Answer key unit 1

Q1, The loss of a parent at a young age can traumatize a person for the rest of

your life. a. for the rest of yourself's life.

b. for the rest of his or her life.

c. for the rest of your life.
d. for the rest of your living.
e. on the rest of your life.

Ans-b, The use of "your" at the end of the sentence is confusing, as the only
reference in the sentence is "a person," and the second person pronoun has no place
in the sentence. Changing "your" to a third person possessive pronoun will straighten
out this problem. Because we do not know whether the "person" in question is male
or female, we should use the phrase "his or her." The correct answer choice,
therefore, is "for the rest of his or her life." Q2. Although the basketball team used
their star players, the match was lost.

a. Although the basketball team used their star players

b. Although the star players were used by the basketball team

c. The basketball team used its star players, although

d. Although the basketball team used its star players

e. The basketball team used their star players

ans- d, Choose a pronoun that properly agrees with the subject. In this case,
"basketball team" is singular, although it represents a group of people, and should be
accompanied with "its," instead of "their."

Q3 John and Susan runs to the finish line as fast as possible.

a. are run
b. runs to the finish line
c. run to the finish line
d. having run to the finish line
e. running to the finish line

ans- c, the underlined portion of the sentence contains a verb error with "runs." "John
and Susan," while both singular nouns, are together a plural, and need a plural verb
form, instead of the singular "runs." "Run to the finish line" is the correct answer
choice

Q4, The boy, among many friends, celebrate his birthday in lavish style.

a. having been celebrated

b. is celebrated
c. celebrates
 d. celebrate
e. is celibrant

Ans-c, The subject of the sentence is singular, "the boy," and not the plural "many friends,"
meaning the verb needs to be singular as well. Additionally, the sentence must keep the
same meaning, that they boy is doing the celebrating. "Celebrates" is the correct answer
choice.

Q5, Autocratic styles of leadership frequently annoys the people who must work under
such leaders.

a. frequented annoying
b. frequent annoy
c. frequently annoy
d. frequent annoys
e. frequently annoys

ans-c

The verb "annoy" is used with the subject "styles," although the prepositional phrase
"of leadership" and the adverb "frequently" come between the two words. Therefore,
the verb form must take a singular form to match the subject. "Frequently annoy" is
the correct answer form.

Q6, Coming back to the farm, the gruesome scene was seen by everyone in the car.

a. everyone in the car saw the gruesome scene.

b. the gruesome scene being seen by everyone in the car.
c. the gruesome scene was seen by everyone at the car.
d. the gruesome scene was seen by everyone in the car.
e. the gruesome scene saw by everyone in the car.

Ans- a, The sentence is written with a dangling modifier, which makes the sentence
read as though the "gruesome scene" was what was "coming back to the farm." The
sentence needs to be restructured to clarify this problem. The only answer choice
that does this is "everyone in the car saw the gruesome scene."

Q7. Waiting for the crucial trial to begin, the anxiety Neil felt was almost overwhelming.

a. the anxiety almost overwhelmed Neil.

b. the anxiety being felt by Neil was almost overwhelming.
c. the anxiety Neil felt was almost overwhelming.
d. Neil felt almost overwhelmed with anxiety.
e. Neil's anxiety felt almost overwhelming.

Ans-d ,

When a sentence begins with a dangling participle or descriptive phrase, the person or
thing described in that phrase (in this case, "Neil") must immediately follow it. Only
one answer choice does this correctly. The answer choice that begins "Neil's anxiety"
may appear to do so, but it does not, because the possessive "Neil's" is no longer the
subject, but is describing the anxiety.
Q8, The vineyards of Napa Valley are at once breathlessly vibrant, symmetrical, and
the green is profound.

a. and profoundly green.

b. and the green is profound.
c.and so profound green.
d. and it is profoundly green.
e.and its green is quite profound.

Ans-a

This sentence requires parallelism across all elements. Only "profoundly green" matches
"breathlessly vibrant" and "symmetrical."

Q9, The teacher sought new ways of teaching, believing her students would get more
from lessons featuring playing, acting, and creativity.

a. featuring playing, acting, and creativity.

b. featuring playing, acting, and creating.
c. featuring playing, acting, and creative things.
d. featuring play, act, and creativity.
e. featuring the playing, acting, and creativity.

Ans-b

The underlined portion of the sentence features a list of verbs, but they are not all in
a parallel form. All such lists must feature a parallel structure for the verbs listed;
therefore, the correct answer is "featuring playing, acting, and creating."

