and repeat step 2 for the next note.
From Paiva et al., 2006, “Melody Detection in Polyphonic Musical Signals: Exploiting
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Perceptual Rules, Note Salience and Melodic Smoothness”
From Paiva et al., 2008, “From Pitches to Notes: Creation and Segmentation of Pitch
Tracks for Melody Detection in Polyphonic Audio”
75
Focus this section on the how question
Start with an overall diagram that synthesizes the whole

method
• Then, structure the methodology section according to the
components in that diagram
Remember readers should be able to replicate your work

• Provide full details
Remember reviewers should be able to evaluate your work
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Avoid showing results here
Be sequential and linear

• Try to describe logical and linearly your approach
Be rigorous
• Make sure your methodology doesn’t have mathematical flaws,
erroneous text, mistakes in diagrams, algorithms or equations
Be explicit
• Avoid ambiguities in the description, be specific
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Structure – Results and Discussion
• Goals
– The section where you prove your initial
question, hypothesis, idea, highlight the
important findings
• How?
Experimental Outcome of Data analysis and

Process Proposed Methods Interpretation of
Results
78
• How?
– Suggested structure: progress from general to
specific
1. Describe the experimental process
– E.g., data acquisition process and protocols, ethical
procedures for research with humans, etc.
– Characterize the employed population (people: age, sex,
weight; music: genre, style, duration, etc.)
» Justify the choice of that population
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3.1 Experimental Setup

(…)
As for the CVD population, this one is more balanced for gender, as 8 male and 4 female
patients volunteered. The average HR during data collection was 70.1 ± 11.3 bpm. The
biometric characteristics of the CVD population were:
• Age: 55.7 ± 18.4 years
• BMI: 25.6 ± 3.3 Kg/m2
The annotations of the opening and closing instants of the aortic valve were performed
using the echocardiographies by an experienced clinical expert. The opening instant of
the aortic valve was annotated as the onset of the ejection lobe of the left ventricle,
while the closing point was defined immediately before the onset of the closing click
produced by the residual reflux after the aortic valve cusps have closed, as can be
observed in figure 6.
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The measurement protocol was conducted by an authorized medical specialist and

consisted of several acquisitions of echocardiography in Doppler mode and heart sound
collected at the left sternum border (LSB). More precisely the following steps were
carried out:
• The patient was set in supine position, turned left (approximately 45º) – the usual
echo observation position for the aortic valve.
• The echo was configured for Doppler-mode and the stethoscope was positioned in
the LSB region.
• Runs of 30-60 sec. data acquisitions of HS, Echo and ECG were performed
repeatedly.
The following signals have been acquired:

• Echocardiography and ECG have been acquired using a Vivid system from General
Electric. This device produces outputs with images of 500 Hz time resolution (see
figure 6).
• Heart Sounds and ECG: a Meditron Stethoscope and Analyzer were applied to
record HS and ECG at 44.1 kHz. The bandwidth of the HS sensor is 20 kHz.
81
• How?
specific
2. Show rigorously the outcome of the proposed
methodologies, simulations, calculations, …
3.3. Results and Discussion
The main results obtained in this study are summarized in tables 1 and 2, for the healthy and CVD
population, respectively. The achieved results suggest that it is possible to accurately identify the
systolic time intervals using HS.
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Adapted From Paiva et al., 2012, “Beat-to-beat systolic time-interval measurement from heart sounds and ECG”
• How?
– Suggested structure: progress from general to specific
3. Perform thorough data analysis and interpretation of
results
– Compare your results to the state of the art
» Either agreeing or disagreeing
– Prove the validity of results using statistics
» E.g., significance tests
– Perform critical analysis of your findings
» Give reasons for observed facts
• Why the results are not so good for those particular
samples or that particular method?
• Relate observed facts
83
In fact, in a comparative study carried out by the team (Carvalho et al., 2010), PEP estimation error
using the proposed heart-sound-based algorithm was 27.4% lower than the best performing ICG-
based approach
Regarding the healthy population, 942 annotated heartbeats were acquired. For PEP estimation,
7.67 msec absolute average error, with 5.92 msec standard deviation, resulted, i.e., 9.97% ± 7.7%,
relative to the average PEP values (76.86 msec), annotated from the echocardiography. Moreover,
0.51 Pearson’s correlation (ρ) between annotated and estimated PEP values was obtained (this was
applied as both distributions are Gaussian, from the Kolmogorov-Smirnov test; also, p-values were
very low, permitting to discard the null-hypotheses of no correlation).
As for the CVD population, 404 beats were annotated. In terms of PEP estimation, 11.86 msec
absolute average error, with 8.30 msec standard deviation resulted, i.e., 15.25% ± 10.67%, relative
to the average annotated PEP values (77.77 msec). In addition, 0.68 correlation was attained.
Comparing to the healthy population, a higher estimation error is observed. This is mostly
consequence of a more complex sound signal morphology in this population, resulting from higher
average BMI, age and blood flow issues related to the patient condition. For instance, body fat acts
like a low-pass filter as well as a gain attenuator for heart sound.
84
85
• How?
specific
3. Perform thorough data analysis and interpretation of
results
– Give evidence of generality
» Among evaluated methods, relationships in observations,
parameterization, etc.
• E.g., perform parameter sensitivity analysis
– Address the strengths and limitations of your work (before
the reviewers do so)
– Discuss the theoretical implications of your work
This is probably the hardest part of the paper to write!

