Term 3 Talk4writing Program
Term 3 Talk4writing Program
SCSA OUTCOMES
LANGUAGE:
Understand that languages have different written and visual communication systems, different oral traditions and different ways
of constructing meaning (ACELA1475)
Understand how different types of texts vary in use of language choices, depending on their function and purpose, for example
tense, mood, and types of sentences (ACELA1478)
Understand that paragraphs are a key organisational feature of written texts (ACELA1479)
Know that word contractions are a feature of informal language and that apostrophes of contraction are used to signal missing
letters (ACELA1480)
Learn extended and technical vocabulary and ways of expressing opinion including modal verbs and adverbs (ACELA1484)
LITERATURE:
Discuss texts in which characters, events and settings are portrayed in different ways, and speculate on the authors’ reasons
(ACELT1594)
Discuss how language is used to describe the settings in texts, and explore how the settings shape the events and influence the
mood of the narrative (ACELT1599)
Discuss the nature and effects of some language devices used to enhance meaning and shape the reader’s reaction, including
rhythm and onomatopoeia in poetry and prose (ACELT1600)
Create imaginative texts based on characters, settings and events from students’ own and other cultures using visual features,
for example perspective, distance and angle (ACELT1601)
Create texts that adapt language features and patterns encountered in literary texts, for example characterisation, rhyme,
rhythm, mood, music, sound effects and dialogue (ACELT1791)
LITERACY:
Identify the audience and purpose of imaginative, informative and persuasive texts (ACELY1678)
Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive texts demonstrating increasing control over text structures and
language features and selecting print, and multimodal elements appropriate to the audience and purpose (ACELY1682)
Reread and edit texts for meaning, appropriate structure, grammatical choices and punctuation (ACELY1683)
Write using joined letters that are clearly formed and consistent in size (ACELY1684)
Week 1 PD Day
Monday
Tuesday Cold Task – Formative Assessment
Stimulus: Spooky manison – Children write a description of the setting using the stimulus.
Discussion must be had about the stimulus to prepare for the write. How could they describe it as if they were
there?
Hand out the Cold Task and give them 25 minutes to write – describing the character.
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Plenary: Allow five minutes at the end to proof read and edit their work.
Moderate: Mark the Cold Tasks against the given rubric and sort the students into their guided writing groups
based on their specific needs.
Create target cards for each group to help students stay focused on their goals each writing session.
Plenary: Read the Harry Potter passage to the class and discuss the text (characters, setting,
paragraphs, events).
Tuesday Story mapping and learning the text (reading as a reader):
Warm up VCOP activity (connectives).
Read the introduction of Harry Potter, assisting the children to learn the words and develop
the actions.
Record the introduction on a class story map (using pictures and minimal words). This needs to
be written at that time with the children so they have ownership of it - but practice before so
you know what pictures you are going to use.
Children draw their own story map of the introduction - they can look and copy the class one.
Work with the weakest writing group practicing orally as they go with the actions.
Plenary: Children practise the introduction with a partner.
Place the story map on the washing line.
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Hand out a copy of the text to each student. Work through it as a class, pulling it apart and
discussing what needs to be included in the class toolkit.
Students use the VCOP methodology to assist with this.
Wednesday Boxing Up Harry Potter (reading as a writer):
Warm up VCOP activity (punctuation).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Refer to the whole class story map and circle the different paragraphs.
Use the boxed up planner to fill in the main ideas from the annotated text (use the key ideas
only).
Work through as a class, adding the key ideas from each paragraph of Harry Potter to the first
column.
Plenary: Explain the elements of the story that you want to change for the class innovation (e.g.
character and setting).
As a class brainstorm different characters (including traits) and settings. Add to VCOP and
Magpie Wall.
Place the boxed up planner on the washing line.
Thursday Creating the Class Toolkit (reading as the writer):
Warm up VCOP activity.
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
As a class, begin to develop a toolkit – a list of ‘tools not rules’, to help with successful writing
of the genre and focus. Use annotated text to guide discussion.
