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Objective #1 Objective #2 Objective #3 Objective #4 Scope and Limitation

The document contains notes on revisions needed for multiple pages of a document or report. Revisions include rephrasing paragraphs, clarifying objectives, updating references, editing diagrams and pictures, reconstructing tables, and clarifying procedures. In total, revisions are requested for 18 different sections or pages spanning the whole chapter.

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Objective #1 Objective #2 Objective #3 Objective #4 Scope and Limitation

The document contains notes on revisions needed for multiple pages of a document or report. Revisions include rephrasing paragraphs, clarifying objectives, updating references, editing diagrams and pictures, reconstructing tables, and clarifying procedures. In total, revisions are requested for 18 different sections or pages spanning the whole chapter.

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Carmela Elaco Villanueva
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☐ Page 3 Remove “main objective” and rephrase paragraph

☐ Page 4:

Objective #1 only include development of the device (those that are tangible)

Objective #2 Indicate in what design the prototype will be fabricated

Objective #3 include the software/application system objectives

Objective #4 should coincide with Chapter 3 testing procedure

☐ Page 5 Scope and Limitation user instead of victim

☐ Page 6 remove Wikipedia articles and find new one for BLE, GPS,

☐ Pages 9-14 edit spacing on reference sites below the pictures

☐ Whole Chapter 2 RRS written before RRL; just interchange

☐ Page 21 Conceptual Model arrows in between boxes

☐ Page 23 Elaborate the evaluation; include the tables and treatment of data that is used in
presentation

☐ Page 29 Review the reference of Seels & Richey, 1994

☐ Page 31 Edit the block diagram with input process output block, power supply either above or below

☐ Page 32-34 Device Testing; do not include setting up, restate procedure for HC-06 Module

☐ Page 32-35 Clear pics of schematic diagrams

☐ Page 36 Wiring Diagram do not use actual pics only drawings (*power consumption indicate)

☐ Page 38 Include GPS in the calibration

☐ Page 42-45 Full System Testing: Reconstruct the tables and finalize the parameters

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