86
To assess the sensitivity of the algorithm to parameter variations, the results using different initial
Gaussian models and only one pass of the algorithm were evaluated. Therefore, the mean
difference between AV closure and aortic valve opening was varied up to ±15 msec from the
nominal value. Also, the standard deviations of all Gaussians were varied in the same range. As for
the standard deviations, these had nearly null impact in the results: the maximum observed average
error was 9 msec. Regarding variations of the mean, these had a more significant impact on the
results as expected: a 45-msec mean average value led to 14.1 msec error. Thus, the achieved
results seem to confirm Tavel’s indication that the aortic valve opens typically 30 msec after the
closure of AV valves. c
Although our results suggest that heart sound might lead to better STI estimation accuracy, the
estimated average PEP error could be a clinical issue. In fact, the achieved 15.25% ± 10.67% average
estimation error may lead to inaccurate estimation of cardiac function parameters such as stroke
volume or contractility. We conducted a study on the estimation of such parameters based on the
systolic time intervals estimated from heart sound (Couceiro et al., 2011). In terms of stroke volume,
preliminary results indicate 10 ± 9% estimation error, a value substantially below the clinically
accepted error of 30% (Critchley and Critchley, 1999).
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• How?
– Form
• Use accurate, descriptive text
• Reinforce message using illustrative materials (figures,
tables)
– improve readability
– Use tables
» To summarize results
» To compare results from different approaches
• Use figures
– To illustrate results
• Describe only the most important results
– Excessive detail may distract the reader
88
The way you write your achievements makes the whole

difference!!!
• Highlight what is new, how you extend the state of the art
• Identify weaknesses
Never overlook the discussion

• Don’t simply show results: critically discuss them
Focus this section on the how much and why questions

90
Order your results logically

• Start with the most important ones
• Or order chronologically, etc.
Figure and table quality is fundamental
Use figures that support statistical analysis, e.g.,

scatter plots, precision-recall curves, confusion
matrices, etc.
91
Structure – Conclusions
• Goals
– Summarize your contributions to the field
– Propose possibilities of future work
“The conclusion section is very easy to write: all

you have to do is to take your abstract and
change the tense from present to past.”
[Schulman, 1996]
92
Specific
Key findings
Interpretation of main results
Contribution to the field

General
From [Zucolotto V., 2011] 93
• How
– Present your ideas flowing from specific to general
• The reverse of the introduction
– Again, clearly state the importance of the paper to
the development of the field
• What are your contributions to the development of the
field?
• What’s new in your work?
• What current limitations does your overtakes?
• [Indirectly state why you think your paper deserves to be
published]
– Use the identified limitations to propose hypotheses
for future work
94
• Structure
– Did your hypotheses succeed?
• Summary of key findings
– Summarize the attained (quantitative) results
• Interpretation of main results
– Briefly compare results to the state of the art
– Critical Analysis
» Briefly state the strengths and limitations of your work
– Summary of contributions
• Summarize your contributions to extend the state of the art
• Why are these contributions useful and relevant to the scientific
community working in the field?
• State the theoretical implications of your work
• Discuss possible practical applications
95
• Structure
– What to do in future?
• Summarize your ideas for future work, research
possibilities, fields to explore, etc., to overtake the
current limitations of your proposal
– Identified limitations of your work should support this part
96
5. Conclusions
This paper investigates the possibility of using heart sounds to accurately measure the main systolic heart
time intervals, i.e., the pre-ejection period and the left ventricle ejection time. The working hypothesis is
that heart sounds encode makers that enable the detection of the opening and closing of the aortic valve.
To evaluate this hypothesis a comparative echocardiography-heart sound study was conducted on 23
healthy and 12 CVD subjects. An automated heart sound annotation algorithm for the detection of the
aortic valve events was described. PEP was estimated following a Bayesian approach where the
instantaneous amplitude of the heart sound and the typical delay between aortic valve opening and atrio-
ventricular valve closure were employed as the main features. Regarding LVET, sound segmentation was
performed (based on the application of the Shannon energy operator to the detail coefficients of the Fast
Wavelet Transform) and segments near the peak of T-wave are taken as S2 sound candidates.
The obtained results strongly support the view that heart sound can be applied to detect the onset
of the aortic valve movement processes. This seems to be a significant achievement since other
competing approaches for LVET and PEP measurement (e.g. the ICG approach) tend to exhibit biases in
the estimation of those moments, leading to possible inaccuracies in cardiac function assessment. In fact,
as already mentioned, there is ample evidence that ICG does not enable a precise detection of the onset
of the aortic valve opening and closing process (Ermishkin et al., 2007; Carvalho et al., 2010).
The main current limitation of the proposed method pertains to PEP estimation as the opening of
the aortic valve is more difficult to detect than its closure. Nevertheless, a recent study (Couceiro et al.,
2011) suggests that cardiac parameters, namely stroke volume, estimated based on the STIs obtained
from the present method, provide sufficient clinical accuracy.
In the future, we plan to perform hemodynamic assessment for several distinct cardiovascular
diseases, studying the impact of using heart sound and other competing approaches, namely the ICG-
based and PPG-based methodologies, on several application scenarios (hospital, phealth, etc.).
97
Useful starters:
• “We have used…”, “This paper investigates…”
– Directly say what the paper does.
Be concise and objective
98
Structure – Acknowledgements
• Goals
– Acknowledge people and institutions that
contributed to or financed your work, whose
contribution was not so extensive as to have them
as co-authors
It’s crucial to thank your wife, children, primary

school colleagues, soccer fellows, your cat and
your dog.
99
• How?
– People who had a small, yet, meaningful
contribution
• E.g., meaningful discussions, document review,
technical support, participation in data collection, etc.
• Short list: Only the most important ones or maybe just
a general reference
– Financing institutions
• Grants, scholarships, contracts, etc.
– Projects under which the work was developed
100
Acknowledgments
This work was supported by the European Integrated Project HeartCycle

