Year 3 RAFT Activity - Procedure Writing
Year 3 RAFT Activity - Procedure Writing
Year 3 RAFT Activity - Procedure Writing
Differentiation Choices
1. For this assignment, I have chosen to design a differentiated:
Learning Menu or Agenda
Choice Board
RAFT
Summative Assessment Task for Unit of Work
Lesson with Specific Adjustments for Students with Special Needs
Series of Tasks for Learning Centres or Stations
Learning Task or Lesson with Innovative Use of Technology to Support Differentiation
Context
This RAFT activity fits in the broader context of a year 3 English unit on procedural texts. The
objective for learners is to create a procedural text using structures and language features
specific to the genre of text. Students will have already completed a unit on narrative writing and
explored language features such as action verbs and basic adjectives. This prior experience will
act as a building block allowing the teacher to connect learning of these mentioned language
features, with features specific to procedures i.e. command verbs (timeless present tense action
verbs). This lesson takes place towards the end of the broader unit on procedural texts. Through
the teaching and learning cycle it is expected that students have had opportunity to build their
field of knowledge in regards to both the genre (procedure texts) and the language features
(command verbs and prepositions). It is further expected that students have had a chance to
briefly explore various contexts that procedure texts are used in i.e. recipes, experiments, game
rules. This RAFT focuses on students as producers and will provide them with the opportunity to
show understandings and knowledge. It is expected that this activity will be undertaken over a
phase of multiple lessons due to the complexity of both the task and learner differences.
Students have already chosen their RAFT strip and the format that they would like to use to
show their knowledge. Students have also negotiated independent or group work preferences. It
is important to note that the students have already been exposed to classroom management
practices such as task cards, task charts, and ask me hats. Therefore, deeper explanations and
modelling of expectations and classroom management systems are unnecessary. However, if
these structures had not yet been implemented, modelling and additional time clarifying
expectations is recommended in a differentiated classroom.
Learning Objectives
Students will work towards the following year 3 ACARA achievement standards:
Receptive mode:
- By the end of Year 3, students understand how content can be organised using different
text structures depending on the purpose of the text.
- They understand how language features, images and vocabulary choices are used for
different effects.
Productive mode:
- Their texts include writing and images to express and develop, in some detail,
experiences, events, information, ideas and characters.
- They demonstrate understanding of grammar and choose vocabulary and punctuation
appropriate to the purpose and context of their writing.
Know the grammatical structures and language features that are used in
procedure writing i.e.: Titles, subheadings, command verbs, prepositions, concise
sentences.
Use command verbs to instruct (i.e. put, fill, pour, cut, make, fold).
Use prepositions to specify details of command language (i.e.
time/place/sequence).
Communicate a logical and sequential structure of a procedure.
Produce a procedural text with sequential components.
Essential Questions
Task:
Consider the Steps above.
Circle all command verbs in blue.
Why are these command verbs?
Circle all prepositions in green.
Why are these prepositions?
Create your own command for step 6. Your command must give the reader information
about how to blend the ingredients (e.g. time/manner)
Students are sorted into the following tiers based on the formative assessment:
Tier 1 = Students who are only able to identify command verbs and/or prepositions
Tier 2 = Students able to identify language features and explain the role of command verbs
and prepositions.
Tier 3 = Students able to identify, explain and create language features.
Task:
Rank in order, your interest in creating the following procedurals. Number each one from 1 –
7 (1 being MOST interesting and 7 being LEAST interesting).
From student responses to preferred topics of interest within the genre of procedural texts, the
teacher can alter the RAFT to offer choices that suit individual student interest.
Lesson Plan
INTRODUCTION EXPLANATORY NOTES
“Today we are going to begin exploring your chosen In the previous lesson, students
RAFT strip and think about how we are going to write select the RAFT strip of interest
either a script to present orally or a written procedure”: to them.
Students also pre negotiate the
Produce a procedural text with sequential format that they will
components. demonstrate their
Use command verbs to instruct (i.e. put, fill, pour, understanding of the topic
cut, make, fold) through, with the teacher (i.e.
Use prepositions to specify details of command orally/written)
language (i.e. time/place/manner/sequence) Prior to the lesson, students
discuss with the teacher
Recap prior learning through class discussion (5 whether to complete the task Commented [KP1]: Good to revisit this at the start of the
min) lesson
independently or in pairs.
CLASS EXPLORATION
Modelling
e.g.
Instruct students doing 2nd and 3rd RAFT to collect their The teacher provides name for
task cards and print outs and tiered supports (i.e. each tier group to ensure
descriptions or descriptions + examples of language discretion behind grouping.
features) and begin exploring the resources identifying
and recording language features.
Light Bulb Lab Commented [KP2]: Good strategy to support those students
that need it.
That will leave students doing the first RAFT strip
(handball rules), on the floor. The teacher will work with
these students for the lesson to guide their thinking and
understanding of the resources and how their own
ideas might begin to form. It is expected that given the
differences in language structures, these students may
have difficulty initially identifying command verbs and
prepositions i.e. every sentence does not typically start
with a command verb as other procedures commonly
do.
