Short Essay Authenticity
Short Essay Authenticity
Short Essay Authenticity
ENGL4500
We’ve all been there before. You sit in your English class, listening to the teacher drone
on about some obscure subject that you’ve just learned about. You glance at the clock, surely it’s
been at least fifteen minutes since the last time you looked. Nope, only three have passed. When
your focus lands again on the teacher, you notice that you’re being assigned a writing project that
has nothing to do with you or your future. With a sigh, you begin throwing words on a paper in a
One of the greatest challenges that ELA teachers face is getting students to take their
work seriously. Students often just seek to fulfill the assignment criteria, turn in their paper, and
then throw it in the trash as soon as it is handed back to them. What can we do, as educators, to
change the current paradigm and create students that write with purpose? As Anne Elrod
Whitney coined it, we must eliminate “the schoolishness of school” (Whitney). There are many
ways to avoid schoolishness, but a few are fundamental in the ELA classroom, including giving
an authentic audience, letting the kids write about what matters to them, and being genuine as a
teacher.
Giving students an authentic audience is vital. Simply put, if students know that real
people, not just the teacher, will read their work down the road, they’ll take it seriously. One
example of authentic audience is Constantine Christopulos, who “used class time to write letters
encouraging a change in the cafeteria menu.” The students ended up getting “the attention
lunchroom menu planners,” effectively changing their school experience with their writing
(Lindblom). If teachers want students to write effectively, they need to provide an authentic
audience. Create assignments for students to write to local leaders about an issue, to write to their
Another way to avoid schoolishness is to let the students decide what to write. Let them
write about what matters to them. Students should have “a choice of topic” an be “able to
exercise their own voices” (Arseneault). It is impossible for students to write genuinely about a
topic that they don’t find interesting. Many English teachers may remember sitting through math
classes in college, simply grinding through the work to get it done. Let’s not force the same fate
upon our students. Let them choose what to write about and watch them take off.
The last topic to discuss is being genuine as a teacher. Setting the example for students
will help scaffold their understanding of what authentic writing is. While it is important to give
young authors a choice, “choice is meaningless unless we show our students how to connect
choice with honest struggles and issues” (Graves). If you, the teacher, are having a bad day, let
your students know. Write an example for them of how your pet is old and sick. Write about how
somebody made your day. Be real with your emotions and show it in your work. Let the students
In order to be successful teachers, we need to show our students what real, genuine
writing looks like. We need to give them the chance to choose their writing topics, put their real
emotions and voices into their work, and present their information to real audiences. As we help
students to write more authentically, we will soon see a classroom of lifelong learners who
Arseneault, Ruth. “Authentic Writing: What it Means and How to Do It.” Talks with Teachers,
edited by Brian Sztabnik. Accessed November 17, 2019.
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Graves, Donald H. "Children Can Write Authentically If We Help Them." Primary Voices K-
6 August 1993: 2-5.
Lindblom, Ken. "School Writing vs. Authentic Writing." 27 July 2015. Teachers, Profs,
Parents: Writers Who Care. October 2019.
Whitney, Anne Elrod. “In Search of the Authentic English Classroom: Facing the
Schoolishness of School.” English Education, vol. 44, no. 1, 2011, pp. 51– 62. JSTOR,
www.jstor.org/stable/23238722.