(FP7 – 216695) and SoundForLife (PTDC/EEA-ACR/68887/2006). The
authors want to express their gratitude to the volunteers who
participated in this study. The authors would also like to recognize and to
express their appreciation to the Centro Hospitalar de Coimbra for
supporting the study.
101
Avoid the classical “I wish to thank” starting

– Simply write “I thank …”
Some financing institutions demand that you acknowledge

them
– With impact on project evaluation
102
Structure – References
• Goals
– Acknowledge the sources of information and
ideas that you have used in your document
• Authors cite to prove where the ideas came from
– All information or ideas must be referenced!
» Including your own work!
– Avoid plagiarism, promote scientific rigor, give
credibility to your work
– Allow readers to investigate the subject in greater
depth
103
• How?
– List papers, books, bibliographic elements and sources of
information that you used
– 2 main styles
• Vancouver style: numeric style
– References are numbered sequentially
– Order: either alphabetical or citation order style
» Alphabetical order: references numbered according to an
alphabetical order (by author’s names)
» Citation order: references numbered in the order they are
mentioned in the text
• Harvard/APA style: name and year style
– APA: American Psychological Association
– References are listed alphabetically according to the name of the first
author, without numbering
104
Vancouver style
REFERENCES
[1] D. Huron, "Perceptual and Cognitive Applications in Music Information Retrieval",

International Symposium on Music Information Retrieval, 2000.
[2] A. Friberg, “Digital Audio Emotions - An Overview of Computer Analysis and Synthesis of
Emotional Expression in Music”, in Proc. 11th Int. Conf. on Digital Audio Effects, 2008, pp. 1-6
(…)
[23] C. Laurier, “Audio music mood classification using support vector machine,” in MIREX
Audio Mood Classification Task, 2007, pp. 2-4.
[24] P. Refaeilzadeh, L. Tang, and H. Liu, “Cross-Validation,” in Encyclopedia of Database
Systems, 2nd ed., vol. 25, M. Tamer and L. Liu, Eds. Springer, 2009, pp. 1-12.
From Panda and Paiva, 2012, “Music Emotion Classification: Dataset acquisition and Comparative
Analysis”
105
Harvard / APA style
References
Abbas A and Bassam R 2009 Phonocardiography Signal Processing (Morgan&Claypool Pub.)
Ahlstrom C, Länne T, Ask P and Johansson A 2008 A method for accurate localization of the
first heart sound and possible applications Physiological Measurement 29 417-28
(…)
WHO 2005 Preventing Chronic Diseases a vital investment (World Health Organization)
Xiao S, Guo X, Wang F, Xiao Z, Liu G, Zhan Z and Sun X 2003 Evaluating two new indicators of
cardiac reserve IEEE Engineering in Medicine and Biology Magazine 4:147-152c
106
• How?
– Formatting conventions: depends on the publication
• IEEE, ACM, specific of the conference/journal/editor to which you
submit
– Specify the order and format of the common fields (authors, year, paper
title, conference/journal title, volume, number, page, etc.
– Prefer references with good credibility
• E.g., most recognized authors, reference papers, etc.
– Use up to date references, as well as historical references,
if needed
– Use references only for the ideas that need support
– Avoid self-citations
• Except where your past work supports the current one
107
• In-text citations
– Cite others’ words, data, etc., using your own
words
• Avoid paraphrasing other author’s text
• Do not paraphrase your early papers
108
– Again, 2 main styles
• Vancouver style: numeric style
– [number] … empirical studies starting in the 19th century [8].
– Benefits: more compact, text easier to read (papers with limited
space, e.g., conferences)
• Harvard/APA style: name and year style
– (authors, year) … a recent study (Couceiro et al., 2011) suggests …
» 2 authors: both last names are written
» More than 2 authors: only first author’s name followed by
the abbreviation et al.
– Benefits: source identity easier to identify (papers with fewer
space constraints, e.g., journals)
• Others,
– E.g., [code] … as shown in [Gom07].
109
– You CAN use citations in the middle of sentences
• Don’t put all the citations in the end
– Citing books
• If possible, add page numbers
• Otherwise, information will be buried
– Citing webpages
• Add the URL
• Add the last consulted date (webpages change…)
– Citing unread sources
• Mention it is cited in another reference you read
– E.g., [Schaars, 1936, cited in Nilsson, 2004]
110
• Plagiarism
– Conferences and journals have strict norms
– Unethical and bad consequences to your reputation
– Repetitive publication of the same methods,
experiments, data, etc. is considered plagiarism
111
Carefully review your references (especially years)
Send your paper with references in the desired format

• Details on how to format different types of documents
(books, book chapters, journal papers, conference papers,
etc.)
Any papers not cited in the text should not be included
Prefer references with good credibility

