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The document provides advice for organizing a pool party. It recommends finding a good pool location since it is summer. The writer suggests inviting classmates and friends' cousins since they are family, but only some friends. Music should be provided by a DJ and food should be simple like burgers, chips, smoothies and juices to keep everyone happy. The pool party is a good idea after exams.

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BCCE Writing Benchmark

The document provides advice for organizing a pool party. It recommends finding a good pool location since it is summer. The writer suggests inviting classmates and friends' cousins since they are family, but only some friends. Music should be provided by a DJ and food should be simple like burgers, chips, smoothies and juices to keep everyone happy. The pool party is a good idea after exams.

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(20/20 )

Dear Paul,

How are you? I read your email and I think that your idea is amazing. It would be my pleasure to help
you.

Well, if you want to organize the best party you should find a good place. It’s summer so you can do
it in a pool. Pool party. You can invite your classmates and your friend’s cousins. Your friend’s
cousins must be invited because they are his/her family, but you can invite some friends, not all.

You will danse and you will swim. I suggest you to have a DJ for the music. For food you needn’t a lot
of things. Only burgers, chips, smoothies and juices. Everyone will be happy because a pool party it’s
a good idea, especially after the exams.

I hope to help you with my ideas. Good luck and have a nice pool party.

Your friend,

(16/20)

Dear Editor,

I would like to take part in your competition, so I’ve decided to write you this e-mail. The strangest
experience I had was last summer, when we visited the beach.

We saw a man who was going to get drawn, at first we thought he was just playing, but then he
started screaming for help. We wanted to help him, but a few guys didn’t let us go near him and
they told us that he was actually an actor and he played in a film. We were shocked and really happy
that it wasn’t real.

Best regards,

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