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Oxford University Press: Kuala Lumpur

The document provides 5 sentences for a student to rewrite to achieve a more appropriate academic tone. The sentences discuss topics like preschool children's allergies causing them to miss class, pollution and poverty on an island, how art can help children develop skills, studies on unhealthy lifestyles in Malaysia linked to food advertising, and findings on TV causing disobedience in children. The student is tasked with rewriting each sentence to use a more formal, academic style and tone.

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Oxford University Press: Kuala Lumpur

The document provides 5 sentences for a student to rewrite to achieve a more appropriate academic tone. The sentences discuss topics like preschool children's allergies causing them to miss class, pollution and poverty on an island, how art can help children develop skills, studies on unhealthy lifestyles in Malaysia linked to food advertising, and findings on TV causing disobedience in children. The student is tasked with rewriting each sentence to use a more formal, academic style and tone.

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HOMEWORK 2 - 2 STUDENT’S NOTE

Practice 1

Rewrite the sentence to achieve the appropriate academic tone.

1. The preschool children have allergies and sinus trouble that cause them to skip

classes.

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2. The pollution of the island and the poverty of its people make Chan cry.

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3. Art helps children develop observation skills, thus make mindful approach in life (The

Star, 2019)

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4. The current studies indicate that the Malaysian unhealthy life style is due to

commercialize advertisement on fast food

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5. We concur with the finding that TV is the main cause of disobedience among

children.

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Adapted from Latisha Asmaak Shafie and at al. (2016). English for Academic Writing.
Oxford University Press: Kuala Lumpur.

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