• E.g., most recognized authors, reference papers, etc.
112
Too many references may indicate lack of

capacity to discern essential from accessory
Cite recognized authors to support your claims, not

because they are famous
Reference list vs bibliography

• Reference list contains only the materials that are cited in
the document
• Bibliography includes all sources consulted for background
or further reading
113
Structure – Other Possibilities
• Depending on the paper, you might have the

following possibilities
– Glossary
– Short curriculum vitae (CV)
From Lee et al., 2012, “Automatic Music Genre Classification Based on Modulation Spectral Analysis of
Spectral and Cepstral Features” 114
• Further reading
• Main
– Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific paper”, 5th Edition,
Cambridge University Press
– Glasman-Deal H. (2009). “Science Research Writing for Non-Native Speakers
of English”, Imperial College Press
– Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002). “Scientific Writing, Easy When
You Know How”, BMJ Books
• Additional
– Aston University (2007). “An introductory guide to citing references”,
Technical Report, Aston University, Library & Information Services, URL:
http://www1.aston.ac.uk/EasySiteWeb/GatewayLink.aspx?alId=34645
– Sollaci L.B. and Pereira M. G. (2004). “The introduction, methods, results, and
discussion (IMRAD) structure: a fifty-year survey”, J Med Libr Assoc., Vol. 92,
No.3, pp 364–371.
– Hill et al. (1982). “Teaching ESL students to read and write experimental
papers”, TESOL Quarterly, 16: 333
115
Writing Sequence
Writing Sequence
• Goal
– Follow a productive writing strategy
• How?
– Follow a divide-and-conquer approach
• Outline and general ideas first
• Successive detail later
– Write out of order
117
Writing Sequence
1st Revision
Outline First Draft
by Authors
2nd Revision
by Other People
Integration of
Revisions and
Proof Reading
118
Writing Sequence
• Outline
– Major headings
– Key ideas and topics to cover
119
Writing Sequence
PEP and LVET Estimation from Heart Sounds
Authors
Abstract. To write in the end
1. Introduction
Problem statement
Context and motivation
• Why STI estimation?
• Clinical relevance, etc.
• Cardiac auscultation, lack of current doctor’s proficiency, advances inn audio signal processing
• Heart sounds: how they are formed, characterization, etc.
State of the art review

• Current solutions for STI estimation
• Commercial
• Research
Objectives
Overall Methodology
Summary of results
Paper organization
120
Writing Sequence
2. Methods
2.1.PEP Estimation
Figure with overall methodology
2.2 LVET Estimation
Same scheme employed in PEP
3. Data Collection
Characterize populations and diseases
Describe measurement protocol
Describe data acquisition process
Describe data annotation
4. Results and Discussion
Show results for healthy and CVD populations separately, as well as overall
4.1 PEP Estimation
Present and discuss in detail PEP results
Statistical analysis
Scatter plots
4.2 LVET Estimation
The same
5. Conclusions
Summarize
List limitations and suggestion for future improvements
Acknowledgments
HeartCycle, SoundForLife, Hospital
References
To add while writing
121
Writing Sequence
• First Draft
Draft Title Partial Introduction
-Authors -Literature review Methodology
-Affiliations) -Draft of objectives
Remaining Introduction
Results and Conclusions - Motivation, objectives,
Discussion
contributions, main results, etc.
Abstract Reference
Acknowledgments
List
Final Title Keywords

122
Writing Sequence
• 1st Revision by Authors
– Extensive review of the document
• Focus on content
– Methodology, results and discussions, literature review,
abstract and title (by that order)
• 2nd Review by Other People
– Invite people that did not collaborate on the
paper
(More about this on the section “Reviewing your Document”)
123
Writing Sequence
• Integration of revisions and proof reading

– Discuss with your “invited reviewers” and
integrate the proposed changes
– Proof read
• Typos, grammar, numbering (sections, equations,
tables, algorithms and figures), captions, reference list,
in-text citations, etc.
Good writing is iterative

• Don’t expect to have a perfect document at first attempt
124
Writing Style
• Basic Requirements • Visual Elements

• Other Requirements: • Numbering
Readability, Specificity,
Rigor and Strength, • Other Tips
Conciseness
Writing Style
The life purpose of your supervisor is to teach

you basic grammar and spelling.
126
Writing Style
• Key Idea
– Scientific writing is a kind of literary genre
• Its only style, rhythm, organization, etc.
It is not like writing a novel: reader wants clarity

and objectivity, not suspense and flashback
127
Writing Style
• Goals
– Write an appealing text that “sells” your work
well
• Not enough to just have a good research idea, sound
methodology and evaluation of results
• How?
– Follow guidelines for scientific writing (see next)
Bad writing can mask a brilliant idea

- Unfortunately, the reverse is usually untrue
128
Writing Style – General Rules
• Clarity
– Key in scientific writing
• Grammatical correctness
• Scientific accuracy
• Organization
129
Writing Style – Readability
• Goals
– Write organized, readable text
• How
– Present your ideas sequentially
• Use cause-effect style of writing, sequential flow of ideas
• Avoid going back and forth in your arguments
– Avoid too long sentences
• One basic idea per sentence
– Your text will be more structured and, therefore, more readable
– Use active voice
• More readable than the passive voice
130
Writing Style – Readability
Sentences full of commas or spanning several lines

generally indicate bad sentence construction
Structure your writing according to units of

thought: that’s what paragraphs were made for!
131
Writing Style – Specificity
• Goals
– Be specific while explaining your views
• Accurately state what you mean
• How?
– Use specific, “right-to-the-point” sentences
• Avoid vague, too general, sentences
132
Too general!!!
Novel strategies have been proposed to
- What were the strategies?
overcome the limitations regarding
- What are the limitations?
diseases diagnosis.
- What are the diseases?

