National Geographic IELTS BOOK WRITING MATERIAL
National Geographic IELTS BOOK WRITING MATERIAL
National Geographic IELTS BOOK WRITING MATERIAL
The graph below shows changes in the distribution of average household income
between 1965 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Year
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TASK 1 Bar Charts
The charts below show how often people in three age groups did various
different evening activities in 1980 and 2010.
Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the information shown in the
charts.
1980
2010
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TASK 1 Tables
The table below shows the type of accommodation chosen by foreign students studying
English in the city of Hamilton and other related information.
Rating for
Average distance
English
Type of % of $ per from city centre Overall
language
Accommodation students week in kms rating
development
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TASK 1 Pie Charts and Multiple Charts
The diagrams below give information about internet use in different regions of the
world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
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TASK 1 Diagrams
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
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TASK 1 Maps and Plans
Below is a map of the town of Riverton. A new sports centre (S) has been planned
for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the sports centre.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
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TASK 2 An Agree/Disagree Essay
International sporting events like the Olympics and football World Cup place huge
financial burdens on host nations that cannot be justified.
Give evidence to support your ideas and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
and experience.
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TASK 2 A Discussion/Opinion Essay
People with ten or more years’ experience at work are far more knowledgeable
than people still in their twenties.
It is therefore logical that employers should always choose older people over
young people for work.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and
experience.
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TASK 2 A Problem/Solution Essay
In the last few decades, an increasing number of animal species have become
endangered or have died out completely. It appears likely that this situation will
continue.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
prevent it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS
Task Achievement: 8 The answer covers all requirements of the task sufficiently and presents the key
features of the graph clearly and appropriately.
Coherence and Cohesion: 8 The information and ideas are sequenced logically. The writer manages all
aspects of cohesion well.
Lexical Resource: 9 The writer uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of
lexical features. There are rare minor errors of spelling that occur only as 'slips'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 The writer uses a wide range of structures and the majority of
sentences are error-free. There are only very occasional grammatical errors or inappropriacies.
Task Achievement: 8 The writer has covered all the requirements of the task sufficiently well and illustrated
the key feature clearly and appropriately.
Coherence and Cohesion: 7 There is a clear progression of information and ideas throughout the answer.
Use of a wider range of cohesive devices would result in longer, more complex sentences.
Lexical Resource: 8 The writer uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise
meanings and skilfully uses less common lexical items.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 The majority of sentences are error-free and the writer makes only
occasional minor errors with collocations etc. On the whole, a wide range of structures have been used.
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SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS
TASK 1 Tables
Sample answer Band Score 8
The table shows information about six forms of accommodation used by English language students
in Hamilton city. Overall, living with a homestay family or sharing a student flat were the most
popular options, although each sort of residence had advantages and disadvantages.
Over 30% chose homestays or flats, which were more expensive forms of accommodation at $175
and $195 per week respectively. Flats had the advantage of being closer to the city centre – 5 kms
compared to 15 kms – although students thought that homestays were better for English language
development. Hostels cost a slightly less than both of them and were located close to the city centre,
but were less good for English language development. Accommodating with relatives was much
cheaper at just $65 but a long way from the centre. A single room apartment was the most
expensive accommodation at $250. It was not seen as a good way for English language
development and it was chosen by only 8% of students. (161 words)
Task Achievement: 8 The writer highlights the key features of the table clearly and appropriately. All
requirements of the task are covered sufficiently well.
Coherence and Cohesion: 8 Ideas and information are sequenced logically. The writer manages all aspects
of cohesion well and has used paragraphing appropriately.
Lexical Resource: 7 The writer uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow for some flexibility although at
times there is repetition of key vocabulary. The writer has produced minor errors in word choice.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 The majority of sentences are error-free and the writer makes only
occasional errors. A wide range of structures have been used.
Task Achievement: 8 The answer satisfies all requirements of the task. The key features of the two diagrams
have been highlighted clearly and appropriately.
Coherence and Cohesion: 7 Information is organised clearly and logically. A range of cohesive devices are
used, although there is some slight over-use.
Lexical Resource: 8 A wide range of vocabulary is used so that meaning is clearly conveyed. There are a
couple of minor spelling mistakes.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7 A variety of complex structures are used and there is generally good
control of grammar and punctuation. A few errors are present but do not impede communication.
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SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS
TASK 1 Diagrams
Sample answer Band Score 8
The production of silk
There are seven key stages involved in the production of silk. At the beginning of the process, a
Bombyx mori moth lays around 350 to 450 eggs on a leaf. About seven to twenty days later, tiny
black silkworms hatch from these, and by eating very large quantities of mulberry leaves, they
eventually can grow to approximately three inches in length. It is about 70 times their original size.
Then, after a period of between 25 to 28 days, the young silkworms can be ready to spin a cocoon
around themselves, and this is all held together by a substance called silk gum. Following this, the
cocoons are boiled in some hot water until the silk gum softens, which makes it easier for unwind
individual silk filaments. After the filaments have unwound, they then can be spunned into a single
thread which is very fine and strong. Finally, at the last stage of the production process, the thread
can be weaven into a silk fabric. (165 words)
Task Achievement: 9 The task requirements are fully satisfied, with the key features well presented and
expanded on.
Coherence and Cohesion: 8 There is clear sequencing and staging, and all aspects of cohesion are
managed well.
Lexical Resource: 8 There is a wide range of vocabulary, which is used flexibly to convey precise meaning.
There is some skilful use of uncommon lexical items but a couple of inaccuracies in word formation.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7 A range of complex structures are used, and sentences are frequently
error-free.
Task Achievement: 8 The task requirements are satisfied and the key features are appropriately presented
and developed.
Coherence and Cohesion: 8 Information is arranged clearly and logically. There is appropriate use of
paragraphs, and ideas and information are linked.
Lexical Resource: 6 An adequate range of vocabulary is used for the task.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 A range of complex structures are used, and the majority of sentences
are accurate.
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SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS
Task Response: 8 The writer sufficiently addresses all parts of the task and presents a well-developed
response to the question with relevant, supported ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion: 8 Information and ideas are logically sequenced throughout the answer.
Paragraphs are used appropriately throughout.
Lexical Resource: 7 The writer uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility. Less common
lexical items are used with some awareness of collocation. There are occasional errors in word choice, spelling
and formation.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7 A variety of complex structures have been used. The candidate
generally has good control of grammar and punctuation but makes a few errors.
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SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS
Task Response: 9 All parts of the task are fully addressed. Relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas
are provided.
Coherence and Cohesion: 9 Information and ideas are logically sequenced. All aspects of cohesion are
managed well, with appropriate use of paragraphing.
Lexical Resource: 8 A wide range of vocabulary is used fluently and flexibly to convey precise meaning.
There are occasional inaccuracies in collocation.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 A wide range of structures are used, and there are only occasional
errors.
Task Response: 8 All parts of the task are fully addressed. A well-developed response to the question is
given, with relevant and extended ideas, and supporting examples.
Coherence and Cohesion: 7 Information is logically organised and there is clear progression. There is a clear
central topic within each paragraph. However, there is some over-use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resource: 8 A wide range of vocabulary is used fluently and flexibly to convey precise meaning.
Some uncommon lexical items are used skilfully, but there are occasional inaccuracies in word choice.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 A wide range of structures are used, and there are only occasional
errors.
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