Q10, Stretching before physical workouts is important to improve flexibility and

avoiding injury.

a. is important to improve flexibility and being injured less.

b. is important to both improve flexibility and also avoid injury.
c. is important to improve flexibility and avoid injury.
d. is important to improve flexibility and in the avoidance of injury.
e. are important to improve flexibility and avoiding injury.

Ans-c

Paralellism: in a list of two or more items in a sentence, each should be worded in the
same manner for consistency. One choice changes "is" to "are," which is incorrect
because the subject is the singular "stretching," not the plural "workouts," which is
part of a prepositional phrase.

Q11, Darren spent most of the day sulking alone in his room, but however he came
out once to eat dinner with his parents. No error
a. No error
b. to eat
c. most of the day
d. but however
e. spent ans- d
Using both "but" and "however" is redundant; there is no need for both of those
conjunctions here. Only one is necessary (and, for what it's worth, "but" would sound
better in this sentence).

Q12, In addition to providing lunch for the children, the camp counselors
also gave them dessert and played educational games with them. No error: a.
them
b. No error
c. also
d. the children, the
e. played ans- c

The error in this sentence is redundancy, which is basically saying more than you
need to. Since the beginning of the sentence already established that the
counselors were going to provide something else besides lunch ("in addition"),
saying "also" later is redundant. The solution for redundancy is almost always just
cutting something out so the revised sentence would read "In addition to providing
lunch for the children, the camp counselors gave them dessert and played
educational games with them."

Q13, Intelligence is a trait that is actually quite difficult to measure, despite much different
attempts to do so.

a. despite the much different attempts to do so.

b. despite much different attempts to do it.
c. despite much different attempts to do so.
d. despite many different attempts to do so.
e. despite much different attempting to do so.

Ans- d

The use of "much" in the sentence is incorrect, as "much" indicates a great amount,
but not a large count, and should be used for singular nouns. The correct choice
should have the word "many" instead of "much." The only answer choice that
makes this chnage is "despite many different attempts to do so."

Q14, Under normal circumstances, the family would have never driven up to the
frighteningly looking motel.

a. for the frighteningly looking motel.

b. to a frighteningly looking motel.
c. to the frighteningly looking motel.
d. to the frightening looking motel.
e. to the frighteningly looked motel.

Ans-d

The use of the word "frighteningly" is absolutely incorrect, as it is an adverb being

used to describe a gerund, or a verb that takes the form of a noun, in "looking."
Gerunds need to be modified with an adjective. Therefore, "to the frightening
looking motel" is the correct answer.

Q15, Questions abounded in the inquiry into illegal payments alleged made by the college
to student athletes.

a. alleged made
b. alleged making
c. allegedly made
d. allegedly making
e. made alleged ans-c

The word "alleged" is modifying the word "made," a verb, which needs an adverb to
modify it. The adverb form of "alleged" is "allegedly," which makes the correct
answer "allegedly made."

Intermediate

Q1, If seriously mentally ill people do not receive medication, they can grow unable
to support themselves, become irrational, and perhaps even threatening the safety of
themselves or others.

a. and perhaps even threatening

b. and may even threaten

c. and even a possible threat to

d. as well as possibly threatening

e. as well as a possible threat to ans- b

This question has to do with parallel structure. The correct structure is ‗grow‘, ‗become‘
and ‗threaten‘. Only B has this combination.

Q2, Two disabled children, one with crutches and the other one with a wheelchair, enters
the class on Monday.
a. the other one with a wheelchair, enters

b. the other one a wheelchair, enter

c. the other with a wheelchair, enters

d. the other with a wheelchair, enter

e. one with a wheelchair, enters ans –d

This is a very simple question involving subject/verb agreement. Should it be ‗two

children enter‘ or ‗two children enters‘? They enter (plural). That eliminates choices
A, C and E. Choice B implies that one of the children is a wheelchair. Choice D is the
correct answer

Q3, In Pomona College, a rule has been passed that permits students to cook and serve
their food, as well as to buy it.

a. permits students to cook and serve their food, as well as to buy it

b. permits students to cook, serve, and to buy their food

c. permits students to cook, to serve, and buy food

d. will permit the student to cook, serve, as well as to buy food

e. will permit food to be cooked, served, as well as bought by students ans-a

This question deals with parallel structure. The important thing to realize here is that
commas function differently from conjunctions in what they imply about parallel
structure. If you say ‗to cook, serve‘, you are not using parallel structure. If you say to
cook and serve, you are using parallel structure. The ‗and‘ carries the implied
structure over, the comma does not. Choices B, D and E make this mistake. Choice C
has a more straightforward mistake in parallel structure: it is missing the ‗to‘ in ‗to
buy‘. D and E also use the wrong tense and therefore change the meaning. Choice A is
the correct answer.