Too general!!!
Novel strategies have been proposed to
- What were the strategies?
overcome the limitations regarding
- What are the limitations?
diseases diagnosis.
- What are the diseases?
The use of carbon nanotubes-based biosensors has been

proposed to overcome the poor selectivity exhibited by
conventional systems used for cancer detection.

• How?
– Use specific, “right-to-the-point”
words/expressions
• Avoid ambiguous words
The word “as” may be

Tissue temperature increased as the
interpreted as “because” or
particles released the phytotherapics.
“while”

• How?
– Use specific, “right-to-the-point”
words/expressions
• Avoid ambiguous words
The word “as” may be

Tissue temperature increased as the
interpreted as “because” or
particles released the phytotherapics.
“while”
“Tissue temperature increased because the particles

released the phytotherapics.

Writing Style – Rigor and Strength
• Goals
– Strongly support your arguments
• How?
– Prove what you say
• Use references, mathematical proofs, your data, etc. to
support your claims
137
We applied subtractive clustering

subtractive clustering because it
We applied subtractive clustering
performed best in our experiments,
because it is the most effective
in comparison to k-means and
clustering technique.
GMMs. [and then show the results,
e.g. table]
There is extensive literature on the

It is generally accepted that SVMs evaluation of machine learning
outperform most machine learning techniques for music classification
techniques in music classification tasks [1, 3-5, 6] supporting the claim
tasks. that SVMs outperform most
methods.
138
Avoid sentences like “I think”, “It was always

believed”, “It may/might be”
• Except for future work, where you might speculate
Eliminate value judgments

• “Surprising”, “interesting”, “unfortunately”
Every sentence of your paper must be backed by

facts or research, not by opinion
139
Writing Style – Conciseness
• Goals
– Say more using fewer words
• How?
– Use as few words as necessary
• Pay attention to unnecessary words and sentences
The limited results attained in the 17 words
prediction of valence are a consequence 89 characters (without spaces)
of lack of relevant features. 105 characters (with spaces)
12 words
The lack of relevant features leads to limited
70 characters (without spaces)
performance in valence prediction.
81 characters (with spaces)
140
• How?
– Prefer short words/expressions
• Utilize use
• However but
• In order to to
– Don’t be redundant, repetitive
• Unless it improves clarity, e.g., main results appear in
several places
141
Try to compress your paper by, say, 5%; repeat until

you cannot compress any longer, but keeping
coherence and completeness
• Your paper will be much clearer and more readable
• You’ll find out that extra detail was not so important:
you will focus on the relevant stuff
142
Writing Style – Visual Elements
• Goals
– Summarize and reinforce your message
– Promote readability and attractiveness
• How?
– Use illustrations, tables, algorithms, equations
• One example is worth a thousand words…
– Should have strong visual impact
• Many readers tend to ignore the text and focus on these visual
elements
– Should be informative and easy to understand
• Should be understandable without reading the text
– Captions should be self-contained, i.e., provide enough information so
that users don’t need to look for info in the text)
143
Fig. 1: Definition of characteristic points for aortic

valve events in the Impedance Cardiogram. Points
Fig. 1: Definition of characteristic points for aortic B and X are the traditional definitions for opening
valve events in the Impedance Cardiogram. and closing events of the aortic valve. Bnew and
Xnew correspond to the proposed definitions. Signal
notches related to the opening and closing of the
From Carvalho et al., 2011, “Robust Characteristic Points aortic valve are shown in circles.
for ICG: Definition and Comparative Analysis” 144
• How?
– Use figures and diagrams
• To visually illustrate your methodology
• To illustrate results
– E.g., data sets that exhibit trends, patterns, or relationships
that are best conveyed visually
– Use equations
• To formally and compactly describe your methods
145
• How?
– Use algorithms
• To summarize step-by-step methodologies in an
objective and integrated way
– Use tables
• To summarize results and parameters
– Large or complicated data sets, e.g., results for different
classes
» Difficult to explain using only in text.
• To compare results from different approaches
146
Check and double-check equations
Define all terms in equations (as well as figures, tables and

algorithms)
Use standard notation and terminology as much as possible

• Easier for the reader to follow.
Permissions and credits

• When copying a figure, always give credit to the owner by
referencing it
• Sometimes permissions are needed
147
Writing Style – Numbering
• Chapters and Sections

– Goal
• Give structure to the document
– How
• Should be numbered sequentially
– Ch#.Sec#.SubSec#
» 2.3. LVET Estimation
148
Avoid more than 3 numbering levels

• Causes confusion in the reader
• Indicates bad structuring
• If it is necessary to create more sub-sections, don’t
numerate them
149
• Figures, tables, algorithms, equations
– Goal
• Give a unique identification to the elements you create
to support your text
– Referred to unambiguously
– How
• Should be numbered sequentially
– Typically, only item number
» Sometimes chapter.item number
• Should always be referred to in the text
– Every figure, table, equation, etc. must be cited in text
150
• Figures, tables, algorithms, equations