Discuss the different ways you can describe a character e.g. good name, adjectives, feelings,
and dialogue. Always relate these back to the text.
Record all points on the class toolkit, guiding the discussion from your pre-prepared toolkit.
Type up a copy of the toolkit and give it to all students to glue into their writing books.
Place the toolkit on the washing line.
Friday Boxing up the class innovation:
Warm up VCOP activity (vocabulary).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Refer back to the boxed up planner. Read what the class came up with for the first column.
Remind children of the ideas they came up with for the class innovation. They are on the
Magpie and VCOP wall.
Work through the boxed up planner together, adding the outline to each paragraph to the
second column (class innovation).
Make sure during this time that you are explicit as to what info needs to go into each box. We
are not writing the WHOLE story - just writing notes about what we have changed.
Plenary: Children discuss their ideas for their own innovation.
Type up the boxing up planner, completing the first two columns so the third is ready for
independent innovation.
continue their writing successfully. The next day, students view your feedback and reflect on what
they need to improve. If there is a common theme of errors, focus on addressing those errors in
your warm up activity the following day.
Introduction:
Warm up VCOP activity (openers).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the introduction story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss
what is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the introduction of the class innovation with the class helping (post it
notes over original).
Write a modelled / shared class introduction based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
When children suggest their ideas, continue to question them until you get the best adjective,
adverb or verb. Any other suggestions that are given but not chosen are written in a ‘save it box’
off to the side so children can use them later. Then transfer these onto the VCOP / Magpie Wall.
Children return to their desks and complete their own introduction using their boxing up
planner and the class innovation as a model. They will rule up a piece of lined paper, title and
date it before commencing writing.
Guided writing groups are now working. Teacher to work with the group that needs the most
work (refer to the target cards).
Plenary: Children will edit and share their introduction with their writing buddy.
INNOVATION Wednesday Build Up:
Warm up VCOP activity (punctuation).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the build up story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss
what is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the build up of the class innovation with the class helping (post it notes
over original).
Write a modelled / shared class build up based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
Children return to their desks and complete their own build up using their boxing up planner
and the class innovation as a model. They will continue writing on the lined piece of paper from
yesterday or rule up a new page.
Teacher to work with another group.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their build up with their writing buddy.
Thursday Problem:
Warm up VCOP activity.
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the problem story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss
what is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the problem of the class innovation with the class helping (post it notes
over original).
Write a modelled / shared class problem based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
Children return to their desks and complete their own problem using their boxing up planner
and the class innovation as a model. They will continue writing on the lined piece of paper from
yesterday or rule up a new page.
Teacher to work with another group.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their problem with their writing buddy.
Friday PD Day
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Week 6 Resolution:
Monday Warm up VCOP activity (connectives).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the resolution story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss
what is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the resolution of the class innovation with the class helping (post it
notes over original).
Write a modelled / shared class resolution based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
Children return to their desks and complete their own resolution using their boxing up planner
and the class innovation as a model. They will continue writing on the lined piece of paper from
yesterday or rule up a new page.
Teacher to work with another group.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their resolution with their writing buddy.
Tuesday Ending:
Warm up VCOP activity (openers).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the ending story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss what
is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the ending of the class innovation with the class helping (post it notes
over original).
Write a modelled / shared class ending based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
Children return to their desks and complete their own ending using their boxing up planner and
the class innovation as a model. They will continue writing on the lined piece of paper from
yesterday or rule up a new page.
Teacher to work with another group.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their ending with their writing buddy.
Wednesday Boxing up the class and independent invention
Rehearse the whole text as a class using the story map and the actions.
Reflect on the innovation stage and how the children wrote a successful narrative using all the
support and scaffolding.
Explain that children will now have a chance to write another narrative but without as much
assistance. They will be writing a story still focusing on character and following the ‘conquering
the monster’ genre.
This time, it will be without the individual paragraph story mapping. The modeled writing of each
paragraph will still take place, however there will be less input from the class and this part of the
session will be much shorter compared to using the innovation stage. Their invention does not have
to follow the same sequence as the modeled text.