Lesson Closure/ Check for Understanding
To close the activity, readdress the following questions, probing for ideas that might have
changed (particularly in the handball rule RAFT group.
Formative assessment: Collect students’ English books to inspect the identified language
features and inform teaching.
Self-assessment
Where are my students at respective of the KUD’s? Commented [KP3]: Have you got criteria to measure
What further experiences or supports do they need? success?
Where all students engaged? (check English books)
Explanation:
This RAFT as a differentiation strategy allows students to utilise curriculum knowledge and show
their understanding in ways that suit learner interest and profile differences while still being
relevant to learning. Student interest is addressed through the choice of roles and tasks,
therefore students are more likely become motivated and engaged in learning. It is important to
note that lunchtime activities are often dominated by handball in the school. By tapping into this
interest the teacher can make learning interesting and directly relatable to students lives.
Aspects of students’ learning profile have been catered for through negotiated modes of the final
product (oral/written) and negotiated group partners.
Further, RAFT strategies can be used to differentiate by readiness. Jarvis (J. 2017) asserts that
students can be provided with readiness based (tiered) supports related to the strip chosen by
each student. In light of this, an example of how differentiating for readiness is catered for has
been attached. In consideration of the philosophy of differentiated classroom practice, catering
for student interest/learning profiles, and readiness is connected to respectful classroom tasks. It
also promotes participation and progress - elements that ensure inclusion.
The attached RAFT is based on students’ responses to formative assessment. The formative
assessment aims to analyse individual learning interests related to the topic. It also aims to
assess students’ readiness in relation to the knowledge and understanding required. Based on
the formative assessment, this RAFT differentiates by student interest that connect to the
curriculum area, and student readiness through supports available to students. Even though the
language features, structures and bigger understandings involved in each RAFT strip is similar,
the content to explore and mode to demonstrate this learning is different. This design is
underpinned by Sousa and Tomlinson’s assertions that no one size fits all learner (2018). By
making it as appealing as possible to student interests, students are more likely to engage in
learning. It is important to make sure learning is still relevant to curriculum area which is why
each task has been designed to replicate ‘real world’ roles and purposes of procedural
language/text/structures. This is also reflected in the formative assessment item. There is little
relevance in finding out what students are interested in if it doesn’t both relate back to both the
curriculum and the genre.
To ensure time is spent efficiently several classroom management strategies have been put in
place to help manage classroom behaviours. Task cards have been created to explain the
nature of the task and how students should work. It is expected that 1 or 2 students may be in
and out of classes due to extracurricular activities. These task cards will assist students in
knowing or remembering what the task is they should be doing and the nature of it. A simple
task chart will be easily visible at the front of the classroom to help students clarify where they
should be (i.e. 3 columns and each students’ name under the relevant area). Rules are put in
place prior to students splitting off into their groups to ensure the teacher is not disturbed when
working with individuals and groups. One of these strategies includes ‘ask me’ hats. One student
from each group is given the responsibility of be a point of assistance through ‘ask me’ hats.
These students are there to help other students with simple questions such as reading
assistance. The light bulb lab is a space and time management strategy whereby the teacher is
able to help students learn effectively should they require further instruction and guidance.
References
Acara.edu.au (2019). ACARA (online). Available at: htps://www.acara.edu.au [accessed 12th
Apr. 2019)
Jarvis, J. 2019, Differentiation for Diverse Learners, slides distributed in topic EDUC 4721,
Flinders University, Bedford Park, March 18th, 2019
Example: Mix the four and the Example: Mix the flour and
egg the egg until smooth
Shut behind
Put below
Fold beneath
Open inside
Close next to
Mix through
Turn towards
Pour until
Fill with
Move on
Add near
Chop into
Slice danced
Spread by
Use after
Pick during
Hold everywhere
Get unless
Tier 2 prompt
Example: Mix the four and the Example: Mix the flour and
egg the egg until smooth (time)
Your new classmate has never played handball. Explain how the game should be played.
The rules should clearly instruct a new player how to play.
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Text: See example sheet 1
Using the resource example, conduct an investigation that focuses on the following questions:
Rules
Full: when the ball lands in another player's square on the first bounce, the player has hit a
'full'.
Out: when the ball lands outside of the court, the last person who touched the ball or the last
court the ball touched is out.
Double: when the ball bounces twice in a person's square, the person who is in that square
is out. Usually known as 'double', 'double bounce'.
Double touch: when the ball is touched twice in a row by the same person.
Grabs/Carry: when the ball is held or scooped instead of a clean hit.
Interference: if a player interferes with another player, they are out.
Task Card: RAFT Strip 2
You have released a new book all about sugary treats. To help advertise your new book,
you want to provide a popular magazine (or TV show) with a recipe that instructs readers
how to make a sweet sandwich.
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Text: See example sheet 2
Ingredients
Method
You have just been offered a new job as the school’s science teacher. You want students
to enjoy a hands-on, messy and fun approach to science, because science should be fun!
Create a procedure that explains how to make ooey-gooey-sticky slime!
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KCX16VtUv1I
Text: See example sheet 3
Using one of the resources, conduct an investigation that focuses on the following questions:
Ingredients
Steps