– How
• Caption location: figures, tables, algorithms
– Depends on the defined format
» Figures: caption typically below the figure
» Tables and Algorithms: typically above
» Equations: to the right
• Text font
– Typically, a different font type and size for captions
151
Writing Style – Other Tips
English or invisible…
• Publish preferably in English, so that your research is accessible
worldwide
Never translate!!
Final version of a paper translated into English
Inspired from [Zucolotto V., 2011]
• Never write first in your native language and then translate!!!
– “Nativization” of the target language (many native expressions, sentence
ordering, syntactical norms literally translated into the destination
language)
– Write directly in the final language
» If necessary, use a native or fluent speaker to review your text
152
English or invisible…
• Publish preferably in English, so that your research is accessible
worldwide
Never translate!!
Final version of a paper translated into English
Inspired from [Zucolotto V., 2011]
• Never write first in your native language and then translate!!!
– “Nativization” of the target language (many native expressions, sentence
ordering, syntactical norms literally translated into the destination
language)
– Write directly in the final language
» If necessary, use a native or fluent speaker to review your text
153
Improve writing skills

• Nothing works better than reading a lot
Acronyms
• Define acronyms in their first use
– Write complete expression and put acronyms in parentheses
– In long texts, it may be wise to repeat acronym definition a few
times throughout the text improve memorability
Define any specialized terms or abbreviations
154
Writing Style
Further reading
• Main
– Glasman-Deal H. (2010). “Science Research Writing for Non-Native
Speakers of English”, Imperial College Press
– Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002). “Scientific Writing, Easy
When You Know How”, BMJ Books
– Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific paper”, 5th Edition,
Cambridge University Press
• Additional
– Zucolotto V. (2011). “Como Escrever e Publicar bons Artigos Científicos”,
Presentation, In English, URL: http://www.escritacientifica.sc.usp.br/wp-
content/uploads/MD-Como-Escrever-e-Publicar-bons-Artigos-Cientificos-
Prof.-Zucolotto.ppt
– Gaafar K. (2010). “How to write a scientific paper”, Presentation, URL:
http://www.ece.uprm.edu/~domingo/teaching/ciic8996/How%20To%20
Write%20A%20Scientific%20Paper_1.ppt
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Reviewing your Document
• Goals
– Carefully review your paper before submitting
“Every scientific paper contains serious errors. If

your errors are not caught before publication,
you'll eventually have to write an erratum to the
paper explaining (a) how and why you messed
up and (b) that even though your experimental
results are now totally different, your
conclusions need not be changed” [Schulman,
1996]
157
• How?
– Content
• Make sure the methodology has no flaws
• Make sure the results and conclusions are accurate
• Make sure the literature review is meaningful and
comprehensive
158
• How?
– Form
• Make sure the text is clear, without grammatical or
syntactical errors
– Simplify text, eliminate redundancies
– Ask for a native speaker to review it, if necessary
• Check every figure, table, equation and algorithm
• Make sure you use the right citations (especially for
numeric citations)
159
• How?
– Ask for someone to review and comment on your paper
• Someone knowledgeable in the topic
• Someone “distant” to the topic
– Proofread
• Section headings, all numbering (sections, equations, tables,
figures, etc.), captions, reference list , in-text citations, etc.
• Text: typos, grammar
• Search the text for references (bibliography, tables, etc.)
(See Writing Sequence, Writing Style)
160
Do a break of a few days before the final revision

• Allows you to look from a distance
Be your worst critic!

• See your paper as the reviewers will see it
Good writing is iterative

• Don’t expect to have a perfect manuscript at first attempt
Poor presentation (form and/or content) will frustrate the

reviewers
• They will get a negative predisposition and won’t read your paper
properly
161
Submission
• Where to Publish?
• Formatting
• Cover Letter
Submission
• Goals
– Submit your paper on time to an adequate
journal/publication
• How
– Select a proper journal/conference
– Don’t count on deadline extensions
• Although they happen frequently, some submission
sites are strict
163
Submission – Where to Publish?
• Goals
– Select the proper journal/conference to publish your
work
• How?
– Find established journals and conferences on your
field
• Editorial body highly regarded in their fields
• Important papers you’ve read were published there
– Check the editorial line
• Does the theme of your work fit the journal/conference
topics?
164
• How?
– Compare relevance of your work to the
journal/conference
• Is your work good enough for a top-class journal? Is it
too good for a lower-class journal?
– New paradigms, new methodologies with cutting-edge results
in very important problems, …
• What’s the acceptance rate?
• Does the journal’s impact factor follow your
expectations?
165
166
From http://www.annualreviews.org/page/about/isi-rankings
• How?
– Check time until publication
• Mean time from submission and notification
– Prompt and helpful revision? 3 months, 1 year?
• Mean time from acceptance to publication
– Is the journal published often enough? Every month, every 3
months?
– Check costs
• Any submissions charges?
• Extra page costs?
167
Dear Author Name
Firstly I apologise for the extremely long time that this submission has been in review, far longer
than our target and longer than you could rightly expect. We have taken steps to speed up the
review process, but we remain at the mercy of reviewers who work as volunteers and do not always
complete reviews on schedule.
168
Select a journal/conference that you read and/or cite a lot

• It’s very likely that your work fits there
Avoid scientifically suspicious journals and conferences