Q4. Some of them burned out eons ago, the night sky is spotted with thousands of stars.

a. Some of them burned out eons ago, the night sky is spotted with thousands of stars.

b. Burned out eons ago, the night sky is spotted with many thousands of stars.

c. Thousands of stars, some of them burned out eons ago, are spotting the night sky.

d. The night sky is spotted with thousands of stars, some of which are burnt out eons
ago.

e. The night sky is spotted with thousands of stars, some of them burned out eons
ago.
Ans- e

This question involves dangling modifiers. What burned out eons ago? Thousands of
stars did. ‗Thousands of stars‘ and not ‗the night sky‘ must therefore come after the
comma. Eliminate A and B. C has an incorrect tense. It should be ‗spot‘ and not ‗are
spotting‘. Choice D also has a mistake in tense. The stars are not burnt out at present,
they burned out a long time ago. Choice E is the correct answer

Q5. The humidity, air pollution, and noise have affected the children of Maria less
drastically than those of her neighbor.

a. affected the children of Maria less drastically than those of

b. affected the children of Maria less drastically than
 c.affected the children of Maria less dramatically than they have
d. dramatically affected the children of Maria less than
e.dramatically affected the children of Maria and

ans-a

What is the comparison being made in this sentence? It is being made between two sets
of children: Maria‘s and her neighbor‘s. Choices B, C, D and E all imply that the
comparison is being made between Maria‘s children and her neighbor, not between
Maria‘s children and her neighbor‘s children. Choice A is the correct answer.

Q6, Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued almost as much
as that of the old-fashione glass-blower that remain.

a. that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that
remain
b. of a value that is almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that
remain
c. almost as much in value as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers
d. almost as much in value as that of the remaining old-fashioned glass-blowers
e. valued almost as much as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers

ans- Choices A and B use the singular pronoun ‗that‘ with the plural verb form
‗remain‘. ‗Almost as much in value‘ in C and D is idiomatically incorrect. Choice E
is the correct answer.

Q7. Unlike that of the French, who linger when they eat meals, Americans are so
enamored of eating quickly that they have a type of meal called ―fast food‖.

a. Unlike that of the French, who linger when they eat

b. Unlike the French, who linger when they eat
c. Unlike the French, lingering when eating
d. Dissimilar to the French, lingering during
e. Lacking similarity to the French, who linger during

Ans- What is the comparison being made here? It is between the Americans and
the French. Choice A does not compare the Americans and the French because it
incorrectly adds the word ‗that‘. ‗Unlike‘ is simpler and shorter than ‗dissimilar
to‘ and ‗lacking similarity to‘. Eliminate D and E. The simple present is necessary
to describe a habitual action. ‗Lingering‘ in option C implies the French are
lingering now. Choice B is the correct answer

Q8, Certain painkilling drugs such as Oxycotin have recently been shown to be
addictive to patients, which may limit their potential to reduce pain.
 a. which may limit their potential to reduce
b. which may limit their potential for reducing
c. which may limit such drugs‘ potential to reduce
d. an effect that may limit their potential to reduce
e. an effect that may limit the potential of such drugs to reduce ans- Do you pick
‗which may limit‘ or ‗an effect that may limit‘? The relative pronoun ‗which‘
must refer to the word immediately before it. In this sentence it is meant to refer to
the fact that the drugs are addictive. However, it is incorrectly placed next to
patients. Eliminate A, B and C. That leaves us with choices D and E. Now another
ambiguity arises. In choice D, it is unclear what the ‗their‘ refers to. Choice E is
the best answer.

Q9, Books to be added to the high school curriculum should be educational and
should have no profanity in them or be lewd.

a. and should have no profanity in them or be lewd

b. and should not have profanity in them or not be lewd
c. and contain no profanity or lewdness
d. without containing profanity nor be lewd
e. without having any profanity or no lewdness in them

ans- The second ‗not‘ in option B is unnecessary and incorrect. The ‗no‘ in E is
similarly unnecessary and incorrect. Option D is not parallel. Option C is more
efficient than option A. C is correct.

