Curriculum 1a Assessment 2
Curriculum 1a Assessment 2
Curriculum 1a Assessment 2
Creative and imaginative writing is a valuable asset that fosters children’s imagination and
writing. Professor Ewing in Ward (2015) states that, ‘strong creative thinking and learning
skills are critical to students’ social and emotional wellbeing, academic achievement and
lifelong learning’. Fransen (2017) also concurs with this stating writing enhances the
development of one’s cognitive growth, organisational abilities and the ability to influence
others through persuasion. Atwell’s readings focuses on the workshops for reading and
writing by incorporating ideas for mini lessons to encourage reluctant writers to write and
readers to read. Atwell emphasises that writing is something that can be taught with proper
planning and with the incorporation of mini-lessons. Writers that are reluctant also benefit
Fransen highlights the importance of creative writing and how it encourages students to
‘exercise their creative minds and practice using their imaginations’. Fransen adds that by
doing so it ‘broadens the thought process’. Students are encouraged to show their creativity,
communication and persuasion skills (Fransen). Atwell talks of Smith’s concept of implicit
and explicit demonstrations and how allowing the students to pick their own texts to read
engages them more. Gallagher ( 2005) states that teachers spend a lot of time preparing
students for fake writing however providing these students with choice allows them to take
personal interest in their writing hence promoting students to write better. According to
Gallagher, ‘allowing students to choose writing topics has immediate benefits’. By doing so
students develop ownership and are more likely to have stronger work ethics. Atwell’s
articles are full of ideas, plans and resources on how to encourage hesitant writers to write.
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Creating writing workshops with mini lessons that do not last too long ensures students focus
on one particular task. Peha (2003) states that ‘mini lessons are short, usually ten to fifteen
minutes but rarely more than twenty). Mini lessons are kept short intentionally so that ‘each
writing period will be available to the students for writing’ (Peha). The purpose of the mini
lesson is to focus on a particular issue that needs addressing e.g. writing. Atwell highlights
the importance of teachers to ‘provide help by responding sensibly and sensitively to students
writing’ and by ‘modelling ways how students can respond to one another’. Modelling first
for students gives them a better understanding and provides guidance in their work. The mini
lessons are designed to ‘aid struggling writers, help students understand all of them are
capable of producing writing that works both for themselves and for their readers’ (Atwell).
The focus of the writing workshop is to encourage students to write as they ‘all have the
potential to be creative’ (Yager 2017 p. 1). Yager further elaborates that ‘students need to be
immersed into the writing process because all students can write well when they are inspired
and feel supported’. The writing workshop aims to provide support and inspiration for
The writing workshop provides students opportunities to write. Gannon, Howie & Sawyer
(2010) state, ‘writing more and writing often’ contribute to making students ‘more
experienced, more proficient, more confident and more supple writers’. Atwell, too agrees
that the more students write the more confident they become. The main goal for the mini
lessons are for students to ‘improve their writing and simultaneously develop myriad
approaches to writing that empower students to effectively evaluate and improve their own
writing and thinking’ (Atwell). Students are encouraged to group share their work with their
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peers and teacher upon which they receive constructive feedback. Atwell states, ‘group share
is another means for helping writers improve their writing’. She further adds, ‘ students need
to try out the content of their writing on others and on themselves as readers, hearing what
they’ve said and considering what they might say’. This is a crucial part of the workshop,
The mini lessons, Atwell introduces in the writing workshop are focused to encourage
students to write without the concern of judgement. Atwell also mentions how modelling
assists students and that ‘writing is an act of thinking and considering’. By modelling stories
of personal experience the teacher has provided guidance for students to ‘look for
significances of events of their own lives’. Atwell’s article also puts emphasis on ‘thinking,
writing and talking about ideas’ that students have. Students should be encouraged to keep all
their drafts in their writing folder and not erase anything. Atwell highlights, by not erasing
students are able to save the record of their thinking and how it has evolved. By doing so, the
teacher can see the achievements of the students and how far he/she has come. Atwell also
emphasises the importance of saving everything the students write and status of the class.