• You want to contribute to science and build a career, not just
publish without criteria
Sometimes, it is important to check if the journal/conference

is covered by specific indexing agencies, e.g., ISI Web ok
Knowledge
• E.g., if you are evaluated depending on the basis of indexed papers
you publish
169
Submission – Formatting
• Goals
– Format your manuscript according to the guides
to authors
• How
– Follow the instructions!
It is annoying to receive
c badly formatted papers!
170
Submission – Cover Letter
• Goals
– Friendly introduce your paper to the editors
– Briefly and boldly state why think your paper
deserves to be published (importance to the
development of the field)
• Why?
– Some type of letter is sometimes required in
some publications
• Even though many submissions are now online and
don’t require a letter
171
Submission – Cover Letter
Dear Editor:
Please find attached the manuscript entitled: A new strategy to investigate the toxicity of nanomaterials using
Langmuir monolayers as membrane models, which we submit for publication in Nanotoxicology. The reasons why
we believe it deserves to be published stem from the following features:
i) To our knowledge, this manuscript is the first report of a strategy to investigate the types of interaction that may
occur between a nanomaterial, viz., carbon nanotubes and phospholipid membranes, in a way that experimental
parameters can be controlled at the molecular level.
ii) The methodology is reported here for a specific carbon nanotube/dendrimer complex, which had been applied
as drug-delivery systems. However, this new methodology may be of interest to a wider audience investigating
the toxicity of nanomaterials, either in vitro or in vivo, since the same strategy can be applied to different
nanocomplexes, nanoparticles, etc.
Sincerely
Prof. Dr. Valtencir Zucolotto
From [Zucolotto V., 2011]
172
Submission
Further reading
• Main
– Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific paper”,
5th Edition, Cambridge University Press
– Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002). “Scientific
Writing, Easy When You Know How”, BMJ Books
• Additional
– Lawrence D. J. (2012a). “Scientific Writing”, Presentation,
Course on Scientific Writing, URL:
http://w3.palmer.edu/lawrence/Scient_Writ/PPT/Session%20
1%20CRT.ppt
173
Post-Review
• Notification
• Resubmission
Post-Review – Notification
• Goals
– To inform the authors about the decision resulting
from the paper review process
• Acceptance
• Rejection
• Acceptance subject to changes (minor or major)
• How?
– External reviewers send their comments about
the paper
– Editor sends the decision according to the reviews
175
• Notification results
– Acceptance
• The paper is accepted as is, without revisions
• Very rare
– Acceptance subject to minor revisions
• Minor remarks, typos, etc. identified small corrections needed
– Acceptance subject to major revisions
• Major remarks to your methodology, results and discussion, etc.
• The reviewers believe you can fix the detected problems and are
willing to review it again
– Rejection
• Reviewers don’t even want to evaluate an improved version of the
paper
176
• Notification results
– Conferences
• Typically only acceptance or rejection
– Although some allow conditional acceptance and evaluation
rebuttal
• If accepted, you can, nevertheless, improve your paper
with the reviewers’ comments
177
Dear Author Name
I will be happy to accept this paper for publication after revision to answer the points the reviewers
make (see the above attachments). I regard the following points as particularly important:
(…)
I disagree with the reviewer's suggestion that certain formulae be omitted. It is true that they
describe well-known signal processing operations, but they will not be well known to all readers of
Journal Name, and sometimes misunderstandings can arise when different interpretations are taken
of such operations. Giving a formula means that there can be no ambiguity.
I look forward to receiving your revised submission, which I ask you to make via the Journal's new
Manuscript Central site (http://www...). This will make it easier to send your paper on for
production once it has been accepted.
Editor Name
178
Dear Author Name
Based on the reviewer comments, your submission entitled “Paper Title" requires major rewriting
possibly subject to a second round of reviews in order to be accepted for publication in Journal
Name. We hope you find the reviewer comments helpful in improving your submission.
Yours sincerely,
Editor
We regret to inform you that your paper has not been accepted for presentation at the
conference. The reviewers' comments on your paper are attached at the end of this email.
Comments from the Reviewers:

---- To this reader, there does not seem to be that much original material here. However,
the results seem somewhat convincing.
----- The approach described in the paper seems well motivated and effective and the
authors have done a good job relating their work to other published efforts.
----- This would be a good paper for Conf B, but it isn't sufficiently technical forConf A
• Typical rejection causes
– Irrelevant topic
– Work not sufficiently original
• E.g., review paper not original, methodology in a research paper not
sufficiently original, even though results are good
– Original methodology, but results not good enough
– Low acceptance rate
– Theme doesn’t the journal/conference
– Shallow, uncritical literature review
– Methodology lacks rigor
– Poor analysis of results, experimentation, etc.
– Bad science, in general
– Bad writing quality and presentation
180
“I reject somewhere between 25 and 40% of all papers

submitted to EJIS without going to review. This may
seem very high and very high-handed, but there is no
point in wasting the valuable time of our Associate
Editors (AEs) and reviewers (the Review Team for a paper
– all voluntary) on papers that are obviously not going to
be accepted”. [Paul, 2005]
181
Don’t feel disappointed/angry/offended if your paper is

rejected
• If the reviewers are constructive, they will give you
important hints for improving your paper, selecting an
appropriate publication, etc. don’t give up and try again
(maybe in another journal)
• The best scientists get rejected
Consider contesting the decision only if you have strong

