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Essay 1 1
Jonathan Johnson
Professor Granillo
English 103
24 October 2019
Essay #1 Draft
The celebratory cake is a common and important part of the way people celebrate in the
modern era. From birthday parties to graduations, a cake of some kind makes an appearance.
These cakes are often more than just a delicious dessert, they can shine a light on certain social
and cultural beliefs through presentation. A rhetorical and semiotic analysis of these celebratory
cakes can provide insight into the social views and beliefs. For this analysis, Sweet Mary’s
“Wheels or Heels” cake is the cake that will be used as an example. Through varying symbols
and rhetoric, Sweet Mary’s “Wheels or Heels” cake design pushes the concept of a two-gender
system, however, gender is a part of the social constructs and is not limited to two genders. The
cake design is based mostly around pathos and ethos appeals, with logos being poorly
implemented due to the presence of a false dilemma fallacy. These appeals highlight how gender
norming has harmed large groups of people, mostly through issues in mental health, and should
not be celebrated.
Sweet Mary’s “Wheels or Heels” cake, which will be the example cake, is meant to
celebrate the reveal of a baby’s gender at some sort of gender reveal party. The cake is single
tiered with the text “Wheels or Heels” on top with wheels in blue coloring and heels in pink
coloring. Near the text, is a 3d depiction of heels with pink bow ties on them and wheels for a
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truck of some sort. There are multiple blue hearts on the top of the cake around the wheels and
heels depictions. On the side of the cake are zigzag lines alternating black and white with little
blue and pink dots on the white lines alternating as well. The colors that stand out the most on
the cake are the blue and pink coloring with the subtext that pink is for girl and blue is for boy as
demonstrated by the coloring of the text. It is assumed that the audience believes in a two-gender
system, however description on how effective any argument present in the cake designs is
toward those that do not will be included. It is also assumed that this is being served at some sort
of gathering and there is at least one individual about to reveal the gender of an unborn child.
There are two things to briefly discuss before analyzing cake, why and how. In Rachael
Lussos “Have Your Epideictic Rhetoric, and Eat It, Too” the explanation of epideictic rhetoric
provides the reason why. Lussos describes epideictic rhetoric and how it “refers to current events
and seeks agreement about their honorable or dishonorable nature” before explaining that since
epideictic rhetoric deals with current events and celebratory cakes deal with current events, there
is epideictic rhetoric present in celebratory cakes (28-29). Lussos demonstrates the importance in
analyzing the different elements present on a celebratory cake. All messages should be
considered, whether it is on cake or not. In In The World Is A Text by Jonathan Silverman and
Dean Rader it is explained how to analyze the cake. Through Semiotics, which involves looking
out for signifiers, an “ object that exists”, and the signified or “what [the signifier] means” cake
can be analyzed without large amounts of text (Silverman and Rader 14). The cake in the
example has plenty of things to look at that qualify as signifiers. The goal is to take those
signifiers and find the signified meanings and find how that affects rhetoric.
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Pathos, out of the three appeals, is often most tailored for the chosen audience. In The
Mercury Reader by Maren Hyer, it is stated that pathos is “the emotional appeal to an
audience”(7). Pathos is based around the use of human emotion to make the audience invested.
The pathos appeal can be used manipulatively, however, in these cake designs it is used more to
heighten feelings around the celebration. The cake presents bright colors and blue hearts as
symbols to display the gender reveal message while presenting a positive feeling (“Wheels or
Heels”). Heart symbols are commonly used to symbolize love, affection, and happiness or joy at
the prospect of something. The cake designs are meant to appeal to love and happiness derived
from love. The heart designs constitute the pathos appeal, and are ultimately an effective and
clear message to the audience. The cake and the heart symbol on the cake play on the importance
of birth in society. The cake uses the heart to portray the general joy that those awaiting a new
Ethos is an appeal based on building up the speakers connection with the audience. Hyer
states that the ethos appeal is “the ethical appeal to an audience” with the intent to build trust (6).
So in order to appeal strongly with ethos the speaker must build up authority and trust with the
audience. The “Wheels or Heels” cake makes an ethical connection to the audience by presenting
simple symbols in the depiction of wheels and heels. The wheels and heels on the cake signify
boy and girl to common audiences, which is a basic understanding yet it makes the audience feel
that there is understanding. The shared understanding, based around both social beliefs in gender
binaries and the recognition of the gender reveal party, builds trust. The designs on the cake
imposes the concept of a two-gender system, appealing to the audience’s, potentially, shared
belief. The message shown demonstrates how society currently views the gender system.
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Logos is not a very strong element of the “Wheels or Heels” cake design. Disregarding
the fact that having a kid is not often a logic-based decision, the logic presented in the cake
design does not appeal so generally as the other appeals present. According to Hyer, logos is the
“appeal to fact, logic and reason” (8). So the logos appeal should be based on some sort of
evidence or throughout reasoning. It is hard to give evidence in a visual argument so the logos
appeal is based on reasoning. The important symbols that contribute to the reasoning are the
signifiers, wheels and heels, centrally presented on the cake (Sweet Mary’s). The signifiers
present a logic that goes that essentially says that since there are two sexes there must only be
two genders as well, one for each sex. It is an interpretation based on what is commonly seen,
not based on actual empirical evidence. The cake presents this logic in the form of wheels and
blue for boys while heels and pink is for girls. The social belief presented is that of a gender
binary. The appeal is used to push the message that one must fall in the boy or girl category for
gender.
The fallacy immediately present in the design is a False Dilemma, although there are
certainly others. A False dilemma is a fallacy that assumes that there are two opposite sides, not
allowing for options in between those opposites (Hyer 10). As previously stated, the cake
presents the belief in a gender binary in the form of wheels and heels (Sweet Mary’s). The
fallacy in this context may greatly detract from the audience's perception of the message
presented. For those that believe in a gender binary, the fallacy may assist in pushing the overall
message presented. The fallacy could, however, be offensive to onlookers who believe in more
than two genders or do not belong in the binary. So the overall outcome of the fallacy cannot be
perfectly predicted and can have many different outcomes in audience response. The audience
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chosen is the key to how the fallacy affects the presentation of the cake, and without information
The pathos and ethos presented in the signifiers on the cake was effective, but a false
dilemma fallacy presents a potential issue in the logic appeal. By rhetorically and semiotically
evaluating the Sweet Mary’s “Wheels or Heels” cake it is evident the design pushes the concept
of a two-gender system despite the potential for more genders. The pathos appeal was based on
color and heart symbolism and was done excellently. Ethos was based on understanding, which
is often effective and certainly the case with the design. Again, logos is lacking, which would not
mean much if not for the fallacy present which could upset some individuals at the gathering, if
any were present. There should be a change in how society views gender, and it requires action
and change of thought in all people, not just some. It is detrimental to those who fall outside the
Works cited
Hyer, Maren “Introduction To Critical Thinking And Analysis”. The Mercury Reader, Pearson
Kalia, Soma. “Colour and Its Effects in Interior Environment: a Review .” International Journal
Lussos, Rachel “Have Your Epideictic Rhetoric, and Eat It, Too”. Journal of Multimodal
Silverman, Jonathan, and Dean Rader. The World Is a Text: Writing about Visual and Popular