Q10, After Georgio‘s Caf˝O got a favorable review in a travel guidebook, the number
of tourists eating there were in excess of the number of local customers going
regularly.

a. were in excess of the number of local customers

b. had an excess over the local customers who were
c. exceeded the local customers who were
d. numbered more than the local customers
e. exceeded the number of local customers
ans- The first thing you have to untangle is a simple grammatical mistake. What does
the excess or exceeding refer to? It refers to the number, not the tourists. Number is
singular, so you would not say ‗the number were‘ in excess, nor would you say
‗number numbered‘. That means choices A and D are wrong. What else does number
refer to? Does the number of tourists exceed local customers or the number of
customers? Remember, you can‘t compare apples and oranges. Choice C refers to the
wrong thing. Also, the numbers didn‘t have anything, per se, so choice B is incorrect.
Choice E is the correct answer.

Q11, Wretched and increasing mendicants are requesting money on the streets, money
that seems to be hard to come by in the deteriorating economy.
 a. Wretched and increasing prevalent mendicants are requesting money on the
streets, money that seems
b. Wretched and increasing prevalent mendicants request money on the streets,
money seeming
c. On the streets wretched and increasingly prevalent mendicants are requesting
money that seems
d. Wretchedly and increasingly prevalent mendicants request money on the streets
seeming
e. Wretchedly and increasingly prevalent mendicants are requesting money on the
streets that seems

ans- This question involves determining whether words are modifying adjectives
or nouns. What does wretched describe? The mendicants. The word
‗mendicants‘ is a noun, so wretched stays as an adjective. That eliminates
choices D and E. What does increasing refer to? It refers to the word ‗prevalent‘,
an adjective. Therefore you need an adverb to modify the adjective. Eliminate A
and B. Choice C is the correct answer. In addition, the relative pronoun ‗that‘ is
correctly placed in C, next to the word to which it refers, ‗money‘.

Q12, Montreal, where the tourist industry is larger than any other Canadian city, has
neighborhoods entirely composed of souvenir shops and cafes.

a. where the tourist industry is larger than any other Canadian city
b. which has a tourist industry larger than that of other Canadian cities
c. which had a tourist industry larger than any other Canadian city
d. whose tourist industry is larger than any other Canadian city
e. whose tourist industry is larger than that of any other Canadian city

ans- Choices A, C and D have incorrect comparisons. They imply that the industry is
larger than any other Canadian City, whereas, in fact, the tourist industry in Montreal
is larger than the tourist industry in any other Canadian city. C uses the wrong tense.
B removes the word ‗any‘ inappropriately. It is necessary to emphasize that the
tourist industry in Montreal is larger than the tourist industry of any other Canadian
city. Choice E is the correct answer.

Q13, Because Albert is the most experienced and he is therefore the best ballet dancer
in the company, he is being increasingly viewed by the director as the best candidate
for the role of the Nutcracker.

a. and he is therefore the best ballet dancer in the company, he is being increasingly
viewed
b. he is therefore the best of ballet dancers, and it has increased the view
c. and therefore the best ballet dancer, he is being increasingly viewed
d. and therefore he is the best of ballet dancers, there is an increasing view
e. therefore being the best of ballet dancers, it is increasingly viewed

ans- Choices A, B and D are all repetitive as they use ‗he‘, which is not needed
because it is clear that Albert and only Albert is being referenced. Choice E does not
have the correct parallel structure. It also incorrectly uses ‗it‘ to refer to Albert. Choice
C is the correct answer Q14, Golf games often turn out to be more tiring than they
originally seemed.

a. they originally seemed

b. they originally seem to
c. they seemingly would tire originally
d. it would have seemed originally
e. it originally seemed they would

ans- The correct tense for the verb ‗seem‘ is the past. Choice A uses the past tense
and is the shortest and most efficient of the options. Choice A is the correct
answer.