arguments that prove the reviewers or editor made a
wrong evaluation
182
Post-Review – Resubmission
• Typically, only for journals
• Addressing the reviewers’ comments
– Carefully read the editor’s letter
• Hints on the most important issues
– Answer all the questions and address all the
recommendations, either major or minor, e.g.,
• Missing statistical tests
• Typos
– Write the summary of revisions
• Clearly presenting your answers to every single question raised by
the reviewers
– How you fixed the problem or why you disagree with the reviewers in
some point
183
Dear Editor,
Please find attached the revised version of my paper. I also send you a brief summary of changes
(further details in the attached file):
- The paper was significantly re-structured so as to fulfill the expressed concerns. A few more
diagrams were added, pseudo code was included and most of the explanations were clarified.
- The title was changed (as request by reviewer 1).
- System overview is now more complete, with additional explanations on the previous modules of
the system
- The 'experimental results' section has changed significantly.
I hope that the present version of the paper is now more relevant to your journal and to this
community. I thank you very much for your excellent suggestions, regardless of your final decision.
Best regards,
Author Name
184
– Don’t take a defensive attitude towards the

reviewers’ recommendations
• If you don’t agree with some aspect, present your
arguments objectively in the summary of revisions
– Be clear, constructive and polite
185
Post-Review
Further reading
• Main
– Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific paper”, 5th
Edition, Cambridge University Press
– Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002). “Scientific Writing,
Easy When You Know How”, BMJ Books
• Additional
– Paul R. J. (2005). “Editor's View: an opportunity for editors of IS
journals to relate their experiences and offer advice. The Editorial
View of Ray J Paul. First in a series”, European Journal of
Information Systems, Vol. 14, pp. 207–212
– Pierson D. J. (2004). “The top 10 reasons why manuscripts are not
accepted for publication”, Respiratory Care, Vol. 49, No. 10, pp.
1246-1252
186
Paper Dissemination
Paper Dissemination
• Goals
– Make your research useful to others
• Unknown useless
• How
– Online or invisible…
• Add your paper to your university’s paper repository,
personal homepage, etc.
– Beware of copyright issues
– Disseminate in your network of contacts
• Talks, workshops, meetings, conferences
188
Conclusions and Future Work
• Conclusions
– This document summarized a number of general
guidelines for producing good research papers
• These guidelines are general rules of thumb based on
literature review on the theme and my personal
experience
190
• Reflections
– Conference paper vs Journal paper vs Thesis
• Same basic principles
• Difference is the level of detail (overly simplistic, but I
like that ☺)
– E.g., a thesis may have an entire chapter/section on
background information
A thesis is just a big paper.
191
• Future Work
– Improvements to the current document
– How to write good scientific research proposals?
• Some principles are the same
• But you are trying to convince funding institutions that
– The problems you want to study are key for the progress of
humanity ☺
– The strategies to address them are the best
• … without having concrete results to show
• Other stuff is necessary
– Strong social/economic impact, convincing proposed
methodologies and work plan, project management strategies,
team quality, etc.
192
Acknowledgements
Acknowledgements
Proyecto Prometeo, Ecuador
Escuela Politécnica Nacional,

Quito, Ecuador
Universidade de Coimbra, Portugal
194
About the Author
About the Author
• More info at http://rppaiva.dei.uc.pt/
196
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Glasman-Deal H. (2009). “Science Research Writing for

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Peat J., Elliott E., Baur L. and Keena V. (2002). “Scientific

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198
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• Additional
Aston University (2007). “An introductory guide to citing references”, Technical Report, Aston
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• Motivation and Scope

• Motivation and Scope

From [Jacob, 2009]

• Motivation and Scope

• Motivation and Scope

Papers “are important because

• Motivation and Scope

Quality should be preferred over quantity

Avoid “salami” publication [Lawrence, 2012a]

• Motivation and Scope

• Motivation and Scope

• Motivation and Scope

• Overview: What makes a good scientific paper?

• Overview: What makes a good scientific paper?

For beginners: find a role model

Start writing the day you start your research

Keep a good and updated bibliographic database

Think about possible journals/conferences early

Have a high number of citations as your goal

• Day R. (1998). “How to write and publish a scientific

• Good research idea: key for a good paper

• Research Papers • Papers on Developed

• Papers on Developed Systems or Applications

• Case Description Papers

• Lawrence D. J. (2012b). “Types of Scientific Articles”,

Key findings should be placed in key sections

These are guidelines

Make a list of the keywords that reflect the described

Use the minimum number of words that adequately

Sometimes the title may contain the conclusion of the

Rewrite the title in the final version of the paper

Sometimes, it is better if the title contains 2 parts (as in

Don’t use acronyms and abbreviations in the title

Avoid waste words (studies on, investigations on, a, an,

Review the title again and again

R P Paiva1, P Carvalho1, R Couceiro1, J Henriques1, M Antunes2,

Mota Pinto, 3049 Coimbra, Portugal

The abstract is often the most important part of the

The abstract is not an introduction to the paper

Focus on what is new and on key information

Avoid the classical “In this paper” starting

Avoid bibliographical references in the abstract

Avoid acronyms. If they must be used, their definition

Information in the abstract must be in the main

In general, write the abstract in one paragraph

Tense: past or present tense may be used

Keywords: systolic time intervals, cardiac function, heart sound segmentation 55

Some of the keywords should be present in the title

Use the same keywords that you use to find a paper

Check the ACM Computing Reviews annual

“The real purpose of introductions, of course, is to

General Purpose Your Field