Coherence
Coherence
Coherence is achieved when sentences and ideas are connected and flow together smoothly. An essay without
coherence can inhibit a reader’s ability to understand the ideas and main points of the essay. Coherence allows the
reader to move easily throughout the essay from one idea to the next, from one sentence to the next, and from one
paragraph to the next. Following are several methods that can be used to achieve coherence in writing:
Example: Most students are intimidated by the works of William Shakespeare. They believe
Shakespeare’s sonnets and plays are far to complicated to read and understand.
Example: Many students believe they cannot write a good essay because they are not writers. However,
as they practice writing and work on developing their writing skills, most students are able to
gain the needed confidence to start thinking of themselves writers.
Example: Mr. Thompson agreed to meet with members of the worker’s union before he signed the
contract. He was interested in hearing their concerns about the new insurance plan.
Example: Teenagers face an enormous amount of peer pressure from friends and schoolmates. As a
result, many young adults are exhibiting signs of severe stress or depression at an early
age.
Example: Usually, the children spend the summer weekends playing ball in park, swimming in the
neighbor’s pool, eating ice cream under the tree, or camping in the backyard.
At the museum, the class attended a lecture where the speaker demonstrated how the
Native Americans made bows and arrows. They also attended a lecture where a sword
smith demonstrated how the Vikings crafted swords.