Q15, Although the music superstar agreed to a new contract, she says that it must be
posted on her public website so that both her new listeners and her old fans will
know what is going on behind the scenes.

a. she says that it must be posted on her public website so that both her new
listeners and her old fans will know what is
b. she says it had to be posted on her public website so that both her new listeners
and her old fans knows what is
c. she says that they would have to post the contract on her public website so that
her new listeners and her old fans knew what was
d. she says that the contract would have to be posted on her public website so
that both her new listeners and her old fans would know what was
e. saying that the contract had to be posted on her public website so that both
new listeners and old fans would know what had been

ans- The singular verb ‗knows‘ in B incorrectly refers to the plural subject ‗her new
listeners and her old fans‘. The use of the past ‗knew‘ in C is incorrect. Choice D
incorrectly uses ‗would have to be posted‘. ‗Must be posted‘ is more efficient. It also
incorrectly uses the past ‗what was going on‘. E incorrectly uses the past perfect
‗what had been‘. Choice A is the correct answer
Advance

Q1, As a building‘s structure rises from the ground with a rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance, it would be rated about 70%, or ―substandard‖ if it were a
finished structure with that level of earthquake resistance.

a.As a building‘s structure rises from the ground with a rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance, it would be rated about 70%, or ―substandard‖ if it
were a finished structure with that level of earthquake resistance.
b. A building‘s structure rises from the ground with a rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance that would be rated about 70%, or ―substandard‖ as a
finished structure.
 c.As a building‘s structure rises from the ground, its rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance that would be rated about 70%; qualifying it to be
―substandard‖ if a finished structure.
d. A building‘s structure rises from the ground with a rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance that would be rated about 70%; a finished structure with
such earthquake resistance would be deemed ―substandard.‖
e.As a building‘s structure rises from the ground, its rudimentary level of
earthquake resistance, which would deemed ―substandard‖ for a finished
structure, would be rated about 70%.
Ans- The correct response is (D). Faulty construction obscures the meaning of this
sentence.
The sentence begins with a subordinate clause, whose subject is ―a building‘s structure.‖
However, the subject of the main clause, ―it,‖ appears to refer back to ―structure.‖
However, a careful reading reveals that ―it‖ is used two times: "it" is intended to refer to
the ―level of earthquake resistance‖ the first time and to the ―building‘s structure‖ the
second time. The relationships between the two parts of the sentence must be clarified.
Only (D) corrects this muddled meaning.

Q2, In the German occupation of Eastern Europe in 1941-42, Hitler invaded

Russia in the winter months of his campaign, which was a singular strategic error
and that ultimately cost him the entire Eastern Front.

a. In the German occupation of Eastern Europe in 1941-42, Hitler invaded

Russia in the winter months of his campaign, which was a singular strategic
error and that ultimately cost
b. In the winter months of his campaign, Hitler invaded Russia in the German
occupation of Eastern Europe in 1941-42, which was a singular strategic
error that ultimately cost
c. With the 1941-42 German occupation of Eastern Europe, Hitler invaded
Russia in the winter months of his campaign, making a singular strategic
error that ultimately cost
d. During the 1941-42 German occupation of Eastern Europe, Hitler invaded Russia
in
the winter months of the campaign, making a singular strategic error that
ultimately cost
e. Invading Russia in the winter months of his campaign, in the German occupation of
Eastern Europe in 1941-42, Hitler made a singular strategic error, ultimately
costing Ans: The correct response is (D). The word ―during‖ correctly sets up the
meaning, while the participle ―making‖ maintains parallelism.

If you chose (A), remember that ―which‖ typically modifies the immediately
preceding noun. This answer choice suggests that Hitler‘s campaign was a singular
strategic error that ultimately cost him the entire Eastern front, when in fact it was the
decision to invade in the winter months that ultimately cost him the entire Eastern
front. The use of the coordinating conjunction ―and‖ creates an illogical meaning by
assigning equal importance to the phrases ―was a singular strategic error‖ and ―that
ultimately cost …‖ The second phrase should be subordinated. When we say
something ―was A and B‖, we are implying that ―A‖ and ―B‖ are of equal
importance. In this case, one thing led to another. Hitler made a singular strategic
error that ultimately cost him the entire Eastern front. The correct choice should make
this clear.

If you chose (B), remember that ―which‖ typically refers to the immediately preceding
noun. This answer choice illogically suggests that 1941-42 was a singular strategic
error that ultimately cost Hitler the entire Eastern front.

If you chose (C), you correctly removed ―which‖ from the sentence and switched the
verb form to the participle ―making,‖ however consider how the word ―with‖
changes the meaning of the sentence. This answer choice incorrectly suggests that
Hitler invaded Russia through the 1941-42 invasion of Eastern Europe.

If you chose (E), you correctly removed ―which‖ and ―that‖ from the original
sentence. However, it is structurally awkward to have back-to-back modifying
clauses before the subject (―Hitler‖). Furthermore, this choice adjusts the meaning
of the sentence to: ―Hitler made a mistake.‖ Additionally, ―made‖ and ―costing‖
are not parallel, and we now have three modifying clauses instead of two. (D) is
more precise.