Refer children to the Magpie wall and all the ideas they had for their narratives.
Pick another from here and complete a new class story mountain planner for the invention
stage.
Children begin to complete their own story mountain planner. Children can look back through
their writing to assist them at any point through the writing process.
Mark their planners for the next day.
Children attempt to independently edit their writing for simple mistakes e.g. spelling and
punctuation errors.
Collect, mark and return introductions the next day.
Friday Build Up:
Rehearse the whole text as a class using the story map and the actions.
Write a modeled build up based on the story mountain planner.
Children complete their build up.
Children interact with the toolkit and highlight where in their paragraph they have
demonstrated - cool openers, adjectives, similes, punctuation etc.
Children attempt to independently edit their writing for simple mistakes e.g. spelling and
punctuation errors.
Collect, mark and return build ups the next day.
Week 7 Problem:
Monday Rehearse the whole text as a class using the story map and the actions.
Write a modeled problem based on the story mountain planner.
Children complete their problem.
Children interact with the toolkit and highlight where in their paragraph they have
demonstrated - cool openers, adjectives, similes, punctuation etc.
Children attempt to independently edit their writing for simple mistakes e.g. spelling and
punctuation errors.
Collect, mark and return problems the next day.
Tuesday Resolution:
Rehearse the whole text as a class using the story map and the actions.
Write a modeled resolution based on the story mountain planner.
Children complete their resolution.
Children interact with the toolkit and highlight where in their paragraph they have
demonstrated - cool openers, adjectives, similes, punctuation etc.
Children attempt to independently edit their writing for simple mistakes e.g. spelling and
punctuation errors.
Collect, mark and return resolutions the next day.
Wednesday Ending:
Rehearse the whole text as a class using the story map and the actions.
Write a modeled ending based on the story mountain planner.
Children complete their ending.
Children interact with the toolkit and highlight where in their paragraph they have
demonstrated - cool openers, adjectives, similes, punctuation etc.
Children attempt to independently edit their writing for simple mistakes e.g. spelling and
punctuation errors.
Collect, mark and return endings the next day.
Thursday Publishing inventions
Children will publish their inventions on their own device, using text and imagery.
Read the title and introduction paragraph (topic sentence and hook) of the text, assisting the
children to learn the words and develop the actions.
Record the title and introduction on a class story map (using pictures and minimal words). This
needs to be written at that time with the children so they have ownership of it - but practice
before so you know what pictures you are going to use.
Children draw their own story map of the title and introduction- they can look and copy the
class one. Work with the weakest writing group practicing orally as they go with the actions.
Plenary: Children practise the title and introduction with a partner.
Place the story map on the washing line.
Hand out a copy of the text to each student. Work through it as a class, pulling it apart and
discussing what needs to be included in the class toolkit.
Students use the VCOP methodology to assist with this.
Friday Each of the subsequent five lessons consist of modelled / shared writing of each paragraph,
immediately followed by students completing their own innovation of that paragraph. A vital part
of the innovation stage is the formative assessment through daily marking and feedback. After
each session, mark their paragraph and provide the necessary feedback required for them to
continue their writing successfully. The next day, students view your feedback and reflect on what
they need to improve. If there is a common theme of errors, focus on addressing those errors in
your warm up activity the following day.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their title and introduction with their writing buddy.
Thursday Conclusion:
Warm up VCOP activity (punctuation).
Rehearse the whole text as a class, using the story map and the actions.
Look at the conclusion story map. Link it to the ideas written in the boxed up planner. Discuss
what is going to change and stay the same.
Draw the story map for the conclusion of the class innovation with the class helping (post it
notes over original).
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Write a modelled / shared class conclusion based on the class innovation from the boxing up
planner and story map. Have class share their ideas.
Children return to their desks and complete their own conclusion using their boxing up planner
and the class innovation as a model. They will continue writing on the lined piece of paper from
yesterday or rule up a new page.
Teacher to work with another group.
Plenary: Children will edit and share their conclusion with their writing buddy.