Status of the class refers to what students are working on in their piece. Keeping a record of
where each student is assists the teacher in knowing how the students are going. Another
important issue Atwell brings to light is editing. Students need to be taught editing or peer
conferencing. Peer conferencing, according to Gannon et., al, ‘is a useful strategy for
responding to student writing’. During peer conferencing, students are able to discuss any
problems or difficulties they have faced and come up with a solution for it. The mini lessons
in writing focuses on many different things, from first draft, to proof reading, second draft,
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Atwell also stresses the importance of establishing a writers environment. Having routines
that define the writing workshop will work as an encouragement for students to write. Atwell
also points out the role of the teacher in the workshop. Taylor (200) states that ‘Atwell turns
away from rules and towards intervention on the part of the teacher, a revision that
reintegrates the teacher as central in the writing classroom’. The teacher plays the central role
in the writing workshops. Atwell calls this method ‘handover, where an adult intervenes and
gradually provides less assistance to a learner’ (Taylor). Atwell uses the mini lessons to
address several issues like punctuation, pronoun usage, spelling etc. Gannon et., al states a
writing rich classroom makes use of ‘appropriate workshop process and strategies like
conferencing, mini lessons, peer review which extend students’ understanding of language in
use and their capacity to judge and rework their own writing with sensitivity’. In writing rich
classrooms, the opportunity to write increases whilst pressure to write in ‘high stake
Atwell’s articles have focused on writing and how to approach it using writing workshops in
the classroom. Anyone according to Atwell can write, it is something that can be taught. A
‘The qualities of good writing are complex and nuanced. But they can be named, and I'm
convinced they can be taught. Of all the arts, writing should be among the most democratic:
all one needs is paper and a pen — and I would suggest, a teacher or two along the way who
works to make the intangible tangible, so every student might know the joy of writing well’.
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Mini lesson one focuses on private free writing where students write on any topic of
their liking. The main focus of this task is ‘on students undertaking continuous
writing’ (Boas & Gazis, 2016, p.282). This activity is a ‘strong focus activity that
promotes the development of thinking and writing skill’ (Boas & Gazis). Atwell states
that getting students to write on a topic of his or her choosing is the main thing.
During the first lesson, students are familiarised with the rules of the workshop.
Mini lesson two focuses on students describing a special object that carries
sentimental value starting from the physical appearance to the minutiae details. The
teacher models this activity first using something from her past. This task makes
student ‘look beyond the superficial and capture the minutiae of life’ (Yager). This
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activity promotes thinking and writing skills. Students are taught constructive
Mini lesson three focuses on the power of imagery. Students look through the window
and describe what they see with the help of metaphors and similes. The teacher
models a few sentences for the class. This activity is designed to get students to
‘describe different types of imagery, auditory and gustatory’ (Yager). Benefits of this
activity are deep thinking, greater focusing skills and writing. This activity is ‘fun and
Mini lesson four is structured around symbolism and motifs. Students are given a list
of object with their symbolic meaning which they need to utilise in their writing. The
teacher models some for the class to provide a better understanding. The purpose of
this lesson is for students to ‘add deeper and provocative layer to their writing’
(Yager).
Mini lesson five addresses the issue of using verbs to breathe life into scenes.
Students describe scenes using verbs and hence learn that ‘verbs are the muscles of
writing and the masters of polysemy as they can convey multiple meanings in a
single word’ (Yager). Students are given pictures which they must describe using
verbs.
Mini lesson six concentrates on building noun groups. The teacher models some
examples for the class. Students then go on and do their own list. After which, they
must write 150-200 words using their list. This is a simple task designed to ‘elevate
(Yager).
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Mini lesson seven focuses on sentence structure. Students are given extracts with
simple sentences and the same with complex sentences. Students are given 10 minutes
provided. They then work in groups of fours for the remainder of the workshop that
critique each other’s work suggesting how ‘the sentence structure could be
improved’(Yager). The purpose of this is for students to learn ‘sentence structure for
Mini lesson eight restrains students to a fifty word limit challenge. The task is
designed to ‘hone a students’ writing skills as they have to be very specific and
discerning’ (Yager). This is a mini narrative challenge where students can choose
from one of the many topics the teacher set out e.g lost in the wilderness, visiting
Mini lesson nine is a mystery challenge. Students are divided into pairs and are given
a small box. The box may contain any of the following, a shell, two words: memories
handkerchief and a rock. The challenge is to create a hundred word narrative using the
object as an inspiration. The purpose of this task restraints students to a word limit
Mini lesson ten focuses on the opening setting of a narrative. Students are placed in
pairs and the task is to craft an ‘opening that sets the scene for a narrative and hints at
details and how they could use pathetic fallacy or striking figurative language.
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Students will be allocated writing folders where to keep all their work. After every
single mini lesson the class comes together as group sharing takes place. But before
the group sharing takes place, students must edit and proof read their work. A name
sheet will be kept of every student who presents so the following lesson other kids get
the opportunity to share their work. The group sharing is kept very brief. Each student
gets five minutes to work on a creative piece once the mini lesson has finished. This
piece will be the same piece that the individual continues to work on at the end of
each mini lesson. At the end of the class there is a status of the class conference about
their creative piece. Atwell states that writing using the mini lessons the teacher is
able to ‘evaluate students’ growth’. The best way to improve writing is write more
and more.
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