Q3, Remains of the tomb of the Ottoman sultan who died in 1566 while his troops were
besieging the fortress of Szigetvar in Hungary, Suleiman the Magnificent, is believed to
be found recently.

a. the Ottoman sultan Suleiman the Magnificent, who died in 1566 while his
troops were besieging the fortress of Szigetvar in Hungary, is believed to be
found recently.
b. the Ottoman sultan Suleiman the Magnificent, who died in 1566 while his
troops were besieging the fortress of Szigetvar in Hungary, is believed as being
found recently.
c. Suleiman the Magnificent, the Ottoman sultan who died in 1566 while his
troops were besieging the fortress of Szigetvar in Hungary, is believed to have
been found recently.
d. Suleiman the Magnificent, the Ottoman sultan who died in 1566 while his
troops were besieging the fortress of Szigetvar in Hungary, are believed to
have been found recently.
In the given sentence, the noun phrase ‗Suleiman the Magnificent‘ is misplaced.
This error is corrected in all given answer options.Also note that ‗to be found‘ is
incorrect. The correct tense to use is the present perfect form, i.e. ‗to have been
found‘.The subject of the sentence is ‗remains of the tomb‘. As ‗remains‘ is
plural, the correct verb to follow it is ‗are‘.The question is " Choose the
grammatically correct option "Hence, the answer is option D
Q4. By the year 2000, A Tale of Two Cities, Charles Dickens' gripping book portraying
the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the French aristocracy had
around 200 million copies in print, making it more than that of almost any other English
book ever written.
 a.book portraying the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the
French aristocracy had around 200 million copies in print, making it more than

b. book portraying the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the
French aristocracy had around 200 million copies in print, which is more than
c.book portraying the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the
French aristocracy, had around 200 million copies in print, more than
d. book portraying the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the
French aristocracy, had around 200 million copies in print, making it more than
e.book portraying the suffering of the proletariat under the brutal subjugation of the
French aristocracy had around 200 million copies in print and is more than ans-
Option(C) is correct

There are three main issues being tested in this question.

(1) The phrase Charles Dickens'...aristocracy is a modifying phrase and must be set
off in a pair of commas as it should stand between the subject and verb in order to
clearly modify the subject. Modifiers that break the flow of the sentence must be set
off in a pair of commas. Without a comma after aristocracy, the modifying phrase is
not properly separated from the subject (A Tale of Two Cities) and verb (had).
(2) The pronoun it in the phrase making it more than does not have a clear antecedent
(although it probably refers to A Tale of Two Cities).
(3) The phrase making it more than illogically compares a book to a number of
copies of a book in print. The sentence should compare a number of copies in print to
a number of copies in print.
Q5. The publishers, unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, insisted that the author
should pay half the cost of the initial print run of his controversial new book.
a. The publishers, unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, insisted that the author
should pay half the cost of the initial print run of his controversial new book.
b. the publishers, unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, insisted that the author
should be paying half the cost of the initial print run of the author‘s
controversial new book.

c. The publishers, unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, insisted that the author pay
half the cost of the initial print run of his controversial new book.
d. Unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, the publishers insisted the author should
pay half the cost of the initial print run of his controversial new book..
e. Unwilling to shoulder the entire risk, the author was required by the publisher
to pay half the cost of the initial print run of his controversial new book.

Ans- Option(C) is correct

The subjunctive expression ‗insisted that the author pay‘ is correct in C. A, B and D
are wrong because they incorrectly insert ‗should‘.E is incorrect because the
‗unwilling to shoulder the entire risk‘ is incorrectly attributed to the author (dangling
modifier problem).
Q6. Those watching the libel suit might speculate if the company, swift to take offense
might have been as responsible for the perceived slander as the newspaper was.

a) speculate if the company, swift to take offense might have been

b) speculate if the company, swift to take offense had been

c) speculate if, in its swiftness to take offense the company was

d) wonder as to whether, in its swiftness to take offense, the company was

e) wonder whether the company, swift to take offense, was Should you use ‗whether‘
or ‗if‘? There are two alternatives. Either the company was as responsible as the
newspaper, or it was not. When there two alternatives it is better to use ‗whether‘.
Eliminate A, B and C. E is shorter and more efficient than D. Choice E is the
correct answer.

Q7. Added to the increase in monthly wages discussed last spring, the dining hall
employees are currently seeking improved insurance coverage.
a) Added to the increase in monthly wages discussed last spring, the dining hall
employees are currently seeking improved insurance coverage.

b) Added to the increase in monthly wages which had been discussed last spring, the
employees of the dining hall are currently seeking an improved insurance coverage.

c) The dining hall employees are currently seeking improved insurance cover- age
added to the increase in monthly wages that were discussed last spring.

d) In addition to the increase in monthly wages that were discussed last spring, the
dining hall employees are currently seeking improved insurance cover- age.

e) In addition to the increase in monthly wages discussed last spring, the em- ployees
of the dining hall are currently seeking improved insurance coverage

There is a misplaced modifier in this sentence. As it stands it implies that the employees
were the ones who were added to the increase in monthly wages. That means choices A
and B are incorrect. Choice C has an obvious grammatical mistake in it. ‗Increase‘ is
singular so it should be ‗the increase in wages was discussed‘. Choice D has the same
error. Choice E is the correct answer.

Q8. The sharp contrast in sales of sports memorabilia seen in sports in which most of the
participants are male and such sales in sports in which most of the partic- ipants are female
have demonstrated that women’s sports are still lacking dedicated fans.

a) seen in sports in which most of the participants are male and such sales in sports in which
most of the participants are female have
b) seen in sports in which most of the participants are predominately male over those that are
predominately female have
 c) that favors sports in which most of the participants are male over sports in which most of the
participants are female have
d) that favors sports in which most of the participants are male over sports in which most of the
participants are female has
e) seen is sports in which most of the participants are male and such sales in sports in which
most of the participants are female has

This question attempts to disguise a very simple grammatical mistake: is ‗contrast‘

singular or plural? It is singular, therefore you have to use the word ‗has‘, not
‗have‘. The contrast has done something. That leaves choices D and E as possible
answers. However, use of the word
‗favors‘ in choice D slightly changes the meaning of the sentence. It should be a
contrast between one thing and another. Choice D does not use the use the word ‗and‘
and is therefore also incorrect for this reason. Choice E is the correct answer

Q9. According to the editor of Elle magazine, wearing the same clothes as are worn on
undersized models will lead to a fashion failure for the plus-size woman, who should shop at
stores such as Lane Bryant that have clothing that will flatter her shape.

a) wearing the same clothes as are worn on undersized models will lead to a fashion
failure for the plus-size woman, who
b) it will lead to a fashion failure for the plus-size woman to wear the same clothes as on
the undersized models; they
c) fashion failure will result from wearing the same clothes as undersized mod- els to the
plussize woman, who
d) fashion failure for the plus-size woman will result from wearing the same clothes as
on the undersized models; they
e) the plus-size woman wearing the same clothes as are worn on undersized models will
lead to fashion failure; they

It is not ‗the undersized models‘, specific examples of undersized models, that the
sentence is considering. Rather it is undersized models in general. Eliminate B and D.
The ‗they‘ in B, D and E is incorrect. Although it seems the pronoun should refer to the
plus-sized woman, grammatically it could refer to the undersized models. In any case, if
it refers to the plus-sizes woman the sentence mentions it should be singular. This can
also be seen from the use or
‗her‘ later in the sentence. The word order in C is incorrect. The phrases ‗fashion
failure will result‘ and ‗to the plus-size woman‘ are divided by too many words. The
pronoun ‗for‘ is more appropriate than ‗to‘. Choice A is the correct answer
Q10. If additional sources of deuterium are found, it will expand the amount that
can be used as heavy water for nuclear reactors and reduce the cost of energy, even
if the sources are not immediately mined.
a) it will expand the amount that can be used as heavy water for nuclear reac- tors
and reduce the cost of energy
 b) that amount that is able to used as heavy water for nuclear reactors will expand
and the cost of energy will be reduced

c) it will cause an increase in the amount that is able to be used as heavy water for
nuclear reactors and a reduction in the cost of energy

d) the amount that can be used as heavy water for nuclear reactors will increase
and the cost of energy will drop

e) it will increase the amount of deuterium that can be used as heavy water for
nuclear reactors and cause a drop in the cost of energy

Amounts do not expand, they increase. Eliminate A and B. The ‗it‘ at the start of C is
a pronoun without a clear reference. E has the same problem. Choice D is the correct
answer

Q11. It is common in Helen Hayes Theatre, as in almost every local theatre, the
opinion of administrators has played at least as large a part in deciding what to
perform as has the desires of the public.

a) in almost every local theatre, the opinion of administrators has played at least as
large a part in deciding what to perform as has

b) in almost every local theatre, that the opinion of administrators has played at least
as large a part in deciding what to perform as has

c) it is in almost every local theatre, that the opinion of administrators has played at
least as large a part in deciding what to perform as have

d) is in almost every local theatre, that the opinion of administrators have played at
least as large a part in deciding what to perform as have

e) it is in almost every local theatre, the opinion of administrators has played at least
as large a part in deciding what to perform as has.

Option A does not provide a complete sentence. The expression is ‗it is common that.‘
E has the same problem. The noun ‗desires‘ is plural so the verb referring to desires
must also be plural. Eliminate B. It should be ‗as have the desires‘ not ‗as has the
desires‘. That leaves C and D. It is necessary to say ‗as it is‘ rather than ‗as is‘ at the
start of the option. D is also incorrect because it says ‗the opinion...have‘. The correct
answer is C.

Q12. In disagreeing with the findings of the Warren Commission, the American
public must take care to avoid moving the target of criticism from government
agencies collaborating in a coup d‘etat to collaborating to overthrow foreign
governments.

a) government agencies collaborating in a coup d‘etat to collaborating to over- throw

foreign governments
b) government agencies collaborating in a coup d‘etat to foreign governments being
overthrown with collaboration
c) the collaboration of government agencies in a coup d‘etat to the collabora- tion of the
agencies in overthrowing foreign governments

d) collaboration of government agencies by coup d‘etat with foreign govern- ments, that
are overthrown

e) a coup d‘etat that government agencies collaborate in to collaboration that overthrows

foreign governments

Choices A, B and E do not make it clear who does the collaborating to overthrow the
foreign governments. D changes the meaning. Choice C has parallel structure and is
the correct answer.

Q13. Despite Britain’s obvious interest in using oil to power the Royal Navy, the creation of
a national oil company lagged behind the Dutch and the Americans and developed only
after when oil well construction was supported by foreign speculators.

a)developed only after when oil well construction was supported by foreign speculators
b) developed only after foreign speculators supported oil well construction
c)developed only after foreign speculators’ support of oil well construction by foreign
speculators
d) develops only at the time after the supporting of oil well construction by foreign
speculators
e) developed only after there being foreign speculators’ support of oil well construction

The expression ‗developed after when‘ is incorrect. ‗Developed after‘ is sufficient.

Eliminate A. Choice C unnecessarily repeats ‗foreign speculators‘. Choice D has the
wrong tense. The sentence is in past tense, not present. ‗Developed after there being‘
in E is also incorrect. Choice B is the correct answer.

Q14. The weather predictions delivered on television are usually reliable, but winds,
storms that could not be foreseen, and ocean currents often cause much more extreme
weather conditions than they had expected.

a) storms that could not be foreseen, and ocean currents often cause much more
extreme weather conditions than they had

b) storms that cannot be foreseen, and ocean currents often cause much more extreme
weather conditions than

c) unforeseeable storms, and ocean currents are the cause of much more ex- treme
weather conditions than they had

d) storms that are not foreseeable, and ocean currents often cause much more extreme
weather conditions than they had

e) unforeseeable storms, and ocean currents often cause much more extreme weather
conditions than they had
This sentence simply has to have its parallel structure corrected. It begins in the
present tense, ‗are usually reliable‘, so the sentence should continue in the present.
Choice A is not in the present tense. ‗They‘ in A, C, D and E is a pronoun without a
reference. Choice B is the correct answer

Q15. A male musician can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or a
music teacher after he graduates from college with a degree in music, depending on his
talent.

a) A male musician can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or

a music teacher after he graduates from college with a degree in music, depending on
his talent. b) After graduating from college with a degree in music, depending
on his tal- ent, a male musician can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra
member, or a music teacher.

c) After graduating from college with a degree in music, a male musician‘s tal- ent
will determine if he can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or a
music teacher.

d) Talent determines whether a male musician, after graduating from college with a
degree in music, can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or a
music teacher.

e) The talent of a male musician, after graduating from college with a degree in
music, will determine whether he can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra
member, or a music teacher.

Choices A and B incorrectly imply that the degree in music depends on the talent
of the musician. The modifier ‗depending on his talent‘ is misplaced. C and E are
incorrect as they imply the talent graduates from college. D is the correct
answermusic teacher.